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Diceros Bicornis - Innocent Tempest [OsuMania]

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Ichigaki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 01, 2016 at 5:09:19 AM

Artist: Diceros Bicornis
Title: Innocent Tempest
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: xi BlackY Zan_- Rizqy SDVX BEMANI KONAMI
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5048kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (2.83 stars, 1013 notes)
  2. INFINITE - 4Key (4.52 stars, 1922 notes)
  3. NOVICE - 4Key (1.81 stars, 592 notes)
  4. Zan's EXHAUST - 4Key (3.81 stars, 1484 notes)
Download: Diceros Bicornis - Innocent Tempest
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Feerum
Some Testplay, Quick IRC etc :D

IRC
18:34 Ichigaki: ohi feerum
18:34 Feerum: Hello Ichi :)
18:35 *Ichigaki is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/805976 Diceros Bicornis - Innocent Tempest]
18:35 Ichigaki: can you test this? :3
18:36 Feerum: my inet is back so yes :D
18:36 Feerum: which diff
18:36 Ichigaki: inf :3
18:37 Feerum: Alright, should i be gone my pc just freeze again, i will play it then again. Just sayn
18:37 Feerum: Awwww 4,7* with cold hands.. uhhh..
18:37 Feerum: xD
18:39 Feerum: Rip acc
18:39 Ichigaki: ;cc
18:39 Feerum: Remember: Never play with cold hands
18:40 Feerum: But its a fun Map
18:40 Ichigaki: lol
18:40 Ichigaki: found something bad?
18:41 Feerum: Hmmmm
18:41 Feerum: 00:02:360 - and 00:02:610 - why no note? :o
18:42 Ichigaki: idk
18:42 Ichigaki: lol
18:42 Feerum: xD
18:42 Feerum: 00:05:025 - here i can understand. No sound
18:42 Feerum: but these two there you maybe should add :D
18:44 Feerum: Hmm
18:45 Ichigaki: added both
18:45 Ichigaki: hehe
18:45 Ichigaki: hmm?
18:45 Feerum: 00:29:105 (29105|3,29105|0) - is here a Chord needed? 00:28:939 (28939|0,28939|3,29022|2,29022|1) - These have the Same sound like 00:28:605 (28605|0,28605|3) - but the 3rd Chord i cant really hear
18:46 Feerum: the 1st and 2nd chord have loud piano. But the 3rd only the Drum like 00:28:689 (28689|1,28772|2,28855|1) -
18:47 Ichigaki: hmm
18:47 Ichigaki: http://puu.sh/l0VdJ/579d5db2af.png
18:47 Feerum: Yeah thats nice
18:51 Ichigaki: any else?
18:51 Feerum: Where you find all these songs xD
18:51 Feerum: i look but it looks like its ok, but didn't finish yet :D
18:53 Feerum: 01:34:269 (94269|2,94325|3,94381|2) - do you really hear here 1/6 Sounds?
18:54 Ichigaki: aw
18:54 Ichigaki: it should be 1/8
18:54 Feerum: :D
18:54 Ichigaki: but well, it's kinda better to make it into 1/4
18:54 Ichigaki: lol
18:54 Feerum: xD
18:56 Feerum: 01:55:825 (115825|0,115825|3,115853|1,115936|2,116019|1,116047|0,116047|3) - what
18:57 Ichigaki: the cymbal is in 1/3
18:57 Ichigaki: while every 1/4 there is have sound
18:57 Ichigaki: that's why
18:57 Feerum: Ahhhhhhh
18:57 Feerum: ohh
18:57 Feerum: ehhh
18:57 Feerum: I hear
18:57 Feerum: xD
18:57 Ichigaki: cool isn't
18:57 Ichigaki: xD
18:58 Feerum: Well then the remaining map looks fine :D
18:58 Ichigaki: :D
18:58 Ichigaki: thanks for the check anyway :p
18:58 Feerum: No problem c:
18:58 Ichigaki: i may ask you for checking this whole mapset later
18:58 Ichigaki: :pp
18:59 Feerum: Sure Sure, now i'm back and i want to mod more anyways so give give give
18:59 Feerum: Still want to be BN
18:59 Feerum: xD
18:59 Ichigaki: xDD
18:59 Ichigaki: wait
18:59 Ichigaki: ah nevermind
18:59 Ichigaki: good luck for it :p

Call me back when the Mapset is finished for a Full Mod c:
Zan-
Akasha-
can i GD hue
Zan-
too late
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

can i GD hue
I'm sorry KK :((
-BANGKE-
nm req from here t/376481/start=0
it's just a little suggestion, feel free to reject, and dont give kds if this mod not helping

jowoan mantap iki :>

MOD
1|2|3|4

general : kiai-chan, where r ya ;w;

novice
00:00:610 (610|0) - pindah nak 3 enak iki
00:05:192 (5192|0) - ke 2 mas
00:50:271 (50271|2) - ganti LN?
00:55:104 - tambahi 1 mas, kick sound
00:59:104 (59104|3,59104|0) - pindah ke 2|3, soale iki bedo pitch karo iki mas 00:58:854 (58854|3,58854|0) -
01:09:937 - tambah 1?

