1. Futsuu (1,6 stars, 73 notes)
2. Kantan (1,23 stars, 53 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2,45 stars, 105 notes)
4. Oni (2,29 stars, 160 notes)

1. I think the kiais can be merged.
2. BG dimensions are what.

1. 00:03:877 (17) - k? Since you're following the high notes with k in these parts it seems like it'd work.
2. 00:13:929 (59) - ^
3. 00:21:940 (91) - k? So it can differentate from the sounds in the next kdkd.
4. 00:26:966 (110) - ^
5. 00:24:296 (100,101) - dk? Definitely not fitting with another kd. Even then it kinda sounds like 00:24:296 (100,101) - anyways.
   ~repeat for second time~
6. 00:39:375 (156,157,158,159) - kkddk FOR BIG FINISH!!>?

1. HP 6 should be fine.
2. 00:24:767 (67) - d? I think it fits the sound of this part better. (repeat for others)
3. 00:21:783 (60) - Oh yeah. k like Oni?
4. 00:26:966 (73) - ^ (repeat for others!)
5. 00:28:537 (77) - I want this to be d... but I didn't suggest it in Oni... so maybe do something in Oni xd (maybe kd, or dd, they're kinda weird tho. Do whatever)

1. HP 8. This song is WAY too short for low HP.
2. Like mentioned before in chat, it's way too close to Muzu. Basically almost the same amount of notes but on all 1/2 instead of 1/4.
   
3. You can definitely use the 1/4 lines even if it ruins SR (who cares).
   Something like this:
   
   Follows rhythm and is NOT hard for the player to grasp since all the have to do is listen to the preview lolol.
4. 00:07:647 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - Can be k k k d k, then next kiai repeats the stuff I suggested ofc.
   
5. For the non-kiai, stuff like this can work:
   

1. OD 3, HP 8! 30s song, aka 20% can pass lol.
2. Similarly, now you want to step down from Futsuu but still follow the song. This will destroy SR but again, who cares. BNs will know kek.
   A nice way would be:
   
   
3. 00:07:333 (10) - Delete the note here and the break will be fine.
4. 00:08:275 - k would fit the amount of k notes in other diffs better.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[genrela]

1. I think the kiais can be merged. Done
2. BG dimensions are what. Fixed.

[hoIIIOIINin IM THENMEEMi]

1. 00:03:877 (17) - k? Since you're following the high notes with k in these parts it seems like it'd work. Sure.
2. 00:13:929 (59) - ^ ^
3. 00:21:940 (91) - k? So it can differentate from the sounds in the next kdkd. True
4. 00:26:966 (110) - ^ ^
5. 00:24:296 (100,101) - dk? Definitely not fitting with another kd. Even then it kinda sounds like 00:24:296 (100,101) - anyways.
   ~repeat for second time~ Fixed.
6. 00:39:375 (156,157,158,159) - kkddk FOR BIG FINISH!!>? SURE!!>!

[moozakshii]

1. HP 6 should be fine. k.
2. 00:24:767 (67) - d? I think it fits the sound of this part better. (repeat for others) Sure.
3. 00:21:783 (60) - Oh yeah. k like Oni?
4. 00:26:966 (73) - ^ (repeat for others!) Done all.
5. 00:28:537 (77) - I want this to be d... but I didn't suggest it in Oni... so maybe do something in Oni xd (maybe kd, or dd, they're kinda weird tho. Do whatever)Fixed.

[fuTSUU]

1. HP 8. This song is WAY too short for low HP. kk.
2. Like mentioned before in chat, it's way too close to Muzu. Basically almost the same amount of notes but on all 1/2 instead of 1/4.
   
3. You can definitely use the 1/4 lines even if it ruins SR (who cares). I changed Futsuu a bit.
   Something like this:
   
   Follows rhythm and is NOT hard for the player to grasp since all the have to do is listen to the preview lolol.
4. 00:07:647 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - Can be k k k d k, then next kiai repeats the stuff I suggested ofc. Done
   
5. For the non-kiai, stuff like this can work:
   

[kan... TAN!!!]

