1. Carol (4.03 stars, 320 notes)
2. Cup (1.27 stars, 161 notes)
3. Platter (2.93 stars, 270 notes)
4. Salad (2.03 stars, 222 notes)

Zoe wrote:

Mod Request from the Ausu!CtB Modding Queue.

[General]

1. I'd recommend changing the Approach Rate to 9 instead of 9.1 to conform with the 'guideline' for a rain diff.Done
2. Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty should ALWAYS be the same for CtB mapset, please change the OD to match the AR.Done. It do give me some knowledge about how to deal with these data. Thank you very much!
3. Add 'Utawarerumono: Itsuwari no Kamen opening' to the tagsDone. By the way, I'm not consider about the tag here. I'd like to add more after all the difficulties are done.

[Rain]

1. 00:02:240 (6,7,8,9) - I'd switch the order of the slider and 3 notes around to match the song. Slider starting at 'me~' and 3 notes starting at 'kami~'.Done,much better!
2. 00:06:855 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd change this to a slider (or even get rid of the jumps) and also 00:08:009 (1,2,3,4) - Remove (2) and (4) and re-map (1) and (3).Done,I change these jumps into a reverse slider and remap (1) (3). I think the change I do is just soso and I can't figure out a way to fit it better. Sould consider more here.
3. 00:11:086 (6,7,8,9,10) - 1/8 isn't really needed here, 1/4 or a slider works fine.Done
4. 00:19:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change the jump from 1->2 to 2->3.Done
5. 00:21:471 (6,7) - Remove the hyper here, just make this an emphasised jump.Done. I change the slider to just a note without needing red fruit.
6. 00:24:548 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern can be considered hard for rain maps, up to you whether you change this or not, but I would remove at least 1 or two hypers from these jumps.To be honest, I think here is not such difficult to catch due to these red fruits do fit the rythm. However, if it do beyong the requirement of the "Rain" mod, I will change it later. Here, I'd like to remain unchange.
7. 00:31:086 (6,7,8) - Remove (7). Done
8. 00:36:086 (1,2,3) - Remove (2) or extend the slider to finish at 00:36:662 - .Done，I choose to extend the slider
9. 00:37:431 - Add a note here possibly(and NC)? x:232 feels nice.Done,the position you choose is awesome!
10. 00:43:393 (6,7,8) - Remove (7).Done
11. 00:56:086 (2,3,4,5) - Please try not to reverse patterns sharply after a hyper for rain diffs. These can be quite hard to catch. You could try and curve these out or create a '>' shape.Done. I really considered a long time here for fitting the rythm due to some small clicks happened here. I tried some sliders here and it didn't look good. So here your suggstion for '>' shape, I think is a better way to solve and make what you talk about. Still, I think need some change. xd
12. 00:57:624 (2,3,4,5) - ^Done, same as above
13. 01:02:239 (11,12,13) - Change up these a little bit to match the change of the song? try highlight all three sliders and move (11) to x:80.Done. I rearrange the position of (11) (12) (13) and 01:02:816 (1) to fit the rythm change here. Although I still think it might be hard to catch. xdd
14. 01:04:354 (9) - Break up this slider so there is a note on 'mi~' (A 1/2 reverse slider would work fine).Done, I change the slider into one note and a 1/2 reverse slider
15. 01:05:124 (2) - Nothing against the standing stream sliders, but I would try and change this a little since we're in the kiai time. (Note: 01:08:585 (1) - This one is fine since it follows a nice curved stream[Good flow]).Done, but I'm not sure if you mean to change the slider position as 01:08:585 (1) or something else.
16. 01:08:201 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This doesn't have to be 1/8, it still sounds/feels nice with a 1/4 stream.Done
17. 01:17:432 (2) - Try change this one from standing stream also.Done as above
18. 01:21:855 (1,2,3,4) - Remove (2) and (4) and re-map (1) and (3).Done as above
19. 01:24:932 (6,7,8,9,10) - 1/8 isn't really needed here, 1/4 or a slider works fine.Done as above

Overall I really like this rain map and the flow is actually pretty good. Please do call me back when you have some more mods because I'd love to see how it turns out after you have more mods.(PM is fine).

