1. Easy (1.36 stars, 57 notes)
2. Lost Forever (2.4 stars, 105 notes)
3. Normal (1.9 stars, 75 notes)

deadpon3 wrote:

Hi, m4m!

Lost Forever:
CS is too high, it feels like a really old map. Change it to CS4. Discussed and denied
00:21:747 (4,5,6) - More distance, it looks more like a 1/8. I really dont know what you mean here. It doesnt look like 1/8 to me at all
00:27:351 (5) - Place it somewhere else, looks bad like that. Ok
00:32:296 (4,5) - Another 1/4 looking like a 1/8. ^

Well, not so much to say about. Short song, it needs more diffs.

Because it's a short mod, m4m only one diff.
t/408665

Thanks

kricher wrote:

lost forever
its good just get bigger circles
easy
00:29:659 - this feels empty ?
00:36:912 - ^^^ - thats a slider
00:37:571 - ^^^ ?
01:07:901 (1) - get this timed better I dont even understand this. There is only 1 timing point

WazZzaA123 wrote:

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00:21:747 (2,3,4) - Maybe try to add a Back and Forth Slider into the slider that you made That doesnt really make sense
00:32:296 (8,9,1) - ^ ^
00:42:846 (4,5,6) - ^ ^

I feel like CS:3 Is more Appropriate I like cs 4 better, which has been shown in previous mods

Other than that it looks really good, maybe add a harder difficulty ? Its called Lost Forever

M4M One diff t/410341

MrSergio wrote:

Here's my part of our M4M deal :3
Raujika <3

Consider that I'll be a bit more subjective here since otherwise I can't point out much xD
So don't take anything personally since it's just how I see mapping :3

General

• Default combo colors ;w;
  
  Behold the power of vivid colors :Q___

  
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 199,137,46
  Combo2 : 255,128,64
  Combo3 : 255,128,128
  Combo4 : 214,175,22
  Combo5 : 147,218,14
  Combo6 : 177,101,101

Lost Forever

• First thing I notice is the AR, which imo is a bit low for the general spacing of the map. The ideal AR would be around 7 (maybe 6.5 or 7.5 depending on how you want it). Also, keep the CS. I don't really see any point in increasing it here (regarding the previous mods)
  
  00:16:472 (6) - Random whistle appears /w\
  00:19:110 (6) - same ^
  
  00:20:428 (2,3) - There is a little spacing inconsistency here but it's not really a problem (1-->2, 2-->3 are the same on the timeline yet not the same on the playfield, spacing-wise., but as I said it's not a problem). What I wanted to do here tho was to improve the flow between 2 and 3. I find it a bit forced and stiff. so here's an alternative pattern, see if you like it: here (I copied 1 and mirrored it vertically, then stacked it where 2 was)
  
  00:21:747 (4) - What about a whistle on this? It sounds really nice imo >~<
  same goes for all the other similar patters: 00:32:296 (4) - 00:42:846 (4) - 00:53:395 (4) -
  
  00:27:351 (1) - Maybe mirror this horizontally, since the jump is kinda forced (if you want I can provide geometric evidence and angular problems :^)
  
  00:28:670 (3) - this slider body goes out of the grid :/ You can slightly improve the blanket here
  
  00:31:307 (3) - Keep the current coordinates for the object, but do a Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J and a Ctrl + G. I suggest this because you always put a jump and the slider after such jump always has the curve in the opposite direction which feels less smooth imo
  
  00:36:582 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved :3
  
  00:41:527 (2,3) - Again, as I said above, you put a jump and the slider after the jump has the curved the opposite way xD
  Like this it flows better imo
  
  00:42:846 (4,5,1) - you increased spacing here. The other similar patterns had less spacing (references: 00:21:747 (4,5,1) - and 00:32:296 (4,5,1) - )
  I personally prefer the low spacing for that pattern :3
  
  00:47:791 (4) - maybe a whistle on head?
  
