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MrDorian
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on czwartek, 22 grudnia 2016 at 21:33:26

Artist: gmtn. (witch's slave)
Title: furioso melodia
Source: BMS
Tags: of fighters 2010 bof gumtune lr2 gothic hardcore extended ver version
BPM: 155
Filesize: 8880kb
Play Time: 05:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. armonia fortissima - 4Key (4,32 stars, 3797 notes)
Download: gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia
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REDOWNLOAD AFTER 2016-08-22

maybe it'll be ranked someday... IT IS LOL
tags, music and stuff stolen from Alumetorz's map or something
BG edited by me (pink ayyy) and Chronocide!

Thanks for all testplayers!

Really big thanks for Nivrad00 and for protato for re and REALLY big thanks for juankristal for owo

Thanks for mods!
RedBall
Lenfried-
NIHIL
Protastic101
Xylo- (IRC)
Pizza (IRC)
Interlude-
Gabriel_Batara
Evening (IRC)
_underjoy (IRC)
Abraxos x2
PnX
Kuo Kyoka (IRC)
Kawawa (IRC)
Hydria
-BloowX
Mat (IRC)
genkicho
Eternalie
Valentrixe
WolfyArmato-
Hollas
Alsty-
EYA-
_RamiWins_
Adiopulse
RedBall
Hello~ I'm from RRM mania modding queue!


Here's NM you requested!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General
1. Add something on the Tags

2. Isn't the hitsound too big? How about decrease it to like... 40~60%? (But, It is depended on you though)

Curse
00:51:393 (51393|1) - delete (ghost note?)
00:53:232 (53232|1) - delete (ghost note?)
00:53:135 (53135|2) - move to column 4 (apply If you accepted previous suggestion for hand balance)
00:54:490 (54490|2) - delete (ghost note?)
00:57:587 (57587|3) - ^
01:13:168 (73168|1) - delete (ghost note. I guess you put the note for rhythm. But, I think the rhythm is fit for 01:25:264 ~ part.) <- Feel free to reject becuase it is just a suggestion)
01:16:264 (76264|1) - ^
01:19:361 (79361|1) - ^
01:22:458 (82458|2) - ^
02:12:103 - add one note on column 1 (emphasis)
02:41:393 (161393|1) - delete (ghost note. When I test-played, It was quite awkward)
02:44:490 (164490|0) - ^
02:53:361 - try this - http://puu.sh/odaAr/7d348b0744.jpg
03:05:910 (185910|0,185910|2) - change one of them or both of them to LN which ends on 03:06:168 in order to emphasize the... sound (I don't know how to say it :D)
03:16:490 (196490|3,196490|1,196619|2,196619|0) - make them singles OR 03:17:264 (197264|3,197393|1) - make them doubles (Sound is similar)
03:18:813 (198813|1) - delete (ghost note)
03:19:200 (199200|0) - ^
03:19:587 (199587|2) - ^
03:19:974 (199974|1) - ^
03:20:361 (200361|2) - ^
From 03:20:619 to 03:21:006 - Why don't you put some single notes according to the elec sounds?
04:12:345 (252345|1,252442|3) - delete (ghost note)
05:04:748 - add one or two notes (missing note I guess)
From 05:36:103 to 05:46:555 AND From 05:23:716 to 05:36:103 - Consider changing one of them to difference pattern or smth. (The mood and sound is quite different.)

I'll not touch some hand balance stuffs because it is depended on mappers.

I enjoyed your map! (the jacks and sudden streams)
(What's wrong with SR system! lol)

Good luck on your map!
Shoot~
Topic Starter
MrDorian

RedBall wrote:

Hello~ hiI'm from RRM mania modding queue!


Here's NM you requested! yay!!!!

+I'm a beginner in modding. So, it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General
1. Add something on the Tags i forgot about it XD

2. Isn't the hitsound too big? How about decrease it to like... 40~60%? (But, It is depended on you though)I like to hear notes, will change

Curse
00:51:393 (51393|1) - delete (ghost note?) deleted
00:53:232 (53232|1) - delete (ghost note?) deleted
00:53:135 (53135|2) - move to column 4 (apply If you accepted previous suggestion for hand balance) <3
00:54:490 (54490|2) - delete (ghost note?) deleted
00:57:587 (57587|3) - ^ ^
01:13:168 (73168|1) - delete (ghost note. I guess you put the note for rhythm. But, I think the rhythm is fit for 01:25:264 ~ part.) <- Feel free to reject becuase it is just a suggestion)I'll leave it, because of the rhythm :D
01:16:264 (76264|1) - ^^
01:19:361 (79361|1) - ^^
01:22:458 (82458|2) - ^^
02:12:103 - add one note on column 1 (emphasis) oh, I haven't noticed this
02:41:393 (161393|1) - delete (ghost note. When I test-played, It was quite awkward) :<
02:44:490 (164490|0) - ^ ^
02:53:361 - try this - http://puu.sh/odaAr/7d348b0744.jpg nope, because I have done it to the "voice", so it won't fit
03:05:910 (185910|0,185910|2) - change one of them or both of them to LN which ends on 03:06:168 in order to emphasize the... sound (I don't know how to say it :D) good idea <3
03:16:490 (196490|3,196490|1,196619|2,196619|0) - make them singles OR 03:17:264 (197264|3,197393|1) - make them doubles (Sound is similar)
03:18:813 (198813|1) - delete (ghost note) there is a sound
03:19:200 (199200|0) - ^^
03:19:587 (199587|2) - ^^
03:19:974 (199974|1) - ^^
03:20:361 (200361|2) - ^^
From 03:20:619 to 03:21:006 - Why don't you put some single notes according to the elec sounds? I haven't noticed these sounds (I have shitty headphones ;--; )
04:12:345 (252345|1,252442|3) - delete (ghost note) changed to 1/6 stream thing
05:04:748 - add one or two notes (missing note I guess) added
From 05:36:103 to 05:46:555 AND From 05:23:716 to 05:36:103 - Consider changing one of them to difference pattern or smth. (The mood and sound is quite different.) I dunno what to do there, could you give me any ideas on pm?

I'll not touch some hand balance stuffs because it is depended on mappers.

I enjoyed your map! (the jacks and sudden streams) omg thanks <33
(What's wrong with SR system! lol)

Good luck on your map! Thaaanks~~
Shoot~ more plz :"D
lenpai
ok marathon nice

overly late mod but w/e

ya
00:18:748 (18748|2,18813|1) - swap col, easier to hit / if PR is correct, ignore this
00:18:297 (18297|1,18490|0) - swap col to avoid long stack at col 1
00:23:522 (23522|1) - maybe to 3
00:53:651 (53651|0) - to 2
00:59:426 - can add a note here and on the other triple LN end
01:18:942 (78942|2,79071|3) - double the first note then move the notes on 4 to 1
01:23:522 (83522|1,83716|1,83910|1,84103|1,84297|1,84490|1) - aaaa note stack so 01:23:910 (83910|1) - to 4
01:35:522 (95522|2,95522|1,95587|0,95587|3,95651|1,95651|2,95716|3,95716|0) - ctrl h
01:36:748 (96748|2,96813|1,96877|2) - ctrl h to even out stress
01:43:071 - aaa youre missing out on a lot of beats, chart those
02:15:200 (135200|0,135200|3) - while i get the logic of this, all sounds like this in this section should be triples
02:39:458 (159458|1) - to 1
03:17:781 (197781|2,197910|1) - swap col
03:25:910 (205910|3,205910|1,206039|0,206039|2) - ee triples, and a lot of other stuff
03:55:458 - aaaa so much ghosts(?) if you're following rhythm, that's considered as a dump and is not rankable


ok that's my quickie
Topic Starter
MrDorian

Lenfried- wrote:

ok marathon nice

overly late mod but w/e

ya
00:18:748 (18748|2,18813|1) - swap col, easier to hit / if PR is correct, ignore this ??
00:18:297 (18297|1,18490|0) - swap col to avoid long stack at col 1 avoided
00:23:522 (23522|1) - maybe to 3 kay
00:53:651 (53651|0) - to 2 will leave the jack
00:59:426 - can add a note here and on the other triple LN end i knew i should add it before :D
01:18:942 (78942|2,79071|3) - double the first note then move the notes on 4 to 1 done
01:23:522 (83522|1,83716|1,83910|1,84103|1,84297|1,84490|1) - aaaa note stack so 01:23:910 (83910|1) - to 4 kay
01:35:522 (95522|2,95522|1,95587|0,95587|3,95651|1,95651|2,95716|3,95716|0) - ctrl h done this multiple times
01:36:748 (96748|2,96813|1,96877|2) - ctrl h to even out stress k
01:43:071 - aaa youre missing out on a lot of beats, chart those done
02:15:200 (135200|0,135200|3) - while i get the logic of this, all sounds like this in this section should be triples if i'll set all of them triples, then it will be too dense. if i'll set it all doubles or sth, then it will be to "easy", so nope
02:39:458 (159458|1) - to 1 k
03:17:781 (197781|2,197910|1) - swap col why
03:25:910 (205910|3,205910|1,206039|0,206039|2) - ee triples, and a lot of other stuff added
03:55:458 - aaaa so much ghosts(?) if you're following rhythm, that's considered as a dump and is not rankable i'll leave it


ok that's my quickie
thanks for mod~!
NlHIL
[Curse]
4K=|1|2|3|4|
00:53:039 (53039|1) - 00:59:232 (59232|2) - 01:36:748 (96748|1,96813|2) -
04:45:651 (285651|3,285716|1) - 04:58:039 (298039|2,298103|3) - wrong snap (ghost note)

00:57:006 - add
00:57:200 - add to 1 and change the pattern
02:37:748 (157748|0,157748|3) - eh
02:59:651 (179651|1) - 03:12:039 (192039|2) - ghost note
03:05:264 (185264|1,185651|2) - how about jack
03:17:006 (197006|3) - really?
03:43:071 (223071|2,223071|0) - eh, only here 2 notes..?
04:07:748 - add?
04:12:345 (252345|1,252442|3) - little bit questionable
04:16:458 - don't you map here?
Topic Starter
MrDorian

NlHIL wrote:

[Curse]
4K=|1|2|3|4|
00:53:039 (53039|1) - 00:59:232 (59232|2) - 01:36:748 (96748|1,96813|2) -
04:45:651 (285651|3,285716|1) - 04:58:039 (298039|2,298103|3) - wrong snap (ghost note) thanks

00:57:006 - add done
00:57:200 - add to 1 and change the pattern done
02:37:748 (157748|0,157748|3) - eh eh
02:59:651 (179651|1) - 03:12:039 (192039|2) - ghost note didn't noticed
03:05:264 (185264|1,185651|2) - how about jack love the idea
03:17:006 (197006|3) - really? i haven't heard it
03:43:071 (223071|2,223071|0) - eh, only here 2 notes..? yeaah
04:07:748 - add? added
04:12:345 (252345|1,252442|3) - little bit questionable deleted them
04:16:458 - don't you map here? i haven't noticed :^
thanks for mod!
Protastic101
Modding time, yay! I'll mainly be looking for technical issues and aesthetics since I can't play 4*+ that well.

