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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 15. März 2017 at 17:49:05

Artist: MUZIK SERVANT feat.CHERICa
Title: Over the Starlit sky
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: konami bemani zun touhou 東方Project otomekan wotaku no koma ラクトガール ~ 少女密室 Locked Girl ~ The Girl's Secret Room stage 4 boss theme Patchouli Knowledge パチュリー・ノーレッジ 東方紅魔郷 ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil Magical Thrash 音召缶 sdvx 2 東方紅魔郷リミックス楽曲コンテスト EOSD Remix Contest
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4075kb
Play Time: 01:37
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MUZIK SERVANT feat.CHERICa - Over the Starlit sky


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Lunatic
00:20:564 (20564|0) - i suggest move it to 3, for better flow
00:23:307 (23307|0,23393|2) - ctrl + j for same reason
00:17:993 (17993|3) - i suggest move it to 3
00:44:393 (44393|3,44393|0,44393|2) - i think, no need 3 in here :c
01:01:879 - add note in 1?
yep just all


Hard
00:19:793 (19793|2,19879|3) - ctrl + j for better flow
01:27:764 (87764|2,87850|3) - i think it will be great if you ctrl + j this
wow :c


Normal
00:35:136 (35136|1) - move to 3?
00:44:736 (44736|2) - move to 4, then, 00:45:079 (45079|1) - move to 1, pitch
01:31:707 (91707|2,91879|3) - ctrl + j?
01:37:879 - why not put LN in ending? like Lunatic and Hard


Easy
00:49:879 (49879|3) - end it in 00:50:564 - , and then 00:50:564 (50564|1) - change it into LN, different pitch
well, nice diff xD


good luck feeru nyan /o/
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Lunatic
00:12:079 - TBH i feel a bit weird when playing around this section, kinds of underwhelming imo. maybe because of this 1/4 melody sound that i heard? Try to rearrange a bit imo. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4729696
00:20:564 (20564|0) - this kinda weird in finger when i testplay it, maybe move this somewhere?
00:26:393 - Delete? not cymbal sound
00:40:107 - maybe add notes here? maybe you want to keep it consistent with triple before this, but add double here fit the song imo. and make consistent as 00:48:336 -
00:44:393 - i think reduce one note here?
00:50:279 (50279|3,50336|2) - Ctrl+G this? it fits perfectly compared with if it's the same as 00:50:736 (50736|3,50821|2) -
00:53:307 - Hmm, why is this triple? i can understand at 00:53:650 - because it does have low cymbal sound, but this doesn't.
00:55:707 (55707|3,55707|1,56050|3,56050|1,56393|3,56393|1) - I don't think it's good to make these double at the same column when only 00:56:050 (56050|1,56050|3,56393|3,56393|1) - fits in due to vocal, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4729505 ?
00:57:936 (57936|3) - move to 2, AND move 00:58:107 (58107|1) - to 1.


Hard
00:45:764 - It seems that you want to put only double to avoid jack, but i think it's alright to add here, since the jack is very light even with that.
00:56:564 - I think it's better if you add here and delete the 1/4.. it's better to focus at the beat instead of sudden snare sound imo.
00:10:793 - it is intentional to double at the start of stream? bcause 01:00:164 - adn 01:37:193 - only use single as start of stream.
01:32:393 - It is intentional to not add note for cymbal?


Normal
00:13:879 (13879|2,14221|0) - Ctrl+G this?
00:20:907 - add here? practically the same part as 01:34:964 (94964|3) -
00:22:707 (22707|1) - move to 3? because of 00:22:021 (22021|1,22279|1,22964|1) -
00:27:250 - add here? make it consistent as 00:49:193 -
00:28:964 - I think it's alright to add here, give a bit impact
00:40:279 (40279|3) - move to 3? make it consistent triple jack like 00:34:450 (34450|1,34793|1,35136|1) -
00:42:679 (42679|2) - I don't think this should be jack o.o , because it's not near the other double like 00:12:850 (12850|2,12850|3,13193|0,13193|2) -
00:48:336 - also add, because to make it consistent as 01:34:964 -
01:13:021 (73021|1) - i think it would be more fit to move this to 4, and then move 01:13:193 (73193|3) - to 2.
01:24:507 (84507|1,84679|2) - Ctrl+G this? give more variety since it's the same as 01:25:193 (85193|1,85364|2) -
01:36:507 (96507|3) - move to 2? different pitch.


