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Underoath - A Moment Suspended in Time

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Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 14, 2016 at 6:31:13 PM

Artist: Underoath
Title: A Moment Suspended in Time
Tags: bouyaaa pishifat post hardcore punk metal
BPM: 176
Filesize: 5159kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. BOUYAAA's Extra (5.33 stars, 505 notes)
  2. Easy (1.42 stars, 98 notes)
  3. Hard (2.62 stars, 215 notes)
  4. Insane (4.78 stars, 428 notes)
  5. Normal (1.93 stars, 175 notes)
  6. pishi's Insane (4.15 stars, 358 notes)
Download: Underoath - A Moment Suspended in Time
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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im not a fat cat

Last edited by Milan- , edited 18 times in total.
pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,802 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
$10
George
George
pishi's nudies
Side
1,127 posts
Joined October 2013
Side
Hi for the M4M :v

My throat hurts listening to this and the main vocalist sings with a lisp.
Also cmon at least hitsound your diffs before looking for mods >_>

[Booya's wat]

If this is a PP map at least use OD8.5. Also a slightly higher AR like 9.3 or 9.4 could work as well for that. Also considering how free this map is might as well make it HP7 :v

00:21:899 (1) - You can be totally edgy and originally by making this slider the only grey combo in the diff and then be like "oh its grey cuz its super slow so players will tell something is different" and then modders will be like "ooo look at this guy being clever" or just not notice at all. Really insignificant change but you know ;)

00:24:626 - 00:46:444 - Kiai here would make sense. Probably the part that might deserve one if anything like in the other diffs.

00:39:967 (2) - Oh boy nazi mod time (stack under 00:38:774 (3) - )

No real objective issues but I would love to see more movement in this diff. The SV is so low and the jumps are so short for such difficulty. The jumps are also very straight-forward there's nothing that really feels emphasized currently. Consider increasing the default SV to 1.8x hell maybe even 2.0x and maybe adding more emphasis and by that I don't mean just higher spacing but rather slightly sharper movement something that feels harder to play but is more rewarding when played properly. This isn't a map I'd want to play more than once and I say that because I would likely FC this in one try and the song is pretty lame to me xP


[Milan's tempting offer]

00:23:092 (2,3) - Not really sure what this is following. If it's that light tapping in the background I wouldn't say that would be better as 2 and 3 stacked but personally I think it might be more impactful if this was not mapped and instead use this as a longer pause for when the drums pick up again at 00:23:603 (1) -

Additionally 00:24:115 - could be mapped because there is a light sound but it would make more sense with the map rather than just with the music because you could use this as a good way to build-up into the first verse. For example you could have a note at x:401 y:284 which adds a nice snap and leads well into the slow slider at 00:24:285 (1) -

00:37:921 (5) - Ctrl+G plays really well and adds extra emphasis to 00:38:262 (1) - while still being easy enough to play for this diff.

01:21:558 (4,5,1) - I doubt it but maybe people will bring this up and suggest a different pattern because of the overlap.

No major issues. HITSOUND YOUR DIFFS DAMN IT


[Pishi's beh]

No OD8.6? :^) jkjk but plebs at this diff will probably hate you for that cs5 lol. If you don't want them to hate you THAT much maybe consider CS4.5. But this doesn't affect me so oh well!

00:28:376 (4) - Maybe pull down on the middle red node a bit so it doesn't look longer on one side than the other (unless this was intentional doesn't seem like it tho) Also check the other sliders like this one just in case.

00:35:535 (1,2,3) - Nice!

No real issues.


[Hard]

01:21:387 - Maybe add a note here. Feels pretty empty here even for a hard

No real issues


[Normal]

00:35:535 (1) - This would feel better as a 2/1 slider because it would better go with the vocals hitting the start and end of where the dude sings. Also plays similar to 00:36:558 (2) - since both are technically holding for 2/1 and it feels less empty than a 1/1 slider and pause. Could look like this.

00:38:262 (1) - Same for this it and especially if the above was changed. Could look like this (omg socreative).