Column 1|2|3|4

I already forgot the diff name
00:18:297 - Make a triple since it's that heavier chord that you hear at places like 00:17:135 or 00:15:587
00:18:748 (18748|2,18813|1,18877|0,18942|1,19006|2) - Trill these on 2 and 3 since it's a trill in the music?
00:19:458 and 00:19:845 - Make triples because they're that same 3 note chord heard in the music as the previous times I mentioned.
00:25:716 (25716|2,25781|1,25845|0,25910|3,25974|2) - Trill these too? Or I dunno, keep them the same. Oh man, I really don't know. A trill would be cool but you'd probably put it on one hand to avoid repetition with the first one I mentioned.
00:55:845 (55845|0,55845|2,55845|3) - Why's this a triple? It's the same sound as the next two notes, so make it a double?
00:55:845 (55845|3,55845|2,55845|0,59329|1,59329|0,59329|3,59522|3,59522|2,59522|0) - Honestly, I feel like LN's aren't appropriate here since the sound is a stuttering kind of sound, you know? And LN's are used to represent sustained stuff. So maybe just turn these into short notes.
01:00:490 to 01:09:781 - All the notes on the red tick are almost the same sound as the ones on the white ticks, so why are they singles instead of doubles? Make them doubles to accentuate the drum in this section.
01:03:974 and 01:04:361 - If you reject the above, you at least have to make these doubles since they're white ticks and same sound as the other notes of its kind.
01:11:716 (71716|3,71716|2,71813|0,71813|1,71910|3,71910|2,72006|0,72006|1) - The same stuff I said about the LN's. I feel like short notes would be more appropriate as LN's represent sustained sounds most of the time.
01:18:974 - Add a double here as [12] because it's the same sound as 01:19:071 so basically jack it. Or not. I dunno. Everything's up to you.
01:31:361 - Add double here like [14] because it's the same sound as 01:31:458 (91458|3,91458|0)
01:31:651 - Also, I just heard this on 50% playback, but there's a "tch" sound here. It's kind of faint so I dunno if you left it out on purpose or not.
02:02:426 - Make double. It's the same sound as 02:08:619
02:57:910 - Add note. There's a "tch" sound here.
03:01:006 - ^^
03:04:103 - ^^
03:10:297 - ^^
03:13:393 - ^^
03:23:716 to 03:24:361 - There's a trill sound here, so add that? Maybe in columns 2 and 3 wouldn't be too stressful. You'd have to do some note rearranging though.
04:05:329 - Make a double for the drum sound here.
04:07:071 - Make triple, it's accented in the music.
04:13:264 (253264|2,253264|1,253458|1,253458|0,253651|0,253651|3,253845|1,253845|2) - I'm too lazy to copy and paste time, so I'm using these notes instead. Here, I suggest adding LN's since the sound is sustained. They should end once the next note begins in this sequence.
04:15:393 (255393|2,255393|0,255393|3,255587|2,255587|0,255587|3) - Again, just don't wanna copy and paste time. In between these notes shoiuld be a short 1/8 burst or stair or however you'd like to do it because the drum does a quick 1/8 rhythm between these two notes.
04:16:942 (256942|2,256942|3,256942|0,257135|2,257135|0,257135|3) - ^^
04:20:619 (260619|2,260619|0,260716|3,260716|1,260813|2,260813|0,260910|3,260910|1) - I swear, I'm not an LN hater, but you probably know what I'll say about these.
04:21:974 - Add note for "tch" sound.
04:25:071 - ^^
04:28:168 - ^^
04:31:264 - ^^ I'ma stop mentioning these now cause I realized you could be intentionally skipping them and just following the melody.
04:40:168 and 04:40:264 - Make/add doubles. For the first time, I'd suggest a [24], and then for the second time, a [13] to make it a minijack.
04:52:361 and 04:52:555 and 04:52:651 - Add doubles. Pretty obvious drum here.
04:55:071 (295071|2,295071|3) - Remove these and turn them into 1/6 trills.
05:08:039 (308039|2,308039|3,308232|3,308232|2,308232|0) - Between these notes should be a 1/8 burst to represent the drum.
05:08:426 and 05:08:813 and 05:09:200 and 05:09:587 - Make doubles because of the drum.

This map's beautiful. Also, SR is a lie dammit. Take a star.
Topic Starter
MrDorian

Protastic101 wrote:

Modding time, yay! I'll mainly be looking for technical issues and aesthetics since I can't play 4*+ that well.

Column 1|2|3|4

I already forgot the diff name
00:18:297 - Make a triple since it's that heavier chord that you hear at places like 00:17:135 or 00:15:587 i haven't noticed it
00:18:748 (18748|2,18813|1,18877|0,18942|1,19006|2) - Trill these on 2 and 3 since it's a trill in the music? nah
00:19:458 and 00:19:845 - Make triples because they're that same 3 note chord heard in the music as the previous times I mentioned. i haven't noticed it as well
00:25:716 (25716|2,25781|1,25845|0,25910|3,25974|2) - Trill these too? Or I dunno, keep them the same. Oh man, I really don't know. A trill would be cool but you'd probably put it on one hand to avoid repetition with the first one I mentioned. naaah x2
00:55:845 (55845|0,55845|2,55845|3) - Why's this a triple? It's the same sound as the next two notes, so make it a double? my fail
00:55:845 (55845|3,55845|2,55845|0,59329|1,59329|0,59329|3,59522|3,59522|2,59522|0) - Honestly, I feel like LN's aren't appropriate here since the sound is a stuttering kind of sound, you know? And LN's are used to represent sustained stuff. So maybe just turn these into short notes. If you mean 00:59:329 (59329|1,59329|0,59329|3,59426|2,59522|3,59522|2,59522|0,59619|1) - so I'll leave it
01:00:490 to 01:09:781 - All the notes on the red tick are almost the same sound as the ones on the white ticks, so why are they singles instead of doubles? Make them doubles to accentuate the drum in this section I'll leave it.
01:03:974 and 01:04:361 - If you reject the above, you at least have to make these doubles since they're white ticks and same sound as the other notes of its kind. haven't noticed
01:11:716 (71716|3,71716|2,71813|0,71813|1,71910|3,71910|2,72006|0,72006|1) - The same stuff I said about the LN's. I feel like short notes would be more appropriate as LN's represent sustained sounds most of the time. the same answer
01:18:974 - Add a double here as [12] because it's the same sound as 01:19:071 so basically jack it. Or not. I dunno. Everything's up to you. I don't feel it
01:31:361 - Add double here like [14] because it's the same sound as 01:31:458 (91458|3,91458|0) added
01:31:651 - Also, I just heard this on 50% playback, but there's a "tch" sound here. It's kind of faint so I dunno if you left it out on purpose or not. I do not map to these "tch"s
02:02:426 - Make double. It's the same sound as 02:08:619 added
02:57:910 - Add note. There's a "tch" sound here. In this part I'm mapping into instrument "only"
03:01:006 - ^^
03:04:103 - ^^
03:10:297 - ^^
03:13:393 - ^^
03:23:716 to 03:24:361 - There's a trill sound here, so add that? Maybe in columns 2 and 3 wouldn't be too stressful. You'd have to do some note rearranging though. I can't hear, what snap, so I won't do trill
04:05:329 - Make a double for the drum sound here. kay
04:07:071 - Make triple, it's accented in the music. kay
04:13:264 (253264|2,253264|1,253458|1,253458|0,253651|0,253651|3,253845|1,253845|2) - I'm too lazy to copy and paste time, so I'm using these notes instead. Here, I suggest adding LN's since the sound is sustained. They should end once the next note begins in this sequence. I don't want to
04:15:393 (255393|2,255393|0,255393|3,255587|2,255587|0,255587|3) - Again, just don't wanna copy and paste time. In between these notes shoiuld be a short 1/8 burst or stair or however you'd like to do it because the drum does a quick 1/8 rhythm between these two notes. added
04:16:942 (256942|2,256942|3,256942|0,257135|2,257135|0,257135|3) - ^^
04:20:619 (260619|2,260619|0,260716|3,260716|1,260813|2,260813|0,260910|3,260910|1) - I swear, I'm not an LN hater, but you probably know what I'll say about these. you know too
04:21:974 - Add note for "tch" sound.
04:25:071 - ^^
04:28:168 - ^^
04:31:264 - ^^ I'ma stop mentioning these now cause I realized you could be intentionally skipping them and just following the melody. <3
04:40:168 and 04:40:264 - Make/add doubles. For the first time, I'd suggest a [24], and then for the second time, a [13] to make it a minijack. changed in some other way
04:52:361 and 04:52:555 and 04:52:651 - Add doubles. Pretty obvious drum here. added
04:55:071 (295071|2,295071|3) - Remove these and turn them into 1/6 trills. i do not hear the snap
05:08:039 (308039|2,308039|3,308232|3,308232|2,308232|0) - Between these notes should be a 1/8 burst to represent the drum.
done
05:08:426 and 05:08:813 and 05:09:200 and 05:09:587 - Make doubles because of the drum. done

