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Bara-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dinsdag 12 juli 2016 at 16:00:47

Artist: Reol
Title: Syrup
Tags: 極彩色 ごくさいしき Gokusaishiki UTAU Utaite monaca:factory
BPM: 52
Filesize: 8015kb
Play Time: 03:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,77 stars, 73 notes)
  2. Eternal Honesty (1,15 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Reol - Syrup
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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pp mapping 4tw
Syph
oh boy
Topic Starter
Bara-
syph mod plz
Okoratu
can u use a red that doesn't blend so much with the reds in the bg thanks
Topic Starter
Bara-
Uhh
Bg used to be Blue/White but it caused the lyrics to be offscreen (as it would all overlap)
I'll change the colors to blue then!
HabiHolic
PM Request

[Easy]

01:14:432 (3,4) - Nazi balnket?
01:30:586 (2) - like this?

01:32:894 (3) - if your 01:30:586 (2) -this fiexed please move blanket.
01:37:797 ~ 01:42:124 - so very awkward break.. better for 01:37:797 - this start add spiner.01:42:124 - spiner end here.

[Eternal Honesty]

00:30:586 (2,4) - so bad blanket.
00:36:932 - this need vocal emphasis. add note here?
02:25:971 (3,4) - petten is so bad imo.. fixed here?

02:55:394 - note.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Bara-

HabiHolic wrote:

PM Request

[Easy]

01:14:432 (3,4) - Nazi balnket?
01:30:586 (2) - like this? I prefer the horizontal flip

01:32:894 (3) - if your 01:30:586 (2) -this fiexed please move blanket.
01:37:797 ~ 01:42:124 - so very awkward break.. better for 01:37:797 - this start add spiner.01:42:124 - spiner end here. I like this effect, not sure why tho xD

[Eternal Honesty]

00:30:586 (2,4) - so bad blanket.
00:36:932 - this need vocal emphasis. add note here?
02:25:971 (3,4) - petten is so bad imo.. fixed here?

02:55:394 - note. There is only a really faint sound, which is ignored in the other parts as well. No need for a circle (besides, there are no vocals here)

