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Izzywing
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, October 5, 2016 at 10:28:43 AM

Artist: Jason Michael
Title: Clifford's Theme Song
Source: Clifford the Big Red Dog
Tags: Mutato Muzika Mark Mothersbaugh Josh Mancell PBS ezek Kisses Gero PolkaMocha Bakari
BPM: 134
Filesize: 6727kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Easy (1.32 stars, 68 notes)
  2. ezek's Light Hard (2.47 stars, 132 notes)
  3. Fireworks of Flavor (3.63 stars, 185 notes)
  4. Gero's Hard (2.76 stars, 148 notes)
  5. Hard (3 stars, 168 notes)
  6. Kisses' Normal (1.7 stars, 101 notes)
  7. Polka's Beginner (1 stars, 42 notes)
Download: Jason Michael - Clifford's Theme Song
Download: Jason Michael - Clifford's Theme Song (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Who's afraid of the Big Red...

Polka's Beginner - PolkaMocha
Bakari's Easy - Bakari
Kisses' Normal - Kisses
ezek's Light Hard - ezek
Gero's Hard - Gero
Hard - me
Fireworks of Flavor - me

Fireworks of Flavor is named after an episode about warning kids that advertisements might be misleading. There was a TV show in the show called "The Adventures of Rexington: Dog of the Yukon" and the idea was that if you wanted to be like Rexington the top tier dog you had to eat Mighty Snackies, which were said to contain Fireworks of Flavor. Surprise! It was just mediocre dog food.

Information
Credit goes to ezek for the video! source

Metadata from here - Confirmed by IamKwaN

Background from here (Dead Link atm, will try to find a new one)
modders <3
not in order

  1. ezek
  2. Nevo
  3. greenwood0301
  4. ChronoNig
  5. Kisses
  6. DeRandomOtaku
  7. PolkaMocha
  8. estellia-
  9. Nyl
  10. -Nya-
  11. Nemesis
  12. MugiwaraSekai
  13. DivineEnigma
  14. RyoKazuka
  15. vick
  16. AmigoDoChroome
  17. Lefia
  18. Stjpa
  19. Battle
  20. HappyRocket88
  21. Maruyu
  22. Hokichi
  23. Lasse
  24. Bakari (twice!)
  25. 100bit
  26. pkhg
  27. Electroz
  28. Smoothie World
  29. Shurelia
  30. Naxess
  31. Lanturn
  32. iViyo
  33. Len
  34. Kocari
  35. Spotty
  36. hpocks
  37. Asaiga
  38. sheela
  39. Cerulean Veyron
  40. MkGuh
  41. Wafu

Special thanks to Kisses, ezek, Gero, Polka, and Bakari for making GDs, and to all of the modders for the help they've done to the mapset.
Last edited by Izzywing , edited 145 times in total.
ZekeyHache
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Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache

We did irc~

~Recommended combo colors~
[Colours]
Combo1 : 223,227,45
Combo2 : 247,0,0
Combo3 : 0,103,230
Combo4 : 20,205,44

