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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 12 de septiembre de 2017 at 15:29:26

Artist: Whispered
Title: Jikininki
Tags: folk metal samurai raiden nwolf
BPM: 220
Filesize: 7730kb
Play Time: 04:59
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enjoy as much as i did mapping it~

21/2/2016 - new mp3
3/3/2016 - futsuu
5/3/2016 - raiden's oni
9/3/2016 - muzukashii
20/3/2016 - nwolf's kantan
8/7/2017 - added oni
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Alrighty then, here we go.

d - Small don (red note)
D - Big don (red note with a finish)
k - Small kat (blue note)
K - Big kat (blue note with a finish)

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion
Blue is a comment



Nwolf's Kantan

01:22:760 (22,23,24) - Change this pattern to d k k, it follows the guitar riff a bit better this way

I like the way this plays!


Futsuu

02:45:669 (67,69) - Change these two to k's to follow the instrument pitch?
02:46:760 (70) - Change this to a k to follow the instrument pitch?
02:48:123 (74,75) - Change these two to k's to follow the instrument's pitch also?
02:52:214 (82) - Add a finish to this note since there is a loud crash on the cymbals
03:00:942 (98) - Add a finish to this note also for the same reason
03:04:214 (104) - Change this to a d, add a k at 03:04:419 - , and add another d at 03:04:964 - . This will make give this section some variation from the k k k k pattern you have and it follows the drums nicely too!
03:05:305 (108) - Add a finish to this note since there is a loud crash on the cymbals
03:35:851 (52) - Add a finish to this note since there is a loud crash on the cymbals and it is also a section change so it will give nice emphasis

(Will finish the rest of the mod later on tonight/tomorrow, something has come up and I need to go :( )
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my general opinion of this song and mapset
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Nwolf's Kantan
First impression when playing: The diff seems pretty consistent in general and fits well with the song, it's definitely on the harder side as kantans go, having quite a few spots with multiple 1/1 patterns in a row and even 1/1 5plets, which may be a bit hard at this BPM. When looking at the general star rating and object count spread i guess it fits in, the suggestions will still be geared towards tuning it down a bit here, as it would probably still fit in the spread when it's toned down just a little.

00:15:396 (2) - you can remove this, because this pattern has the same density in futsuu, and it might be easier for kantan players to start off this long map with easier patterns
00:19:760 (10) - ^
00:24:123 (19) - ^
00:28:487 (27) - ^
01:12:942 (3) - you can change this to k to emphasize the vocal here
01:14:305 (5) - maybe delete this note to add a bit of a break and not overload the kantan player with a 5plet at this bpm, or you can split the kkkkk k into kkk kkk
01:17:305 (12) - change to k to emphasize the vocal and the high instrumental sound here
01:18:669 (14) - same as 01:14:305 (5) -
01:21:123 (20) - you can change this to k to emphasize the vocal and add a bit of variety here
01:22:760 (22,23,24) - i'd change this to dkk since the guitar pitch goes up from 22 to 23
01:26:032 (29) - change to k to emphasize the vocal and high instrumental sound
01:33:123 (14) - delete this note to leave a 4/1 break before the 5plet, this part in general is relatively long without the 4/1 break anyway
01:33:942 (16) - i'd delete this tbh, i'm not too sure about using a 5plet at this bpm for the kantan
01:35:305 (20) - change this to k because of the high guitar sound and 01:35:851 (21) - to D because of the drum crash and low intense vocal
01:37:214 (23) - delete, 3 1/1 triplets in a row might be a bit too much
01:38:032 (25) - change to k because of the high guitar pitch
01:39:123 (28) - change to d, since the guitar pitch goes up and down again
01:41:851 (35) - delete this to leave a 4/1 break, this part goes on too long without one imo
01:42:669 (37,43) - i'd maybe delete these, since i'm not too sure about 5plets here
01:48:942 (2) - i'd change this to k since it's a higher pitch than the sound before
01:51:123 (3) - ^
01:57:123 (10) - i'd delete this, since the sound here is kinda in the background and it would be a bit more steady imo, maybe add these notes onto places like 01:54:942 - as a k, i think it would be more direct, since there is an instrumental sound here that the finishers are following and the other is just a background chorus noise. This is for the whole part if you decide to do it
02:42:942 (2) - delete this, since the kk after it would sound a lot better imo
02:53:851 (18) - delete this, to make it a bit less dense and give better emphasis on the d k d on the other parts
02:58:214 (25) - ^
03:30:942 (37) - delete, the constant 2/1 gets very monotone
03:37:487 (4) - ^
03:49:214 (5,14) - maybe delete, i'm not too sure about the 5plets again, they fit but they may be too hard
03:57:942 (23) - ^
04:03:396 (5) - ^ this one is kinda out of place anyway imo, since the emphasis should be on the red tick at 04:03:532 - but you're omitting that for difficulty reasons... i think you can move the next note there if you want or leave it where it is now, if you don't want the red tick note
04:08:032 (16) - delete to leave a 4/1 break
04:09:123 (19) - again maybe delete, same as with the other 5plets
04:12:123 (26) - same as 04:03:396 (5) -
04:17:578 (40) - same as the other 5plets
04:19:760 (46) - ^ in general an x xxx or xxx x pattern can add the needed emphasis tbh, for all the 5plets
04:23:851 (2) - i'd change this to K since it's a higher pitch than the note before
04:26:032 (3) - ^
04:49:214 (43) - maybe delete, i think this one is a bit better than the others tho, since it's near the end and at a very intense part of the song
Nice diff overall, i left a lot of suggestions on how to make it easier, so if you don't want to apply all of them i'd suggest you do at least some, since it really needs to be a bit easier imo, so i left you quite a few options to consider ^^



