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Maxus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 09 Oktober 2016 at 14:27:37

Artist: Qrispy Joybox
Title: printemps
Source: REFLEC BEAT colette -Spring-
Tags: Pastel Adventure spring Tatsuya Iyama FutureTomTom Ver.2 DanceDanceRevolution MUSIC PACK 40 KONAMI
BPM: 168
Filesize: 3180kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Basic - 5Key (1,8 stars, 484 notes)
  2. Difficult - 5Key (2,65 stars, 750 notes)
  3. Spring - 5Key (3,9 stars, 1084 notes)
Download: Qrispy Joybox - printemps
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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musim semi ~
done, ready for mod ;D
Please re-dl on 09/10/2016 (dd/mm/yyyy) , sorry for inconvenience. (change of diff name based on https://remywiki.com/Printemps) and HS change.

Mapset list

Basic By Me
Difficult By Me
Spring By Me
Bubbled by Fresh Chicken
Qualified by A v a l o n
-SoraGami-
owo
Topic Starter
Maxus

-SoraGami- wrote:

owo
>w<
Umo-
I was about to mod this beatmap and then I didn't finde any mistakes. Great map dude :)
Good Luck on Ranking
Topic Starter
Maxus

imtdb1 wrote:

I was about to mod this beatmap and then I didn't finde any mistakes. Great map dude :)
Good Luck on Ranking
Thank you for the support ^^
- Kuncung -
just passing by


\(>w</~~~~~~~~~~~~
Protastic101
Oh look, I'm the first person to mod this. Hesitantly asking me to mod all diffs for a 1:43 song in 5k; who do you think I am, a kudosu farmer who only mods one 30 second diff and asks for kudosu? >.< I'm so triggered XD

Column 1|2|3|4|5

Yey, mawdz
[Normal]00:17:856 (17856|0,17856|4) - Make this a single note because it's the same sound as 00:16:785 (16785|1)
00:18:035 - Add a double here for the crash.
00:19:106 - 00:19:642 - ^^ My reason here being that the crash is much more noticeable than the kicks, and it varies the rhythm in the map a little, making the player actually have to read the notes coming down rather than having an easily predictable beat.
00:22:499 (22499|4) - Make this an LN to represent the 1/4 burst from here to 00:22:856 ?
00:23:214 - Same stuff I said about the crashes.
00:33:214 - This is me just being all picky about symmetry in 5K, but I think it'd look nicer if you moved 00:33:214 (33214|4,33571|4) to 4, and 00:33:928 (33928|3) to 5 then moved 00:34:642 (34642|2) to 4 and 00:34:821 (34821|4) to 3 and finally 00:34:999 (34999|2) to 5. Looks symmetrical and nice to me, so give it a thought?
00:48:928 - Why not do here what you did at 00:26:071 to represent the synth bursts?
01:11:547 - 01:11:666 - I don't think 1/3 is too fast for a normal, so consider adding notes here for the drums?

[Hard]00:14:642 - Make this a triple for the crash?
00:20:892 - Try something like this because of the 3 consecutive notes having the same pitch
00:39:910 - Add a note here for the drum?
00:37:053 - ^^

[Allergy Season]00:01:606 (1606|1,1964|3) - I'd consider putting these into the same column because they're the same pitch.
00:04:464 (4464|4,4821|0) - ^^ and yeah
00:06:339 - maybe you should add a note here for the hihat click?
00:06:606 - Actually, for this buildup, I think this might be in swing (meaning notes like 00:06:696 (6696|3,7053|1,7410|1) are snapped to 1/6). Like, I've been pausing the music and trying to see where it starts, and it's kind of hard, but if you listen to the style on 50% or 25% speed, you can hear the notes swinging. Sooo, ask a few other people and see.
00:11:785 - Make this a quad for the crash since you already used a triple to represent the snare at 00:11:428 (11428|1,11428|4,11428|2)
00:12:767 - Add a note, there's a synth sound here like at 00:12:053 (12053|1)
00:13:303 - ^^ so from 00:12:321 to 00:13:571 it's basically a 1/4 burst.
00:13:868 - There's also a shaker here on the 1/6 snap.
00:18:035 (18035|2) - I'd make this note at least a double because there's a crash here.
00:20:892 - I'd consider adding a note here in 3, and moving one of 00:21:071 (21071|1,21071|0) to 3 because the bell/synth is the same pitch until 00:21:428
00:21:428 (21428|0,21606|1,21785|2) - I'd also recommend jacking these together since they're the same pitch too.
00:23:124 - And add a note here for the kick?
00:28:749 - 00:28:839 - Add notes the for kicks?
00:37:053 - Kick here too? This mod is just devolving into my modding from 4 months ago XD
00:42:321 (42321|2,42678|4) - Control H? The long sound the LN is representing also happens to be the same pitch as 00:41:964 (41964|4)
00:50:089 (50089|3,50178|2,50267|1) and 00:50:535 (50535|2,50624|1,50803|3,50892|2) - I know it might seem repetitive to you, but since the pitch is ascending, why not control H this so the notes are also ascending to follow pitch relevancy?
00:51:785 (51785|0) - I can't hear a sustained sound during this LN, but rather individual notes on a 1/4 snap, so maybe try something like this?
00:55:178 - There's a crash here, so maybe add a double?
01:08:928 - Why did you discontinue the 1/4 notes leading into each double note here? If anything, I think it would have made more sense if you had started it later in the song and continued it until the end or wherever it stops rather than mapping it and then not mapping it even though the sound's there.
01:19:642 - You know, a .75 SV or something here would be awesome to help lead into the next measure. If accepted, try putting a 1.2 SV at 01:20:267
01:27:142 (87142|4,87321|4) - This is my personal opinion here, but I think this doesn't look as nice as a jack with 01:27:142 (87142|4) Instead, try moving 01:27:321 (87321|4) to 4 and see if it's a little easier to read.
01:29:464 - I know there's no percussion here, but since the synth plays the same note 3 times, maybe try something like this?