Easy
00:23:136 - add to make it consistent as 01:35:136 -
00:26:564 - also here.
00:49:879 - add for cymbal.
01:11:479 (71479|0) - move this to 3, and move 01:11:821 (71821|2) - to 1.
01:13:193 - from here, i kinda noticed the same pattern repeated around 3-4 times, considered to variate it?
01:22:793 - also add for cymbal. like 00:45:764 -

Sorry if it's not much, your map is great already :D
good luck :3
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MUZIK SERVANT feat.CHERICa - Over the Starlit sky


1|2|3|4

Lunatic
00:20:564 (20564|0) - i suggest move it to 3, for better flow Thats nice
00:23:307 (23307|0,23393|2) - ctrl + j for same reason Yeah nice
00:17:993 (17993|3) - i suggest move it to 3 I keep these here because the 3 chords belong togehter. 1-4, 2-3, 1-4
00:44:393 (44393|3,44393|0,44393|2) - i think, no need 3 in here :c Good catch. Deleted a note and arranged
01:01:879 - add note in 1? Not Strong enough for an extra note, i think
yep just all


Hard
00:19:793 (19793|2,19879|3) - ctrl + j for better flow Looks good
01:27:764 (87764|2,87850|3) - i think it will be great if you ctrl + j this Hm here i think mine plays fine /:
wow :c


Normal
00:35:136 (35136|1) - move to 3? Arranged in other wy
00:44:736 (44736|2) - move to 4, then, 00:45:079 (45079|1) - move to 1, pitch Why not
01:31:707 (91707|2,91879|3) - ctrl + j? Done and arranged
01:37:879 - why not put LN in ending? like Lunatic and Hard I want to make this one on the two highest diffs :3


Easy
00:49:879 (49879|3) - end it in 00:50:564 - , and then 00:50:564 (50564|1) - change it into LN, different pitch That would be a Good idea, but it wouldn't work here. The 1st and 2nd LN are for the Drumroll and this one follows the Vocal
well, nice diff xD Thank you


good luck feeru nyan /o/


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Lunatic
00:12:079 - TBH i feel a bit weird when playing around this section, kinds of underwhelming imo. maybe because of this 1/4 melody sound that i heard? Try to rearrange a bit imo. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4729696 I didn't really like this Part too and you give me an idea to try something out. I changed in an other way.
00:20:564 (20564|0) - this kinda weird in finger when i testplay it, maybe move this somewhere? Yep, already moved
00:26:393 - Delete? not cymbal sound Uhh i can hear it, very clear and loud xd
00:40:107 - maybe add notes here? maybe you want to keep it consistent with triple before this, but add double here fit the song imo. and make consistent as 00:48:336 - I know what you mean here but i think the sound is not clear enough. The Crash is way more audible here and thats what i try to emphasize. Adding a Double (or even a stair for the drumroll) would break it a bit here and would be bit weird to play
00:44:393 - i think reduce one note here? Yep!
00:50:279 (50279|3,50336|2) - Ctrl+G this? it fits perfectly compared with if it's the same as 00:50:736 (50736|3,50821|2) - Niiiiice!
00:53:307 - Hmm, why is this triple? i can understand at 00:53:650 - because it does have low cymbal sound, but this doesn't. When you listen closely you can maybe here there are tree "dun" sounds. (idk how to explain it haha) and these i Mapped with a 3-Noted Chord. I already tried with only two but somehow it feels weird and if something was missing here.
00:55:707 (55707|3,55707|1,56050|3,56050|1,56393|3,56393|1) - I don't think it's good to make these double at the same column when only 00:56:050 (56050|1,56050|3,56393|3,56393|1) - fits in due to vocal, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4729505 ? Nice catch. Arranged
00:57:936 (57936|3) - move to 2, AND move 00:58:107 (58107|1) - to 1. No change here. I think its fine :3


