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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 19 de mayo de 2017 at 15:42:58

Artist: cYsmix
Title: Classic Pursuit
Source: osu!
Tags: beatmapping contest featured artist
BPM: 140
Filesize: 4339kb
Play Time: 02:18
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Download: cYsmix - Classic Pursuit
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MAPPING WITH REWARDS (OCTOBER. 2015)

RIP Star rating, Muzu is not harder than Oni!!!! FIXED

Take care, as the Cursed Oni has 1/4+1/8 patterns!
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Taiko mod as requested.


    Oni
  • 00:21:377 - Add a kat here to maintain consistency of patterns with 00:17:841 (79,80,81) - ?

  • Since you implemented the ddk k rhythm at both 01:24:055 (26,27,28,29) - and 01:24:912 (30,31,32,33) -, I think it'll sound amazing if you held this exact rhythm in the upcoming string of 1/2 notes. Here's my suggestion :
    Suggestions
    01:26:841 (39) - Change this to kat

    01:26:734 - Add a don


  • 01:30:162 - Same suggestion as the one above ^, add a kat here so that you can maintain the consistency of the pattern you applied at 01:27:484 -

  • 01:33:591 - Same ^, add a don here to maintain consistency of the don pattern with 01:30:912 - and 01:31:770 -. A ddd here should be enough here instead of a ddddk. Mainly because ddddk sounds weird here lmao

  • 01:27:270 - Change this to a don? It matches with the music and flows better with the overall pattern

  • 01:30:698 - ^ Same, change to don?





I'm sorry but that's all I could find. The remaining difficulties, Basic, Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii are fine tbh. The note structure, pattern usage and overall consistency of the notes are beautifully crafted, so good job on that.
The only thing that I can point out is the over-repetitiveness of some patterns used, for example in the first kiai time of Muzukashii.
This doesn't really affect the overall quality of the map, so it's completely up to you on whether or not you wanna apply some changes to the repetitive patterns throughout the difficulties to add some variation to it.
So yeah, good luck on the map!
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Jerry wrote:
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Taiko mod as requested.


    Oni
  • 00:21:377 - Add a kat here to maintain consistency of patterns with 00:17:841 (79,80,81) - ? it's really consistent imo, if you look at 00:07:770 - i'm not using note, then here 00:15:484 - i start increasing the difficult
  • Since you implemented the ddk k rhythm at both 01:24:055 (26,27,28,29) - and 01:24:912 (30,31,32,33) -, I think it'll sound amazing if you held this exact rhythm in the upcoming string of 1/2 notes. Here's my suggestion :
    Suggestions
    01:26:841 (39) - Change this to kat

    01:26:734 - Add a don

    I like a lot this idea! but the reason of why i won't accept is because i want this part simple, without complications, just adding 1/4 in 01:27:484 - for consistency with 01:24:055 - ><
  • 01:30:162 - Same suggestion as the one above ^, add a kat here so that you can maintain the consistency of the pattern you applied at 01:27:484 -
    same ^ :c
  • 01:33:591 - Same ^, add a don here to maintain consistency of the don pattern with 01:30:912 - and 01:31:770 -. A ddd here should be enough here instead of a ddddk. Mainly because ddddk sounds weird here lmao same ^

  • 01:27:270 - Change this to a don? It matches with the music and flows better with the overall pattern same as before, i want this simple, just increasing difficult at these parts 01:27:484 - ><

  • 01:30:698 - ^ Same, change to don? same ^





I'm sorry but that's all I could find. The remaining difficulties, Basic, Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii are fine tbh. The note structure, pattern usage and overall consistency of the notes are beautifully crafted, so good job on that.
The only thing that I can point out is the over-repetitiveness of some patterns used, for example in the first kiai time of Muzukashii.
This doesn't really affect the overall quality of the map, so it's completely up to you on whether or not you wanna apply some changes to the repetitive patterns throughout the difficulties to add some variation to it.
So yeah, good luck on the map!


Thanks for the mod Jerry :3
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pequeño check en Cursed Oni (que me encanta)

Cambiar nombre a Nemesis (?