log
09:11 Hobbes2: I've finally uploaded clifford so I'm actually able to m4m if you have a map open for mods
09:11 ezek: :o
09:12 ezek: I'll take a look at it after I'm done with something~
09:12 Hobbes2: kk
09:13 Hobbes2: I won't take any more free stuff so you better give me a map to mod in return :0)
09:13 ezek: :O
09:20 Hobbes2: BTW, I must ask, when you look at clifford, a big thing I'm concerned about are combo colors
09:20 ezek: xDDD
09:21 Hobbes2: i THINK they're ok but I'm also partially color blind so who knows
09:21 ezek: OO__OO
09:21 ezek: how can you be partially color blind ?:o
09:21 Hobbes2: I had that problem with goosebumps since I'm not good with greens \/
09:22 ezek: you see color with just one eye?
09:22 Hobbes2: well
09:22 Hobbes2: im "red-green" colorblind
09:22 ezek: D:
09:22 Hobbes2: but tis a bit different for me since I basically cant tell greens apart from each other
09:22 ezek: I'll give you some color suggestions then
09:23 Hobbes2: that'd be awesome! it also doesn't help that clifford himself is red
09:23 Hobbes2: :<
09:23 ezek: I'll give you the colors on the post
09:23 Hobbes2: i almost always play with background off because of it, some maps i legit cannot see the hit circles because they're green on a red background lol
09:23 ezek: O_O
09:24 Hobbes2: i used to use a black and white skin
09:24 Hobbes2: but it was kinda meh
09:24 Hobbes2: so i just switched to background off with lighter colors
09:24 ezek: hey, do you want irc mod?
09:24 Hobbes2: oo, that'd be interesting
09:25 Hobbes2: sure, I'm fine with that
09:25 ezek: Your mapping has progressed very well so I don't think I'll have to spend too much time as before~
09:25 Hobbes2: that's good to hear
09:25 Hobbes2: ive spent a ton of time modding so i'd hope i'd be better lol
09:26 ezek: Audio & BG are good ^^
09:26 *ezek is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1008502 Jason Michael - Clifford's Theme Song [Easy]]
09:27 Hobbes2: the website i got the bg from had some clifford rule 34 :/
09:27 ezek: O_O
09:27 Hobbes2: which i didnt even know was a thing
09:27 ezek: I definitively don't wanna see that...
09:27 Hobbes2: i was just like...um...
09:27 Hobbes2: yea lol
09:27 ezek: 00:01:917 (3) - check your spacing here
09:28 Hobbes2: hm, should I just turn off grid snap
09:28 ezek: (4) is too close compared to (2)
09:28 Hobbes2: for the easy
09:28 Hobbes2: since I can't get the spacing exact there even with the smallest grid snap
09:28 ezek: using grid snap is a personal decision, I always use it~
09:28 Hobbes2: jk i can
09:28 Hobbes2: lol
09:29 Hobbes2: x:388 y:112 worked
09:31 ezek: 00:02:364 (4) - what if you curve it to the opposite side like [http://puu.sh/pAMgs/4ef8fad290.jpg this] so it points to the next note and feels semewhat more natural?
09:31 Hobbes2: for reference, just made 00:47:140 (1) - more symmetrical
09:31 ezek: oki~
09:32 Hobbes2: Changed as suggested
09:32 ezek: 00:13:111 (1) - I don't find NC necessary here~
09:33 Hobbes2: Agreed, that might have been on accident
09:33 ezek: 00:14:454 (1) - and here ;w;
09:34 Hobbes2: All the sliders where I map the guitar in the backgroudn that are 1+1/2 in length I made their own combo
09:34 Hobbes2: because they're sorta different then the rest of the rhythm
09:34 Hobbes2: or whatever instrument that is might not be guitar
09:35 ezek: idk if that would be acceptable, especially because is an easy and doesn't have that many notes to just emphasize certain notes~
09:35 Hobbes2: true
09:35 ezek: I think you should follow a regular consistency, like NC every third downbeat
09:35 Hobbes2: I feel every other downbeat fits more
09:36 ezek: you can check on that after I'm done with this so there's no confusion when I link notes
09:36 Hobbes2: kk
09:37 ezek: oh yeah, I forgot something 00:00:126 (1) - It is highly recommended (but not required) to start Easy diffs with a slider so beginners can adapt faster, this it totally up to you
09:39 Hobbes2: I like it starting with the note because then I can have the clickable clap for 2, which I think is nice
09:39 Hobbes2: I'll think about it though
09:40 ezek: 00:53:857 (1) - add finish maybe~ just to emphasize those strong vocals~
09:40 Hobbes2: oo, good idea
09:41 ezek: moving on to Normal diff~
09:41 *ezek is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1008505 Jason Michael - Clifford's Theme Song [Normal]]
09:41 Hobbes2: kk
09:41 ezek: 00:05:499 (1) - maybe add whistle to emphasize the bark
09:42 Hobbes2: done
09:43 ezek: 00:07:737 (2) - this shape isn't very appealing, try [http://puu.sh/pAMXE/a4a7b00426.jpg this] maybe~
09:45 Hobbes2: changed
09:45 ezek: 00:42:439 (3,4) - I feel like the rhythm suggests a stack here~
09:47 Hobbes2: Good idea, changed.
09:47 ezek: in general maybe some parts are too expanded and you should find places to do more stacks~ you should check on that after we're done with this~
09:47 Hobbes2: kk
09:48 Hobbes2: i see your point
09:49 ezek: moving to hard
09:49 *ezek is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1008504 Jason Michael - Clifford's Theme Song [Hard]]
09:50 ezek: 00:13:782 (3,4) - you may want to move these down a bit since they are at the very top, but you don't have to since they don't touch the life bar at all~
09:51 Hobbes2: adjusted the area a bit
09:51 ezek: 00:14:902 (2,1) - maybe getting rid off this overlap will make the pattern look cleaner
09:52 Hobbes2: 00:14:454 (1) - shouldn't have ended on the blue tick :\
09:52 Hobbes2: fixed
09:54 ezek: 00:41:320 (1) - You should move this to x:460 y:260 to make trasition feel more natural because of the curve on the slider
09:54 ezek: transition*
09:55 ezek: 00:44:006 (1) - Remove NC
09:55 Hobbes2: Done
09:55 ezek: 00:44:902 (3) - add NC
09:55 Hobbes2: oops lol
09:55 Hobbes2: fixed
09:56 ezek: 00:53:857 (1) - finish just like in Easy
09:56 ezek: check that on all diffs~
09:56 Hobbes2: mmh did that when you told me during easy
09:56 ezek: ohh
09:57 ezek: xDD
09:57 ezek: oki
09:57 ezek: insane~
09:57 *ezek is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1008503 Jason Michael - Clifford's Theme Song [Fireworks of Flavor]]
09:59 Hobbes2: kk
09:59 ezek: screenshots are taking too much time to upload ;w;
09:59 ezek: 00:07:961 (3) - feels weird the way you have to come from the opposite side of the previous note what if you change the curve to the other side so it feels more comfy? like [http://puu.sh/pANU8/b903a3e92d.jpg this]
10:00 Hobbes2: good idea, changed
10:03 ezek: 00:50:051 (6,7,1) - I think your patter suggests more like a curve on the slider going straight or down rather than up [http://puu.sh/pAO8q/1dc7f6cce3.jpg like this]
10:03 ezek: pattern*
10:04 Hobbes2: okok
10:05 Hobbes2: will change
10:06 ezek: 00:08:633 (4,1) - I previously noticed the transiotion between these two objects feels akward, but I really don't have any suggestions because any change would make you rework on the whole pattern
10:06 ezek: transition*
10:09 Hobbes2: Ajusted it a bit to make it easier of a transition, I think
10:09 Hobbes2: I'll screenshot one sec
10:09 Hobbes2: [http://imgur.com/V6WhTQK here]
10:11 ezek: still would feel weird for me, but maybe is just me, you should wait and see if someone else gets bothered by that~
10:11 Hobbes2: kk
10:11 Hobbes2: I like the flow there personally
10:11 Hobbes2: It's weird but I think it fits. If someone else comments I'll change
10:12 ezek: okie dokie~
Izzywing
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Izzywing
Thanks ezek!

As a quick comment, here are the stacks I added to the normal -

00:20:275 (2,3) -
00:38:857 (3,4) -
00:45:349 (2,3) -
00:42:439 (3,4) -
00:49:603 (4,5) -

And the combo colors are nice too, thank you very much ~
Nevo
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Joined November 2015
Nevo
From modreq this was supposed to be a m4m but I didn't reallt find anything :o So I guess it's a NM up to you my map
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/446418

Easy
N/A

Normal
00:26:991 (1) - I think this should become this - http://puu.sh/pAYux/5364e71415.jpg

Hard
N/A

Fireworks
00:02:588 (3) - I think you should move this

The circle size also seems kinda small that's my opinion
Izzywing
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Topic Starter
Izzywing

Nevo wrote:

From modreq this was supposed to be a m4m but I didn't reallt find anything :o So I guess it's a NM up to you my map
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/446418

Easy
N/A

Normal
00:26:991 (1) - I think this should become this - http://puu.sh/pAYux/5364e71415.jpg I get why you say this, but I'm leaving it as is because I like to map the background sound here (the guitar? i think)

Hard
N/A

Fireworks
00:02:588 (3) - I think you should move this Why? I think its fine.

