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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月20日 at 1:00:41

Artist: Emilia(CV:Setsunan)
Title: Unfinished START
Source: 前進吧!高捷少女Initiating Station
Tags: EAjRock (Ayre Records) Uniparity Hoskey 艾米莉亞 Reo shinia Stellarism 希萌創意 Shi Kuang Lee NGC224 SAFE HOUSE T Narrator 前進吧!高捷少女《進め!高捷(たかめ)少女!》 Simon moe Short Version LET'S GO! K.R.T. GIRLS stu00608 Fantazy
BPM: 175
Filesize: 1981kb
Play Time: 01:24
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Download: Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START
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未完成START




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Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
Fan's Oni by Fanlazy
stu's Oni by stu00608
Oni by me


Lyrics
    朝陽取代了燈火闌珊
    步下列車 抬頭望向湛藍的清澈天空
    就能泛起笑容

    即使迷失在熙攘人群 幸運有你的細心指引
    即使搭錯了方向 我卻看見更多風景

    一加一 笑顏的魔力 勇敢告訴自己 一定可以

    像晴天那般擁抱 所有煩惱不如意
    像雨天那般緊靠 只是安靜地傾聽
    奔忙於喧囂中 我總算遇見這首
    美好旋律 閃耀記憶 有你



Thanks
Modders:
  • _kumakichi
  • Fantazyee
  • Nyan
  • PoPoii
  • Prophecy
  • eeezzzeee
  • Erika
  • Smallwu
  • kiminokokoro
  • Ayyri
  • Skylish
  • xtrem3x
  • LunaticP
  • Jonawaga
  • Kazaze
  • frukoyurdakul
  • _yu68
  • 125601228
  • Charlotte
  • 404 AccNotFound
  • mliencheng
  • Xay
  • jacky10186

Bubble/Qualified:
  • Skylish
  • xfraczynho











Last edited by katacheh on , edited 181 times in total.
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hi

sorry i cannot type chinese in this computer
if there is anything unclear please pm me...

misc
interesting choice of song
metadata - please check whether the artist name is in correct format...i thought only 1 name should be put in artist column, but not very sure
disable countdown and widescreen support
timing - delete the 00:14:130 red line
can move the background pic downward by editing .osu in notepad

Events
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40


futsuu
01:19:213 - add k (as in muzu)


muzu
00:15:463 (9) - delete. 5-lets should not appear in muzu. too difficult
00:28:713 (67) - k->d. add some variance as your pattern afterwards are all different
00:38:880 (119,120,121) - some BAT (did i spell it right) do not like triplets other than ddd or kkk in muzu. Personally I think it is accptable. maybe delete 00:38:963 (120) -
00:44:213 (144) - d->k. same reason as above
00:45:213 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - too long for muzu. delete 00:46:047 (154) - and 00:47:047 (160) -
01:03:547 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - too long:
01:04:713 (259) - and 01:06:047 (267) - delete
01:04:880 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265) - dkkdkkd -> kddkddk (add some variance)
01:19:213 - add k. complete the pattern?


oni
i like this map very much
00:46:630 (191) - d->k, to make the pattern clearer
01:04:880 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - D k k D k k D k -> K d d K d d K d (as in muzu)


great map
good luck
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嘛~~~~我或許不是改得很好 :P 而且有點多 >:(



futsuu
00:11:465 (25) - k->d
00:27:874 (33) - 這邊改 k d d .
00:31:207 (42) - d->k
00:37:374 (56) - d->k
00:40:041 (59) - 後2顆k->d
01:02:707 (103) - d->k
01:17:541 (135) - k->d
01:19:874 - 這裡的話..樓上說+k 嘛 ....覺得D大比較好?? :P :P ~~


muzukashi
盡量別跟樓上的衝突~~~
00:00:836 (1) - 開頭改 kkd kdd d k~~
00:09:922 (25) - kd dd k d
00:25:707 (48) - d->k
00:27:874 - 00:30:541 - 00:33:207 - 這三個地方就配人聲吧??
01:03:541 (250) - 這邊 kddkddk比較配
01:04:874 (257) - 這邊則是ddkdddk
01:06:207 (264) - 而這邊kddkddkdd
01:10:374 (284) - dd dk
01:16:207 (302) - d d k 要不要大顆看你~
01:17:374 (305) - 這裡改小
01:18:041 (307) - 這邊d大
01:18:707 (309) - 這邊k大