Good luck with this.

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

1. 红线的offset。。。应该在700ms处。你timing都搞错，确实应该加强一下基础设置的学习233。调整完timing后记得要进aimod看一下unsnap的物件进行调整。Done.我不太清楚关于offset的设定，不过现在知道了，非常感谢，基础设置方面确实要多看看多学学。

Rain

1. 打开aimod看一下，主要问题有：bg太大；预览点没设置；tag和cup难度不同。Done.这里我是想等所有难度做完最后搞这个，bg我回去修改，预览点和tag都加上了
2. 00:01:278 (1,2) - 这里应该大跳，然后00:01:663 (3,4) - 不需要跳那么大。其实就是跟vocal吧，只是为了对称的话感觉没太必要。这里我暂时保持不变，可能是因为我作图比较喜欢对称2333，感觉这里打起来还是挺顺手的
3. 00:04:740 (5,6) - 和上面类似，不过这边还好，这个跳稍微小一点就行，后面7可以跟着6一起移动。Done
4. 00:06:086 (2,3) - 这里四个vocal的音非常重，建议用四个note来表现，然后间距可以稍微大一点。Done.嗯嗯 这个建议超级nice 这样突出很赞
5. 00:10:316 (2,3,4,5) - 这些跳可以跟前面一样跳大一点。Done
6. 00:13:201 这里我觉得应该加个note。Done
7. 00:21:758 加个note吧，这三连还是比较明显的。Done
8. 00:23:778 (5) - 噗，同前。不过如果考虑到是为了对称而对称，之后我就不再提这种了。xd
9. 00:25:125 (4,5) - 这个跳也没必要？直接把5给ctrl+h了试试。同时，00:28:202 (4,5) - 这里我倒是觉得可以大跳的说，同样在5试试ctrl+h。Done.这两个我都ctrl+h了然后分别都改了改距离
10. 00:30:894 (5,6) - 这个大跳好像也没啥必要，这段还是比较安静的。暂时保留 我还没想到好的解决方案
11. 00:33:778 (1,6) - nc换一下。不过我觉得你这图全图的nc都有点问题，建议所有的nc在调整完红线后，在downbeat处设置（长白线处），不要搞得太复杂。。。Done。嗯 重置了各种NC 我压根没考虑这个NC的问题，现在了解了
12. 00:36:662 (2) - 不是很必要，直接合到之前的slider里就好。Done
13. 复制粘贴的部分就不提了，和之前说的一样233Done 部分一样的问题都改掉了
14. 00:56:566 (5,6) - 这个跳没必要。00:58:104 (5,6) - ，01:08:489 (7,1) - 同理。Done.去掉了前两个跳，改成更流畅的sliders相接 但是我觉得最后那个我是这么理解的 中间有那么一顿的节奏正好是红果跳
15. 01:14:739 (2) - 我觉得放在靠近1的地方比如128,229这更有表现力。Done 嗯嗯！
16. 某些跳感觉。。。和应该激昂的地方比，反而小了，反之亦然。虽然不知道对称对playing的影响有多大，柑橘ds还是直接跟着歌曲走比较好。以上为个人意见嗯。。。对称的话纯属个人习惯 打起图来感觉和不对称差不多（看着好看2333）嗯 确实对于激昂和平缓的不同排列上有些大同，我会仔细去想想要去怎么安排的

哎，cup没做完啊，那就先这样吧。

噗，也不知道能对你有多大帮助。。。加油rank吧。
good luck
对我的帮助挺大的，尤其对节奏的理解方面，当然还有些基础的作图常识，非常感谢！！我会努力让这张图rank哒！（话说群里你说M4M的时候完全不知道你是HW orz 看到你给的图简直吓一跳0.0）

pieguyn wrote:

[General]
00:05:893 - seems a really random place to start kiai... o.o why not 00:08:393 instead like in Cup diff?Done. Feel better
01:02:816 - ^. should start at 01:03:777 , note the emphasis here. also, make this consistent, it's here on Rain diff but not Cup diff.Done. That's my fault, I didn't notice the consistent. Now they are same