Good Luck!
Thanks! :)
Spayyce
IRC mod as requested ^^

Call a BN this looks pretty good already! :o

IRC
19:47 -Space-: We'll start from now then
19:47 -Space-: Remember these suggestions will be pretty nazi tbh
19:48 Bara-: I think that's even better than actual suggestions
19:48 -Space-: 01:14:432 (3,4) -
19:48 Bara-: As I most likely will fix those
19:48 *Bara- runs
19:48 -Space-: This could be made into a double blanket by making the larger slider less curved
19:49 -Space-: 02:09:817 (1) -
19:49 -Space-: Unrankable
19:49 -Space-: It falls off the screen in play
19:50 Bara-: 1:14, it will break DS and the next few patterns if I change it ;w;
19:51 Bara-: fixed
19:51 -Space-: I only had to move 3 things for the first suggestion
19:52 -Space-: middle anchor for the slider is x:168 y:164
19:52 -Space-: last one is x:184 and y:24
19:52 Bara-: Well, the sliders which are afterwards are also blankets
19:52 -Space-: But they're too far apart to be seen in play
19:52 Bara-: You change (3,4) for blanket
19:52 Bara-: Then (1) for DS
19:52 Bara-: Then the blanket with (3) is off
19:53 -Space-: oh the previous blankets
19:53 -Space-: I see.
19:53 Bara-: hmm, you're right
19:53 -Space-: Well I could change that
19:53 Bara-: the ones after (3,4,1) are indeed unnoticable
19:53 -Space-: move reverse slider 2 to x:320 and y:112 if you need to blanket the end of the slider too
19:54 -Space-: 02:09:817 (1) - This does need moving up, on my screen it's cut off
19:56 -Space-: 03:23:663 (3,1) -
19:56 -Space-: Both are the same sound on the downbeat, maybe keep the same slider type for added consistency?
19:57 -Space-: Yeah that's about it, it's a really solid map and it should be checked for a bubble quite soon ^^
19:57 -Space-: Whenever you're ready we can move onto the next diff
19:57 Bara-: There is a "drumroll" right before (1) which has more emphasis, so a different slidertype is fine ^_^
19:57 Bara-: I'm ready, I think I fixed the first suggestion properly enough :P
19:58 Bara-: oh wait
19:58 Bara-: I just found some DS issues in that first suggestion
19:58 -Space-: What about the slider off the screen?
19:58 Bara-: Gimme a few minutes
19:58 Bara-: I fixed that
19:59 -Space-: Alright
20:00 Bara-: Jup, I fixed it
20:01 -Space-: Ready to move on? :P
20:01 Bara-: jup
20:01 -Space-: 00:27:124 (4) - More for an aesthetic reason but this cuts onto the health bar for me a fraction.
20:02 -Space-: 00:32:893 (4) - Perhaps an NC? for the downbeat
20:03 Bara-: Combos will be soo short
20:03 Bara-: 00:23:663 (3) - And keeping consistnet with this
20:03 -Space-: 00:40:971 (3,1) - what about this tho?
20:03 -Space-: It's inconsistent with that imo
20:03 Bara-: There starts to be a drum at 00:37:509 (1) - so as of here, the NC happen ever downbeat, instead of every 2nd
20:04 -Space-: I guess if you want to keep it :3 but the length of the combo is long
20:05 Bara-: True, but it actually has a reason :P
20:06 -Space-: 01:46:019 (1) - Nazi suggestion but
20:06 -Space-: x: 444 and 4:216 for the middle anchor
20:06 -Space-: 01:46:740 (1) -
20:06 -Space-: That timing point oops
20:06 -Space-: wait what
20:06 -Space-: my editor just bugged out 1 sec
20:07 -Space-: nvm my editor was messed up mb
20:07 -Space-: The note was at a random place
20:08 -Space-: 02:08:663 (4) - Vocals land on the blue tick ehre
20:08 -Space-: and the drum too
20:09 -Space-: given the slow pace I think 1/4 would be appropriate
20:09 -Space-: Since it's pretty much 104bpm 1/2
20:10 Bara-: no 1/4 is used in the map at all, so I don't erally want to change it :c
20:10 -Space-: but it's wrong q.q
20:11 -Space-: Listen at 25% it lands on nothing
20:12 -Space-: 00:27:124 (4) - and listening again this one sounds better on 1/4 too
20:12 -Space-: So it would make consistency
20:12 Bara-: oh yeah
20:12 Bara-: You're right
20:12 -Space-: Yeah that's it for the map
Izzywing
hi, just a random mod

so this mapset is almost perfect as is which is why this mod is not only gonna be short, but also mostly very picky stuff that's all pretty much optional

[ez]

01:30:442 (2,3) - This blanket can be better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497713 <---Current | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497707 <--desired (the difference is very small, but it's worth the fix i think)

i was doing some geometry, ignore the head and tail in the picture, its the shape that matters

02:08:663 (4,1) - I suggest a ctrl+h on the shape of 1 so that the flow leading into it is more natural

02:21:356 (2,3) - another extremely picky blanket fix. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497726 <---Current | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497730<--Desired

[Eternal Honesty]

00:22:076 (2,3) - looks like this blanket needs some work because the space is tinner on the right then on the left

00:32:317 (3) - you can perfect the spacing of this note by moving it to x:341 y:161

00:45:586 (4,1) - picky blanket fix - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497764 <-- Current | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497768 <-- Desired

01:40:971 - can you fit a note here? I know that spinner recovery should be more than plenty in an easy, esp a map this easy, but the bpm is really really small and it feels like enough recovery time. of course, you'd know more about this than i do

thats all I could find. hitsounds were fine from what I could tell.

I know this mod was full of really picky stuff, but the map itself's pretty straightforward. Good luck! get this ranked so i can make my new top pp play

dropped a star too, not that you needed it lol
Gero
Hello sweet, M4M here.

