This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 1, 2016 at 5:02:19 PM

Artist: LeaF
Title: Paraclete
Source: BMS
Tags: deathstream kaifin mathew rsi electronic japanese
BPM: 210
Filesize: 7514kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:

1. Blue (6.59 stars, 1081 notes)
2. Hyper (3.66 stars, 392 notes)
3. Normal (1.98 stars, 191 notes)

Download: LeaF - Paraclete
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guest diffs by kaifin and sionkotori soon ...soon

Thank you kroytz for tips & tricks!

mithew beatmap

m4m requested by my buddy mathew

general: some of the claps are weird, mostly in the part mentioned in mod

00:01:714 (2) - ctrl+g feel like this has more emphasis and it feels better to play imo
00:10:285 (3) - nc b/c its a new phrase
00:14:000 (6) - remove
00:40:928 (7) - why is this clap
00:41:785 (6) - ^
claps on blue are weird imo
00:41:428 (3) - just make the head a clap. the tail clapping sounds weird
00:42:570 (5) - ^
00:54:285 (9) - make it more smooth with the stream
01:13:142 (3) - nice try
01:29:714 (9) - ^
01:42:857 (1,2,3) - weird lead to the main stream, maybe make it bend at 01:42:999 (3) - instead of 01:42:928 (2) -
01:47:428 (1,2,3) - ^

idk about flow of streams xd but they seem fine as i played it with relax since relax is the best way to judge maps

i'll also mod easy/normal/insane when you have them ready too

mod to help a friendly brown boy rank this map

reduce bitrate to 192

Also definitely reduce overall volume the map is pretty loud

Lastly it'd be sick if you put some custom hitsounds to better fit with the song ^_^

00:01:142 (1,2,3) - move this whole section down and fix blankets
00:18:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make more fluid so you don't change aim as much http://puu.sh/oW2M2.jpg example
00:19:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - move last note down
00:32:000 (1) - move up slightly to fit blanket
00:32:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - more consistent spacing
00:33:714 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+shift+d
00:35:857 (4,5,6) - ^
00:38:428 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:48:571 (3,4) - make triplet
00:48:857 (1) - fix blanket
01:22:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - flow again
01:38:285 (17) - nc

Harrharrqi wrote:

m4m requested by my buddy mathew

general: some of the claps are weird, mostly in the part mentioned in mod

00:01:714 (2) - ctrl+g feel like this has more emphasis and it feels better to play imo done
00:10:285 (3) - nc b/c its a new phrase ya
00:14:000 (6) - remove i dont want to leave out the echo
00:40:928 (7) - why is this clap fix & fix
00:41:785 (6) - ^
claps on blue are weird imo
00:41:428 (3) - just make the head a clap. the tail clapping sounds weird d
00:42:570 (5) - ^
00:54:285 (9) - make it more smooth with the stream i tRIE D
01:13:142 (3) - nice try thx!!
01:29:714 (9) - ^
01:42:857 (1,2,3) - weird lead to the main stream, maybe make it bend at 01:42:999 (3) - instead of 01:42:928 (2) - fixd
01:47:428 (1,2,3) - ^

idk about flow of streams xd but they seem fine as i played it with relax since relax is the best way to judge maps

i'll also mod easy/normal/insane when you have them ready too

Weed wrote:

mod to help a friendly brown boy rank this map

reduce bitrate to 192

Also definitely reduce overall volume the map is pretty loud it sounds OK

Lastly it'd be sick if you put some custom hitsounds to better fit with the song ^_^ yea i'm gonna try to work on hitsounds and play around with some custom ones

00:01:142 (1,2,3) - move this whole section down and fix blankets i suck with blankets but i tried
00:18:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make more fluid so you don't change aim as much http://puu.sh/oW2M2.jpg example nnah everyone whos played it seems to hit it fine without even trying to snap to the streams (including myself)
00:19:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - move last note down moved slightly
00:32:000 (1) - move up slightly to fit blanket ok
00:32:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - more consistent spacing seems ok to me
00:33:714 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+shift+d wat
00:35:857 (4,5,6) - ^
00:38:428 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:48:571 (3,4) - make triplet ill try it i guess
00:48:857 (1) - fix blanket i tried
01:22:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - flow again a
01:38:285 (17) - nc ya

thanks for mod guy!s

by ctrl+shift+d i meant the spacing of the pattern is slightly off, it's more noticeable on low CS http://puu.sh/oW8f3.jpg left is your pattern right is the new pattern iunno looks cleaner unless im getting optical illusion memed

agnoid i hate you

Earned 1 kudosu.

meatmap!

Hi as requested from my modding queue!
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remap

Mod for normal diff!
00:01:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
good patterns

Mod for Blue

00:31:000 (2,3,4) - suggest making the jumps more squarish, so the slider points upwards and flows more nicely into repeat slider. I think this fits the music better
00:42:285 (1,2,3,4) - I think kicksliders would be more appropriate here
00:44:286 (5,6,7,8) - No stream as this is the same sounds as 00:44:000 (3,4). Starting the stream when the synth goes higher at 00:44:571 (1) makes more sense I think. Replace with something like
00:54:857 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - remap maybe this plays kinda funny
01:08:571 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't hear notes on the red ticks. Could try sliders on white ticks instead
01:40:571 (1) - change flow here instead of 01:40:857 (5) here?
01:41:714 (1,2,3,4) - Tidy this up a bit

02:01:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Increase spacing to fit music

Mostly suggestions feel free to ignore whatever

Seanald wrote:

Mod for Blue

00:31:000 (2,3,4) - suggest making the jumps more squarish, so the slider points upwards and flows more nicely into repeat slider. I think this fits the music better tried it didnt like it

Something like

00:42:285 (1,2,3,4) - I think kicksliders would be more appropriate here sounds like either would work and im too lazy to try kick sliders!
00:44:286 (5,6,7,8) - No stream as this is the same sounds as 00:44:000 (3,4). Starting the stream when the synth goes higher at 00:44:571 (1) makes more sense I think. Replace with something like this plays and looks well and there is 1/4th in the background if you listen closely

uwu

00:54:857 (1,2,1,1,1,1) - remap maybe this plays kinda funny yea idk i need a pattern thats as strong as the one i currently have but at the same time plays well

do this its cool!

