1. Easy (1.21 stars, 78 notes)
2. Hard (2.42 stars, 191 notes)
3. Normal (1.85 stars, 120 notes)

Mapset
Easy
Normal
Hard

1. 00:11:299 (3) - There's no sound on the red tick but it's on the 1/3 tick here 00:11:526 so it gives off a weird feeling because players can't follow the instruments completely. I guess I'll mention this just in case.
2. 00:14:367 (4,4) - Maybe move them down a bit? Since they're very close to the life bar.
3. 00:26:640 (2) - This one definitely touches it.

1. 00:24:935 (6,7) - The flows kinda weird here, I think you should increase DS here a bit.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Normal]

1. 00:11:299 (3) - There's no sound on the red tick but it's on the 1/3 tick here 00:11:526 so it gives off a weird feeling because players can't follow the instruments completely. I guess I'll mention this just in case. you're right, changed to 1/2 slider instead
2. 00:14:367 (4,4) - Maybe move them down a bit? Since they're very close to the life bar. should be fine
3. 00:26:640 (2) - This one definitely touches it. moved down

[Hard]

1. 00:24:935 (6,7) - The flows kinda weird here, I think you should increase DS here a bit. using constant DS for this diff and I think the flow should be fine

It's fine if it's no kd though, I'm very sorry because I'm not good with 1/3 Rhythm.
Good luck~

Sync wrote:

The MP3 you're using appears to be poorly encoded -- this usually happens when one transcodes from a lossy format to another. For this file in particular, it looks as if it was transcoded from 128kbs to 192kbs, which is an absolute no-no because not only will the quality be god awful, the size of the file will be bigger than it should be in the first place. Absolutely disgusting, I know. (Note: this could have happened when you cut the audio. If you use a program like audacity, it will re-encode the file which you certainly don't want.)

Don't fear, however, for I am here to save the day. I managed to source a lossless version of this song quite easily and transcoded it from FLAC (lossless) to MP3 192kbs (lossy), which is the correct way of going about this. Here is a link to the full, properly transcoded audio. I did not cut this for you using mp3DirectCut because you did some fancy stuff and I don't want to mess it up. I highly suggest doing the same thing again using mp3DirectCut and my audio file for a much better listening/playing experience. If you're going to do this, it's very important that you use mp3DirectCut.

For shits and giggles, let's compare the audio spectrum analysis for both files:
Original transcode (lossy -> lossy)
Proper transcode (lossless -> lossy)

Notice how the frequencies extend up to 16khz in the bad transcode and 18khz in the proper transcode.

thank you for this! once I figure out how mp3DirectCut works, I'll replace the mp3 file

[General]
Change the offset to 1036 if you're using my mp3 and used mp3DirectCut to cut it. After you do that, move all of the notes and inherited timing points by -36ms. You can do this easily by going to (Timing -> Move notes in time...) and (Timing -> Timing Setup -> Select all inherited timing sections -> Move by -36ms) respectively.


[Hard]
00:14:586 (7,1) - The way you manually stacked this is pretty unappealing. I'd suggest sticking with the default behavior for this particular case. it's meant to be a default stack but I guess it didn't work properly... fixed
00:17:314 (6) - Let (6) blanket (5). Looks better overall. alright
01:07:776 - Consider adding a note here. I think it fits because it maintains a running beat which feels appropriate for the transition the music is currently undergoing. I agree with this (also there's a vocal start at that point)
01:21:185 (4) - Not a huge fan of this slider. It'd probably look better if it was smooth. changed how the slider is made to make it smoother

1. 00:10:276 (2,3) - I'm just too picky, but maybe you can move (3) a bit down so (2,3,1) visually loks better? http://puu.sh/lZPXt/22f1887769.jpg
2. 00:32:435 (3) - Maybe make that slider a curve? so the flow on 00:32:435 (3,4) - smoother http://puu.sh/lZQ4n/e8f5d87126.jpg
3. 00:33:799 (1) - Imo the rhythm better like this http://puu.sh/lZQ7G/a71ddf3925.jpg, so it can cover both vocal and instrument better?
4. 00:36:526 (1) - Literally same as above

