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Nusha - Moy Zaychik

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ZLOdeuka-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 декабря 2010 г. at 10:19:20

Artist: Nusha
Title: Moy Zaychik
Tags: odaril russian
BPM: 137,01
Filesize: 6558kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,79 stars, 395 notes)
  2. Odaril's Normal (2,3 stars, 196 notes)
Download: Nusha - Moy Zaychik
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written by BG "I love you"
Aspect_old
nice song, love it.
~star~
Louis Cyphre
00:54:646 - короткий брейк.
Я бы настоятельно порекомндовал бы увеличить велосити до 1,8 и поставить Distance Snap Devisor на 1.0x.
И переспейсить, будет лучше.

А так гуд. =P
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Louis Cyphre wrote:

00:54:646 - короткий брейк.
Я бы настоятельно порекомндовал бы увеличить велосити до 1,8 и поставить Distance Snap Devisor на 1.0x.
И переспейсить, будет лучше.

А так гуд. =P

спасибо ^^

сделаю~
Louis Cyphre
Блин... эта песня застряла у меня в башке *_*

И кстати. Nusha - Moy Zaychik.
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Блин... эта песня застряла у меня в башке *_*

И кстати. Nusha - Moy Zaychik.

хах)

не ты один такой... Да я давно хочу переимаеновать...всё никак руки не дойдут...
Shiro
Finally done >_< sorry for taking so long

Download: Nusha - Moy Zaychik (ZLOdeuka) [Odaril's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Odaril wrote:

Finally done >_< sorry for taking so long

[attachment=0:3bd01]Nusha - Moy Zaychik (ZLOdeuka) [Odaril's Normal].osu[/attachment:3bd01]

Thx Odaril ~ nice normal
nuisible
awesome ~
Garven
Sorry for the delays. D:

[General]
Please set a preview point, and make sure it's the same on all difficulties. Usually right before a chorus works well, so maybe at 00:55:083?
You have hitsounds for custom set 1 that aren't being used. Please remove these files and full resubmit.
Is this mapset complete? If so, please move it to Pending instead of WIP.

[Storybaord]
Do you think you could get rid of this white noise around the heart image?

[Odaril's Normal]
00:42:384 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:390 (1) - ^
01:02:966 (4,1) - As nice as this is, I'm wary of an anti-jump in the easiest of a set.
01:45:883 (1) - Worryingly soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set.
01:53:765 (2) - I found this to flow better on the opposite side of the screen.
02:25:077 (1) - Didn't feel like a good spot for a spinner, imo.
02:31:427 (1) - ^
03:30:328 (2) - Spacing?
Nice flow in this diff. :D

[Hard]
Add Odaril to tags in this difficulty.
It doesn't make sense to have a higher OD than AR. Please set AR and OD to the same rate (I found reducing OD 1 worked best) and reduce HP drain by at least 1. Such a slow dong doesn't really feel like it demands a high drain.
00:53:551 (2) - This anti-jump doesn't play well to me.
02:25:515 (1,2) - This spacing intentional?
02:34:492 - Hrm, maybe start the break here where the kiai ends?
02:52:666 (1,7) - These aren't very visually appealing. Think you can smooth out the curve a bit better?
Really nice. Wish there wasn't those little bits of over-mapping, but the flow is pretty good.
IceBeam
звезда
Shiro

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. D:

[General][Odaril's Normal]
00:42:384 (1) - Remove new combo The new combo is here to warn for the slight speed change. So, nope.
00:49:390 (1) - ^ same
01:02:966 (4,1) - As nice as this is, I'm wary of an anti-jump in the easiest of a set. ;_; let's say that it can be fine because it's a new combo. We'll see :/
01:45:883 (1) - Worryingly soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set. Agreed, removed.
01:53:765 (2) - I found this to flow better on the opposite side of the screen. o.O ? okay
02:25:077 (1) - Didn't feel like a good spot for a spinner, imo. Lazily changed.
02:31:427 (1) - ^ Changed.
03:30:328 (2) - Spacing? For 0,04x ;_;
Nice flow in this diff. :D I thought the diff was terrible, appears it's not as terrible as I thought. :)
Thanks for the mod.

