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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月6日 at 20:09:45

Artist: Zhao Wei
Title: Qing Shen Shen Yu Meng Meng
Source: 情深深雨濛濛
Tags: Vicki 煙雨濛濛 Yan Yu Meng Meng Pata-Mon
BPM: 68
Filesize: 30031kb
Play Time: 02:53
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#22 趙薇 - 情深深雨濛濛
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情深深雨濛濛
Drama OP Theme | 2001


不離不棄。

Image煙雨濛濛: Me | ImageNormal: Pata-Mon
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Qing not Qin
赵薇's English name is Vicki Zhao, but pinyin alright.
add 琼瑶 and qiong yao into tags
place hold on. call me when you need mod
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爷爷快飞这图
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爺爺們評論前看一眼別搶2kd位啊
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膜拜琼学家虾抖

General
00:46:759 - 在此之前我建议用默认的SC组hitnormal


Romance in the Rain
00:14:994 (1) - 在00:16:759 结束并拆分00:17:347 为circle去stack00:17:641 (2)
00:36:171 (1) - 太直了 弧度稍微再大一点点
00:43:229 (1) - ↑
00:44:994 (1) - 尾部给一个向下弯折的弧度去引导flow http://puu.sh/pPNCL/09b41d37f1.jpg
00:59:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - 作为insane没必要这么死板 当短滑条跳摆开
01:43:229 (1,2) - 何不连跳
01:47:934 (5,2,3) - 强迫症
02:39:698 (1,2,3,4,1) - 自编节奏最好别 虽然打起来没什么违和感
02:43:228 (1) - spin应该从02:43:375 开始


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02:39:698 (1,2) - 同虾抖
别的也就有些blanket不太完美
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Add Pata-Mon into Tag for being a guest mapper please.

Pata-Mon's Normal
  • Structrual Issue
    00:00:877 - I do think that the hitsound music is not so fit into the general music to be honest. Especially for the first part it is so obvious and grinding over the original music. Volume down is a way to solve that, but I'd still rather using original soft-hitnormal.
  • Minor Picks
    02:24:699 - Consider making the volume lower to create the feeling of blank background music.

Romance in the Rain
  • Structrual Issue
    00:00:877 - Generally the base of the hitsound is not so fit into this music, I personally would rather to use the original soft-hitnormal. But either way needs to lower the current volume for the first part since it is really obvious and has become the main sound provider than the original background music. (You can ctrl+A and apply sampleset soft onto the set and see the effect for the base)
    00:13:229 - Talking about the difficulty spike, it is going to bother the users with the aimed level since long streams with kick sliders are definitely for Insane diffs rather than Hard. Personally I will convert the stream into a slider.
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    00:32:200 - This spinner ends on a place with no obvious sound, personally I'd take it to 00:32:347
    01:19:406 (1,2,3) - The distance from the previous slider is a bit big for the pattern, and reading this can be hard here because you are expecting players move in the opposite direction of where sliders extend, which will be hard for this level.
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    The notes following this pattern may need to move accordingly.
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    I kept your original pattern and just moved the whole pattern until 1 is stacked by slider head of 01:19:406 .
    01:59:110 (1) - Unsnapped object's end.
    02:04:699 (2) - You can move it a bit upward to have a better and balanced shaped pattern. Like this:
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    02:05:582 (1,2,3) - I do think this is a hard pattern here from the jump of the previous slider. Personally I'll make them a reverse slider to cover the drums and keep the difficulty balanced and consistent.
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  • Minor Picks
    00:59:112 - I don't really suggest making this patterns. I know this is a good way to express it, but it is not so fit on the latter sliders in the pattern, especially the slider end will land on nothing. Try to do this and see if it fits better?
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Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!
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这图我居然有,应该是多久之前btt过?

雨中的罗曼司


  • 干嘛用cs3啊。。好像当年你用的并不是cs3?用4吧,不然巴达兽的N cs比你还低了。。。
  • 00:29:259 (1) - 把这个转盘尾消音吧。这里本来没音,钻出个音效听着不舒服
  • 01:43:229 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - 静流的思路我觉得挺有意思。可以这样:前6个单点弄小间距,后面几个间距逐渐加大,第二个“雨”字的圈和下面的三连间距最大。这样开DT后爽一些
  • 02:28:522 (1,2) - 要不换成滑条?后面都是滑条,就这俩单点。。打的时候还有点期待后面还会再有点单点的。。。
  • 以我的角度没啥好说的了,要不先改掉皇叔和静流的摸吧


巴达兽的N:感觉没啥好说的

以上。相比前面几位老前辈的摸显得比较短,看看就好
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@虾抖 我觉得静流那转盘那里说得对,但可能需要加红线会更好些,直接02:43:375 - 其实也不怎么准
timing和转盘起点之类的到时如果改的话帮我难度改下

