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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年8月24日 at 1:14:57

Artist: DragonForce
Title: Extraction Zone
Tags: rice Herman Li deathstream extra insane speedmetal Maximum Overload
BPM: 200
Filesize: 5771kb
Play Time: 05:01
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“The World’s Fastest Melodic Speed Power stream

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custom combo colors? :o


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00:19:924 (1,1,1) - i think you should remove NC, as it's inconsistent with the first part
00:29:824 (1,1) - same here, also i think you could do a 5 burst stream starting at 00:30:124 - to be consistent with 00:27:724 (3) -
00:50:749 (8) - should NC this and remove NC on 00:50:824 (1) - to be consistent with your other NC (I'm pretty sure you NC to vocals?)
00:50:749 (1) - maybe note here?
01:17:224 (1,1) - you could probably gradually decrease SV here for a nice effect (maybe 0.8 for the first one and 0.6 for the second one?)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5557936
01:21:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't really hear that stream in the song :( i think you should do the same rhythm you did here 01:19:174 -
01:45:049 (2) - i think you should remove this circle, it creates a better effect for the stream without starting on a blue tick
01:56:224 (1) - NC?
02:13:924 (2) - you should NC this to be consistent with your NC here 02:11:524 (1) -
02:15:424 (1) - most of the times i like your slider shapes but honestly this one is kind of ugly imo :( i made a small something you should consider changing to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5557973
02:41:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is really sudden, maybe put 2 repeat sliders for the first 8 notes instead so it's easier to predict?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5557998
02:44:224 (1) - should ctrl j this imo because slider start going down-up is better to play from this angle
02:45:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i don't hear this stream at all. music has a long guitar note, not a stream
02:46:624 (1) - ctrl g? and then move 02:47:074 (2) - to the slider end
03:05:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this part of the stream isn't heard in the song, there's a long guitar chord (which you could replicate using a long slider imo)
03:18:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 03:19:474 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - can't hear the stream for both of these, i think the rhythm is more like this http://puu.sh/pTBMv/b1553b53c6.jpg
03:22:624 (17) - NC?
03:40:624 (9) - NC?
03:49:324 (2,3) - i think you need to increase spacing of these sliders to fit the big spacing you had in the last stream
03:49:324 (2,3) - also, i'm pretty sure this is a triple and not a slider?
03:53:824 (1,2) - this should be a stream, it's really emphasized to only be covered by 2 sliders
04:01:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - i know that you blanketed this to the stream but the fact that it's so far away from the next stack is really off putting. maybe overlap with one of the notes from the stream? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5558067
04:10:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - can't hear the stream here. also i think with how hard the previous streams are you should give players a break and make it have sliders instead http://puu.sh/pTC7g/80edc34198.jpg
04:11:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - again, don't hear a stream here, this is just a long guitar chord (you could probably use 3 sliders here aswell)
04:17:824 (1) - SV is very anticlimactic, i think you should make these go faster instead (1.5x maybe?)
04:20:224 (17) - NC?
04:30:724 (1) - NC? you did the same thing on previous streams from kiai on 01:36:874 -
04:35:524 (5) - ^
04:50:074 (5) - diagonal slider is ugly imo, maybe try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5558095 (you could also blanket this with 1)
04:59:074 (1,1) - how about gradually increasing SV on these for better emphasis? i think it'd work nicely (1.2x then 1.4 for example) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5558109

good luck with your map! this is very cool c:
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  • hi kami big fan
  • You've got some good emphasis using kicksliders on the vocals. Ex: 00:55:324 (1,2) -
    You could try to use this as a motif throughout the map, it feels really stream heavy
  • Personally I feel like the emphasis on the "extraction zone" streams are misplaced and you should consider revising them but I can see what you're doing right now. If you keep it as is, at least keep it consistent.
    01:37:924 (1,2,1) - some streams have this 1,2,1 pattern and others don't 00:51:724 (1,2,3,4,1) - it's not consistent Ex: 04:30:724 (9,10,1,2) -
  • a lot of the larger streams/patterns could end on a NC
    03:22:624 (17) - 03:40:624 (9) - 04:20:224 (17) - etc



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Man this is so cool, I love the rhythm choices you made after the last kiai
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ts8zs wrote:
quick check
00:37:024 (4) - remove nc fix
00:45:799 (10) - overmap?
02:26:074 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - unreadable fix
03:49:324 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5454312 fix
04:07:324 (2,3) - Ctrl+G on rhythm fix
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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

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后面懒看了qwq good luck!