Download: Nusha - Moy Zaychik (ZLOdeuka) [Odaril's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. D:

[General]
Please set a preview point, and make sure it's the same on all difficulties. Usually right before a chorus works well, so maybe at 00:55:083?
You have hitsounds for custom set 1 that aren't being used. Please remove these files and full resubmit.
Is this mapset complete? If so, please move it to Pending instead of WIP.

[Storybaord]
Do you think you could get rid of this white noise around the heart image?

[Odaril's Normal]
00:42:384 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:390 (1) - ^
01:02:966 (4,1) - As nice as this is, I'm wary of an anti-jump in the easiest of a set.
01:45:883 (1) - Worryingly soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set.
01:53:765 (2) - I found this to flow better on the opposite side of the screen.
02:25:077 (1) - Didn't feel like a good spot for a spinner, imo.
02:31:427 (1) - ^
03:30:328 (2) - Spacing?
Nice flow in this diff. :D

[Hard]
Add Odaril to tags in this difficulty.
It doesn't make sense to have a higher OD than AR. Please set AR and OD to the same rate (I found reducing OD 1 worked best) and reduce HP drain by at least 1. Such a slow dong doesn't really feel like it demands a high drain.
00:53:551 (2) - This anti-jump doesn't play well to me.
02:25:515 (1,2) - This spacing intentional?
02:34:492 - Hrm, maybe start the break here where the kiai ends?
02:52:666 (1,7) - These aren't very visually appealing. Think you can smooth out the curve a bit better?
Really nice. Wish there wasn't those little bits of over-mapping, but the flow is pretty good.


thanks, done :)
Aleks719
Приветы. всё есть чисто пожелания, естественно.
[Hard]
00:38:223 (1,2,3) - я бы сделал в одной точке, т.к. по мне переход сложноват с быстрых битов на медленный слайдер.в точке это не так заметно.
00:45:778 (5) - закончить его здесь 00:46:325 , на белой палочке)
00:47:201 (1,2) - поближе бы D:
00:48:734 - в этом тайминг поинте громкие клэпы. Да, громкость средняя. Но блин, мои наушники лажают на низах, и если в них мне так лупит по ушам, то в нормальных наушниках тем более. сбавить на 1.5-2 пункта, имхо.
00:57:711 (5,6) - эм. такая дистанция правда задумана? переназначь (6)-слайдер в реверс, будет играбельно.
01:23:986 (7) - в музыку, но что-то не то.Мб громкость попробуй уменьшить для 7го или 6го и 7го битов.
01:48:964 - спиннер зажал звук, я негодую. предлагая поставить бит, а спиннер сдвинуть хоть на 1/4 с сохранением конца, естессно.
02:58:578 (1) - я бы бит добавил, вот.
03:31:641 (1,2) - тоже аццкая дистанция, я б делал симметрию не такой симметричной)

вот и всё, удачи в продвижении, звезда.
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Aleks719 wrote:

Приветы. всё есть чисто пожелания, естественно.
[Hard]
00:38:223 (1,2,3) - я бы сделал в одной точке, т.к. по мне переход сложноват с быстрых битов на медленный слайдер.в точке это не так заметно. Нормально) не исправленно
00:45:778 (5) - закончить его здесь 00:46:325 , на белой палочке)не уверена что так лучше но подправила..
00:47:201 (1,2) - поближе бы D: самый раз)
00:48:734 - в этом тайминг поинте громкие клэпы. Да, громкость средняя. Но блин, мои наушники лажают на низах, и если в них мне так лупит по ушам, то в нормальных наушниках тем более. сбавить на 1.5-2 пункта, имхо.не исправленно
00:57:711 (5,6) - эм. такая дистанция правда задумана? переназначь (6)-слайдер в реверс, будет играбельно.ноу.
01:23:986 (7) - в музыку, но что-то не то.Мб громкость попробуй уменьшить для 7го или 6го и 7го битов.не тронуто.
01:48:964 - спиннер зажал звук, я негодую. предлагая поставить бит, а спиннер сдвинуть хоть на 1/4 с сохранением конца, естессно.ууу..тут ты совсем не прав)
02:58:578 (1) - я бы бит добавил, вот.ноу
03:31:641 (1,2) - тоже аццкая дистанция, я б делал симметрию не такой симметричной)нетронуто.