[Rain]
00:23:201 - imo you can make another stream here, similarly to 00:21:662 (5,6,7) . its in the song if you listen closelyRemain unchange. Although the rythm here is same as you talked about, I choose to follow the song (singing). At 00:23:201, there is no change before this part. However, the singing before 00:21:662 (5,6,7) there is a change something like "1 2 1". So I decide to make them in different way.
00:53:008 (1) - i think a 1/1 slider would be good here to fit the "hold" from the vocal... ex http://puu.sh/m7AqI/923f98be42.jpgDone. Much better
01:05:124 (12,13) - i thought the formation at 01:08:201 (2,3,4,5,6) was more fun for this rhythm.Remian unchange. Actually,01:08:201 (2,3,4,5,6) here is made for the next smooth jump.xd
01:17:432 (11) - i'd remove this and map it like 01:05:124 (12,13) or 01:08:201 (2,3,4,5,6) instead... is inconsistent since it's the only part of this kiai where you use such long kickslider, and doesn't fit the fast pace of the song.Done, work sam as the former one you mentioned.
01:21:663 (11,1) - this is very difficult to hit since all the other ones had HDash, but this one didn't. i'd either place it to the left, or increase distance so there's a HDash here.Done, I reduce the distance here and not only here, but also the next jump is more comfortable. Nice change!
01:26:278 (6,8) - move left a few grids to make distance more equal, plz.Done

[Cup]
00:28:393 - the part starting from here felt monotonous for me bc it's the same 1/1 rhythm over and over. i think, especially for a slow part like this, you can make some more light rhythm, for example remove 00:28:778 (2) . this continues until 00:36:085 , if you agree i'll leave it to you make sth suitable for yourself.What you said do make sense, but I can not figure out a way to change this part. Do you have any idea for this part? I really run out of way here QAQ.
00:40:316 - add note here. song increase in pace, so it doesn't make musical sense to use less notes than before.Done. Change the first note to the new position.
00:44:547 (3) - 1/1 slider make more sense musically imo.Done
00:46:854 (9) - add NC Done
01:08:585 (6) - plz don't repeat on blue tick, there is nothing there. http://puu.sh/m7AQV/29b26fe1d8.jpg much better imoDone. But I choose a long slider because I think here only one long sound.
01:23:393 - add note imo.Done. Same as the beginning

map is generally clean. good luck ~Thang you very much!
i didn't know HW play CTB lollol Exgon said that HW is the best ctb mapper xddddd

examination wrote:

good luck
射一颗星以资鼓励

set做齐了等我考完以后就来摸

Tyrell wrote:

It's a mod. o-o

General

1. Make sure Letterbox During Breaks is off on all diffs
2. Add proper combo colors

Cup
Opening thoughts: high SV isnt good for lower difficulties

1. 00:02:624 (1) - spinner is unnecessary, should be notes here instead like the other diffs Done
2. 00:05:701 (1) - ^ same as above Done
3. 00:48:201 (5) - no need for repeats, just use a long slider Unchange,I think it's fine here
4. 00:56:085 (2) - this doesnt fit at all, use a long slider instead.Done
5. 00:57:624 (4) - ^same as aboveDone
6. 01:06:085 (8) - doesnt fit, just use a long slider insteadUnchange,I think here has 4 emphasized vocal here. And changing to a long slider do not feel change any more. xd

Song Setup Recommendations:none

Closing Thoughts:This cup is alright. Should use a lower SV next time though. also a lot of repeat sliders here are unnecessary and add unwanted note density. Please remove them. Also some movement at times could be a bit higher so it flows better but that's fine as it is now.Well, that's right. I need to reduce the notes and the sliders here. I will adjust them.

