1. Commencement (3,18 stars, 232 notes)
2. Hard (2,39 stars, 178 notes)
3. Normal (1,39 stars, 136 notes)
4. Sieg's Insane (2,93 stars, 205 notes)

Diffset:
Normal: Auxent
Hard: Auxent & YellowManul
Insane: Sieg
Commencement: Auxent
Storyboard: XinCrin
Hitsounds help: Sieg & LordRaika

1. SBFolder+.osb
2. I've already asked to BNs about the beatmap size + sb and everything should be okay
3. I hope you like it, If not send me a PM and tell me what I should do for you or kill me please

XinCrin wrote:

Here you have the storyboard. I made something simple since the song is very peaceful, Also, I've used sounds samples to fit the storyboard events like the rain sound and the thunder

1. SBFolder+.osb
2. I've already asked to BNs about the beatmap size + sb and everything should be okay
3. I hope you like it, If not send me a PM and tell me what I should do for you or kill me please

• fantastic SB O:

• 
  01:02:858 (4) - add whistle
  01:05:696 (4) - second part add whistle
  02:04:074 (2) - ^ add whistle

• 
  01:02:452 (4) - second part add whistle
  01:06:101 (6) - add whistle

George wrote:

SB
01:19:479 - The lightning flash here imo is a bit too blue and I would try to saturate the color - I'll try to play with it in photoshop.
01:39:750 - I probably would of made the rain from here on out fade away - No need imo.

Normal
00:09:750 (2,3) - I would either move (3) up more so it flows with (2) or I'd make (2) have less of a curve - Moved the note n.3
00:13:804 (3,1) - same thing ^ - Fixed.
00:30:831 (1) - I would make this a copy of 00:29:209 (2) just mirrored - It is mirrored.
01:17:858 (4) - this curve is ugly imo - i tried to make blanket, so i don't see any problem here.
01:34:074 (2,3) - I figured you can make (2) blanket (3) - Hmm...it's not bad idea. I might think of it.
01:40:560 (1) - I'd try not to use straight sliders - Not fixed.

Hard
00:03:263 (1) - ^ - Not fixed.
01:53:128 (3,4) - I'd try to not use a jump like this in a hard because its double the spacing you used - Manul told me, that he likes it like it is.

and then ofc I cant map insane so idk what to tell you for insane xp

1. Storyboard files not found: pribehtabule\auxe.png and pribehtabule\ym.png
2. I suggest you to rise OD for all diffcultes to (AR-0.5 ~ AR-1) level as most common settings for plain rhythm-timng map. This is also gives better rewards for good accuracy players.
3. Told you about hitsounds already.
4. 02:04:885 (1) - this spinner is excessive, there is nothing left to reflect in the song with it.

1. 00:56:777 (1) - bonus sound from spinner is too loud, consider to lower volume level or silence spinner bonus sound
2. ^ for all difficlutes
3. 01:40:560 (1,2,1) - try something more aesthetically pleasant thttp://puu.sh/m7h0s/c5467364ad.jpg

• 
  00:03:263 (1,1) - this straight slider pattern looks really old, make them like 00:17:858 (1) -

1. 00:07:723 (4,1) - you can space them and similar patterns like this http://puu.sh/m7hnn/adf1377aea.jpg for beter emphasis
2. 00:14:614 (1) - ^ 00:20:696 (4,1) - 00:27:182 (4,1) -
3. 00:49:682 (5,6,1) - spacing is wrong, you should use more distance for 00:49:885 (6,1) - instead of 00:49:682 (5,6) - because of more stressed 00:50:290 (1) -
4. 01:12:182 (5) - reverse this slider for better flow http://puu.sh/m7hoz/cb4a07a89b.jpg
5. 01:51:912 (1) - this one is not neat at all, look t/37194&start=0 for a better wave versions

• 
  00:04:783 (6) - not sure about snapping of this, there are really strange 1\8 1\12 shifts for similar spots also :\ listen them carefully
  01:16:236 (1,2,3) - nah nah 2008 pattern, try something like http://puu.sh/m7hDf/60ca066807.jpg
  01:17:858 (1,2) - ^
  01:40:155 (3,1) - space them more to emphesize 01:40:560 (1) - better

Sieg wrote:

few notes

[General]

1. Storyboard files not found: pribehtabule\auxe.png and pribehtabule\ym.png - Maybe you forgot to redownload the map because of the new storyboard because I'm not using this files anymore.
2. I suggest you to rise OD for all diffcultes to (AR-0.5 ~ AR-1) level as most common settings for plain rhythm-timng map. This is also gives better rewards for good accuracy players. - Fixed.
3. Told you about hitsounds already. - rvre. fixed.
4. 02:04:885 (1) - this spinner is excessive, there is nothing left to reflect in the song with it. - Removed.