This map's beautiful. Also, SR is a lie dammit. Take a star.
Thanks for mod and for stars <3
Xylo-
Well, 2 hours of irc modding payed off.
irc
2016-04-27 15:50 Xylo-: siema
2016-04-27 17:18 MrDorian: chalo
2016-04-27 17:18 Xylo-: no witam
2016-04-27 17:18 Xylo-: czekam tylko półtorej godziny xD
2016-04-27 17:19 MrDorian: dawałem korepetycje
2016-04-27 17:19 Xylo-: spoko
2016-04-27 17:20 MrDorian: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/921341 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [Curse]]
2016-04-27 17:20 MrDorian: mam mało czasu :X
2016-04-27 17:20 Xylo-: okej
2016-04-27 17:21 Xylo-: coś ty tu natworzył z tym kiai
2016-04-27 17:21 MrDorian: kiai jest dobre
2016-04-27 17:21 Xylo-: no ale bez przesady
2016-04-27 17:21 Xylo-: pół piosenki w kiai
2016-04-27 17:21 Xylo-: te krótkie chociaż wywal
2016-04-27 17:22 MrDorian: te krótkie najbardziej mi się podobają ;-;
2016-04-27 17:22 MrDorian: ale ok .-.
2016-04-27 17:22 Xylo-: a i masz chyba źle wytimingowany początek
2016-04-27 17:22 Xylo-: posłuchaj sobie na 25%
2016-04-27 17:23 MrDorian: dupa, nie źle
2016-04-27 17:23 Xylo-: dźwięki są przed notkami
2016-04-27 17:23 MrDorian: z diffa alumetorza brane
2016-04-27 17:23 MrDorian: z mapsetu
2016-04-27 17:23 MrDorian: a jest ranked
2016-04-27 17:23 MrDorian: więc jest dobre
2016-04-27 17:24 Xylo-: dobra to olać
2016-04-27 17:25 Xylo-: 00:49:651 (49651|0,49651|2,49651|3,49748|1,49845|2,49845|0,49942|0,49942|2,50039|1,50039|3) -
2016-04-27 17:25 Xylo-: aż ciężko mi opisać
2016-04-27 17:25 MrDorian: że co
2016-04-27 17:25 Xylo-: ale niewygodny pattern, zmień chociaż 00:49:942 (49942|0,49942|2) - żeby minijacków nie było
2016-04-27 17:26 Xylo-: bo to takie space time się robi
2016-04-27 17:26 MrDorian: ale te minijacki są w piosence
2016-04-27 17:26 MrDorian: w melodii
2016-04-27 17:26 Xylo-: według piosenki to powinny być jacki
2016-04-27 17:26 Xylo-: potrójny jack
2016-04-27 17:26 Xylo-: jak już
2016-04-27 17:27 MrDorian: nope
2016-04-27 17:27 Xylo-: 00:54:103 (54103|3) - ta notka jest w chuj niewygodna, według mnie do usunięcia
2016-04-27 17:28 MrDorian: ale jest dźwięk
2016-04-27 17:28 Xylo-: to zrób trilla na 14
2016-04-27 17:28 Xylo-: i ten dźwięk w środku
2016-04-27 17:28 Xylo-: bo jak masz trilla 23 i notkę zewnętrzną to o wiele ciężej to ugrać niż jak masz trilla 14 i w środku
2016-04-27 17:29 MrDorian: ok
2016-04-27 17:31 MrDorian: ej, przekleisz tego irc do posta ok?
2016-04-27 17:31 Xylo-: no tak
2016-04-27 17:32 MrDorian: nok
2016-04-27 17:32 Xylo-: 00:57:200 (57200|3,57200|1,57264|0,57264|2,57329|3,57329|1,57393|2,57393|3,57393|0) - też niewygodne
2016-04-27 17:32 Xylo-: raz że jumptrill 13 24
2016-04-27 17:32 Xylo-: a to że potem masz minijacka na 4
2016-04-27 17:34 MrDorian: a 14 23 może być?
2016-04-27 17:34 Xylo-: zależy z jakim chordem na końcu
2016-04-27 17:34 MrDorian: i tak jedna notka będzie minijackiem
2016-04-27 17:34 Xylo-: to jak ma być to najlepiej jakby była na 2 albo 3
2016-04-27 17:35 MrDorian: naprawiłem to jakoś
2016-04-27 17:36 Xylo-: screenem zarzuć
2016-04-27 17:37 MrDorian: zrobiłemhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5025518
2016-04-27 17:37 MrDorian: kur
2016-04-27 17:39 Xylo-: będzie okej
2016-04-27 17:39 MrDorian: okej
2016-04-27 17:40 Xylo-: http://xylo.s-ul.eu/iRjvy8Qs
2016-04-27 17:40 Xylo-: tutaj zrobiłem coś takiego
2016-04-27 17:40 Xylo-: bo potem wyjście z tego quada pierwszego było dość uciążliwe
2016-04-27 17:40 Xylo-: a tak się nawet okej gra
2016-04-27 17:42 MrDorian: zrobiłem slidery na 24 i 13
2016-04-27 17:42 MrDorian: a notki na 4 i 1
2016-04-27 17:42 MrDorian: 1 i 4
2016-04-27 17:43 Xylo-: dobra szybki testplay
2016-04-27 17:43 Xylo-: lubie że można testować w edytorze xD
2016-04-27 17:43 MrDorian: no, to zawalista funkcja :D
2016-04-27 17:43 Xylo-: będzie ok
2016-04-27 17:44 Xylo-: 01:00:361 (60361|1,60361|0,60426|2,60426|3,60490|0,60490|1,60490|3) - to mnie boli ale nic nie poradzę
2016-04-27 17:44 Xylo-: 01:00:490 (60490|1,60490|3,60490|0) -
2016-04-27 17:44 Xylo-: chyba że to zrobisz 123 a nie 124
2016-04-27 17:44 Xylo-: może być łatwiej
2016-04-27 17:44 MrDorian: no cóż, zdarza się
2016-04-27 17:45 MrDorian: zrobię tak, bo we wcześniejszym bylo 124
2016-04-27 17:45 Xylo-: mkay
2016-04-27 17:45 Xylo-: 01:10:458 (70458|1,70458|0,70555|3,70555|2,70555|1,70651|0,70651|3,70748|1,70748|2) - tutaj proponuję po tym [234] zacząć od 23 a nie od 14
2016-04-27 17:45 Xylo-: przerobię sobie i zobaczę jak się gra
2016-04-27 17:46 Xylo-: bo o to co teraz jest to meh ale grywalne
2016-04-27 17:46 MrDorian: i niech jest meh, ale grywalne
2016-04-27 17:46 Xylo-: chociaż niech zostanie od 14
2016-04-27 17:47 Xylo-: bo się robi triple minijack
2016-04-27 17:47 Xylo-: na 2
2016-04-27 17:47 MrDorian: no
2016-04-27 17:48 MrDorian: ja (prawie) wszystkiego nie robiłem z przypadku
2016-04-27 17:48 Xylo-: 01:11:813 (71813|0,71813|1,71910|3,71910|2,72006|1,72006|0,72103|3,72103|2) - zaraz ci dam screena jak to powinno być
2016-04-27 17:48 Xylo-: http://xylo.s-ul.eu/xAUtSQGk
2016-04-27 17:48 MrDorian: niech zgadnę, short notki?
2016-04-27 17:48 Xylo-: podgłośnię osu i sprawdzę ale na czerwonej linii chyba nie ma dźwięku
2016-04-27 17:49 Xylo-: no nie ma
2016-04-27 17:49 Xylo-: dopiero na tej białeś
2016-04-27 17:49 Xylo-: białej*
2016-04-27 17:49 Xylo-: te krótkie są spoko
2016-04-27 17:50 MrDorian: ale xylo
2016-04-27 17:50 MrDorian: ja to robiłem do "głosu"
2016-04-27 17:50 Xylo-: no właśnie
2016-04-27 17:51 Xylo-: ten głos się zmienia na białej
2016-04-27 17:51 MrDorian: robi
2016-04-27 17:51 MrDorian: Hee hee hee
2016-04-27 17:51 MrDorian: trzy razy
2016-04-27 17:52 Xylo-: dwa
2016-04-27 17:52 MrDorian: trzy
2016-04-27 17:52 Xylo-: na 25% słyszę że dwa
2016-04-27 17:52 Xylo-: jest ewidentnie dwa
2016-04-27 17:52 MrDorian: no dobra, robi heee he
2016-04-27 17:52 MrDorian: ale od drugiego jest wyżej
2016-04-27 17:53 MrDorian: znaczy
2016-04-27 17:53 MrDorian: heE he
2016-04-27 17:53 MrDorian: czy coś
2016-04-27 17:53 Xylo-: jak zrobisz tak http://xylo.s-ul.eu/PwUHzFiB to będzie git
2016-04-27 17:54 Xylo-: 01:30:684 (90684|3,90684|0,90781|1,90781|3,90877|2) - notki żebyś wiedział gdzie
2016-04-27 17:54 MrDorian: wolę zostać przy swoim
2016-04-27 17:54 Xylo-: proponuję zmienić to tak http://xylo.s-ul.eu/wNyXRGsm
2016-04-27 17:54 Xylo-: ale masz offtime jak zostaniesz przy tamtym
2016-04-27 17:54 Xylo-: bo to robi to drugie hee na białej linii
2016-04-27 17:54 Xylo-: na 1/4
2016-04-27 17:55 MrDorian: nie widzę potrzeby robienia tam jacka
2016-04-27 17:55 MrDorian: minijacka
2016-04-27 17:55 Xylo-: sam tam miałeś minijacka
2016-04-27 17:55 Xylo-: na 14
2016-04-27 17:55 Xylo-: czekaj o której sekcji mówimy
2016-04-27 17:55 MrDorian: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/921341 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [Curse]]
2016-04-27 17:55 MrDorian: kurwa
2016-04-27 17:56 MrDorian: 1:30
2016-04-27 17:56 Xylo-: no
2016-04-27 17:56 MrDorian: gdzie ja miałem jacka???????????
2016-04-27 17:56 Xylo-: pod koniec?
2016-04-27 17:56 Xylo-: minijacka na 14
2016-04-27 17:57 MrDorian: 01:31:264 (91264|0,91264|3,91361|0,91361|3) -
2016-04-27 17:57 MrDorian: to?
2016-04-27 17:57 Xylo-: ta
2016-04-27 17:57 MrDorian: a wsłuchaj się dokładniej
2016-04-27 17:58 Xylo-: jak to wyglądało w oryginale bo sobie już to przerobiłem
2016-04-27 17:58 MrDorian: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5025652
2016-04-27 17:59 Xylo-: no to mi chodzi o te 14 14 23 na końcu
2016-04-27 17:59 Xylo-: według mnie http://xylo.s-ul.eu/tiSVgQmi tak by było lepiej
2016-04-27 18:00 MrDorian: a według mnie nie
2016-04-27 18:00 MrDorian: bo nie ma dźwięku, który by sugerował dodanie notki dodatkowej
2016-04-27 18:00 Xylo-: ale sam tam masz minijacka
2016-04-27 18:00 Xylo-: mi chodzi tylko o te 3 końcowe notki
2016-04-27 18:00 MrDorian: ale to do innych dźwięków?
2016-04-27 18:00 Xylo-: chordy nie notki*
2016-04-27 18:01 MrDorian: ale to inne dźwięki
2016-04-27 18:01 MrDorian: tam jeszcze drum czy inny instrument dochodzi
2016-04-27 18:01 Xylo-: no tak
2016-04-27 18:01 Xylo-: ale mi chodzi tylko o to żeby te 14 14 23 zamienić na 34 23 12
2016-04-27 18:01 Xylo-: wygodniej
2016-04-27 18:01 MrDorian: nah
2016-04-27 18:02 Xylo-: 23 23 1234 też niegłupie
2016-04-27 18:02 Xylo-: jak tak myślę
2016-04-27 18:02 MrDorian: czemu 1234?
2016-04-27 18:02 Xylo-: łatwiej będzie zagrać niż 23 23 14
2016-04-27 18:03 Xylo-: a trzeba zaakcentować koniec
2016-04-27 18:03 MrDorian: ale nie ma w końcu co akcentować według mnie
2016-04-27 18:03 MrDorian: nie ma żadnego specjalnego dźwięku
2016-04-27 18:03 Xylo-: to może być 23 23 23 albo 23 14 23
2016-04-27 18:03 MrDorian: zostawię, jak mam
2016-04-27 18:04 Xylo-: to zamień może chociaż na 14 23 14
2016-04-27 18:04 MrDorian: I agree!
2016-04-27 18:06 Xylo-: 01:46:168 (106168|2,106168|0,106264|1,106264|3,106361|2,106361|0,106410|3,106458|1,106506|2,106555|0,106555|1,106555|3,106651|2,106651|1,106748|3,106748|0,106797|2,106845|1,106893|0,106942|2,106942|1,106942|3) - coś ty tu namodził
2016-04-27 18:06 Xylo-: za dużo chordów tutaj
2016-04-27 18:06 Xylo-: space time się robi znowu
2016-04-27 18:06 MrDorian: dupa nie za dużo
2016-04-27 18:06 Xylo-: no za dużo
2016-04-27 18:06 MrDorian: nie
2016-04-27 18:07 Xylo-: duża większość będzie ten part spamowała
2016-04-27 18:07 Xylo-: ale jak tam chcesz
2016-04-27 18:08 Xylo-: 01:46:361 (106361|0,106361|2,106410|3,106458|1,106506|2,106555|0,106555|1,106555|3) - bo chociażby samo to jest ciężko wyklikać
2016-04-27 18:08 MrDorian: to zaproponuj inny układ, bo już nie wiem, jak mam to ułożyć
