This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 октября 2011 г. at 20:27:45

Artist: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H.
Title: THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.)
Source: Fate/Stay Night
Tags: visual novel unlimited blade works heavens feel type-moon reiji-rj
BPM: 168
Filesize: 10934kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

1. Ilya (4,92 stars, 249 notes)
2. Rin (3,93 stars, 121 notes)
3. Saber (1,9 stars, 67 notes)
4. Sakura (4,83 stars, 183 notes)

Download: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.)
Download: NUMBER 201 feat. M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (no video)
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My second beatmap. Need in modding!


28.12.10 - New guest diff of Reiji-RJ: Ilya
29.12.10 - New bg on Ilya. Redownload, please.
24.01.11 - Artist was changed. Redownload, please.
31.01.11 - New bg on Rin, Sakura and Ilya. Redownload, please.
01.02.11 - New bg on Rin. Redownload, please.
09.02.11 - Combobursts from Reiji-RJ. Redownload, please.
13.02.11 - Video was changed. Redownload, please.

Suta desu~

Your [Ilya]

Download: M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu

Time to stop being lazy and start modding XP

Ilya
00:11:972 (6) Right one grid
00:12:151 (7) Left one grid

Sakura
Fine

Rin
01:08:743 (2,3) bring the end of the slider down a bit so its centered on the x-axis.

General
- Uncheck "letterbox during breaks" for all diffs not being used

Nice map ^_^

Thank you :3 Done!

[Sakura]
00:31:615(8)-new combo

[Rin]&[saber]
00:37:329-choose Inherit previous timing setting


really good map ,i can't find any problem

star~~

Thank you :3 done

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Ilya

00:27:508 (1,2) - the rhythm here seems not to match the music. try making them 1/2 earlier and add a note on 00:27:865


Sakura

approach rate +1?

00:28:222 (11,12,1) - spacing
01:15:529 - add a note?


Rin

00:23:937 (4) - new combo?
00:26:794 (5,6,7,8,9) - the rhythm here makes no sence to me
01:12:672 (6) - new combo


Saber

it is necessary to increase the distance between circles.

for instance 00:11:080 (1,2,3) - the distances between 1,2 and between 2,3 look the same. in this way the rhythm here is hard to recognize, especially for beginners

and I think there are too many notes on red ticks. I don't think beginners can deal with them

00:25:365 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm makes no sence

I'd like to suggest you remap this diff if you will take it as a Easy. seriously


that's all. you can call me for recheck if you need

Sandpig wrote:

Ilya

00:27:508 (1,2) - the rhythm here seems not to match the music. try making them 1/2 earlier and add a note on 00:27:865

Done. Thank you :3 Also fixed some hitsounds.

Download: M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu

General
Offset: 11.615 ("1" of the measure shoud start here, this doesn't change your timing really)

Saber
00:24:294 (4) - move to 00:24:472
00:24:651 (5) - delete
00:27:508 (3) - move to 00:27:329 or 00:27:686
00:54:457 (6,7) - try something like this:
also for 01:03:029 (2), 01:08:743 (2), 01:12:672 (6), ...

Rin
00:13:579 (4,1) - overlapping
00:26:437 (5,6) - ^
00:26:972 (6) - delete
00:27:508 (7) - ^
00:28:222 (7) - move to 00:27:865
00:53:565 (4,1) - overlapping
01:08:743 (2) - make it more symmetric

Sakura
00:38:207 (5) - move this to 00:38:386
00:38:565 (6) - delete
00:38:565 (6) - overlapping
01:16:600 - place circle
01:16:779 (12) - move to 01:16:957

Ilya
no problems found

Nice map, Star :3

Thank you! Done :3

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Ilya

00:27:687 (3,4) - place them between 00:26:972 (8,1)?


Sakura

00:26:794 (6,7,8) - the rhythm here seems not to follow the music. here is my personal advice:



Rin

00:27:329 - add a note?