00:47:467 - Note here would make more sense with the finish playing there. Plus a 2/1 pause reads easier than a 5/2 pause. Could easily be added here like so.

01:12:353 (5,6,1,2,3) - so much 1/1 spam LOL. An alternative could be to follow the vocals with 01:12:353 (5) - by making this a 3/2 slide so the repeat and end go better with what the vocals do. It will mean moving a few notes around after so if you didn't wanna think of a different pattern for example you could just restack 01:13:717 (1,2,3) - over where 01:11:331 (2,3,4) - used to be. Maybe looks something like this.

No major issues.


You know what? This song sucks LOL. I'm also half dissapointed that this is no single tap high spaced jump map considering pretty much everyone mapped it as 1/2 spam but the jumps in general were way too easy from the two highest diffs. Also I said this above but cmon for a super safe speedrankable set you could've at LEAST hitsounded a diff and copied them over so I could've had something to listen to when modding this (the song bored me so I muted it xP jkjk) But I still like modding hitsounds myself. Let me know when you hitsound this so I can double-check them so I can at least feel my mod was meaningful.

Hope this helps. Good luck! :)
Makeli
932 posts
Joined October 2013
Makeli
hm ye

BOUYAAA's PP GIVE ME PP

  1. PP needs at least od 8.5 or 9 or something
  2. cmon hp 7 i didn't even feel scared about failing this
  3. ar seems fine idk if you wanna but you can go like 9.1-9.2
  4. You could silence sliderends if you want but whatevs
  5. 00:34:512 (9,10,11,12) - If you wanna be a horrible person (like me) and give emphasis to those snares you could lower the spacing here since there is no snares lol don't forget to nc then
  6. 00:36:046 (3) - I'm fine with you skipping these bass drum or whatever sounds but then you skipped a snare 00:37:069 (1) - here :CCCC
  7. 00:48:490 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/nqMDO/41d0a3caa4.jpg For maximum PP and hardness.
  8. 01:10:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again you could give these löower spacing for maximum idk what
  9. Ye mostly just sugestions nice

so how much for those nudes?

  1. give bouyaaa's diff that cool sliderback/whatever too
  2. you could silence sliderends too
  3. 00:23:603 (1) - You could be more clear about what snapping this is. I missread on sightred but that might be because I just got up
  4. 00:37:921 (5) - Ugh ctrl+g pls
  5. 01:04:853 (1) - I have no idea why I noticed this now (don't know if you did this before) but this seeems really random to end that slider on the snare here. Maybe cause it's somewhat calm for 3 seconds and then there is that snare wow
  6. 01:21:899 (1) - pls unstack or something i'm gay
  7. 01:32:126 (3,4) - i think you should have mapped these as streams again cause loud snares are loud and snares are things
  8. yes

pishi's baby insane

  1. you also could silence sliderends wow
  2. 01:14:399 (3) - look at this me telling someone to ctrl+g something i have never seen this before
  3. 01:14:740 (4) - ^
  4. ok dicks

very hard

  1. 00:47:467 (2,3) - idk this was the gayest thing ever to play but probably because i can't read
  2. 01:04:171 (4) - emphasis thing pls unstack
  3. saatana

modding diffs lower than insane is just dumb wtf
NICE HITSOUNDS M8
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak
M4M from q


ok

[General]
  1. holy shit that diff gap between hard and insane
  2. where the fug are the custom hitsounds
[BOUYAAA]
  1. where the fug is kiai
  2. you can raise OD a bit imo for maximum PPP (pp potential)
  3. 00:15:762 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - i would place the stream a bit higher like this so it doesn't break the nice curve:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:18:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  5. 01:32:467 (9) - nc
  6. 01:32:467 (1,2,3,4,1) - would do like this for A E S T H E T I C S :
    SPOILER
  7. 01:35:194 (9) - nc
  8. 01:38:262 (1) - a bit more to the right for looks:
    SPOILER
[nudes]
  1. 00:02:126 (7) - nc
  2. 00:04:853 (8) - ^
  3. 00:13:206 (8) - ^ maybe
  4. 00:15:762 (8) - ^
  5. 00:33:490 (9) - ^
  6. 00:34:171 (17) - ^
  7. 01:10:649 (10) - ^
  8. 01:21:899 (1) - ugh broke my combo here, do this instead certified special Alheak (c) pattern seal of quality:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:30:762 (6) - nc
  10. 01:33:490 (6) - ^
  11. 01:37:581 (10) - ^ maybe or smth
  12. 01:42:410 (6) - ^