вот и всё, удачи в продвижении, звезда.
спасибо )
galvenize
Just a quick note in odaril's diff:

01:02:966 (4,1) - As nice as this is, I'm wary of an anti-jump in the easiest of a set. ;_; let's say that it can be fine because it's a new combo. We'll see :/
Sounds funny but I crashed on that part the first time I played it. Well it is NORMAL difficulty so like you said, wait and see.

Hard
:

00:45:668 (4,5): Just saying but instead of

I'd make it:

It follows the flow of the song better and sounds less harsh methinks. But whatever you do, it'll still be fine.
03:21:569 (1): remove new combo
03:28:576 (1): ^

Well, I don't really know what else needs modding, everything looks fine to me in both diffs + it's a nice song.
Go harass some MATs, maybe they've got a lot to say.
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

00:23:991 (5,6) - spacing. the distance here should be the same as that between 00:22:896 (1,2)
00:27:713 (1,2) - it feels not good that player wait such a long time before hitting the next note. and I think note 2 should be 1/4 earlier. I recommand you using the note 2 as end of a slider and changing 1 into a single circle.
00:31:655 (5,6) - spacing. make them not touch each other.
00:45:011 (1) - new combo?
00:50:485 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:923 (2) - add new combo
00:59:025 (7) - new combo? or make it farther away from 00:58:149 (6)
01:14:790 (9) - new combo
01:15:009 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:423 (4) - this note hears bad. remove it.


Normal

02:07:779 - add a note?
02:09:531 - ^
02:22:887 (5) - add a repeat?
03:21:569 (1,2,3,4) - it's kiai time and I think there should be more notes
03:29:452 (1,2,1) - bad end...more notes here.


nice song and good sb 8-)
Crazy Jay
[Hard]
00:45:778 (5) - move the end(00:46:325) to (00:46:216)
00:59:025 (7) - change dis plz
02:54:418 (1) - exchange the begin & end (ctrl+alt+r)

smooth song
star
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
Hard[/b]:

00:45:668 (4,5): Just saying but instead of

I'd make it:
~you are right, so much better~thx
It follows the flow of the song better and sounds less harsh methinks. But whatever you do, it'll still be fine.
03:21:569 (1): remove new combo~corrected
03:28:576 (1): ^ ~corrected

Well, I don't really know what else needs modding, everything looks fine to me in both diffs + it's a nice song.
Go harass some MATs, maybe they've got a lot to say.[/quote]


Thx~
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
Hard

00:23:991 (5,6) - spacing. the distance here should be the same as that between 00:22:896 (1,2) ~ok
00:27:713 (1,2) - it feels not good that player wait such a long time before hitting the next note. and I think note 2 should be 1/4 earlier. I recommand you using the note 2 as end of a slider and changing 1 into a single circle. ~ok
00:31:655 (5,6) - spacing. make them not touch each other. ~ok
00:45:011 (1) - new combo? ~ok
00:50:485 (1) - remove new combo ~ok
00:50:923 (2) - add new combo ~ok
00:59:025 (7) - new combo? or make it farther away from 00:58:149 (6) ~ok
01:14:790 (9) - new combo ~ok
01:15:009 (1) - remove new combo ~ok
01:39:423 (4) - this note hears bad. remove it. ~ok


nice song and good sb 8-)[/quote]


Thx~
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