1. CUP (1.39 stars, 155 notes)
2. HYPERION'S REDEMPTION (4.2 stars, 455 notes)
3. JUSEN'S PLATTER (3.07 stars, 361 notes)
4. SALAD (1.91 stars, 207 notes)

Jusenkyo wrote:

Can make a diff platter or rain?

RoseusJaeger wrote:

You requested a mod from me and since Im too lazy to relook at the map, I just hope you haven't made any big changes other than removing platter (and i had spent the most time modding platter so if my mod seems a little small, it's because I had to delete all i did for platter mods).

General

HP should be a 3,4,5,6 spread and yours is a bit low right now. - You can look at my ranked maps, I used the same HP. For me HP 6 only for overdose.

Cup

Looks good to me. Normally, I would be against using .90x spacing, like you did in some sections, but it seems you managed to make it flow well, I'll give you credit for that. - Thank you so much.

Salad

00:48:250 (1,2) – I'd make this a 1.80x jump since it's a bit anti-flow and needs to be easier to read if it is. It'll also make the next pattern feel like it flows a little better. I put (2) on X=352 to fix. - Done.
01:33:850 (1) – I feel like this slider should be tilted for better movement because the “ochi” vocals feel like they need some emphasis. - Done.
01:51:650 (2) – Move this to X=128 because it's a bit hard to read and catch right now. - Done.

This map is decent, good luck. - Thanks.

Jusenkyo wrote:

Jusen's Platter

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Sorry but i'm bad with hitsounds, hope you like it. - It's okay.

I added 2 Combo colours too. - Nice.

1. 01:09:050 - Optional but maybe a 1/2 repeat slider here for consistency with 01:11:850 (1) . Or removing 01:11:850 (1) and map normally instead would work fine too as 01:11:850 (1) didn't land on vocal didn't seem to represent the instrument as much as 01:05:850 (3) .

1. 00:08:050 - There's no need to map this beat since you always followed vocal in this part since the beginning.
2. 00:11:450 (1,2) - The spacing is kinda big and I don't see anything to emphasize on 00:12:650 (2) . Use the same spacing as 00:12:650 (2,3) instead?
3. 01:41:250 - Add a circle here? Because the 1/1 rhythm on 01:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5) is a bit bland, if you're following vocal then it's fine but I think there's a sound here that shouldn't be skipped as well as you didn't follow vocal completely in other parts in kiai.
4. 01:49:650 (1,2) - Imo these two should be moved to 01:49:857 because both 01:49:857 - 01:50:250 have a stronger instruments + vocal.
5. 01:52:250 - It's kinda waste to make it a sliderend here, also feels like there should be a dash here because this beat is strong and rhythm is starting to change from this point.

1. 00:04:850 (2,3) - No need to hdash here I think since you didn't do the same in other places with a similar rhythm like 00:03:250 (3,4) - 00:06:450 (2,3) .
2. 00:14:450 (6,1) - Would be nice if you can either making it an hdash or increase spacing here to emphasize 00:14:650 (1) because it's kinda prominent and it's catchable without having too dash at all.

Electoz wrote:

Hi - Hi

[CUP]

1. 01:09:050 - Optional but maybe a 1/2 repeat slider here for consistency with 01:11:850 (1) . Or removing 01:11:850 (1) and map normally instead would work fine too as 01:11:850 (1) didn't land on vocal didn't seem to represent the instrument as much as 01:05:850 (3) . - Didn't follow the first option at 01:09:050 but followed the second one at 01:11:850 (1) with different pattern.

[SALAD]

1. 00:08:050 - There's no need to map this beat since you always followed vocal in this part since the beginning. - There's strong beat here and I made some improvement on this part.
2. 00:11:450 (1,2) - The spacing is kinda big and I don't see anything to emphasize on 00:12:650 (2) . Use the same spacing as 00:12:650 (2,3) instead? - Reduced the distance and actually I followed the vocal sound at 00:12:650 (2).
3. 01:41:250 - Add a circle here? Because the 1/1 rhythm on 01:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5) is a bit bland, if you're following vocal then it's fine but I think there's a sound here that shouldn't be skipped as well as you didn't follow vocal completely in other parts in kiai. - I followed the vocal and strong beat here.
4. 01:49:650 (1,2) - Imo these two should be moved to 01:49:857 because both 01:49:857 - 01:50:250 have a stronger instruments + vocal. - Moved, nice I didn't realized it.
5. 01:52:250 - It's kinda waste to make it a sliderend here, also feels like there should be a dash here because this beat is strong and rhythm is starting to change from this point. - Split this reverse slider into slider + hitcircle to emphasized the strong beat.

Hope this helps and good luck~ - Thanks and you help me a lot.

Electoz wrote:

Hi


[JUSEN'S PLATTER]

1. 00:04:850 (2,3) - No need to hdash here I think since you didn't do the same in other places with a similar rhythm like 00:03:250 (3,4) - 00:06:450 (2,3) . Ok , it is obvious that they are the same sound, but unlike the hdash where I listened harder, ie protruding from the others.
2. 00:14:450 (6,1) - Would be nice if you can either making it an hdash or increase spacing here to emphasize 00:14:650 (1) because it's kinda prominent and it's catchable without having too dash at all. I prefer to keep my current pattern , it could increase a little distance, but to be honest I like as currently.

Hope this helps and good luck~ Thanks for the mod, but not changes for me.

Nelly wrote:

From PM mod request


♦ JUSEN'S PLATTER

00:02:250 - Where's the note!? I forget, beacause can't hear lol

Good luck

Thanks for the mod

Nelly wrote:

From PM mod request

♦ General

Nothing very special. One thing is that Color 3 i'd make something like this. It's my opinion. - I think the combo colors is fine.

♦ CUP

. . . but nobody came . . .

♦ SALAD

01:29:050 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's pretty far away from this 5th fruit. I tested out and i'd like to see something like this. - Nice, reduce the distance.

Good luck

Jusenkyo wrote:

Nelly wrote:

From PM mod request


♦ JUSEN'S PLATTER

00:02:250 - Where's the note!? I forget, beacause can't hear lol

Good luck

SYAHME please you can put the note at x:226/y: 193, beacuse are minor changes , thanks.

Thanks for the mod

MMBan wrote:

Things from me what i have noticed

Cup
No issues... but
Hmm 01:45:050 - 01:52:250 - Check hitsounds there. Uses mine stock one from skin - I don't understand.
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Salad
Only suggestions

01:29:850 (5) - Not sure if this one should be catch only with dash or not. But w/e - You have to catch with dash.
01:50:650 (3) - Delicate reduce distance. I mean this might be a bit problematic to catch without dashing - You have to catch with dash.

I guess you took a hitsound thing fixed there from Cup. - I don't understand.

PS: Testplay mah marathon map that gonna be 71min long.. well it two diffs that already i make or repay with modding mah other map ;s - I will see what can I do, then I will tell you.

Jusenkyo wrote:

Mod Reply

MMBan wrote:

_______________________________________________

Not SYAHME Platter
00:53:050 - Suggesting to make Hdash to this slider from 4th circle on 00:52:850 -
Pixel jump on 00:59:350 - to next slider. Reduce distance.. no if make hdash

Overall rest seem ok.. All fixed, thanks for the mod.
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Update with changes

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