1. 100pa-'s Hard (4.37 stars, 426 notes)
2. Insane (4.77 stars, 723 notes)
3. Normal (3.22 stars, 289 notes)

NatsumeRin wrote:

据说回这贴可以抢到2kd位，真是太好了。你写这么多2kd也理所当然>_>

[General]
preview.

[Insane]
实话讲我觉得这个clap用在这略猎奇。啊哈哈...
00:52:497 (7,8) - 我会考虑把这两个后挪1/2，7的位置补个circle。k
01:07:395 (1) - 消音k
01:19:538 - 加拍？k
01:25:355 (1) - 感觉和前面对称的节奏比较好，3/4+1/4
02:25:763 (2) - 和前面继承下来的话，这里和1一起构成5连可能更好（换slider+circle？）
02:27:395 (1) - 消音k
02:52:702 - 这里空一下感觉并不好。k
04:00:253 (1) - 这里开始，和前面的感觉不一样，突然空掉了不少。当初为了控分>_>

[100pa-'s Hard]等哦喷忙完了再改吧..
00:26:593 (3,4) - 我的感觉是o x x o x
01:05:573 (2,3,1) - 平滑移动会好一些的感觉
01:30:267 (1) - 这个变化感觉突兀，可能是N带入好点么（后两个音不变）
01:32:511 (1) - ^
02:14:246 (1) - 我觉得这可能是有意的但这还是别扭。
02:35:981 (1) - 逼逼逼来的太快去的太快，没适应（而且连续不断这点）。
03:50:675 (1) - 去了这个whistle前后的加上。主要是前面的考虑和再前面的03:48:226 (3) 对上

[Normal]
小心被人挑最低难不够简单之类的自觉比QQ姐的简单._.
00:51:885 (2) - 加个折返
01:00:865 (1) - 这里升点音量？k
01:07:395 (1) - 消音k
01:13:926 (1) - 换节奏（4*1/1？）或至少开头不要finishfinish撤了
01:48:212 (1) - 0.5x段的间距加一点（两个note正好不叠到），美观上会好点的感觉。改到1.0
02:53:518 (4) - new combo，捎带前面的总结是我已经对finish麻木了，请省一省汗
03:04:742 (1) - 不如不要狂汗
03:30:661 (5,1) - spacing粗心...

Sunny Holic wrote:

just advice. not mean wrong.
[Insane]
02:10:355 - add a note?
03:08:212 (1) - 呃……这个完全被覆盖了…… 改成波浪形好点吧？打起来没问题 也没完全覆盖
03:32:599 (6) - 没有这个好一点吧？
03:35:355 - 这里加note或删03:36:987 (9) - k

[100pa-'s Hard]
00:47:613 (1) - 这里为啥有Jump而且为啥这么远……
有些地方Jump有点……
不一一提了

[Normal]
找不到地方advice

• Offset: 15,163 15,165 (Open's is fine for me )
  Remove countdown...?
  Same stacking leniency?

• 00:51:885 (2) - clap end?
  01:07:395 (1) - end at 01:08:620 ?
  03:27:804... (T) - C1...?

• 00:28:226 (T) - why kiai ._.?
  00:47:409 (5,1) -
  Sigh...hazardous diff...

• 00:46:171 (7) - New combo?
  00:50:253 (1) - Remove new combo? (00:52:702 (7,8,1,2) - I think these sliders are similar to the previous, so...new combo/remove new combo?)
  00:54:334 (3) - Finish at beginning?
  00:59:640 (1) - New combo...? Too hard to read...
  01:07:293 (T) - add a note here?
  01:27:599 (10) - add a reverse?
  02:08:212 (2,3,4,5,6) - 看上去很哦喷 ^ ^
  03:04:538 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this spacing much
  03:53:926 (T) 04:06:783 (T) 搞反了...?

Selee wrote:

[General]

粗心 全fixed>.>

• Offset: 15,163 15,165 (Open's is fine for me )
  Remove countdown...?
  Same stacking leniency?

[Normal]

• 00:51:885 (2) - clap end?k
  01:07:395 (1) - end at 01:08:620 ? k
  03:27:804... (T) - C1...?what?

[100pa-'s Hard]

• 00:28:226 (T) - why kiai ._.?他喜欢玩喷泉
  00:47:409 (5,1) - 私自做主张改了... 和哦喷讨论了下于是改成现在这样
  Sigh...hazardous diff...Sigh...Maybe i will add a 4 star's diff or change normal to 4 star then add a easy...

[Insane]

...这样的Setting没问题么...到17M也没太大问题吧...毕竟4m20s呢...人家才不会管你多长呢._.17M问题大了...

• 00:46:171 (7) - New combo?不觉得红色的话比较像爆竹吗._.
  00:50:253 (1) - Remove new combo? (00:52:702 (7,8,1,2) - I think these sliders are similar to the previous, so...new combo/remove new combo?)k
  00:54:334 (3) - Finish at beginning?k
  00:59:640 (1) - New combo...? Too hard to read...k
  01:07:293 (T) - add a note here?空拍
  01:27:599 (10) - add a reverse?^
  02:08:212 (2,3,4,5,6) - 看上去很哦喷 ^ ^ 我没觉得...
  03:04:538 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this spacing much :(
  03:53:926 (T) 04:06:783 (T) 搞反了...?没反是为了呈现一种退潮的感觉

star! ._.