Futsuu
First impression when playing: The diff is also relatively consistent and fits well with the music, but there are quite a few places where there should be breaks. Some parts are mapped with very long consistent 1/1 without leaving even 2/1 breaks inbetween, so the mod in this diff will also be geared towards toning it down a slight bit, to also mesh better with the suggestions for the kantan.

01:03:942 (95) - you can probably delete this note, since it leaves a nice break in this relatively long pattern without 2/1 breaks and adds good emphasis on the next 2 notes where there are strong drum sounds
01:12:942 (121) - change to k to emphasize the vocal and the high instrumental sound here
01:17:305 (134) - ^ , you can also change this one 01:17:851 (135) - since it's high pitched too, that would make this part a bit less monotone and build up more suspense
01:21:123 (146,148) - you can change these to k to emphasize the higher vocal on 146 and the higher instrumental on 148, would also add more variety
01:26:032 (158) - change to k for emphasis on the instrumental
01:34:487 (4) - delete this or one of the notes in this pattern, since it's kinda long for a futsuu
01:38:851 (19) - you can delete this note to add a bit of a break before the triplet and 5plet
01:40:078 (26) - i'd also think about deleting this note, to make it a bit easier
01:43:214 (4) - same as 01:34:487 (4) -
01:45:942 (17,18) - delete these, otherwise this pattern gets far too long, 01:46:623 - you could add a note here for compensation
02:05:305 - starting here there is a 1/1 pattern, which is way too long. I'd suggest cutting it multiple times at places of your choice
02:19:760 (119) - i'd also delete this note, since 12 1/1 notes in a row are also a bit too much
02:40:214 - starting here i'd move slightly away from that consistent 2/1 rythm, since it gets monotonous very fast, maybe leave a break or 2 to keep it fresh
02:44:442 - 02:44:987 - add a k, would groove very well and fit the instrumentals
02:45:532 - add a d for the same reason
02:45:669 (67,69) - change to k since the pitch goes down and up again in this triplet
02:47:305 (72) - change to k because it's the highest sound in the triplet and it would add more variety
02:48:123 (74,75) - change to k since these sounds are higher than in the other 2 triplets
02:50:578 (79) - delete this note to leave a bit of a break and get away from the monotonous 2/1 rythm
for all the notes below this use the 1/3 tick before the red tick on the time stamps... i kinda messed up here xD
02:54:260 - add a k to keep things fresh and less monotone, it would also emphasize the next note very well (this would be 02:54:214 - and so on)
02:56:442 - ^
02:58:623 - ^
03:00:805 - ^
03:01:896 - ^ here as well because the music is escalating a bit in this part and it would keep things flowing forward
03:02:987 - ^
03:04:078 - ^
03:05:169 - ^
03:05:714 - ^ again, now before every note because it goes forwards again
03:06:260 - ^
03:06:805 - ^
03:07:351 - ^
03:11:714 - add k again, to keep things less monotone and emphasize the next note
03:13:351 - ^
03:13:896 - ^
03:14:987 - ^
03:16:078 - ^
03:17:169 - ^
03:18:260 - ^
03:48:396 (4) - change to k to emphasize the high instrumental
03:49:760 (8) - delete this to leave a bit of a break and shorten the pattern a bit
03:52:214 (16,17) - change to k to emphasize the high instrumentals
03:54:123 (21) - delete this to leave a bit of a break and shorten the pattern, since it's slightly too long
03:57:123 (30) - change to k to emphasize the high vocal
04:00:941 (40) - change to k to emphasize the high vocal and instrumental sound
04:09:396 (4) - delete this or any other note in this pattern to shorten it
04:13:760 (19) - delete this again, to shorten the pattern, which is too long
04:14:714 (24) - maybe delete this, i guess it could be ok tho
04:18:123 (4) - delete this to shorten the pattern
04:20:851 (17,18) - delete these to add a 2/1 break in here, the 3 triplets are a bit overkill for a futsuu imo, you can add a note 04:21:532 - here for compensation
04:28:214 - same as the start of the first kiai, do something about the monotonous 2/1 rythm
04:40:214 - the 1/1 + 1/2 pattern here is far too long, i would suggest shortening it multiple times
04:54:669 (87) - delete this note to shorten the pattern down to a reasonable size
04:57:669 - this end is a bit tricky but i guess it's fine to add a short harder pattern in at the end, might want to make it a bit easier though
All in all a good diff i'd say, i think i gave you plenty of suggestions to make it a bit easier, just choose the ones you like most. Also left some suggestions to make the slow part more interesting.