    sorry for the nazi nc mod but 10+ combos trigger my autism
[pishi again but easier]
  1. 01:20:535 (1) - smooth out those curves, the ideal would be to get perfect blanekt for 01:21:046 (2,3) - , or repalce it by that:
    SPOILER
  2. 01:32:126 (3) - nc xd
  3. 01:34:853 (3) - ^
  4. 01:37:581 (4) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 01:19:853 (3,4) - i'd make the angle a bit more obvious, looks a bit weird straight like that
[Normal]
  1. 00:53:262 (5) - too straight, i like a bit of shape on my sliders (this applies to the rest of the map)
Silky
766 posts
Joined October 2014
Silky
M4M

N
  • 00:24:285 (1) - remove nc plz
  1. 00:34:853 - umm... this strong vocal sounds should make clickable imo, and I think skip drum sounds is better at there.(vocal is really strong, and you did skip drums at 00:32:808 (1).)
    try this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:46:444 (1,2) - this 3/1 spacing have a bit bad readability.... try this
    SPOILER
  3. 01:19:513 (2,3) - ah...Ctrl+G? maybe non-return flow is better to Normal diff
H
  1. your Hard is 4.5CS but your(?) Insane is 4.3...? why lol
  2. 00:01:103 (2,3) - maybe it'd be best if you could make same flow as 00:06:558 (2,3,4) - , Ctrl?+G?
  3. 00:47:467 (2,3) - how about this?
    SPOILER
  4. 01:05:535 (1) - stack
  5. 01:32:808 (9) - add NC?
LI
  1. 00:15:762 (4,5,1) - nazi, make same spacing plz lol
  2. 00:34:853 (6) - add NC...? only for the good appearance
  3. 00:39:285 (1,2) - this rhythm isnt good imo... how about this? (sorry for my fking bad pattern sense xd)
    SPOILER


  4. 00:44:228 (2) - stack
  5. 01:29:399 (4) - ^
I
  1. 00:46:444 (1,2,3) - why x0.8...? still I dont think its fit in song qwq(especially guitar)
gl!
George
George
Nekomata
807 posts
Joined December 2013
Nekomata
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:507 - Is this timing point incorrectly snapped? Also, I think this should be the kiai start tbh since it feels like the section where the current kiai is is just like a build-up to this section.
  2. 00:35:535 - I believe this would be a better rhythm to use if you want to capture the rather prominent vocals along with the drum beat. http://puu.sh/nrz6A.png
  3. 00:38:262 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm sounds pretty weird to me since it feels like the more important things aren't being mapped. You can try a variation of the rhythm I suggested previously. Circles (4) and (5) fit nicely, but not slider (3) into circle (4) imo.
  4. 01:05:535 - How about a polarity changing rhythm instead? The 1/2 tapping rhythm feels a bit out of place here. http://puu.sh/nrzru.png
[Hard]
  1. 01:34:171 (1,2) - I would rather you use 4 of these repeating sliders instead since players won't expect it to be repeating that long considering the length of the previous repeating sliders.
  2. 00:51:899 - I'm pretty sure you can increase the difficulty from here up to near the second last bookmark, it's too easy/simple for a Hard! It should help your spread towards Insane better too.
[pishi]
  1. 00:35:876 (2,3) - This flow is a little weird to play imo. I think it would be better if you ctrl+h (3) and create a flow from that instead.
[nudes]
  1. 01:21:899 (1) - This is unreadable, please don't make a full stack/overlap with the previous slider ._.
  2. 00:23:944 (3) - Pretty sure you can make this into a stream up until (1) since you were following the drum ticky thing here or a 1/2 jump into (1) would be pretty cool too
[BOUYAAA]
  1. rip kiais, also i'm not good enough to analyze this difficulty level - only play :P
:o
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
BOUYAAA
side

Side wrote:

Hi for the M4M :v

My throat hurts listening to this and the main vocalist sings with a lisp.