Hard
00:45:764 - It seems that you want to put only double to avoid jack, but i think it's alright to add here, since the jack is very light even with that. whoops. I just forget it there lol. Fixed
00:56:564 - I think it's better if you add here and delete the 1/4.. it's better to focus at the beat instead of sudden snare sound imo. Yeah thats kinda nice
00:10:793 - it is intentional to double at the start of stream? bcause 01:00:164 - adn 01:37:193 - only use single as start of stream. Keep. This one has just 1/2 Single notes before the stream, so it is okay. 01:00:164 - has no cymbal and 01:37:193 - has 3 Noted Chordmash before the stream starts. (:
01:32:393 - It is intentional to not add note for cymbal? Added here for now.


Normal
00:13:879 (13879|2,14221|0) - Ctrl+G this? oke
00:20:907 - add here? practically the same part as 01:34:964 (94964|3) - whoops
00:22:707 (22707|1) - move to 3? because of 00:22:021 (22021|1,22279|1,22964|1) - Sure
00:27:250 - add here? make it consistent as 00:49:193 - Ayy blame me. How i couldn't see this
00:28:964 - I think it's alright to add here, give a bit impact Yeah it feels okay
00:40:279 (40279|3) - move to 3? make it consistent triple jack like 00:34:450 (34450|1,34793|1,35136|1) - Wew nice
00:42:679 (42679|2) - I don't think this should be jack o.o , because it's not near the other double like 00:12:850 (12850|2,12850|3,13193|0,13193|2) - arranged with previous point (:
00:48:336 - also add, because to make it consistent as 01:34:964 - Done and arranged this part
01:13:021 (73021|1) - i think it would be more fit to move this to 4, and then move 01:13:193 (73193|3) - to 2. I like!
01:24:507 (84507|1,84679|2) - Ctrl+G this? give more variety since it's the same as 01:25:193 (85193|1,85364|2) - Good point
01:36:507 (96507|3) - move to 2? different pitch. Arranged in other way


Easy
00:23:136 - add to make it consistent as 01:35:136 - Nope. After a 1/2 Beat Note i don't want to use a chord here :c
00:26:564 - also here.
00:49:879 - add for cymbal. Rejected both because of same reason
01:11:479 (71479|0) - move this to 3, and move 01:11:821 (71821|2) - to 1. Thats cool
01:13:193 - from here, i kinda noticed the same pattern repeated around 3-4 times, considered to variate it? Nah i keep the Easy simple.
01:22:793 - also add for cymbal. like 00:45:764 - oke

Sorry if it's not much, your map is great already :D
good luck :3


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Easy
umm 00:06:164 - maybe better >> http://puu.sh/nICCd/f44fdfaf40.jpg


Normal
00:17:650 - hmm >> http://puu.sh/nICOq/d27e19d03b.jpg
00:48:850 (48850|1) - i hear a drum in there, add ?


Hard
00:07:193 (7193|2) - ?? :v delete ?
01:00:164 (60164|3,60250|2,60336|0,60421|1,60507|2,60593|0) - make this stairs ? >> http://puu.sh/nID9T/7e4d71155c.jpg


Lunatic
ahhhh, i cant find problem this diff T.T
to perfect i guess :v


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Easy
umm 00:06:164 - maybe better >> http://puu.sh/nICCd/f44fdfaf40.jpg Mine fit better to pitch D:


Normal
00:17:650 - hmm >> http://puu.sh/nICOq/d27e19d03b.jpg Sure why not
00:48:850 (48850|1) - i hear a drum in there, add ? Two notes here would be here too much


Hard
00:07:193 (7193|2) - ?? :v delete ? Hm.. will keep it for now. There is a sound and this Note flows really good with the previous chords. Will consider to remove it should someone else also mention it
01:00:164 (60164|3,60250|2,60336|0,60421|1,60507|2,60593|0) - make this stairs ? >> http://puu.sh/nID9T/7e4d71155c.jpg Thats not bad, but here is it my personal taste. I doesn't like such zig zag stairs so i don't want to use them