  00:50:428 (3) - imo the clap is a bit too much, since this part looks like a transition between the first half and the second half of the song. Instead try using a whistle here
  
  00:51:088 (1,3) - Hm... now that I look a these I think I pointed out too much these sliders and their curves which seem to be part of your style. I think you'll reject the ones above lol
  
  00:57:351 (2,3) - I'd increase a bit more this jump, since 00:56:362 (1,2) - is way bigger and puts more emphasis on 2, which is actually on a red tick
  
  01:00:978 (3) - the blanket with that huge "S" slider is a bit off. Maybe move this circle to around 376;217
  
  01:03:615 (5) - 2 things I'd like to point out here: first, you skip the NC at 01:02:956 (3) - ; second, I would have really liked to click 01:04:274 - since there's also a clap on it. So in the end, what about removing the repeat and adding a circle? You can also place that NC properly this way
  

Normal

• Since it is a normal, make sure to have all the distances constant. See what AIMod says
  
  00:29:989 (5) - Missing NC?
  
  01:07:901 (1) - I'd just use a circle on the white tick. As it is now it's a bit confusing since you make it start on a weak beat
  
  01:09:549 (3) - I'd remove both hitsounds, as you did for your other diff (compare hitsounds with the other diff and make sure they are consistent)
  

Ok, I'm done here :3
Let me know if you need clarifications with anything =w=/

Maybe Gladius wrote:

From #modreqs, just felt like modding this. No need for M4M

Please remember, my mod(and other mods in general) is mostly suggestions that I think could improve the map. No need to accept everything I say, and nor all my suggestions correct for that matter.

General

1. I couldn’t help but get the feeling (when listened at 25%) that the offset and the BPM for 00:14:164 (1) - to 00:19:439 (1) - here is not quite on. In fact, BPM may not even be 91 for the intro. But that could just be due to the nature of the sound (it’s not a clear sound) used in the intro. Feel free to ignore this xD
   I stole timing from other Lost Imagination maps, so it probably wont be wrong

Normal

• 
  Overall, I noticed that the distance spacing is not very consistent like it should be for a Normal diff. Please fix these errors by looking through the map yourself with Distance Snap on, as well as by using AIMod (Ctrl + Shift + A). Some parts are snapped to 1.2x, while some others are snapped to 1.3x, for instance. Ok, ill go through that
  
  Few cases:

1. 00:17:461 (2) - too large of a gap Ok
   
2. 00:21:747 (2) - filling in the timeline gaps as I’ll mention below should take care of some awkward spacing issues like this.
   
3. 00:41:197 (2,3) - changes from 1.3x to 1.2x Ok
   
4. 00:48:450 (5) - too small of a gap Ok
   
   
   On another note, I’m not an expert myself, but I feel like the Clap hitsound is overused in the map. Usually claps are used in the 2nd and 4th beats of a measure, but I believe you put them on almost every single white tick possible. Please consider changing this. I actually like it. Sorry that I disagree with you, but I like it...
   
   
5. 00:19:439 (1) - End this slider at 00:20:428, and then add a slider at 00:20:758. It would be much better like this because there is a strong clickable sound at 00:20:758 that could be represented, as well as removing the time gap between 00:19:439 (1) and 00:21:747 (3). Im sorry but no. The song slowly progresses into a more filled and cramp area (except the first part). The flow reminds me of going from trying to sleep to a dream of some sorts. Just figurative dance
   
   
6. 00:22:077 (4) - same as above. While fixing this, I suggest you tweak the slider a little bit to make the ‘gorge’ part of the slider more natural. (try a rounder arc, if you know what I mean.) ^
   
   
   There are more instances of such sliders you could shorten, I won’t mention them all here.
   
   
7. 00:21:747 (2,3,4) - From what I know, stacking multiple notes in a Normal diff can be quite risky, as it can be fairly hard to read. Check with others about these kinds of patterns in Normal. Ill check with others
   
8. 00:24:714 (1) - I think you can just change to this for better flow into the next slider. My style in general on this map kind of says 'no' to flow, but that is my style. This song is vey wierd in itself. It has those notes that go from soft to loud and is kind of serreal, so I did that
   
   
9. 00:37:901 (3) - removing the curve point at x: 107, y: 215 should make it look nicer. Ok
   
   
10. 00:52:406 (3) - Try something like this? Flow is a subjective topic as many say, but this looks and flows better imo. ^
    
    New Combos: I’m suggesting these to keep the NC pattern consistent - that is - at each big white tick like you did here 00:32:626 (1). In Easy and Normal diffs, keeping a consistent NC pattern is recommended to do so. Ok
    