Saber

00:54:457 (6) - new combo
01:08:743 (2,3,4) - reduce some finish
01:14:457 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:21:600 (3,4) - ^

ok looks better now

Thank you! Done :3

Первое,что бросилось в глаза - скрытый в спойлербокс ник автора гостевой сложности.
Их обычно выдеют ярким цветом или хотя бы на видном месте.
Если бы не увидел знакомый ник в тэгах - и не докопался бы.

Первый оффсет на сложности Ilya другой,надо исправить.

[Saber]
Такой большой слайдер тик рейт что бы скора больше было? Ну,в принципе не страшно.
00:25:364 (1) - Далековато,исправь дистанцию.
00:26:793 (2) - Как-то плохо звучит/играется.Удали слайдер и вместно него добавь просто сиркл на 00:26:793 и на 00:27:329 для поддержания ритма.
00:37:315 (1) - Финиш.
00:43:029 (1) - ^
00:48:743 (1) - ^
Вообще,наверное,небольшой перебор с финишами в конце,но я их люблю,и звучит неплохо,поэтому не буду ничего советовать.

[Rin]
00:17:329 (1) - Финиш?
00:23:043 - ^
01:12:672 (1,2,3) - Вообще-то времени довольно много,что бы не мисскликнуть.Но всё равно,если сможешь придумать что-нибудь другое тут - будет лучше.
Вижу что симметрия,всё красиво,но всё равно,даже с симметрией можно использовать всю площадь поля,не нужно ограничивать себя осью x/y

[Sakura]
00:17:329 (1) - На 1 клетку в право и будет ровно по центру.И вообще,это ж хард,поэтому если нарушишь дистанцию на 1 клетку - никто даже не заметит.
00:28:758 (1) - Финиш.
00:43:029 (1) - ^
00:48:743 (1) - ^
01:04:814 (6,7,8) - Сделать их симметричными?
01:16:957 (13) - Новое комбо тут? Вообще такие длинные комбо это не то что бы плохо,но и хорошего мало.

[Ilya]
00:11:437 (3) - Свисток идеально подчеркивает вокал.
00:14:472 (5) - ^
00:17:330 (1) - Финиш?
00:18:758 (3) - Свисток.
00:19:830 (7) - ^
00:20:365 (9) - ^
00:22:865 - ^
00:23:044 (2) - Финиш.
00:24:472 (5) - Свисток.
00:25:008 (7) - ^
00:25:901 (4) - ^
00:27:508 (2) - ^
00:28:758 (1) - Финиш.
00:31:794 (2) - Свисток.
00:32:687 (6) - ^
00:43:029 (1) - Финиш?
00:48:743 (1) - ^
За хитсаунды в конце - 10/10.

Отличная мапа,кстати.
Да и песня хороша.
Делаешь большие успехи,уже совсем про.

Звезда~

IceBeam wrote:

[Ilya]
00:11:437 (3) - Свисток идеально подчеркивает вокал.
00:14:472 (5) - ^
00:17:330 (1) - Финиш?
00:18:758 (3) - Свисток.
00:19:830 (7) - ^
00:20:365 (9) - ^
00:22:865 - ^
00:23:044 (2) - Финиш.
00:24:472 (5) - Свисток.
00:25:008 (7) - ^
00:25:901 (4) - ^
00:27:508 (2) - ^
00:28:758 (1) - Финиш.
00:31:794 (2) - Свисток.
00:32:687 (6) - ^
00:43:029 (1) - Финиш?
00:48:743 (1) - ^
За хитсаунды в конце - 10/10.

Все исправила, спасибо большое *о*

Download: M.H. - THIS ILLUSION (Fate ver.) (Ch1ka) [Ilya].osu

Спасибо, сделал :3

[Ilya]
00:32:150 (4) - left 1 grid
01:00:350 (x) - delete break

[Sakura]
00:11:079 (1,2) - not symmetrical, down 1 grid
01:22:294 (7,8) - (7) right+up 1 grid, (8) right 2 grids

[Rin]
00:13:579 (4,2) - Just try to stack them?

nice map, star~

Thank you, done :3

[Easy]

00:12:507 (2,3,4) - I find it tricky to be an easy.

Only this

Star~

Thanks, done :3