Muzukashii
First impression when playing: Again, this is mapped consistently and well to the music, but it is a bit too hard. There are many 1/2 and 1/2 + 1/4 patterns that are too long for a muzukashii, especially at this bpm, so i'll suggest some things where you can tone it down here.

00:23:442 (35) - i'd delete this note to make the pattern easier. I would suggest not using any 1/2 patterns longer than 9 notes anyway and using one like this right off the bat might be a bit over the top imo
00:40:896 (45) - delete this, the pattern is too long
00:49:623 (91) - ^
01:03:669 - this pattern is also too long imo, i'd find some way to shorten it up or or make it easier
01:08:032 - same as before, but this one is even longer ^^
01:11:851 - for this part i'd suggest doing the same d changes to k for pitch emphasis as i suggested in the futsuu
01:53:305 (60) - i'd suggest changing this to d since the pitch is lower than the k in the following triplets and it would add more variety
01:55:487 (72) - ^
01:56:987 (81) - delete this, since the pattern is too long imo
01:57:396 (84,85,86) - change to kkd to because the last note is a lower pitch than the k in the following triplets
01:59:851 (98) - change to d for the same reason as above
for the triplets above this, you might even change them to kkd to be distinguishable from the next part, which is different
02:01:351 (107) - delete for the same reason as before
02:02:032 (112) - change to d for the same reason as above
02:04:214 (124) - ^
02:05:714 (133) - delete again
02:06:396 - for this part you went for the 1/1 beat for buildup but i would suggest adding a couple 1/2 triplets inbetween so that it doesn't get stale
02:11:305 - this is way too long, add breaks in here pls
02:15:669 - ^
02:18:396 - ^
02:52:214 - for this part i would suggest the same as in the futsuu to make it more interesting, maybe even with a few more notes (or reduce the ammount of notes added in the futsuu)
03:08:760 (142) - delete this to shorten up the pattern a bit and make it simpler
03:46:760 - for these parts i'd suggest maybe making some 1/1 triplets inbetween to keep it less stale (for instance adding a note at 03:47:578 - ), do this for the other similar parts too
04:28:214 - the same as i suggested in the first kiai here (including changes to d, pattern cuts etc.)
04:58:351 (12) - delete this note to shorten the pattern
04:58:351 (12,18) - ^
I guess i gave enough points that can be changed here, i hope you take these into consideration ^^.



