[general]
612 is the correct offset for your metronome, but I would try 602 because was hitting things ~10-20ms early
remap more intense sections with slightly faster slider speeds (1.1-1.2x?) like at
00:36:433 - 01:01:507
01:30:164 - 02:09:567
etc... these would also be good times for kiai (on the chorus) unless you hate kiai. It's a lot of work but I think it would be really nice.
This map is so slow I think slider tick 2 would make it much nicer, especially on the 1/1 sliders. Just make sure you decrease the volume on the slidertick in your custom override.
Don't silence sliderslide, or at least not in the "normal" sections. Use the soft sliderslide if you want. There's maps where it fits, but I don't really think this is one of those maps. If you do silence it, keep an eye on the rules. I asked someone about using 0 byte wav files and was told not to because it causes some older computers to slow down due to the loop. However the rules now state it's recommended, so IDK.
[scar & serval]
not sure who mapped what/if this is even a collab, so sorry I'm not splitting it up.
00:01:507 (2,3) - make 2 a circle and 3 a slider (could add repeats too, the offbeat stuff is weird)
00:04:418 (2) - cut in half and make repeating slider
00:07:552 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/3dZb00:11:358 (4) - delete, move (5) back one and extend 1/2
00:14:716 (1) - delete
00:25:686 (3) - could add repeat and make 4 a circle.
00:30:836 (1,4) - cut in half, make repeating sliders
00:37:776 (4) - move to 00:38:224 and add a circle where it used to be.
01:24:567 (1) - Once you get the metronome right, I can't stress how important it is to hit the downbeat (long white tick). There's a lot of offbeat sliders (red ticks) which are just plain awkward.
01:51:433 (1,2,3,4) - offbeat sliders are weird
02:25:462 - add note
02:29:045 (8) - this slider is fine even though it slides over the downbeat.
02:34:418 (4) - this one isn't
[true end]
This is a really really easy insane, and has a pretty low max score for being 3.5 minutes. If you shoot the Difficulty up to 8 (matches everything else) then it's 14k which is just right, though it could do with a few more notes.
00:10:463 (2) - doesn't fit lyrics. combine 1 and 3 into repeating slider?
02:05:313 (10) - new combo?
03:20:761 (7,8) - you could put in 3 more notes here, and it would probably be better not to have such a huge stack of notes.
[something about a hard]
Your insane is easy, your normal is hard. I think you need an easy, not a hard. I'm not sure if 3.47 is low enough for ranking (you need at least 1 map below 3.0 stars).
I was considering making a guest difficulty, but I've decided against it. If you want me to, I can make a storyboard like the ending video, and also make the collab (if it is a collab) storyboard if you tell me when a person mapped it.
I'd give you a kudos star if scar and serval was better and if you had an easy, but i've been giving out too many as of recently, even though I like the song and the beatmap. So just settle for +1