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Owl City - My Everything

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Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
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Kyouren
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 22 Oktober 2016 at 18:08:19

Artist: Owl City
Title: My Everything
Tags: Adam Young Mobile Orchestra Republic Electropop synthpop EDM gokugohan12468 HootOwlStar BoatKrab Exile- Down cut short version
BPM: 90
Filesize: 7192kb
Play Time: 01:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hallelujah! (2,6 stars, 122 notes)
  2. HOS' Easy! (1,44 stars, 55 notes)
  3. Normal! (1,73 stars, 77 notes)
Download: Owl City - My Everything
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old desc
You're always make me smile when i'm feel sad
I'm always listening your sad story
But when we want trying to better life,
We're gone, but we're always together in other life


Diffset:
SPOILER
Easy: by HootOwlStar
Normal: by Me
Hard: by Me

SB: by Me with mercury2009, Mako Sakata, and Bakari help me a bit
Particle: by Down
Rain Effect: by Exile-
Font: by BoatKrab

MP3 used from Peachtrees mapset but cutter by me (Hitsound taken from him/her mapset too) (Thank you, Peachtrees >w<b)
Timing check by Invertable (Thank you :3)
Last edited by Kyouren , edited 40 times in total.
Hitorikko
301 posts
Joined August 2013
Hitorikko
Normal
00:12:445 (2) - align with the slider ?
00:13:445 (3) - replace with just a note, sounds better IMO
00:19:445 (1) - ctrl + J ?
00:51:445 (1,2) - bow needs a little fixing

Happy Brithday! <3
00:16:779 (1,2,3) - weird flow IMO
00:43:445 (1) - ctrl + J ? for better flow

Nice SB :D ! good luck !
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kyouren

Hitorikko wrote:

Normal
00:12:445 (2) - align with the slider ? That's not sound in red tick!
00:13:445 (3) - replace with just a note, sounds better IMO I don't see problem :/
00:19:445 (1) - ctrl + J ?
00:51:445 (1,2) - bow needs a little fixing It's blanket lol!

Happy Brithday! <3
00:16:779 (1,2,3) - weird flow IMO Not really! :<
00:43:445 (1) - ctrl + J ? for better flow

Nice SB :D ! good luck !
No comment = Fixed!
Thank you for mod! <3

Upgrade! :3
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
♥
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
Alelunha

Happy Birtyday

00:53:445 (6,2) - I Don't like this, in gameplay is weird, i recommendo to you do same "stack" with this objects

all is good for me ;-; sorry

starrrrrrrr
Froskya
1,231 posts
Joined April 2014
Froskya
Hi!~ Mod from #modreqs~

HOS' Easy

  1. 00:17:779 (2) - too very low (i'm about high) slider, up it some
  2. 00:57:779 (2) - ^
  3. 00:28:445 (2) - ctrl + H
  4. 00:48:779 (1) - end of slider replace to x:240 y:120
  5. 01:03:112 (2) - rotate for smooth jump to next circle
Normal

  1. 00:14:112 (1) - maybe this slider do looks like that, if you want smooth jump to circle?
  2. 00:15:779 (3,1) - this part not smooth jumping, try rotate they for get result
  3. 00:19:445 (1) - end of slider replace to x:164 y:332
  4. 00:21:445 (3) - do straigth slider for smooth jump
  5. 00:24:112 (3) - ctrl + J
  6. 00:29:445 (4) - ^
  7. 00:34:112 (3) - ^
  8. 00:42:779 (3) - ^
  9. 00:26:445 (3) - ctrl + H
  10. 00:30:112 (1,2) - rotate for smooth jump to next circle
  11. 00:44:445 (2,3) - ^
    00:59:445 (1,2,3) - rotate for smooth jump to next slider and after to next circle
  12. 01:04:779 (1) - ctrl + J and some rotate
That's all!~ Good luck!~~
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kyouren

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ Mod from #modreqs~

Normal

  1. 00:14:112 (1) - maybe this slider do looks like that, if you want smooth jump to circle?. Nah, I keep to used that slider :3
  2. 00:15:779 (3,1) - this part not smooth jumping, try rotate they for get result. It's blanket, i trying to blanket that part ._.
  3. 00:19:445 (1) - end of slider replace to x:164 y:332
  4. 00:21:445 (3) - do straigth slider for smooth jump. It's weird :/
  5. 00:24:112 (3) - ctrl + J
  6. 00:29:445 (4) - ^. I trying to following the flow
  7. 00:34:112 (3) - ^
  8. 00:42:779 (3) - ^. I trying to following the flow too
  9. 00:26:445 (3) - ctrl + H. It's weird ._.
  10. 00:30:112 (1,2) - rotate for smooth jump to next circle. It's blanket ._.
  11. 00:44:445 (2,3) - ^. ^
    00:59:445 (1,2,3) - rotate for smooth jump to next slider and after to next circle. ^
  12. 01:04:779 (1) - ctrl + J and some rotate. I trying to following the flow
That's all!~ Good luck!~~
No comment = Fixed
Thank you for mod! :3

Upgrade and waiting HootOwlStar! :3
Narrow Minds
Narrow Minds
Nice map. :3
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kyouren

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ Mod from #modreqs~

HOS' Easy

  1. 00:17:779 (2) - too very low (i'm about high) slider, up it some
  2. 00:57:779 (2) - ^
  3. 00:28:445 (2) - ctrl + H. Bad flow :c
  4. 00:48:779 (1) - end of slider replace to x:240 y:120 Too near lol
  5. 01:03:112 (2) - rotate for smooth jump to next circle. Bad flow ;w;
That's all!~ Good luck!~~
Thank you for mod! :3
Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
Hello from my queue!

