TitaN7 wrote:

From my Queue o/

Just because Studio ghibli is the best ^-^ = The artist is called: Kyoto Music Box Ensemble
Song name: Umi No Mieru Machi (Kiki's Delivery Service) I'm not so sure about this metadata in general, the version from the Kyoto Music Box Ensemble is much different compared to this music box version, so I decided not to change the metadata here


Easy

00:03:629 (4) - Add more spacing Can't break DS on Easy difficulties
00:06:521 (1) - ^ ^
00:09:412 (1) - NC NCs in this difficulty are set so that they happen every other downbeat
00:35:436 (1) - More spacing As previously explained, breaking ds in low diff (such as easy) is unrankable
00:58:569 (1) - ^ ^


Hard

00:03:629 (1) - Make this slider Lineal Making this linear kinda would look awkward imo
00:07:966 (4) - ^ ^
00:10:135 (3,4,5) -> http://puu.sh/mRnHT/24685aca67.jpg
00:14:472 (5) - Lineal Not really into the whole linear thing orz
00:23:870 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:870 (1,2,3,4,5) -> http://puu.sh/mRo6s/0af2ea354c.jpg
00:40:497 (6) - Lineal -> http://puu.sh/mRopk/1e753a2c44.jpg Still not really into linear things, but on the bright side, most of the other puush images you've sent to re-arrange things look really nice, so I did them (hence the no comment ones)
00:41:942 (3) - ^ ^
00:50:617 (3) - ^ ^


View of the Ocean

00:01:822 (4) - 2,2x Spacing, Curved, try this! http://puu.sh/mRhlM/2ab78c5cf1.jpg
00:02:906 (6) - You should put this slider 1.5x SV, http://puu.sh/mRliC/d34561b6aa.jpg I prefer to keep it the way it is right now, after all it would somewhat be inconsistent with the whole no sv changes that I have going for the set, plus I consider this a lighter hard so it should be fine for now
00:03:629 (1) - Remove NC Nc is on downbeat
00:04:352 (1) - NC ^
00:05:798 (6) - 1,5x SV to this slider previously explained
00:07:966 (1) - NC Same
00:09:412 (1) - Remove NC ^

(I suggest to make this sliders lineal)

00:13:750 (3)
00:23:870 (1)
00:25:316 (3)
00:26:762 (1)
00:35:436 (1)
00:41:942 (3)
00:47:003 (1)
00:49:894 (1)
00:58:569 (1)

Sorry, no changes to slider shapes on that list

That's it. Good luck.

^

Electoz wrote:

lol im back

[General]

1. /me *facepalm* [/color]

[Easy]

1. 00:50:617 (4,5) - Just curious but why a linear flow? Kinda random tbh.
2. 01:07:244 (4,5,6) - Not really sure if these will become off-screen in some smaller resolutions but meh. Nah, there a much more maps that use the bottom part of the screen more than I do so this should be fine
3. 01:23:870 (1) - Gradually fade out the spinner sound would fit better imo. laterrrrrrrr

[Normal]

1. 00:05:798 (5,6) - DS.
2. 00:07:244 (2,3,4) - Imo the direction of the flow here should be the same as 00:05:798 (5,6,1) . I dunno, I don't really find much of a difference with it so no change
3. 00:09:774 (2,3) - Imo ctrl+g the rhythm here would play better. I'll leave rhythm the same for now, since, although it sounds pretty nice, the rhythm here works fine as well, plus it allows the note on 00:10:135 - to be clicked as well as not putting an instance where there's like, two single taps next to each other because I'm pretty sure that never happens in the map. Although like the red tick is equally as strong i'll keep for nowww

[View of the Ocean]

1. 00:09:774 (2,3) - Same as Normal. ^
2. 00:22:063 (4,5) - Not sure how to describe this properly but the flow here is kinda uncomfortable.

/me runs

Cagrux wrote:

Hi from my queue! (again lol)

Gereral

1. I don't know about you but the hitsound is too loud for me. 30% for the normal volume and 20% for the slower parts would sound much better imo Idk, I'll keep it the way it currently is for the moment, if another person points it out I'll change up the volumes

Easy

1. 00:10:858 (5) - Almost touching life bar Don't really think there's too much of a reason for a change here since it doesn't actually touch the health bar so no change
2. 00:18:087 (1,2) - Blanket just feel like doesn't fit here. In fact, it's the only blanket in the map if I'm not mistaken. Maybe just make it flow?
3. 00:39:051 (4) - Rotate this clockwise a bit
4. 00:44:111 (3) - Move down a bit
5. 01:04:352 (1,3) - Put them further away
6. 01:11:581 (2) - Move right a bit

Normal

1. 00:09:412 (1) - Can be confusing for beginners imo. Maybe just put a circle here or a 1/4 slider So i get why it could be somewhat confusing, so I just removed the note after 1/8 repeat so there's a pause instead because I like how it goes with the music
2. 00:40:497 (6) - Rotate this anti-clockwise a bit
3. 00:49:171 (6) - Rotate clockwise a bit