Raiden's Oni
First impression when playing: I really enjoyed this, it's mapped very well to the music and the patterns play well. It may well be one of your best maps, Raiden. The only thing that kind of disturbed me was the high SV part where finishers came flying at you, i think it's ok in a way but there are a lot more interesting things that you could do here, especially the second part like that was kinda overdone with the finishers imo, i'd suggest changing that up a bit and i'll make a few suggestions to that in the mod. I don't think i'll have much more to add other than that, since the map seemed really good over all! :D

01:53:305 - ok for this part i would suggest toning down the SV a bit and adding 2 1/2 buildup notes for every finisher, maybe even more connecting notes for the last half of this SV part, i think the finishers with the SV are kind of a cool idea, but it feels like something is missing, so maybe tone it down a bit and add the notes inbetween as i suggested ^^
04:28:282 - again, here i'd suggest toning down the SV a bit and making 1/2 triplets by adding notes between the finishers, this would fill out the song a bit more and feel less empty.
All in all this is a really good map, i might have mapped some stuff differently, but i like how you did it and don't really see it as neccesary to change anything else other than the parts i pointed out. Nice one Raiden ;)



Inner Oni
First impression when playing: I had a lot of fun playing this and the patterning seems consistent through the map, but those really long stamina streams in the kiai are really overdone imo. Yes, there is a consistent drumline there, but there are other things you can use it for, which would make the map more interesting and fun than it already is ^^. There might also be a few suggestions to make some of the other streams play better.

Change HP to 6. 7 is a bit harsh for the difficulty of the map.
01:08:851 (214,215,216,217,218,219) - i'd ask you to consider changing this up, i mean it fits i guess and this is mainly based on personal preference but xxxooo patterns have a problem with giving right emphasis imo. Since there is a color change on a blue tick, but no color change on the red/white tick the blue tick will recieve more emphasis from such a pattern, making things feel really weird. That's why i would suggest changing 01:09:124 (218) - to k, as it plays smoother, sounds smoother and the k also emphasizes the sound on that white tick very well.
01:11:851 - i'd suggest mapping a bit to the vocals in these parts as it would help build up tension and make things less stale, this suggestion goes for all these parts throughout the map.
01:55:487 (63) - i'd suggest changing these notes to d, similar as in the muzukashii as they are lower pitch than the other k sounds here, this goes for all of them again, if you accepted what i suggested in the muzu
02:00:669 - I don't really agree with these streams, even though there is a consistent 1/4 drumline here. i think you could make things a lot more interesting if you made some shorter streams that were maybe a bit more pattern intensive or something like that. It's ok to keep some long monostreams, but having them go on for so long is a bit over the top in my opinion. The same goes for the last kiai, although you can probably keep those a bit longer than in the first (as you already did, but shorter than that please)
02:37:419 (21) - i don't really see any reason to have this color change on a blue tick here, ctrl G this 02:37:419 (21,22) - and it will sound a lot cleaner imo
I don't have much more to suggest, since i agree with your mapping for the most part, just please consider toning down those streams in the kiai a bit, since they are overkill imo.



Conclusion
Nice set in general and really nice song. I hope to see this ranked in the near future.
Props to everyone for making a full spread for a 4:59 song xD

Well, that's it... I hope this was helpful, since it took me 3 hours to get all this done XD
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Hi there from Chromoxx' dank MLG pro nonexistent modding queue. (M4M with Raiden)

my general opinion of this song and mapset
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General
Preview Point needs to be set
Uninherited Timing Points of the Inner Oni conflict with the other difficulties
Unsnapped Objects in the Inner Oni




Raiden's Oni
First impression when playing: I really enjoyed this, it's mapped very well to the music and the patterns play well. It may well be one of your best maps, Raiden. The only thing that kind of disturbed me was the high SV part where finishers came flying at you, i think it's ok in a way but there are a lot more interesting things that you could do here, especially the second part like that was kinda overdone with the finishers imo, i'd suggest changing that up a bit and i'll make a few suggestions to that in the mod. I don't think i'll have much more to add other than that, since the map seemed really good over all! :D

01:53:305 - ok for this part i would suggest toning down the SV a bit and adding 2 1/2 buildup notes for every finisher, maybe even more connecting notes for the last half of this SV part, i think the finishers with the SV are kind of a cool idea, but it feels like something is missing, so maybe tone it down a bit and add the notes inbetween as i suggested ^^ Kind of makes sense and I expected it to be mentioned on all mods, but I am personally very satisfied on the feel of rush it gives out of a sudden, plus the notes emphasize the heavy vocals in a way that makes it most fitting as a standalone with high SV.
04:28:282 - again, here i'd suggest toning down the SV a bit and making 1/2 triplets by adding notes between the finishers, this would fill out the song a bit more and feel less empty. Similar answer, although this time with higher density to announce that the end is nearing. Although I might tone it down a bit in the end if it gets mentioned more times.
All in all this is a really good map, i might have mapped some stuff differently, but i like how you did it and don't really see it as neccesary to change anything else other than the parts i pointed out. Nice one Raiden ;) ty fam