El SV podría ser un poquito más alto en varias secciones para ayudar a la mejor lectura de los 1/8 (aunque esto probablemente sea porque soy un cegato)

00:04:984 (27,28,29) - Invertir el ritmo en cada Stanza para dar un poco de variedad? (es decir, acabar en k en lugar de en d) Aunque entendería que prefirieses la consistencia xD -- O sea ir alternando entre acabar d y acabar k

00:55:555 (8) - hmmm cambiar a k? aunque el tono sigue algo bajo creo que daría mejor flow
02:04:127 (8) - ^

Volveré cuando tenga un poco más de tiempo&ganas -w-

La verdad es que está bastante guay (al menos las que jugué yo)
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pequeño check en Cursed Oni (que me encanta)

Cambiar nombre a Nemesis (? Lo haria xD pero no lo considero Nemesis, si fuera nemesis la habria overmapeado con algunos 1/8 innecesarios o streams largos xD

El SV podría ser un poquito más alto en varias secciones para ayudar a la mejor lectura de los 1/8 (aunque esto probablemente sea porque soy un cegato)
A mi tambien me cuesta leerlos un poco xD por ahora prefiero dejar el sv como esta ya que creo que seria demasiado alto

00:04:984 (27,28,29) - Invertir el ritmo en cada Stanza para dar un poco de variedad? (es decir, acabar en k en lugar de en d) Aunque entendería que prefirieses la consistencia xD -- O sea ir alternando entre acabar d y acabar k si entendi a que te referias xD el problema aqui es que teniendo un sonido grave en 00:05:198 - preferiria dejarlo como d, no digo que variando quede mal solo que soy estricto siguiendo los sonidos ;w;

00:55:555 (8) - hmmm cambiar a k? aunque el tono sigue algo bajo creo que daría mejor flow actualmente creo que fluye bien, al menos para mi se me hace divertido dk(kdddd)kd, igual tu sugerencia no es mala idea ya que de sonar tambien suena bien, pero prefiero dejar por el momento mi pattern
02:04:127 (8) - ^ igual que ^

Volveré cuando tenga un poco más de tiempo&ganas -w-

La verdad es que está bastante guay (al menos las que jugué yo) gracias :3


Muchas gracias por revisarlo, esperare por la siguiente parte del mod, aunque no acepte nada ya explique los motivos, lo siento ><
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:) Hi Hanjamon and hello from my Queue :)

In the following I will show you what I would change and why.



General


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Taiko Basic



Kantan





Futsuu


  • 00:01:341 (1) – Change to K // Difference between first two notes would be higher

  • 00:31:341 (65) – Change to K // a little much D's in that part i think



Muzukashii



Oni





Cursed Oni


  • 1/8 Notes? I hope you are sure with this. I can't play or even read this one. It's way heavier than nearly all other ranked maps between 5-6 stars so i can't give a good mod for this :(



I don't get why your Muzu has so many stars it's definitly easier than your Oni
Your Cursed Oni really is cursed xD
thats leaving not much unsaid i hope the few things can help
:) Good luck with it :)
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:) Hi Hanjamon and hello from my Queue :)

In the following I will show you what I would change and why.



General


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Taiko Basic



Kantan


  • 01:12:484 (19) – Change to 01:13:341 // I personally think its better here if i move the note will cause inconsistency with other patterns and i don't have note in Futsuu there



Futsuu


  • 00:01:341 (1) – Change to K // Difference between first two notes would be higher i think it's fine with d, i don't feel that a K or k fits good there ><

  • 00:31:341 (65) – Change to K // a little much D's in that part it's fine imo due to i have these dons in muzu too, changing this to k will break a bit the spread



Muzukashii



Oni


  • 01:35:412 (7) – Delete // more supporting that part of the song nice idea there, but i prefer to keep kkkkk because i'm following that stream, anyway, probably i'll consider this



Cursed Oni


  • 1/8 Notes? I hope you are sure with this. I can't play or even read this one. It's way heavier than nearly all other ranked maps between 5-6 stars so i can't give a good mod for this :( the song has 1/8 beats and they are playable so i think it's fine



I don't get why your Muzu has so many stars it's definitly easier than your Oni
Your Cursed Oni really is cursed xD
thats leaving not much unsaid i hope the few things can help
:) Good luck with it :)


Thanks for the mod!
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General
Reduce volume to 80-90%


Muzukashii
00:28:341 - K , flow
00:37:341 - move red tick onward, sounds better
01:27:698 - k ? consistency 01:24:055 (19,20,21) -
01:36:912 - K , flow


Oni
00:44:948 (205,206,207) - 00:48:377 (224,225,226) - 00:51:805 (243,244,245) - 00:55:234 (2,3,4) - imo sound doesn't fit
maybe dkd would be nice

