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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 сентября 2017 г. at 12:13:26

Artist: Savant
Title: Virgin
Tags: complextro Shadren electro Seikatu cut version cult
BPM: 128
Filesize: 1614kb
Play Time: 01:03
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Download: Savant - Virgin
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Normal by me.
Advanced by Seikatu.
Hard by me.
Insane by Shadren. remapped 13.02.2017
Last edited by Namki on , edited 42 times in total.
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Hi! from #modreqs channel



Normal



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Insane



Sorry for the short mod
Good luck~
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All fixed, thanks~
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Did some stuff to easier diffs.


Shadren's Insane
  • 00:35:639 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this is way too easy to misread due to slowdowns you use. Same happens a few more times, get some extra colours for fast and slow SVs, so players cvan read it better.

    Apart from that, seems fine.
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Easy
  • Если присмотреться, то есть кривоватые бланкеты, можно их подправить (например этот 00:02:124 (1,1) - и этот 00:11:030 (2,3) - , проверь остальные на всякий случай)
  • 00:11:030 (2) - Клэп пропустил?
  • 00:18:999 (1,2) - DS куда-то пропало тут, изик же, джампы не нужны
  • 00:43:374 (1) - По-моему, такой слайдер лучше подходит под звук


Normal
  • 00:02:124 (1) - Нормал финил на начало слайдера? Вроде бы неплохо звучит (ну и в остальных диффах поставь, если согласен)
  • 00:21:811 (3,1) - Тоже DS чуть съехало
  • 00:43:374 (1) - То же, что и в изи (как-то не попадает он на биты, все же)
  • 00:45:483 (2,3) - Попробуй что-нибудь такое


Hard


Shadren's Insane
  • 00:43:139 (3) - Вроде как изменение SV надо выделять с помощью НК (везде сделал, тут не сделал)
    Больше ничего не вижу :(


Вроде как все. Только теги добавить нужно еще.
Удачи с картой! :)
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\о/

Easy
  • Если присмотреться, то есть кривоватые бланкеты, можно их подправить (например этот 00:02:124 (1,1) - и этот 00:11:030 (2,3) - , проверь остальные на всякий случай) бланкеты это такое себе
  • 00:11:030 (2) - Клэп пропустил? йес
  • 00:18:999 (1,2) - DS куда-то пропало тут, изик же, джампы не нужны о, это не переснапал, пропустил
  • 00:43:374 (1) - По-моему, такой слайдер лучше подходит под звук ну там на втором апбите ничего не звучит, и серкл туда не поставить, либо придется на красный ставить, а я мапаю 1/1


Normal
  • 00:02:124 (1) - Нормал финиш на начало слайдера? Вроде бы неплохо звучит (ну и в остальных диффах поставь, если согласен) я не знаю, я в хитсаундинге вообще ничего не смыслю, буду просить помочь других :/
  • 00:21:811 (3,1) - Тоже DS чуть съехало точно
  • 00:43:374 (1) - То же, что и в изи (как-то не попадает он на биты, все же) сейм
  • 00:45:483 (2,3) - Попробуй что-нибудь такое не, слайдер с красного тика, когда у меня их в диффе нет


Hard

Вроде как все. Только теги добавить нужно еще. ну теги-то само собой
Удачи с картой! :)

Спасибо
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Easy
00:11:030 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:18:061 (2,1) - ^^
00:33:061 (2,1) - ^^
00:46:186 (3,1) - ^^


Normal
00:32:124 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move abit higher so the last circle is more in the playfield
00:38:920 (3) - Move abit lower maybe?