Conclusion
Nice set in general and really nice song. I hope to see this ranked in the near future.
Props to everyone for making a full spread for a 4:59 song xD

Well, that's it... I hope this was helpful, since it took me 3 hours to get all this done XD

Regarding general issues, they will be fixed soon enough kek

@jaco

01:52:487 (38,39,40,41) - y 04:27:396 (38,39,40,41) - no son 1/3 si le das a 25%, son solo d d k en 1/2, si quieres haz ddddk 1/4 como hice yo

cambié algunas cositas por mi mismo
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Futsuu
First impression when playing: The diff is also relatively consistent and fits well with the music, but there are quite a few places where there should be breaks. Some parts are mapped with very long consistent 1/1 without leaving even 2/1 breaks inbetween, so the mod in this diff will also be geared towards toning it down a slight bit, to also mesh better with the suggestions for the kantan.

01:03:942 (95) - you can probably delete this note, since it leaves a nice break in this relatively long pattern without 2/1 breaks and adds good emphasis on the next 2 notes where there are strong drum sounds i didnt change it like you said but you gave me a good idea
01:12:942 (121) - change to k to emphasize the vocal and the high instrumental sound here i want to keep it simple as only dons
01:17:305 (134) - ^ , you can also change this one 01:17:851 (135) - since it's high pitched too, that would make this part a bit less monotone and build up more suspense ^same
01:21:123 (146,148) - you can change these to k to emphasize the higher vocal on 146 and the higher instrumental on 148, would also add more variety ^same
01:26:032 (158) - change to k for emphasis on the instrumental ^same
01:34:487 (4) - delete this or one of the notes in this pattern, since it's kinda long for a futsuu added some changes here
01:38:851 (19) - you can delete this note to add a bit of a break before the triplet and 5plet ok
01:40:078 (26) - i'd also think about deleting this note, to make it a bit easier^or one or the other, so 5plet stays with me
01:43:214 (4) - same as 01:34:487 (4) - changed like before
01:45:942 (17,18) - delete these, otherwise this pattern gets far too long, 01:46:623 - you could add a note here for compensationdelayed that triplet a bit
02:05:305 - starting here there is a 1/1 pattern, which is way too long. I'd suggest cutting it multiple times at places of your choiceit's just 1/1 and it's the part of the song with more intensity
02:19:760 (119) - i'd also delete this note, since 12 1/1 notes in a row are also a bit too much^same
02:40:214 - starting here i'd move slightly away from that consistent 2/1 rythm, since it gets monotonous very fast, maybe leave a break or 2 to keep it fresh i want to keep it simple, and it has already variations with those 1/1 in between
02:44:442 - 02:44:987 - add a k, would groove very well and fit the instrumentals if i do that i should put a k here too 02:40:578 - and i want it simply
02:45:532 - add a d for the same reason ^same
02:45:669 (67,69) - change to k since the pitch goes down and up again in this tripletv
02:47:305 (72) - change to k because it's the highest sound in the triplet and it would add more varietyv
02:48:123 (74,75) - change to k since these sounds are higher than in the other 2 tripletsi want this 3 triplets in a simply way, because the song here is relaxing and i want to emphasize the upcoming k sounds
02:50:578 (79) - delete this note to leave a bit of a break and get away from the monotonous 2/1 rythm the sound here is too obvious so i will leave it
for all the notes below this use the 1/3 tick before the red tick on the time stamps... i kinda messed up here xD
02:54:260 - add a k to keep things fresh and less monotone, it would also emphasize the next note very well (this would be 02:54:214 - and so on)
02:56:442 - ^
02:58:623 - ^
03:00:805 - ^
03:01:896 - ^ here as well because the music is escalating a bit in this part and it would keep things flowing forward
03:02:987 - ^
03:04:078 - ^
03:05:169 - ^
03:05:714 - ^ again, now before every note because it goes forwards again
03:06:260 - ^
03:06:805 - ^
03:07:351 - ^i took all this suggestion and modified it by my way
03:11:714 - add k again, to keep things less monotone and emphasize the next note here i wont
03:13:351 - ^
03:13:896 - ^
03:14:987 - ^
03:16:078 - ^
03:17:169 - ^
03:18:260 - ^ i kinda like this part now
03:48:396 (4) - change to k to emphasize the high instrumentalsame as before
03:49:760 (8) - delete this to leave a bit of a break and shorten the pattern a bitsame as before
03:52:214 (16,17) - change to k to emphasize the high instrumentalssame as before
03:54:123 (21) - delete this to leave a bit of a break and shorten the pattern, since it's slightly too longsame as before
03:57:123 (30) - change to k to emphasize the high vocalsame as before
04:00:941 (40) - change to k to emphasize the high vocal and instrumental soundsame as before
04:09:396 (4) - delete this or any other note in this pattern to shorten itsame as before
04:13:760 (19) - delete this again, to shorten the pattern, which is too longyep
04:14:714 (24) - maybe delete this, i guess it could be ok thosame as before
04:18:123 (4) - delete this to shorten the patternsame as before
04:20:851 (17,18) - delete these to add a 2/1 break in here, the 3 triplets are a bit overkill for a futsuu imo, you can add a note 04:21:532 - here for compensationsame as before
04:28:214 - same as the start of the first kiai, do something about the monotonous 2/1 rythmyou didnt say anything on the first kiai but i think it has enough variation between those 2/1 k spam
04:40:214 - the 1/1 + 1/2 pattern here is far too long, i would suggest shortening it multiple times
04:54:669 (87) - delete this note to shorten the pattern down to a reasonable sizesame as before
04:57:669 - this end is a bit tricky but i guess it's fine to add a short harder pattern in at the end, might want to make it a bit easier though i think a bit of challenging at the end of the song isnt bad, newscomers has already easy parts on this song so i want to make it challenging for all futsuu players
All in all a good diff i'd say, i think i gave you plenty of suggestions to make it a bit easier, just choose the ones you like most. Also left some suggestions to make the slow part more interesting.