The circle size also seems kinda small that's my opinion CS 4 is the meta tho
Sorry, can't really kds since really small mod and I didn't apply anything :\

Also, I've already modded your map lol it's the first mod
greenwood0301
236 posts
Joined November 2014
greenwood0301
Hi M4M From Your Queue

EASY


SPOILER
00:03:372 to 00:04:939 : Remove the space or map with the lyrics or add a note there 00:03:708

00:20:499 Add a Note There

00:20:946 Add a Note There

00:25:760 to 00:26:320 map the "Ever"

00:41:991 Add a Note There

00:42:439 Add a Note There

NORMAL


SPOILER
00:20:275 Unstack the note

00:57:439 to 00:58:111 make a slider there

HARD


SPOILER
Change the ar to 7.5 (Shift for the .5)

00:10:200 to 00:11:320 Make The Jump more easy

00:17:588 NC

00:18:036 No NC There

00:58:111 Don't fit in a hard. Move more closer to the last note.

FIREWORKS OF FLAVOR


SPOILER
Change AR to 8.5

00:35:499 NC

00:35:946 No NC There

00:36:394 NC

GLHF For The Rank
Izzywing
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Topic Starter
Izzywing

greenwood0301 wrote:

Hi M4M From Your Queue

EASY


SPOILER
00:03:372 to 00:04:939 : Remove the space or map with the lyrics or add a note there 00:03:708 Added note.

00:20:499 Add a Note There I think it's a good break for the player

00:20:946 Add a Note There ^[b/]

00:25:760 to 00:26:320 map the "Ever" [b]Only used white ticks for this difficulty. I kinda wanted this to be a really easy easy, since it's a kids song and all.

00:41:991 Add a Note There Is decent spot for break for the player

00:42:439 Add a Note There ^

NORMAL


SPOILER
00:20:275 Unstack the note music sounds like a stack to me, weird to explain but I think its ok

00:57:439 to 00:58:111 make a slider there I like the finish sound effect here instead of a slider

HARD


SPOILER
Change the ar to 7.5 (Shift for the .5) Leaving it at 8.

00:10:200 to 00:11:320 Make The Jump more easy I think the jump is fine. This comment did lead to me change 00:11:543 (4) for flow, though.

00:17:588 NC i nc on the downbeats

00:18:036 No NC There see above

00:58:111 Don't fit in a hard. Move more closer to the last note.its not a jump though, it follows the DS. woof

FIREWORKS OF FLAVOR


SPOILER
Change AR to 8.5 9 is fine.
00:35:499 NC

00:35:946 No NC There

00:36:394 NC

I follow the downbeats for combos

GLHF For The Rank Thanks!
Mutual'd as mentioned in the PM. Thanks for mod ~
alden
206 posts
Joined November 2013
alden
Let's mod! :^) my end of m4m
[Fireworks of Flavor]
  1. I know it's already been suggested but I highly recommend the AR being lowered to at least 8.7 (8.5 being even better). When playing your map the ar just didn't quite fit as much as a lower ar would but that's my opinion
  2. 00:03:260 (4) - i'd like this curved more towards the left imo you can do this by tilting the slider end to the left by 2 pixels
  3. 00:05:499 (1) - isn't actually stacked or is that intentional?
  4. 00:07:290 (1,2) - personal opinion here but i think this is bad flow. The slider should lead into the circle instead of away from it here.
  5. 00:09:081 (1) - Not a fan of this slider. Maybe try curving like so? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448704
  6. 00:09:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe cleaning it up with a rhombus pattern would be better. I just copied and pasted 00:09:976 (3,4) - to make 5 and 6 then slapped 2 where 5 was. It looks better imo --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448732
  7. 00:14:230 (4,5) - should lead into 00:14:454 (1) - this isn't exactly the best example but you get the point https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448732
  8. Similarly like before 00:24:305 (4,5) should be the same as 00:23:857 (2,3) -
  9. 00:25:872 (3) - I really like things when they're curved in the middle but this isn't too big
  10. 00:25:872 (3) - This spacing is weird. Maybe even the spacing out?
  11. 00:31:917 (6,7,1) - same thing here. I feel like 6 needs more emphasis and 7 needs less since 6's beat is stronger here
  12. 00:39:081 (2,3) - same opinion with ^^ I just ctrl+g these notes but there's other ways of doing it xd regardless this plays bad so consider changing
  13. 00:43:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - rather you just made a perfect star pattern
  14. 00:50:051 (6,7) - again pref if this lead into the slider perfectly (this one isnt as big a deal)
  15. 00:53:633 (6,1) - why does six get a bigger spacing than 1? 1 is a much bigger beat and needs to be properly emphasized x(
  16. 00:54:976 (4,5,1,2) - could make this a square pattern (or rectangle) example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448826
  17. 00:55:872 (2) - could be used for 00:54:976 (4) - or vice versa xd
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:066 (5,6,1) - isn't snapped to x1 ds unless intentional
  2. 00:07:961 (3) - stack slider end with 00:07:290 (1) - ??
  3. 00:09:081 (1) - rather you slightly curve it the other way
  4. 00:21:394 (5,6,1,2,3) - suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448863
  5. 00:24:305 (3,4) - make them bend in the middle? make them bend less?
  6. 00:49:155 (3) - curve in the middle like so? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448886
That's all I got everything else is I'm not comfortable in modding GL with this set ;) Great mapset so far
Izzywing
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Topic Starter
Izzywing

ChronoNig wrote:

Let's mod! :^) my end of m4m
[Fireworks of Flavor]
  1. I know it's already been suggested but I highly recommend the AR being lowered to at least 8.7 (8.5 being even better). When playing your map the ar just didn't quite fit as much as a lower ar would but that's my opinion Hm, I'll change this if one more person comments on it. AR is a big deal, so I'd like to have at least 3 opinions on it.
  2. 00:03:260 (4) - i'd like this curved more towards the left imo you can do this by tilting the slider end to the left by 2 pixels Done.
  3. 00:05:499 (1) - isn't actually stacked or is that intentional? Fixed, lol
  4. 00:07:290 (1,2) - personal opinion here but i think this is bad flow. The slider should lead into the circle instead of away from it here. Adjusted.
  5. 00:09:081 (1) - Not a fan of this slider. Maybe try curving like so? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448704 ok
  6. 00:09:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe cleaning it up with a rhombus pattern would be better. I just copied and pasted 00:09:976 (3,4) - to make 5 and 6 then slapped 2 where 5 was. It looks better imo --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448732 Fixed pattern. Thanks for the suggestion.
  7. 00:14:230 (4,5) - should lead into 00:14:454 (1) - this isn't exactly the best example but you get the point https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448732 Adjusted
  8. Similarly like before 00:24:305 (4,5) should be the same as 00:23:857 (2,3) - Whoops, fixed
  9. 00:25:872 (3) - I really like things when they're curved in the middle but this isn't too big Fixed
  10. 00:25:872 (3) - This spacing is weird. Maybe even the spacing out? Done
  11. 00:31:917 (6,7,1) - same thing here. I feel like 6 needs more emphasis and 7 needs less since 6's beat is stronger here ok
  12. 00:39:081 (2,3) - same opinion with ^^ I just ctrl+g these notes but there's other ways of doing it xd regardless this plays bad so consider changing
  13. 00:43:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - rather you just made a perfect star pattern [b]Done.
  14. 00:50:051 (6,7) - again pref if this lead into the slider perfectly (this one isnt as big a deal) Fixed.
  15. 00:53:633 (6,1) - why does six get a bigger spacing than 1? 1 is a much bigger beat and needs to be properly emphasized x( Adjusted.
  16. 00:54:976 (4,5,1,2) - could make this a square pattern (or rectangle) example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448826 I like what i have now as it emphasizes the strong "big" sound
  17. 00:55:872 (2) - could be used for 00:54:976 (4) - or vice versa xd [b]Done.
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:066 (5,6,1) - isn't snapped to x1 ds unless intentional Fixed.
  2. 00:07:961 (3) - stack slider end with 00:07:290 (1) - ?? Should have been like that, fixed
  3. 00:09:081 (1) - rather you slightly curve it the other way k
  4. 00:21:394 (5,6,1,2,3) - suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448863 SHould be neater
  5. 00:24:305 (3,4) - make them bend in the middle? make them bend less? done
  6. 00:49:155 (3) - curve in the middle like so? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5448886 ok
That's all I got everything else is I'm not comfortable in modding GL with this set ;) Great mapset so far Thank you!
thanks for the mod ~
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
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2016-06-23 04:03 estellia-: from what i can see
2016-06-23 04:03 estellia-: your easy and hard are like ok
2016-06-23 04:03 Hobbes2: ok
2016-06-23 04:04 estellia-: i can't be arsed to point out the aesthetic issues because the flow is the main thing thats trash
2016-06-23 04:04 estellia-: for easy
2016-06-23 04:04 Hobbes2: o
2016-06-23 04:04 Hobbes2: ok
2016-06-23 04:04 estellia-: 00:04:155 (2,3) - suggest mapping this to slider
2016-06-23 04:04 estellia-: so its easier to play
2016-06-23 04:05 Hobbes2: okay
2016-06-23 04:05 Hobbes2: I do that multiple parts in the song, make em all sliders?
2016-06-23 04:05 estellia-: 00:19:827 (3,4,5,1) - dont like these weird hitcircles in Easy, they make it look ugly
2016-06-23 04:05 estellia-: yes
2016-06-23 04:05 estellia-: that would make it easier for Easy players
2016-06-23 04:05 Hobbes2: Alright, will do.
2016-06-23 04:05 estellia-: the idea for easy is that its easily readable and not confusing in the slightest to help easy players play better
2016-06-23 04:05 estellia-: thats it
2016-06-23 04:05 estellia-: dont make it confusing and unreadable
2016-06-23 04:06 estellia-: on to normal
2016-06-23 04:06 Hobbes2: yea i was worried that the rhythm would be too repetitive but i guess that's not really an issue
2016-06-23 04:06 Hobbes2: will do the slider thing as suggested
2016-06-23 04:06 estellia-: dont worry, Easy players are trash, simple rhythm is good xd
2016-06-23 04:07 Hobbes2: ok C:
2016-06-23 04:07 estellia-: there is one massive massive flaw in normal
2016-06-23 04:07 estellia-: can u Ctrl A on your normal diff
2016-06-23 04:07 Hobbes2: ya
2016-06-23 04:07 Hobbes2: o
2016-06-23 04:07 estellia-: do u see
2016-06-23 04:07 estellia-: that your whole map
2016-06-23 04:07 Hobbes2: that entire middle chunk rip
2016-06-23 04:07 estellia-: is literally a donut
2016-06-23 04:08 Hobbes2: i do now
2016-06-23 04:08 estellia-: i'd prefer more variant in normals imo
2016-06-23 04:08 estellia-: another general comment
2016-06-23 04:08 estellia-: massive patterns like 00:21:618 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - not desirable in Normal diffs
2016-06-23 04:09 estellia-: and the difference between that rhythm and 00:26:991 (1) - is STARKING, which is a pretty bad idea if the rhythm is inbalanced throughout the map
2016-06-23 04:10 Hobbes2: alright, so
2016-06-23 04:10 Hobbes2: i suppsoe i should remap 00:21:618 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - then
2016-06-23 04:10 estellia-: not just that
2016-06-23 04:10 estellia-: ok uh