Oni
00:56:213 (272) - 這邊改成 kdddd K 好像比較好?
00:59:713 (298) - 這邊 d k dkd 就好030
01:00:880 (307) - kkd-d-k-dkd-k-d-kkd-d-k
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_kumakichi wrote:
hi

sorry i cannot type chinese in this computer
if there is anything unclear please pm me... it's ok. :) I have Google Translate

misc
interesting choice of song
metadata - please check whether the artist name is in correct format...i thought only 1 name should be put in artist column, but not very sure One is the name of the character , the other is the name of singer.
disable countdown and widescreen support Fixed
timing - delete the 00:14:130 red line Fixed
can move the background pic downward by editing .osu in notepad I see

Events
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40


futsuu
01:19:213 - add k (as in muzu) Fixed


muzu
00:15:463 (9) - delete. 5-lets should not appear in muzu. too difficult Fixed
00:28:713 (67) - k->d. add some variance as your pattern afterwards are all different I changed 00:28:041 (61) to d
00:38:880 (119,120,121) - some BAT (did i spell it right) do not like triplets other than ddd or kkk in muzu. Personally I think it is accptable. maybe delete 00:38:963 (120) - I deleted
00:44:213 (144) - d->k. same reason as above Fixed
00:45:213 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - too long for muzu. delete 00:46:047 (154) - and 00:47:047 (160) - I deleted 00:46:041 (152) 0047:374 (160) and changed 00:45:874 (151) to k
01:03:547 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - too long:
01:04:713 (259) - and 01:06:047 (267) - delete Fixed
01:04:880 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265) - dkkdkkd -> kddkddk (add some variance) good!
01:19:213 - add k. complete the pattern? Fixed


oni
i like this map very much thx :)
00:46:630 (191) - d->k, to make the pattern clearer no.. I'm trying to make it harder
01:04:880 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - D k k D k k D k -> K d d K d d K d (as in muzu) great!


great map
good luck

thanks for moding! :)
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Fantazyy wrote:
嘛~~~~我或許不是改得很好 :P 而且有點多 >:( 永遠不嫌多

kantan
00:05:979 (9) - k k d 感覺比較配030 我改成了k d k 因為後面想要放藍色
00:18:874 - 放個k 後面那顆改d good! 再前面一顆我改成了k
00:23:541 (25) - d->k 不改
00:28:207 (33) - k->d 不改 我覺得k比較好
00:29:541 - d 太難(太長了)
00:32:207 - d 同上
00:32:874 (38) - d->k 修正
00:37:374 - k 不改 覺得大圓同一色比較好
00:40:041 - d 太難
00:40:541 (45) - d 不改
00:42:707 - d 太難
00:43:207 (47) - k 我在對人聲
01:01:541 (71) - k 已改
01:02:207 (72) - d已改 :)
太多了吧ww


futsuu
00:11:465 (25) - k->d good!
00:27:874 (33) - 這邊改 k d d . 覺得ddk比較好
00:31:207 (42) - d->k good!
00:37:374 (56) - d->k 我想要大圓同色
00:40:041 (59) - 後2顆k->d 同上
01:02:707 (103) - d->k 覺得D比較好
01:17:541 (135) - k->d 已修正
01:19:874 - 這裡的話..樓上說+k 嘛 ....覺得D大比較好?? :P :P ~~ 是在說放D吧 先不改 如果以後有人再建議我改 我再改