Lunatic
ahhhh, i cant find problem this diff T.T
to perfect i guess :v lol thank you


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I did not listen to hitsounds at all btw

lunatic
00:07:193 (7193|3,7193|2) - doesn't really warrant a double, single should be fine here
00:08:393 - double here for the snare
00:09:936 (9936|1) - barely audible could probably remove. if you do keep it, there's a 1/4 that's just as audible as this one on 00:10:021 -
00:11:479 - pet peeve. to me, doesn't make sense to have a hand here, forces a minijack that doesn't make sense. remove triple probably. (this goes for every triple after a jumpjack section lol)
00:16:364 (16364|2) - remove
00:17:050 (17050|2) - remove
00:17:736 - note here
00:17:907 - note here
00:22:364 - note here
00:25:964 - note
00:28:964 - starting in this section, layering i feel like can be ramped up alot. it's the same exact layering pattern as the Hard diff, and I feel like you can expand on this so much - you drop to only layering the drums, and there's a synth, and more importantly, a vocal layer that's pretty prominent in the track. I personally think that it would do good if you revisited and made this section different than the hard other than just patterning differences.
for example, 00:39:764 - 00:39:850 - there can be notes here because there's a snare in the background that happens which would make this section feel much more dynamic, rather than just 1/2 stuff which feels kinda boring for the Lunatic diff.
00:50:221 (50221|1,50279|2,50336|3,50393|1) - pattern should be 3 notes on 1/8 starting on 00:50:307 -
00:51:250 - same story here, layering in vocals would add some reaaally cool syncopation imo
00:56:479 (56479|0,56650|3) - i can barely hear these, consider removing
00:56:736 - you could also try doing stuff related to pitch relavancy with the vocals which might turn out pretty cool
(the following are ghost notes)
01:05:564 (65564|1) - remove
01:10:536 (70536|2) - remove
01:11:050 (71050|2) - remove
01:11:564 (71564|0,71736|1) - remove
01:16:021 (76021|1) - remove
01:16:536 (76536|1) - remove
01:21:507 (81507|1) - remove
01:25:279 (85279|3) - remove
01:25:279 (85279|3) - note here
01:27:679 - note here
either add a note 01:30:421 - here or remove 01:30:764 (90764|0) - this
01:31:450 - add
01:32:307 - add
01:35:907 - add
01:36:164 - add
01:36:421 - add
01:37:879 (97879|0) - should cutoff like 01:39:079 - (fix for Hard diff as well)

overall the synth sections are pretty wonky in terms of how accurately you're representing it. At least for the Lunatic diff, I really recommend layering some more stuff to the vocals to make it stick out much more from the hard. also personally i would suggest removing the triples at the end of jumpjack sets because they're dumb. Overall though patterning seems fine, and kinda follows through with how the synth goes. I'm not going to comment on the same note removal and addition for the other difficulties.

hard
00:06:164 (6164|1,6164|0,6336|3,6336|1,6507|0,6507|2,6679|3,6679|2,6850|0,6850|1,7021|2,7021|1) - things like this can be PRed to look something like http://puu.sh/nQlHI/9eb405b31b.png to actually represent the pitch which is cool and the jacks add a little more flavor
00:10:793 (10793|3,10793|0,10879|2,10964|1,11050|3,11136|0,11221|1,11307|2,11393|0,11479|1,11479|3) - yeah definitely revise the Lunatic jumptrill with hands. this is literally 2 floors down in difficulty compared to the jumptrill with the triple transition in the end.
00:15:593 (15593|1,15593|2) - i can see why you have a double at the start of each phrase, but going with the actual emphasis in the song, it doesn't really make sense and I think a single for these instances would be fine for the most part (if you fix it here, you'd need to go through the whole file and fix it)
00:17:650 (17650|1,17650|0,17821|2,17821|3,17993|0,17993|1) - places like this, just keep streaming, the notes added should pretty much reflect the layering of the notes in the Lunatic diff, minus the actual patterning and jumps on the kick drum
01:05:564 (65564|2) - just a note to remember to remove the stuff that needs to be nixed
01:23:479 (83479|2,83479|3,83650|1,83650|2,83821|0,83821|1) - mirror this for PR

you could probably experiment a lot more with pitch relevancy, since the difficulty is a bit easier. Again, make sure to fix the misrhythms (ghost notes and extraneous notes) with the synth stuff

