Mod 4 ModMy BeatmapColumn: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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Hello Baim!
Mod 4 Mod as requested in your Queue to you!
General
Artist: Right!
Title: Wrong. Title should be: "恋色に咲け" Romanised: Koiiro ni Sake // You have only the Romanised Title added, please add both.
Source: Right
Tags: Add "opening" into Tags
AiMod: Please check AiMod. Conflict with the Normal difficulty.
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Looks good
mp3/Hitsounds: You have two mp3 in your Folder. Please delete the "audio.mp3" file since you doesn't use it! // i just saw audio.mp3 is a different song?!
Other: Not Hitsounded yet, please make sure you add some
Normal
00:01:297 (1297|0,1297|3,1621|1,1945|1,2269|1) - I like how you jack these pattern, but i think you could make it even better when you make two "2 Noted jacks". I mean jack these: 00:01:297 (1297|0,1621|1) - and these: 00:01:945 (1945|1,2269|1) - . Even when you do not follow the Vocal, with this you can emphasize both! The drums AND the vocals!
My suggestion is pretty simple. Just move 00:01:297 (1297|3) - to 3
00:02:594 - Also a suggestion for these Pattern:
The thought behind this is. You notes are the end of the LN are on the same hand like the LN. For new player really really hard to hit (i saw that often enough). This makes it way more comfortable to play for a Normal difficulty, and also maybe you see, the last chord. I changed it to [12] what is a really good emphasize of the snare drum and the following chord which is also a [12] one!
00:05:351 (5351|3,5513|2,5675|1,5837|0) - Should you accept my suggestion above, please consider to change these also to different hands.
00:06:486 (6486|3,6810|1,7134|2,7459|1,7783|0,8107|3,8432|2,8756|1) - suggestion for these Pattern. Make it 4-2-4-2 and 1-3-1-3!
It plays really good and brings a bit more "structure" into it! 00:06:486 (6486|3,6810|1,7134|2,7459|1) - These 4-2-4-2 and 00:07:783 (7783|0,8107|3,8432|2,8756|1) - these 1-3-1-3
00:36:648 (36648|0) - shouldn't this be a chord? I can hear here a snare drum and you mapped the snare with chords here. A simple [12] chord would be good and flow great with the previous [34] one.
00:42:810 - Good idea with these Chords but i think you misapplied it. The chords changing on the wrong beat the Hands, what could be kinda confusing in a 4/4 Beat.
My suggestion here is following:
00:43:134 (43134|1,43134|0,43459|1,43459|0,43783|0,43783|1) - Move these to 34
00:44:432 (44432|3,44432|2,44756|2,44756|3,45080|3,45080|2) - And move these to 12.
Then the change is always an a Main Beat what gives a much better feeling.
01:14:269 (74269|3,74269|2) - Move these to [12]? Could be nice to have twice [12] and twice [23]
That's all for Normal. Really solid diff!
Hard
00:02:594 - Mhmm.. the triples here are really hard to hit. I know we are now in a hard and the pattern should be a little bit challenging.. but to start with such "hard" pattern at the beginning is not a good idea, that can frustrate most player who are able to play this on A/S.
My suggestion is to make these here 00:02:756 (2756|2,2837|1,2918|0,3405|1,3486|0,3567|1) - both to a 1-3-1 Trill.
Then you would have 1-3-1/3-2-3/1-3-1/3-2-3. Makes this all much better to hit. also, such trills emphasize the drumroll much better.
00:05:188 - Should you accept my suggestion above consider to change these too. For variety i would suggest now short roll's (stairs)
When you move 00:05:188 (5188|2) - to 2, you can good start by making 00:05:351 (5351|1,5432|0,5513|1) - these to a 3-2-1 roll
Then move 00:05:675 (5675|2) - to 1 for a 1-2-3 roll.
00:05:999 (5999|0,6080|1,6161|2) - CTRL + G these for a 3-2-1 roll again.
And then 00:06:324 (6324|0) - to 3 for a 3-2-1 roll (mainly to avoid the tripple jack on 1.
Plays cool, gives exiting pattern and also a little challenge which is still pretty comfortable to play!
00:15:242 - Shouldn't this be a chord? Snare drum. For consistency.
00:47:999 - // Wew great idea to emphasize the guitar. Love it!
00:53:351 - from here. I mean it's not bad how you map the triples, really, but i think it get's a little bit boring since 80% of them are rolls.
Why not make the a bit "wilder" pattern which are not boring to play.
Before i write now a wall how you could do it i simply show it to you!
Use variety of Pattern! Especially player who are already familiar with Mania loves to play fast changing pattern! And you have here the perfect moment in the song to give exactly this!
Try a bit and i'm sure you will find something what you like, what i showed in the screen are just example "how you could" do it.
00:58:378 (58378|3,58702|3,59026|3,59351|3) - & 00:59:351 (59351|0,59675|0,59999|0,60324|0,60648|0) - i have a eye of an eagle for something like this. Try to arrange there a bit c:
01:00:526 (60526|3,60851|2) - These two notes are
Wrong snapped. They are slightly shifted. When you turn on 1/3 divisor you can see it.
01:11:026 (71026|3,71351|3,71675|3,71999|3,72324|3,72648|3) - Argh. In the whole kiai i can find something like this. It's not really dramatic but uncomfortable xP
Try to arrange your pattern a bit for better balance in the whole kiai!.
That's all for Hard!
Koi
I didn't saw the Anime. Is the Diff name Song/Anime related? Because it have to be.
00:03:242 (3242|1,3242|0) - I don't know why but it doesn't feel like this should be a [12] chord. It's not really connected to the previous two, it feels more like this 00:03:567 (3567|3,3567|0) - . How about arrange this one to a [14] too?
00:34:540 (34540|2,34702|2,34864|2,35026|2) - Arrange a bit? For better balanced pattern.
00:42:810 - Like mentioned in the Normal. The idea is good but i think it's misapplied. 00:42:810 (42810|1,42810|0,43134|2,43134|3) - These are connected and should be on the same column (Also the next two!)
00:44:107 (44107|1,44107|2,44432|1,44432|0) - And these should be on the same column (also the next two!)
00:45:891 - Should be 3-Noted because of the really loud crash you have here.
00:53:188 - Like mentioned in the Hard. Try to give here more "wild" Pattern. You are now on a level where the player have enough experience to hit more complicated Pattern. Bring more variety into your Map!
01:00:526 (60526|3,60851|1) - Like in the hard. These two notes are
wrong snapped. They are a little bit shifted what you can see when you change to 1/3 divisor.
01:04:215 -
I really think you exaggerating here a little bit. 3 Noted chords are okay but not for all. Make a buildup. Make 01:04:215 (64215|0,64215|3,64215|2,64378|1,64378|3,64378|0,64540|2,64540|1,64540|0,64702|2,64702|1,64702|3) - two noted and leave the remaining for 3 noted since the drum get's louder and louder here!01:17:188 - Why you have this snare drum as 3-Noted Chord and 01:17:999 - as two noted D:
That's all!
Cool and solid Map.
Also a cool song.
Good luck with your Map