2016-04-27 18:09 Xylo-: http://xylo.s-ul.eu/j0q2b3pQ
2016-04-27 18:10 MrDorian: na czerwonym muszą być 2 notki
2016-04-27 18:10 Xylo-: te 12 34 pomiędzy schodkami mogą być ewentualnie 13 24
2016-04-27 18:10 Xylo-: to dostaw na 4
2016-04-27 18:11 MrDorian: denerwują mnie te minijacki, ale to uroki 4k
2016-04-27 18:11 Xylo-: które minijacki
2016-04-27 18:12 Xylo-: to co zrobiłem będzie się dobrze grało
2016-04-27 18:12 MrDorian: yhym
2016-04-27 18:12 MrDorian: ustawiłem tak
2016-04-27 18:13 Xylo-: no to dobra
2016-04-27 18:13 MrDorian: tak powoli czas mi się kończy :///
2016-04-27 18:13 Xylo-: szukam dalej
2016-04-27 18:14 Xylo-: 02:50:039 (170039|3,170039|0,170103|1,170168|2) -
2016-04-27 18:14 Xylo-: o tutaj
2016-04-27 18:14 Xylo-: to ja proponuję tak http://xylo.s-ul.eu/75gPjkYj
2016-04-27 18:15 MrDorian: tam jeszcze są dźwięki?
2016-04-27 18:15 Xylo-: w jakim sensie
2016-04-27 18:15 Xylo-: ten pattern tu pasuje
2016-04-27 18:16 MrDorian: 02:50:168 (170168|0,170168|2,170297|2,170297|0) - to są dźwięki na 2 notki
2016-04-27 18:16 Xylo-: nieee
2016-04-27 18:16 MrDorian: taaak
2016-04-27 18:16 Xylo-: niczym się nie wyróżniają
2016-04-27 18:17 Xylo-: znaczy no jest ten kick
2016-04-27 18:17 MrDorian: no i go mappuje
2016-04-27 18:17 Xylo-: ale ciężko coś sensownego tutaj stworzyć
2016-04-27 18:17 Xylo-: mapując tego kicka
2016-04-27 18:18 Xylo-: to może coś takiego http://xylo.s-ul.eu/557wQ73F
2016-04-27 18:18 Xylo-: tam na tej grubej czerwonej to i 234 można zrobić
2016-04-27 18:19 MrDorian: nah
2016-04-27 18:19 MrDorian: nie słyszę 3 notek
2016-04-27 18:19 Xylo-: to tylko sugestia xD
2016-04-27 18:19 Xylo-: a jak reszta
2016-04-27 18:20 Xylo-: te 34 1 34 1
2016-04-27 18:20 MrDorian: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5025783
2016-04-27 18:21 Xylo-: będzie ok
2016-04-27 18:22 Xylo-: 03:29:135 (209135|0,209135|1,209393|2,209522|3,209781|1,210168|2,210297|3,210361|2,210426|3,210555|1,210684|2,210684|3,210684|1) - według mnie ten part tutaj jest BARDZO undermapped
2016-04-27 18:22 Xylo-: ma potencjał na fajnego bursta
2016-04-27 18:23 MrDorian: nie chcę robić bursta 1/16 albo 1/12
2016-04-27 18:23 MrDorian: czyt. 660bpm 1/4 stream
2016-04-27 18:23 MrDorian: 1/16
2016-04-27 18:23 MrDorian: 620*
2016-04-27 18:24 Xylo-: jak już to i tak by było coś w stylu schodków 1234 potem zawracających
2016-04-27 18:24 Xylo-: albo coś takiego jak w c18 jest
2016-04-27 18:24 MrDorian: ale ktoś to zagra?
2016-04-27 18:24 MrDorian: rozstawię to, jak mam
2016-04-27 18:24 Xylo-: musiałbyś zmapować
2016-04-27 18:24 Xylo-: to ci powiem
2016-04-27 18:24 Xylo-: bo tak to sobie nie wyobrażę
2016-04-27 18:24 Xylo-: to tylko taka notka na przyszłość jakby ci się chciało
2016-04-27 18:24 Xylo-: albo coś
2016-04-27 18:26 Xylo-: 04:06:974 (246974|0,246974|1,247022|2,247022|3,247071|0,247071|1,247071|3) -
2016-04-27 18:26 Xylo-: ja wszystko rozumiem
2016-04-27 18:26 MrDorian: jak myślisz, ma moja mapka szansa na bycie ranked?
2016-04-27 18:26 Xylo-: ale nikt ci nie ugra minijacka 1/8 na 4 kolumnie
2016-04-27 18:26 Xylo-: nie wiem szczerze
2016-04-27 18:26 MrDorian: zmieniłem na 3
2016-04-27 18:27 Xylo-: na 3 już prędzej ale inni mogą się o to czepiać
2016-04-27 18:27 Xylo-: jak dla mnie to tam powinno być 12
2016-04-27 18:27 Xylo-: ale nie wiem
2016-04-27 18:27 Xylo-: jak chcesz
2016-04-27 18:28 MrDorian: ale jest dźwięk
2016-04-27 18:28 MrDorian: i będę go bronił własną piersią czy coś
2016-04-27 18:28 Xylo-: będziesz chciał ranka to i odpuścisz xD
2016-04-27 18:28 Xylo-: od razu po tym
2016-04-27 18:28 Xylo-: proponuję coś takiego http://xylo.s-ul.eu/avaPwAKh ale oryginał ujdzie
2016-04-27 18:29 Xylo-: tyle że ciężki jest bo 24 13 czy co tam było
2016-04-27 18:29 MrDorian: "mappujcie pod muzykę, żeby odzwierciedlało"
2016-04-27 18:29 Xylo-: nie mówię że nie ale 1/8 minijacki
2016-04-27 18:29 Xylo-: na tym minijacku będzie wieeeele missów xD
2016-04-27 18:29 MrDorian: do jakiego to fragmentu
2016-04-27 18:29 Xylo-: tuż po tym
2016-04-27 18:29 MrDorian: o tym, co ciągle mówimy?
2016-04-27 18:29 Xylo-: tak
2016-04-27 18:30 Xylo-: tuż po nim
2016-04-27 18:30 MrDorian: zostawię te 24 13
2016-04-27 18:31 Xylo-: 04:40:103 (280103|0,280168|2,280168|1,280232|1,280232|3) - ciężko wyklikać ale nie mam pomysłu jak to zamienić
2016-04-27 18:32 Xylo-: w końcu to 1/6 jest
2016-04-27 18:32 MrDorian: nie
2016-04-27 18:32 MrDorian: akurat tutaj faila zrobiłem
2016-04-27 18:32 MrDorian: i zostawiłem stare
2016-04-27 18:32 MrDorian: tutaj akurat jest 1/4
2016-04-27 18:33 MrDorian: ignorując instrument
2016-04-27 18:33 MrDorian: i tylko te bumbumy
2016-04-27 18:33 Xylo-: a to 1/4 ujdzie
2016-04-27 18:34 Xylo-: 05:07:651 (307651|2,307651|1,307651|3,307700|0,307748|1,307797|3,307845|0,307845|2,307942|0,307942|1,308039|2,308039|3,308087|1,308135|0,308135|2,308184|3,308232|2,308232|0,308232|1) -
2016-04-27 18:34 Xylo-: wiem że będziesz bronić dźwięków
2016-04-27 18:35 Xylo-: ale to jest zdecydowanie za trudne do wyklikania
2016-04-27 18:35 MrDorian: no
2016-04-27 18:35 Xylo-: 05:08:039 (308039|2,308135|2,308232|2) - chociażby ta kolumna
2016-04-27 18:36 MrDorian: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5025783
2016-04-27 18:36 MrDorian: zrobiłem tak
2016-04-27 18:36 Xylo-: a ty tu 1/8 miałeś zmapowane
2016-04-27 18:36 Xylo-: a nie czekaj
2016-04-27 18:36 MrDorian: noo
2016-04-27 18:37 Xylo-: ty gdzieś w innym miejscu jesteś
2016-04-27 18:37 Xylo-: 2:49 wtf
2016-04-27 18:37 MrDorian: nie?
2016-04-27 18:37 MrDorian: kurde XD
2016-04-27 18:37 MrDorian: zły link
2016-04-27 18:37 MrDorian: XDXDXD
2016-04-27 18:37 Xylo-: a
2016-04-27 18:37 MrDorian: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5025908
2016-04-27 18:38 Xylo-: http://xylo.s-ul.eu/StpFvEFP
2016-04-27 18:38 Xylo-: a może tak
2016-04-27 18:38 Xylo-: to będzie i tak i tak trudne
2016-04-27 18:38 Xylo-: ale wygodniejsze
2016-04-27 18:38 MrDorian: bronię dźwięków~~
2016-04-27 18:38 Xylo-: masz sporą tendencję do minijacków
2016-04-27 18:39 MrDorian: chyba raczej trudno jest inaczej ułożyć
2016-04-27 18:39 Xylo-: tak jak ułożyłem jest okej
2016-04-27 18:39 Xylo-: przesadzasz z mapowaniem kicków które ledwo słychać bo są zagłuszone przez lead
2016-04-27 18:39 MrDorian: ale na białym zjadłeś notkę
2016-04-27 18:40 Xylo-: ja bym proponował jeszcze lna dołożyć w [osu://edit/05:50:039]
2016-04-27 18:40 Xylo-: ja bym proponował jeszcze lna dołożyć w [osu://edit/05:50:039 o tutaj]
2016-04-27 18:41 MrDorian: gdzie
2016-04-27 18:41 Xylo-: kliknij w link
2016-04-27 18:41 Xylo-: teraz jest okej
2016-04-27 18:41 MrDorian: wiem
2016-04-27 18:41 MrDorian: ale to od tego samego :V
2016-04-27 18:42 Xylo-: http://xylo.s-ul.eu/2nLglVKN jeszcze tak może być tam wcześniej
2016-04-27 18:42 Xylo-: niby od tego samego ale jest jakaś różnica i nie zaboli ten lnm
2016-04-27 18:42 MrDorian: no najwyżej początek przełożyć na 5:48:974
2016-04-27 18:42 Xylo-: bo nudny taki długi bez niczego
2016-04-27 18:42 MrDorian: po to jest
2016-04-27 18:43 Xylo-: żeby był nudny?
2016-04-27 18:43 MrDorian: tak XD
2016-04-27 18:43 MrDorian: taki mój mały trolling
2016-04-27 18:43 Xylo-: meh
2016-04-27 18:43 Xylo-: nie podoba mi się to
2016-04-27 18:43 MrDorian: ale dobrze się wpasowywuje
2016-04-27 18:44 Xylo-: niby tak ale ten drugi jakby się zaczął w 05:50:039 to nic by się nie stało
2016-04-27 18:44 Xylo-: a tak to mniej nudny
2016-04-27 18:44 Xylo-: o fajnie że się link zrobił
2016-04-27 18:44 Xylo-: no cóż
2016-04-27 18:44 Xylo-: mam nadzieję że wiesz o co mi chodzi
2016-04-27 18:45 MrDorian: zrobiłem jednego od 5:48:974
2016-04-27 18:45 MrDorian: 877*
2016-04-27 18:45 Xylo-: może być
2016-04-27 18:45 Xylo-: no to zaraz wklejam moda
2016-04-27 18:45 MrDorian: kay
2016-04-27 18:46 MrDorian: dzięki za niego
2016-04-27 18:46 Xylo-: 2 godziny modowania
2016-04-27 18:46 Xylo-: jeez
2016-04-27 18:46 MrDorian: heh
Lude
Interlude's Modding Queue
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[Curse]
00:18:684 (18684|1,18813|1,18942|1,19071|1) - Hmm... I could suggest you This
00:54:297 (54297|1) - I think you could delete this, since you did not triple 00:51:200 - here. Same thing happens 00:57:393 (57393|1) - Delete.
01:00:490 (60490|2) - Same as above
*If you wish to triple, add up a note 00:51:200 - , and try to move 01:00:490 (60490|2) - to col 4
02:15:200 - Add a note here
*I could see you left doubles intentionally, but it is still legit to put triples on them. Gives more impact
02:36:877 - This jack is really uncomfortable to play in that tempo. Try 1-2 + 3-4 combination.
02:52:232 (172232|2,172232|3) - I think these LNs should go a bit longer, the sound is long enough
03:00:877 - Add a note?
*Same here, its still nice to put triples
03:27:716 (207716|2,207845|3) - Ctrl + G
03:55:168 - Here, if you listen carefully, This 03:55:168 (235168|3) - LN, if you intend to follow the noise, has to be split 03:55:264 - 03:55:361 - At these two parts.
04:21:393 (261393|0,261393|2) - Personal suggestion; These two could go a bit longer to 04:21:781 - , deleting 04:21:781 (261781|2) -
04:27:877 (267877|0) - This to 4, 04:27:974 (267974|3) - This to 1
04:52:555 - Here's another bass going off, I think you could eliminate one of the two LN going here (Didn't hear anythin special to make it double) and re-pattern up for the bass
05:07:458 - These patterns are REALLY hard if you testplay it. It is good to follow up every single sound, but try deleting triples and jacks like 05:07:651 (307651|2) - This which makes a really hard jacks, or 05:08:135 (308135|3) - . Try also repatterning here