I just testplayed Hard and Normal for playable issues that I noticed, but I went more in depth with Spring, so hopefully that makes up for it ^.^

Edit: Oh look, this is my 200th post, yay.
Topic Starter
Maxus

- Kuncung - wrote:

just passing by


\(>w</~~~~~~~~~~~~
/(>w<\


Protastic101 wrote:

Oh look, I'm the first person to mod this. Hesitantly asking me to mod all diffs for a 1:43 song in 5k; who do you think I am, a kudosu farmer who only mods one 30 second diff and asks for kudosu? >.< I'm so triggered XD >///<

Column 1|2|3|4|5

Yey, mawdz
[Normal]00:17:856 (17856|0,17856|4) - Make this a single note because it's the same sound as 00:16:785 (16785|1) are you sure? i believe 00:17:856 - =kick + crash while 00:16:785 - only kick
00:18:035 - Add a double here for the crash. well, after hearing the reasoning below, i decide to add xd , only single though, double is a bit overkill in normal diff since the crash itself is soft and low sound somehow
00:19:106 - 00:19:642 - ^^ My reason here being that the crash is much more noticeable than the kicks, and it varies the rhythm in the map a little, making the player actually have to read the notes coming down rather than having an easily predictable beat. same as above
00:22:499 (22499|4) - Make this an LN to represent the 1/4 burst from here to 00:22:856 ? do you mean 00:23:035 - ? i think i focus on high pitch synth piano instead xd
00:23:214 - Same stuff I said about the crashes. gotcha
00:33:214 - This is me just being all picky about symmetry in 5K, but I think it'd look nicer if you moved 00:33:214 (33214|4,33571|4) to 4, and 00:33:928 (33928|3) to 5 then moved 00:34:642 (34642|2) to 4 and 00:34:821 (34821|4) to 3 and finally 00:34:999 (34999|2) to 5. Looks symmetrical and nice to me, so give it a thought? excellent.
00:48:928 - Why not do here what you did at 00:26:071 to represent the synth bursts? hmm maybe just my thought , but the melody at 00:26:071 i think have much strong independency on each snap, while 00:48:928 - i feel they're rather weak in comparison, but will give it a try here.
01:11:547 - 01:11:666 - I don't think 1/3 is too fast for a normal, so consider adding notes here for the drums? well, i think it's a bit of a sudden for normal player, so i keep for now xd

[Hard]00:14:642 - Make this a triple for the crash? i don't give triple for this diff maybe for now
00:20:892 - Try something like this because of the 3 consecutive notes having the same pitch it looks hard xd, and i focused on synth bg and kick here :3
00:39:910 - Add a note here for the drum? yes
00:37:053 - ^^ no

[Allergy Season]00:01:606 (1606|1,1964|3) - I'd consider putting these into the same column because they're the same pitch. i guess it's okay, rearrange xd
00:04:464 (4464|4,4821|0) - ^^ and yeah sure
00:06:339 - maybe you should add a note here for the hihat click? okay
00:06:606 - Actually, for this buildup, I think this might be in swing (meaning notes like 00:06:696 (6696|3,7053|1,7410|1) are snapped to 1/6). Like, I've been pausing the music and trying to see where it starts, and it's kind of hard, but if you listen to the style on 50% or 25% speed, you can hear the notes swinging. Sooo, ask a few other people and see. let me ask some other, i'm bad at snap
00:11:785 - Make this a quad for the crash since you already used a triple to represent the snare at 00:11:428 (11428|1,11428|4,11428|2) i believe triple already dense enough to represent the finish crash,
00:12:767 - Add a note, there's a synth sound here like at 00:12:053 (12053|1) it's a snare, but not melodic piano sound that i follow, they're quite different for me.
00:13:303 - ^^ so from 00:12:321 to 00:13:571 it's basically a 1/4 burst. ^ same xd
00:13:868 - There's also a shaker here on the 1/6 snap. hmm i want to focus on the piano synth here.
00:18:035 (18035|2) - I'd make this note at least a double because there's a crash here. the crash are a bit hazy and soft imo, make it double a bit weird imo.
00:20:892 - I'd consider adding a note here in 3, and moving one of 00:21:071 (21071|1,21071|0) to 3 because the bell/synth is the same pitch until 00:21:428 i want that sound to be represented only with 1 LN though, i think it's enough since the sound itself is soft.
00:21:428 (21428|0,21606|1,21785|2) - I'd also recommend jacking these together since they're the same pitch too. i feel a bit weird with that jack pattern xd, will keep for a while.
00:23:124 - And add a note here for the kick? i've considered this when i was mapping this, but mapping the kick give a sudden weird outburst when i try playtesting it, so i decided to not add for it.
00:28:749 - 00:28:839 - Add notes the for kicks? ^same reason.
00:37:053 - Kick here too? This mod is just devolving into my modding from 4 months ago XD same again, i think intentionally missing the kick and focus on the more prominent sound here will give more vocal play experience xd around when you mod my Uh-Oh xd
00:42:321 (42321|2,42678|4) - Control H? The long sound the LN is representing also happens to be the same pitch as 00:41:964 (41964|4) i'm 100% sure that the pitch at 00:41:964 (41964|4) - is different from 00:42:321 (42321|2) -
00:50:089 (50089|3,50178|2,50267|1) and 00:50:535 (50535|2,50624|1,50803|3,50892|2) - I know it might seem repetitive to you, but since the pitch is ascending, why not control H this so the notes are also ascending to follow pitch relevancy? technically it is , but 5k is just too narrow space to actually really represent the pitch , so i took a different approach that mirror each other pattern to give flow with the instrument itself.
00:51:785 (51785|0) - I can't hear a sustained sound during this LN, but rather individual notes on a 1/4 snap, so maybe try something like this? i'm sure it's the same as 00:46:071 (46071|0) - xd , i intentionally did that xd
00:55:178 - There's a crash here, so maybe add a double? same reason as above, didn't really want add for crash xd
01:08:928 - Why did you discontinue the 1/4 notes leading into each double note here? If anything, I think it would have made more sense if you had started it later in the song and continued it until the end or wherever it stops rather than mapping it and then not mapping it even though the sound's there. because the dominancy of the instrument the music try to represent is already different, the 1/4 sound at the section before have the most prominent sound , so i tried to map 1/4 for it, while at 01:08:928 - , you started to hear the Background synth sound , the 1/4 starting to lose its dominancy there, so i map the piano and bg synth instead.
01:19:642 - You know, a .75 SV or something here would be awesome to help lead into the next measure. If accepted, try putting a 1.2 SV at 01:20:267 i will try it, seems interesting :3
01:27:142 (87142|4,87321|4) - This is my personal opinion here, but I think this doesn't look as nice as a jack with 01:27:142 (87142|4) Instead, try moving 01:27:321 (87321|4) to 4 and see if it's a little easier to read. done and rearrange couple of things
01:29:464 - I know there's no percussion here, but since the synth plays the same note 3 times, maybe try something like this? same as reason above i guess xd