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General

custom combo colors? :o fix


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00:19:924 (1,1,1) - i think you should remove NC, as it's inconsistent with the first part fix
00:29:824 (1,1) - same here, also i think you could do a 5 burst stream starting at 00:30:124 - to be consistent with 00:27:724 (3) - fix
00:50:749 (8) - should NC this and remove NC on 00:50:824 (1) - to be consistent with your other NC (I'm pretty sure you NC to vocals?) fix
00:50:749 (1) - maybe note here? hummm...I need to consider
01:17:224 (1,1) - you could probably gradually decrease SV here for a nice effect (maybe 0.8 for the first one and 0.6 for the second one?)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5557936 fix
01:21:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't really hear that stream in the song :( i think you should do the same rhythm you did here 01:19:174 - fix
01:45:049 (2) - i think you should remove this circle, it creates a better effect for the stream without starting on a blue tick fix
01:56:224 (1) - NC? fix
02:13:924 (2) - you should NC this to be consistent with your NC here 02:11:524 (1) - fix
02:15:424 (1) - most of the times i like your slider shapes but honestly this one is kind of ugly imo :( i made a small something you should consider changing to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5557973 fix
02:41:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is really sudden, maybe put 2 repeat sliders for the first 8 notes instead so it's easier to predict?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5557998 hummm no
02:44:224 (1) - should ctrl j this imo because slider start going down-up is better to play from this angle no
02:45:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i don't hear this stream at all. music has a long guitar note, not a stream fix some
02:46:624 (1) - ctrl g? and then move 02:47:074 (2) - to the slider end fix
03:05:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this part of the stream isn't heard in the song, there's a long guitar chord (which you could replicate using a long slider imo) fix
03:18:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 03:19:474 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - can't hear the stream for both of these, i think the rhythm is more like this http://puu.sh/pTBMv/b1553b53c6.jpg fix
03:22:624 (17) - NC? fix
03:40:624 (9) - NC? fix
03:49:324 (2,3) - i think you need to increase spacing of these sliders to fit the big spacing you had in the last stream fix
03:49:324 (2,3) - also, i'm pretty sure this is a triple and not a slider? fix
03:53:824 (1,2) - this should be a stream, it's really emphasized to only be covered by 2 sliders fix
04:01:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - i know that you blanketed this to the stream but the fact that it's so far away from the next stack is really off putting. maybe overlap with one of the notes from the stream? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5558067 fix
04:10:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - can't hear the stream here. also i think with how hard the previous streams are you should give players a break and make it have sliders instead http://puu.sh/pTC7g/80edc34198.jpg fix
04:11:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - again, don't hear a stream here, this is just a long guitar chord (you could probably use 3 sliders here aswell) fix
04:17:824 (1) - SV is very anticlimactic, i think you should make these go faster instead (1.5x maybe?) fix
04:20:224 (17) - NC? fix
04:30:724 (1) - NC? you did the same thing on previous streams from kiai on 01:36:874 - fix
04:35:524 (5) - ^ fix
04:50:074 (5) - diagonal slider is ugly imo, maybe try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5558095 (you could also blanket this with 1) fix?
04:59:074 (1,1) - how about gradually increasing SV on these for better emphasis? i think it'd work nicely (1.2x then 1.4 for example) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5558109 fix

good luck with your map! this is very cool c:



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Marc Hudson加进标签,另外我比较倾向把Herman Li 也加进去

这首歌的专辑是Maximum Overload,加进标签

DragonForce从标签里去掉,因为artist已经出现过一次了所以没必要

Legend也去掉,因为这已经是难度名了

stream ->deathstream

宽屏支持是啥


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00:02:824 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这五个可以把间距一个个缩小下来,2.0x->1.5x->1.0x->0.5x这样