1. OD 3, HP 8! 30s song, aka 20% can pass lol. OK!
2. Similarly, now you want to step down from Futsuu but still follow the song. This will destroy SR but again, who cares. BNs will know kek. I changed Kantan a bit too.
   A nice way would be:
   
   
3. 00:07:333 (10) - Delete the note here and the break will be fine.
4. 00:08:275 - k would fit the amount of k notes in other diffs better. Done both.

Going along with that, the spread should shapen up.

1. 00:24:296 (66,67) - These are on the wrong ticks (one further).
2. 00:34:348 (93,94) - ^ etc. etc.

1. 00:02:621 (5) - Remove this note? If you don't have one at the very start it doesn't make that much sense.
2. 00:12:673 (23) - ^
3. 00:02:935 (6) - d? I think mapping the low note is fine.
4. 00:12:987 (23) - ^ etc. etc. etc.
5. 00:20:212 (37) - Same here, you never really use notes on the onbeat anywhere else.
6. 00:23:039 (41,42) - Maybe d d so it's not always k k d. Repeat for the other low ones.
7. 00:28:066 (49,50,51) - k d k? I think it's more fitting.
8. 00:38:118 (65,66,67) - ^
9. 00:34:977 - Add a note? Like you do for another one of these earlier.
10. 00:37:490 - ^

Ameth Rianno wrote:

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it's hTEMa!!
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Btw add "temmie chang tuyoki" to the tags, it's the maker of Temmie. Added

OzzyOzrock wrote:

no kds because wtf...

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:24:296 (66,67) - These are on the wrong ticks (one further).
2. 00:34:348 (93,94) - ^ etc. etc. I'll keep these, sounds better for me.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:02:621 (5) - Remove this note? If you don't have one at the very start it doesn't make that much sense. Tru
2. 00:12:673 (23) - ^ ^
3. 00:02:935 (6) - d? I think mapping the low note is fine. Sure.
4. 00:12:987 (23) - ^ etc. etc. etc. ^
5. 00:20:212 (37) - Same here, you never really use notes on the onbeat anywhere else. Removed.
6. 00:23:039 (41,42) - Maybe d d so it's not always k k d. Repeat for the other low ones. Done
7. 00:28:066 (49,50,51) - k d k? I think it's more fitting. Yes.
8. 00:38:118 (65,66,67) - ^ ^
9. 00:34:977 - Add a note? Like you do for another one of these earlier.
10. 00:37:490 - ^ Done both.

YOU ARE NOW READY FOR MODS BECAUSE I DON'T PICK AT NOTE PLACEMENT SHIT

Nofool wrote:

huu come on there are cooler songs from that game... my ears hurt TEM SHOP RULZ

[Kantan]
- i would've mapped it using the 1/2 background rythm so..... nothing to suggest, just gonna mod according to your melody follow's choice.

[Futsuu]
- 00:24:924 (45) - change to d, add k at - 00:29:950 - ? => alternate 1 note/2 notes and k there fits well.
- 00:37:490 (67) - remove, ^ same reason. Changed both.

[Muzukashii]
- 00:07:961 (22) -, - 00:08:589 (25) - well since xxo 1/4 aren't safe, change them to k ? Come on, its 95 bpm, there's no problem with this LOL
- 00:18:013 (49) -, - 00:18:642 (52) - ^. ^
- move - 00:24:767 (67) - to - 00:24:453 -? plays weird atm and doesn't fit the usual rhythm you use. Instead i moved it here 00:24:924 -
- 00:34:820 (94) - ^ (and possibly change it to d). Same as before and yeah, changed to d.

[hONI]
following both the melody and the 1/2 background sound make it weird to play x_x. I make this with all my maps, it's my style.
I made a test diffuclty were i only removed notes from your Oni in order to make it fit much more the melody : deleted 18 notes (142 objects), SR goes up to 2,66.
example of what i removed (first half of the kiai) : - 00:01:050 (5) -, - 00:02:621 (12) -, - 00:03:563 (16) -, - 00:04:505 (20,21) -, - 00:06:076 (26) -, - 00:09:846 (42) -.
so yeah i would suggest you to make similar changes over the whole diff (last kkddk can be left as it is because ending yeah). Not needed to do, as i said before, it's my own style, so i'll leave this.
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Good luck'
edit : ha and HB it seems ?