[Booya's wat]

If this is a PP map at least use OD8.5. Also a slightly higher AR like 9.3 or 9.4 could work as well for that. Also considering how free this map is might as well make it HP7 :v did everything

00:21:899 (1) - You can be totally edgy and originally by making this slider the only grey combo in the diff and then be like "oh its grey cuz its super slow so players will tell something is different" and then modders will be like "ooo look at this guy being clever" or just not notice at all. Really insignificant change but you know ;) xd

00:24:626 - 00:46:444 - Kiai here would make sense. Probably the part that might deserve one if anything like in the other diffs. e

00:39:967 (2) - Oh boy nazi mod time (stack under 00:38:774 (3) - ) e

No real objective issues but I would love to see more movement in this diff. The SV is so low and the jumps are so short for such difficulty. The jumps are also very straight-forward there's nothing that really feels emphasized currently. Consider increasing the default SV to 1.8x hell maybe even 2.0x and maybe adding more emphasis and by that I don't mean just higher spacing but rather slightly sharper movement something that feels harder to play but is more rewarding when played properly. This isn't a map I'd want to play more than once and I say that because I would likely FC this in one try and the song is pretty lame to me xP idk what to think about that tbh. I changed up some patterns so its a bit harder but except raising star rating it doesn't do too much. I see why you'd say that but this is 175bpm 1/2 spam sooooo
MKL

Maakkeli wrote:

BOUYAAA's PP GIVE ME PP

  1. PP needs at least od 8.5 or 9 or something abc
  2. cmon hp 7 i didn't even feel scared about failing this oke
  3. ar seems fine idk if you wanna but you can go like 9.1-9.2 dzdzd
  4. You could silence sliderends if you want but whatevs noty
  5. 00:34:512 (9,10,11,12) - If you wanna be a horrible person (like me) and give emphasis to those snares you could lower the spacing here since there is no snares lol don't forget to nc then did
  6. 00:36:046 (3) - I'm fine with you skipping these bass drum or whatever sounds but then you skipped a snare 00:37:069 (1) - here :CCCC these sliders were placed for vocals so idk
  7. 00:48:490 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/nqMDO/41d0a3caa4.jpg For maximum PP and hardness. pp and hardness added
  8. 01:10:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again you could give these löower spacing for maximum idk what fucks up things so idk
  9. Ye mostly just sugestions nice

also i stole milan's sliderthing and cc
alheak

Alheak wrote:

[BOUYAAA]
[list]
[*]where the fug is kiai
[*]you can raise OD a bit imo for maximum PPP (pp potential) did with previous mods
[*]00:15:762 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - i would place the stream a bit higher like this so it doesn't break the nice curve done
[*]00:18:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ that'd fuck things up with an ew overlap though
[*]01:32:467 (9) - nc oke
[*]01:32:467 (1,2,3,4,1) - would do like this for A E S T H E T I C S O K
[*]01:35:194 (9) - nc oke
[*]01:38:262 (1) - a bit more to the right for looks ok

Also made the diff cleaner (i think) by moving stuff around

thanks for the mods guys!

pp
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35450
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:A Moment Suspended In Time
TitleUnicode:A Moment Suspended In Time
Artist:Underoath
ArtistUnicode:Underoath
Creator:Milan-
Version:BOUYAAA's pp
Source:
Tags:bouyaaa pishifat post hardcore punk metal
BeatmapID:915675
BeatmapSetID:407575

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:8.7
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.6
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pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,802 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
side
pishi's beh

No OD8.6? :^) jkjk but plebs at this diff will probably hate you for that cs5 lol. If you don't want them to hate you THAT much maybe consider CS4.5. But this doesn't affect me so oh well! ill accept hate ty

00:28:376 (4) - Maybe pull down on the middle red node a bit so it doesn't look longer on one side than the other (unless this was intentional doesn't seem like it tho) Also check the other sliders like this one just in case. right