1. 00:25:503 (7,1) - Just a personal taste, why not make that paralel with previous curve slider? http://puu.sh/lZQMp/9bde6f802f.jpg
2. 01:00:390 (7) - Maybe make that slider slightly longer and ended on 01:00:958 - will cover the vocal on 1/3 better?
3. 01:10:503 (3,4,5,6,7) - Imo for some reason too corwded and cramped to move there

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hellooo from winter and christmas queue, too lazy to find the banner :p

[Normal]

1. 00:10:276 (2,3) - I'm just too picky, but maybe you can move (3) a bit down so (2,3,1) visually loks better? http://puu.sh/lZPXt/22f1887769.jpg ok
2. 00:32:435 (3) - Maybe make that slider a curve? so the flow on 00:32:435 (3,4) - smoother http://puu.sh/lZQ4n/e8f5d87126.jpg agreed
3. 00:33:799 (1) - Imo the rhythm better like this http://puu.sh/lZQ7G/a71ddf3925.jpg, so it can cover both vocal and instrument better? I wanted to do something different but I you are correct, altered
4. 00:36:526 (1) - Literally same as above ok

[Hard]

1. 00:25:503 (7,1) - Just a personal taste, why not make that paralel with previous curve slider? http://puu.sh/lZQMp/9bde6f802f.jpg why didn't I think of that? o.o
2. 01:00:390 (7) - Maybe make that slider slightly longer and ended on 01:00:958 - will cover the vocal on 1/3 better? sure does
3. 01:10:503 (3,4,5,6,7) - Imo for some reason too corwded and cramped to move there changed it up a bit so it should be less cramped

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Maybe you should put 1/3 beat warning on description, some people just hate irregular rhythm like 1/3 don't think it's necessary.. let them find out for themselves :p
I might come again, good luck for now dear

1. Ok, so I played through the entire diff, thinking it was a poorly timed 1/4 map when it was actually properly timed 1/3 LOL. In the beginning, there are no clickable objects on the 1/3rd ticks, so its ok, but starting at 00:11:945 - I think you should add something that strongly indicates it's 1/3. I would change 00:12:967 (3) - to a 1/3 slider to emphasize the 1/3 beat. Also, any other similar place you can do the same thing. Just a suggestion.
2. 01:06:831 - I feel like this should be clickable. How about shortening 01:06:490 (1) - by 1/6, muting the slider end, and adding a note with a clap at 01:06:831 ? Same thing with the next few rhythms
3. Sorry, I'm not really experienced with modding 1/3 maps

1. 00:47:399 (1) - ctrl+j and reposition for better flow
2. 01:01:036 (1) - I think you want "normal" addition for hitsound, not "drum"
3. 01:06:491 (1) - ^
4. 01:16:717 (3,1,2) - too many straight sliders imo. how about something like this to add more variety? http://puu.sh/m0vUJ/9e6dadb987.jpg
5. 01:20:126 (1,2) - rotate these sliders a bit for better flow

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~

[Hard]

1. Ok, so I played through the entire diff, thinking it was a poorly timed 1/4 map when it was actually properly timed 1/3 LOL. In the beginning, there are no clickable objects on the 1/3rd ticks, so its ok, but starting at 00:11:945 - I think you should add something that strongly indicates it's 1/3. I would change 00:12:967 (3) - to a 1/3 slider to emphasize the 1/3 beat. Also, any other similar place you can do the same thing. Just a suggestion. a 1/3 slider won't fit that part well x.x, and I also want to refrain from using 1/3 sliders because they're too short imo
2. 01:06:831 - I feel like this should be clickable. How about shortening 01:06:490 (1) - by 1/6, muting the slider end, and adding a note with a clap at 01:06:831 ? Same thing with the next few rhythms don't want extended sliders >< (there is only one in the Hard diff because it fits so well with transition through the chorus and vocals)
3. Sorry, I'm not really experienced with modding 1/3 maps that's ok :<