Salad
Opening thoughts: Please use a lower SV for lower diffs

1. 00:02:239 (6) - why is there no dash to this?Unchange...I'm can't understand what you mean...
2. 00:02:431 (1) - spinner shouldnt be here, wasnt in the other diffsI need to consider about how to change here and I will, but now just keep it.
3. 00:06:085 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this dashing is too much, and these patterns dont work for a salad. Use simpler onesDone
4. 00:12:047 (6,7,8,9,10) - consistent spacing pleaseDone. However, 4 5 6 is a part and 7 8 9 10 is a part.
5. 00:13:008 (11) - should have a dash to this and have the spinner start where 00:13:201 (12) - isAt point 00:13:008 (11) and 00:13:201 (12) there are 2 drum sound, so spinner should begin after that and I add the dashi
6. 00:24:547 (12,13) - hypers are UNRANKABLE in salads, change these to dashChange to dash
7. 00:36:854 (7) - unnecessary, should just be a hitcircleDone
8. 00:49:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the dashing here is too sudden, reduce pleaseDone
9. 01:06:085 (1) - no hypersDone
10. the rest of the song needs to be changed, no hypers, the dashing is too tight, and a sudden ramp in difficulty is all bad.Remap the last part. Kind of mess before xd.

Song Setup Recommendations:HP 4Done
Closing Thoughts: A lot of inconsistency with walk strings, the dashing doesnt follow the song a lot of the time, hypers are unrankable in salads, and the dashing overall is too tight and rigid feelings. Use a more simple flow please.

Platter
Opening thoughts: SV is too high.

1. 00:01:277 (1,2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing here pleaseDone
2. 00:02:239 (6) - why no dash to this? Unchange
3. 00:03:585 (9) - this should curve the other way to follow flowDone
4. 00:04:354 (1) - jump to this is too tight, reduce spacingMake sense due to the past change
5. 00:04:354 (1,2,3,4) - lower consistent spacing pleaseMake some change but I think it's difficult to keep all the distance here the same.
6. 00:05:316 (6) - why is there no dash here? Heavy emphasisDone. Nice shoot.
7. 00:05:893 (9,10,11) - there should be dashing here as wellDone
8. 00:10:508 (9,10,11,12) - the jumps here are too tight, reduce them greatly pleaseDone
9. 00:21:662 (5,6,7) - the dash back to this should be reduced, feels too hard for a platterDone
10. 00:37:624 (1) - dash is too tight here, reduce spacingUmnchange, that's fine
11. 00:49:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a ton of unnecessary hypers. this doesnt fit the music at allRemap here
12. 00:58:201 (8) - dash to this is too much, reduce the spacing pleaseDone
13. 01:01:470 (1) - dash to this is way too much, reduceMove a bit left, but feel the same
14. 01:03:777 (1) - why no hyper or dash to this?Unchange,but I will consider about it.
15. 01:13:777 (3,4,5) - jumps here are too much, reduce themDone

Song Setup Recommendations:none
Closing Thoughts: A lot of jumps dont follow the emphasis of the song which leaves it feeling like it's not in tune with the music. Please go through and add dashes to the vocal emphasis and such. Also use more consistent spacing when using walking distances. This will greatly help your diff. Use a lower SV for a platter next time too.

Rain
Opening thoughts: SV is too high imo. 1.6-1.8 max works better

1. 00:01:278 (1,2,3) - this should be evenly spacedDone,move the first one a bit left
2. 00:03:586 (11) - not a fan of these, also seems out of place for this song. Use a stream instead of something like this please. Unchange,fun to play
3. 00:06:085 (8) - reduce the jump to this to 2.3x spacing for consistencyDone
4. 00:06:854 (12) - This is unnecessary and should be made into a stream if you're mapping 1/4 hereDone. However, change into another style.
5. 00:12:240 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the hypers here are annoying, this could be done but use a more simple left-right dash that follows a simple flow instead. Also the dash to the last note is bad, doesnt feel naturalI think the dash here is comfortable. But I will consider about the problem about the last note, need some change here.
6. 00:24:548 (9,10,11,12) - I feel like this hyper chain is a bit too much, seems like an overdose pattern to me. Reduce thisUnchange, for the difficulty name, I may change to rain+.
7. 01:00:701 (6) - same thing i said before Done,change to some notes instead
8. 01:01:662 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - hypers here are really awkward and too much for a rain, use simpler patterns or change them to dash patterns.Unchange,and same as I talked above
9. 01:26:086 (5,6,7,8,9) - once again, these patterns dont flow good for a rain diff. Change them by making them dash or making the left right simpler.Unchange as above

Song Setup Recommendations: CS4 please. 4.2 is unnecessaryDone,and fix some distance to remian the HDash
Closing Thoughts: Spacing can be more consistent, the combos are too long, and near the end of the song it feels easier although that's the kiai time.