00:35:535 (1,2,3) - Nice! no fix ty modding

No real issues.!!!!!

mkl
pishi's baby insane

you also could silence sliderends wow if milan does
01:14:399 (3) - look at this me telling someone to ctrl+g something i have never seen this before i know why you say it but i like it being bad tbh (at least more htan the ctrlgd version lol)
01:14:740 (4) - ^
ok dicks agree

alheak
pishi again but easier

01:20:535 (1) - smooth out those curves, the ideal would be to get perfect blanekt for 01:21:046 (2,3) - , or repalce it by that: hating on my stolen slidershape:( perfect blanket not really goal
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01:32:126 (3) - nc xd i dont gegt it comboing every measure pls
01:34:853 (3) - ^
01:37:581 (4) - ^

fyy
LI

00:15:762 (4,5,1) - nazi, make same spacing plz lol right
00:34:853 (6) - add NC...? only for the good appearance right!
00:39:285 (1,2) - this rhythm isnt good imo... how about this? (sorry for my fking bad pattern sense xd) right!!!!
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00:44:228 (2) - stack !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
01:29:399 (4) - ^! ! ! ! !
(i did everything)

master+
pishi

00:35:876 (2,3) - This flow is a little weird to play imo. I think it would be better if you ctrl+h (3) and create a flow from that instead. trying to keep the same movement direction for the first "never again" then when it repeats i switch direction so o o oo o g

you're all good people i hope milan bubbles your maps

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/751 ... ane%5D.osu
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
"Side"
Hi for the M4M :v

My throat hurts listening to this and the main vocalist sings with a lisp.
Also cmon at least hitsound your diffs before looking for mods >_> xd

[Milan's tempting offer]

00:23:092 (2,3) - Not really sure what this is following. If it's that light tapping in the background I wouldn't say that would be better as 2 and 3 stacked but personally I think it might be more impactful if this was not mapped and instead use this as a longer pause for when the drums pick up again at 00:23:603 (1) - 00:23:092 (2,3,1,2,3) - this whole thing is mapped to the same instrument tho ;; in addition that (3) ends it with the big accent on it,placement is weird, yes, but i think it's cool when you get xd

Additionally 00:24:115 - could be mapped because there is a light sound but it would make more sense with the map rather than just with the music because you could use this as a good way to build-up into the first verse. For example you could have a note at x:401 y:284 which adds a nice snap and leads well into the slow slider at 00:24:285 (1) - ^^

00:37:921 (5) - Ctrl+G plays really well and adds extra emphasis to 00:38:262 (1) - while still being easy enough to play for this diff. ok

01:21:558 (4,5,1) - I doubt it but maybe people will bring this up and suggest a different pattern because of the overlap. but it's readable xd

No major issues. HITSOUND YOUR DIFFS DAMN IT xd

[Hard]

01:21:387 - Maybe add a note here. Feels pretty empty here even for a hard ok

No real issues


[Normal]

00:35:535 (1) - This would feel better as a 2/1 slider because it would better go with the vocals hitting the start and end of where the dude sings. Also plays similar to 00:36:558 (2) - since both are technically holding for 2/1 and it feels less empty than a 1/1 slider and pause. Could look like this. i like having gaps on my lower diff and here's where i found the most appropiate place xd

00:38:262 (1) - Same for this it and especially if the above was changed. Could look like this (omg socreative). :(

00:47:467 - Note here would make more sense with the finish playing there. Plus a 2/1 pause reads easier than a 5/2 pause. Could easily be added here like so. was thinking the same ok

01:12:353 (5,6,1,2,3) - so much 1/1 spam LOL. An alternative could be to follow the vocals with 01:12:353 (5) - by making this a 3/2 slide so the repeat and end go better with what the vocals do. It will mean moving a few notes around after so if you didn't wanna think of a different pattern for example you could just restack 01:13:717 (1,2,3) - over where 01:11:331 (2,3,4) - used to be. Maybe looks something like this. passing over the same circles is scary for bn, dotn do that;; also rhythm is spammy but uh letsee

No major issues.