Done here. Good luck on your map !!
Topic Starter
MrDorian

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's Modding Queue
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[Curse]
00:18:684 (18684|1,18813|1,18942|1,19071|1) - Hmm... I could suggest you This okay
00:54:297 (54297|1) - I think you could delete this, since you did not triple 00:51:200 - here. Same thing happens 00:57:393 (57393|1) - Delete.
01:00:490 (60490|2) - Same as above
*If you wish to triple, add up a note 00:51:200 - , and try to move 01:00:490 (60490|2) - to col 4 and that is what I will do
02:15:200 - Add a note here
*I could see you left doubles intentionally, but it is still legit to put triples on them. Gives more impact kay
02:36:877 - This jack is really uncomfortable to play in that tempo. Try 1-2 + 3-4 combination. blue
02:52:232 (172232|2,172232|3) - I think these LNs should go a bit longer, the sound is long enough I made it to the "voice" thing, so nope
03:00:877 - Add a note?
*Same here, its still nice to put triples like before
03:27:716 (207716|2,207845|3) - Ctrl + G what do you think, what's my answer? XD
03:55:168 - Here, if you listen carefully, This 03:55:168 (235168|3) - LN, if you intend to follow the noise, has to be split 03:55:264 - 03:55:361 - At these two parts.
04:21:393 (261393|0,261393|2) - Personal suggestion; These two could go a bit longer to 04:21:781 - , deleting 04:21:781 (261781|2) - "voice" again
04:27:877 (267877|0) - This to 4, 04:27:974 (267974|3) - This to 1 nah
04:52:555 - Here's another bass going off, I think you could eliminate one of the two LN going here (Didn't hear anythin special to make it double) and re-pattern up for the bass kay
05:07:458 - These patterns are REALLY hard if you testplay it. It is good to follow up every single sound, but try deleting triples and jacks like 05:07:651 (307651|2) - This which makes a really hard jacks, or 05:08:135 (308135|3) - . Try also repatterning here Tried my best to make it better, hope it is