1. Raise HP on all diffs by 1.0, song is short as heck.

1. Unlike Oni, this diff seems to have all the breaks in the kiai, making the part after slightly harder (because you become forced to put notes on the onbeat so the song doesn't sound weird). Consider adding a note at spots like 00:04:820 and 00:14:872 in the kiai to keep it as constant as Oni, and maybe remove a note in the middle of the ending part such as 00:30:265 (83) - or something (though it makes it kind of inconsistent, so maybe not mapping the downbeat for those parts is the best choice)
   
2. 00:24:296 (66,67) - These would sound way better one 1/4 later since that's more where the emphasized sound is.
3. 00:33:563 (91) - I forgot if this isn't k for variation.
4. 00:34:820 (94) - Same with this being k instead of d like before. (Also, do the same change as the other notes).

1. 00:07:647 (13,14,15,16,17) - k d k d d fits much better with what the song is trying to do. Or even k k d d d... well k k k d k sure doesn't since it doesn't map the low ending ok.
2. 00:17:699 (31,32,33,34,35) - ^ duh
   
   Since there's a clear gap between Muzu and Futsuu, we can try to up the difficulty nicely by doing this:
3. 00:22:411 - k here, but delete 00:24:924 (45) -
4. 00:27:437 - k here
5. 00:32:464 - whatever note here, but delete 00:34:977 (62) -
   It brings in more 1/2 without making things too far from Kantan.
   
6. 00:37:176 (66,67) - swap?
7. 00:39:689 (71) - Move to 00:39:532 ? Then 00:39:532 (71,72) - k d?

1. 00:22:411 (28) - I do wonder if this note would be better on 00:22:097 (in every occasion). It's definitely a lot more musical and predictable for this kind of diff. Maybe ask Dake if you don't agree.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]

1. Raise HP on all diffs by 1.0, song is short as heck. Done sir.

[Muzukashii]

1. Unlike Oni, this diff seems to have all the breaks in the kiai, making the part after slightly harder (because you become forced to put notes on the onbeat so the song doesn't sound weird). Consider adding a note at spots like 00:04:820 and 00:14:872 in the kiai to keep it as constant as Oni, and maybe remove a note in the middle of the ending part such as 00:30:265 (83) - or something (though it makes it kind of inconsistent, so maybe not mapping the downbeat for those parts is the best choice) Made some changes on my own.
   
2. 00:24:296 (66,67) - These would sound way better one 1/4 later since that's more where the emphasized sound is. Alright.
3. 00:33:563 (91) - I forgot if this isn't k for variation. Changed.
4. 00:34:820 (94) - Same with this being k instead of d like before. (Also, do the same change as the other notes).Done i guess

[Futsuu]

1. 00:07:647 (13,14,15,16,17) - k d k d d fits much better with what the song is trying to do. Or even k k d d d... well k k k d k sure doesn't since it doesn't map the low ending ok. Alright, k d k d d it goes.
2. 00:17:699 (31,32,33,34,35) - ^ duh ^ dah
   
   Since there's a clear gap between Muzu and Futsuu, we can try to up the difficulty nicely by doing this:
3. 00:22:411 - k here, but delete 00:24:924 (45) -
4. 00:27:437 - k here
5. 00:32:464 - whatever note here, but delete 00:34:977 (62) -
   It brings in more 1/2 without making things too far from Kantan.
   
6. 00:37:176 (66,67) - swap?
7. 00:39:689 (71) - Move to 00:39:532 ? Then 00:39:532 (71,72) - k d? All of these applied.

[Kantan]

1. 00:22:411 (28) - I do wonder if this note would be better on 00:22:097 (in every occasion). It's definitely a lot more musical and predictable for this kind of diff. Maybe ask Dake if you don't agree. Alright but i'll leave the last one, because final note duh.