I just testplayed Hard and Normal for playable issues that I noticed, but I went more in depth with Spring, so hopefully that makes up for it ^.^

Edit: Oh look, this is my 200th post, yay.
wowowwoow really nice mod here, and really helpful actually :D
Thanks a lot protasticrainbow! :3
Exaria-sama
Hi Dixon~

Mod via queue

Simple mods ya..

Normal
00:18:928 (18928|3,19106|2) - CTRL + G? biar balance
00:26:071 - missing note? ada denger deh

Hard
00:17:053 (17053|2) - ini ga kedenger suaranya
00:39:910 (39910|2) - pindah ke 4

Umm, maaf klo cuman sedikit, :o soalnya udah bagus pattern nya, diff paling bawah juga, perlu di repair aja dikit
GL~
Reject or Applied? no problem xD
Topic Starter
Maxus

Exaria-sama wrote:

Hi Dixon~ Hi Exaria o/

Mod via queue

Simple mods ya..

Normal
00:18:928 (18928|3,19106|2) - CTRL + G? biar balance bole
00:26:071 - missing note? ada denger deh tp dsini dh ad note.. mngkn mksdny yg di 00:25:981 - ? ane ubah jdi LN

Hard
00:17:053 (17053|2) - ini ga kedenger suaranya ada kok, itu 1/4 kick
00:39:910 (39910|2) - pindah ke 4 bole

Umm, maaf klo cuman sedikit, :o soalnya udah bagus pattern nya, diff paling bawah juga, perlu di repair aja dikit
GL~
Reject or Applied? no problem xD
Thank you modnya ya :)
-[ AmiShici ]-
Yaaa dikon senpai

cupu mod here
No Kds ya! xD

1~5
Click me!
  • [Setengah Musim]
  1. 00:12:767 - ada sound lho mz sama kek 00:12:321 (12321|0,12410|4,12589|3,12678|0,12946|2,13035|0,13124|1) -
    00:13:303 - 00:13:839 - 00:14:196 - 00:14:553 - 00:15:981 - etc
    00:18:481 - 00:19:017 - etc. wkwkwk serah mw dimap apa ngga. cuman notice aja :v
    Kalo mw lebih jelas IRC aja kayak biasanya
Fubukicat
Hello~ mod don~
hope it'll help abit atleast
dadon
collumn=1/2/3/4/5
[Spring]
00:03:928 (3928|4,3928|0) - this should be one note only , or : 00:01:071 (1071|3) - this should be two notes
00:26:964 (26964|3) - move to 1 to avoid jacking here
00:28:035 (28035|1) - move to 5 ^same reason
00:39:821 (39821|1,39910|3) - Ctrl+J it sounds easier to make a linear stair imho
00:51:249 (51249|3,51428|2) - Ctrl+J the flow this way seems cool
00:55:892 (55892|1) - move to 3 for pattern
[Hard]
00:27:678 (27678|2,27767|1) - I suggest Ctrl+j , here the blank space in between notes could be read as a 1/4 stair , to avoid that switching the sense of the stair helps to notice it's not a 1/4 stream
^ then you should probably move : 00:28:035 (28035|2) - to 2 to avoid jacking here
[Normal]
00:47:142 (47142|3) - I usggest adding a note here , simple 1/2 stream here is fine imho
00:52:856 (52856|3) - add note to 4

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Maxus

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Yaaa dikon senpai

cupu mod here
No Kds ya! xD

1~5
Click me!
  • [Setengah Musim]
  1. 00:12:767 - ada sound lho mz sama kek 00:12:321 (12321|0,12410|4,12589|3,12678|0,12946|2,13035|0,13124|1) -
    00:13:303 - 00:13:839 - 00:14:196 - 00:14:553 - 00:15:981 - etc emng ad sound, tp ane mrasa itu kyk snare doank ,bukan main melodi yg bunyiny kyk piano
    00:18:481 - 00:19:017 - etc. wkwkwk serah mw dimap apa ngga. cuman notice aja :v ane prtimbangin dlu dh.. xd
    Kalo mw lebih jelas IRC aja kayak biasanya
xie xie ami xd

Eternalie wrote:

Hello~ mod don~
hope it'll help abit atleast
[box=dadon]collumn=1/2/3/4/5
[Spring]
00:03:928 (3928|4,3928|0) - this should be one note only , or : 00:01:071 (1071|3) - this should be two notes 00:03:928 (3928|4,3928|0) -have drop water sound, the other one doesn't have it.
00:26:964 (26964|3) - move to 1 to avoid jacking here
00:28:035 (28035|1) - move to 5 ^same reason okay for both of them
00:39:821 (39821|1,39910|3) - Ctrl+J it sounds easier to make a linear stair imho it's harder for me in testplay, will keep this.
00:51:249 (51249|3,51428|2) - Ctrl+J the flow this way seems cool okay
00:55:892 (55892|1) - move to 3 for pattern intentional like that, the shield makes me uncomfortable.
[Hard]
00:27:678 (27678|2,27767|1) - I suggest Ctrl+j , here the blank space in between notes could be read as a 1/4 stair , to avoid that switching the sense of the stair helps to notice it's not a 1/4 stream
^ then you should probably move : 00:28:035 (28035|2) - to 2 to avoid jacking here the stair flow here sufficient enough for me, the blank space should be alright as the pattern didn't change at that section (only stair to the left)
[Normal]
00:47:142 (47142|3) - I usggest adding a note here , simple 1/2 stream here is fine imho
00:52:856 (52856|3) - add note to 4[ keep both for a while, i want to really focus on melody here./box]

