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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 2, 2017 at 9:08:40 AM

Artist: Ray
Title: Kimi to Ita Sora
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags: Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm ending visual novel eroge sprite fumika kantokun
BPM: 161
Filesize: 25959kb
Play Time: 01:23
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#43 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
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General
i know its still wip but dont forget to fix source and tags



Kanto
widescreen support
00:29:213 - slidertick sound here shouldnt be clap sound
00:37:412 - u can start spinner here instead to map stream so u can map the part at 00:35:921 - properly
01:03:871 (2) - this sound in the song is pretty much same as other claps in the kiai, why use different sample lol


Fumika
00:04:617 (1,1) - flows a bit weird atm maybe try move 2nd slider to around x135 y137 so curve slider is pointing to the straight one
00:31:356 (1) - idrk but i find this nc ไม่จำเป็น
00:53:809 (1,2,1,2,3) - imo this rhythm works better http://puu.sh/oGY2f/08059c81b1.jpg try it pls
01:04:803 (1,2,3) - try ctrl+g rhythm here it fits better with vocal
01:21:200 (1) - maybe do http://puu.sh/oGYcj/80633ef475.jpg instead to map melody xd


Insane
00:17:660 (4,5) - merge this to 1/2 slider follows vocal and plays nicer imoo
00:24:368 (2,3) - maybe change this to 2 kicksliders to map piano
00:42:256 (2) - 00:45:238 (2) - nc? so its constant with 00:39:275 (1) -
00:58:095 (1,2,3,5) - is this blanketing anything?? xd if its not try blanket a circle pls i cant tell
01:20:641 (5,1) - try http://puu.sh/oGYxW/a811de95be.jpg instead to map piano (maybe nc 5 too

good luck!
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Fumika
00:04:617 (1,1) - flows a bit weird atm maybe try move 2nd slider to around x135 y137 so curve slider is pointing to the straight one :arrow: That was my purpose.\
00:31:356 (1) - idrk but i find this nc ไม่จำเป็น :arrow: If it just triplet I wouldn't do that but it's 1/4 kick-slider, of course it needed new combo for that.
00:53:809 (1,2,1,2,3) - imo this rhythm works better http://puu.sh/oGY2f/08059c81b1.jpg try it pls :arrow: It's playable but it will getting bored for me, so no.
01:04:803 (1,2,3) - try ctrl+g rhythm here it fits better with vocal :arrow: In that case, that will break the flow on 01:05:548 - no for this.
01:21:200 (1) - maybe do http://puu.sh/oGYcj/80633ef475.jpg instead to map melody xd :arrow: nah, I want to keep my spinner for the vocal.

good luck!


Thanks for your modding, but no change for me :oops:
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general
lol I thought that cheer was some weird hitsound at first, it's so distracting but I guess it belongs to the song
01:13:188 - some form of whistle for this? high pitched sound is so strong - also for 01:04:244 - 01:05:735 -
01:23:623 - why do you put a whislte on the spinenr but silence it lol. since there is some sound, keeping the whistle and raising volume would be nice


insane
maybe raise od to ~7.5?
00:17:660 (4,5,1) - two things here: 1 could really use some kind of jump instead of being in a low spaced line since it'S pretty strong and that would also be consistent with how you structured your spacing around here. also: 00:17:474 (3,4,5) - makes for really awkward movement as the spacing diffence is huge but the angle is really wide. even sth like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jH2Z4q6a.png would work to solve both things
00:36:294 (2) - would go well with some more emphasis imo
00:38:902 (6,1) - how about spacing this like your other 1/1 gaps instead of stacking?
00:54:927 (1) - suddenly dropping the spacing onto this note doesnt work that well with how the music builds up, so maybe sth like http://i.imgur.com/yUfpwYa.jpg ?
01:20:082 (2,3,4) - could use a little more spacing, you have so much buildup with 01:17:660 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and then suddenly those babyjumps
xd
also 01:20:641 (5) - could work well with a way more acute angle to make it feel more emphasized


fumika
is that nc spam for the intro really needed? making pairs of 2 would make much more sense imo to go better with finishes and strong vocals
00:08:716 (3,1) - idk how you did that, but this is the same comboclor twice in a row which is unrankable lol
http://i.imgur.com/DNmfV4N.jpg
same on 01:19:896 (1,1) - . might have missed some idk, just check for yourself lol
00:13:561 - seems way too strong for a sliderend, how about removing repeat and adding a circle?
00:18:964 (3,4) - only time you stack this pattern and doesnt really work since 4 is quite strong
00:31:356 (1) - this just feels so wrong to play. you click that really weak sound and then end it on cymbal, just put two circles or skip the blue tick imo


normal
looks fine so far lol


kanto
00:17:287 (2,4) - can be a bit easy to misread here since 4 appears so early and 1-2 movement suggests sth like http://i.imgur.com/j4wMCcw.jpg
00:32:194 (2,3) - not covering half the sldier und the last object would be nice lol
01:03:871 (2) - wrong sampleset? dont think you wanted default clap here

seems nice
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TitleUnicode:君といた空
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did fix only nc and add some missing hs :roll:
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344,44,66294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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8,260,70579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,168,70766,2,0,B|68:148|68:148|108:144,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,220,71511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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480,152,73002,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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224,36,74306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,100,74492,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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164,236,75983,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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  • Trun off Widescreen Support
  • Add Tag [a-gain ao no kanata no four rhythm across the blue aokana short version edit tv size ] Please I found Same map