Normal
00:10:793 - maybe continue the 1/2 pattern through this hold for posterity
00:29:307 - when your layering for lunatic is the same as hard /and/ normal, please go back and do the lunatic difficulty pls

solid. you could i guess go through and focus a bit more on PR but kinda unnecessary I guess unless you really want to go back through it.

Easy
00:09:593 (9593|0,9764|2) - little PR things throughout the song that I really don't think I should need to point out - having this be like a 32 instead of a 13 would make the pattern much more intuitive especially for players who are playing the Easy diff, since hey look, the melody is going down, so the note are going to the left!
00:17:650 (17650|3) - move to 3? fun pattern recognition, a 323 trill is a lot more easy to recognize how to hit than 423
00:27:936 (27936|2) - move to 2, single hand dependence in Easy diff is a little bit much i think?
00:41:650 (41650|1) - makes sense and feels better with what you're going for if you move this to 1
00:43:021 (43021|0) - and this to 2
00:51:250 (51250|2) - pseudo hand, either remove this, or at least move to 2
01:37:879 (97879|2) - same as ^, to 1

most of the mods for easy are pretty superfluous, and only serve to kinda make it easier for beginner level player who struggle with this kind of difficulty of map to play better. up to you to apply most of these mods
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I did not listen to hitsounds at all btw

lunatic
00:07:193 (7193|3,7193|2) - doesn't really warrant a double, single should be fine here Ok
00:08:393 - double here for the snare But i follow the melody + kicks with me chords.
00:09:936 (9936|1) - barely audible could probably remove. if you do keep it, there's a 1/4 that's just as audible as this one on 00:10:021 - Removed
00:11:479 - pet peeve. to me, doesn't make sense to have a hand here, forces a minijack that doesn't make sense. remove triple probably. (this goes for every triple after a jumpjack section lol) Emphasized the crash, i often use these kind of pattern so i don't see any problem.
00:16:364 (16364|2) - remove
00:17:050 (17050|2) - remove
00:17:736 - note here
00:17:907 - note here
00:22:364 - note here
00:25:964 - note Sorry but all these makes no sense for me ?_? Removing notes whle 1/4 and adding notes when i emphasize clearly instruments for variety..
00:28:964 - starting in this section, layering i feel like can be ramped up alot. it's the same exact layering pattern as the Hard diff, and I feel like you can expand on this so much - you drop to only layering the drums, and there's a synth, and more importantly, a vocal layer that's pretty prominent in the track. I personally think that it would do good if you revisited and made this section different than the hard other than just patterning differences.
for example, 00:39:764 - 00:39:850 - there can be notes here because there's a snare in the background that happens which would make this section feel much more dynamic, rather than just 1/2 stuff which feels kinda boring for the Lunatic diff. I get your point here, and i tried different things already but i just can't find pattern that I like. Why should i add notes which are for me very uncomfortable to play. I tried following vocals, background instruments, everything. But i didn't like anything of this. But i like this Buildup. 1/2 with breaks -> 1/2 without breaks etc.
00:50:221 (50221|1,50279|2,50336|3,50393|1) - pattern should be 3 notes on 1/8 starting on 00:50:307 - pretty hard to hear for me here so i trust you, changed and arranged!
00:51:250 - same story here, layering in vocals would add some reaaally cool syncopation imo But i don't really like layer vocals here qwq
00:56:479 (56479|0,56650|3) - i can barely hear these, consider removing Keep it for now, plays cool and i can hear it.
00:56:736 - you could also try doing stuff related to pitch relavancy with the vocals which might turn out pretty cool
(the following are ghost notes)
01:05:564 (65564|1) - remove
01:10:536 (70536|2) - remove
01:11:050 (71050|2) - remove
01:11:564 (71564|0,71736|1) - remove
01:16:021 (76021|1) - remove
01:16:536 (76536|1) - remove
01:21:507 (81507|1) - remove
01:25:279 (85279|3) - remove
01:25:279 (85279|3) - note here
01:27:679 - note here
either add a note 01:30:421 - here or remove 01:30:764 (90764|0) - this
01:31:450 - add
01:32:307 - add
01:35:907 - add
01:36:164 - add
01:36:421 - add Okay i'm pretty sure most of notes i should remove are wrong, yes i removed like 1-2 but i'm pretty sure remaining are fine. I also added some notes but not everywhere, will not point out every one now.
01:37:879 (97879|0) - should cutoff like 01:39:079 - (fix for Hard diff as well) fixed