2016-06-23 04:10 estellia-: something normal would be akin to 00:03:708 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-06-23 04:11 estellia-: 00:16:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this is massive
2016-06-23 04:11 estellia-: 00:43:111 (1,2,3,4,1) - this is massive too
2016-06-23 04:11 estellia-: beat densities that are super high are undesirable in normals
2016-06-23 04:11 estellia-: suggest you look at some other diffs to refer, maybe that will help you get the right idea of normals
2016-06-23 04:12 Hobbes2: alrighty
2016-06-23 04:12 Hobbes2: yea im not too hot on normals in particular compared to the other diffs as you could tell
2016-06-23 04:12 Hobbes2: ill do that
2016-06-23 04:12 estellia-: ok thats it for normal, because normal is more a "style" issue than anything else, so i would honestly suggest remap or asking for GD
2016-06-23 04:12 Hobbes2: Alright
2016-06-23 04:12 estellia-: moving to hard
2016-06-23 04:13 estellia-: stuff like 00:02:588 (3,4) - is unreadable imo
2016-06-23 04:14 estellia-: cuz you have things like 00:11:096 (2,3,4) - that is of similar distance in space, but different in terms of temporal spacing
2016-06-23 04:15 estellia-: like the 1st is 1/1 apart when the 2nd is 1/2 apart, although they visually look like they are the same distance
2016-06-23 04:15 Hobbes2: hm, would stacking instead be fine?
2016-06-23 04:15 estellia-: i would suggest slider
2016-06-23 04:15 estellia-: but stacking is ok too
2016-06-23 04:15 Hobbes2: kk
2016-06-23 04:15 Hobbes2: oo yea slider sounds good
2016-06-23 04:15 estellia-: yea
2016-06-23 04:15 estellia-: thats it for hard
2016-06-23 04:16 estellia-: there isn't much, its pretty alright already
2016-06-23 04:16 Hobbes2: kk
2016-06-23 04:16 estellia-: your insane however
2016-06-23 04:16 Hobbes2: quick comment, someone else said the ar was too high
2016-06-23 04:16 Hobbes2: thoughts?
2016-06-23 04:16 Hobbes2: i think its fine
2016-06-23 04:16 Hobbes2: but want another opinion
2016-06-23 04:16 estellia-: uh
2016-06-23 04:16 estellia-: for hardd or insane
2016-06-23 04:16 Hobbes2: both actually lol
2016-06-23 04:17 estellia-: hard is typically ar7
2016-06-23 04:17 estellia-: anything between ar6.something to ar8 is fine by me tho
2016-06-23 04:17 Hobbes2: kk
2016-06-23 04:17 Hobbes2: ill keep it for now, then
2016-06-23 04:17 estellia-: but if someone else points it out just change it, esp since its a slow song
2016-06-23 04:17 Hobbes2: fair enough
2016-06-23 04:18 estellia-: your insane should be ok
2016-06-23 04:18 estellia-: anything thatss AR8.something wont hurt though
2016-06-23 04:18 Hobbes2: I just tried 7 when I first made it and it felt like the ntoes were clogging the screen to me
2016-06-23 04:18 estellia-: oh dw editor =/= gameplay
2016-06-23 04:18 Hobbes2: ya the guy suggested 8.7
2016-06-23 04:18 estellia-: 8,7 is alright sure
2016-06-23 04:19 estellia-: your insane seems like its mapped for the sake of being mapped
2016-06-23 04:19 estellia-: like youre clearly mapping for difficulty LOL
2016-06-23 04:20 Hobbes2: riperoni
2016-06-23 04:20 Hobbes2: tbh that wasn't the intention but i guess it looks like that lol
2016-06-23 04:20 estellia-: you can do without it i suppose
2016-06-23 04:21 estellia-: but since you mapped it already
2016-06-23 04:21 estellia-: 00:07:961 (3,4) - bad flow here, ctrlg 4 looks ok
2016-06-23 04:22 Hobbes2: alright, done
2016-06-23 04:22 estellia-: thats it
2016-06-23 04:22 estellia-: everything else about insane is subjective
2016-06-23 04:22 Hobbes2: I guess I'll get more opinions on whether or not it should exist
2016-06-23 04:22 estellia-: yea your mapset just needs more nazi polishing and you're good to go imo
2016-06-23 04:22 Hobbes2: I didn't really mean to like intentionally overmap or something just so I could have an insane
2016-06-23 04:22 Hobbes2: not sure if thats what it looks like lol
2016-06-23 04:23 estellia-: its ok, so many overmapped maps nowadays its fine xd
2016-06-23 04:23 Hobbes2: hehe
2016-06-23 04:23 Hobbes2: so I guess the big thing is to take a look at normal again
2016-06-23 04:23 estellia-: so many obnoxious jumps make it look like you''re deliberately trying for an insane imo
2016-06-23 04:23 estellia-: yea normall
2016-06-23 04:23 estellia-: thats a big problem
2016-06-23 04:23 Hobbes2: example of an obnoxious jump? for reference
2016-06-23 04:24 estellia-: o btw u missed a hitsound 00:50:275 (1) -
2016-06-23 04:24 Hobbes2: fixed
2016-06-23 04:24 estellia-: sosmething like 00:20:499 (2,3,4,5,6) -
2016-06-23 04:24 estellia-: like holy shit the song is so cute and cuddly and suddenly BOOM
2016-06-23 04:24 estellia-: 00:22:514 (3,4,5,6) - this too
2016-06-23 04:24 estellia-: 00:24:529 (5,6) - this is scary
2016-06-23 04:25 estellia-: most jumps in your map look very very hard because of how slow paced the song is imo
2016-06-23 04:25 Hobbes2: alright
2016-06-23 04:25 estellia-: either map it easier or just not have an insane at all, thats my take on it
2016-06-23 04:25 Hobbes2: kk
2016-06-23 04:26 Hobbes2: guess I'll nerf the crap out of it then and make it seem less forced
2016-06-23 04:26 estellia-: also have a look at typical insanes at your BPM
2016-06-23 04:26 estellia-: they normally are at "Hard" rated, because thats ok too
2016-06-23 04:26 estellia-: as long as your spread is ok of course
2016-06-23 04:26 Hobbes2: is something like 2 3 3.6 fine?
2016-06-23 04:27 Hobbes2: because pending a normal remap that's probably what it would look like
2016-06-23 04:27 estellia-: 2 3 3.6 isnt good i think
2016-06-23 04:27 estellia-: should almosst be linear
2016-06-23 04:27 estellia-: refer to other maps for opinions i guess
2016-06-23 04:27 Hobbes2: ok
2016-06-23 04:28 Hobbes2: ill probably end up deleting insane, i'll just get another opinion i guess
2016-06-23 04:28 Hobbes2: I kinda like it but i see your point
2016-06-23 04:28 estellia-: i mean its your map
2016-06-23 04:28 estellia-: do what you want with it lO
2016-06-23 04:28 estellia-: brb posting chat
Izzywing
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thanks kds farmer est for the mod