Hard
00:03:999 (4,5,6,7) - Is this not symmetrical on purpose?
00:22:045 (4) - I think that's abit too far for hard diff
00:43:374 (1,2,3) - fix blanket


Shadren's Insane
00:17:124 (1) - Doesn't need NC
00:20:874 (1) - ^^
00:23:686 (1) - ^^, though quite optional
00:24:624 (1) - ^^
00:32:592 (2) - Move it lower
00:35:639 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You know what I'd say, but I actually like this :P
00:39:155 (2) - too far :/
00:49:116 (1) - Doesn't need NC
00:50:170 (1) - ^^
00:52:045 (1) - ^^
00:53:686 (1,2) - too far imo
00:56:499 (1) - Doesn't need NC

Good luck, have fun ranking this ^-^
P.S. Sorry for the nazi NC stuff on the insane diff, you might've done them all on purpose, so it's fine if you don't change them lol
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Между нормалом и хардом какой-то огромный разрыв в сложности. Во всём, не только в самой карте. От ар4 к ар8, от од3 к од6. Не дело это!

Шадрен'с инсейн:
00:20:405 (2) - вот у него я уменьшил бы св, а то звук явно медленнее на этом слайдере.
00:20:874 (1,2) - а сюда бы симметрию.
00:25:561 (4,5) - как по мне, так как музыка меняется, стоит подальше эти два слайдера поставить. Или просто их повернуть как-нибудь.
00:27:905 (2) - здесь тоже св бы уменьшил.
00:52:749 (1,2) - и сюда симметрию!

Хард:
00:02:124 (1,2,3) - да можно и не делать совсем уж небольшой спейсинг в этом месте.
00:09:624 (1,2,3) - и в последующих тоже.
00:11:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - какой-то непонятный паттерн, если честно. Выглядит неаккуратно!
00:16:420 (1,2) - я слышу тройку, а не двойку.

Изи:
А где спиннер в начале?
И мне кажется странным то, что в нормале ты изредка пропускаешь некоторые звуки в музыке, а вот в изи всё без перерыва идёт.
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Down's mod
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Insane




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Shadren's Insane

  • 00:35:639 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this is way too easy to misread due to slowdowns you use. Same happens a few more times, get some extra colours for fast and slow SVs, so players cvan read it better. will ask Namki


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Shadren's Insane
  • 00:43:139 (3) - Вроде как изменение SV надо выделять с помощью НК (везде сделал, тут не сделал) ой, точно. Исправил
    Больше ничего не вижу :(



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Shadren's Insane
00:17:124 (1) - Doesn't need NC fixed
00:20:874 (1) - ^^ need, because change SV
00:23:686 (1) - ^^, though quite optional ^
00:24:624 (1) - ^^ ^
00:32:592 (2) - Move it lower fixed
00:35:639 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You know what I'd say, but I actually like this :P
00:39:155 (2) - too far :/ fixed
00:49:116 (1) - Doesn't need NC ^
00:50:170 (1) - ^^ ^
00:52:045 (1) - ^^ ^
00:53:686 (1,2) - too far imo fixed
00:56:499 (1) - Doesn't need NC ^


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Шадрен'с инсейн:
00:20:405 (2) - вот у него я уменьшил бы св, а то звук явно медленнее на этом слайдере. ок
00:20:874 (1,2) - а сюда бы симметрию. не думаю
00:25:561 (4,5) - как по мне, так как музыка меняется, стоит подальше эти два слайдера поставить. Или просто их повернуть как-нибудь. Поставил по-другому
00:27:905 (2) - здесь тоже св бы уменьшил. ага
00:52:749 (1,2) - и сюда симметрию! ну не то, имо


Thank you for the mods, guys :3

Diff: http://puu.sh/mz4sU/5016fb8b9f.osu
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woops sorry for 2-3 weeks wait m4m


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00:06:225 (2,3) - This is the only time that you have 2,3 stacked as comared to something like 00:07:280 (6,7,1) - , so maybe make consistent
00:14:311 (1) - Maybe map until 00:15:249 - then put spinner, the current spinner is just awkwardly here
00:28:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - For here, I don't think using a slower sv than it usually is really justifies the music, imo this is more stronger than the things like 00:32:124 (1,2,3) - but that's up to you
00:43:374 - same as above but if you don't really want to make the distinction it's fine too


H
00:09:624 (1,2,3) - Only reason why I'm pointing it out is there 3 -> 1 ( the 1/1 slider) really doesn't feel like 3 lead to it, so maybe repostiion notes
00:43:374 (1,2,3) - Why not make similar rhythm to 00:28:374 (1,2,3) -
00:58:374 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same, except maybe change other rhythms to be similar to this, because this sounds better imo