Muzukashii
First impression when playing: Again, this is mapped consistently and well to the music, but it is a bit too hard. There are many 1/2 and 1/2 + 1/4 patterns that are too long for a muzukashii, especially at this bpm, so i'll suggest some things where you can tone it down here.

00:23:442 (35) - i'd delete this note to make the pattern easier. I would suggest not using any 1/2 patterns longer than 9 notes anyway and using one like this right off the bat might be a bit over the top imo
00:40:896 (45) - delete this, the pattern is too long
00:49:623 (91) - ^
01:03:669 - this pattern is also too long imo, i'd find some way to shorten it up or or make it easier
01:08:032 - same as before, but this one is even longer ^^
01:11:851 - for this part i'd suggest doing the same d changes to k for pitch emphasis as i suggested in the futsuu
01:53:305 (60) - i'd suggest changing this to d since the pitch is lower than the k in the following triplets and it would add more variety
01:55:487 (72) - ^
01:56:987 (81) - delete this, since the pattern is too long imo
01:57:396 (84,85,86) - change to kkd to because the last note is a lower pitch than the k in the following triplets
01:59:851 (98) - change to d for the same reason as above
for the triplets above this, you might even change them to kkd to be distinguishable from the next part, which is different
02:01:351 (107) - delete for the same reason as before
02:02:032 (112) - change to d for the same reason as above
02:04:214 (124) - ^
02:05:714 (133) - delete again
02:06:396 - for this part you went for the 1/1 beat for buildup but i would suggest adding a couple 1/2 triplets inbetween so that it doesn't get stale
02:11:305 - this is way too long, add breaks in here pls
02:15:669 - ^
02:18:396 - ^
02:52:214 - for this part i would suggest the same as in the futsuu to make it more interesting, maybe even with a few more notes (or reduce the ammount of notes added in the futsuu)
03:08:760 (142) - delete this to shorten up the pattern a bit and make it simpler
03:46:760 - for these parts i'd suggest maybe making some 1/1 triplets inbetween to keep it less stale (for instance adding a note at 03:47:578 - ), do this for the other similar parts too
04:28:214 - the same as i suggested in the first kiai here (including changes to d, pattern cuts etc.)
04:58:351 (12) - delete this note to shorten the pattern
04:58:351 (12,18) - ^
I guess i gave enough points that can be changed here, i hope you take these into consideration ^^. i took in consideration all your suggestion and i toned down the difficulty in terms of density so now the spread with futsuu is more linear



Inner Oni
First impression when playing: I had a lot of fun playing this and the patterning seems consistent through the map, but those really long stamina streams in the kiai are really overdone imo. Yes, there is a consistent drumline there, but there are other things you can use it for, which would make the map more interesting and fun than it already is ^^. There might also be a few suggestions to make some of the other streams play better.