General

  1. There are some unused files into your folder, for example:

    -Lyrics\24.png
    -Lyrics\44.png
    -Lyrics\52.png
  2. You should remove them, otherwise check them if that's intentional or probably there's a issue in the lyrics, so I'd like to suggest you to check them with a Japanese BN/QAT to prove if everything's fine and safe or not.
  3. How about to add monaca:factory in your tags, since this one is who made the music/lyrics and the arranged. (Proof of it.)
Easy

  1. 03:37:858 (1) - This spinner seems like that is unsnapped, it wouldn't be that difficult to snap it properly, so just move it a little bit and you'll get it fixed or resnap all notes.
  2. 00:56:319 - Due that this difficulty is Easy I'd like to suggest you to implement a manual break here. (I mean even if the BPM and the SV is slow, we can consider it and take it in mind anyways, also don't worry about the other difficulty, it's fine as is.)
  3. 02:37:857 - Same as above.
  4. 02:05:262 (3) - This note is touching a lot the HP bar, so it could be a problem for players that will trying to click it, so the best option I can suggest is move it a few grids down or change the place of this slider.
Eternal Honesty

  1. Same thing about unsnapped objets, in this case we have three that should be snapped properly:

    -01:37:858 - Spinner start.
    -03:19:396 - Spinner start.
    -03:37:858 - Spinner start.
  2. 00:54:877 (3) - Don't you think that could be a bit weird to have in the lowest difficulty more density in some parts than this one? I mean in your Easy this beat and the previous one was perfectly clickable while here you just decided to use a slider repeat instead two notes or a slider with a circle after that, so could you consider to do this instead?
  3. 02:36:415 (3) - It also happens here.
  4. 01:12:184 (3) - Same as above, but in this case you could do the same thing as you did it on your Easy, 1/2 with a repeat.
  5. 01:30:646 (3) - ^ 02:53:723 (3) - ^ 03:12:184 (3) - ^ This goes for these parts of the difficulty too.
  6. 01:42:184 (1) - Nazi* I'm pretty sure that this slider could be improved a lot, I mean instead square shapes you could easily do soft waves like this for example, hoestly this fits more with the vocal.
  7. 01:51:415 (1) - This is also touching the HP bar, but in my opinion is not a big deal, so you can keep it as is if you want to, personally I'd suggest to move it down to make the whole difficulty more clean, but as I said up to you.
  8. 02:19:107 (1,2,3,1) - .
  9. 03:19:396 (1) - This spinner fits well with the music and I see no problem with keeping it, but it seems strange that in Easy were mapped some beats while in this one you've decided to go with a simple spinner without any kind of clicks here, so it brings a extraordinary inconsistency at both difficulties, so honestly I'd recommend deleting this spinner and map from 03:19:107 - until 03:22:569 - here, check both difficulties and you'll notice what I mean.
Sadly that you didn't mapped the last difficulty with more complex rhythms, which it would be really great to play, since some beats in 1/4 were ignored almost completely, but overall you did it a great job at this, call me back.
Topic Starter
Bara-

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi, just a random mod

so this mapset is almost perfect as is which is why this mod is not only gonna be short, but also mostly very picky stuff that's all pretty much optional

[ez]

01:30:442 (2,3) - This blanket can be better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497713 <---Current | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497707 <--desired (the difference is very small, but it's worth the fix i think)

i was doing some geometry, ignore the head and tail in the picture, its the shape that matters

02:08:663 (4,1) - I suggest a ctrl+h on the shape of 1 so that the flow leading into it is more natural

02:21:356 (2,3) - another extremely picky blanket fix. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497726 <---Current | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497730<--Desired

[Eternal Honesty]

00:22:076 (2,3) - looks like this blanket needs some work because the space is tinner on the right then on the left

00:32:317 (3) - you can perfect the spacing of this note by moving it to x:341 y:161

00:45:586 (4,1) - picky blanket fix - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497764 <-- Current | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5497768 <-- Desired

01:40:971 - can you fit a note here? I know that spinner recovery should be more than plenty in an easy, esp a map this easy, but the bpm is really really small and it feels like enough recovery time. of course, you'd know more about this than i do Well, 4 beats is preffered. Due to low BPM, I set it to 2. 1 beat is too little

thats all I could find. hitsounds were fine from what I could tell.

