1. GiRLC's Intangible (5.55 stars, 1235 notes)

XII wrote:

dear god this is so fun on double time and I can't pinpoint why.

I hope the rest of the map turns out as great. Good luck!

MillhioreF wrote:

add atmosphere to tags because oh my lord who's even going to remember that typo

ChronoNig wrote:

super noob mod pls mercy >.<

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  00:44:626 (4,1) - suggesting space it along with the other streams
  
  00:45:773 (5) - nc? Fixed
  
  02:02:361 (3,4) - it's a big jump and the slider jump after it 02:02:361 (3,4) - doesnt get the same sort of spacing even though it gets more intense. I'd suggest either making 02:02:361 (3,4) - have a bigger jump or make the whole string of jumps slowly rise in DS
  02:26:008 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i dont feel like this really follows the beat. Ahh you're right. I never noticed the difference in beats. Should be fixed now since I added two triplets.
  
  02:26:185 (2) - if you dont change the anything about ^^ maybe lift this circle a bit so it blankets the slider better
  
  02:45:773 (3) - NC here maybe? Fixed
  
  04:18:243 (5) - Ctrl+g ? thought it felt better. I agree. Applied!
  
  04:42:949 (2) - also maybe NC here? Fixed
  
  04:48:949 (1,1) - i find this transition into jumps a bit wonky but not that big of a deal. Left unchanged
  
  05:03:067 (2) - guessing u missed a nc here? Fixed
  
  Didn't really wanna touch the wub parts since they looked alright and I'm not experienced enough to mod those parts >.<
  Overall this is a great map with really slick sliders, GJ dude I had a hard time finding anything to complain about and most of these are nitpicks.>.<
  https://osu.ppy.sh/b/923762&m=0<--- mod for my GD of this map if you could but dont have to.

Thank you for the mod

Yoges wrote:

Random mod Mostly just suggestions

[Girl]

1. 00:04:479 (3) - You could use 1/4 here like with 00:07:391 (5) - because the music oscillates True, I never noticed that before. Thank you for pointing it out! Fixed
2. 00:13:302 (1,2,3,4) - Increase spacing (and for other notes too) That's staying, unless it becomes an actual big problem
3. 00:16:126 (1,2,3,4) - Same here 00:17:538 (1,2) - and here Same as above
4. 00:21:773 (1,2,3,4) - In all other cases the spacing was increasing during the build up but it's just suddenly decreased here which doesn't feel right since the music is getting more intense. Do something like this. Changes applied, thank you for the suggestion!
5. 00:29:891 (9) - Should be two 1/4 sliders listen to the music. You do this a more times in this section apply it there as well if you're going to change it. Thank you for pointing that out, fixed.
6. 00:38:714 (1,2,3,4) - Similar to 00:21:773 - All mouse motion in this section just completely dies. Use 2.0 spacing or more between the stacks. I think using 2.0 spacing is a bit too hard to play. Using 1.5 spacing for now
7. 00:58:479 (1) - Emm... This entire section is just long slow sliders, you could easily have mapped the piano/synth so doing this just feels lazy really. The long sliders are staying. I personally think they add a nice touch to this music, and many other mappers do the same thing for similar songs.
8. 01:35:185 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Space more Done
9. 01:46:479 (1,2) - Make these swap places in timeline Good suggestion. Applied
10. 02:27:067 (4) - Map the drums here not the vocals Thank you for pointing that out. Changes applied!
11. 02:37:655 (2,3) - 02:38:185 (4,5) - Ctrl+G both of these Done
12. 03:15:420 (1) - Two sliders please Fixed
13. 03:53:538 (1,2,3,4) - Same as before Left unchanged because these stacks are already the same 1.5 spacing as the changes made onto 00:38:714 (1,2,3,4)
14. 04:40:126 (1,2,3,4) - ^
15. 04:41:538 (1,1) - Split these into four 1/8 repeat sliders so that the clicks are on each 1/1 beat Good point. Fixed
16. 05:17:714 - Add note

Added

Good map but you can really do with amping up the difficulty for the non kiai sections. Atm they contrast too much with the intenser parts of the song resulting in massive difficulty spikes.

Thank you for the mod ~ It was very helpful!