You know what? This song sucks LOL. I'm also half dissapointed that this is no single tap high spaced jump map considering pretty much everyone mapped it as 1/2 spam but the jumps in general were way too easy from the two highest diffs. Also I said this above but cmon for a super safe speedrankable set you could've at LEAST hitsounded a diff and copied them over so I could've had something to listen to when modding this (the song bored me so I muted it xP jkjk) But I still like modding hitsounds myself. Let me know when you hitsound this so I can double-check them so I can at least feel my mod was meaningful.

Hope this helps. Good luck! :) :(

"Maakkeli"
hm ye

so how much for those nudes?

  1. give bouyaaa's diff that cool sliderback/whatever too ok
  2. you could silence sliderends too lazy tbh xd
  3. 00:23:603 (1) - You could be more clear about what snapping this is. I missread on sightred but that might be because I just got up retry to fc, yes
  4. 00:37:921 (5) - Ugh ctrl+g pls plok
  5. 01:04:853 (1) - I have no idea why I noticed this now (don't know if you did this before) but this seeems really random to end that slider on the snare here. Maybe cause it's somewhat calm for 3 seconds and then there is that snare wow snare here isnt important, melody is
  6. 01:21:899 (1) - pls unstack or something i'm gay retryxd
  7. 01:32:126 (3,4) - i think you should have mapped these as streams again cause loud snares are loud and snares are things but i want to pass my own diff ;; im bat at streams
  8. yes

very hard

  1. 00:47:467 (2,3) - idk this was the gayest thing ever to play but probably because i can't read plz
  2. 01:04:171 (4) - emphasis thing pls unstack hard palyers dont care much about emphasis but how easy they can keep their combos uh
  3. saatana

modding diffs lower than insane is just dumb wtf xd
NICE HITSOUNDS M8

"Alheak"
M4M from q


ok ok

[General]
  1. holy shit that diff gap between hard and insane
  2. where the fug are the custom hitsounds
[nudes]
  1. 00:02:126 (7) - nc 2 measure combo'ng is myjam plz no hate
  2. 00:04:853 (8) - ^
  3. 00:13:206 (8) - ^ maybe
  4. 00:15:762 (8) - ^
  5. 00:33:490 (9) - ^ yes
  6. 00:34:171 (17) - ^ yes
  7. 01:10:649 (10) - ^
  8. 01:21:899 (1) - ugh broke my combo here, do this instead certified special Alheak (c) pattern seal of quality: retryxd
    SPOILER
  9. 01:30:762 (6) - nc
  10. 01:33:490 (6) - ^
  11. 01:37:581 (10) - ^ maybe or smth yes
  12. 01:42:410 (6) - ^

    sorry for the nazi nc mod but 10+ combos trigger my autism i cant help your autism srry
[Hard]
  1. 01:19:853 (3,4) - i'd make the angle a bit more obvious, looks a bit weird straight like that what's the difference between angles tho
[Normal]
  1. 00:53:262 (5) - too straight, i like a bit of shape on my sliders (this applies to the rest of the map) u wanna fight? (i think it's fine xd)

"fuyuyu-"
M4M

N
  • 00:24:285 (1) - remove nc plz ok
  1. 00:34:853 - umm... this strong vocal sounds should make clickable imo, and I think skip drum sounds is better at there.(vocal is really strong, and you did skip drums at 00:32:808 (1).)
    try this? true
    SPOILER
  2. 00:46:444 (1,2) - this 3/1 spacing have a bit bad readability.... try this did something else
    SPOILER
  3. 01:19:513 (2,3) - ah...Ctrl+G? maybe non-return flow is better to Normal diff it's ok either way i think
H
  1. your Hard is 4.5CS but your(?) Insane is 4.3...? why lol cuz yolo (cuz how tiny overall distance is in this diff)
  2. 00:01:103 (2,3) - maybe it'd be best if you could make same flow as 00:06:558 (2,3,4) - , Ctrl?+G? either way is fine i think
  3. 00:47:467 (2,3) - how about this? i prfer the gap tbh
    SPOILER
  4. 01:05:535 (1) - stack pkkok
  5. 01:32:808 (9) - add NC? ok
I
  1. 00:46:444 (1,2,3) - why x0.8...? still I dont think its fit in song qwq(especially guitar) if it was for my diff, i dont get it xd
gl!