01:08:571 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't hear notes on the red ticks. Could try sliders on white ticks instead i'll leave it for now
01:40:571 (1) - change flow here instead of 01:40:857 (5) here? remapped this part entirely

01:41:714 (1,2,3,4) - Tidy this up a bit p

02:01:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Increase spacing to fit music i think its ok

Mostly suggestions feel free to ignore whatever

ty for mod!!1

Guys how u can get this edits with the time pls.

Ijinox wrote:

Guys how u can get this edits with the time pls.

highlight a section copy it and paste it in forums

shit mod

00:10:327 (1,2,3) - Make the three sliders like this

00:42:899 (7,8,9) - move following notes to x:89 y:57, gives it better flow

00:50:613 (1,1,1,1) - remove nc from these circles

00:55:470 (1,1,1,1) ^

ye

em four em ass promised, you know what map to mod

edit: 300th post ayylmao

blue (i like purple more)
00:01:184 (1,2) - blanket pls! xd kd pls, no but seriously i think it's a bit off
00:07:470 (4,5) - I get the idea of the blanket but reducing the spacing this much all of the sudden is ):
00:08:042 (5) - this may have a NC because new sound!
00:11:470 (3) - would be fun to have this a little further away than perfectly stacked on (1), perhaps a little like this
00:18:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - you can actually blanket the second (1) with the 4tap before it! do that!
00:23:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - same here!
00:28:613 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps higher spacing (so more jumpy ofccc) would fit the SV and stream spacing better
00:31:327 (4,5) - these really don't connect well in any way, let (4) face more towards (5)
00:33:756 (1,2) - ew this overlap please make it disappear
00:40:470 (4,5) - these patterns usually only work well when the slider is straight or in very circular flow-- try to make this a different pattern, it feels really awkard with negative flow
00:42:612 (5) - uh make this aim somewhere it now looks odd
00:50:613 (2,3,4) - please make this a repeat slider too because the random transaction is kinda odd
00:53:470 (5,6) - make this a repeat slider too, this is very confusing and thus easy to misread
01:15:470 (1,2,3,4) - you dont have to make these sliders, you can make doubletaps out of em too. would be less confusing as well
01:23:398 (4,1) - i miss a jump between these, would put great emphasis on the situation too
01:41:756 (1,2,3,4) - again higher spacing would be a bit better
01:44:470 (4,5,6) - this is pretty awkward, maybe remove the stack and then create some sort of square or triangle
01:50:327 (9) - aaa this is out of the pattern! fix pls!
02:14:308 (1) - reconsider this slider as it seems not to be on white ticks, perhaps check offset on this part?

for the rest in the streams you could avoid some ugly overlapping

okbye!

HighTec wrote:

em four em ass promised, you know what map to mod

edit: 300th post ayylmao

blue (i like purple more) purple!
00:01:184 (1,2) - blanket pls! xd kd pls, no but seriously i think it's a bit off i trIED
00:07:470 (4,5) - I get the idea of the blanket but reducing the spacing this much all of the sudden is ): ok fixed
00:08:042 (5) - this may have a NC because new sound! i did it
00:11:470 (3) - would be fun to have this a little further away than perfectly stacked on (1), perhaps a little like this fix
00:18:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - you can actually blanket the second (1) with the 4tap before it! do that! i dont want it to play too awkwardly so no ty
00:23:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - same here!
00:28:613 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps higher spacing (so more jumpy ofccc) would fit the SV and stream spacing better ok fixd
00:31:327 (4,5) - these really don't connect well in any way, let (4) face more towards (5) i tried
00:33:756 (1,2) - ew this overlap please make it disappear idunno what ur talking about
00:40:470 (4,5) - these patterns usually only work well when the slider is straight or in very circular flow-- try to make this a different pattern, it feels really awkard with negative flow i really really like this pattern D:
00:42:612 (5) - uh make this aim somewhere it now looks odd idk hard 2 fix (i'll see if i can do something else)
00:50:613 (2,3,4) - please make this a repeat slider too because the random transaction is kinda odd fuKC OK
00:53:470 (5,6) - make this a repeat slider too, this is very confusing and thus easy to misread kkkk
01:15:470 (1,2,3,4) - you dont have to make these sliders, you can make doubletaps out of em too. would be less confusing as well i think its fine
01:23:398 (4,1) - i miss a jump between these, would put great emphasis on the situation too took a bit but i got it!
01:41:756 (1,2,3,4) - again higher spacing would be a bit better done!
01:44:470 (4,5,6) - this is pretty awkward, maybe remove the stack and then create some sort of square or triangle kind of fixed
01:50:327 (9) - aaa this is out of the pattern! fix pls! idk what u mean!!
02:14:308 (1) - reconsider this slider as it seems not to be on white ticks, perhaps check offset on this part? yea not sure if i should just ignore it or find timing for it

for the rest in the streams you could avoid some ugly overlapping

okbye!

thanks for mod i'll get to yours later today

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