[Normal]

1. 00:47:399 (1) - ctrl+j and reposition for better flow done
2. 01:01:036 (1) - I think you want "normal" addition for hitsound, not "drum" it's meant to be drums because different type of finish hitsoud
3. 01:06:491 (1) - ^ ^
4. 01:16:717 (3,1,2) - too many straight sliders imo. how about something like this to add more variety? http://puu.sh/m0vUJ/9e6dadb987.jpg alright
5. 01:20:126 (1,2) - rotate these sliders a bit for better flow done

Hope that helps and good luck!

1. 01:21:155 (2,1) - Consider ending the slider at 01:22:519. New instrument sounds starts appearing there, and adding a beat there would sound cool. Also in the current rhythm, the spinner is visible while the previous slider isn't fully faded out yet. Since you've made an aesthetic slider at the end, both being visible won't benefit your setting.

1. 00:11:610 (7,1) - The actual speed down of the song appears at 00:11:951. Accordingly, I suggest you to start the reduce of spacing from there, instead of 00:11:610.
2. 00:36:382 (5,1) - 01:12:632 (2,3) - Stack could be few pixels better huehue

1. Still wip? :3 Anyways considering the parts you've uploaded are finished, I'd like you to focus more on consistency of 1/3 doubles. 00:02:632 (4,5) - 0.54x | 00:03:428 (6,1) - 0.33x | 00:08:087 (4,5) - 0.45x. There are several inconsistent spacings of your 1/3, and this results in a lack of structure on your map.

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From my queue! Short map = Short mod. (Unless it has problems!)

Hard

[General]
Set CS to 3.5.
[Modding Itself]
00:10:240 (4) - This slider is weird.
01:11:149 (6,7,8) - This seems weird.
01:18:421 (3) - This slider is weird.

That's all.

Rilene wrote:

AESTHETIC MODDING QUEUE
____________________________________________

Eh, I found no problems any at all in terms of aesthetic so good luck with the map instead.
Both normal and hard diff is aesthetically pleasing.

Sonnyc wrote:

You PM'ed Sonnyc for a mod!
[Normal]

1. 01:21:155 (2,1) - Consider ending the slider at 01:22:519. New instrument sounds starts appearing there, and adding a beat there would sound cool. Also in the current rhythm, the spinner is visible while the previous slider isn't fully faded out yet. Since you've made an aesthetic slider at the end, both being visible won't benefit your setting. ok

[Hard]

1. 00:11:610 (7,1) - The actual speed down of the song appears at 00:11:951. Accordingly, I suggest you to start the reduce of spacing from there, instead of 00:11:610. true, modified
2. 00:36:382 (5,1) - 01:12:632 (2,3) - Stack could be few pixels better huehue rip me ;_; (fixed)

[pkgh]

1. Still wip? :3 Anyways considering the parts you've uploaded are finished, I'd like you to focus more on consistency of 1/3 doubles. 00:02:632 (4,5) - 0.54x | 00:03:428 (6,1) - 0.33x | 00:08:087 (4,5) - 0.45x. There are several inconsistent spacings of your 1/3, and this results in a lack of structure on your map.

Nicely designed difficulties Rizen. Worth a star.

RVMathew wrote:

As thanks for testplaying my map here is a mod. Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.




Difficulty: Normal
1) 00:21:155 (2,3,4) - Considering 00:20:132 (1) , 00:21:155 (2) is not straight, so I would move it to 208,103. This will also affect sliders 3 and 4 so shift them up by the same amount of units. done

Difficulty: Hard
00:10:246 (4) - This is a personal thing but I do not like the idea of a having a slider with both curved and angle points. This is only a cosmetic thing and did not affect playing it. mmm alright then ;(

01:21:155 (4) - Make it a candy cane slider. Again a personal thing It's already a christmas sleigh

General
01:24:564 At this part the sounds seems to fade in volume a bit. May I suggest adding some extra timing points. For example at 01:24:905 (75% volume) and 01:25:246 (70%) added, but used 70/60 instead

I was thinking you can use a white combo colour don't want to add white colours because people usually use white combo numbers

Add pkhg in tags when he finishes in time i'll add it ;_;

All in all, there are small niggles which are just personal and do not really affect gameplay that much. The map is nice as well.

