Hi there monstrata o/ From the christmas queue on my own behalf.
^not really but you might wanna put it down a bit still since it touches the hp bar really hard
HP is way too low, would increase it by 2 or so.
00:08:112 (1) - Delete NC to make it consistent in this part (NC per 2 stanzas)
00:10:639 (1,1,1,1) - Could lower down the volumes at the spinnerend
00:17:507 (1) - I'd tend to extend this by 1/4 so it transitions more fluid into the next slider
00:42:849 (3,4,5) - would make this an equilateral triangle as 4 gets emphasis as well
02:03:218 (2,1) - idk but i had issues reading these jumps well, maybe manually stack 02:02:744 (1,1) - these if others complain too
02:05:112 (4) - 0|141?
02:06:849 (6,1) - NC switch
02:16:955 (1,2,3) - 02:25:797 (1,2,3) - Soft-hitsounds on the sliderends
02:17:902 (4) - 02:26:744 (4,1) - Rhythm inconsistency, not sure why you're not extending here as well
02:40:955 (1,2,3) - It would look more fitting if you'd align them in a diagonal way like before:
02:52:797 (3,4,5,1) - Finish on sliderend doesn't sound nice especially when the slider's not following something properly in the track, make it triple sliders like 02:55:323 (3,4,1) - would work much better.
03:08:270 (4,5) - ^
03:12:534 (1) - Soft end
03:25:797 (5) - 03:28:323 (5) - 03:30:849 (5) - 03:32:586 (5) - 03:42:218 (1) - 04:41:586 (5) - Finish. I think there're more
03:34:955 (5) - 03:37:481 (5) - Finish at end.
03:52:955 (3) - NC
03:54:849 (1) - I'd delete this NC
03:56:428 (5) - 03:58:955 (5) - 04:01:481 (5) - Same as above, i'd reduce these patterns at mentioned points since it's really awkward to have these sliderend-finishes IMO
04:15:691 - holy whistles this section confuse me so much
04:25:797 (1) - 04:26:428 (1) - Soft end
04:35:902 (1) - Soft+whistle on start and end fits better to the jingle
04:45:849 (6,1) - Switch finish
04:48:218 (6) - Finish end.
04:50:744 (5) - ^
04:55:481 (1) - ^
05:00:218 (2,3) - Emphasis on 3 is low, i'd suggest something like:
05:01:165 (1,1,1,1) - Soft ends sound more pleasing.
Two more mods or so and then you can call me back. メリークリスマス!