View of the Ocean

1. 00:23:870 (1) - Change this so that it curves into the square pattern and makes a complete pattern with 00:24:593 (2,3,4) - or if you don't want to do that move this left a bit
2. 00:26:762 (1,3) - Blanket? naw
3. 00:52:786 (1,3) - ^ ^
4. 00:54:954 (5,1) - ^ ^
5. 01:00:015 (4,5) - Make them parallel maybe This one is on purpose so no change for this

Well that's all. Good luck on this

Desperate-kun wrote:

M4M

[General]

1. The difficulty spread is not good at all at the moment. Easy consists of nothing but 1/1, while Normal is full of 1/2 with even 1/4 mixed within. Hard and Normal are almost identical density-wise though. You will need to rename 'Easy' to 'Beginner' and map an Easy difficulty in between those two. The new Easy should have a decent amout of 1/2 and higher spacing than your current Easy. If you need more clarification on that, feel free to contact me ingame.
2. Your hitsound volume feels too high in general for such a calm song. I'd lower it by ~10% :3

[Easy]

1. The difficulty as it is right now is really simple to play (which is not a bad thing if the spread is going to get fixed). However, the rhythm only consists of 1/1-sliders and circles, which makes the map really repetetive, so it will be boring to play for newbies. I recommend you to add some variation by using longer sliders (2/1-sliders) or having 2/1-breaks at some places, to make the map more interesting. I will give you some suggestions below. In case you apply them, remember to fix the distance spacing afterwards!
2. 00:11:581 (6) - The piano sound here is pretty low-volume and not part of the main melody, so I would delete this circle.
3. 00:18:087 (1,2) - The consecutive piano sounds here can be nicely followed with a longer slider, to add some variety: http://puu.sh/mZsY8/baebdef058.jpg
4. 00:29:653 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:41:219 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:52:786 (1,2) - ^ (Maybe it would be even better to keep only some of these, again for variety)
7. 00:56:400 (4) - The piano not at 00:56:400 - is not part of the main melody so I would delete this slider and add a circle at 00:57:123 -
8. 00:58:569 (1,2) - Since there is no important sound at 00:59:292 - I would use a 2/1-slider instead of these two objects.

[Normal]

1. 00:09:412 (1) - Please, don't do this. Your slider velocity is already really low, this object looks really cramped and Normal players won't be able to read or play this properly. A simple 1/4-repeat slider works just fine here: http://puu.sh/mZtlw/b1f9b80b7d.jpg

[Hard]

1. The usage of stacks feels weird in this diff, overall. Generally a stack is used for pattern reset (flow reset) or to connect two notes, as the circles are at the same position. That means the notes in the music should also be connected somehow. I will point out examples of questionable stack usage below.
2. 00:02:545 (5,6) - This stack doesn't really fit because 00:02:183 - 00:02:545 - 00:02:906 - are consecutive tone steps. Therefore, simple distance spacing would fit better here. For these ones, using ds kinda felt awkward with the limited amount of room here, so I stacked it on the end of the slider if that makes it any better. Reasoning for this is because to me it kinda feels like 00:04:713 (4,5) - are part of the same kind of "rhythm" (I wouldn't be able to identify the correct music term if I tried orz) so basically, since it's still part of that particular rhythm, it should be fine to stack. It makes more sense to what it previously was since 6 is a different rhythm
3. 00:05:436 (5,6) - ^ ^
4. 00:11:581 (6,7,1) - Okay, so 00:11:581 - is a rather calm piano note, while 00:11:942 - is an anacrusis (in this case, it's the point where the melody starts again after a small break), so this note belongs to the following piano notes. Therefore, it does make sense to stack 00:11:942 (7,1) -, but it doesn't make sense to include 00:11:581 (6) - in the stack. I would recommend to use distance spacing between (6) and (7), but to keep the rest of the stack.
5. 00:59:292 (2,3,4) - ^
6. 01:09:412 (4,5,1) - ^ (in this case, (4) is not that calm, however the new melodic structure still starts at (5) so it's basically the same thing)
7. 01:12:304 (5,6,1) - ^

Overall it's nice to see a nice and easy mapset like this one once in a while. It doesn't do much but it does well what it does and is enjoyable to play :3 There are still some important things to change, but I'm sure you'll be able to do it! Good luck

eeezzzeee wrote:

I'm finally modding dis yay

[View of the Ocean]

1. 00:02:545 (5,6) - check DS (though it plays alright so you dont have to change it, but just reminding you its there..)
2. 00:13:750 (3) - try rotating maybe 10 degrees or so to lead into the next slider better http://puu.sh/n44yo/9a8812ba8e.jpg
3. 00:24:593 (2) - check DS (this one actually looks kinda funky because its closer than the rest)
4. 00:25:316 (3) - maybe curve it more to look similar to the other ones. or just copy paste them outright lol Nah i like it's curved atm
5. 00:39:051 (3) - try changing this into two circles or two 1/2 sliders to make this section more interesting because its all repeating the same pattern ;_; so i think this is the best part of the music to make some variety
6. 00:41:219 (1) - check DS (this one is a big difference for no reason imo)
7. 00:52:063 (6) - try angle it down a little so it leads into the next slider better http://puu.sh/n44x5/caa39d5338.jpg OR change the shape of 00:52:786 (1) - http://puu.sh/n44Jl/51eebfcc0b.jpg
8. 01:08:689 (3) - i recommend changing this to circles because the music is similar to 01:02:906 (3,4,5) -