overall the synth sections are pretty wonky in terms of how accurately you're representing it. At least for the Lunatic diff, I really recommend layering some more stuff to the vocals to make it stick out much more from the hard. also personally i would suggest removing the triples at the end of jumpjack sets because they're dumb. Overall though patterning seems fine, and kinda follows through with how the synth goes. I'm not going to comment on the same note removal and addition for the other difficulties.

hard
00:06:164 (6164|1,6164|0,6336|3,6336|1,6507|0,6507|2,6679|3,6679|2,6850|0,6850|1,7021|2,7021|1) - things like this can be PRed to look something like http://puu.sh/nQlHI/9eb405b31b.png to actually represent the pitch which is cool and the jacks add a little more flavor Thats actually pretty cool. I will give it a try thanks!
00:10:793 (10793|3,10793|0,10879|2,10964|1,11050|3,11136|0,11221|1,11307|2,11393|0,11479|1,11479|3) - yeah definitely revise the Lunatic jumptrill with hands. this is literally 2 floors down in difficulty compared to the jumptrill with the triple transition in the end. I don't really get what you want to tell me.. sorry D:
00:15:593 (15593|1,15593|2) - i can see why you have a double at the start of each phrase, but going with the actual emphasis in the song, it doesn't really make sense and I think a single for these instances would be fine for the most part (if you fix it here, you'd need to go through the whole file and fix it) Hm.. i will keep it for now but maybe i consider to change it because it could have spread problems with Normal
00:17:650 (17650|1,17650|0,17821|2,17821|3,17993|0,17993|1) - places like this, just keep streaming, the notes added should pretty much reflect the layering of the notes in the Lunatic diff, minus the actual patterning and jumps on the kick drum I follow here the pretty audible melody and i think it's kinda nice variety c:
01:05:564 (65564|2) - just a note to remember to remove the stuff that needs to be nixed Why should i remove this? Can't you hear the 1/4 sounds in this part? Pretty audible o.o
01:23:479 (83479|2,83479|3,83650|1,83650|2,83821|0,83821|1) - mirror this for PR Sure!

you could probably experiment a lot more with pitch relevancy, since the difficulty is a bit easier. Again, make sure to fix the misrhythms (ghost notes and extraneous notes) with the synth stuff

Normal
00:10:793 - maybe continue the 1/2 pattern through this hold for posterity Uhh no. The sound get's faster here and i want to keep it only with LN
00:29:307 - when your layering for lunatic is the same as hard /and/ normal, please go back and do the lunatic difficulty pls Don't really a problem here and why not to do it. This part is way more calm than the remaining song, it's hard to make here a spread for all difficultys different. Thats why i will keep it.

solid. you could i guess go through and focus a bit more on PR but kinda unnecessary I guess unless you really want to go back through it.