HOS' Easy
00:14:112 (1,2) - Make end of the 00:14:112 (1) parallel
Nice diff!

Normal
00:15:779 (3,1) - Fix blanket
00:48:779 (1,3) - It's too hard to read for beginners
00:51:445 (1,3) - ^
00:53:445 (5,1) - Blanket (in my opinion) looks better than this

Hallelujah!
00:34:112 (3) - Ctrl + H?

Sorry for short mod, but I'm not very good modder! Ill shoot you a star!
GOOD LUCK! ^^

<3 THIS STORYBOARD
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kyouren

Chalwa wrote:

Hello from my queue!

HOS' Easy
00:14:112 (1,2) - Make end of the 00:14:112 (1) parallel
Nice diff!

Normal
00:15:779 (3,1) - Fix blanket. Fixed a bit!
00:48:779 (1,3) - It's too hard to read for beginners. It's overlap
00:51:445 (1,3) - ^
00:53:445 (5,1) - Blanket (in my opinion) looks better than this. Hmm?

Hallelujah!
00:34:112 (3) - Ctrl + H? Bad flows :(

Sorry for short mod, but I'm not very good modder! Ill shoot you a star!
GOOD LUCK! ^^

<3 THIS STORYBOARD
Thank you for mod :3
Upgrade!
Invertable
522 posts
Joined March 2014
Invertable
Hi man
I'm not some op high quality mapper but i liked the song and wanted to help a little bit! :)

Idk but while I was listening to the song i realised that your offset is kinda too early in my opinion its 821 (but maybe I'm wrong you never know try to listen to it few more times just to make sure).
I think it would be kinda nicer that you put 2 circles on this place
Hallelujah!
00:10:821 (1,2) - (this is with my offset) Because its hardest diff :)
01:07:112 (6) - Maybe new combo here ?
Not to big mod but i think it might be useful tho. :)
Good luck with your map!
Last edited by Invertable , edited 1 time in total.
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
Hey Kitty! I think Invertable is right about the offset, tell me when you fix anything you need to fix so I proceed to mod your map~
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kyouren
@Invertable: Thank you for timing check! (I think your offset is fine than Peachtrees maps, because i cut this mp3 used from him/her maps xd)
-Fixed a new combo
-No change 00:10:821 (1,2) - because it's not harder, since this song is slow so it's fine

@ezek: Okay! :3

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Invertable
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Joined March 2014
Invertable
01:07:487 (1) - remove this combo :)
forgot to write that!
Star not needed
Kyouren
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Topic Starter
Kyouren
OK! :3
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache

Hey! as requested... long time ago ;w;

HOS' Easy!
  1. 00:16:821 (1) - If the tail of this slider pointed directly to the next slider, it would be easier for beginners since the movement would be more natural, you can curve it like this. Do you see how it points more towards the next slider creating an easier flow?
  2. 00:56:821 (1) - I say the same thing about this one, but you could use this flow-friendly shape here so it doesn't look similar to the next slider (because doing the same shape as the previous suggestion would make it look similar but weird at the same time)~
Nothing else to complain, really neat!

Normal!
  1. 00:15:154 (2) - You can take advantage of this note to make a blanket with the previous slider, like this. Also, if you do it, the flow would be more similar to the one from slider (3) to slider (1), which fits perfectly imo~
  2. 00:38:154 (3) - I can see this is a bad blanket in-game, you may want to fix it a little~
  3. 00:42:821 (3,1) - ^

Hallelujah!
  1. 00:12:154 (2,3) - You can stack them perfectly~
  2. 01:05:321 (3) - You may want to incline it like this just like you did with 01:07:154 (1) - for visual consistency
There are some bad blankets, but they're not worthy to mention, there's nothing else I can see here; this is a very well done map and is... short, so there's not much to look around~

Good luck!
Luel Roseline
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Joined February 2014
Luel Roseline
Beep Beep!

[Hallelujah!]
00:38:487 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/pr135/fda7ecd37a.jpg

Oh wait...Where's Hard diff?
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kyouren

S A V E R Y wrote:

Oh wait...Where's Hard diff? Hallelujah! it's hard diff! :)
Fixed all! Thank you for mod :3
Upgrade >w<
Invertable
522 posts
Joined March 2014
Invertable
Hi (me again)
Hallelujah! diff
In my first mod i said that u need to put 2 circles on this place 00:10:821 (1,2,1) - the reason i said that is because you have the exact place here where u put 2 circles 00:21:487 (3,4,1) - i think you need to put 2 circles on that first place or remove those 2
00:40:821 (1,2,3,4) - slider u made here looks kinda bad :S and its a bad flow with the next few notes since the map is for beginners it needs to run smoothly so try to do slider like this http://prntscr.com/bnysp0
00:45:487 (5,1) - you need a circle in between those 2 sliders better flow and since u put a circle on every slider like this http://prntscr.com/bnytdo try to do it again on that place since u mapped in a style that u put a circle and then slider on the same place. This place is the great example 00:48:154 (7,8,1,2,3) - its the exact melody only the words aren't the same
00:46:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this place here also feels kinda weird to play.Its the same melody as this part here 00:51:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and that place feels amazing and its smooth.
00:58:821 (5,1) - u need a circle in between those sliders too i mean this place is exactly the same 01:01:487 (5,6,1) - but u put circle between them :S
01:03:487 (3,4) - this place feels weird to play i missed 2 times on that place. Kappa
That is it from me!
Good luck with your map! :)
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