I know this mod was full of really picky stuff, but the map itself's pretty straightforward. Good luck! get this ranked so i can make my new top pp play

dropped a star too, not that you needed it lol
Thanks!
Fixed all but the last one. I also lowered the vitrate to 192 (since apparently it was higher)
Will update once the mp3 finished converting (and maybe after I change the offset)

Gero wrote:

Hello sweet, M4M here.

General

  1. There are some unused files into your folder, for example:

    -Lyrics\24.png
    -Lyrics\44.png
    -Lyrics\52.png
  2. You should remove them, otherwise check them if that's intentional or probably there's a issue in the lyrics, so I'd like to suggest you to check them with a Japanese BN/QAT to prove if everything's fine and safe or not.
  3. How about to add monaca:factory in your tags, since this one is who made the music/lyrics and the arranged. (Proof of it.)
Easy

  1. 03:37:858 (1) - This spinner seems like that is unsnapped, it wouldn't be that difficult to snap it properly, so just move it a little bit and you'll get it fixed or resnap all notes. 1 ms...
  2. 00:56:319 - Due that this difficulty is Easy I'd like to suggest you to implement a manual break here. (I mean even if the BPM and the SV is slow, we can consider it and take it in mind anyways, also don't worry about the other difficulty, it's fine as is.)
  3. 02:37:857 - Same as above.
  4. 02:05:262 (3) - This note is touching a lot the HP bar, so it could be a problem for players that will trying to click it, so the best option I can suggest is move it a few grids down or change the place of this slider.
Eternal Honesty

  1. Same thing about unsnapped objets, in this case we have three that should be snapped properly:

    -01:37:858 - Spinner start.
    -03:19:396 - Spinner start.
    -03:37:858 - Spinner start.
  2. 00:54:877 (3) - Don't you think that could be a bit weird to have in the lowest difficulty more density in some parts than this one? I mean in your Easy this beat and the previous one was perfectly clickable while here you just decided to use a slider repeat instead two notes or a slider with a circle after that, so could you consider to do this instead?
  3. 02:36:415 (3) - It also happens here.
  4. 01:12:184 (3) - Same as above, but in this case you could do the same thing as you did it on your Easy, 1/2 with a repeat.
  5. 01:30:646 (3) - ^ 02:53:723 (3) - ^ 03:12:184 (3) - ^ This goes for these parts of the difficulty too.
  6. 01:42:184 (1) - Nazi* I'm pretty sure that this slider could be improved a lot, I mean instead square shapes you could easily do soft waves like this for example, hoestly this fits more with the vocal.
  7. 01:51:415 (1) - This is also touching the HP bar, but in my opinion is not a big deal, so you can keep it as is if you want to, personally I'd suggest to move it down to make the whole difficulty more clean, but as I said up to you.
  8. 02:19:107 (1,2,3,1) - .
  9. 03:19:396 (1) - This spinner fits well with the music and I see no problem with keeping it, but it seems strange that in Easy were mapped some beats while in this one you've decided to go with a simple spinner without any kind of clicks here, so it brings a extraordinary inconsistency at both difficulties, so honestly I'd recommend deleting this spinner and map from 03:19:107 - until 03:22:569 - here, check both difficulties and you'll notice what I mean. I prefer keeping it, as it's consistent with 01:37:858 (1) - (which is a break in Easy)
Sadly that you didn't mapped the last difficulty with more complex rhythms, which it would be really great to play, since some beats in 1/4 were ignored almost completely, but overall you did it a great job at this, call me back.
Thanks!
Gero
Even if it's just "1 ms" this is still unsnapped, so would be nice if you resnap them properly, just to avoid any kind of problems after the nomination, also there are some parts where lyrics are missing, for example here 01:23:723 - and 01:26:031 - here, I'd suggest you to recheck them all to make sure that everything's okay for you, this might help you in case that you're not sure about it, here you have.