"Nekomata"
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:507 - Is this timing point incorrectly snapped? Also, I think this should be the kiai start tbh since it feels like the section where the current kiai is is just like a build-up to this section. line yes, kiai i dunno i felt that part more powerful xd i even sb'd according that
  2. 00:35:535 - I believe this would be a better rhythm to use if you want to capture the rather prominent vocals along with the drum beat. http://puu.sh/nrz6A.png rhythm can be either way i think
  3. 00:38:262 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm sounds pretty weird to me since it feels like the more important things aren't being mapped. You can try a variation of the rhythm I suggested previously. Circles (4) and (5) fit nicely, but not slider (3) into circle (4) imo.same
  4. 01:05:535 - How about a polarity changing rhythm instead? The 1/2 tapping rhythm feels a bit out of place here. http://puu.sh/nrzru.png same also i wanted to map that snare out otherwise hitsounds wll be weird xd
[Hard]
  1. 01:34:171 (1,2) - I would rather you use 4 of these repeating sliders instead since players won't expect it to be repeating that long considering the length of the previous repeating sliders. wanted to vary a bit ;;
  2. 00:51:899 - I'm pretty sure you can increase the difficulty from here up to near the second last bookmark, it's too easy/simple for a Hard! It should help your spread towards Insane better too. added some circles yes
[nudes]
  1. 01:21:899 (1) - This is unreadable, please don't make a full stack/overlap with the previous slider ._. it's not unreadable ;; it's a bit hard but easy once you see it. using default skin even helps here uh
  2. 00:23:944 (3) - Pretty sure you can make this into a stream up until (1) since you were following the drum ticky thing here or a 1/2 jump into (1) would be pretty cool too i can yes, but i wanted to emphasis the big peak jhere 00:23:944 (3) - so i prefer not to
:o

thank you for the mods <3
am i still bn
George
George
---Normal---
00:21:899 (1) - you can try stacking this on the head of 00:20:535 (3) - but idk how that'd work in a normal diff
01:14:740 (4,5) - these are really close and look a little weird being that close because they are close and can probably touch each other
01:28:717 (3,4,5,1) - I have a feeling you can do something better with this formation since it feels a little ugly using those two straight sliders

---Hard---
00:18:490 (2,3,1) - this formation looks a little awkward, it doesnt really need to be changed but I imagine it could be better
00:44:740 (3) - I would rotate this at least -12 degrees (cockwise) and try to see if it looks good

---pishis---
00:16:444 (1,1) - omg stack mb bb
01:28:546 (1) - I would curve this slider more so it doesnt look like a right angle
01:41:881 (1,1) - I would try to make these blanket (although mine is improper)

---Nudes---
00:50:194 (3,4,5) - these sliders feel a little straight to me, and I'm gay (as in maybe curve the second slider lightly idk)
00:54:285 (4,5,1) - ^

idk got lazy just going to assume since its called pp its pp amazing
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-

George wrote:

---Normal---
00:21:899 (1) - you can try stacking this on the head of 00:20:535 (3) - but idk how that'd work in a normal diff it'd be ok for a normal, but i dont have easy so i guess it'll not work ;;

---Hard---
00:44:740 (3) - I would rotate this at least -12 degrees (cockwise) and try to see if it looks good i'd need to change the following pattern which is hard, pls dun killme imlazy;;

idk got lazy just going to assume since its called pp its pp amazing
did all the rest, thank you <3
pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,802 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
for the first time in osu history i have applied one of george's mods without rejecting everything

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/751 ... ane%5D.osu
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak
I'd like to explain my point about this pattern in pishi's nudes a bit more

01:21:558 (4,5,1) -

It does play fine if read correctly sure, but it is still extremely off putting and hard to read on a first play, which is I believe something you should avoid as much as possible.
You have a lot of up and down flow here from the previous objects which gets suddently stopped by this pattern with precise, small and quick mouvements, compared to the bold, "slow" jumps before, which is quite off putting and unexpected

