1. Easy (1,43 stars, 100 notes)
2. Hard (2,23 stars, 201 notes)
3. Insane (3,28 stars, 221 notes)
4. Normal (1,8 stars, 140 notes)

Underforest wrote:

tio pk, primer mod wn

[General]

00:20:623 - Que me suba a donde? oc
Deberias removerle los bordes negros al BG y en su lugar extenderlo es temporal el bg supongo

[Easy]
Pon el tick en 1 ;_; pero si con tick 2 queda re bien, ademas los necesito para los ticksounds :p
00:15:623 (1) - Esta muy abajo

[Normal]
CS: 3.5 siempre use cs3 en normales ademas el hard es 3.5

[Hard]
Es realmente ridiculo que esta diff tenga la icono de Normal, prueba con CS 4 blame star rating, mientras este mapeado como hard da igual el resto :p
00:15:623 (1) - Topa con la barra de vida no arreglo estas cosas xd
00:41:248 (3,4,1,2) - Como esta por dirigirse al kiai, haz esto un poco mas distanciado no hay nada en la cancion que justifique eso :p
01:17:289 (5,1) - Este overlap daña mis ojos no se ve mientras juegas

[Insane]
CS:4
01:02:289 (1,2,3,4) - Demasiado ez
01:21:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Haz esto mas jumpy no quiero hacerlo mas dificil :p

Una estrella porque todos lo hacen
GL, 街to

1. resize correctly your BG dimensions should be 1024x768
2. i think you should make a harder diff, i know you can do it

1. You should avoid making more 1/2 sliders and try to add more circles to make the diff harder (just my opinion)
   example of 01:03:123 (1,2,3) you've possibility to add circles
2. I think you should neither do that or making a harder diff
3. 00:19:373 (1) - jump feels off, you should emphasize more
4. 00:28:123 (1) - ^
5. 00:46:039 (2,3) - dont stack them imo, stack rather (2) on 00:46:595 (5) -'s tail
6. but still a gud diff

1. 00:35:623 (1) - ctrl+g I wasn't expected to a huge jump
2. 01:03:123 (1) - emphasize it more (?)

1. nothing to say, seems good !

1. don't able to mod this diff xd

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

hi hi m4m from your queue

[Overall]

1. resize correctly your BG dimensions should be 1024x768 k
2. i think you should make a harder diff, i know you can do it i suck at making hard stuff :p

[Insane]

1. You should avoid making more 1/2 sliders and try to add more circles to make the diff harder (just my opinion) i wanted to make it easy xd
   example of 01:03:123 (1,2,3) you've possibility to add circles
2. I think you should neither do that or making a harder diff i dont think this song needs a harder diff xd
3. 00:19:373 (1) - jump feels off, you should emphasize more this part is so calm tho
4. 00:28:123 (1) - ^ same
5. 00:46:039 (2,3) - dont stack them imo, stack rather (2) on 00:46:595 (5) -'s tail i think its fine :d
6. but still a gud diff

[Hard]

1. 00:35:623 (1) - ctrl+g I wasn't expected to a huge jump slider leniency
2. 01:03:123 (1) - emphasize it more (?) i dont want to ;A;

[Normal]

1. nothing to say, seems good !

[Easy]

1. don't able to mod this diff xd

Pretty good map, good luck !

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/390807

Momochikun wrote:

sup

add "tv size" to tag ?i always forgot it ;w;

[Insane]
00:21:873 (1) - missing whistle ? most of previous downbeat do have whistle though so why this one don't im using them just on vocals
01:08:956 (3) - stacking this with (1)'s head may look more neat will touch 01:09:373 (5) -
01:18:123 (1,2,3) - try something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5057564 ok
01:23:227 (1) - hmm im pretty sure the vocal is ended at 01:26:039 - fixed on every diff

[Hard]
00:15:623 (1) - this one is gonna touches hp bar moved a bit
01:02:289 (5,1) - hmm the reverse point of (5) is gonna get covered by hitburst, try an overlap by moving up a bit. this might a bit saver, i dont wanna space them so much also i got testplays and seems ok. will get more opinions on it tho

SPOILER

01:06:664 - somehow this stop feels weird because you added note at 01:07:914 - deleted the note


[Normal]
00:40:831 (2) - try sticking on the vocal instead of drum ? just like 00:41:873 (3) - maybe a good follow-ups fixed
00:44:581 (3) - move this 1/2 earlier (00:44:373 - ). it's better that way since the rhythm now is confusing at gameplay fixed
00:36:248 (2) - maybe a normal parallel arrangement, or stacking ? lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5057656 made it a bit straight

hmm i feel this diff is pretty dense compared to average normal diff making normals is hard ;A;

easy diff is good already, good luck

Kathex wrote:

Hey, M4M

Sorry for poor mod, your map looks already well made

General

1. Some Inherited Points aren't correctly positioned in the main ticks, like 01:03:018 - i would be in 01:03:123 - thats for the kiai flash

Easy

1. 00:14:373 (2) - looks a bit off compared to 00:11:873 (2) - cant make it perfect ;A;