Easy
00:09:593 (9593|0,9764|2) - little PR things throughout the song that I really don't think I should need to point out - having this be like a 32 instead of a 13 would make the pattern much more intuitive especially for players who are playing the Easy diff, since hey look, the melody is going down, so the note are going to the left! Why not, also arranged next notes a bit
00:17:650 (17650|3) - move to 3? fun pattern recognition, a 323 trill is a lot more easy to recognize how to hit than 423 Yup!
00:27:936 (27936|2) - move to 2, single hand dependence in Easy diff is a little bit much i think? Yeah you're right
00:41:650 (41650|1) - makes sense and feels better with what you're going for if you move this to 1
00:43:021 (43021|0) - and this to 2 Both accepted!
00:51:250 (51250|2) - pseudo hand, either remove this, or at least move to 2
01:37:879 (97879|2) - same as ^, to 1All accepted!

most of the mods for easy are pretty superfluous, and only serve to kinda make it easier for beginner level player who struggle with this kind of difficulty of map to play better. up to you to apply most of these mods


Thanks for the Mod and sorry for the late reply :)
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Hi Feerum!~

mod incoming xD
sorry for 3 months delay lol
Column = 1|2|3|4



Lunatic
- 00:20:736 (20736|2,20907|0) - maybe switch columns? the pressure is in the left side in 00:20:307 and 00:20:736 , making the chord jack kinda uncomfortable
- umm... 01:32:221 (92221|3) - move to 1? idk but for me this chords is uncomfortable, that triple jack should be okay but the flow from the right side here 01:31:536 causing the strain for the right hand
- nice~


Easy
- 01:07:707 (67707|2) - move to 2, for some presence in 2


Normal
- 01:21:250 - add note, since you add here 01:34:964 which is kinda similar


im fine with how the pattern works... so it just kinda short.... really, this map is so good
good job Fee xD <3
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Hi Feerum!~

mod incoming xD
sorry for 3 months delay lol
Column = 1|2|3|4



Lunatic
- 00:20:736 (20736|2,20907|0) - maybe switch columns? the pressure is in the left side in 00:20:307 and 00:20:736 , making the chord jack kinda uncomfortable Oki
- umm... 01:32:221 (92221|3) - move to 1? idk but for me this chords is uncomfortable, that triple jack should be okay but the flow from the right side here 01:31:536 causing the strain for the right hand Arranged in other way :)
- nice~


Easy
- 01:07:707 (67707|2) - move to 2, for some presence in 2 oki


Normal
- 01:21:250 - add note, since you add here 01:34:964 which is kinda similar Sure!


im fine with how the pattern works... so it just kinda short.... really, this map is so good
good job Fee xD <3


Thank you Sora :)
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2016-04-15 21:59 Vulkin: ok i found one single thing
2016-04-15 21:59 Vulkin: one
2016-04-15 21:59 Vulkin: tfw you lose the part
2016-04-15 21:59 Feerum: Hu
2016-04-15 21:59 Feerum: where
2016-04-15 21:59 Feerum: what
2016-04-15 22:00 Vulkin: 00:48:593 - around here
2016-04-15 22:00 Feerum: hu what is here
2016-04-15 22:01 Vulkin: 00:49:021 (49021|2) - move to leftleft column
2016-04-15 22:01 Vulkin: on normal
2016-04-15 22:02 Feerum: Oh why?
2016-04-15 22:03 Feerum: hm ok i think i know why
2016-04-15 22:03 Feerum: but i arranged it in an other way, like diiiiis http://puu.sh/ojHMj/a014935554.png
2016-04-15 22:03 Feerum: should be gud
2016-04-15 22:03 Vulkin: close enough lol
2016-04-15 22:04 Feerum: and arranged previous pattern so i can keep the style i mapped here
2016-04-15 22:04 Feerum: i'm good
2016-04-15 22:05 Vulkin: so thats the only thing i found rn
2016-04-15 22:05 Vulkin: wait doesnt it that makes the left left column a bit too empty there
2016-04-15 22:06 Vulkin: its been a heck of a while since i modded mania tbh so idk ;w;
2016-04-15 22:06 Feerum: nah its ok
2016-04-15 22:07 Vulkin: your so pro ;w;
2016-04-15 22:07 Vulkin: teach me sensei
2016-04-15 22:07 Feerum: lmao
2016-04-15 22:08 Feerum: Well thank you
2016-04-15 22:08 Vulkin: no problem
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Thanks Vulkin.
Gives me good idea to arrange a part and make it better to play c:
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column 1 2 3 4