00:04:024 (1) - 这里应该塞个串或者两个1/4折返滑条,00:04:624 - 这里才是长音的开始,应该在这里加一个滑条

00:45:124 (1) - 感觉这段有点太在意放串了,跟vocal 结合的不是很好,虽然vocal 的优先级不是非常靠前

01:16:924 (1,1,1) - 这三个滑条尾的音量应该再小一点,另外我感觉这几个做成折返滑条比较好

01:20:524 (2,3,4,5) - 太近了,看上去有点像1/4

01:26:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 前五个ctrl+g,6和1叠一起

02:20:224 (1,1) - 滑条尾音量太大

02:35:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这种相当于break 的比较慢的地方感觉不太干他妈塞爆比较好

03:18:274 (1) - remove NC

03:34:624 (3) - NC

03:37:024 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么不放Y轴上啊

03:55:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这地方怎么听都是1/4啊

04:52:174 (1) - 怎么没在白线上

把滑条的音量处理一下应该可以了
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Toy wrote:

General
  • hi kami big fan
  • You've got some good emphasis using kicksliders on the vocals. Ex: 00:55:324 (1,2) -
    You could try to use this as a motif throughout the map, it feels really stream heavy
  • Personally I feel like the emphasis on the "extraction zone" streams are misplaced and you should consider revising them but I can see what you're doing right now. If you keep it as is, at least keep it consistent.
    01:37:924 (1,2,1) - some streams have this 1,2,1 pattern and others don't 00:51:724 (1,2,3,4,1) - it's not consistent Ex: 04:30:724 (9,10,1,2) -
  • a lot of the larger streams/patterns could end on a NC
    03:22:624 (17) - 03:40:624 (9) - 04:20:224 (17) - etc


fix


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  • 00:45:874 (1) - 00:46:099 (4) - NC the downbeat instead? fix
  • 00:46:324 (1) - not sure why you NC'd here and not 00:47:425 - here as well fix
  • 00:47:074 (1) - instead of emphasizing the vocals with a NC you could make 4 kick sliders that lead into the stream http://puu.sh/pVAdY/7697f0e1a7.jpg something like this but with better placement fix
  • 00:51:724 (1,3) - same here. I think it'll help emphasize the vocals fix
  • 00:52:924 (13) - could be kickslider fix
  • 01:03:724 (1) - remove this NC and then add one every four notes starting here 01:04:024 (1) - to match the guitar fix
  • 01:04:174 (7,8,9,10,11) - this is a really sharp angle; consider making it round up and increase spacing instead of relying on such a sharp direction change to emphasize that note considering the rest of this stream is really circular fix
  • 01:36:874 (1,2,3) - I don't think the emphasis is on "zone" but rather when the backup vocals come in, it'll probably play cleaner if you start the spacing at the white tick emmm but I think this cool
  • 01:38:074 (1,2) - same here, I'd consider these to still be part of the .4x spacing and 01:38:224 (3) - be the start of the larger spacing again
  • 01:40:249 (6,1,2,1) - I know the NCs match the vocals, but it looks odd to have it part of the stream like this me too.But I haven't found a better way. I don't want to change this stream
  • 01:51:124 (1) - I really like this whole stream. Emphasis seems well placed and the sharp direction changes fit and don't feel like they come out of nowhere THX! > <
  • 02:26:074 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - careful using such similar spacing to map notes that have different spacings on the timeline fix
  • 02:46:624 (1) - ctrl+g this? fix
  • 02:51:424 (1) - wow this stream is a beast
  • 03:01:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this section of the stream seems overmapped to what's actually going on in the song emmm...I need more mod this
  • 03:05:374 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same here, there's no sound that supports the end of this stream, maybe make this a long slider or something fix
  • 03:11:974 (1) - how come you made such large direction changes at the first 2 NCs then kinda stopped? would be cool if this one also had a sharp direction change to match the others fix.I added a little space
  • 04:08:224 (1,1) - these are so cool but holy cow fix