Good Luck :3
Thank you eter for mod :D

EDIT: http://puu.sh/qbwM6/a8a784129a.png yay dat 7 -w-
Frim4503

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Mod request from long time ago

General

  1. BG : ok
  2. Mp3 : ok
  3. Hitsound : ok
  4. Difficulty : ok
  5. Timing: ok
  6. AI Mod : ok

Spring

  1. 00:07:678 -try this http://puu.sh/qdFbX/8de6f72296.png cuz i saw something akward for me 
    ^00:07:499 (7499|2,7856|2,8214|2,8571|2,8928|2) -
  2. 00:13:749 (13749|3) -make double. Following piano part 00:13:928 -00:14:642 -
  3. 00:18:571 (18571|1) -move to 4. To avoid this 00:18:571 (18571|1,18571|0,18928|0,18928|1) -at the same col. Cuz different sound (C and W)
  4. 00:19:285 -why not make this part same as prev. 00:13:571 -using piano sound ?
  5. 00:24:821 -why don’t you make all the parts follow piano ? make this 00:25:178 (25178|1,25535|2,25892|4) -double
  6. 00:26:071 (26071|1,26071|2) -make triple ? cymbal
  7. 00:27:142 (27142|2,27142|3,27499|2,27499|3) -rearange. Suggest not put it at the same col.
    00:32:856 (32856|3) -remove ? for clap sound ?
  8. 00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) -double ? same with 00:33:214 (33214|1,33214|0,33571|0,33571|4) -
  9. 00:37:053 -add note ?
  10. 00:48:839 -add note
  11. 00:51:606 -^
  12. 00:51:696 -^
  13. 01:41:428 (101428|0,101428|1) -remove 1. Clap
Sorry, Cuma satu diff. soalnya lagi ga ada movitasi buat mod xD
Mod Done
Topic Starter
Maxus

Frim4503 wrote:


Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Mod request from long time ago

General

  1. BG : ok
  2. Mp3 : ok
  3. Hitsound : ok
  4. Difficulty : ok
  5. Timing: ok
  6. AI Mod : ok

Spring

  1. 00:07:678 -try this http://puu.sh/qdFbX/8de6f72296.png cuz i saw something akward for me 
    ^00:07:499 (7499|2,7856|2,8214|2,8571|2,8928|2) - i like your suggestion
  2. 00:13:749 (13749|3) -make double. Following piano part 00:13:928 -00:14:642 - i want to focus on kick
  3. 00:18:571 (18571|1) -move to 4. To avoid this 00:18:571 (18571|1,18571|0,18928|0,18928|1) -at the same col. Cuz different sound (C and W) it would break the flow though, the current alright imo
  4. 00:19:285 -why not make this part same as prev. 00:13:571 -using piano sound ? follow crash/kick sound
  5. 00:24:821 -why don’t you make all the parts follow piano ? make this 00:25:178 (25178|1,25535|2,25892|4) -double ^same reason
  6. 00:26:071 (26071|1,26071|2) -make triple ? cymbal okay
  7. 00:27:142 (27142|2,27142|3,27499|2,27499|3) -rearange. Suggest not put it at the same col. intentional, i want to mirror them
    00:32:856 (32856|3) -remove ? for clap sound ? nope
  8. 00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) -double ? same with 00:33:214 (33214|1,33214|0,33571|0,33571|4) - kick 1 and crash 2 from the hitsound xd
  9. 00:37:053 -add note ?
  10. 00:48:839 -add note
  11. 00:51:606 -^
  12. 00:51:696 -^ all okay
  13. 01:41:428 (101428|0,101428|1) -remove 1. Clap nope xd
Sorry, Cuma satu diff. soalnya lagi ga ada movitasi buat mod xD gpp membantu ini modnya ^^
Mod Done
Mkasih frim modnya , really helpful :D
[ A v a l o n ]
Really nice song choice here =w=)

em empat em

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  • [General]
    hmm oke

    [Normal]
  1. 00:10:714 (10714|2) - pindahin ke kolom satu lebih pas dan balance, dan juga supaya nggk ngasih beban berlebih juga pada jempol buat newbie 5K player . . . atau bisa juga begini http://puu.sh/qeNnm/c0d1b8fece.jpg
  2. 00:13:749 (13749|4) - sebaiknya dihapus aja, soalnya klo mau ngikut background synth/pianonya seharusnya mulai dari sini 00:13:392 - jadi akan lebih baik klo ngikut kick yg dimulai dari sini 00:13:928 - atau bisa ngikut full synth kayak disini 00:19:106 -
  3. 00:39:642 (39642|0,39821|4) - saran saya LN tersebut diganti sama single note aja, agak membingungkan juga buat diff ini untuk mencet 2 short LN sementara kick impact nya lebih berasa keras disini
  4. 00:43:214 - sampai 00:45:356 - saya rasa disini lebih pas kalo kamu ngikut piano flowsnya daripada long synth sound nya, soalnya piano disini lebih berasa ==> contoh http://puu.sh/qeNH8/556625fa54.jpg te ne not, te ne not, te ne not neeeet
  5. 01:08:928 - delete satu note, soalnya nggk ada loud snare kayak di part ini 01:11:071 -
  6. 01:21:964 (81964|0) - sebaiknya ini menjadi single not aja daripada LN, soalny pada bagian piano berikutnya kamu nggk pakai LN 01:22:142 (82142|1,82321|2,82499|4,82678|0,82856|1,83035|3) - supaya nggk confusing aja waktu mencet . . . soalnya klo kamu ngikut suara seperti ini 01:21:428 (81428|2) - harusnya LN berikutnya end disini 01:22:321 -
    alamak berbelit-belit, intinya saya merasa bahwa short LN nggk cocok disini ._.
  7. 01:27:678 (87678|2) - 01:33:392 (93392|0) - sama seperti diatas ^

