1. Love Letter (2.15 stars, 458 notes)

Xinely|Nozhomi

Sonnyc Electoz

Modem wrote:

Oh my gosh, it's my favourite song!!!!

Good luck with thisヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ

[Colours]
Combo1 : 250,244,18
Combo2 : 5,152,239

Lasse wrote:

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[general]
audio bitrate is too high as it exceeds 192kbit need help with this please
first combo color is kinda gross. using some light-ish blue instead would be really nice imo and go great with the eyes of the girl in the bg
maybe try

[Colours]
Combo1 : 250,244,18
Combo2 : 5,152,239

wooo, okay

03:55:718 (1) - 05:14:085 - I don't think using kiai for this song works that well. It's so calm, even at those spots. you could go for a short kiai flash (like 1/2 beat) or even no kiai at all imo. Having everything flash and all doesnt really fit the mood of the song It is calm, yes. But I still feels like it's okay for kiai at this part since ... this is the main part Xd

[map]
00:52:044 (6,1) - slider leniency makes the spacing here feel nearly non existent which doesnt really suit the downbeat, idk maybe sth like http://i.imgur.com/4pNTol7.jpg waaaa, yeah you right
00:59:391 (1) - there seems to a faint piano on the red tick, so shortening this to 1/2 would work well since also the strongest part of the vocal ends there welp, I was trying to yolo until you pointing this, changed anyway
01:18:167 (6,7,1) - curve-stright thing isnt that visually appealing, since it seems you dont want to overlap sth on the slider before you could at least try to make the shape of the 1/4 work better with the slider => http://i.imgur.com/LIEhJx0.jpg Good point
02:44:493 (2) - really sudden 1/4 jump, ctrlg would work nicer imo Hmmmmm, I like this one so I consider opinion for now
03:19:800 (1) - stacking this strong vocal + piano doesnt work at all and you never did it hehehehe Xd
03:39:391 (1,2) - would either overlap more or not at all since it looks quite bad with this slight touching I'll take the 2nd one
04:11:024 (6,7,1) - spacing makes this a bit hard to read since it they are nearly the same visual distance I hear ya
06:12:860 (1,1,1) - either silence the spinner(ends) or maybe set the like http://i.imgur.com/KM4OA2g.jpg so the ends are on audible beats. which works better imo i'll just.. silence it

gl thanks Xd

edit: lol I think I modded the wrong thing since your post in my queue was deleted and I didnt see you posted again so it took your only pending map >_> wahahahaha, It's okay!

Lasse wrote:

here's the mp3 reencoded to rankable 192bkit/s
http://puu.sh/oDJa4/0685266f9b.mp3
offset could be a little different

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

sorry, this song has no relationship with 麻枝　准, but Authors by 都乃河　勇人（Tonokawa Yuuto）and Compose by 折戸　伸治（Orito Shinji）
so you should del Maeda Jun and 麻枝 准 in the tags and add in 都乃河勇人、Tonokawa Yuuto、折戸伸治、Orito Shinji、Visual Art's
maybe mod this map soon...

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
First of all I must clarify: 麻枝准 is only the QC(the Quality Control) and one of the Composer/Lyricist for this game, not the author. He compose the BGM 「旅」(Tabi) and Lyrics it derived the song 「CANOE」 and 「渡りの詩」(Watari no Uta). That's all.
The authors of Rewrite are: 田中ロミオ(Tanaka Romeo)、竜騎士07(Ryukishi07) and 都乃河勇人.
The route of 中津静流(Nakatsu Shizuru) writen by 都乃河勇人, all of the script has no any relationship with 麻枝准.（The route of 此花ルチア(Konohana Lucia) writen by 竜騎士07, others by 田中ロミオ）
So you must del Maeda Jun and 麻枝 准 from the tags, although this not affect to rank, but please do not mislead other people. Key ≠ 麻枝准. Thank you.
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rewrite_(ゲーム) Whoaaa, If you say that much then okay, I'll delete Jun Maeda from the tags. Thank you for your research!