FaiVillager wrote:

Hi~
Coming for help~

00:03:420 (2) - can increase the angle I personally think that If i increase the angle on that It would start to look awkward. I may decrease the angle in the future but right now it looks fine.
00:04:479 (3) - suggest a 1/12 kick slider here or make a multi-bent slider I'm going to leave this part and any other similar parts with this
00:09:067 (2) - less curve Fixed
00:11:891 (2) - u can make a blanket here Done
00:16:832 (3,4) - Fixed

00:21:773 (1,2,3,4) - the curvature of these sliders are not same, for a prettier ones u can fix it Fixed
00:28:479 (6) - less curve Changes applied
00:30:596 (3) - can blanket better Done
00:38:361 (1,2,3) - make a part-overlap on 00:37:302 (1,2,3) - will looks better I agree, it does look better
00:40:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - u don't have to stick all these streams together. separate some of them will be better like:
I think they're fine the way it is. Left unchanged
01:04:126 (1,1,1) - to much use of this hitsound causes auditory fatigue, remove some of these Removed on 01:04:126 (1) - 01:15:420 (1) -
01:23:185 (2) - increase hitsound volume here because u can't here if u make a combo or not Raised from 30% to 50%
01:25:655 (2) - unnecessary circle Removed!

01:29:185 (8) - It flows better if this were unchanged in my opinion. No changes made
01:53:538 (1) - due to the track i suggest stream here Good point. Changed into two sliders instead however because I think it plays better with the music.
01:56:008 (5,6,1) - looks a lit weird- Fixed

or just

02:19:920 add a circle here can fit the track Added!
02:27:067 (4) - humm, why not just use some short streams with single taps? I think you may have modded this part before I changed it thanks to Yoges' mod. This is what I have currently
03:27:420 (2) - increase volume or maybe try another hitsound Hitsounding increased from 30% to 50%
03:33:420 (6) - like 01:29:185 (8) - Ok, I used the long slider from earlier, but I rotated it a little so that It doesn't get out of the mapping field. Changes applied
03:42:685 (6,7) - by the way some double streams like this part confuse me but they are ok. just i think they don't fit the track perfectly I think they fit perfectly
03:55:832 (2,4) - suggest parallel Those are staying unchanged. I think they look nice
04:20:538 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - here it is 1/12 if i'm right. try kick sliders Using 1/8 kick sliders for now. Really sad that I had to remap the pattern, since I really liked it D:
04:26:361 (3) - less curve Fixed
04:30:596 (3) - ^ Fixed
04:41:538 (1,1) - 1/8 Fixed in Yoges' mod
05:28:126 (1) - remove a clap or a whistle. Removed the whistle

really nice mapping Good luck~

Thank you very much for the mod!

Adore wrote:

this is an amazing map, actually playable unlike most of the other wub mappers nowadays trying to be overly edgy.

the only diff in the map

00:11:891 (2) - turn this slider into a 1/1 slider and a single on white tick like you did here 00:06:244 (2,3) - , it's more consistent that way since you did the repeat->normal->repeat pattern for the intro. having a circle there also signifies the stop for that section and shows the music change at 00:13:126 (4) -
Really good point. Changes applied!
00:38:361 (1,2,3) - kinda weird in a 3 pattern this one is just out there It's just 00:38:008 (1,2,3) - rotated 180%. I think that fine the way it is.

00:38:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - change this into a regular stream maybe you can switch spacing from small -> large as it goes further into the stream (other alternatives below) The first half of that stream section has it's spacing reduced to 1.0x, while the second half has been changed to this:
1. change it into something like 00:44:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2. make it closer together like 04:40:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

00:44:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is an extremely well executed jump stream holy shit thanks love you too <3

00:58:479 (1) - blanket the head better, right now its kinda anchored downwards Fixed

01:04:126 (1) - pull the bottom out a bit and make it look more circular Fixed

01:23:185 (2,3) - decrease spacing Decreased it a little

01:42:949 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - maybe some people might misread this since you did same thing here 00:29:538 (5,6,7,8,9) - but it didn't repeat another loop
and since the 2nd part is more emphasis than the first maybe you can make like a stacked spiral stream like the one in Nold's difficulty in "Blu", increasing spacing in the second half of the stream

Replaced 01:42:949 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1 with something similar to 00:29:538 (5,6,7,8,9)
03:27:420 (2,3,4) - unstack and do a back and forth jump https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4716711 Changes applied

this map is so good tbh IF IM HONEST TBHONEST

VINXIS wrote:

did u fix ur blankets