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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, May 18, 2017 at 9:32:08 PM

Artist: APRIL
Title: Muah!
Tags: kpop norman marianna sonnyc dsp media 채원 현주 나은 예나 진솔 chaewon hyunjoo naeun yena jinsol
BPM: 124
Filesize: 23125kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:

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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: muah.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6256,128191,135933,178514
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Muah!
TitleUnicode:Muah!
Artist:APRIL
ArtistUnicode:에이프릴
Creator:Nekomata
Version:Norman's Normal
Source:
Tags:kpop
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-62,"muah.flv"
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,128391,134613
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,64
Combo2 : 0,159,0
Combo3 : 255,91,255
Combo4 : 79,79,255

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Tags : DSP Media 채원 현주 나은 예나 진솔 Chaewon Hyunjoo Naeun Yena Jinsol

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Hi from my modding Queue:

Mod
Easy:

- This is one of the best easy that i'm seem on osu, nice

Normal:

- 00:06:256 (1,1,2) - Maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/mB8Ce/c2463b2d17.jpg
- 00:41:820 (2) - The rythm is correct, but is a little weird to play, because the voice doesn't go with the rythm, I think is better if you follow the voice, using a circle, with an on-beat slider
- 01:37:224 (1) - Maybe a softly blanket http://puu.sh/mB9gl/4c3dc772f9.jpg
- 01:58:030 (2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern seems a little forced in comparation with the rest of the beatmap, but it's okey for me

Kiss:

- 00:41:095 (1) - Blanket a little with 00:41:579 (2)
- 00:43:030 (1,2,4) - I don't think this pattern is a fail, but I feel its to close with the life bar
- 01:15:449 (7,1) - What about this blanket http://puu.sh/mBacw/0f5a9e1ab0.jpg , I don't think is a necessary change, but it's interesting
- 01:58:514 (1,2) - I think with a little blanket look better http://puu.sh/mBavC/bf12a9539d.jpg
- 02:41:095 (1,2) - Why not blanket this, but the next is blanket, I think the pattern can be improve
- 02:45:449 (2,5) - The pattern is good, but the overlap is a little weird, especially because you repeat that pattern in more parts of the beatmap without the overlap
- 02:58:030 (6,1) - The circle is a little close for me, but it's good


Good Luck with your beatmap /o/
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Rhythm Incarnate
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xRenito wrote:
Normal:

- 00:41:820 (2) - The rythm is correct, but is a little weird to play, because the voice doesn't go with the rythm, I think is better if you follow the voice, using a circle, with an on-beat slider I’ll give it some thought.

The rest is fixed. thank you for modding
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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: muah.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6256,128191,135933,178514
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Muah!
TitleUnicode:Muah!
Artist:APRIL
ArtistUnicode:에이프릴
Creator:Nekomata
Version:Norman's Normal
Source:
Tags:kpop norman marianna
BeatmapID:843434
BeatmapSetID:384335

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-62,"muah.flv"
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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376,112,141498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,112,143433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,296,147304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,240,149240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,152,151175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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380,340,155288,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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320,284,156982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,172,166175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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xRenito wrote:
Kiss:

- 00:41:095 (1) - Blanket a little with 00:41:579 (2)
- 00:43:030 (1,2,4) - I don't think this pattern is a fail, but I feel its to close with the life bar as long as it's in the grid, it's fine :p
- 01:15:449 (7,1) - What about this blanket http://puu.sh/mBacw/0f5a9e1ab0.jpg , I don't think is a necessary change, but it's interesting
- 01:58:514 (1,2) - I think with a little blanket look better http://puu.sh/mBavC/bf12a9539d.jpg
- 02:41:095 (1,2) - Why not blanket this, but the next is blanket, I think the pattern can be improve good catch
- 02:45:449 (2,5) - The pattern is good, but the overlap is a little weird, especially because you repeat that pattern in more parts of the beatmap without the overlap will keep this for now
- 02:58:030 (6,1) - The circle is a little close for me, but it's good[/b][/box]

Good Luck with your beatmap /o/


i just applied some blankets, thanks for checking
also updated tags
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Hi from my modding Queue:

Easy:

- This is one of the best easy that i'm seem on osu, nice Thanks ♥

Good Luck with your beatmap /o/
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Hey, I am doing normal NM's on a random diff to get my mod count up.

Red is a necessary fix.