I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Good luck with this set.
Thank you very much! You help me a lot especially for the low level sets. About SV, I'd like to make a whole change. Happy new year !

dika312 wrote:

Requested from pm

General

1. Where's hitsound?I will work on it later. xd
2. The map combo's are high so my mod is mostly nc (please note that sliders end/reverse is a fruit)Yeah, that's important!
3. Platter's hp should be 5.5/6 imo to match the spreadDone. Change to 6.

Cup

1. 00:04:547 (1) - remove nc and add nc on 00:06:085 (4)Done
2. 00:11:470 (5) - nc?Unchange
3. 00:34:547 (7) - ^Done
4. 00:53:008 (4) - ^Done
5. 00:51:085 - add note? x:136?Done
6. 00:54:162 - ^ x:400?Done. But 392
7. 00:57:239 - ^ x:408?Done
8. 00:58:777 - ^ x:144?Done and adjust the coming notes position
9. 00:59:162 (5) - nc?Done
10. 01:13:008 (7) - ^Done
11. 01:26:085 - maybe change to look like this?Done

Salad

1. 00:02:431 (1) - this spinner is too close to the next note, move to the red tick?Done. Reduce the length for spinner
2. 00:05:316 (6) - nc and remove nc on 00:06:854 (1)Done
3. 00:20:124 (6) - move to x:64? and 00:20:508 (8) - move to x:256?Change a bit, but nearly the same
4. 00:46:854 (9) - nc?Done
5. 01:04:931 (7) - nc and remove nc on 01:06:085 (1)Unchange
6. 01:07:239 (7) - nc?Unchange
7. 01:19:931 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - these streams part is kinda wierd for salad...Consider about this part and maybe remap here.

Platter

1. 00:23:970 (7) - nc?Change the note number 6 to new NC
2. 00:51:085 (3) - add note and make it look like this?Maybe, but here is wierd to put something. Difficult to control the notes here. xd
3. 00:54:547 (5) - nc?Done
4. 00:57:912 (7) - ^ and remove nc on 00:58:970 (1)Done
5. 01:01:662 (2,3) - hyperdash?Unchange
6. 01:17:239 (7) - add nc, remove nc on 01:18:201 (1) - and add nc on 01:19:162 (7)Done,nice dealing here!
7. 01:20:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and where's the stream? this part should be on salad while the salad part should be here...Consider about this part and maybe remap here.

Rain

1. 00:02:239 (6) - nc?Done
2. 00:05:317 (6) - ^Done
3. 00:08:008 (1) - remove nc and add nc on 00:08:394 (3)Done
4. make it look like this? (add notes and stream on 00:18:585 (1,2,3,4) - and switch nc on 00:19:162 (1,4) )Unchange, I think that will be a little bit overmap
5. 00:23:778 (5) - nc?Done
6. 00:26:854 (6) - ^Done
7. 00:36:086 (7) - add nc and switch nc on 00:37:431 (1,2)Done
8. 00:42:239 (7) - nc?Done
9. 00:51:470 (5) - ^Unchange
10. 00:53:008 (9) - ^Done
11. 01:04:547 (10) - ^Done,but a note before
12. 01:13:778 (6) - ^Unchange
13. 01:17:816 (12,1) - switch nc?Done
14. 01:20:701 (6) - nc?Unchange
15. 01:23:778 (8) - ^Done
16. 01:26:086 (5) - ^Unchange

Sorry if my mod is bad/not helpful, I'm still a newbie at this ;w;You give me a lot of suggestions on NC. Thank you very much.

Anyway good luck with this!Ofcourse!

Volta wrote:

ssup. from my taiko queue. add taiko diffs first pls

i think only that from me. i hope this is helpful. Good luck!
interested to add taiko?

