1. Bronze (1,52 stars, 118 notes)
2. Challenger (5,74 stars, 481 notes)
3. Cyllinus's Diamond (3,73 stars, 544 notes)
4. Gold (2,99 stars, 431 notes)
5. Master (4,94 stars, 467 notes)
6. Nya's Platinum (3,66 stars, 472 notes)
7. Silver (1,9 stars, 176 notes)

"Everybody dies. Some just need a little help."

Minatomura wrote:

The beats are reeeaally well placed^^, try to make their layout more dynamic (especially in the last few sections) and rise the CS a bit
May try a mod later on.

Spagett wrote:

Offset is off by 13ms , so change the offset to 7173 (NOTE : When changing the offset, make sure to check "snap object to new timing" but NOT "scale object to new timing". Save yourself time.) Changed to 7170, 7173 seems off as well (I might be wrong though, let's see what the other modders think about it)

This is just a general / opinion mod from this point on, so don't feel obligated to change them, but I'd advise it.

When stacking, try to change combo colors if possible, so that way they're easier to see. You should WANT the player to succeed, but not make it unfair by having it be hard to read. I increased stack leniency for now, I'll do as you suggested if someone else points this out.

Don't be afraid to make new designs. Copying, pasting, then rotating it 90 degrees doesn't really make your map stand out because it doesn't enter anything new. Variety is the spice of life. Well, copypasting isn't a bad thing if you do it right, although I might try some more variety in the first part of Gold and Diamond... I don't know, will see.

Good map!

A r M i N wrote:

M4M

Diamond

mapping is not only CTRL+C CTRL+V

that means imo your map is way too symmetrical and very boring to play but the second half is cool

also i would change CS to 4
And AR on 9+ is a MUST

Gold

Also too symmetrical and only copy paste pretty much but i like the second half where you didnt copy paste too much

please set CS to 4 its highly recommended

Bronze

CS 2-3 please
Too much copy paste again
02:17:730 (1,2,3,1) - Hard to read for newcomers

Maybe you are asking why i didnt write that much
imo you cant do much wrong with copy paste and it needs a remap

anyways i hope it helped

Jak64 wrote:

Good map, I don't see many error, is enjoyable, just one thing, can you try with 7168 offset? for me sounds better than 7170/73,
but take my opinion "without the true weight" since I'm not a good modder, just like to take a look at song that I enjoy >.<

Jak64 wrote:

just one thing, can you try with 7168 offset? for me sounds better than 7170/73 Done

Deppyforce wrote:

[Bronze]
you know that a ''normal'' diff must have consistent spacing throughout the whole map because this is 2016 who told you that? as long as you keep your patterns intuitive and relatively easy small spacing changes are totally fine, Normal =/= Easy, remap some pattern that spacing arent constant e.g. 00:25:410 (4,1,2) - 00:33:090 (4,1,2) - 4 -> 1 is 1.4x, but 1 -> 2 is 1.6x You don't even notice there is a spacing change to begin with, and there is a ~1 second break between these 2 sliders, so it's ok.
00:37:890 (1,2,3) - 00:45:570 (1,2,3) - spacing in these 3 notes obviously not constant and? it's fine, the rhythm it's super easy to read and it's not a derpjump (or whatever you guys call 'em, maybe deathjump? I dunno...)
there are more of these pattern (i think) look for them and fix them yourself if you agree with my suggestion, i will stop mentioning them
01:25:890 (4,1) - 01:33:570 (4,1) - stack if you mean stacking the start of 01:25:888 (4) with the end of 01:27:808 (1) then it's not necessary, these two sliders don't show up in the screen at the same time and you don't see any bad looking overlap
02:11:490 (3,1) - 02:13:410 (3,1) - 02:15:330 (3,1) - 02:21:090 (3,1) - 1/4 in normal is too much for the beginners :v (there are more in the 2nd kiai, but will not mention them cuz lazy if these were circles then you might be right, but these are all sliders and it's not difficult to hold-release-hold with this BPM, and the rhythm is not hard to understand since it's pretty much the same as 01:08:608~01:39:328