What is the diff name "Ani" mean? It seems like Chinese Pinyin “爱你”, but this is a Japanese song, you can use Japanese-Romanise "Aishiteru", or use English "Love You", even the English of the title "Love Letter". I make this diff for someone named "Ani" and it's one of her favorite song that she love to sang. So yeah..

SV1.3 is OK, but you use many 1.2X, 1.5X green line. Those makes your slider too fast, made the flow hard, unsightly and not suitable for this song. This song is softly, your mapping should reflected it. 0.75X, 0.8X,1.0X,1.2X enough. Hmmmm, Is that so? It plays fine for me though :/

[Ani]
The first paragraph of this song has weak piano sound, you can follow these and I feel those are better to map. You know always following vocal is worse, but for this song, you can mix the vocal and rhythm where appropriate. Hooo, okay!
00:07:146 (1,2) - good symmetry, but 00:10:411 (1) looks very bad. there is no any sound at 00:11:228. if you have slow slider it's very proper to a normal slider like KPY have done. Many sliders in this map are all like this. good point
00:23:473 (1) - start this at 00:23:575 and end at 00:26:636, then add a circle at 00:23:473 hooo, good
In my opinion, I would add a slider from 00:30:003 to 00:30:820, a circle at 00:32:452, slider from 00:33:269 to 00:34:085, a big DS between 00:35:309 (4,5), maybe 2X, then slider from 00:36:534 to 00:37:350, circle at 00:38:167 and 00:38:983......I agree on the DS part but ummh, maybe I'll just consider your opinion on the rhythm thing, hehe. Also would be great if you able to provide any Picture about the rhythm you said
Do you have heard of Snake mapping? You are not mapping normal nor easy, but insane instead. Like 00:30:003 (2,3)、00:56:126 (1,2)、00:59:391 (1,2) and so on. Please do not fall in DS hole. Insane diff is free. Almost all of the notes likes snake, looks boring welp, I kinda agree with you, maybe I'll ask someone for this
01:15:309 (5) - do you heard any sound here? Yes, and it's very faint. Do you hear the weak piano sound thingy at here? Anyway I'm removing it for now for a better play
01:50:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - even for insane, this stream too hard and I recommend kickslider instead. Yes , Yes I see your point on here. But.. I feel like I want to streaaaaammm at here you know? cause the good part are going to start hehe. Oh well, If someone also asking me to do that maybe I'll consider it
02:32:452 (1) - stack on 02:33:677 (2) mmm, I'll give it a try
03:11:228 (3,4,5,6) - what are you following? I can't make clear them. You'd better use slider to cover these. I'm trying to follow the piano at here? Also I do think this also enjoyable. Xd
03:28:779 (4) - why not a slider here same as before? there are all of One-half shot, 03:29:187 (5) too, downbeat at 03:29:595 but you add the slider tail makes strange feeling. Downbeat should be circle or slider head to give player striking sense. eeeh? But it feels great to me ;;
03:30:411 (1,2,3) - then why you suddenly switch to vocal? hmm, maybe I'll give another pattern
03:32:044 (3) 、03:35:309 (4) - same with 03:29:187 (5)
So many issues, still need hard word.
I only give you direction, others can only rely on your own understanding.
Good luck.

@Karen
我知道是乃跑来deny的KD 给我还回来（怒

Modem wrote:

Hi~~~ M4M owo/

THIS SONG BREAKS MY KOKORO!
SO SAD! UWU *sobbing grossly*

General

* Please resize your BG into the rankable size. It could be 1024 x 768. You could ask Ringating to help you resizing the background. He is a very nice person :3 I've known him since a year ago, Anyway the current BG is ok and rankable.
* You should add soft-sliderslide 'cuz the noise coming from the soft default slider is disturbing the main music. Moreover, this is such a calm and quiet song in which the noise from the slider kinda broke the aesthetic side. And don't forget to change all the sample from the timing setup panel into S:C1 if you do this :3 asdsafsa, i forgot lol, thanks
* In my opinion, the preview point that you choose didn't hit the highlight from the song itself. Based on the way you choose the preview point, I guess you didn't intend to put the preview point at some part before the kiai time and instead you like to add calm yet touching part as a preview point am I right o3o? My suggestion is, if you really want to add calm and gorgeous part as the preview point, then you should move the preview point into 04:47:554 . That part is so nice and touchy ;w; *sniffle* I love you
* It would be nice if you make this part -> 01:51:636 (1) ~ 02:17:758 into kiai time since the rhythm around this part doesn't have any difference with the rhythm at 03:55:718 (1) ~ 04:21:840 (1) in which it was being kiai time, so it still makes sense to put kiai time at 01:51:636 (1) ~ 02:17:758 there
* Please disable the countdown at the 'design' from the song setup. The song starts quite early and the countdown wouldn't be used so it was unnecessary asdasfasfa
* Um, also, this is purely a suggestion, but I guess the combo colors that you chose doesn't fit well with the background. I'm afraid this will result in disqualification (I've already seen some maps which was disqualified only because the combo color that they were chosen didn't match with the background) so my suggestion is, replace your combo colors with :

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,129,129
Combo2 : 142,211,253
Combo3 : 250,222,126
Combo4 : 255,225,225
Combo5 : 111,183,255

Um, sorry that I added some new combo colors in it but it matches with the boy's hair color, and their skin, so..... >////< greaat!