Easy:
00:10:127 (1,2,3,1,2) -Spinner recovery is too long; it may be unrankable? Lower time between the pink 1 and 2, and change 2 to new combo.
01:12:062 (1) - Doesn't go well with the music.
01:46:901 (1) - Again, unrankable spinner recovery (maybe).
01:48:837 (3,4) - Put another note in between these.
01:52:708 (1,2,3) - Distance seems wildly off; may just be me.
02:00:449 (3) - Change to new combo.
02:04:320 (4) - ^
02:15:933 (1) - Maybe you got lazy, but this is not acceptable, even if it is rankable. Actually split this up.
02:25:611 (1) - Too long of a gap.
02:29:482 (1) - Spinner recovery.
02:31:417 (2,3) - I would add a note in between.
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Swegmec wrote:
Hey, I am doing normal NM's on a random diff to get my mod count up.

Red is a necessary fix.

Easy:
00:10:127 (1,2,3,1,2) -Spinner recovery is too long; it may be unrankable? Lower time between the pink 1 and 2, and change 2 to new combo.
01:12:062 (1) - Doesn't go well with the music.
01:46:901 (1) - Again, unrankable spinner recovery (maybe).
01:48:837 (3,4) - Put another note in between these.
01:52:708 (1,2,3) - Distance seems wildly off; may just be me.
02:00:449 (3) - Change to new combo.
02:04:320 (4) - ^
02:15:933 (1) - Maybe you got lazy, but this is not acceptable, even if it is rankable. Actually split this up.
02:25:611 (1) - Too long of a gap.
02:29:482 (1) - Spinner recovery.
02:31:417 (2,3) - I would add a note in between.


Please do not put 'Unrankeable' in places you really know you are, the recovery is great for BPM beginners are going to go very well in this.
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From my Queue o/
Norman's Normal

00:17:869 (2) - Remove NC
00:50:772 (4) - ^ why? = The combos in this song should end in last beat before a pause, and the new combos begin in firstly beat after a pause, I suggest that you should fix all the similar ones.
EXCEPT for the pauses after the beginning of a verse / choir like this one 00:56:579 (1,2).


Sonnyc's Hard

02:36:982 (4) - Fix this, Half-beat forward, and reversearrow (or hitcircle) -> http://puu.sh/mTRff/ab94312770.jpg
02:40:853 (7) - Remove NC
02:41:095 (1) - NC
02:50:772 (1) - NC
02:58:514 (7) - Replace it by a spinner.


Kiss

00:09:643 (3,4,5,1) - Fix pos. -> http://puu.sh/mTMe1/f755ee4e2b.jpg
00:13:514 (7) - Replace it by a short slider -> http://puu.sh/mTNmd/1aee710efd.jpg , then remove this 00:13:756 (8)
00:18:595 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Grid level 4 and fix DS in each one.
00:23:191 (5,6,1) - fix DS in each one.
00:46:659 (7) - NC
00:46:901 (1) - Remove NC


GL~ :D
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TitaN7 wrote:
From my Queue o/
Kiss

00:09:643 (3,4,5,1) - Fix pos. -> http://puu.sh/mTMe1/f755ee4e2b.jpg i don't see a problem here :P
00:13:514 (7) - Replace it by a short slider -> http://puu.sh/mTNmd/1aee710efd.jpg , then remove this 00:13:756 (8) does not fit the rhythm i'm following
00:18:595 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Grid level 4 and fix DS in each one. i don't use grid snap, but i readjusted it to be slightly better curved
00:23:191 (5,6,1) - fix DS in each one. also for this section
00:46:659 (7) - NC ok
00:46:901 (1) - Remove NC this was moved to the next circle


GL~ :D
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Looks good



Marianna's Easy
  • 02:15:933 (1) - I think the heart would look better if it didn't overlap. Maybe just create a smaller heart only half the length with a repeat at 02:19:804 -



Normal's Norman



Sanic's Hard
  • 00:29:482 (1) - Ctrl+G this and rotate it anticlockwise a little for better flow?
  • 01:04:320 (1,2) - Maybe turn this into a spaced stack to avoid confusion with 1/2 stacks like 01:03:353 (4,5) - right before it.
  • 01:08:191 (2,3) - ^ and for any others
  • 02:25:611 (1,2) - Looks a bit weird
  • 02:37:708 - Why is this empty? Like I don't see any difficulties in mapping it, it just feels unfitting and lazy.
  • 02:48:837 (4) - Same deal here. You could just have a 1/1 repeat slider here which I think would follow the music better.


Kiss looks good.
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Yoges wrote:

Normal's Norman


Sanic's Hard



i think that's quite enough to warrant a kudosu or two
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