01:46:127 (54,55,56) - kkk, flow
01:49:341 (2,3,4,5) - bit akward, consider adding note middle

01:53:841 - 01:57:270 - 02:00:698 - 02:04:127 - add note, increassing diff

02:07:770 (19,20) - kk , make not monotoune
02:11:198 (31,32) - ^
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General
Reduce volume to 80-90% i can't barely hear taiko hitsounds, so 100% it's fine imo


Muzukashii
00:28:341 - K , flow actually flows good
00:37:341 - move red tick onward, sounds better i'm not following background sound there
01:27:698 - k ? consistency 01:24:055 (19,20,21) - trying variety there like i did in other diffs
01:36:912 - K , flow as i said before, actually flows good


Oni
00:44:948 (205,206,207) - 00:48:377 (224,225,226) - 00:51:805 (243,244,245) - 00:55:234 (2,3,4) - imo sound doesn't fit
maybe dkd would be nice i like more kkd, both fits good but i feel kkd better

01:46:127 (54,55,56) - kkk, flow it actually flows good, i don't know what you mean
01:49:341 (2,3,4,5) - bit akward, consider adding note middle for me its actually fine, if i add a note it will be hard, i'm not making a hard oni, also, i don't want to ruin the spread

01:53:841 - 01:57:270 - 02:00:698 - 02:04:127 - add note, increassing diff i know i made this last kiai a bit harder but as i said before, i'm not making a hard oni ><

02:07:770 (19,20) - kk , make not monotoune loud sound, i know that if i follow the background it should be like that but i'm following these loud sounds too
02:11:198 (31,32) - ^ same ^


Thanks for the mod!
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Hi. M4M

Image General
  • SR lol

Image Taiko Basic

Image Kantan

Image Futsuu

Image Muzukashii

Image Oni
Good luck!
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i'm very sorry for not checking the mod tasuke, i'll check soon (after 1 year lol)

tasuke912 wrote:
Hi. M4M

Image General
  • SR lol yeah rip

Image Taiko Basic

Image Kantan

Image Futsuu

Image Muzukashii

Image Oni
Good luck!


Thanks a lot for the mod Tasuke, and again, really sorry for the delay of 1 year :(
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hello darling,

General
mp3 bitrate is 224kbps, change it to 192kbps to meet the ranking criteria's rules
since cYsmix is a featured artist for osu!, consider adding 'featured artist' in the tags

Taiko Basic
I'm suggesting you to change the difficulty name to either 'Basic' or 'Beginner', there is no need to add "Taiko"
The mapping is perfect.

Kantan

Futsuu
  • 01:51:484 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - I have troubles understanding this pattern, the note (10) seems to be an 'extra' which doesn't follow the song perfectly. I would suggest you to do something like this the picture below. The emplacement of the note (10) will emphasize a dominant sound.
    Image
  • 01:54:912 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - Same thing as above, move (21) and delete (23). Do the same thing for the same pattern in this kiai.

Muzukashii

Oni

Cursed Oni
  • 00:57:055 (16) - I feel like a kat will be better than a don. Apply this to your whole section.
  • 01:33:591 - If you take a look to your previous notes, you are using a lot of 3-notes, I believe you can 'break' this pattern by adding a kat in here.
  • 02:18:698 (100,101) - I understand your choice of adding two notes in here, because there's a sound you wanted to emphasize, however,
    all the other difficulties are ending at 02:18:484 - . I'm suggesting you to delete these two notes to follow your consistency with your other difficulties.


Nice job here! Let's see what we can do next ;)
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afaik, osu! featured artists can have more than 192kbps bitrate
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hello darling,

General
mp3 bitrate is 224kbps, change it to 192kbps to meet the ranking criteria's rules i'll keep the actual mp3 for now, as it's the official ><
since cYsmix is a featured artist for osu!, consider adding 'featured artist' in the tags true, done

Taiko Basic
I'm suggesting you to change the difficulty name to either 'Basic' or 'Beginner', there is no need to add "Taiko" done
The mapping is perfect. <3

Kantan

Futsuu
  • 01:51:484 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - I have troubles understanding this pattern, the note (10) seems to be an 'extra' which doesn't follow the song perfectly. I would suggest you to do something like this the picture below. The emplacement of the note (10) will emphasize a dominant sound.
    Image
  • 01:54:912 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - Same thing as above, move (21) and delete (23). Do the same thing for the same pattern in this kiai. i don't remember why i make these patterns, but i made something different