Volta wrote:

ssup. from my taiko queue. add taiko diffs first pls

[Cup]
00:04:547 (4,5,6) - ctrl+H and move to x:368Done
00:12:431 - add a note between (2) and (3)Done
00:13:008 (5,6) - make this farther?Unchange

00:21:085 (6) - move to right a little to give more movement. too little movement isn't fit to the music here.Done
00:21:854 (8) - move to left a little. Done
00:23:778 (5,6) - ^Change into different style

00:34:547 (1) - this repeat slider.. just one repeat is enough imo, and add note at 00:35:701 -Done

01:09:931 (1,2,3) - move to x:272. to give emphasis to crash sound.Done
01:23:777 (3,4) - x:80To x:88
01:26:085 (6,7,8,9,10) - x:264Done

[Salad]
00:02:624 (1) - ehh why spinner? this is mappable.Remap it
00:12:239 (7,8,9,10) - the distance is too far. make (8) and (10) closer pls. I think it's fine.
01:26:085 (4,5,6,7) - this too. make (5) and (7) closer.^

00:24:547 (12) - reduce the distance to 00:24:931 (13) - a little.Make some other change.

00:56:374 (3) - this jump is too far and hard for salad player imo. reduce the distance plsDone
00:57:912 (7) - ^Change into another way
01:12:239 (2) - move left a bit.Unchange

[Platter]
00:02:239 (6) - NC? rain have new combo hereDone
00:05:316 (6) - ^Done
00:09:931 (7) - ^Done

00:21:470 (4) - this is a little to far. move to x:160 for easier reach?Done,160 is a good place

00:52:624 (6) - move this a little farther to the left. the way you place 00:51:085 (3) - for the drum is main reason.Change some way to represent.
01:12:047 (5) - move the Hyper to left a bit. just one grid.Unchange due to change of slider speed


i think only that from me. i hope this is helpful. Good luck!Thank you, do help.
interested to add taiko?

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

As Req in Game~
im hiatus from modding, and i has just back, so dont expect to much

Ok, leave general cuz im too lazy checking general settingloooool

[Cup]

1. 00:00:701 - it would be nice if you consider placing a spinner here, you can delete 00:02:239 (1) - , for end of spinnerUnchange. I think it's a bit wired to put a spinner at the begin of the song. xd
2. 00:06:854 (8) - it isn't a big problem, but i just want to pointed this note has different distance with the previous, if you use 1.2x distance snap, just move it into x:376 or you can activate distance snap by pressing "y" (ofc with 1.2x distance snap setting) and move it to right side, it would automatically movedMake some change.
3. 00:11:085 (4) - move 1 grid to right side for consistent with distance?Done
4. 00:13:008 (6,7) - stack with (5)? it's look like the movement is too far stepping to right side for a CupI think it's fine here.
5. 00:19:547 (2) - 1 or 2 grid to right side? the movement is too narrow, also for 00:20:316 (4) - few grid to left sideDone, yup,it's narrow before.
6. 00:22:624 (2,4) - ^Done^
7. 00:24:162 (2) - x:32?40 may be better. I think if 32 the distance to next point is a bit far, but do change it.
8. 00:26:085 (3) - stack with (2)?Move the (3) just next to (2)
9. 00:34:547 (1) - change to other side, indeed it's a common slider, but this flow isn't good for a CupDone
10. 00:48:201 (2) - im thinking about change this into a spinner rather than mapped it with 1/4 sliderUnchange
11. 00:55:316 (4) - stack with end of slider, it felt awkward with a movementUnchange, I think it's better to emphasize the both vocal and the beat here.
12. 01:04:162 - this felt empty, how about make 01:03:777 (2) - into 1/1 slider or 3/2 slider with removing 01:04:354 (3) - ?Change into one long slider and a beat
13. 01:06:085 (1) - i think its too fast for a cup, just use a simple rhythm like this one Use one slider replace the reverse slider but with out that note.:
    
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14. 01:13:777 (3,4) - too much circle, delete (4) and change (3) into a slider insteadChange into another way.
15. 01:16:085 (2,3,4) - just follow what you did in beginning kiai ( 01:03:777 - ), i've gives suggestion about thisDone
16. 01:18:393 (1) - ^Done
17. 01:26:854 (6) - x:168, you can gives a little movement to emphasizingDone
18. last, end the spinner at 01:29:931 - here?Unchange. I choose the vocal end point.

