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1. Warning: Mandrain ver. mp3 in this package have timing shift which might cause your acc drop, some beats are off timing and I could not fix it by just applying audio delay.
   
   Mandrain Ver. Metadata

   林俊杰 - 江南
   第二天堂
   Cpop Album Track 2
   2004

Kvantuma Rozo wrote:

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 199245
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Jiang Nan (Cantonese Ver.)
TitleUnicode:江南（粤语版）
Artist:JJ Lin
ArtistUnicode:林俊杰
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Kvantuma Normal
Source:
Tags:西界 Jun Jie
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:384284

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Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m?

General

1. custom combo color pls。 好了

Misty Rain

1. 00:21:495 (4,1) - 包好？ 好
2. 00:37:245 (4,5) - 我觉得这边换成一个3/8slider来表现此处的特殊vocal会比较好玩点。后同。 我比较倾向于完全无视vocal，除非只有vocal存在，因为这曲子做出来要适应国语版mp3
3. 01:34:745 (2,3) - 这个跳不该那么大。。。顺便，这些跳的距离感觉跟着vocal的激昂度走比较好，目前只能说勉强能跟上vocal和downbeat，建议全图过一遍，哪里大哪里小自己斟酌一下。 好
4. 03:25:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这边所有音压满感觉效果不好，打击点只跟vocal或者鼓更好些。 逆flow和短DS就想体现一种“势”，因为我不喜欢在高潮前留太长的空
5. 04:05:745 (4,1) - 跳太大，没必要。 好
6. 这个曲子vocal抑扬顿挫，柑橘是个变化很丰富的轨，多跟一跟梗应该会更多一些的。 就是怕国语版vocal区别到时候没法通用啊

Collab Advanced

1. 00:31:995 (1) - 这里逆flow不好，建议顺flow，直接ctrl+g或者换个方向和距离。 还是喜欢目前这样，我是故意切的，但并没有逆flow，根据我的理解前两个跳跃的角度走向决定了下一个锐角是切flow还是逆flow（03:25:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 就是逆flow），我目前觉得切flow用在这里很好
2. 00:55:995 (1) - 同上。逆flow用在有明显重音或者downbeat以及特殊梗的地方，比如用在00:59:995 (1,2) - 就好的多。
3. 01:24:995 (3) - ton鼓的音效不好听，建议换掉。后同。
4. 01:55:745 (3,1) - 这个跳太大了。
5. 嗯，那个ton鼓真的很烦（

Kvantuma's Normal

1. 01:06:995 recommend you add a note here.
2. 01:20:495 (1,1) - you must leave a 2/1 gap after spinner in normal diff, just change that pattern, remove the spinner maybe. same to 02:32:495 (1,1) - .
3. 01:53:495 (3) - the arrow's tick is not snapped to that vocal beat, which is actually at 01:53:745, so the current arrow snapped nothing and i think it is unrankble in lower diffs. change that obj's rhythm into another style plz.
4. 01:54:995 (1,2) - highly recommend you not overlap that slider like this, just avoid it by changing the structure, otherwise noobs can be confused by that pattern in reading.
5. 03:27:245 (1) - the vocal beat is actually at 03:27:745 and current slider's end is unsnapped.
6. 03:44:995 (1) - this is a special vocal pattern which is similar to previous ones but not the same. this slider's arrow and end actually snapped nothing, and the correct vocal beats' tick is actually at 03:45:495, 03:45:870 and 03:46:245. i recommend you just remove this slider, and later sliders is following drum track which is still good in mapping and playing.
7. 03:46:995 (3) - this slider snaps nothing, maybe you did something wrong to the stuff?
8. 04:05:995 (1) - map to the part other diffs end to make all diffs in totally same length.
9. the map's style is fine to me, things you gonna need to take care is some detail parts like what i've mentioned above. btw, that whistle lol orz

还是普通话的好听。 普通话版有timing shift，应该是制作问题，这个用来mapping和rank更好，反正都是drum mapping可以通用mp3

good luck

Hollow Wings wrote:

Kvantuma's Normal

1. 01:06:995 recommend you add a note here. ok
2. 01:20:495 (1,1) - you must leave a 2/1 gap after spinner in normal diff, just change that pattern, remove the spinner maybe. same to 02:32:495 (1,1) - . 删掉了后面紧接的滑条
3. 01:53:495 (3) - the arrow's tick is not snapped to that vocal beat, which is actually at 01:53:745, so the current arrow snapped nothing and i think it is unrankble in lower diffs. change that obj's rhythm into another style plz. 在map的时候我把mp3替换成了国语版orz，节奏有些出入，后面提到的unsnap基本都是这个原因，已经全改了
4. 01:54:995 (1,2) - highly recommend you not overlap that slider like this, just avoid it by changing the structure, otherwise noobs can be confused by that pattern in reading. ok
5. 03:27:245 (1) - the vocal beat is actually at 03:27:745 and current slider's end is unsnapped.
6. 03:44:995 (1) - this is a special vocal pattern which is similar to previous ones but not the same. this slider's arrow and end actually snapped nothing, and the correct vocal beats' tick is actually at 03:45:495, 03:45:870 and 03:46:245. i recommend you just remove this slider, and later sliders is following drum track which is still good in mapping and playing. 所言极是
7. 03:46:995 (3) - this slider snaps nothing, maybe you did something wrong to the stuff? 改了
8. 04:05:995 (1) - map to the part other diffs end to make all diffs in totally same length. 好
9. the map's style is fine to me, things you gonna need to take care is some detail parts like what i've mentioned above. btw, that whistle lol orz