Muzukashii
  • 00:08:198 (22) - By deleting the note here, you're making a great transition to the next measure. applied, a "minibreak" will be good
  • 01:40:984 (26,27,28) - I feel like these notes should be dons instead of kats. for a little of variety applied

Oni
  • 00:37:662 - You can add a kat here? It feels smooth and makes a great transition between the sounds. done, sounds good
  • 00:44:198 (200) - If you replace this kat by a don, the dominant sounds will be more emphasized with the kats. i'll think about this as for me sounds better with k
  • 00:47:627 (219) - I'm suggesting you to do the same thing as suggested above. ^
  • 00:51:055 (238) - Same here. ^
  • 00:54:484 (4) - Same here. ^
  • 01:52:234 (17) - For this one, I'd suggest you to add a kat since the dominant sounds will be emphasized by these two notes: 01:52:234 (17,20) -
  • 01:55:662 (38) - Same thing as mentioned above. Do the same thing for these notes also: 01:59:091 (59) - , 02:02:520 (1) - for these last suggestions i made something different, dkddk and kkddk, different pattern and more variety

Cursed Oni
  • 00:57:055 (16) - I feel like a kat will be better than a don. Apply this to your whole section. due to the actual beat, at least for me sounds better with d, no change for now
  • 01:33:591 - If you take a look to your previous notes, you are using a lot of 3-notes, I believe you can 'break' this pattern by adding a kat in here. not a bad suggestion, i like it, but i'll keep as triplets as i want to mantain consistency with the other triplets.
  • 02:18:698 (100,101) - I understand your choice of adding two notes in here, because there's a sound you wanted to emphasize, however,
    all the other difficulties are ending at 02:18:484 - . I'm suggesting you to delete these two notes to follow your consistency with your other difficulties. i'll think about it as with doublet there it fits really good in the diff imo


Nice job here! Let's see what we can do next ;)


Really good suggestions, thanks a lot for the mod Gabe!
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hey Hanja! like my promise before? lel

>Cursed Oni
* 00:15:805 - wanna try to emphasize this sounds? 00:19:127 (138,139) - because these sounds like low to high
* 00:17:412 (123,124) - and these low to low, so 00:17:412 - don it if you want
* and apply to other similar sounds if you agree
* 00:55:395 - should kat it? I feel if the alteration of flow are 00:55:395 (5,6) - , not 00:55:341 (4,5) -
* 01:09:055 - I think it could to fill finish bcus the impact is high
* 01:35:520 - don it to emphasize the sounds than drum? to follow 01:35:412 - it too
* 01:50:627 - change this finisher to don colors? should have contrast with 01:51:055 - high impact drum, you can also apply this to other diffs if you want. ( but I saw this notes before is consistent for vocal right? okey you can keep this )
* 02:03:966 - like before

>Oni
* 01:07:770 - add kat, emphasize for burst sounds
* 01:36:270 - change it don, like inner.. kkkkd feels not emphasize 00:27:698 - this beat
* 01:41:091 - don it? bcus 01:40:448 - this flow are high and I think kdd will be good as mirror variation
* and apply to other
* 01:47:734 - don? I think its needed to emphasize the alteration of flow
* 01:50:627 - like Inner
* 02:18:698 - add don for that faded sounds

>Muzukashii
* 00:14:841 - don? I hear that the different with the previous similar spot sounds and a bit empty in here
* 00:32:627 - kat it to give emphasize to alteration sounds
* 01:35:520 - move to 01:35:305 - here
* 00:40:770 - 01:49:341 - don as burst sounds?
* 02:18:698 -

>Futsuu
* 00:33:055 - kat to follow 00:33:484 - next
* 00:40:770 - - 01:49:341 -
* 01:32:841 - move to 01:33:270 - here?
* 01:48:055 - don it, I dont think its need to emphasized as kat.

>Kantan
* 00:10:341 - kat and 00:17:198 - don it.. so the first part is for kkd then second loop part is dkd
* 00:27:912 - kat to keep consistent with 00:27:484 - similar vocal
* 00:40:770 - - 01:49:341 -
* 01:36:484 - same reason on 2nd point of my suggestion
* 01:40:341 (9,10) - 01:47:198 (19,20) - ctrl g these? I know you follow drum but for low diffs at least make it easier

>Basic
* for begginer, fine

Spread of this set looks good and Cursed diff is really... with that 1/8 :^)
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