* Others are pretty fine~ >w</

Ani

* Why HP 6.6? HP 6 suits well with this calm song :3 yes
* Change AR to 7 7.3 cuz anti mainstreammmm
* Change OD to 7 as well so that it will balance with the HP and AR yes
* Um okay then, I'll start with the part around -> 00:03:065 (3) ~ 00:20:207 (1) since there are strong piano sound from the main music so that the hitsound around this part could be improved. Add whistle at :
- 00:03:065 (3)
- 00:07:147 (1)
- 00:09:595 (3)
- 00:12:045 (2)
- 00:12:861 (4)
- 00:13:677 (1)
- 00:15:309 (1)
- 00:16:943 (1)
- 00:19:392 (2)
- 00:20:207 (1) marry me
* 00:23:473 (1) Using 20% volume for this spinner at this calm part is still a little bit too loud. Lower down the volume at this spinner into 10% yes yes
* 00:55:037 ~ 00:55:445 - Just my suggestion, but there's lovely bell sound from the main music that could be mapped here. You could add a slider that started at 00:55:037 ~ 00:55:309 then add a note at 00:55:445. Add whistle at 00:55:309 afterwards :3. If you want to apply this suggestion, then change the Beat Snap Divisor into 1/6 first aa, well, I did map these part, but with my own rhythm. ty
* 01:50:003 (5) - Using whistle and finish at the same time on this note is too loud compared to the main music. Remove the finish and keep using whistle instead ayy
* 01:50:820 (1) ~ 01:51:432 (7) - The volume on this stream quite loud considering the piano from the main music is kinda low and there's no hitsound in this stream that could emphasize the piano. Plus, the soft hitsound is covering the piano from the main music too much. Lower down the volume at this stream into 10% so that it will blend with the piano from the main music properly lovely
* 01:51:636 (1) ~ 02:17:554 (5) - This part is lacking the hitsound while this part is one of the highlights from the music. I dunno if the hitsound for this kiai time is still WIP but if it doesn't then, I suggest you to add whistle at least at every big white tick (the downbeat) so that at least you follow along the piano :3 o shit I forgot to HS
* 02:05:718 (2) ~ 02:06:330 (5) - How about making the stream at these notes into round instead of letting it straight? It will lead the flow nicely considering the previous slider -> 02:04:697 (1) have the curvy angle from its slider's frame, so that it will be more comfortable to have a rounded flow afterwards. (Sorry that I couldn't take any screenshot as an example. F-12 in my laptop is broken uwu ;w;) I know what are you saying
* 02:11:228 (1) ~ 02:14:493 (1) - Um, why did the space between 02:11:228 (1) and 02:12:860 (2) is a lot larger than the space between 02:12:860 (2) and 02:14:493 (1) while they are exactly having the same gap? This is quite confusing and pretty noticeable, so my suggestion is, to move 02:11:228 (1) and 02:12:860 (2) closer to each other so that they will have a consistent spacing with 02:14:493 (1) there you go
* 02:17:350 (4,5) - Blanket these notes with 02:16:126 (3) ? They will look cute owo you are cute
* 02:17:758 - The piano from the main music is quite strong here. It would be nice if you add a note + whistle here then stack this note along with 02:17:350 (4,5) yes
* 02:27:146 (1) - Lower down the volume at this spinner into 10% so that it will blend perfectly with the piano yse
* 02:38:983 - Please add a note + whistle at this part to follow the piano. It feels weird to skip the piano here since it sounds quite strong and need to be emphasized :3. Moreover, you map this part -> 02:39:800 (5) in which was emphasizing the piano, so it would be nice if you map this part -> 02:38:983 as well to keep the consistency among the rhythm srue
* 02:41:840 (3,4) - Are you sure you don't wanna making them into blanket? o.o a
* 02:46:738 - Add a note at this part please~ It would be nice if you follow the backing vocal as well~ MARRY ME
* 02:49:595 (5) - Add whistle at this note, since you consistently adding whistle at 02:47:146 (1) , 02:47:963 (2) , and 02:48:779 (3) which means you're mapping the vocal here yes
* 03:04:902 (3) - Add whistle at this note to emphasize the piano sye
* 03:12:860 - Add a note at this part to follow the backing vocal :3 hmm, naah I think the current one feels better.
* 03:20:616 (3) - Add whistle at this note to emphasize her voice yanaginagi
* 03:21:024 (4,5) - Fix this blanket please~ This slider -> 03:21:432 (5) needs to be more curvy sexy
* 03:23:065 (1) - Add whistle at this note to emphasize the piano yes
* 03:30:411 (1) - Add whistle at the head of this slider please~ yes
* 03:31:024 (2) - Add whistle at the head of this slider as well~ ya
* 03:50:207 (1) - Lower down the volume at this spinner into 10% so that it will blend perfectly with her moe voice yanaginagi
* 03:54:901 (1) - The hitsound at this note could be improved. First, you need to lower down the volume for this note into 10%, then add clap in drum additions. It will emphasizes the drum from the main music perfectly <3 whoaa
* 03:55:718 (1) ~ 04:21:840 (1) - Same suggestion for this kiai time part. Please add whistle at every big white tick (the downbeat) to improve the hitsound sure
* 04:15:310 (1,2) - Same suggestion as before, please move them a bit closer to each other so that the spacing would be consistent with the next slider -> 04:18:575 (1) alright
* 04:45:718 (1) - Lower down the volume at this spinner into 10% so that it will blend perfectly with the violin, then add whistle at the spinner to emphasize the piano at 04:47:962 yes
* 05:13:269 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as before. Lower down the volume around this part to emphasize the piano nicely
* 05:14:085 (1) ~ 05:40:207 (4) - Same suggestion for this kiai time part. Please add whistle at every big white tick (the downbeat) to improve the hitsound ;)
* 05:26:534 - Please add a note at this part since there's a high pitched piano from the main music that was skipped at this part alright
* 05:39:391 (4) - Move this slider a bit further from the previous note -> 05:38:575 (3) so that it will has a consistent spacing with 05:36:942 (1,2) since their gap were the same aaaaaa
* 05:40:411 (1) - Lower down the volume at this spinner into 10% so that it will blend perfectly with the violin ok
* Add whistle at :
- 05:52:452 (3)
- 05:58:983 (3)
- 06:01:432 (2)
- 06:02:248 (4)
- 06:03:064 (1)
- 06:06:330 (1)
- 06:08:779 (2)
- 06:09:595 (1)
* 06:12:860 (1) - Lower down the volume at this spinner into 10% so that it will blend perfectly with the violin
* 06:14:493 (1) - ^
* 06:16:126 (1) - ^^ added all and love you