Easy
00:05:650 (5650|2) - move to 4? make the pitch a little different from 00:06:164 (6164|2,6336|1) -
00:12:164 (12164|3) - sound are not really audible here, i think is best to remove it and catch those loud kick like 00:12:507 (12507|1) - here better
00:18:164 - u missed the melody here which is the same as 00:17:650 (17650|2,17821|1,17993|2) -
00:20:907 - 00:21:250 - 00:21:593 - not sure if u intended to space these kick sound but i think u should add it since it was really a clear 1/2 kick sound stream here. SR+0.04 well, still ok to do so!
00:28:964 - i feel kind of empty here, consider add a note for loud crash kick
00:49:879 - missing crash note? refer 00:48:507 (48507|0) -
01:32:221 - like before u missed the melody here, add a note

Normal
00:12:164 (12164|3,12507|0) - making them into 1/1 LN could be nice
00:18:164 - like in easy mod, i am pretty sure there is a melody here!
00:18:336 (18336|2,18336|3,18679|0,18679|1,19021|3,19021|2,19364|0,19364|1,19707|0,19707|3,20050|2,20050|1,20393|0,20393|3,20736|2,20736|1,20907|0,21079|3,21079|1,21250|2,21421|0,21593|1,21764|2,21764|3) - http://puu.sh/ouOWT/b4dbc94d55.jpg? just pattern suggestion :3
00:45:421 - 00:45:593 - add for strong kick? no problem it is easy to play here
00:56:564 - u missed a kick here
01:12:336 (72336|2,72336|3,72507|1,72507|0,72764|2,72764|3) - CTRL+H it, u can feel a different pattern variation from right left and left right direction.
01:32:221 - 'w')
01:32:393 (92393|0,92393|3,92736|1,92736|2,93079|0,93079|3,93421|2,93421|1,93764|2,93764|3,94107|0,94107|1,94450|3,94450|2,94793|0,94793|1) - u can do the same thing here like my suggestion before if u like it
01:35:821 (95821|1,95821|0,96079|3,96079|2,96764|1,96764|0,97021|2,97021|3) - u can make different placement for these crashes. maybe try http://puu.sh/ouPuX/e6d627356e.jpg ? 'w')b

Hard
00:18:250 (18250|2) - move down by 1, good pattern for hard diff also refer 01:32:307 -
01:32:221 - make double here too
01:32:393 (92393|0,92393|1,92393|3,92479|2,92564|1,92650|2,92736|3,92736|0,92821|1,92907|2,92993|1,93079|0,93079|3,93164|2,93250|1,93336|2,93421|0,93421|3,93507|1,93593|2,93679|1,93764|3,93764|0) - http://puu.sh/ouQ3v/ed953c4692.jpg ? i just think catching the main melody here could be nice instead 1/4 stream. u can keep this pattern for your hardest diff!
00:53:479 (53479|1,53821|1) - maybe in the hard diff u can make a different pattern flow here by deleting these note, it look pretty good for hard diff as u can see there is a different sound flow here
01:01:021 (61021|1,61021|2,61021|0) - there isn't need to triple here since there is no crash here, double should be fine
01:01:364 (61364|2,61364|1,61364|3) - here too, and actually the short ln sound started from here, > http://puu.sh/ouQkr/752e628efa.jpg


Lunatic
00:12:507 - u can add a note here for kick too
01:01:364 (61364|1,61364|3,61364|0) - like in hard mode, the short ln sound start here
01:34:964 (94964|0,94964|2,94964|1) - double should be enough here
01:37:193 (97193|0,97193|1,97279|3,97279|2,97364|1,97364|0,97450|3,97450|2,97536|0,97536|1,97621|2,97621|3,97707|1,97707|0,97793|3,97793|2) - i just feel a little odd having double trill here while they have different sound from each other, i think the sound should be like http://puu.sh/ouR7U/f80246efcf.jpg.
pretty cool stream!


nice map~, hope these help~ good luck! ;)
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