[Gold & Diamond]
tbh these diffs are too boring. ik copy paste stuff is fine if it fits with the rhythm, but look at the patterns :/ you know, what i mean this is 2016 not 2010 so try to map like 2016 maps so you're suggesting me to do what most of this community does now, putting aside my ideas and what I like to see in a beatmap? you want me to map without using any kind of consistency, placing all my objects in random spots? no, thank you very much (make more interesting patterns, not just copy everything) what the hell are you talking about, if you want to see really boring maps with heavy copypaste check my old maps, which are just garbage not because I used a lot of CTRL+C - CTRL+V, but because the copypaste was most of the time forced: back then I was really lazy and all I cared was to see my maps being ranked, without giving a fuck about the overall quality (ciao Andrea tvb pls don't kill me if you read this), would cause less trouble

1. AR 8 on almost 5 star map? I don't see it fit and it's 2016 but if you wan't to keep it it's ok
2. 00:07:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - this same 8 times in a row? pretty boring imo
3. 00:38:128 (2) - last anchor to x:136 y:140 for better blanket, use same slidershape for the rest of these same kind of recycled parts
4. In all of these parts 00:39:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you leave one beat unmapped in this it's 00:40:768 and for me it sounds hell a lot better with note
5. Overall the thing that you recycle aand recycle aand recycle the same shape (2-8 times/shape) Is a bit boring for me
6. 01:14:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this sudden change?? All other were slider-slider-slider-note and this is note-note-slider-slider-note, breaks consistency
7. 01:22:048 (1,2) - same here, and even when the sounding in these notes are same as in sliders this huge jump is also breaking this consistency
8. 01:45:808 (3,5) - overlap
9. 01:50:848 (1,3) - too close
10. 01:56:128 (8,9) - I'd rather make these slider
11. 01:58:048 (8,9) - ^ and so on
12. 02:10:048 (1) - from here on, I like your map
13. Only thing I didn't like here is recycling

Lumin wrote:

Nm here~

I don't really have anything to say about gold because there is just that one thing I don't like and that is recycling.
And that beginning kinda copies Diamond

[Diamond]

1. AR 8 on almost 5 star map? I don't see it fit and it's 2016 but if you wan't to keep it it's ok Alright alright, I decided to use AR 8 because the song is slow at the beginning and there are few objects, but I guess is fine with AR 9 too.
2. 00:07:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - this same 8 times in a row? pretty boring imo Slow/boring start on purpose, the difficulty increases (in all 3 diffs) as the song goes on.
3. 00:38:128 (2) - last anchor to x:136 y:140 for better blanket, use same slidershape for the rest of these same kind of recycled parts I don't like it, sorry.
4. In all of these parts 00:39:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you leave one beat unmapped in this it's 00:40:768 and for me it sounds hell a lot better with note I honestly think it's better without it, it makes a nice rhythm.
5. Overall the thing that you recycle aand recycle aand recycle the same shape (2-8 times/shape) Is a bit boring for me
6. 01:14:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this sudden change?? All other were slider-slider-slider-note and this is note-note-slider-slider-note, breaks consistency Actually this is consistent with 00:28:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), with 00:43:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), with 00:59:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and all the other similar patterns: I'll try to keep it simple, you can pretty much divide each bookmark section in 8 minisections of ~2.5 seconds each, the 4th and the 8th are a bit harder (or they're based on a different rhythm/use a different combination of circles and sliders) than the other 6 minisections.
7. 01:22:048 (1,2) - same here, and even when the sounding in these notes are same as in sliders this huge jump is also breaking this consistency ^
8. 01:45:808 (3,5) - overlap Moved the circles a bit up.
9. 01:50:848 (1,3) - too close Hmm I agree, fixed.
10. 01:56:128 (8,9) - I'd rather make these slider I prefer having stacking circles like 01:40:768 (5,6), 01:42:688 (5,6) and so on.
11. 01:58:048 (8,9) - ^ and so on ^
12. 02:10:048 (1) - from here on, I like your map
13. Only thing I didn't like here is recycling