muzukashi
盡量別跟樓上的衝突~~~
00:00:836 (1) - 開頭改 kkd kdd d k~~ GOOD
00:09:922 (25) - kd dd k d 我改成 kd kk k d
00:25:707 (48) - d->k 已修正
00:27:874 - 00:30:541 - 00:33:207 - 這三個地方就配人聲吧?? 不好... 一下人聲一下音樂
01:03:541 (250) - 這邊 kddkddk比較配 ┐
01:04:874 (257) - 這邊則是ddkdddk ├ 好像這樣比較好耶 已修正
01:06:207 (264) - 而這邊kddkddkdd ┘
01:10:374 (284) - dd dk 覺得dk kk 比較好
01:16:207 (302) - d d k 要不要大顆看你~ 改成了dkk 小顆比較好
01:17:374 (305) - 這裡改小 不好..
01:18:041 (307) - 這邊d大 GOOD!
01:18:707 (309) - 這邊k大 我改成了KK


Oni
00:56:213 (272) - 這邊改成 kdddd K 好像比較好? GOOD!
00:59:713 (298) - 這邊 d k dkd 就好030 我改成 d k kkd
01:00:880 (307) - kkd-d-k-dkd-k-d-kkd-d-k 我覺得原本的比較好

抱歉有很多都沒改 :?

thanks for modding!!! 謝謝摟
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ㄏㄏ 如果你真的要Oni 444combo 8-)

00:26:791 - 這邊改一下 3連擊
00:27:624 - 這邊也是
00:28:291 - 然後這裡的 前面換過來

00:40:957 - 這裡就不連擊了

你的預覽段落~~(ˊ。c。ˋ)


再找點別人吧 ?? 我到時看看如果能更好就給你 射~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AwA一顆星
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Fantazyy wrote:
ㄏㄏ 如果你真的要Oni 444combo 8-) 不是一定要啦 只是很好看!!! (7/12)已經不行了w

00:26:791 - 這邊改一下 3連擊
00:27:624 - 這邊也是
00:28:291 - 然後這裡的 前面換過來 我改成了 k ddd d k d d d k ddk d k

00:40:957 - 這裡就不連擊了 不好...

你的預覽段落~~(ˊ。c。ˋ) 剛才放了~


再找點別人吧 ?? 我到時看看如果能更好就給你 射~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AwA 一顆星
快射!!!!
(此處可當廢文owo

我才剛弄完 又有新貼文 當作跟上面一起的吧
謝謝囉! :)
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Kantan

01:03:541 (75,76,77,78,79) - d _ d _ k _ k _ d
01:08:874 (79) - add Finish


Futsuu

00:23:541 (23,24,25) - remove Finish
01:07:541 (114,115,116,117) - k k k k D


Muzukashii

00:23:541 (40,41,42,43) - remove Finish
00:25:041 (45,46) - remove Finish
00:30:541 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - k _ d k d _ d
01:14:874 (298,299,300) - K _ d D


Oni

01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kkdkkkdkkk

Actually a good mapset. ☆☆☆ I am satisfied now.
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Nyan wrote:

Kantan

01:03:541 (75,76,77,78,79) - d _ d _ k _ k _ d Fixed.
01:08:874 (79) - add Finish Fixed.


Futsuu

00:23:541 (23,24,25) - remove Finish Fixed.
01:07:541 (114,115,116,117) - k k k k D Fixed.


Muzukashii

00:23:541 (40,41,42,43) - remove Finish Fixed!
00:25:041 (45,46) - remove Finish Fixed.
00:30:541 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - k _ d k d _ d I changed to k d k _ k _ d
01:14:874 (298,299,300) - K _ d D no... I think the original is better.