[Salad]

1. 00:01:277 (1,2,3,4,5) - makes the flow more natural, this still a salad, try something like thisUnchange :
   
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2. 00:02:816 (2,3) - first move (3) into x:312, and then stack (2) with (3)I choose 296 xd.
3. 00:03:585 (5) - extend the slider into 3/2 sliderDone
4. 00:04:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - i just want make this as natural as possible, try this Done, good suggestion.:
   
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5. 00:06:854 (4,5,6,7) - too much circle, remove (5,6,7) and make (4) into a slider or spinnerUnchange
6. 00:11:470 (4,5,6) - ^, remove (5,6) and make (4) into 3/4 slider like in the picture below also if you did it with a slider you can makes it not totally lopsided, so the movement is not forcing Done and adjust some distance.:
   
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7. 00:12:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you applied mod in above, move this to x:360, 00:12:624 (3,4) - ctrl+g and also 00:13:008 (5,6) - ctrl+g then move (6) stack with (5), after that move (5,6) into x:176, see pict below for easy waySomething like that . :
   
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8. 00:25:893 (2,3) - give more distance between thoseUnchange
9. 00:32:239 (3) - ^Unchange
10. 00:36:854 (7) - x:248Done
11. 00:44:546 (3) - same as before, can you add more distance with previous note00:44:931 - missing note? add circle for consistent with rhythm, you dont need totally follow vocal, there is a sound! so add noteMake some other change to get the same result.
12. 00:46:470 (4,1) - more distance for increase the jumpDone
13. 00:54:547 (5,6) - remove (6) and change (5) into slider for fill the vocalUnchange
14. 00:55:701 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - felt awkward when you following vocal, try to follow other sound, i give suggestion about rhythm in picture below, just try something like thatChange to something like that.
    
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15. 01:01:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this is too complicated, if i map it maybe it would be like this:Unchange, I like this part lol.
    
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16. 01:04:547 (3,4) - remove (4), just made 1/1 slider insteadUnchange but delete the note before.
17. 01:06:085 (1,2) - swap place those, so jump between (2) and (3) is exquisite and 01:06:854 (3,4) - change into 1/1 slider instead, see pict for easy way:
    
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18. 01:07:624 (4) - its too far if you applied mod in above, so move into x:272?
19. 01:14:547 (7) - NC hereDone
    01:14:547 (1) - stack with (6) and 01:14:739 (2,3) - move into x:248, and (3) into x:344 like pict below:Unchange, I think fine here.
    
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20. 01:15:124 (1) - remove this note, so you will follow beautiful melodyDone, definately right.
    01:15:893 (7) - x:248 and 01:16:085 (1) - change to other side also move into x:104, ahh follow what i did in pict for easy way (i uses 1.5x distance snap, but about distance you can set it by yourself)Done
    
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21. 01:16:854 (3) - change to other side, its not good for a Salad
22. 01:23:585 (3) - remove this note, and add note at 01:24:739 - for consistent with rhythm, pict for easy wayDone
    
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23. 01:26:470 (6) - x:16?Unchange
24. also spinner should be start at 01:27:047 - as you did in Cup, and suggestion end of slider at 01:29:931Only change the begin of the spinner.

ah.. maybe i'll stop changing the structure of diff, i just give a oppinion and some suggestion

[Platter]

1. 00:06:470 (6) - makes this totally vertical sliderDone
2. 00:08:201 (8,1) - this have potential for a hyper, 00:08:008 (7) - x:328 and 00:08:201 (8) - x:440Done
3. 00:10:220 (2,3) - this jump is awkwardMaybe change
4. 00:11:085 (7,1) - HDash between those?Done
5. 00:12:431 (5,6) - remove hyper hereUnchange
6. 00:37:431 (3,1) - add hyper hereDone
7. 00:46:470 (8) - change to other side, its quite hard for a platter with anti-flow jumpDone
8. 00:51:277 (4,5) - add more distance between those, it would be good with a little jumpDone
9. 00:57:431 (5) - x:214Unchange
10. 01:03:008 (5,6,1) - the Hdash is should between (6) and (1), you misplacement hyper, move 01:03:393 (6) - into x:136Done
11. 01:04:547 (3,4) - its feel empty, just map it with 1/1 slider insteadDone
12. 01:09:931 (1,2) - reduce distance between those, so its would be more fun i guessDone but considerable
13. 01:11:470 (1) - ^Done but considerable
14. 01:14:547 (6) - NC and remove NC at 01:15:124 (1) - also NC at 01:16:085 (7) - Done
15. 01:15:316 (5,6,7) - misplacement hyper, as you did before just move (6)Done
16. 01:16:855 (3,1) - same as before 1/1 slider insteadDone
17. 01:24:931 (7,1) - this should be a hyperDone
18. 01:26:277 (5,6) - and remove hyper hereUnchange
19. 01:27:047 (1) - as in cup and salad, slider end at 01:29:931Change the same way as salad