    [Hard]
  8. 00:20:892 (20892|3,21428|1) - sebenarnya dibagian LN ini masih bisa dimodif buat ngikut repeated synth nya dan juga LN ini terlalu mudah buat hard icon diff hhh, sekedar saran http://puu.sh/qeO2X/ceafe7f421.jpg atau http://puu.sh/qeOby/e81b996db3.jpg sesuai kan aja sama synth nya . . . hmm this gonna be fun to be pressed
  9. 00:49:017 (49017|2,49196|1) - masih belum terlalu jelas buat dikasih 1/4 cukup 1/2 aja, mungkin sebaiknya di part ini jangan dikasih 1/4 dulu . . . soalnya bagian piano mulai "audible" pada part ini 00:49:464 -
  10. 00:50:267 (50267|3,50356|1,50535|3,50624|1) - suaranya jelas sangat berbeda, jadi mungkin untuk 1/4 ini dikasih kolom yang berbeda juga, contoh http://puu.sh/qeOok/c13462ed93.jpg
  11. 01:24:642 (84642|0) - sebenarnya ini habisnya disini loh 01:25:356 - cuman seolah-olah aja habisnya di garis merah, well but it's fine
  12. 01:28:392 (88392|4) - kenapa nggk 1/4 aja sekalian buat kick nya ._. kayak di part lainnya 00:39:821 -

    [Spring]
  13. 00:18:214 (18214|4,18303|3,18660|4,18749|3) - mungkin kamu perlu sedikit variasi disini, sama seperti yg kamu lakuin dsini udah bagus sebenarnya 00:12:321 - hmm saran saya http://puu.sh/qeOG7/2786175977.png atau http://puu.sh/qeOHQ/e4d73257cd.png
  14. 00:20:892 (20892|4,21428|3) - sama seperti mod saya di hard diff, akan lebih bagus jika kamu ngikut repeated synth nya dibagian ini . . . suara tersebut lebih berasa laaah
  15. 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - sayang sekali hal seperti ini kurang bagus kalo dipaksakan, coba ini dulu http://puu.sh/qeOOE/5315d84a94.png 100% lebih enak hhh
  16. 00:28:839 (28839|1) - move ke kolom 3 aja udah, gpp kok . . . daripada kamu bela-belain ikut kick, tapi jacknya serasa aneh disini ._.
  17. 00:33:928 - dan juga 01:41:785 - nice SR boost here =w=)b hahaha
  18. 00:34:731 - 00:34:910 - dan juga 00:35:356 - eyyy berhubung ini last diff, kenapa nggk sekalin aja di map 1/4 pianonya ? sangat jelas banget malah disini suaranya
  19. 00:36:964 (36964|4,37053|4) - sumpah ini aneh banget, yang sebelumnya sih mending ada kicknya . . . lah disini malah nggk jelas ada repeated sound atau tidak, jadi mohon sebaiknya jangan dikasih jack . . . hmm coba seperti ini ? http://puu.sh/qeP2Q/fa26b314f9.png
  20. 00:40:446 - 00:40:624 - dan 00:40:981 - 00:41:071 - sama disini, suara 1/4 pianonya masih jelas kok . . . mungkin di part berikutnya masih ada yang seperti ini, cek aja lagi ya
  21. 00:42:678 (42678|0,42767|0) - nonono
  22. 00:47:142 (47142|0) - udah jadi short 1/2 LN disini, sebenarnya suara deep piano tesebut malah start disana loh
  23. 00:48:749 (48749|2) - ke kolom 2 aja udah, lebih bagus ;)
  24. 00:51:249 - http://puu.sh/qePcD/6f2a5cdc82.jpg
  25. okay i'm gonna stop modding pattern here . . . intinya sama aja sih, biar lebih enak dan dapat feels nya :3
Good luck ya, kayak nya map ini menarik . . . panggil aja lagi saya klo nantinya map ini udah siap
oke sekarang saya tunggu giliran mu hehehe
Dellvangel
Hi, mod requested from Line.

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  • [Spring]
  1. 00:18:035 - add note, ada cymbal kayak 00:17:499 - .
  2. 00:18:571 - ini juga, malah lebih keras dari 00:17:499 - sound nya.
  3. 00:19:106 - ^
  4. 00:19:642 - ^
  5. 00:23:303 (23303|0) - ga coba mulai dari col 5 aja? biar balance sama 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - kan pas kiri jack, kanan reverse shield.
  6. 00:23:749 - kalo mod pertama di apply ini add juga buat cymbal, dll tiap 3/2 beat add note buat cymbal sampai 00:25:356 - .
  7. 00:26:071 - ini juga bagus di add aa cymbal, pas awal beat ketukan 4/4 nya lagi ini.
  8. 00:28:749 (28749|1,28839|1,28928|0,29017|1) - kayaknya terlalu susah di main, coba mulai 00:29:017 (29017|1) - dari col 3 aja dan logikanya kalo ibu jari main pake tangan kanan mungkin jadi lebih mudah di main, tapi jadi re-map beruntun entar lol.
  9. 00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) - jadi 2 note aja, konsisten sama 00:32:499 (32499|2,32499|1) - lagian diff paling susah gapapa imo.
  10. 00:37:856 - ini harusnya ada LN buat piano kayak 00:37:499 (37499|4,37678|3) - panjangnya sampai 00:38:214 - malah 00:38:035 (38035|3) - mungkin harusnya di hapus.
  11. 00:38:392 - ini juga harusnya ada LN 1/2 beat.
  12. 00:39:464 - ^
  13. 00:43:571 - ada 1/4 long piano sound tapi ga di map juga gapapa sih.
  14. 00:44:106 - add 1/2 LN.
  15. 00:45:178 - ^
  16. 00:47:678 - ^
  17. 00:47:856 (47856|4) - panjangin sampai 00:48:214 -
  18. 01:29:464 (89464|4) - ini suara kayak thrill nya kenapa di cover LN? kan harusnya sama kayak 01:29:017 (89017|0,89106|4,89196|0,89285|1,89285|3) - .
  19. 01:29:999 (89999|0) - ^ atau liat 00:28:928 - itu malah LN + 1/4 stream.