Oni

01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kkdkkkdkkk Fixed! Awesome!! I also added 01:17:457 (398) and 01:18:124 (403)

Actually a good mapset. ☆☆☆ I am satisfied now. Thank you! :)


Thanks for modding and stars!
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:)Poii and Kuu NM service :)

|d for don| D for Big Don| k for katsu| K for Big Katsu|

Kantan
Mods
Demn good, EZ to play nice diff


Futsuu
Mods
00:08:722 (21) - why d ? you place k in all of your diff
00:24:041 (24,25) - d k or k d ? i think k d, <= you can ignore this
01:00:541 (99) - to d, the vocal is not strong enough, i mean loud enough


Muzukashii
Mods
00:21:707 - missing d ?
00:15:291 - add 1, make it triplets, the snare sound
00:23:874 (41) - change to k, its snare
00:24:374 (43) - change to d for a better sound, that is not snare (i think)


Oni
Mods


8-) Free comment, Free reject 8-)


Good Lick Luck :)
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:)Poii and Kuu NM service :)

|d for don| D for Big Don| k for katsu| K for Big Katsu|

Kantan
Mods
Demn good, EZ to play nice diff Thanks! :D


Futsuu
Mods
00:08:722 (21) - why d ? you place k in all of your diff Fixed!! and I changed 00:08:379 (20) to d
00:24:041 (24,25) - d k or k d ? i think k d, <= you can ignore this I think d k feels better. :3
01:00:541 (99) - to d, the vocal is not strong enough, i mean loud enough I think k fits vocal ...so I didn't change.


Muzukashii
Mods
00:21:707 - missing d ? Good! Fixed!!
00:15:291 - add 1, make it triplets, the snare sound I think it is enough... I didn't change.
00:23:874 (41) - change to k, its snare snare sounds not obviously,(compare with the other sound..) so I didn't change.
00:24:374 (43) - change to d for a better sound, that is not snare (i think) ^


Oni
Mods
00:23:874 (47) - change to k I didn't change.. same as muzu
00:24:374 (49) - to d ^


8-) Free comment, Free reject 8-)


Good Lick Luck :)


Thanks for modding!! :)
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Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default.

d = don | k = kat


General
  • You're using whistle in Kantan, Futsuu , Muzukashii. but not in Oni, please make sure you're using same kat sound.
  • Please find more tags, it's not just about 3 or something like that.

Kantan
Nice, good luck!
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Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default. QwQ

d = don | k = kat


General
  • You're using whistle in Kantan, Futsuu , Muzukashii. but not in Oni, please make sure you're using same kat sound. Fixed~
  • Please find more tags, it's not just about 3 or something like that. Ok. I will find more tags.

Kantan
  • 00:12:836 (15) - I am suggesting you to delete this note and replaced by a spinner , the sound it mostly like a spinner with a accompany
    piano sound. Fixed!
  • 00:24:041 (27,29) - I don't really suggest you to use 1/2 in Kantan as well, I know you're following the main heavy sound. Considerate to remove it or move it away. I didn't change...
  • 00:26:207 (30) - It's a bit weird after a big notes sound, how about to add a finisher? I added and feels weird too.. so I didn't change.
  • 00:45:374 (50) - no pls, Kantan is for beginner, usually we put simple 1/1 in kantan, not complex 1/2.
  • 00:46:207 (52) - this slider 00:45:874 - should be start at here? umm.. I didn't changed because vocal..
  • 00:48:707 (55) - same as above , 1/2 Should I just removed it? I feel emptiness... I moved forward 1/2 but feels really weird... so I didn't change.
  • 00:51:374 (59) - ^
  • 00:54:041 (62) - ^
  • 00:56:707 (66) - ^
  • 00:58:207 (67) - add finisher. Fixed
  • 00:59:374 (69,74) - same as before one.
Nice, good luck!

Sorry I'm not good at making Kantan... but seems many ranked kantan placed 1/2. (I think it is acceptable...)
Thanks for modding!!
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Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default. QwQ
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Hi from my queue


Oni


Muzukashii


Futsuu
Nothing!


Kantan
  • 00:02:551 (4,8) - maybe delete these two since its right in the beginning it should be a little easier

osu 需要更多中文歌曲! lol my chinese writing/reading is so bad

good luck! Image
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