@黄书 音效复制的虾抖的 所以看他主难度动不动吧
反正找bn之前再复制一次

顺便修了点blanket

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Code:
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60582
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Qing Shen Shen Yu Meng Meng
TitleUnicode:情深深雨濛濛
Artist:Zhao Wei
ArtistUnicode:趙薇
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Pata-Mon's Normal
Source:情深深雨濛濛
Tags:煙雨濛濛 Yan Yu Meng Meng
BeatmapID:1002765
BeatmapSetID:455690

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,0,"optc.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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ImageRomance in the Rain
  • 00:13:965 (6,1) – between this two objects there’s an actual 1/12 sound being ignored. I feel like mapping something like this would be really of this difficulty range, but at the same time, if your intentions with this map is being really attached to the song, making a reverse here 00:13:965 (6,1) - would really fit the song well.
  • I believe that if you actually place this slider 00:40:582 (2) – right in the middle of this next slider 00:41:465 (1) – the pattern would look even better.
  • This breaks the rhythm in a strong way 01:04:406 (1,2,3) -. I’d agree with it if the denser sounds were actually strong but the sounds are really weak cymbals. In this case here 01:02:641 (1,2,3) – you have the vocals who support the pattern, but in the next one they’re not present.
  • This overlap looks odd 01:55:287 (5,3) – compared to how well you made the previous jump patterns that are following this vocal line 01:00:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - / 01:09:406 (5,1,2,3) - /01:20:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
  • The heart design tho 02:41:463 (1) - . It’s not bad, but doesn’t look too good either, you can improve this shape c’mon.


This soap opera look as dramatic as brazillian ones lmao. Good luck with this set :)
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atrue the stream is fine.
Net0 no fix on the shape they are fine to me. not 1/12 that is a over kill. those triplet all have rhythm support so no change.
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This soap opera look as dramatic as brazillian ones lmao. Good luck with this set :)


no change but thx
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Placeholder. 我今晚先要看片,什么时候摸图随缘了>w<
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General
  • 有metadata reference吗?为何赵薇是繁体?虽然视频里的是繁体的但是你拿到的可能是台版的?到底是台版先播还是大陆版先播啊?
  • 如果,你在用红线改重音位置的话(的确副歌部分的重音不统一),那01:13:229 - (一曲高歌千行泪)和(盼来盼去盼不尽)为何不加红线?尤其是后面的01:59:111 - 02:18:522 -


Romance in the Rain
  • 00:09:406 (4,1) - 讲道理你这个既不是antiflow也不是jump,没有强调不好。建议把这个改成这样,虽然后面有很多overlap要跟着改
  • 00:13:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm, overmap姑且不说,毕竟还是算比较有理有据的。但是这个连打距离最好缩小。因为这里是个intro,节奏递增,放个这么大的距离在这里,比后面的滑条跳还难多了。可后面的滑条跳才是这一段的重音啊。
  • 01:02:347 (6,1) - 这个stack搞得我有点懵。后面那个“世”距离强调起来会比较好玩吧,毕竟是新一句的开头。01:02:347 (6) - 把这个6放到01:01:759 (4) - 下面不好吗?4可以稍微往上挪一点。
  • 01:12:641 (3,1) - 这个有点平淡了。本来01:12:641 (3) - 可以拆成2个点的(你前面跟vocal嘛,一个字一个note)。然后后面的距离也很平淡。尽量能拉大点比较好
  • 01:13:229 (1,2,3,4) - 距离不要递增。维稳或者递减更对得上音乐。
  • 01:19:700 (3) - ctrl+G?
  • 01:23:524 (6) - 同之前的,把它放到01:22:494 (2,3) - 上面做个三角跳
  • 01:30:583 (5) - 往上放,可以放到391,79。我觉得这个vocal音高很适合做强调。你看01:29:700 (3,4,5) - 音高递增距离递增嘛
  • 01:37:936 (1) - 真·不好看,这里的一波三折没对上什么颤音,而且前面的弧度实在是做的太随便了
  • 01:57:052 (5) - 稍微再往左放一点
  • 02:15:875 (4,5) - 同样可以放大距离
  • 02:19:699 (3) - 一是和02:18:522 (1) - 擦到了不好看,二是02:19:699 (3,4) - 我感觉这两个的Y轴距离可以拉大。因为这里是一个明显的vocal tone down,有一个明显往下的flow感觉会不错


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  • 圈最好大一点。Normal和Hard CS一样会被挑。你这图基本上所有梗在CS3下都work。所以CS3~3.2吧。HP也可以-0.5。毕竟节奏其实并不友好,只是没过2*而已。
  • 02:03:523 (2,2) - 迷之unstack...stack不好吗?
  • 好像没啥

call me back after having the timing issue solved. (downbeat at least)
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