Change HP to 6. 7 is a bit harsh for the difficulty of the map.
01:08:851 (214,215,216,217,218,219) - i'd ask you to consider changing this up, i mean it fits i guess and this is mainly based on personal preference but xxxooo patterns have a problem with giving right emphasis imo. Since there is a color change on a blue tick, but no color change on the red/white tick the blue tick will recieve more emphasis from such a pattern, making things feel really weird. That's why i would suggest changing 01:09:124 (218) - to k, as it plays smoother, sounds smoother and the k also emphasizes the sound on that white tick very well. [b]changed a bit
01:11:851 - i'd suggest mapping a bit to the vocals in these parts as it would help build up tension and make things less stale, this suggestion goes for all these parts throughout the map.the music is very fluctuant in intensity in this section, as it goes calm -> fast and then back to calm after every stanza, so i prefer to keep the calm part really simple and give more emphasis to the faster part
01:55:487 (63) - i'd suggest changing these notes to d, similar as in the muzukashii as they are lower pitch than the other k sounds here, this goes for all of them again, if you accepted what i suggested in the muzui think the last notes for those streams have higher pitch than the stream itself
02:00:669 - I don't really agree with these streams, even though there is a consistent 1/4 drumline here. i think you could make things a lot more interesting if you made some shorter streams that were maybe a bit more pattern intensive or something like that. It's ok to keep some long monostreams, but having them go on for so long is a bit over the top in my opinion. The same goes for the last kiai, although you can probably keep those a bit longer than in the first (as you already did, but shorter than that please)i was gently here, and its part of the map
02:37:419 (21) - i don't really see any reason to have this color change on a blue tick here, ctrl G this 02:37:419 (21,22) - and it will sound a lot cleaner imochanged it a bit to make it less tricky
I don't have much more to suggest, since i agree with your mapping for the most part, just please consider toning down those streams in the kiai a bit, since they are overkill imo.



Conclusion
Nice set in general and really nice song. I hope to see this ranked in the near future.
Props to everyone for making a full spread for a 4:59 song xD

Well, that's it... I hope this was helpful, since it took me 3 hours to get all this done XD


Thanks for your mod !
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01:22:760 (22,23,24) - Change this pattern to d k k, it follows the guitar riff a bit better this way

I like the way this plays!


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Nwolf's Kantan
First impression when playing: The diff seems pretty consistent in general and fits well with the song, it's definitely on the harder side as kantans go, having quite a few spots with multiple 1/1 patterns in a row and even 1/1 5plets, which may be a bit hard at this BPM. When looking at the general star rating and object count spread i guess it fits in, the suggestions will still be geared towards tuning it down a bit here, as it would probably still fit in the spread when it's toned down just a little.