[Normal]

1. 00:10:677 (3) - try moving it to x224y140 or somewhere around there to be a little smoother http://puu.sh/n4578/2ea28f0b1d.jpg
2. 00:31:822 (5) - try rotating maybe 15 degrees or so http://puu.sh/n45jC/3746505738.jpg
3. 00:36:882 (4) - maybe we can move it down a little so not everything is stuck at the top there http://puu.sh/n45oc/09fa4e4ca7.jpg
4. 00:39:051 (3) - same suggestion as in the hard so it would be like this http://puu.sh/n46k8/6ca369b534.jpg I like it's pattern atm
5. 01:11:581 (3,4) - try changing it into a 1/1 slider this ignores a note so no

[Easy]
gublublgbldugb y is it all slider-note-slider-note.
ok so for example 00:12:304 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/n46SI/413c5f9a21.jpg
and like 00:35:436 - this section where you had triples in the harder diffs you can definitely come up with a different pattern
also theres no HS but im sure you know that lol

ok i saw that this diff was just recently added lol. I feel like it was quite rushed, please put more time into this and find some rhythm that can better express the song Aight, so like the thing about this diff is to fulfill the diff gap between beginner and normal right? So basically, I added some variation like you pointed out, so it won't be nearly as boring to play, as well as having 1/2 incorporated into the diff itself. I think where the diff currently stands fills in the diff gap that was previously there so idk, I'll keep most of the rhythms for now, after all, it's an easy, can't really expect too much in that regard. The tick is 2 so that even if the notes aren't clicked because of a 1/1 or something slider, it'll still be heard with the tick, so I don't see too much reason besides the variation I added to make it less boring to change the rhythm ><

[Beginner]
Nothing much to say this diff looks and plays fine imo

1. 00:29:653 (1) - maybe move it to the right a little more so it looks better coming off of the note
2. 01:23:870 (1) - start the spinner earlier maybe like the red tick because this literally the middle of nowhere lol Think this should be fine

Ok that's all from me. Good luck!

Haruto wrote:

from my q

[General]

1. are you using a Default Combo Color or you will Change it? ww

[Ez]

1. 00:04:352 - 00:04:713 (2) - i dunno if this is intentional but i guess transition between them is a bit "edgy" or dense tho. might want to lower down (2) about few Pixels?
2. 00:15:195 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing
3. 00:23:509 (4,1) - ^
4. 00:27:846 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:39:051 - 00:39:412 (2) - 00:39:774 (3) - movements or transition between them are too dense imo. should move up (2) about few pixels
6. 00:39:774 (3,3) - you could make them stacked tho D:
7. 01:12:665 (4,3) - i would blanket this tho :> might want to blanket this? /hides

pls they aren't even on the screen at the same time ;w;

[Nm]

1. 00:08:689 (5) - i would make this to curved slider btw. the flow from 00:08:328 - to 00:08:689 - is changed a bit because the edgy slider I just changed angle
2. 00:41:219 (1,2,3) - the rhythm can be fine enough for others but i think the flow and the transition could be better. fixed?
3. 00:56:400 - 00:57:484 - the patterns are bit weird imo and the transition is a bit dense too when you play it with DT :/ To be fair this is literally the densest part of the song lol

[Ocean]

1. 00:01:460 (2,4) - nazi, blanket :> /hides
2. 00:01:822 (4,5) - uh i know this is fine but this part is a bit "trappy" for me instead stacking (5), try to move it to 327|58 i suppose?
3. 00:04:713 (4,5) - same issue^
4. 00:09:412 (1) - instead repeated slider, why dont change it to 1/8 triplet instead? For easy-ness
5. 00:20:256 (4) - straight slider is wayy better than edgy imo i can feel the flow is bit break here :c
6. 00:56:581 (2,3,4,5) - you know that you can notice the square here isn't placed nicely :> try to move 00:57:484 (5) - to 192|175 I wasn't making a square but fixed anyways xd
7. 01:22:424 (2,3,4) - pls make this a triangle :> try to move 01:23:147 (4) - to 73|176

im suk at modding low bpm :/
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Hope that's Help, Good Luck!

1. AIMod says unicode artist conflicts with Normal diff so you need to fix this.

• 
  I can't find any issues with this.

1. 00:02:183 (3) - Curve this towards the 4 for nicer flow.
2. 00:13:750 (2) - Move to (240, 352) so the end of the previous slider is in line with this one.
3. 00:36:882 (3) - Curve towards the 4.
4. 00:39:774 (3) - ^
5. 00:42:304 (2) - Move this to (79, 81) so it's in the same position as the 4 from the previous combo (otherwise it looks sloppy).

1. Use AIMod to fix any distance snap issues.
2. 00:14:472 (5) - Curve this towards the 1 rather than away from it.
3. 01:06:521 (5) - ^

1. 00:33:629 (4) - ctrl + g maybe