Done here. Good luck on your map !!
Thanks~!
Pizza
some IRC mods
2016-04-29 20:01 MrDorian: hello Pizza
2016-04-29 20:01 Pizza: sup!
2016-04-29 20:03 MrDorian: You told that you would mod my map
2016-04-29 20:03 MrDorian: will you? :D\
2016-04-29 20:03 Pizza: oh....... i forget it lmao xD
2016-04-29 20:03 Pizza: let's do a IRC mods instead
2016-04-29 20:03 Pizza: i'm too lazy to write it on forum lol
2016-04-29 20:03 MrDorian: okaaay
2016-04-29 20:04 MrDorian: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/921341 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia]
2016-04-29 20:04 MrDorian: I understand, I'm lazy as well
2016-04-29 20:04 Pizza: yeah xD
2016-04-29 20:04 Pizza: wait a minute
2016-04-29 20:04 MrDorian: k
2016-04-29 20:07 Pizza: ok
2016-04-29 20:07 Pizza: 01:05:135 (65135|1,65329|1,65522|1,65716|1,65910|1,66103|1,66297|1,66490|1,66619|1) - avoid this pls
2016-04-29 20:07 Pizza: unbalanced
2016-04-29 20:08 Pizza: 01:09:781 (69781|0) - delete, idk, not good for hand i think
2016-04-29 20:10 Pizza: 01:46:651 (106651|2) - and this too
2016-04-29 20:11 MrDorian: first avoided
2016-04-29 20:12 MrDorian: second, why would i have to delete it?
2016-04-29 20:12 MrDorian: 01:09:708 -
2016-04-29 20:12 MrDorian: in there
2016-04-29 20:12 MrDorian: i can move it to second column
2016-04-29 20:12 MrDorian: 234
2016-04-29 20:13 Pizza: it doesn't feel nice for hand imo, but it's not problem if you keep it
2016-04-29 20:13 MrDorian: 01:46:651 (106651|2) - and this
2016-04-29 20:13 MrDorian: there is sound for 2 notes
2016-04-29 20:14 Pizza: what sound? i think it supposed to be 1
2016-04-29 20:14 MrDorian: If i'll move it to 2, will it be better?
2016-04-29 20:14 MrDorian: It's the same as 01:46:264 (106264|1,106264|3) -
2016-04-29 20:15 Pizza: http://puu.sh/oA0HI/d5a99990f9.png better
2016-04-29 20:16 Pizza: 02:53:135 -
2016-04-29 20:16 Pizza: add LN on 3 or 4
2016-04-29 20:18 MrDorian: 02:53:522 (173522|2,173522|3,173522|1) - there must be 3 notes because of the sound
2016-04-29 20:18 Pizza: 04:07:022 (247022|2,247071|1,247071|0,247071|2) - this is sooooooooooooo uncomfortable, just make it 2 plss
2016-04-29 20:19 Pizza: but at 02:53:135 - i think it must be a LN
2016-04-29 20:19 MrDorian: If I add ln, I will have to delete one note
2016-04-29 20:19 MrDorian: but I want there to be 3 notes
2016-04-29 20:19 MrDorian: so nope :C
2016-04-29 20:19 MrDorian: third person omg
2016-04-29 20:19 MrDorian: okay, now I'll delete it
2016-04-29 20:20 MrDorian: Could you wait for some time?
2016-04-29 20:20 Pizza: meh actually you can make it 4 lol http://puu.sh/oA0Vo/0aaee3ac05.jpg
2016-04-29 20:20 Pizza: hmm ok
2016-04-29 20:20 MrDorian: I need to go to the post office
2016-04-29 20:20 Pizza: i want to eat lol
2016-04-29 20:20 Pizza: ok
2016-04-29 20:20 MrDorian: so go eat :D
2016-04-29 20:20 Pizza: :D
2016-04-29 20:20 MrDorian: see you soon!
2016-05-01 00:34 MrDorian: will we continue? XDD
2016-05-01 00:35 Pizza: uhmm i can't, i have to sleep now lol, it's 12:35 here, just came home ;-;
2016-05-01 00:35 Pizza: can we do tommorow?
2016-05-01 00:35 Pizza: at 8pm GMT+7 maybe..
2016-05-01 00:35 MrDorian: okay
2016-05-07 14:40 MrDorian: Piiizzaaa
2016-05-07 14:41 Pizza: Doriiiaaaaaaaaaan
2016-05-07 14:41 MrDorian: Will we ever end modding? XD
2016-05-07 14:42 Pizza: ah my headset is broken right now ;-; i can't do modding, but if you want to mod right now, lemme use my speaker lol
2016-05-07 14:42 MrDorian: I can wait c:
2016-05-07 14:43 Pizza: let's just do it now lol, but i'll just do a quick mod, is that ok?
2016-05-07 14:43 MrDorian: ok
2016-05-07 14:46 Pizza: wow your maps is much way better now
2016-05-07 14:47 MrDorian: i had some mods
2016-05-07 14:47 MrDorian: and I started to listen to a lot of advices
2016-05-07 14:47 MrDorian: because my friends told that I was a little Spy
2016-05-07 14:47 Pizza: http://puu.sh/oJcOP/bcb9047753.png
2016-05-07 14:48 Pizza: 04:15:006
2016-05-07 14:48 Pizza: change to like that
2016-05-07 14:48 Pizza: well, i actually love this map overall <333333333
2016-05-07 14:49 MrDorian: done
2016-05-07 14:49 MrDorian: owww thanks <33
2016-05-07 14:50 Pizza: well i just found that i think, other part are just gooood, great improvement!

nice maps <33
REUSE-ABLE
Modding Queue here!

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if there any "***" symbol at the endy. that mean its Important and must change quickly. but if there's NO "***" symbol at the end. then you can reject it or you can accept it.

Aimod: Ctrl+Shift+A

Breaktime is not recomended for osu mania. so you can think creative how to remove the breaktime.

THE MOD. ~(`_`~)
01:15:587 (75587|3,75587|0,75651|2,75716|1,75781|3,75845|0,75910|1) - i want you to make it look like this http://puu.sh/oLm7T/f958c314ad.jpg ***
01:21:781 (81781|0,81781|2,81845|1,81910|3,81974|2,82039|0,82103|1,82168|3,82168|0,82168|2) - same but make it flip horizontal ^ ***
01:31:458 (91458|2,91458|0) - add 1 note ***
03:02:426 (182426|3,182426|1,182426|0,182490|2,182555|1,182619|0,182684|3,182684|2,182748|1,182813|0,182813|3,182813|2) - make it like that picture again but with same composition. ***
I think thats it for now.
Thank you~ :)
Evening
SPOILER
21:29 MrDorian: Hello Evening, could you take a look at my map, when you won't be busy?
21:29 *MrDorian is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/966905 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [Curse]]
21:29 Evening: oh sure
21:29 Evening: i'll look at it now i guess
21:29 MrDorian: thanks
21:36 Evening: uh
21:36 Evening: stacked note on 03:29:135 (209135|1) -
21:36 MrDorian: hm?
21:37 MrDorian: woops
21:37 Evening: and as for pattern wise, lemme find the spots again lol
21:37 MrDorian: ok
21:37 Evening: 00:57:135 (57135|0,57200|1,57264|0,57329|1,57393|0,57393|1) - isn't this a bit too fast for the players that you cater the map to?
21:38 Evening: 00:51:006 (51006|2,51006|3,51071|0,51071|1,51135|3,51135|2,51200|2,51200|0,51200|1) - something like this would be better i believe
21:38 MrDorian: okay
21:39 Evening: 00:59:329 (59329|1,59426|0,59522|0) - eh, didn't really like this pattern, it's quite mindblocky
21:39 Evening: http://puu.sh/oZRlq/040e9c0a4e.jpg
21:39 Evening: something like that could be used i guess
21:41 MrDorian: [http://puu.sh/oZRo0/6e76e5896b.jpg will work? i really want these holds]
21:41 Evening: 00:59:619 (59619|1,59716|1,59845|1) - not too sure of these if you pattern it like that then
21:42 Evening: plays fine for me but i'm not sure about the real audience of the map
21:42 Evening: 00:59:716 (59716|1,59716|0,59845|1,59845|2,59974|2,59974|3,60103|0,60103|1,60168|3,60168|2,60232|0,60232|1,60297|3,60297|2,60361|1,60361|0,60426|2,60426|3,60490|3,60490|0,60490|1) - well you can flip this whole pattern i guess
21:43 MrDorian: okay
21:43 Evening: 01:09:651 (69651|1,69716|0,69781|1,69877|1,69877|0) - next thing would be that the trill to jack pattern is really hard to execute well
21:43 Evening: something like this could work http://puu.sh/oZRwg/05b1d0008e.jpg
21:43 Evening: but again, i'm not sure about the triple jack
21:45 MrDorian: [http://puu.sh/oZRzs/dfbd1b9806.jpg maybe something like this]
21:45 Evening: oh yea, that works better
21:48 Evening: 04:15:393 (255393|2,255490|2,255587|2) - might want to avoid this somehow
21:49 Evening: actually, shifting 04:15:539 (255539|3) - to 1 and 04:15:587 (255587|2,255587|1,255587|0) - to the right might just be good enough
21:50 Evening: or.. 04:16:942 (256942|0,256942|3,256990|1,257039|2,257087|3,257135|1,257135|2,257135|0) - you can just do the same thing as this
21:50 MrDorian: okay
21:50 Evening: otherwise it should be ok
21:50 MrDorian: better
21:51 Evening: as in i don't have any more comments *
21:52 MrDorian: thanks for mod!
_underjoy
quick irc