Kanto's Easy



Insane
  • HP - 7.5 / AR - 8 / OD - 7
  • Remove x0.95 Green line (is not good)

I can't Catch problem well.. sorry
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since you will revive this why not take a better mp3? the character voice looks noising and it will distract the players :(
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Kanto's Easy
AR OD -1 HP -1.5
00:32:194 (2,3) - Do not overlap in Easy difficulty!
01:04:244 (3,1) - ^
3/2 sliders sounds offbeat to me. ;w;


Normal
HP+0.5
00:20:269 (3,5) - Avoid this overlap
00:42:256 - This should be clickable
00:44:865 (1) - ^
00:53:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm is too hard for Normal


Fumika's Hard
Gap between Normal and Hard is too large.
AR 7.5 HP 5.5
00:10:579 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Rhythm should be nerfed Same at 00:23:995 (1,2,1,2) - . Use some 1/2 sliders instead.
00:16:915 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Having so many singletaps is imbalancedly difficult for Hard.
00:31:356 (1,1) - This stack is not recommended. It's too hard to read
01:03:685 (4,1) - DS too large

This diff contains too many Insane patterns.


Insane
00:24:368 (2) - This is not a nice rhythm. Player may mistake at when the kick slider ends and cannot hit the 1/4 circle correctly.
00:29:213 (4,5) - No specific reason to use 1/4
00:43:188 (6) - NC

Good luck!
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i want to add video so cutting the mp3 from the show itself is the best choice, as the full ver of this song have different ending so it can't be cut to fit the video.

added easier Hard diff, will check the mods later
thanks :3

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m4m from your queue



Insane
00:17:660 (4,5) - merge this to 1/2 slider follows vocal and plays nicer imoo i prefer notes tbh
00:24:368 (2,3) - maybe change this to 2 kicksliders to map piano yes
00:42:256 (2) - 00:45:238 (2) - nc? so its constant with 00:39:275 (1) -
00:58:095 (1,2,3,5) - is this blanketing anything?? xd if its not try blanket a circle pls i cant tell lol i dont attend it there
01:20:641 (5,1) - try http://puu.sh/oGYxW/a811de95be.jpg instead to map piano (maybe nc 5 too

good luck!


Regraz wrote:


Normal
HP+0.5 ok
00:20:269 (3,5) - Avoid this overlap
00:42:256 - This should be clickable
00:44:865 (1) - ^
00:53:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm is too hard for Normal



Insane
00:24:368 (2) - This is not a nice rhythm. Player may mistake at when the kick slider ends and cannot hit the 1/4 circle correctly. changed
00:29:213 (4,5) - No specific reason to use 1/4
00:43:188 (6) - NC it's per 2 stanza though

Good luck!


Lasse wrote:
m4m lo
mod this thanks: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/446085


general
lol I thought that cheer was some weird hitsound at first, it's so distracting but I guess it belongs to the song hitsound credited to fumika i dont do anything lul
01:13:188 - some form of whistle for this? high pitched sound is so strong - also for 01:04:244 - 01:05:735 -
01:23:623 - why do you put a whislte on the spinenr but silence it lol. since there is some sound, keeping the whistle and raising volume would be nice


insane
maybe raise od to ~7.5? yes
00:17:660 (4,5,1) - two things here: 1 could really use some kind of jump instead of being in a low spaced line since it'S pretty strong and that would also be consistent with how you structured your spacing around here. also: 00:17:474 (3,4,5) - makes for really awkward movement as the spacing diffence is huge but the angle is really wide. even sth like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jH2Z4q6a.png would work to solve both things tbh i kinda want to make it diagonal notes like this
00:36:294 (2) - would go well with some more emphasis imo
00:38:902 (6,1) - how about spacing this like your other 1/1 gaps instead of stacking? nope, it would ruin stuff
00:54:927 (1) - suddenly dropping the spacing onto this note doesnt work that well with how the music builds up, so maybe sth like http://i.imgur.com/yUfpwYa.jpg ?
01:20:082 (2,3,4) - could use a little more spacing, you have so much buildup with 01:17:660 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and then suddenly those babyjumps
xd changed this pattern
also 01:20:641 (5) - could work well with a way more acute angle to make it feel more emphasized

seems nice
gl


still editing hmm
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Since Mochi add his easier Hard diff everything should be fine for the gap between my diff and Normal diff.
It's not really too hard IMO...
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Easy
  • AR3OD2HP2,current setting is way too high.
  • 00:32:194 (2,3) - the overlap in easy plays awkward...try to avoid this.
  • 00:38:902 (1,2,1) - redo the NC here,it's unnecessary to spam.



Normal
  • HP4?



Hard



Insane



Fumika


good luck :)
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