That's why I think you should make its readability more obvious, maybe by spreading things a bit like this:
SPOILER
or whatever

I'm not saying you should change it completely, but I think you should reconsider its design.
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
Uhm didnt think someone would care too much about it since it's totally visible even with default skin
moved the stack upwards so it's easier to see tho

thank you for looking at it <3
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. Why is the behaviour of the SB triangles at 00:08:262 - different from ones like 00:10:436 - or 00:13:163 - ?
  2. Normal is pretty dense for the easiest difficulty if you look at the 1/1 heavy circle sections after 00:51:899 - .
    Also take into consideration that as far as I know, stubs like 00:20:194 (2) - or 00:29:740 (6) - are not a proper technique for the easiest diff of a set.
    You'd either have to simplify the Normal diff which will certainly hurt spread a lot or add an Easy difficulty to the set that is less dense.
  3. 01:42:499 - Muting the spinner at 5% right from the start is certainly no good idea. Set the 5% at the end of the spinner and increase it for the start of it.
  4. sb folder & diff names
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:228 (2,3) - blanket nub
  2. 00:24:285 (1,2) - NC switch
  3. 00:36:046 - 00:38:774 - These gaps feel pretty awkward as there are pretty prominent beats on them red ticks. Set a 1/1 slider here.
    Might as well crop 00:34:853 (3) - by 1/2 beat in the process.
  4. 01:29:399 (5,1) - ew
  5. 01:40:829 (1,2,3,4) - Just a proposal for an easier rhythm pattern (or for the easy):
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. Until 00:21:899 - Not sure why you suddenly switched from NC-after-2-stanzas to NC-after-1-stanza at 00:09:626 (1) - and then back to the first and then back to the latter and aaaa.
    Please make it consistent throughout the intro or give proper reasoning.
  2. 00:28:717 (1) - Delete NC. Same for:
    00:50:535 (1) - 00:56:671 (1) - 01:04:853 (1) - 01:09:626 (1) - 01:15:762 (1) - 01:23:944 (1) -
  3. 01:34:171 (1,2) - Not sure about this in a Hard difficulty really.
[pish]
  1. 00:02:126 (2) - 00:04:853 (3) - Soft on tail.
  2. 00:13:206 (3,4) - 00:18:660 (4,5) - Idk how this correlates with the music. I can see reason for the sliders I mentioned above as there's no strong drum on their tails, but here it's all strong drums so I'm wondering why you're not making these full-fledged streams.
  3. 00:19:171 (1) - Angle could be broader for smoother flow.
  4. Not used to see you mapping like this, somewhat looks like nathan style.
[so you saw pishi naked]
  1. 00:17:808 (1) - Delete NC. Same for:
    00:56:671 (1) -
  2. 00:47:808 - Map this gap out, it's a pretty notorious beat (big white tick).
  3. 01:04:171 (6,1) - 01:15:081 (5,1) - NC switch.
  4. 01:21:558 (4,5,1) - Still could need slightly higher spacing (~0.4xDS) so the flow isn't too jagged.
[bouyaaa]
  1. 00:18:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Prettier stream shape would be good.
  2. 00:48:490 (3,5) - This could really profit from extra NCing as players certainly won't expect the 1/3 here.
  3. 01:23:092 (1) - Having this slider going over such a notorious beat makes me cringe. I know it's for the vocal but consider swapping this off with something like this:
    SPOILER
  4. Mute the spinner at the end at 01:46:646 - with 5% vol., it's way too loud right now. Also adding a 01:42:499 - 40~50% vol. green line here would be recommended.
  5. k
Mapset is neat (kind of). When you can somehow fix the spread issue, call me back!
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
BOUYAAA
Did everything

Thanks!

@milan name the diff whatever you want okokokok
now with 100% less cringe!
osu file format v14

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Tags:bouyaaa pishifat post hardcore punk metal
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Bonsai
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Bonsai
can't decide whether I want nudes or pp tbh nvm I've seen pishi's face now, nudes please
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