notes for self -

normal is suck gonna get a GD probably, want to spread the big dog

Insane needs some work prob since apparently it looks like i intentionally mapped for diff even tho that isn't the case lol

EDIT -

Fixed everything, insane partially respaced

normal is gone til' I can get a GD for it since it was basically a donut with crappy note density
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Fireworks of Flavor

  1. 00:26:991 (1,2,3,4,5) - squarish patterns like these are really tricky to play because the flow is unnatural
  2. 00:28:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:41:096 (4) - Would flow and look better if you stacked on the head of 00:39:528 (1)
no kds
[]

Hobbes2 wrote:

EDIT -

normal is gone til' I can get a GD for it since it was basically a donut with crappy note density
here you go as requested ;) http://puu.sh/pCsCQ/2423fea007.rar
Izzywing
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Kisses wrote:

Fireworks of Flavor

  1. 00:26:991 (1,2,3,4,5) - squarish patterns like these are really tricky to play because the flow is unnatural
  2. 00:28:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:41:096 (4) - Would flow and look better if you stacked on the head of 00:39:528 (1)
no kds
[]

Hobbes2 wrote:

EDIT -

normal is gone til' I can get a GD for it since it was basically a donut with crappy note density
here you go as requested ;) http://puu.sh/pCsCQ/2423fea007.rar
Changed patterns and added the map. Thanks~

And thanks for the stars!
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Oki~

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Izzywing
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ezek wrote:

Oki~

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104,244,2588,2,0,L|104:108,1,130
104,36,3260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,92,3708,6,0,B|312:108|312:80|376:92,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,128,4379,2,0,B|432:160|396:168|396:168|376:228,1,130
360,304,5051,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,340,5499,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,340,5946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,316,6170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,6394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,208,6618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,268,6842,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,276,7066,2,0,L|356:272,1,32.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
388,248,7290,6,0,B|400:184|400:184|388:120,1,130,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,76,7961,2,0,L|192:72,1,130
116,68,8633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,68,9081,6,0,P|120:100|116:132,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,200,9528,2,0,P|72:232|76:264,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,324,10200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,324,10424,2,0,P|252:328|284:324,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,10872,6,0,B|388:232|388:232|460:232,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,152,11543,2,0,B|389:152|389:152|345:112,1,130
288,60,12215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,60,12663,6,0,L|220:60,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,84,13111,2,0,L|84:84,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,220,13782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,220,14006,2,0,P|4:252|8:284,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,332,14454,6,0,B|128:352|128:352|192:332,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,15126,2,0,B|324:276|324:276|384:296,1,130
452,332,15797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,332,16245,6,0,P|468:268|452:208,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,156,16917,2,0,P|376:92|392:32,1,130
392,31,17588,2,0,L|320:36,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,18036,6,0,L|184:69,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,76,18484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,76,18708,2,0,B|112:124|112:124|132:148|132:148|132:204,1,130
132,276,19379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,344,19827,6,0,P|304:348|336:344,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,272,20275,2,0,P|272:268|240:272,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,348,20946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,348,21170,2,0,L|80:288,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,212,21618,6,0,L|80:152,2,65,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,22290,2,0,B|200:268|224:284|224:284|244:268|284:268,1,130
360,276,22961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,268,23185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,268,23409,6,0,B|452:236|452:236|472:188|440:144,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,196,24081,2,0,B|348:153|368:105|368:105|380:73,1,130
420,4,24752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,88,25200,6,0,B|256:92|256:92|224:88,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,64,25648,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,124,25872,2,0,L|112:256,1,130
120,332,26543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,296,26991,6,0,P|304:292|336:296,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,344,27439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,296,27663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,248,27887,2,0,L|400:116,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,28558,2,0,L|320:48,1,32.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
284,56,28782,6,0,B|256:60|256:60|220:56,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,48,29230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,80,29454,2,0,B|56:144|56:144|68:208,1,130
100,280,30126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,280,30349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,30573,6,0,B|204:304|204:304|240:332|292:316,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,31245,2,0,B|308:232|344:260|344:260|372:284,1,130
428,340,31917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,188,32364,6,0,P|376:124|392:64,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,24,33260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,24,33484,2,0,P|256:88|240:148,1,130
176,196,34155,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,196,34379,2,0,P|160:260|176:320,1,130
176,320,35275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,336,35499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,316,35723,2,0,L|16:280,1,32.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
12,244,35946,6,0,L|28:176,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,36394,2,0,L|100:60,2,65,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,248,37290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,248,37737,6,0,P|216:252|248:248,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,38185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,296,38409,2,0,B|420:296|420:296|468:256,1,130
512,192,39081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,128,39305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,128,39528,6,0,B|420:88|420:88|352:88,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,152,40424,2,0,B|144:152|144:152|96:112,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,41320,6,0,B|144:232|144:232|212:232,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,276,41991,2,0,P|340:292|400:276,1,130
460,224,42663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,172,42887,2,0,L|368:160,1,32.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
336,140,43111,6,0,B|304:136|304:136|272:140,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,168,43558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,196,43782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,196,44006,2,0,B|124:228|124:228|128:260,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,116,44678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,116,44902,6,0,B|140:84|140:84|136:52,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,148,45573,2,0,B|48:196|48:196|48:276,1,130
48,352,46245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,296,46693,6,0,P|232:292|264:296,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,47140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,200,47588,2,0,P|388:204|356:200,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,164,48036,2,0,P|260:160|228:164,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,48484,5,2,0:0:0:0:
76,204,48708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,180,48931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,180,49155,2,0,L|20:308,1,130
76,360,49827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,328,50051,2,0,L|184:324,1,32.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
212,300,50275,6,0,P|248:296|276:300,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,340,50723,2,0,P|376:344|408:340,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,288,51170,2,0,P|484:224|468:164,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,52066,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,52290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,52514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,168,52737,2,0,L|256:304,1,130
256,376,53409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,328,53857,6,0,P|92:264|108:204,1,130,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,152,54528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,80,54752,2,0,L|64:72,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,55424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,55648,6,0,L|268:48,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,60,56096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,128,56320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,56543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,256,56767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,324,56991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,328,57439,5,4,0:0:0:0:
152,192,58111,5,2,0:0:0:0:
Adding both, thank you ~