mod
21:10 MrDorian: cześć :^)
21:11 _underjoy: hejo
21:11 MrDorian: pamiętasz moje furioso z początku jeszcze, co nie
21:11 _underjoy: pamiętam
21:11 MrDorian: a zagrałbyś jeszcze raz?
21:11 _underjoy: oki
21:11 *MrDorian is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/966905 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia]
21:11 MrDorian: :^))
21:11 MrDorian: ludziom się podoba, ciekawe jak ci
21:12 MrDorian: nawet próbuję to hitsoundować, ale jeszcze muszę popracować :V
21:22 MrDorian: i jak wrażenia?
21:22 _underjoy: bardzo dobra mapa
21:22 _underjoy: tylko troche duzo tych minijackow troche rakowych :/
21:22 MrDorian: woo
21:22 MrDorian: trochę trudno je ułożyć, żeby były mniej rakowe :v
21:24 _underjoy: czasem lepiej z nich zrezygnować, albo z części
21:25 MrDorian: a mógłbyś podać, gdzie są najbardziej dupne?
21:25 MrDorian: (jak wkroczyć w moda, część pierwsza)
21:26 _underjoy: znaczy trzeba umiec rozroznic
21:26 _underjoy: miedzy dupne a trudne
21:26 MrDorian: no to rakowe
21:27 _underjoy: 00:51:200 (51200|2) - daj na 1
21:27 _underjoy: tfu
21:27 _underjoy: na 4
21:27 MrDorian: ok
21:27 _underjoy: 00:50:619 (50619|0,50619|2,50813|2,50813|0) - i w ogole masz tu sporo tych chordow
21:28 _underjoy: 00:50:813 (50813|0,50877|1,50942|0) - zamien miejscami
21:28 _underjoy: 00:53:522 (53522|0,53651|0,53781|0,53974|0,54103|0,54232|0) - zmniejsz troszke ilosc notek na 1
21:28 _underjoy: 01:00:490 (60490|1) - na 1
21:29 _underjoy: 01:10:458 (70458|2,70555|0,70555|2,70651|0) - hmm to jest niezreczne
21:29 _underjoy: ale nie mam pomyslu jak to zmienic
21:29 MrDorian: tam, gdzie zamień miejscami, to w jakim sensie
21:29 _underjoy: zamiast 212 zeby bylo 121
21:29 MrDorian: ctrl+g/h/j
21:30 _underjoy: 01:36:103 (96103|3,96200|2,96297|3,96393|2,96490|3,96587|2,96684|3) - uwazaj na takie patterny
21:30 _underjoy: trille przechodzace w bursty nie sa zbyt miłe
21:30 MrDorian: 01:10:458 (70458|2,70555|0,70555|2,70651|0) - tego nie dam rady zmienić
21:30 _underjoy: niech zostanie
21:31 _underjoy: to co napisalem to postaraj sie tego trilla skrocic
21:31 _underjoy: troszke
21:31 MrDorian: kk
21:31 MrDorian: zrobiłem 12 34 12
21:32 _underjoy: 01:46:264 (106264|3,106264|1,106361|3,106361|0) - to jest przyklad dupnego jacka
21:32 MrDorian: zamiast 13 24 13
21:32 MrDorian: jak to zamienić, jakaś sugestia??
21:35 _underjoy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5207054
21:35 _underjoy: cos w ten desen
21:35 _underjoy: generalnie jesli dajesz minijacki to staraj sie nie robic zbytnio trillowych patternow
21:35 _underjoy: bo to sie niewygodnie gra
21:35 MrDorian: kk
21:35 MrDorian: zapamiętam
21:37 _underjoy: 02:37:522 (157522|0) -
21:37 _underjoy: daj na 4
21:37 MrDorian: kk
21:37 _underjoy: 02:38:039 (158039|1) - na 3
21:38 MrDorian: ^^^
21:38 _underjoy: 02:50:039 (170039|0,170039|3,170103|1,170168|2,170168|3,170232|0,170297|3,170297|2,170361|1,170426|0,170426|3) - propsy za to
21:38 MrDorian: to akurat pomysł Xylo
21:38 MrDorian: :VVVV
21:38 _underjoy: 03:17:522 (197522|0,197522|2,197522|3,197651|1,197781|2,197781|3,197781|0,197910|1,198039|0,198039|3,198039|2,198168|1,198297|3,198297|2,198297|0) - imo lepiej pojsc w melodie niz w kick tutaj
21:38 _underjoy: ciekawiej
21:40 _underjoy: 03:27:329 (207329|3,207329|2,207458|1,207458|0,207458|3,207587|2,207587|3,207587|0,207716|2,207716|1) -
21:40 _underjoy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5207106
21:40 MrDorian: http://puu.sh/p0b1h/4136f02efc.png będzie działać?
21:41 _underjoy: moze byc
21:41 _underjoy: dobrze lecisz z pitchem
21:41 MrDorian: nooo, oczywiście
21:41 MrDorian: :^)
21:41 MrDorian: nie umiem wyczuć pitcha
21:41 _underjoy: 04:17:135 (257135|1,257135|2,257329|2,257329|1,257522|1,257522|2,257716|1,257716|2,257910|2,257910|1) -
21:42 MrDorian: robię tak, żeby nie było zbyt zbite
21:42 _underjoy: to jakos przepatternujkk
21:42 MrDorian: kk
21:42 _underjoy: 04:40:168 (280168|1,280168|2,280264|3,280264|2) - pomysł dobry ale zrob tak zeby bylo mniejsze obciazenie na 3 kolumne
21:42 _underjoy: przerzuc jacka na 4 moze
21:43 MrDorian: ok
21:43 _underjoy: to w sumie tyle z wiekszych rzeczy
21:43 _underjoy: mapa jest ogolnie bardzo dobra
21:46 MrDorian: 04:51:587 (291587|1,291587|3,291651|0,291716|1,291781|2,291845|3,291910|2) - [http://puu.sh/p0bgD/603680386e.png mogę się tak pobawić w spy'a?]
21:46 MrDorian: i czy dasz IRC do posta?
21:47 _underjoy: hmm
21:47 _underjoy: w sumie mozesz
21:47 _underjoy: ok
Topic Starter
MrDorian
ONLY ONE NOTE FOR MODDERS
Now there are 2 diffs. Mod the first one, "Curse". Not "Curse V2"
Thanks


EDIT
Only one Curse is left
Abraxos

General

  1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
  2. Aimod : ( ✓ ) breaktime seems ok to me, unless youre telling me that you want to put an LN there then ok then
  3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
  4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
  5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) yeah you better work on this soon
  6. Video : ( ✓ )

that pink bg looks terrible to me imo

also its off by 1 pixel so if you wanna fix that

also is curse a viable diff name, the song name directly translates to furious melody so curse where?????????

curse

00:01:652 (1652|0,1845|1,2039|2,2232|3,2426|2) - i dont usually mention pitch things but this is just too obvious for me not to mention. if you listen here 00:01:652 (1652|0,1845|1,2039|2) - goes back and forth in pitch yet you have this line of notes 00:02:039 (2039|2,2232|3,2426|2,2619|3,2813|2) - that seemingly all have different pitches but are in the same columns. you wanna like fix this or smth applies for whole section here

00:16:942 (16942|3,17135|2) - stackkkkk like you did 00:15:393 (15393|0,15587|0) -

00:40:555 (40555|2) - to 4, 00:40:361 (40361|2,40555|2,40748|2) - pretty trivial but still

00:47:522 (47522|2,47716|1) - flip, mimics the jumpthrill thing below
00:48:393 (48393|1) - i mean yeah i can kinda hear something here on 25% but i dont intend to play this map on 25% speed so you might wanna reconsider having this note here; applies for all relevant sections

00:52:168 (52168|1,52232|2,52297|3,52361|2) - move this to the other hand, you already had one on the same hand here 00:49:071 (49071|2,49135|3,49200|2,49264|1) -

00:53:039 (53039|0,53087|1) - can you check your snapping again


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you might want to flip this so that 00:52:942 (52942|3,52942|2,53135|3,53135|2,53329|2,53329|3) - itll look less imposing on the right hand here


00:55:264 (55264|3,55329|2,55393|3) - i get you like pitch and all but the left hand should get some action should it not

00:57:329 (57329|3,57329|2,57393|1,57393|3,57393|0) - this thing, could you bring it to the other hand please. you did the same thing for the right here 00:51:135 (51135|3,51135|2,51200|3,51200|1,51200|0) - so


01:06:555 (66555|1) - to 4, 01:06:426 (66426|1,66555|1,66684|1) - trying to keep what you did 01:03:264 (63264|2,63329|3,63393|0,63458|1,63522|2,63587|0,63587|3,63587|1) -

01:10:458 (70458|3,70458|2,70555|2,70555|1,70555|0,70651|0,70651|3) - im very iffy on this section, yes it does fit the music but it kinda isnt too smooth to play given how theres these jacks in the middle of jumpthrills. i mean theyre not too bad, but still. you could delete a note at 01:10:458 (70458|3,70458|2) - to accommodate for the transition into 01:10:651 (70651|3,70651|0,70748|1,70748|2,70845|3,70845|0)

01:13:168 (73168|1) - i guess this notes fine, the sound is more pronounced in the chorus

01:13:845 (73845|3,73910|2,73974|1) - why isnt this pattern the same as 01:16:942 (76942|1,77006|0,77071|1,77135|3,77135|2) -

01:25:071 (85071|2,85168|3,85264|2) - flip for continuity from 01:24:877 (84877|0,84974|1,85071|0) -

01:29:329 (89329|2,89393|1,89458|0,89522|3,89522|1) - flip because of the similar thing earlier
01:28:168 (88168|2,88232|1,88297|0,88361|3,88361|1) -

01:31:361 (91361|3,91361|2,91458|1,91458|0) - perhaps you dont want to end 1/6s things with jacks 01:31:264 (91264|3,91361|3) - so maybe you could flip this thing

01:35:522 (95522|2,95522|1,95587|3,95587|0,95651|1,95651|2,95716|0,95716|3) - how is this consistent with 01:36:684 (96684|3,96684|0,96732|1,96781|2,96829|3,96877|2,96877|0,96877|1) - or anything else? the bass beats here are on 1/4s, the synths are on 1/6s, no different from the above listed section.

01:35:135 (95135|1) - double? bass beat here

01:36:684 (96684|0,96732|1,96781|2,96829|3,96877|1,96877|2,96877|0) - id rather you not have 1/8s go into hands, because of jacks like this 01:36:781 (96781|2,96877|2) - so you might want to delete 01:36:877 (96877|2) - for good measure.

01:41:329 (101329|1,101522|1,101716|1,101910|1) - id close one eye if its a triple stack but this one has 4 notes in it. can you re-arrange them so its much more balanced on both hands? thx

01:41:910 (101910|3,102006|2,102103|3,102200|2,102297|3) - ?? why try to make up for the imbalance above with this thrill when you can just make proper streams

01:45:297 (105297|1,105345|0,105393|1) - will not mention the 1/8 into hands again. funnily enough you didnt have the 1/8s go into hands here 01:46:410 (106410|3,106458|2,106506|1,106555|3,106555|0) - so theres that

01:47:135 (107135|0,107135|2,107232|3,107232|1) - 01:47:522 (107522|3,107522|2,107619|1,107619|0) - are jumps but 01:47:910 (107910|2,107910|0,108006|3) - suddenly 01:48:006 (108006|3) - isnt a jump?
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given how you didnt have 01:47:910 (107910|2,107910|0,108006|3) - be two jumps i took that fact and removed all potential jacks in this area. the 1/8 thing you can decide for yourself.

(pics go from left to right)

02:12:361 (132361|2,132490|1,132619|0,132748|1,132877|0,133006|1) - ?? i dont get why these things always have to be thrills on one hand

02:33:522 (153522|2,153651|3,153781|2,153910|3,154039|2,154168|3,154297|2,154426|3,154555|2,154684|3) - i mean you couldve just done a thrill down the middle
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much less mindblocky this way since the thrills are on both hands

02:39:071 - why is 4 so empty here tho

02:50:039 (170039|3,170168|3,170297|3,170426|3) - right hand isnt going to take this shit mang

02:56:490 (176490|0,176490|2) - why is this a jump? the hihats here 02:56:877 (176877|2) - arent even doubles so whats that?