Okay then, that's all~
Beautiful song >.<
Btw, dat bg makes an extra effect to my broken kokoro ;A; (nice choice <3)
My map, in case you forgot the link : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/453879

Good Luck in Rank Shurelia~ />w</

CrystilonZ wrote:

From your queue~

[General]
Offset is pretty late. I cannot say exactly how much tho. 595 maybe? fixed into 582

[Ani]
00:43:865 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know how I should put this... urr... make them a W shape rather than M shape. 00:43:865 (2,3) - The flow between these two should be better if done so alright then
01:00:804 (3,4,5) - are you sure about the spacing? There's nothing to cue the anti jump orz alright, I'll stack 4 with 5 then
01:11:620 (4) - try moving this to 411/137 to improve the coherence with 01:09:171 (1,2) - whoaaa yes
01:36:518 (2) - idk if this is intentional or not, but the spacing is not equal between this and 01:35:293 (1,3) -. If you're trying to accelerate things here to fit with the music, move 01:38:151 (4) - further apart oh damn , lol
01:42:640 (2) - the slider-whistle sound is pretty out of place. Might be accidental it is? It's sounds ok tho
02:07:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not a fan of this orz, but if you want to do this, could you please make them flow nicely? move 02:08:967 (2) - to 57/99 aaaaaa, thanks
02:58:967 (4) - overmapping here doesn't fit naah, there's a quite clear bell's sounds at here
03:03:456 (1,2,3) - DS sd
03:11:212 (3,4,5,6) - I'm pretty sure that this happens because you ran out of space while you were mapping lol xd , there

this should be better

03:28:763 (4,5,6) - I'd rather you didn't decrease the spacing here. Doing so provides better consistency and fits better with the music yes
04:30:804 (4) - and I'm pretty sure that this also happens because of you ran out of space lol. Move the whole 04:28:355 (1,2,3) - downwards and continue the pattern. lmao, thanks
01:50:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - A lot of people will get 50 because of that spacing. Something like 05:13:865 (8,1) - is much more preferable alright
05:27:130 (1) - A simple old stacking will do. No need to reverse, it just make the map more messy orz yes
05:31:416 (2,3,4,5) - 447/95 because of the same reason yse
05:43:457 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - uhh... You shouldn't space them randomly like that. Space it according to the timeline. You could even make some pattern from these notes suggestions pls pls

good luck~

LigerZero wrote:

Boleh ikut modding....? Malam sampai sahur palingan aku ngemodding via PM chat FBmu....

Down wrote:

[Ani]
■ 00:23:439 - Add a circle here, then spinner start at 00:23:847 sure
■ 00:29:561 (1) - I think it need a NC, because here is incomplete bar. alright
■ 00:55:684 - How do you think about adding a circle? The vocal sound exist here, and also you followed 00:29:561 - here there
■ 01:50:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is kinda too hard for this diff, consider make it easier. hmm, to be honest I like this one, so umm, I'll keep it for now. What app that you use for checking this lol

Very hard..

■ 01:58:133 - It need a clickable that strong sound and emphasize place, consider reduce the slider length and add a circle here. alright
■ 02:44:459 (2) - It must be Ctrl+G here, can be really confusing a rhythm. okayy
■ 03:32:826 - Same as 01:58:133 - sure
■ 04:02:214 - ^ It is very important for playability of map. hai hai
■ 05:44:663 (1,1) - I don't think this NC is anything necessary, please remove it to avoid misleading. Instead, add here 05:45:071 (2) okayy

This song is really great! I am hopeful of your success for rank.
Good luck!