Also, added "ezek" and "Kisses" to tags since I forgot earlier.
Zyl
520 posts
Joined October 2013
Zyl
M4M from #modreqs

Easy


  1. 00:07:290 (1,2) - fix flow
  2. 00:14:454 (1) - Doesn't accords with the song at all, if this slider is mapped with the playback rate on 25%, please map it on 100% of playback rate.
  3. 00:14:454 (1,2) - fix flow
  4. 00:26:991 (3) - Doesn't accords with the song at all, if this slider is mapped with the playback rate on 25%, please map it on 100% of playback rate.
  5. 00:37:737 (3,4) - fix flow
  6. 00:39:528 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:40:424 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:43:111 (1,2) - ^
  9. 00:45:349 (4,1) - Overlap is not permited on easy diffs
  10. 00:50:723 (2,3) - fix flow
Normal


  1. 00:00:126 (1,2,3,1,2) - More than 4 continuous objects are really hard for beginner players
  2. 00:03:036 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
  3. 00:06:618 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:10:200 (3) - This on gameplay feels really weird, try ti evade the red ticks on normal diffs because they play awkward
  5. 00:13:782 (3,4,1,2,3) - More than 4 continuous objects are really hard for beginner players
  6. 00:18:036 (1,2,3) - This pattern is really confusing because when you play it you go to the top of the screen, but later you stop for an arrow and more sliders, so try to change that
  7. 00:18:036 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - More than 4 continuous objects are really hard for beginner players
  8. 00:20:946 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
  9. 00:27:215 (2) - This pattern is really confusing because single tick + arrow + normal slider, i think that this can confuse a beginner player
  10. 00:26:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - More than 4 continuous objects are really hard for beginner players
  11. 00:33:260 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  12. 00:37:737 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
  13. 00:42:439 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
  14. 00:50:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - ^
  15. 00:54:752 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
  16. 00:57:439 (1,1) - Feels weird at gameplay
ezek's Advanced


  1. 00:03:260 (3,1) - Change the position of this for keep the flow like: x: 259 y: 42
  2. 00:05:499 (1,2) - Feels weird at gameplay
  3. 00:08:633 (3,1) - ^
  4. 00:12:215 (3,1) - ^
  5. 00:15:126 (2) - Try to match it with the vocals
  6. 00:35:275 (3,4) - Feels weird at gameplay
  7. 00:36:394 (2,3) - Weird flow
  8. 00:37:290 (3,1) - Feels weird at gameplay
  9. 00:51:170 (3,1) - Fix the flow a little
  10. 00:56:096 (2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - looks awful
Izzywing
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2,248 posts
Joined March 2016
Topic Starter
Izzywing

Zyl wrote:

M4M from #modreqs

Easy


  1. 00:07:290 (1,2) - fix flow This is totally reasonable.
  2. 00:14:454 (1) - Doesn't accords with the song at all, if this slider is mapped with the playback rate on 25%, please map it on 100% of playback rate. Its not with the lyrics, its with the background sound.
  3. 00:14:454 (1,2) - fix flow its fine.
  4. 00:26:991 (3) - Doesn't accords with the song at all, if this slider is mapped with the playback rate on 25%, please map it on 100% of playback rate. Same as above, it's not with lyrics, its with the background
  5. 00:37:737 (3,4) - fix flow looks fine
  6. 00:39:528 (1,2) - ^ looks fine
  7. 00:40:424 (2,3) - ^ ^
  8. 00:43:111 (1,2) - ^ is fine
  9. 00:45:349 (4,1) - Overlap is not permited on easy diffs Fixed. Overlap is fine in easy diff if done properly but this one wasn't intentional
  10. 00:50:723 (2,3) - fix flow is fine
when you say "fix flow" please clarify why the flow is bad. "fix flow" doesn't really help me much, a lot of these comments the flow was perfectly fine. not every note has to be a in a perfect line right out of the slider, there are variations.

thanks for the mod ~
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-
Heya~ M4M here.

General:
  1. Add this soundfile into your song’s folder to silence those sliderslides: http://puu.sh/pCP7R/39cd3717ab.wav

