1. Crystal's Garakowa (6.18 stars, 332 notes)
2. Easy (1.3 stars, 70 notes)
3. Extra (5.62 stars, 335 notes)
4. Little's Hard (3.3 stars, 219 notes)
5. Little's Insane (4.53 stars, 294 notes)
6. Normal (2.17 stars, 127 notes)

SuperMICrophone wrote:

queue

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[Easy]

00:44:789 (3) - I think (2) overlaps this too much... consider moving this up more along with the rest of the pattern?……i think it's ok
00:48:886 (3,4) - make parallel?……i dislike parallel 233
00:58:533 (4) - move the middle slider point up by 1 grid and it will blanket better.……1 grid too nazi lol
01:11:221 (4) - Again, I think there's too much overlap. Move it down?

clean.

[Normal]

00:10:560 (3,4) - 1/2 at 227 bpm is basically 1/4 at 113.5 bpm; I think it's too fast for a Normal. Just make this a 1/2 slider. …… note for drum better …… 1/2 no problem imo
00:33:159 (3) - Make this parallel to the side of 00:32:102 (1)
00:37:917 (3,1) - Blanket can be better; either adjust (3) or move (1)
00:39:238 (2,3) - Make parallel?
00:40:560 (1,2) - ^
00:54:040 (4,1) - I still think 1/2 is too fast for a Normal, but maybe it's ok here since (1) is a slider.
00:58:269 (2,3) - ^
01:01:970 (1,2) - too much overlap. move (2) and (3) up?
01:03:027 (3,1) - make parallel?
01:06:727 (2,3) - 1/2
01:08:842 (2) - This should be extended so that it ends on 01:09:370 (next white tick) to match the vocals …… yes，i mistake
01:15:978 (4) - Move middle slider point left one grid to make a better blanket

[Extra]

00:12:410 (4,5) - This should also be a jump. …… e , i not want add too many jump
00:19:679 (2) - consider ctrl+g
00:20:736 (2) - just stack this under the start of (1) …… dislike slider stack 【【
00:25:626 (4) - Move this so it makes an equilateral triangle with (3) and with the end of (2) ……ok
00:26:287 (3,4) - Make parallel?
00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - (2,3) and (4,5) are spaced too close together. There should at least be some space between them.…… for the voice …… space it a bit hard
00:38:181 (6,1) - Make (6) parallel to (1)
00:41:353 (1,2) - Make (1) parallel to (2)
00:53:247 (1,2,3) - I think these should be jumps.……anti-jump is jump too ?
01:04:348 (3) - Try ctrl+g here then move (2) to the new start of (3)……ok
01:19:943 (2) - should be further away from (1)

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cool mapset and song! GL

-SMIC

Narcissu wrote:

;w;

thx very much ><

i like your map song too XD

Flower wrote:

玻璃的我 破碎之世 …… 玻璃之花和崩壞的世界


[Extra]
不错哦，这个屌
00:46:507 - 有一个音，加上有更好的连贯感……這樣後面有感覺一點
00:48:555 - vocal有一个音，加上1/4的note或者把00:48:357 (2) - 改成3/4比较合曲……好 …… 改不動
00:54:569 (2,3,4,5) - 是我的话会给它加上normal sample，当然随你喜欢……加了whistle
00:56:815 - 我认为这里有一个circle比较合曲，即把00:56:683 (2) - 拆开比较舒服……現在的好打一點，做七星的話加上
01:03:423 (4,5,6) - 个人觉得改成normal sample比较不错……好

没了
最近摸力越来越烂了，对不起

祝早日rank~

[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4,5) - 3放到5的位置 5放到4位置 4放到3的位置

00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方 其实很难读 打的时候实际测试出来的 大概太弱

00:24:635 (7) - 这地方没有音

00:32:498 (3,4,5) - 这个地方可以换成一个1/4的滑条比较好

01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方比起前面来说却好读得多

卧槽辅导员的EX做得好流畅

[Little's Insane]

very beautiful.....but what's this? 01:18:622 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -


这图好难摸啊 感觉已经找不到什么摸的地方了 要不这个就当NM得了 或者我先欠着个M4M 可以随时找我再摸一张图 我晚上基本都有空

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
you need add little's used ID CloudSplash16 in tags.
and del excess timing points in little's insane ＆hard.

SPOILER

fix

[Extra]
00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得完全可以摆的随机一点
00:13:335 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ↑
00:19:679 (2) - CTRL+G如何
00:38:445 - 这里开始的减速段我觉得可以再慢点 1.0以下都可以的样子 让slider不至于过长搞得比较难排列 整体速度都挺快的……lfj 的圖基本是1.8*0.75~1.1，我已經遠低於偶像【【
00:58:005 (3) - 目测并不在00:57:740 (2) 和00:57:476 (1) 的正中间 …… 稍微修了一下……四級網格差不多極限了
感觉没什么可说的……

other diffs all fine.
加油低阶了他们
good luck~

Kibbleru wrote:

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01:21:000 - imo you could just cut the vocals out here. …… i tried , but will impact 01:20:736 - finish Orz

extra
00:09:370 (3,1) - stacking,, works but imo it's kinda anticlimatic for me. what i would suggest is maybe something like this …… no jump more easy …… if i do EXEX

SPOILER

00:11:485 (3,1) - ^
00:32:630 (4) - for overlapping jump patterns i would recommend putting nc here. …… don't mind xd
00:46:507 - add circle and stack it on 00:46:639 (2) - here? would improve readability……ok
00:53:247 (1,2) - u can try turning these into 3/4 sliders imo.……hate 3/4
idk what i did lmao. just thought it might be cool

SPOILER

roberto …… 納尼 ???
00:24:436 (6) - uhm

SPOILER

00:53:776 (3) - u can increase the spacing here

uh couldn't really find anything for easy and normal :<

09kami wrote:

[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4,5) - 3放到5的位置 5放到4位置 4放到3的位置 ……no , jump here 00:20:340 (1) -

00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方 其实很难读 打的时候实际测试出来的 大概太弱

00:24:635 (7) - 这地方没有音 …… overmap have fun 【【

00:32:498 (3,4,5) - 这个地方可以换成一个1/4的滑条比较好…… 1/4 滑條人玩？

01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方比起前面来说却好读得多

这图好难摸啊 感觉已经找不到什么摸的地方了 要不这个就当NM得了 或者我先欠着个M4M 可以随时找我再摸一张图 我晚上基本都有空 …… don't mind 233

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Extra]
00:22:586 (1) - ctrl g？ …… 差不多，後面還是想跳跳
00:36:992 (5) - 和00:36:595 (3) - 这个折返形状弄成对称的？一样的调子，弄成向下弯（笑脸形状）的会不会比较好 …… 好
00:46:507 (2) - 这个去掉？从这里00:46:639 (3) - 开始加速比较好……一開始就是沒有的，不過花花和kibb都讓我加個圈，我再看看別人怎麼說
01:09:965 (7) - 算overmap？你看要去掉不……大丈夫萌大奶

GL

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Insane]
00:18:754 (2,3) - try this I like my placement better.
01:01:970 (2,1) - safe? idc if it's safe. It's fun this way.
01:12:212 (6) - delete Why?

[Hard]
00:28:798 (4) - change into a slider+note. No... I prefer my rhythm.
00:34:613 (3) - delete Why?
01:11:749 (5,6) - why 1/4 reverse sliders? 4 notes or 2 sliders are enough imo I think 1/4 repeat slider fits here.