Sorry for a bit short mod

• Tags: lol Warsongs album remix esports ggwp ff20 adc marksman markswoman gun pistol aimbot script hack report Lucian Luciana Purifier Girl Grill Black BasedGod zombie undead Tresh Thresh Trash Wife Waifu Dubstep DUDUDU Darude Sandstorm Dank Meme Twitch please delete everything that isnt to the actuall song related

• ctrl+shift+a will open aimod and aimod will scream at you for breaking DS
  my suggestions how to fix em:
  00:39:808 (3) - ctrl+g
  00:47:488 (3) - ^
  00:55:168 - just move em closer together?
  01:02:848 (3,4) - ^
  
  01:25:888 (4,1) - stack sliderhead with slidertail
  02:13:408 (3,1) - could be cleaner

Mazziv wrote:

hi! m4m from your queue

[Generel]

• Tags: lol Warsongs album remix esports ggwp ff20 adc marksman markswoman gun pistol aimbot script hack report Lucian Luciana Purifier Girl Grill Black BasedGod zombie undead Tresh Thresh Trash Wife Waifu Dubstep DUDUDU Darude Sandstorm Dank Meme Twitch please delete everything that isnt to the actuall song related ok D:

[my elo]

• ctrl+shift+a will open aimod and aimod will scream at you for breaking DS
  my suggestions how to fix em:
  00:39:808 (3) - ctrl+g
  00:47:488 (3) - ^
  00:55:168 - just move em closer together?
  01:02:848 (3,4) - ^
  
  01:25:888 (4,1) - stack sliderhead with slidertail
  02:13:408 (3,1) - could be cleaner

[the elo i want to be in]
02:40:768 (1) - why dont us the spinner end?
this diff looks pretty good tbh

[tiamant. wait isnt that an item?]
looks p good aswell but keep the sliderend for the outro

Didn't fix anything else, I prefer the way my diffs are now but thanks for the suggestions.

you from 2006? because your mapping style literally looks like 2006 mapping lmao

1. I think "Warsongs" composed this music and not "League of Legends".
2. About hitsounds, the default normal hitclap dosen't sound well with the music like on 00:38:608 (3) for Gold and Diamond.
3. Upscale your background to 1366x768.

1. Bronze? But this diff can't be easily fc'd by noobs. (More like Silver)
2. 01:49:408 (2) - Move to 300|292 to give more visibility for flow.
3. 01:53:248 (2) - ^ 212|292 to have consistency with previous
4. 02:02:368 (1,2,3) - Sugesting this pattern:http://s29.postimg.org/7je8jr4fr/img1.jpg same as above reason.

1. Make circle size a little larger, like 4.5. This is too small for a typical Hard/Insane diff. This makes difficulty spread more linear.

1. Nothing moddable, great diff by the way.

Neil Leo wrote:

Hi, M4M? from your queue:

Overall

1. I think "Warsongs" composed this music and not "League of Legends". "Warsongs is an anthology of 11 classic League tunes remixed and amped up for your competitive climb.", so no, you're wrong.
2. About hitsounds, the default normal hitclap dosen't sound well with the music like on 00:38:608 (3) for Gold and Diamond. uh ok, do you have any suggestion on what should I use instead? I honestly think that claps sounds good here.
3. Upscale your background to 1366x768. Ok

Bronze

1. Bronze? But this diff can't be easily fc'd by noobs. (More like Silver) If I rename this Silver, then I should rename Diamond Platinum, but I honestly don't want to, diff names are cool this way.
2. 01:49:408 (2) - Move to 300|292 to give more visibility for flow. It's already fully visible, also I don't like that spacing, I prefer having symmetry.
3. 01:53:248 (2) - ^ 212|292 to have consistency with previous ^
4. 02:02:368 (1,2,3) - Sugesting this pattern:http://s29.postimg.org/7je8jr4fr/img1.jpg same as above reason. I tried to do as you suggested but then I noticed that these sliders are too much on the border of the screen and I don't like it, I also tried to rotate them but still didn't like how they look.

Gold

1. Make circle size a little larger, like 4.5. This is too small for a typical Hard/Insane diff. This makes difficulty spread more linear. With a larger circle size this diff would look messy, so no.

Diamond

1. Nothing moddable, great diff by the way.

That's the best I can mod for this map.