    [Hard]
  20. 00:28:749 - mungkin add note di sini?
  21. 00:29:285 (29285|1) - dll kok tiba2 ada note, padahal part2 sebelumnya kayak 00:18:392 - , 00:24:106 - dll ga ada note, pilih satlah satu, kalo mau add di add semua, kalo hapus berarti hapus semua.
  22. 00:29:821 (29821|1) - ^
    ... dll males ngetag satu2 lol.
  23. 00:49:464 (49464|0,49553|2,49642|1,49731|4,49821|3) - harusnya ngarah ke kiri kalo secara pitch, karena 00:50:089 (50089|4,50178|2,50267|3,50356|1) - pitch nya lebih tinggi malah di arahin ke kiri.
  24. 00:51:071 (51071|1,51160|4,51249|0,51339|3,51428|1) - juga bagus di 31 42 5 patternnya (rip internet ga bisa kirim screenshoot orz).
  25. 00:55:178 (55178|1,55267|3,55356|0,55446|4) - ga nyoba variasiin ini? biar beda sama 00:54:731 (54731|1,54821|3,54910|0,54999|4) - .
  26. 00:55:803 (55803|4,55892|2,55981|3,56071|1) - secara pitch arah patternnya juga aneh.
  27. 01:25:535 (85535|2) - move to col 2 biar feel thrill nya lebih berasa, lagian mulai dari 01:24:999 - ga keliat apa2 di col 2 lol.

    [Normal]
  28. 00:20:178 (20178|0) - ke col 2? pitch nya lebih tinggi dari 00:19:821 (19821|0) - lalu 00:20:356 (20356|1) - ke col 1.
  29. 00:53:214 (53214|4,53571|1,53928|4,54285|1) - ini ga kebalik? 00:53:571 (53571|1,54285|1) - pitch nya tinggi bagusan di kanan dan 00:54:285 (54285|1) - pitch nya beda sama 00:53:571 (53571|1) - kalo bisa di bedain col nya.
  30. 00:58:214 - di double aja, buat emphasis sound 'pang' nya kayak 00:57:499 (57499|3,57499|4) - ,00:59:642 (59642|3,59642|2) - dll.
  31. 00:58:928 - ^
  32. 01:01:071 - ^
  33. 01:01:785 - ^
  34. 01:02:499 - ^
  35. 01:11:428 - add note biar konsisten sama 01:11:785 - .
  36. 01:17:142 - ^
  37. 01:33:571 - sampai 01:37:142 - somehow kerasa kayak pattern itu2 aja mungkin karena 01:34:106 (94106|0,94285|4,94464|1,94642|3,94821|0,94999|4) - , 01:35:356 (95356|1,95535|3,95714|0,95892|4) - , coba di variasiin.
Good luck!
Critical_Star
halo, mod as requested ;)

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Normal
00:18:035 (18035|3,19106|3) - i think u can ignore these snare sound and focus on the piano and loud kick instead.
00:20:714 - i guess it won't hurt so much to add a note here
00:21:785 - there is piano sound here, add?
00:23:749 (23749|4,24821|2) - like before if u accept
00:31:249 (31249|1) - move to 4 and 00:31:428 (31428|2) - move to 2 look neater here for PR
00:46:428 - here not only kick but has the same chord like 00:46:606 (46606|0,46785|4,46964|2) - , better not to miss it here
00:47:142 - here too ^ can't really hear any difference sound here
00:52:142 - add a note like before and so on here if u accept
00:53:571 (53571|1,53928|4) - CTRL+H seens better for PR
01:29:464 (89464|3,89999|1) - not sure but it play odds too me, u try to catch the 1/4 sound here? maybe try http://puu.sh/qh2zg/08ce711fae.jpg start 01:28:928 -


Spring
00:18:660 (18660|4,18749|3,18839|2,18928|1,18928|0) - maybe make it left to right pattern variation here
00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) - could use double for all these drum sound here too
00:34:731 - 00:34:910 - why not map the 1/4 sound here, these sound are really obvious here.
00:35:356 - here u can add a note too for the main chord sound
00:40:356 - same goes to this part like before ^ it is recommended to add for all these sound.
00:46:071 - i not sure if this is your intention to make it simple but u missed a lot of these 1/4 sound. if u accept, u may want to check other part too

good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Maxus

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Really nice song choice here =w=)

em empat em

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  • [General]
    hmm oke

    [Normal]
  1. 00:10:714 (10714|2) - pindahin ke kolom satu lebih pas dan balance, dan juga supaya nggk ngasih beban berlebih juga pada jempol buat newbie 5K player . . . atau bisa juga begini http://puu.sh/qeNnm/c0d1b8fece.jpg woke
  2. 00:13:749 (13749|4) - sebaiknya dihapus aja, soalnya klo mau ngikut background synth/pianonya seharusnya mulai dari sini 00:13:392 - jadi akan lebih baik klo ngikut kick yg dimulai dari sini 00:13:928 - atau bisa ngikut full synth kayak disini 00:19:106 - ane tambah biar konsisten smuanya
  3. 00:39:642 (39642|0,39821|4) - saran saya LN tersebut diganti sama single note aja, agak membingungkan juga buat diff ini untuk mencet 2 short LN sementara kick impact nya lebih berasa keras disini oke
  4. 00:43:214 - sampai 00:45:356 - saya rasa disini lebih pas kalo kamu ngikut piano flowsnya daripada long synth sound nya, soalnya piano disini lebih berasa ==> contoh http://puu.sh/qeNH8/556625fa54.jpg te ne not, te ne not, te ne not neeeet ane consider dh xd, not too sure
  5. 01:08:928 - delete satu note, soalnya nggk ada loud snare kayak di part ini 01:11:071 - ad suara emphasis disitu
  6. 01:21:964 (81964|0) - sebaiknya ini menjadi single not aja daripada LN, soalny pada bagian piano berikutnya kamu nggk pakai LN 01:22:142 (82142|1,82321|2,82499|4,82678|0,82856|1,83035|3) - supaya nggk confusing aja waktu mencet . . . soalnya klo kamu ngikut suara seperti ini 01:21:428 (81428|2) - harusnya LN berikutnya end disini 01:22:321 -
    alamak berbelit-belit, intinya saya merasa bahwa short LN nggk cocok disini ._. i know =w= , fixed :3
  7. 01:27:678 (87678|2) - 01:33:392 (93392|0) - sama seperti diatas ^ ^