    
11. 00:22:077 (4)Ok
    
    
12. 00:27:351 (3)Ok
    
    
13. 00:37:901 (3)Ok
    
    
14. 00:43:175 (6)Ok
    
    
15. 00:48:450 (5)Ok
    
    
16. 00:53:725 (6)Ok
    
    
17. 00:59:000 (3)Ok
    
    
18. 01:08:230 (2) - and probably one here, after the long slider

Ok

Lost Forever

• 
  Overall in this diff, a lot of the jumps and the flow seem quite random to me. I’m not very experienced in modding/mapping those aspects, so I’ll most likely not mention those here.Just the style
  
  
  Some mentions, however:

1. 00:43:835 (2,3) - I don’t hear any significant sound in the music to justify this large jump here. Ok, shortened
   
   
2. 00:56:033 (4) - kinda random? I don’t think I would expect a circle in the middle of the map after the last slider since it points downward. Moved a bit
   
   
3. 01:08:560 (2) - seems too far from the sliderend, and also 01:08:890 (3) - is the most significant sound in the song, so I don’t think a triangle necessarily best represents the music here. Ok
   
   
4. 00:23:395 (4) - blanket off, try making the slider a bit less curved.Ok
   
   
5. 00:24:714 (1,2) - blanket off, may have to fix the position of the circle and tweak the slider a bit to fix this blanket.Ok
   
   
6. 00:28:340 (2,3) - This gap is suddenly very small compared to 00:23:395 (4,5) - but then you’ve used this distance for other spots like 00:34:934 (4,1) - this so I don’t think this should matter too too much.Ok
   
   
7. 00:36:582 (3) - horizontally flip the slider instead? Right now, 00:37:571 (4) - feels like it’s alone on an island by itself in terms of placement relative to the sliderend of the (3). The (3) slider suggests a motion to the left, but the (4) is placed to the right at the moment, which makes for an awkward flow, I guess. Ok, remodeled the whole area
   
   
8. 00:40:538 (1) - blanket a little off here.Ok
   
   
9. 00:53:395 (1,2), 01:03:615 (1) - NC seems unnecessary unless there is a specific reason for these.Im stupid and I dont know why I did that
   
   
10. 01:00:648 (2) - blanket could be better, try making the slider differently by referring to this handy article. More specifically, This. Ok
    
    
11. 01:00:648 (2,3,4) - This spacing and 00:50:099 (2,3,4) - this spacing is quite different, I suggest making the one at 00:50:099 (2,3,4) - spaced smaller, I don’t know if the halfscreen jumps is quite fitting for the overall calm mood of this map.

That makes sense, ill change that


That’s all for now, send me a forum PM if you have any questions regarding my mod.

Good Luck!

Moeri wrote:

Hey! Mod for mod! My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/424146

[Lost Forever]
Just my personal opinion, a little bigger CS would make the map look better. As stated before, I dont want to change that

It'd be good to sharp up your map, and fix some overlap and blanket issues[Nazi]:
00:15:483 (3,1) - Ok
00:28:340 (2,3) -
00:34:934 (4,1) -
00:36:252 (2,3) -
00:37:571 (4,1) -
00:40:208 (6,1) - ^ for everythign above here
00:44:164 (3,5) - Not sure why this overlapping here. because I wanted it to
00:50:428 (3,1) - ^
01:08:560 (2) - Move together as the triangle to 01:06:582 (6) - ? I dont really understand, but I dont feel its an issue

00:29:989 - You could insert an uninherited line(green) here to rise the volume since the music is turning up the volume. That is actually a brilliant idea!
00:35:263 (1) - You can CTRL + G here for another flow. Ok
00:45:813 (1) - For "better" flow, you could CTRL + H here and put back to same position again.nah, it was done like this on purpose

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Remember to keep same consistent distance between objects in Normal difficulty, at least for above 95% of all objects. Everthing is snapped correctly according to AImod...

00:29:989 - As mentioned above, you can add an uninherited timeline here to raise volume, suggesting to 30%.^

Tripples like these in a normal with such BPM is strongly not recommended, which is highly chance for disqualification being too hard:
00:21:747 (2,3) -
00:32:296 (4,5) -
00:42:846 (4,5) -
00:53:395 (4,5) - I get this alot. If a BN actually says something about it, then I will change it, but I like it here.

Good luck!