02:59:587 (179587|1,179587|0) - dont get why the hihats in the 1/6 packs warrant jumps

03:15:071 (195071|1,195071|0,195200|0,195200|1,195200|3) - this then makes more sense, the jump represents the bass beats

03:23:458 (203458|1,203458|2) - shouldnt be a jump, there isnt a bass beat here

03:29:135 (209135|3) - move to 3, 03:28:748 (208748|3,208877|3,209006|3,209135|3) - zzz

04:11:716 (251716|1,251910|1,252103|1,252297|1,252490|1,252684|1,252829|1) - 04:33:200 (273200|3,273393|3,273587|3,273781|3,273974|3,274168|3) - i know this is on 155bpm but i kinda have to ask you: do you take notice to the anchors youre making? thank god this isnt a js map

04:19:845 (259845|1) - to 4, 04:19:587 (259587|1,259716|1,259845|1,259974|1) -

last chorus is basically a copy paste of before, so there isnt nothing new to point out

05:48:877 (348877|1) - mang youre already safe now you dont have to keep on dragging this thing; end it at 05:54:684 -

done!!!!!!

if there is anything you didnt understand ill come back later and respond to your response or smth

hope my mod helped

good luck with rank
Topic Starter
MrDorian

Abraxos wrote:

General

  1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
  2. Aimod : ( ✓ ) breaktime seems ok to me, unless youre telling me that you want to put an LN there then ok then
  3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
  4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
  5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) yeah you better work on this soon I'm not good at hitsounding .-.
  6. Video : ( ✓ )

that pink bg looks terrible to me imo

also its off by 1 pixel so if you wanna fix that but does it change something? nope

also is curse a viable diff name, the song name directly translates to furious melody so curse where????????? okay okay

curse

00:01:652 (1652|0,1845|1,2039|2,2232|3,2426|2) - i dont usually mention pitch things but this is just too obvious for me not to mention. if you listen here 00:01:652 (1652|0,1845|1,2039|2) - goes back and forth in pitch yet you have this line of notes 00:02:039 (2039|2,2232|3,2426|2,2619|3,2813|2) - that seemingly all have different pitches but are in the same columns. you wanna like fix this or smth applies for whole section here

00:16:942 (16942|3,17135|2) - stackkkkk like you did 00:15:393 (15393|0,15587|0) - kay

00:40:555 (40555|2) - to 4, 00:40:361 (40361|2,40555|2,40748|2) - pretty trivial but still ^

00:47:522 (47522|2,47716|1) - flip, mimics the jumpthrill thing below ^

00:48:393 (48393|1) - i mean yeah i can kinda hear something here on 25% but i dont intend to play this map on 25% speed so you might wanna reconsider having this note here; applies for all relevant sections ehhh

00:52:168 (52168|1,52232|2,52297|3,52361|2) - move this to the other hand, you already had one on the same hand here 00:49:071 (49071|2,49135|3,49200|2,49264|1) - ^

00:53:039 (53039|0,53087|1) - can you check your snapping again my fail


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you might want to flip this so that 00:52:942 (52942|3,52942|2,53135|3,53135|2,53329|2,53329|3) - itll look less imposing on the right hand here ^


00:55:264 (55264|3,55329|2,55393|3) - i get you like pitch and all but the left hand should get some action should it not solved??

00:57:329 (57329|3,57329|2,57393|1,57393|3,57393|0) - this thing, could you bring it to the other hand please. you did the same thing for the right here 00:51:135 (51135|3,51135|2,51200|3,51200|1,51200|0) - so kk


01:06:555 (66555|1) - to 4, 01:06:426 (66426|1,66555|1,66684|1) - trying to keep what you did 01:03:264 (63264|2,63329|3,63393|0,63458|1,63522|2,63587|0,63587|3,63587|1) - kl

01:10:458 (70458|3,70458|2,70555|2,70555|1,70555|0,70651|0,70651|3) - im very iffy on this section, yes it does fit the music but it kinda isnt too smooth to play given how theres these jacks in the middle of jumpthrills. i mean theyre not too bad, but still. you could delete a note at 01:10:458 (70458|3,70458|2) - to accommodate for the transition into 01:10:651 (70651|3,70651|0,70748|1,70748|2,70845|3,70845|0) ok

01:13:168 (73168|1) - i guess this notes fine, the sound is more pronounced in the chorus <3

01:13:845 (73845|3,73910|2,73974|1) - why isnt this pattern the same as 01:16:942 (76942|1,77006|0,77071|1,77135|3,77135|2) - because I wanted to make it diffrent, but okay, changed

01:25:071 (85071|2,85168|3,85264|2) - flip for continuity from 01:24:877 (84877|0,84974|1,85071|0) - ^

01:29:329 (89329|2,89393|1,89458|0,89522|3,89522|1) - flip because of the similar thing earlier
01:28:168 (88168|2,88232|1,88297|0,88361|3,88361|1) - flipped

01:31:361 (91361|3,91361|2,91458|1,91458|0) - perhaps you dont want to end 1/6s things with jacks 01:31:264 (91264|3,91361|3) - so maybe you could flip this thing kay

01:35:522 (95522|2,95522|1,95587|3,95587|0,95651|1,95651|2,95716|0,95716|3) - how is this consistent with 01:36:684 (96684|3,96684|0,96732|1,96781|2,96829|3,96877|2,96877|0,96877|1) - or anything else? the bass beats here are on 1/4s, the synths are on 1/6s, no different from the above listed section. woops

01:35:135 (95135|1) - double? bass beat here k

01:36:684 (96684|0,96732|1,96781|2,96829|3,96877|1,96877|2,96877|0) - id rather you not have 1/8s go into hands, because of jacks like this 01:36:781 (96781|2,96877|2) - so you might want to delete 01:36:877 (96877|2) - for good measure. kay

01:41:329 (101329|1,101522|1,101716|1,101910|1) - id close one eye if its a triple stack but this one has 4 notes in it. can you re-arrange them so its much more balanced on both hands? thx re-arranged

01:41:910 (101910|3,102006|2,102103|3,102200|2,102297|3) - ?? why try to make up for the imbalance above with this thrill when you can just make proper streams
changed

01:45:297 (105297|1,105345|0,105393|1) - will not mention the 1/8 into hands again. funnily enough you didnt have the 1/8s go into hands here 01:46:410 (106410|3,106458|2,106506|1,106555|3,106555|0) - so theres that i know, but don't know how to explain sooo i'll just delete

01:47:135 (107135|0,107135|2,107232|3,107232|1) - 01:47:522 (107522|3,107522|2,107619|1,107619|0) - are jumps but 01:47:910 (107910|2,107910|0,108006|3) - suddenly 01:48:006 (108006|3) - isnt a jump?
img
given how you didnt have 01:47:910 (107910|2,107910|0,108006|3) - be two jumps i took that fact and removed all potential jacks in this area. the 1/8 thing you can decide for yourself. do not really understand

(pics go from left to right)

02:12:361 (132361|2,132490|1,132619|0,132748|1,132877|0,133006|1) - ?? i dont get why these things always have to be thrills on one hand changed

02:33:522 (153522|2,153651|3,153781|2,153910|3,154039|2,154168|3,154297|2,154426|3,154555|2,154684|3) - i mean you couldve just done a thrill down the middle okay (edited third time this XD)
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much less mindblocky this way since the thrills are on both hands

02:39:071 - why is 4 so empty here tho k

02:50:039 (170039|3,170168|3,170297|3,170426|3) - right hand isnt going to take this shit mang changed *

02:56:490 (176490|0,176490|2) - why is this a jump? the hihats here 02:56:877 (176877|2) - arent even doubles so whats that? aaaaaaaagh i don't know

02:59:587 (179587|1,179587|0) - dont get why the hihats in the 1/6 packs warrant jumps blue letters

03:15:071 (195071|1,195071|0,195200|0,195200|1,195200|3) - this then makes more sense, the jump represents the bass beats

03:23:458 (203458|1,203458|2) - shouldnt be a jump, there isnt a bass beat here k

03:29:135 (209135|3) - move to 3 k, 03:28:748 (208748|3,208877|3,209006|3,209135|3) - zzz ?? any ideas

04:11:716 (251716|1,251910|1,252103|1,252297|1,252490|1,252684|1,252829|1) - 04:33:200 (273200|3,273393|3,273587|3,273781|3,273974|3,274168|3) - i know this is on 155bpm but i kinda have to ask you: do you take notice to the anchors youre making? thank god this isnt a js map any ideas how to change it

04:19:845 (259845|1) - to 4, 04:19:587 (259587|1,259716|1,259845|1,259974|1) - k

last chorus is basically a copy paste of before, so there isnt nothing new to point out

05:48:877 (348877|1) - mang youre already safe now you dont have to keep on dragging this thing; end it at 05:54:684 - nope it,s good

done!!!!!!

if there is anything you didnt understand ill come back later and respond to your response or smth

hope my mod helped

good luck with rank thanks
pnx



General


  1. Seems to be Fine

Mods


Curse
  1. 00:01:652 to 00:04:748 - I suggest to rearrange the pattern of these note. It's about pitch relevance. Suggest this pattern : http://puu.sh/piPsE/2aab2db7cf.png
  2. 00:04:748 to 00:07:845 - Suggest this pattern : http://puu.sh/piPCW/5066dbd0ec.png
  3. In the first part, I recommend to use my pattern till 00:14:039
  4. 00:49:651 - I suggest this pattern : http://puu.sh/piSV7/e28e196ed5.png
  5. 00:52:748 - Suggest this : http://puu.sh/piTaU/f5d34be8ca.png
  6. 00:56:135 - Note here
  7. 00:56:571 - Change to 1/8 and add note here
  8. 01:09:781 (69781|3,70458|2,70555|0,71329|3) - I suggest to remove these notes. I thinks those note will interrupt the play. But It's fine to keep it.
  9. 01:47:619 (107619|0) - Remove this one
  10. 01:48:297 - Place at 4
  11. 01:48:426 (108426|3,108490|2) - Ctrl+J
  12. 01:48:587 (108587|3) - Move to 3
  13. 03:55:071 (235071|1,235168|0) - Ctrl+J
  14. 03:55:168 - Place at 4, Imo it have specific sound there.

Uwahhh~ I'm gonna said it's a nice map. Good Luck and take a star~
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