[Normal]

1. 00:56:777 (1) - bonus sound from spinner is too loud, consider to lower volume level or silence spinner bonus sound
2. ^ for all difficlutes - I put the silenced spinnerbonus sound.
3. 01:40:560 (1,2,1) - try something more aesthetically pleasant thttp://puu.sh/m7h0s/c5467364ad.jpg - Fixed.

[Hard]

• 
  00:03:263 (1,1) - this straight slider pattern looks really old, make them like 00:17:858 (1) - - Fixed.

[Commencement]

• 
  00:04:783 (6) - not sure about snapping of this, there are really strange 1\8 1\12 shifts for similar spots also :\ listen them carefully - So I've listened to it during various time shifts (25, 50%) and I concluded, that it's a 1/6. There's like place for two 1/12 notes but it's quite contradictory. So I just moved the notes to 1/6 spot and it sounds better than on 1/8.
  01:16:236 (1,2,3) - nah nah 2008 pattern, try something like http://puu.sh/m7hDf/60ca066807.jpg - I played too much old maps so yea xD. Used your suggestion. Fixed.
  01:17:858 (1,2) - ^
  01:40:155 (3,1) - space them more to emphesize 01:40:560 (1) - better - Fixed.

Nice. - Thank you & thanks for the stars.
drop some more cuties to me (: will do (:

15:16 *Bakari is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/838103 Tom Day - New Beginnings]
15:16 Auxent: yay \ w /
15:18 Bakari: http://music.tomday.me/track/new-beginnings metadata is correct, yo
15:19 Auxent: yay.
15:19 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/WP7sc4PS.png legit concernings that should be fixed 
15:19 Auxent: yea...
15:19 Auxent: i kinda need some good suggestions for colors...
15:19 Auxent: ;w;
15:20 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/O8zmRnQQ.txt
15:20 Auxent: alright thank you.
15:20 Auxent: about the missing pictures...
15:20 Auxent: in sb.
15:21 Auxent: i deleted it when XinCrin made a new one.
15:21 Auxent: and they shouldn't be in a file nor in osb.
15:21 Bakari: I guess that's my fault, then
15:24 Bakari: 01:16:236 (1,4) - that's a bit visible @Normal
15:25 Auxent: alright, so i'm going to rotate it a little and keep the blanket.
15:26 Auxent: that didn't help that much but it's quite better than it was.
15:27 Bakari:  01:57:993 (3,1,3,1) - the 1/4s appear a bit awkward while even 1/2s are overlapped 
15:27 Bakari: it leaves players confused whether they should hit 1/2 or 1/4
15:27 Bakari: Apart from these patterns it should be good. 
15:29 Auxent: alright
15:29 Bakari:  Oh, just one touch, reduce it's diff settings a little
15:29 Bakari: So it works better as the easiest diff
15:30 Auxent: ok.
15:33 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/841658 Tom Day - New Beginnings [Hard]]
15:35 Auxent: ok
15:37 Bakari: It's better to have strong beats clickable, 01:10:560 - 01:12:182 - 
15:38 Auxent: Alright
15:39 Auxent: Fixed.
15:44 Bakari: 01:51:506 (6,1) - sudden spacing reduction doesn't really work here, although the stack looks cool 
15:46 Auxent: I'll make in a triangle pattern like this: http://puu.sh/mgLA9.png
15:47 Bakari: I'll post stuff to kitty's diff in the thread 
15:47 Auxent: Alright.
15:50 Bakari: 00:30:425 (6,7,1) - 1/6 is complicated enough, stacking it with stuff makes it even harder 
15:51 Auxent: hmm...
15:52 Auxent: will be okay if i stack these two together? 00:30:020 (5,6) - ?
15:52 Bakari: Yep, should be fine
15:53 Auxent: ok...fixed...
15:55 Bakari: 01:01:642 (1,2,5,6,7) - as the sound changes making 5-6-7 repeat the same path doesn't really work 
15:56 Bakari: 01:24:344 (1,2) - after a strong beat there should b a jump between those two
15:56 Auxent: I'd like to keep it...if it doesn't matter...
15:57 Auxent: To the second one...
15:57 Auxent: Yea...I'll figure out something,.
15:57 Auxent: But...
15:57 Auxent: I also used it here 01:22:723 (1,2) -
15:57 Auxent: The pattern before...
15:58 Bakari: If you decide to change, that'll require changing both, then
15:58 Bakari: 01:28:398 (5) - Ctrl+G would flow nicely, in my opinion
15:58 Auxent: well...
15:59 Auxent: alright
15:59 Auxent: fixed.
15:59 Bakari: The rest looks cool
16:00 Bakari: I'll post it along with concerns about Kitty's Insane

1. 00:07:723 (4,1) - the jump here has no reason to exist in the beatmap. (4) is a weak beat and doesn't call for anything jumpy. In case it is here to emphasize (1), you're not doing it right. Players jump when they hear a strong beat and not before it. There are more patterns like that, you probably should revise the jump strategy you have here, since this is a Light Insane, try to jump only on stronger beats.
   Note: 00:14:209 (4,1) - same, I suppose.
2. 00:10:155 - the beat here would benefit from having a clickable object on it.
3. 00:53:736 (1) - was the spinner here really necessary? You'd benefit a lot from removing it (and adding a break time, optionally).
4. 01:10:560 (3) - the music isn't calling for anything even remotely similar to the sudden curve. Please, make sure that the slider curves correspond with the song, do not randomly overuse them.
   [*01:13:804 (3,1) - spacing reduction in the beatmap does not correspond with the song, I doubt it is supposed to be here. Keep the spacing consistent here?
   Note: 01:15:425 (5) - same.
   