Good luck.

Doyak wrote:

IRC mod

2015-12-21 21:54 Doyak: you want an IRC mod?
2015-12-21 21:54 Doyak: or just on the thread
2015-12-21 21:54 Rizen: if that's ok :<
2015-12-21 21:56 Doyak: hmm I think people prefer 1366x768 BG
2015-12-21 21:56 Doyak: Consider finding one
2015-12-21 21:56 Doyak: The tag is different on a diff, check it
2015-12-21 21:57 Rizen: that's with the WIP diff
2015-12-21 21:57 Doyak: ah ok
2015-12-21 21:57 Rizen: still waiting for pkhg to finish diff ;_;
2015-12-21 21:57 Doyak: then no need to mod that one?
2015-12-21 21:57 Rizen: nope
2015-12-21 21:57 Doyak: on Normal
2015-12-21 21:58 Doyak: 00:48:769 (3,4) - I don't think this is allowed
2015-12-21 21:58 Doyak: since the snap should be at 3/2s
2015-12-21 21:58 Doyak: 1/2 doesn't fut
2015-12-21 21:58 Doyak: fit*
2015-12-21 21:58 Rizen: ooo i forgot to remove those
2015-12-21 21:58 Rizen: shiet
2015-12-21 21:59 Doyak: 01:21:155 (2) - LOL
2015-12-21 22:00 Rizen: candy cane
2015-12-21 22:00 Doyak: I know
2015-12-21 22:00 Doyak: very nice
2015-12-21 22:00 Rizen: oh
2015-12-21 22:00 Rizen: thanks :s
2015-12-21 22:00 Rizen: try guess the end slider on the hard
2015-12-21 22:01 Doyak: In terms of music theory the bpm should be halved but I guess nobody cares
2015-12-21 22:02 Doyak: the map looks good, nothing to say more
2015-12-21 22:03 Doyak: now on Hard
2015-12-21 22:03 Doyak: 00:14:678 (1,3) - those are stacked wrongly, you need to fix it by youself
2015-12-21 22:03 Doyak: cuz that editor bug
2015-12-21 22:04 Doyak: 00:20:132 (1,2) - Would be cool if those were on one line but well
2015-12-21 22:06 Rizen: ok, readjusted to one line
2015-12-21 22:06 Doyak: 00:58:314 (1) - I think this doesn't much need to be an 2/3, as the only thing it represents is the long vocal but you have a harder difficulty to do that, so I might represent the only "real" sounds on this diff
2015-12-21 22:07 Doyak: 01:11:269 (7) - I don't think there's sound on the reverse arrow, I would just use an 2/3 slider
2015-12-21 22:08 Rizen: aaaa damn me
2015-12-21 22:08 Rizen: i didn't check this map thread
2015-12-21 22:08 Rizen: and didn't see 2 mods
2015-12-21 22:08 Doyak: lol
2015-12-21 22:10 Rizen: nice catch
2015-12-21 22:10 Rizen: about 01:11:269 (7) -
2015-12-21 22:10 Doyak: 01:20:814 (3) - I think this beat isn't worth emphasized with a click, so how about http://puu.sh/m3x6H/65e3cdc207.jpg
2015-12-21 22:11 Rizen: ok
2015-12-21 22:11 Doyak: and is the preview point snapped well? it's starting after the kiai start section
2015-12-21 22:11 Doyak: usually you put it a little before than that
2015-12-21 22:12 Rizen: I recently changed offsets so I must of forgotten
2015-12-21 22:12 Doyak: anyway, that's all from me
2015-12-21 22:12 Doyak: good map!
2015-12-21 22:12 Doyak: now I'm gonna earn a kudosu
2015-12-21 22:12 Doyak: hehe