Ticket
[Easy]
00:08:857 (1) - I think this slider end can be rotated to the right more for a better flow going into 00:09:909 (2) - (maybe try x232 y240)
00:21:488 (3) - Same comment as before
00:53:769 (5) - NC? (only reason for this because you have one here 02:06:751 (1) - )
01:03:243 (2,3) - Blanket here can be improved
02:09:558 (1,3) - Maybe make the straight sections of these sliders parallel to each other?
02:26:400 - I would prefer it if this downbeat was clickable since it has a strong sound and is the start of a new stanza (like you did in the first kiai time)
02:29:207 - ^
[Normal]
00:39:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would prefer it if this section followed the vocals since it adds consistency to this section, as you have followed the vocals for the rest of this part of the music
01:10:260 (7) - Maybe make this a 1/2 slider? A drag note on the snare starts on the blue tick and I think it'd work well making it playable (it would also be consistent with 01:15:874 (6) - )
01:17:804 (5,6,7) - I would change this to
something like this, since the first drum hit is different note/tone to the rest of them in this fill, and would accent your hitsounding better
nice
[Hard]
00:53:769 (1) - Maybe turn this into a jump? These two notes are some of the strongest in the whole song
01:02:892 (3,1) - This shape is kinda ugly imo, maybe try and make it more obvious that this isn't a blanket (maybe a straight slider on (1)?)
01:04:909 - Missing circle (every other drag note is a triple except this one :p )
02:20:435 (6) - Ctrl + H then Ctrl + G?
also nice
[Insane]
00:53:944 (2) - I would personally stack this under 00:53:418 (4) - since I usually correlate back and forth jumps with repeated notes in the music, since these are different I would stack it under a different note whilst keeping a similar shape. Since this also increases the spacing, it also adds a bit of extra emphasis aswell
01:00:962 (1,2) - I would swap these two notes around, since a strong vocal starts on the blue tick and is being ignored since it's a slider end and doesn't really fit your current rhythm patterns
01:24:295 (5,6) - Use the same DS as you did for 01:23:944 (3,4) - since it feels a bit uncomfortable for me to play atm (also 6 is the start of a build up to a big note, so the DS should reflect this better)
01:24:558 (7) - There is no sound here that warrants a triple, a jump between 6 - 1 would fit better imo
01:29:032 (2,3,4,5,6) - The stream continues onto this note 01:29:471 -
01:37:979 (4) - I would prefer it if the red tick this ends on was clickable, since it is the start of a new vocal stanza
02:06:927 (2) - Same comment as 00:53:944 (2) - although I would this on 02:06:400 (5) - instead
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gl!