[Rian]

1. 00:03:586 (2) - i has just thinking this is overmapped, but no! this just a wrong rhythm, you dont need to map it 1/4 ticks, just map it with 1/2 ticks as you did at 00:06:854 (1,2,3,4) - Unchange. Sorry, I don't think they are the same and there only one vocal here.
2. 00:08:394 (1) - just make this slider like pict below, so its more good to saw it Change but nearly the same:
   
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3. 00:12:240 (1,2) - its reasonable if you add hyper between 00:12:432 (2,3) - , but no between (1) and (2) because the beat isnt too strong for a hyper, so remove hyper between (1) and (2)Unchange. I think it's kind of from weak to strong and I use hitsound differences to emphasize it.
4. 00:13:201 (6) - stack this with (5) insteadUnchange but maybe
5. 00:13:393 (1) - this spinner end is different with other diff, change it as you did in other diff or vice versa (btw im preferably end spinner at 00:14:931 -)Done.Not change the end point
6. 00:18:777 (2,3,4) - ctrl+hUnchange
7. 00:22:048 (8,1) - should be a hyperUnchange, without hyper is fun xd.
8. 00:22:240 (1,2,3,4) - why add hyper each other? remove it or at least reduce the use of hyper in weak beatUnchange
9. 00:40:508 (4,1) - more distance between thoseDone
10. 00:41:277 (2,3,4) - this flow isnt good, you have makes 00:40:508 (4,1) - flow turned back, avoid turning back again, just make a natural flowI think it's fine.
11. 00:48:200 (1) - because you follow vocal, so you miss strong enough beat at 00:48:393 -Maybe remap this slider but did not figure out good way.
12. 00:55:124 (2,3) - you used triplet at 00:53:585 (2,3,4) - but you dont at here, this makes difference inconsistentChange the triple into double.
13. 00:56:374 (2,3,4) - i think isn't all of these important to be mappedUnhange
14. 00:57:912 (2,3,4) - ^Unhange
15. 01:02:239 (4,5,6) - i thought its a slow part, doenst need to add hyper i guessUnchange
16. 01:03:777 (6) - NCDone
17. 01:04:354 (1) - remove NCDone
18. 01:04:547 (5) - NCDone
19. 01:09:739 (7,1) - hyper?I will consider to become hyper.
20. 01:13:778 (5,6) - awkward, chooo awkward, remove (6) and makes (5) to 1/2 slider reverseUnchange
21. 01:16:663 (4) - felt more awkward, this follow nothing, try other rhythmChange
22. 01:18:394 (2,3,4,5) - im sure this isnt Rain pattern, its overuses hypers moreover this only weak beat, avoid something like this! it's enable your map get disqualifiedFix it to no hype and thanks about your warning. I will try my best to avoid that.
23. 01:20:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok i'll leave it into BN or QAT about sth like this, cuz im not good in placement hypers too, im not going to pointing anythingloool
24. 01:22:240 (3) - like beginning just made a normal sliderDone
25. 01:26:854 (5) - NCIs it necessary
26. 01:27:047 (1) - spinner end suggestion is same with other diffSame as before

Thats all from me~So many detail things!!
im still not good at moddingNope, really nice !
but hope this still helped you improve your map~Do improve a lot !!
if there is something wrong or you dont understand, contact me：）
GL~

EDIT: if you dont know suitable NC placement, just follow the stanza, so NC pattern is neat, ee.. NC in every while line or big white line, pict for example :

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