00:15:396 (2) - you can remove this, because this pattern has the same density in futsuu, and it might be easier for kantan players to start off this long map with easier patterns
00:19:760 (10) - ^
00:24:123 (19) - ^
00:28:487 (27) - ^ the difference to Futsuu always lies in the fact that Futsuu uses big notes and different colors. This will also give you a hint that this is a harder Kantan (which is why only HP5)
01:12:942 (3) - you can change this to k to emphasize the vocal here kats are for the intense parts like the one below
01:14:305 (5) - maybe delete this note to add a bit of a break and not overload the kantan player with a 5plet at this bpm, or you can split the kkkkk k into kkk kkk changed
01:22:760 (22,23,24) - i'd change this to dkk since the guitar pitch goes up from 22 to 23 ye
01:33:123 (14) - delete this note to leave a 4/1 break before the 5plet, this part in general is relatively long without the 4/1 break anyway did other changes
01:33:942 (16) - i'd delete this tbh, i'm not too sure about using a 5plet at this bpm for the kantan did both (also because Futsuu)
01:35:305 (20) - change this to k because of the high guitar sound and 01:35:851 (21) - to D because of the drum crash and low intense vocal stays for now
-insert 5 more points here, dunno what I applied and what not because I did a lot on my own. Also some things repeated
01:48:942 (2) - i'd change this to k since it's a higher pitch than the sound before
01:51:123 (3) - ^
01:57:123 (10) - i'd delete this, since the sound here is kinda in the background and it would be a bit more steady imo, maybe add these notes onto places like 01:54:942 - as a k, i think it would be more direct, since there is an instrumental sound here that the finishers are following and the other is just a background chorus noise. This is for the whole part if you decide to do it background choir-thing is the reason I added this, I find them pretty prominent. Also 02:05:851 (24) - I think this one is pretty important so moving other notes would make it inconsistent
02:42:942 (2) - delete this, since the kk after it would sound a lot better imo why?? Two kats makes no sense
02:53:851 (18) - delete this, to make it a bit less dense and give better emphasis on the d k d on the other parts
02:58:214 (25) - ^ changed
03:30:942 (37) - delete, the constant 2/1 gets very monotone that's why there's a spinner
03:37:487 (4) - ^ there is a break coming up
03:49:214 (5,14) - maybe delete, i'm not too sure about the 5plets again, they fit but they may be too hard
03:57:942 (23) - ^ same changes as in the last part
04:03:396 (5) - ^ this one is kinda out of place anyway imo, since the emphasis should be on the red tick at 04:03:532 - but you're omitting that for difficulty reasons... i think you can move the next note there if you want or leave it where it is now, if you don't want the red tick note 01:28:214 - *coughcough*. Removed the third note on both spots. Also undid the three triplet change, because it's not three triplets anymore
04:08:032 (16) - delete to leave a 4/1 break no
-rest is same as before anyway-
04:19:760 (46) - ^ in general an x xxx or xxx x pattern can add the needed emphasis tbh, for all the 5plets this is also emphasis?? Also required due to Futsuu being hard here
04:49:214 (43) - maybe delete, i think this one is a bit better than the others tho, since it's near the end and at a very intense part of the song Futsuu.
Nice diff overall, i left a lot of suggestions on how to make it easier, so if you don't want to apply all of them i'd suggest you do at least some, since it really needs to be a bit easier imo, so i left you quite a few options to consider ^^


thanks!

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updated with nwolf's kantan and fixed some timing stuff on inner
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Earned 2 kudosu.
hi >.<
kantan and futsuu no problem


Mzukashii
003:04:396 - 03:04:942 - add notes here ? all 1/1 a bit boring


Raiden's Oni
00:52:078 - miss a note?
00:50:101 (16) - add d here?
01:20:169 (28,29,30,31) - this slow down ;w;w;w;w;
01:53:305 (1) - nice speed up!
02:07:214 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - make it simple like d d k ddd d k ddd d k? this kiai is not suit for too many color changes imo


Inner Oni
00:52:078 - miss a note?
01:33:328 (158) - ,01:33:601 (161) - ,04:08:237 (158) - 04:16:964 (253) -
just a suggestion, move to 01:33:601 (161) - and make 01:33:532 (160,161) - d

take my star XD
rank this please!
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-S a I k A- wrote:
hi >.<
kantan and futsuu no problem


Mzukashii
003:04:396 - 03:04:942 - add notes here ? all 1/1 a bit boring. ok cool


Raiden's Oni
00:52:078 - miss a note?
00:50:101 (16) - add d here?
01:20:169 (28,29,30,31) - this slow down ;w;w;w;w;
01:53:305 (1) - nice speed up!
02:07:214 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - make it simple like d d k ddd d k ddd d k? this kiai is not suit for too many color changes imo


Inner Oni
00:52:078 - miss a note? added
01:33:328 (158) - ,01:33:601 (161) - ,04:08:237 (158) - 04:16:964 (253) -
just a suggestion, move to 01:33:601 (161) - and make 01:33:532 (160,161) - di dont understand this suggestion xD

take my star XD
rank this please!

thanks, and i hope you can clarify me that suggestion
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-S a I k A- wrote:


Raiden's Oni
00:52:078 - miss a note? nope, it's when the guitar pauses
00:50:101 (16) - add d here? huh?
01:20:169 (28,29,30,31) - this slow down ;w;w;w;w; perfectly readable
01:53:305 (1) - nice speed up! thx :3
02:07:214 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - make it simple like d d k ddd d k ddd d k? this kiai is not suit for too many color changes imo ...

Thanks for your mod!
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Approval duration ( just -1 second.. ) but did mapset
this greaat... GLuck for this, wah wah!

need more oriental metal!!
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hice unos cambios por mi mismo

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