Man this is so cool, I love the rhythm choices you made after the last kiai


lol.long mod.But I replied to it now .thx!
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General

Marc Hudson加进标签,另外我比较倾向把Herman Li 也加进去 fix

这首歌的专辑是Maximum Overload,加进标签 fix

DragonForce从标签里去掉,因为artist已经出现过一次了所以没必要 fix

Legend也去掉,因为这已经是难度名了 fix

stream ->deathstream fix

宽屏支持是啥 emmm...这个可以打开吧


Legend

00:02:824 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这五个可以把间距一个个缩小下来,2.0x->1.5x->1.0x->0.5x这样 fix

00:04:024 (1) - 这里应该塞个串或者两个1/4折返滑条,00:04:624 - 这里才是长音的开始,应该在这里加一个滑条 按我现在对图的理解我改了下这里

00:45:124 (1) - 感觉这段有点太在意放串了,跟vocal 结合的不是很好,虽然vocal 的优先级不是非常靠前 same

01:16:924 (1,1,1) - 这三个滑条尾的音量应该再小一点,另外我感觉这几个做成折返滑条比较好 fix

01:20:524 (2,3,4,5) - 太近了,看上去有点像1/4 fix

01:26:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 前五个ctrl+g,6和1叠一起 same

02:20:224 (1,1) - 滑条尾音量太大 same

02:35:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这种相当于break 的比较慢的地方感觉不太干他妈塞爆比较好 same

03:18:274 (1) - remove NC fix

03:34:624 (3) - NC fix

03:37:024 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么不放Y轴上啊 不用啊 放Y轴的话 后面的稍微偏一点会不就有强迫症了吗

03:55:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这地方怎么听都是1/4啊 fix

04:52:174 (1) - 怎么没在白线上 fix

把滑条的音量处理一下应该可以了


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  • 00:31:324 (1,2) - 掉个位置好不好啊 fix
  • 00:46:024 - 这一段finish的音效太轻了,不带感 fix
  • 00:57:649 - 加个note在00:57:724 (5) - 的头上? 这个我倒是感觉没必要
  • 01:06:874 (1) - 去掉nc,因为后面类似的地方都没加 fix
  • 01:17:224 (1) - ctrl+G? 一方面强制要求鼠标有更大的移动,来回地玩着更带感,另一方面01:17:224 (1) - 的吉他只出现在右声道,01:17:524 (1) - 只出现在左声道,所以这两个slider的方向如果反过来的话好像更带点劲(?) fix

  • 01:32:224 (1,2) - 弯过来?如图 fix
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  • 02:20:224 (1) - 建议缩小1/2到白线,因为02:20:824 - 有个音,刻意跳过这个音而把结尾落在更轻的02:20:974 - 是不太合理的 这里是故意为之的 因为如果跟02:20:824 - 这个白线的话 那想必02:20:674 - 这个音也不能漏掉 这样的话不太符合这一段比较休闲的部分了
  • 03:07:024 (1,2) - 观察 前后的pattern,感觉这里间距最好和03:06:874 (2,1) - 一样 fix
  • 03:11:899 (6,1) - 为啥spacing是在这里断开的。。。 因为考虑到TOY的MOD 我开始是想把这里再弄个尖锐的转折点 但好像那么做的话不太好看 于是就缩写妥协了下 把这里拉远了 想了下 我把前面56这两个点改成了一个滑条 然后把1的距离拉远了一点 应该没问题了
  • 03:38:824 (3,4) - 间距再大一点啊 fix
  • 03:39:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 卧槽这个有点灭绝人性啊,看到1~5是个大钝角已经很难打了,结果6又突然折返往上走了,最好改一下6的位置啊 fix
  • 04:07:324 (2) - 缩小到1/2,因为04:07:474 - 有个更重的音;(前面那个3/4就不用缩小了,因为04:07:249 - 这个被对上了) fix
  • 04:25:624 (1,2) - 这间距很容易看成1/4,拉大一点 fix

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