Fireworks of Flavor:
  1. 00:00:797 (3,1) – A bit nazi, but stacks like this aren’t perfect and there’s an easy way to fix it. Just select one of the objects and adjust it here:
    Picture
    There may be more cases like this, but I’m not gonna point them all out.
  2. 00:02:588 (3,2) –Try to avoid this slight overlap. I doubt it was intentional.
  3. 00:07:066 (7,8) –Try adding a hitsound here to emphasize this sound. I suggest the drum-sample. This will apply to all the diffs.
  4. 00:05:499 (1) – I realized that in the beginning section of the song, this is the only place where you placed a whistle. Why not place whistles at other parts as well? Like here: 00:00:126 (1,1,1) – etc, etc. throughout the entire diff. This will apply to all the other diffs as well.
  5. 00:07:961 (3) –Since there are vocals here, I would rather not start this slider on the red tick. I think there are better rhythms that can be used. Like:
    Picture
    Another reason is because there’s a vocal here: 00:08:185 – that would be a good idea to map out.
  6. 00:09:081 (1) -^, there’s a vocal here: 00:09:305 – so try catching it by placing a circle and a slider or just circles or something like that.
  7. 00:11:543 (3) -^
  8. 00:11:543 (3,1) –I don’t really like this overlap. Stack (1) on the tail of (3).
  9. 00:14:230 (4,5) –Same suggestion as 00:07:066 (7,8) –
  10. 00:15:573 (4,1) –Nazi, but you can try to create a blanket here. It will look neater.
  11. 00:18:036 (1) –The position of this slider doesn’t create the best flow. Try something like this instead:
    Picture
  12. 00:21:394 (6,7) –Same suggestion as 00:07:066 (7,8) –
  13. 00:21:618 (1,5) –Try creating a stack here by moving 00:22:514 (3) – a bit upwards and just rearranging this pattern: 00:22:514 (3,4,5,6) –
  14. 00:25:872 (3) –Move this slider downwards a bit so the tail is stacked on 00:24:976 (7) –
  15. 00:30:573 (1,3) –Perfect the stack. It doesn’t look tidy at the moment.
  16. 00:38:409 (1) –Remove this new combo. It looks inconsistent with the rest of the combos.
  17. 00:47:140 (3,1) –Stack here. You can move 00:48:036 (6) – a bit upwards if you’re worried about the distance.
  18. 00:48:036 (6,3) –Avoid this slight overlap.
  19. 00:48:708 (2,5) –You can try stacking here as well.
  20. 00:50:051 (6,7) –Same suggestion as as 00:07:066 (7,8) –
  21. 00:50:275 (1) –Same suggestion as 00:09:081 (1) –
  22. 00:53:633 (6) –Rather place this circle here: X: 180 Y:280 to avoid the overlap.
  23. 00:57:103 –There’s no beat on this tick, so remove that circle.

Hard:
  1. Rather not make this diff’s HP the same as the hardest diff’s HP. Lower it down to 6.
  2. 00:04:379 (4) –Perhaps place a small jump here like you did here: 00:00:797 (4) – since they both have the same beat.
  3. 00:07:961 (3) –Same suggestion as in the previous diff. Try to catch this vocal as well: 00:08:185 – by placing a circle and a slider.
  4. 00:09:081 (1) -^
  5. 00:11:543 (4) –Rather try a rhythm like this to better catch the vocals/music:
    Picture
  6. 00:14:454 (1) –Ctrl+J and Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G this slider for better flow. Like this:
    Picture
  7. 00:25:872 (4) –Hmm, not the best shape to be honest. Perhaps something like this instead:
    Picture
  8. 00:36:618 (3) –Same suggestion as 00:11:543 (4) –

ezek’s Advanced:
  1. Remove widescreen support.
  2. HP 6 may be a bit too big. Lower it down to 5.5
  3. 00:19:603 –I can hear a beat here so perhaps it will be a good idea to map it out by placing a circle there.
  4. 00:23:409 (1,2) –The shapes of these sliders look a bit like the old mapping style. I suggest just making them normal curved sliders. It will then also improve the blanket.
    Picture
  5. 00:30:573 (1,2) -^
  6. 00:56:991 (6,1) –Perfect this stack.

Kisses’ Normal:
  1. Remove widescreen support.
  2. Since the BPM is only 134, I suggest making the distance spacing a bit bigger. Right now the objects are overlapping each other too much imo and there is room to make this diff a tiny bit more challenging. A distance spacing of 1.0X will fit nicely.
  3. I don’t think a kiai will really fit for this song since there isn’t a chorus that stands out. The entire song is actually the same.
  4. 00:25:200 (1) –Change this circle into a short slider to catch this vocal as well: 00:25:424 –
    Picture

Easy:
  1. Since the slider velocity is so slow, you can increase the distance spacing just a little bit. Something like: 1.4X The objects doesn’t have to be that close to each other. Another reason is because the current distance spacing makes it look as if some of the objects are almost overlapping each other and it looks untidy.
  2. 00:13:111 (3) –The shape of this slider can be improved imo. Try something like this instead:
    Picture
  3. 00:26:096 –I suggest placing a note here because right now that gap feels very empty.

Overall, this is a pretty nice set. Almost rank-ready.
Good Luck~! :D
[Nemesis]
[Nemesis]
hi, doing m4m~
Easy
- the hp drain is WAAAAY too low compared to the normal/hard. I'd personally make it a bit bigger.
- 00:14:454 (1) - I don't really think that this fits to the vocal line at all, compared to the other notes. (try this onehttp://puu.sh/pCTZV/0f76523859.jpg)
00:25:200 - this feels uncomfortable. I think one or two notes are simply missing
Normal
00:51:618 (4) - NC
00:52:066 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:275 - why is there Kiai time in normal, when there isn't in ANY other diff???
Advanced
00:05:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I don't know why, but this part seems extremely uncomfortable. Or perhaps it's just me?
00:55:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - ^
00:30:349 (5) - NC
00:30:573 (1) - remove NC
Hard
Can't really find issues, really enjoyed this diff <3
Fireworks of Flavor
00:21:394 (6,7,1) - I think if you make the triplet a bit wider, or just stack it on each other, it would feel much better
Sorry, I'm not good at modding Hard+'s ;_;
Good luck!
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
hi, m4m from kisses' queue

  1. uncheck widescreen support on kisses' diff
[Kisses' Normal]
  1. 00:50:275 (1,2,3) - 1/1 slider fits better imo instead of two 1/2 sliders
  2. 00:14:454 (1) - ^ it'd better with two 1/2 sliders imo for emphasising the vocal
  3. too hard to mod an almost perfect normal
[ezek's Advanced]
  1. 00:01:693 (5) - remove this maybe ?
  2. 00:36:394 (2,3) - break between those feels weird imo, you could add a circle between
  3. good diff
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:931 (2,3) - ctrl+g to make almost same spacing than 00:00:573 (3,4) -
  2. 00:11:096 (2,3) - huge and unexpected jump imo
  3. 00:38:633 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:15:573 (3) - reverse kills the flow imo, I suggest you to remove this reverse and add a cirlce instead
[Fireworks of Flavor]
  1. 00:01:469 (4,5) - big spacing, make them more closer and 00:01:693 (5,1) - more spaced
  2. 00:49:155 (3,4) - ctrl+g ?
That's all, sorry for this short mod
Good luck !
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