Momizi wrote:

[Kvantuma's Normal]
01:50:745 (2,3) - 稍微往下挪一点，和上面的01:48:995 (3) - 有点擦边 改了
[Collab Advanced]
01:33:995 (1) - 往左边挪一点，感觉01:31:995 (1) - 这个的头在滑条中间会比较好 微调了一点点
01:54:995 (2,1) - 这种重叠不是很好看 微调了
[Misty Rain] 两个都不改
00:27:995 (1) - 往下挪点，和00:26:745 (2) - 有点擦边
03:55:995 (1) - 这个朝上感觉比较顺flow

磨不动，射一发跑路

Mollon wrote:

感觉图挺完备的了。。水都水不动

kvantuma's normal
02:20:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这个和前面段的完全一样会不会太明显了。。后面有相同段看上去好歹也做了个上下对称

advanced
03:19:495 (1,2) - 有点擦
一下就看出小M酱做的部分了>,<
感觉三围可以相对n难度有所差别吧，难度有点区分度 现在完全一样了

misty rain
01:52:995 (3,4,1) - 感觉有一点怪
01:56:995 (3,4,1) - 这里3和1是放在一条水平线上的吧。。感觉是要贴曲，不过有种想把1滑条 ctrl+g的感觉。。（只是个人想法，略过
图风很喜欢

handsome wrote:

general
wtf is spinnerbonus10.wav?

normal
in my opinion, you should leave more 1/1 gap since a lot of the map is 'connected' and is really messy.
01:26:995 (5,6,1) - overlaps are quite confusing, as the repeat is short, its hard to gauge how long it lasts for and players can break. applies for other parts too like 02:38:495 (4,5,1) - etc.
01:54:245 (3,1) - 1/1 stack feels a bit hard to read
01:54:995 (1,2) - try not to overlap their paths
02:19:995 (1,1) - 1/1 stack

call me back after applied.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

 
 
 

 
 
 

General

[ General]

1. Unused hitsound: spinnerbonus10.wav yeah you are right, removed
2. I honestly consider it would be better if you replaced the current mp3 file for this version of 192kbps to meet the Ranking Criteria statements. mp3 is ok because i encoded with vbr setting, its quality is higher than 192k, and is allowed
3. I'm not sure if you need to display epilepsy warning on song setup because of Aimod. no flashing should be fine
4. Uncheck letterbox during breaks as long as there's no lyrics files in the breaks. ok done

Kvantuma's Normal

[ Normal]

1. AR - 1 or -2. Despite the icon of this diff is set as a "Normal" setting the AR over 5 is a bit exaggerated due to the simple flows and patterns this difficulty uses. It would make more sense if your reduced the AR to lead players into a relaxing diff which plays rather as an easy.
2. CS - 0.5 I know this goes over the mapper preferences, but I dislike the small circles this diff manages knowing this will be the easiest diff of the mapset.
3. It would be better if you've mapped the this point 03:19:245 where the preview time starts as well as the rest of the diffs did. should be ok, vocal mapping is a little hard for normal to follow as it does not start at a white stick. https://osu.ppy.sh/b/377892 this map have different break section so should be ok
4. 04:09:995 Remove this unnecesary green line as long as it's not changing anything in the mapset.
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Collab Advanced

[ Collab Advanced]

1. This diff seems that copied and pasted the same diffs settings (Od, AR... ) of the previous diff. Consider to change according to the diff itself, my suggestion will go like this:
   CS 4
   AR 5.5
   HP4
   OD5 ok
   []
2. 00:34:495 (4) The reverse of this slider is skipping many piano notes that should be emphasized. It would be better if you tried out this rhythm to follow properly the instruments. prefer a pause, mapping the drum at the point i guess
3. 00:47:995 (1,2) This flow is a bit weird consider to the ones you managed before. It would make more sense ifg you try to ctrl + G those object each one apart to improve the flow. It should look like this
4. 02:24:745 (2) This understack creates an awkward flow because you didn't manage understack on previous patterns, and in this case it looks like a trap. It would be better if you unstacked them to improve the flow. stacked to the head of next slider
5. 03:29:745 (4) Same ^ ok

Misty Rain

[ Misty Rain]

1. 03:24:495 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). its snapped as 1/16
2. 03:24:995 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). its snapped as 1/16
3. OD + 1 and HP + 1 to don't have the same HP and OD of the advanced diff. ok fix
4. 01:15:495 (4) Ctrl + G this to improve the anti clock sense flow here.
5. 01:57:495 (4) ^ nah really dont have much impact against flow Orz, would like to keep these two if you dont mind

HappyRocket88 wrote:

 
 

Collab Advanced

[ Collab Advanced]

1. This diff seems that copied and pasted the same diffs settings (Od, AR... ) of the previous diff. Consider to change according to the diff itself, my suggestion will go like this:
   CS 4
   AR 5.5
   HP4
   OD5
   []
2. 02:24:745 (2) This understack creates an awkward flow because you didn't manage understack on previous patterns, and in this case it looks like a trap. It would be better if you unstacked them to improve the flow.
3. 03:29:745 (4) Same ^
4. 02:48:995 (3) This slider is missing many important ticks that should be emphasized as well as you did in the previous patterns. Something >I think it's fine, and I don't follow vocal lol. seems now is very good for me
   like this would make more sense.
5. 03:20:995 (3) 100% sure this should start here 03:20:870 to follow properly the vocals.