    [Hard]
  8. 00:20:892 (20892|3,21428|1) - sebenarnya dibagian LN ini masih bisa dimodif buat ngikut repeated synth nya dan juga LN ini terlalu mudah buat hard icon diff hhh, sekedar saran http://puu.sh/qeO2X/ceafe7f421.jpg atau http://puu.sh/qeOby/e81b996db3.jpg sesuai kan aja sama synth nya . . . hmm this gonna be fun to be pressed
  9. 00:49:017 (49017|2,49196|1) - masih belum terlalu jelas buat dikasih 1/4 cukup 1/2 aja, mungkin sebaiknya di part ini jangan dikasih 1/4 dulu . . . soalnya bagian piano mulai "audible" pada part ini 00:49:464 -
  10. 00:50:267 (50267|3,50356|1,50535|3,50624|1) - suaranya jelas sangat berbeda, jadi mungkin untuk 1/4 ini dikasih kolom yang berbeda juga, contoh http://puu.sh/qeOok/c13462ed93.jpg okeh xd
  11. 01:24:642 (84642|0) - sebenarnya ini habisnya disini loh 01:25:356 - cuman seolah-olah aja habisnya di garis merah, well but it's fine ga pa2 dah =w= xd
  12. 01:28:392 (88392|4) - kenapa nggk 1/4 aja sekalian buat kick nya ._. kayak di part lainnya 00:39:821 - kick yg sblmny jauh lbih audible imo

    [Spring]
  13. 00:18:214 (18214|4,18303|3,18660|4,18749|3) - mungkin kamu perlu sedikit variasi disini, sama seperti yg kamu lakuin dsini udah bagus sebenarnya 00:12:321 - hmm saran saya http://puu.sh/qeOG7/2786175977.png atau http://puu.sh/qeOHQ/e4d73257cd.png
  14. 00:20:892 (20892|4,21428|3) - sama seperti mod saya di hard diff, akan lebih bagus jika kamu ngikut repeated synth nya dibagian ini . . . suara tersebut lebih berasa laaah ok tmpt laen jg xd
  15. 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - sayang sekali hal seperti ini kurang bagus kalo dipaksakan, coba ini dulu http://puu.sh/qeOOE/5315d84a94.png 100% lebih enak hhh
  16. 00:28:839 (28839|1) - move ke kolom 3 aja udah, gpp kok . . . daripada kamu bela-belain ikut kick, tapi jacknya serasa aneh disini ._. ok ide jack dipatahkan dlu xd
  17. 00:33:928 - dan juga 01:41:785 - nice SR boost here =w=)b hahaha ga pa2 lah di jdi pp map dikit =w=
  18. 00:34:731 - 00:34:910 - dan juga 00:35:356 - eyyy berhubung ini last diff, kenapa nggk sekalin aja di map 1/4 pianonya ? sangat jelas banget malah disini suaranya ok smuanya
  19. 00:36:964 (36964|4,37053|4) - sumpah ini aneh banget, yang sebelumnya sih mending ada kicknya . . . lah disini malah nggk jelas ada repeated sound atau tidak, jadi mohon sebaiknya jangan dikasih jack . . . hmm coba seperti ini ? http://puu.sh/qeP2Q/fa26b314f9.png oke
  20. 00:40:446 - 00:40:624 - dan 00:40:981 - 00:41:071 - sama disini, suara 1/4 pianonya masih jelas kok . . . mungkin di part berikutnya masih ada yang seperti ini, cek aja lagi ya oke dicek
  21. 00:42:678 (42678|0,42767|0) - nonono whyyy xd
  22. 00:47:142 (47142|0) - udah jadi short 1/2 LN disini, sebenarnya suara deep piano tesebut malah start disana loh oh ya lupa yg ini
  23. 00:48:749 (48749|2) - ke kolom 2 aja udah, lebih bagus ;) bole bole bole xd
  24. 00:51:249 - http://puu.sh/qePcD/6f2a5cdc82.jpg
  25. okay i'm gonna stop modding pattern here . . . intinya sama aja sih, biar lebih enak dan dapat feels nya :3
Good luck ya, kayak nya map ini menarik . . . panggil aja lagi saya klo nantinya map ini udah siap
oke sekarang saya tunggu giliran mu hehehe
Mkasih bnyak modnya valon, really nice mod here hehe =w=)

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, mod requested from Line.yayy :3

1|2|3|4|5
  • [Spring]
  1. 00:18:035 - add note, ada cymbal kayak 00:17:499 - .
  2. 00:18:571 - ini juga, malah lebih keras dari 00:17:499 - sound nya.
  3. 00:19:106 - ^
  4. 00:19:642 - ^ itu kyk cymbal lembut smua.. ane ga bner2 emphasis suara itu kcuali klo cymbal kyk 00:20:356 - dsbny
  5. 00:23:303 (23303|0) - ga coba mulai dari col 5 aja? biar balance sama 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - kan pas kiri jack, kanan reverse shield. dirubah lewat mod sblmny xd
  6. 00:23:749 - kalo mod pertama di apply ini add juga buat cymbal, dll tiap 3/2 beat add note buat cymbal sampai 00:25:356 - . ane keep dlu
  7. 00:26:071 - ini juga bagus di add aa cymbal, pas awal beat ketukan 4/4 nya lagi ini. ini iya
  8. 00:28:749 (28749|1,28839|1,28928|0,29017|1) - kayaknya terlalu susah di main, coba mulai 00:29:017 (29017|1) - dari col 3 aja dan logikanya kalo ibu jari main pake tangan kanan mungkin jadi lebih mudah di main, tapi jadi re-map beruntun entar lol. ini hanya pindah 1 note wkwk :p
  9. 00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) - jadi 2 note aja, konsisten sama 00:32:499 (32499|2,32499|1) - lagian diff paling susah gapapa imo. woke xd
  10. 00:37:856 - ini harusnya ada LN buat piano kayak 00:37:499 (37499|4,37678|3) - panjangnya sampai 00:38:214 - malah 00:38:035 (38035|3) - mungkin harusnya di hapus. disini piano yg ad tiba2 brhenti suarany , beda ama 00:37:499 (37499|4,37678|3) - yang synthny tetep jalan terus selama 1/2 beat, jdi ane sngaja bkin LN nya brhenti kyk gitu :3
  11. 00:38:392 - ini juga harusnya ada LN 1/2 beat.
  12. 00:39:464 - ^
  13. 00:43:571 - ada 1/4 long piano sound tapi ga di map juga gapapa sih.
  14. 00:44:106 - add 1/2 LN.
  15. 00:45:178 - ^
  16. 00:47:678 - ^ gomen sama smua D:
  17. 00:47:856 (47856|4) - panjangin sampai 00:48:214 - tp itu bner 1/2 beat ;w;
  18. 01:29:464 (89464|4) - ini suara kayak thrill nya kenapa di cover LN? kan harusnya sama kayak 01:29:017 (89017|0,89106|4,89196|0,89285|1,89285|3) - . dirubah smua
  19. 01:29:999 (89999|0) - ^ atau liat 00:28:928 - itu malah LN + 1/4 stream. 01:29:464 - ini samanya ama yg 00:20:892 - , but still changed