   Revise the usage of jumps before going any further, please.

Slayed wrote:

зига

ну, тут только предложение поставить ноту 00:56:777 (1) - вот сюда, а спиннер начать где-нибудь после на желтом или синем тике

а, и еще сделать бы 01:48:669 (1) - вот это слайдер более симметричным

и бланкет 01:51:912 (1,2,3) - сюда засунуть, ну так, чтобы красиво было, а то просто симметрия как-то неоч, учитывая то, что ты ее нигде больше не юзал

в остальном все круто

Slayed wrote:

aaaa

general

why manul is in tags? if its collab, you must point that out by sb or in the description - i'll write in the description soon.

epilepsywarning is not set in all diffs - no need imo.

unused hitsounds: soft-hitfinish2.wav - it's used at the hardest diff

also idk why the flying clouds are touching the ground lol -i'm planning to do a little touchups at sb.

glglgl, very nice set
also most of this are suggestions, so just think about it

in short, i've fixed some from your suggestions. thank you.

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hey, m4m here!

[General]
I think the kiai is too long. Maybe you have to make it shorter if you want your map get ranked.

[Normal]
01:11:371 (3) - Use short reverse slider instead? - I'd like to keep the consistency with previous patterns.
00:56:777 (1) - Why not a long slider like 00:53:533 (1) - ? -I'd like to have at least one spinner in each difficulty.

[Hard]
01:00:223 - Add a circle? - Nope because I'd like to have some recovery time after the spinner part.

[Commencement]
1/12 is not recommended for anyone to use ever. Besides I can't see any necessity to use it.
Definitely you should use 1/8 instead. - Many people warned me about this but I'm going to keep like this because it surely is a 1/12 beat. And I can prove you wrong, there are quite lot of beatmaps with 1/12 snapping that was ranked. Example.
00:56:642 (1) - Weird sound. - I wanted to make it more 'magical'.

Basically there is not much to pick in this map, expect those 1/12.
Good luck with it! - Anyways, thank you very much for your mod. (:

1. 01:25:966 (1,2) - uhm, I can see some strange stack at 01:24:344 (3,1) - so how about move 01:25:966 (1) - upward so you can stack the 01:24:344 (3,2) - ??
2. 01:51:912 (1) - much better for flow if CTRL + J > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4299348

1. 00:03:263 (1,2) - better 1/2 them for consistency with 00:16:236 (2,3,2,3) - since beat strength is same
2. 00:52:317 (1,2) - how about CTRL + J This since 00:52:317 (1) - as stack with tail of 00:50:290 (1) - and another stack for 00:51:506 (2,2) - is kinda awkward
3. 01:49:885 (3,5) - touching, maybe can move downward this 01:51:100 (5,6,1) - also nazi stack on 01:51:100 (5,1) -

1. 00:30:425 (5,1) - make sure that their jump is same angle with 00:29:614 (3,4) -
2. 01:03:263 (1) - maybe it should same shape with 01:04:074 (3,4) - since it's looks pretty random because they're on one combo color
3. 01:34:885 (4,5) - how about 45° jump around here, open your DS and drag them 1by1 while holding CTRL for some sexy angles
4. 01:46:236 (2) - should be 1/2 slider how 01:42:993 (2) - did since you skipped 01:46:642 - and 01:47:047 - as slidertail is kinda strange compared to these > 01:40:155 (2,2,2,2,4,3) -

1. 00:36:912 (4) - just nazi thing, y:283
2. similar to ^ 00:42:587 (4) - should be on y:66 so they're balanced with 00:42:182 (2) - (yes move it with DS)
3. 01:12:993 (1,4) - another nazi ;3
4. 01:19:479 (1,2,3,4) - sooo you unstacked only 01:19:885 (3) - and it's pretty strange imo, you can try at least triangle or square jumps here
5. 01:22:723 (1,2,3,4) - similar with ^ 01:23:128 (3,4) - should be stacked as well, or unstack 01:22:925 (2) -
6. 01:24:344 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. 01:29:209 (1,3) - avoid this overlap even tho it's slight
8. 01:35:696 (1) - noooooooo don't spin it your easier diff even had circles and sliders here. or else you'll spin in easier diff as well.