Proof of it. (Confirmed with Satellite.)

Log with Satellite
12:54 Gero: hello Satellite
12:55 Satellite: hello ~
12:55 Gero: sorry for bothering you a bit now, but since you're from japan could you help me to confirm some lyrics?
12:56 Gero: I need to confirm that before a nomination in this set
12:56 *Gero is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/998643 Reol - Syrup [Eternal Honesty]]
12:58 Satellite: https://mojim.com/jpy148856x1x9.htm
12:58 Satellite: http://puu.sh/pUOT8/5bd6d6de90.png
12:58 Gero: oh thanks but I don't really know how to read them xD
12:59 Satellite: 01:23:723 - missing sb lyrics /
12:59 Satellite: ~ 01:26:031 -
13:00 Gero: alright, will tell Bara- about it
13:01 Satellite: other fine to me
13:01 Satellite: :p
13:02 Gero: yeah, thanks for confirmation

Lyrics
れをる 

Syrup

作詞:monaca factory
作曲:monaca factory

言葉をさがして旅に出ました
いま君の街はどんな色をしてるの
薄紅の花が小さく咲いてました
シラップの海へ虹色に光る星が「流れた。」

この小さな願いの半分を夜に隠して
らんら、るるるらら
クジラの夢にわたしは飲み込まれるの

素直になれない日はこっそりと逃げてもいいよ
らんら、るるるらら
翅を揺らして泳ぐ 夜の隙間へと
もっと沢山の歌詞は

言葉はそうしてスープになりました
長い旅の果て。ひとくち召し上がれ
水玉模様の釦を外すように心をほどいて
澄んだ後味になるまで mm…

本当の気持ちの半分を声に溶かして
らんら、るるるらら
君の隣でわたしは大人になるの

ひとりで翔べない日は翅を休めてもいいよ
らんら、るるるらら
街の香りと混ざる 夜が明けるから

Apart of that, it's almost ready for me.

EDIT:

~ Bubbled ~
Xinely
we did an irc mod

SPOILER
20:14 Xinely: irc now?
20:14 Bara-: If possible ^_^
20:16 Xinely: okay wait
20:18 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/998642 Reol - Syrup [Easy]]
20:19 Xinely: http://puu.sh/pZ2Rh/891de45a79.png
20:20 Bara-: WAIT... Gero meant that one instead of 22...
20:20 Bara-: I therefore deleted 22
20:20 Bara-: Gimme a sec
20:20 Xinely: eeeee
20:21 Bara-: Oh
20:21 Bara-: He did type 24
20:21 Xinely: 24 is rararurururara
20:21 Bara-: I read 22 at first >_<
20:21 Xinely: when you use it with 16
20:21 Xinely: lol
20:21 Bara-: yup
20:22 Xinely: gero is baka
20:22 Bara-: I did delete 44/52
20:22 Bara-: But forgot this one
20:22 Bara-: No, I'm baka
20:22 Bara-: And I'm Bara
20:22 Xinely: change name to Baka-
20:23 Xinely: and about combo colours, i think blue and dark blue dont match with BG so try http://puu.sh/pZ2VA/81c212a7f4.png instead?
20:23 Bara-: oh god
20:23 Bara-: plz no
20:24 Bara-: Well, Gokusaishiki's art (the album cover) is completely blue/white, so I decided to have it at blue
20:25 Bara-: [https://img.discogs.com/5r3oI09GDzC74O_Y-SFEQSK3WJM=/fit-in/300x300/filters:strip_icc():format(jpeg):mode_rgb():quality(40)/discogs-images/R-7349019-1439495822-6922.jpeg.jpg *Click*
20:25 Bara-: [https://img.discogs.com/5r3oI09GDzC74O_Y-SFEQSK3WJM=/fit-in/300x300/filters:strip_icc():format(jpeg):mode_rgb():quality(40)/discogs-images/R-7349019-1439495822-6922.jpeg.jpg *Click*]
20:25 Bara-: Wow...
20:25 Xinely: oh tho you dont use it as G
20:25 Xinely: BG
20:26 Xinely: but it isnt big issue so ok
20:26 Bara-: It used to be
20:26 Bara-: But I had troubles putting the lyrics in it, so I changed bg, but kept colors
20:26 Bara-: And besides, now people can't complaing about it blending in
20:26 *Bara- runs
20:26 Xinely: ok ww
20:27 Xinely: that's why i wrote not big issue
20:27 Xinely: ok lets go to the diff
20:27 Bara-: yup
20:29 Xinely: 01:14:492 (3) - how about add whistle on tail to emphasis the vocal? its so high
20:32 Bara-: But I don't use any whistle at all in the kiai... It's a bit weird to only have it for one slider
20:33 Xinely: as long as it fits, it will work nicely imo lol
20:34 Bara-: Not sure if I should add it tho :(
20:34 Xinely: its fine, i just suggest afterall, it depends to you
20:35 Bara-: Then I prefer consistency over "it fits once"
20:36 Xinely: 02:46:800 (3) - 152,368 for better blanket?
20:38 Bara-: 154:368 works better, if you ctrl G (2) and move (3) back a bit
20:38 Bara-: But I fixed the blanket
20:40 Xinely: ok go to other diff
20:40 Xinely: imo OD can be 3 as well, just for consistency with previous diff
20:41 Xinely: and OD 2 is too low imo
20:41 Bara-: yeah sure
20:42 Bara-: Everything (except CS) goes up by 2, so OD should have it too!
20:46 Xinely: 00:56:031 (1) - hmm try 140,64? to keep the curve of flow (i mean circular flow) from 00:51:415 (1,2,3) -
20:49 Xinely: 01:09:300 (4) - same like reason in above, 372,224
20:49 Xinely: 01:13:915 (4) - 1,12x inconsistency spacing
20:49 Bara-: I've put it at 134:68, 140:64 seems to be out of the curve
20:49 Xinely: kk
20:50 Bara-: Fixed em all
20:50 Bara-: updating
20:51 Bara-: updated
20:52 Xinely: 01:16:800 (3) - waa jump
20:52 Xinely: intentional jump?
20:52 Bara-: Whoops
20:53 Xinely: 01:26:031 (3) - 1,13x spacing
20:54 Bara-: Made it 1.16x, otherwise (2) will overlap the slidertal of (3)
20:55 Xinely: sure
20:56 Xinely: 901:56:319 - add manual break here? like gero suggested for easy diff before
20:56 Bara-: I've also fixed like 2 other slight spacing inconsistencies
20:56 Bara-: yup
20:57 Xinely: 02:36:415 (3) - 1,14x spacing there
20:58 Xinely: try 1 grid upward for avoid it?
20:58 Xinely: 02:37:857 - add manual break?
20:58 Xinely: so if yes then 00:56:319 - here too
20:59 Xinely: 02:53:723 (1) - remove nc for consistency?
21:00 Bara-: I've already fixed that one :P
21:00 Bara-: Hmm, it seems as if the breaks right before the kiai were removed O.o
21:00 Bara-: Good catch, it likely stayed as NC due to copying 02:56:031 (1) - and Ctrl J-ing
21:00 Xinely: ww ok that's all from me, poke me after you update it

2h again to qualify

Qualified ~
Stefan
you definitely need to ask me in future for things like that
Topic Starter
Bara-
Thanks Guys!!!
Chaoslitz
Grats!

(yay more songs from gokusaishiki)
Kyouren
Gratzz :D
Sonnyc
mm A little disappointed that Easy was the highest diff in this mapset while the song kinda gives more... (sad)
_DT3
Gratz Bara!
wajinshu
o congrats!
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