Nomal
Just few notes looks missing to me

1. 00:06:248 (2) - I dont know why a circle here, I think you could remove this circle and put a circle in 00:05:415 -, sounds better to me yea its way better
2. I miss a circle in 00:46:248 - that will make it too dense
3. 01:21:456 (2) - i miss a clickable in 01:21:664 - ^ same
4. I miss a circle in 01:22:498 -^ yeah

Hard is Perfect

Insane rename it to Hard- Hyper or Light Insane
its mapped like a insane so xd
Overall i liked the structure and is very fun to play

1. 00:05:623 (1,1) - I can see a overlap here isnt visible while playing
2. 00:14:373 (1) - I think if u make it inverse could be better keeping the flow straight = Print i prefer mine
3. 00:18:539 (2,1) - Why dont make the overlap straight to the previous? Like print (Maybe you will need to move the next patterns to keep the same curvature like it is currently) ^
4. 00:20:414 (3,2) - Could move it a bit down to not overlap? that will break some stuff i did here
5. 00:51:456 (3,2) - Could remove the smal overlap? thats intentional
6. 01:04:164 (4) - why not move to x407 y 76? and move 01:04:373 (5) - to keep the same DS ok

Shurelia wrote:

modding is luv

[General]

1. Try to give Red , Pale Yellow and a bit dark Blue? It'll make the map more pretty i completely forgot combo colors lol

[Easy]

1. 01:01:456 (2) - distance lmao fixed
2. 00:43:956 (2) - nazi but, move to x:156 would make it perfect okk

[Normal]

1. 00:36:248 (2) - prefer to be place at x:356 cause I prefer the straight one Xd x:340
2. 00:42:289 (3) - Distance , try x:424 lol fixed
3. 00:43:123 (1) - Distance too and this is an awkward one for me. Try x:364 y:348 for make this delicious i fucked up something here so i made something different :/

[Hard]

1. 00:22:081 - adding a note at here won't hurt and still doing a good job. i like that pause ;w;

[Insane]

1. Try AR 8.5 , It makes few jumps more easier. sure

Please rank and have dis star.

thanks w


Good Luck

1. move slider from 00:55:623 (1) to 00:55:831
2. move slider from 00:55:206 (4) to 00:55:414
3. add reverse arrow to slider 54:373 (3)

BigEarsMau wrote:

Hi pkhg
M4M from your queue

My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/439566

[General]

1. Don't you think the kiai time is too long? Just a suggestion, you should start the kiai from 01:03:123 bc I feel that this part is what emphasized the most in the final parts of the song theres a kiai flash here too also the chorus start at 00:43:123 - so yea

[Easy]

1. 00:13:123 (1) - Maybe you can make it curved like this so it flows better with the previous slider and the next i want it to be kinda stacked with 00:14:373 (2) -
2. 00:43:956 (2) - It would be better if you stack this perfectly under 00:40:623 (1) oops fixed

[Normal]

1. AIMod. Check distance snap. Pronto
2. 00:42:289 (3,1) - This doesn't really flow well. Would be better if you made it like this i dont wanna move so many stuff and its already coolz
3. 00:46:456 (2,4) - Idk dude but stacks like this could trouble newbies you can still see the slider coming
4. 01:08:123 (1,2) - Doesn't flow well. New players need a clear flow. Try Ctrl+G this tried but still prefer mine
5. 01:20:623 (1) - x188 y292 so it parallels with 01:19:789 (3) thats what i dont want lol

[Hard]

1. 00:36:873 (4,5,6) - You could've blanketed these perfectly i did my best

[Insane]

1. 00:19:373 (1) - Maybe stack this under 00:18:539 (2) so it looks nicer? i dont wanna increase the spacing
   I enjoyed this diff a lot Man, you're damn good when it comes in mapping Insanes

That's all I can find. Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked Speedrank this or I'll kill you lol thanks

polunochnik wrote:

Hellow! NM
EASY
01:23:331 this spinner appears before the button disappears. It is guaranteed to be a challenge for beginners.
In my opinion should be better delete button 01:23:123 (4) and start spinner from here. i moved spinner instead

Normal
Just check how it's look:

1. move slider from 00:55:623 (1) to 00:55:831 00:55:623 - its a strong vocal beat so needs to be mapped imo
2. move slider from 00:55:206 (4) to 00:55:414
3. add reverse arrow to slider 54:373 (3) tried them but still like mine

Hard
I was confused buttons 00:01:718 (3, 6) it isnt that confusing
It sounds better without them.

Sonnyc wrote:

Combo3 feels too dark compared to the video. Consider using something brighter.ok
Combo color for lower diffs plz. lol i forgot it
Kiai section is nearly 50% of this map. Consider toggling it off at 00:53:123 - 01:02:914 at least. i dont see how that affects something :p
[Hard]
00:41:873 (1) - Unnecessary nc imo. lol removed
01:23:123 (8) - Consider NC? i dont like 1 note nc
[Insane]
01:22:914 (6) - Consider NC. The current placement, which feels like an extension of the previous star pattern, was pretty weak imo since the extension was only partially done. To devide that different gameplay aspect, and the star patterning, NC is suggested.added