    [Hard]
  20. 00:28:749 - mungkin add note di sini? consider dlu
  21. 00:29:285 (29285|1) - dll kok tiba2 ada note, padahal part2 sebelumnya kayak 00:18:392 - , 00:24:106 - dll ga ada note, pilih satlah satu, kalo mau add di add semua, kalo hapus berarti hapus semua.
  22. 00:29:821 (29821|1) - ^
    ... dll males ngetag satu2 lol. oke2
  23. 00:49:464 (49464|0,49553|2,49642|1,49731|4,49821|3) - harusnya ngarah ke kiri kalo secara pitch, karena 00:50:089 (50089|4,50178|2,50267|3,50356|1) - pitch nya lebih tinggi malah di arahin ke kiri. tp itu dpt flowny klo diliat scra 1 grup notes itu D:
  24. 00:51:071 (51071|1,51160|4,51249|0,51339|3,51428|1) - juga bagus di 31 42 5 patternnya (rip internet ga bisa kirim screenshoot orz). ane rearrange
  25. 00:55:178 (55178|1,55267|3,55356|0,55446|4) - ga nyoba variasiin ini? biar beda sama 00:54:731 (54731|1,54821|3,54910|0,54999|4) - . rearrange
  26. 00:55:803 (55803|4,55892|2,55981|3,56071|1) - secara pitch arah patternnya juga aneh. scra pitch hrusny LN di col 3, tp ane variasiin dikit xd
  27. 01:25:535 (85535|2) - move to col 2 biar feel thrill nya lebih berasa, lagian mulai dari 01:24:999 - ga keliat apa2 di col 2 lol. oke

    [Normal]
  28. 00:20:178 (20178|0) - ke col 2? pitch nya lebih tinggi dari 00:19:821 (19821|0) - lalu 00:20:356 (20356|1) - ke col 1. oke
  29. 00:53:214 (53214|4,53571|1,53928|4,54285|1) - ini ga kebalik? 00:53:571 (53571|1,54285|1) - pitch nya tinggi bagusan di kanan dan 00:54:285 (54285|1) - pitch nya beda sama 00:53:571 (53571|1) - kalo bisa di bedain col nya. iya
  30. 00:58:214 - di double aja, buat emphasis sound 'pang' nya kayak 00:57:499 (57499|3,57499|4) - ,00:59:642 (59642|3,59642|2) - dll.
  31. 00:58:928 - ^
  32. 01:01:071 - ^
  33. 01:01:785 - ^
  34. 01:02:499 - ^ itu pangny ane emphasis yg bner2 gede , kliatan kok alur pang yg ane bkin double scra konsisten
  35. 01:11:428 - add note biar konsisten sama 01:11:785 - . oke
  36. 01:17:142 - ^ oke
  37. 01:33:571 - sampai 01:37:142 - somehow kerasa kayak pattern itu2 aja mungkin karena 01:34:106 (94106|0,94285|4,94464|1,94642|3,94821|0,94999|4) - , 01:35:356 (95356|1,95535|3,95714|0,95892|4) - , coba di variasiin. rearrange
Good luck!
Thank you so much dell for the mod ^^ , also really nice mod i got here =w=
Topic Starter
Maxus
Intentional double post here.

Critical_Star wrote:

halo, mod as requested ;) =w=

column 1 2 3 4 5

Normal
00:18:035 (18035|3,19106|3) - i think u can ignore these snare sound and focus on the piano and loud kick instead. try catching the cymbal here to make a bit difference
00:20:714 - i guess it won't hurt so much to add a note here
00:21:785 - there is piano sound here, add?
00:23:749 (23749|4,24821|2) - like before if u accept same as before
00:31:249 (31249|1) - move to 4 and 00:31:428 (31428|2) - move to 2 look neater here for PR ok
00:46:428 - here not only kick but has the same chord like 00:46:606 (46606|0,46785|4,46964|2) - , better not to miss it here
00:47:142 - here too ^ can't really hear any difference sound here i'm following the main melody here for the transition
00:52:142 - add a note like before and so on here if u accept same
00:53:571 (53571|1,53928|4) - CTRL+H seens better for PR rearrange
01:29:464 (89464|3,89999|1) - not sure but it play odds too me, u try to catch the 1/4 sound here? maybe try http://puu.sh/qh2zg/08ce711fae.jpg start 01:28:928 - rearrange


Spring
00:18:660 (18660|4,18749|3,18839|2,18928|1,18928|0) - maybe make it left to right pattern variation here already rearrange this before
00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) - could use double for all these drum sound here too already added
00:34:731 - 00:34:910 - why not map the 1/4 sound here, these sound are really obvious here. also already xd
00:35:356 - here u can add a note too for the main chord sound oke 'w'
00:40:356 - same goes to this part like before ^ it is recommended to add for all these sound. sure
00:46:071 - i not sure if this is your intention to make it simple but u missed a lot of these 1/4 sound. if u accept, u may want to check other part too idk too xd, added anyway

good luck~ ;)
Wah arigato star xd, really nice mod 'w')
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