N
00:43:374 (1) - Make like 00:28:374 (1) - fits rhythm better


E
00:02:124 (1,1,2) - Currently leads more into 2 than 1, but yeah, maybe confusing
00:28:374 (1) - Maybe try this rhythm?
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00:33:061 (2,1) - I don't usually point out blankets, partly because it's basically useless, but this needs to improve
00:50:405 (1) - Really don't suggest long slider, you had 00:50:874 - rhythm be played as 00:47:124 (1,2) - but then you just mask it with slider, so nooooo


that's it for me, gl
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woops sorry for 2-3 weeks wait m4m


I
00:06:225 (2,3) - This is the only time that you have 2,3 stacked as comared to something like 00:07:280 (6,7,1) - , so maybe make consistent
00:14:311 (1) - Maybe map until 00:15:249 - then put spinner, the current spinner is just awkwardly here
00:28:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - For here, I don't think using a slower sv than it usually is really justifies the music, imo this is more stronger than the things like 00:32:124 (1,2,3) - but that's up to you
00:43:374 - same as above but if you don't really want to make the distinction it's fine too


H
00:09:624 (1,2,3) - Only reason why I'm pointing it out is there 3 -> 1 ( the 1/1 slider) really doesn't feel like 3 lead to it, so maybe repostiion notes
00:43:374 (1,2,3) - Why not make similar rhythm to 00:28:374 (1,2,3) -
00:58:374 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same, except maybe change other rhythms to be similar to this, because this sounds better imo


N
00:43:374 (1) - Make like 00:28:374 (1) - fits rhythm better


E
00:02:124 (1,1,2) - Currently leads more into 2 than 1, but yeah, maybe confusing
00:28:374 (1) - Maybe try this rhythm?
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00:33:061 (2,1) - I don't usually point out blankets, partly because it's basically useless, but this needs to improve
00:50:405 (1) - Really don't suggest long slider, you had 00:50:874 - rhythm be played as 00:47:124 (1,2) - but then you just mask it with slider, so nooooo


that's it for me, gl

thanks~
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Йо o/

    General


  • Inconsistency in [Tags]
    {Easy} : complextro Shadren electro
    {Hard} : complextro Shadren electro
    {Normal} : complextro Shadren electro
    {Seikatu's Advanced} : complextro Shadren electro Seikatu
    {Shadren's Insane} : complextro Shadren electro
  • Вайдскрин в нормале, адвансе отключи. И киаи поставь во всех диффах

    Normal

  • 00:19:936 (3) - Ctrr+H и ротейт -75 градусов
  • 00:26:499 (1,2,3,4) - я конечно не очень такое в нормалах люблю, ноя бы поставила слайдеры либо уменшила дс во всей мапе на 1.1

    Seikatu's Advanced

  • Почему спиннеры заканчиваются на синем тике? о.О
Хард для меня выглядит хорошо. Инсейн не умею модить ;w;
Надеюсь помогла х)
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Поправил таги, ритм, немного флоу, бланкеты там.
А насчет киая.
kiai
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Спасибо!
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awesome. can I make SB for this? ty for reading

Nevermind.... lol
A mod for you instead.

I'm sorry for these one-line-contained boxes. :(

General
* change your background image's format to jpg. jpg's have small file size than png's, so it's more lagg free.
* no kiai?


Easy
* 00:27:905 (4) - maybe you should move the note a little bit to the left to make the combo's given shape look more charming


Normal
* 00:13:374 (5) - this is completely my personal suggestion. remove 5 and make the spinner start there instead?


Seikatsu's Advanced
Generally, The difficulty's circle size is maybe too small for this diff and they're pretty much the same size as hard. Changing it to 3.5 might sort things out...

Shadren's Insane
* 00:23:217 (3) - maybe you shouldn't hide notes like this
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Kiai is not necessary. I think there's no difference between JPG and PNG, both are fine. Deleted note in Normal and moved it in Easy.
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