advanced
01:09:270 - tambah 1 mas?
01:34:519 - missing kick mas

ozan exhaust
00:37:605 (37605|3,37605|0,37772|0,37772|2,37939|1,37939|0) - ummm, maybe ctrl + j?
01:09:270 - add 1 maybe?
01:42:853 - add 1? for cymbal off course
01:44:186 - same reason ^

goodluck mas ichikiwir :>
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
Sorry for double posts [-.- ]
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

-BANGKE- wrote:

nm req from here t/376481/start=0
it's just a little suggestion, feel free to reject, and dont give kds if this mod not helping

jowoan mantap iki :>

MOD
1|2|3|4

general : kiai-chan, where r ya ;w; We don't really need it, but okay, will add it soon.

novice
00:00:610 (610|0) - pindah nak 3 enak iki
00:05:192 (5192|0) - ke 2 mas
00:50:271 (50271|2) - ganti LN?
00:55:104 - tambahi 1 mas, kick sound ga ah, ketokane kurang pas hehe
00:59:104 (59104|3,59104|0) - pindah ke 2|3, soale iki bedo pitch karo iki mas 00:58:854 (58854|3,58854|0) -
01:09:937 - tambah 1?

liyane iku mau aku gawe

advanced
01:09:270 - tambah 1 mas? Suara 'ting' iku ta? ga ga pas nek menurutku
01:34:519 - missing kick mas Ga usah lah iku

goodluck mas ichikiwir :>
Thanks Leoudel :p
Kreator014
infinite irc mod
2015-11-06 20:46 Kreator014: a
2015-11-06 20:46 Ichigaki: ay
2015-11-06 20:46 Kreator014: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/805976 Diceros Bicornis - Innocent Tempest [INFINITE]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2015-11-06 20:48 Kreator014: wtf this map is good
2015-11-06 20:49 Ichigaki: o3o
2015-11-06 20:49 Ichigaki: i felt it goes smoothly
2015-11-06 20:49 Ichigaki: xd
2015-11-06 20:50 Kreator014: yes
2015-11-06 20:50 Ichigaki: maybe just some part
2015-11-06 20:50 Ichigaki: i mean that i can't play
2015-11-06 20:50 Kreator014: 00:50:271 (50271|3,50298|2,50326|1,50354|0,50382|3,50409|2,50437|1,50465|0,50493|3,50521|2,50548|1,50576|0) - pls change to 1/8
2015-11-06 20:50 Ichigaki: [ ._.]
2015-11-06 20:50 Ichigaki: wait, i'm still spec another guy
2015-11-06 20:50 Kreator014: 00:53:937 (53937|2,53993|1,54048|0,54104|1) - pls change to 3412
2015-11-06 20:51 Kreator014: 01:05:604 (65604|2,65604|1,65715|1,65715|0,65826|1,65826|2) - maybe change to 24 13 12
2015-11-06 20:52 Kreator014: 01:14:937 (74937|0,74965|1,74993|2,75020|3,75048|0,75076|1,75104|2,75132|3,75159|0,75187|1,75215|2,75243|3) - 1/8 pls
2015-11-06 20:52 Ichigaki: that 1/12 is 1/8z/
2015-11-06 20:52 Ichigaki: ?
2015-11-06 20:52 Kreator014: no i mean pls make it 1/8
2015-11-06 20:53 Kreator014: 01:32:353 (92353|1,92353|3,92436|2,92436|0) - maybe change to 34 12, left hand trill is a bit long
2015-11-06 20:53 Ichigaki: i still think it's 1/12 hue
2015-11-06 20:53 Kreator014: i dont care if its 1/12 but its very annoying to play
2015-11-06 20:53 Ichigaki: 01:05:604 (65604|1,65604|2,65715|0,65715|1,65826|2,65826|1) - nope
2015-11-06 20:54 Ichigaki: okay, that 1/12 changed to 1/8
2015-11-06 20:54 Ichigaki: easier
2015-11-06 20:54 Kreator014: aaa why not
2015-11-06 20:54 Kreator014: it feels better to play
2015-11-06 20:54 Ichigaki: :<
2015-11-06 20:54 Kreator014: pls
2015-11-06 20:54 Kreator014: 12 23 34 23 12 23 is boring
2015-11-06 20:54 Kreator014: and feels annoying
2015-11-06 20:55 Kreator014: the more fun a map is the better it is ok
2015-11-06 20:55 Ichigaki: lmao
2015-11-06 20:55 Ichigaki: stars really decreased
2015-11-06 20:55 Ichigaki: 4,5
2015-11-06 20:56 Ichigaki: gg
2015-11-06 20:56 Kreator014: gg
2015-11-06 20:56 Kreator014: dont worry star rating is bad anyway
2015-11-06 20:56 Kreator014: i think its almost useless
2015-11-06 20:56 Ichigaki: yeah ik
2015-11-06 20:56 Ichigaki: well
2015-11-06 20:56 Ichigaki: okay
2015-11-06 20:56 Ichigaki: changed as you wish


[Zan's EXHAUST]
00:01:693 (1693|1,1860|1,2027|1,2193|1,2360|1) - this anchor is too long, it feels bad to play
00:02:610 (2610|1,2776|1,2943|1,3110|1) - this too
00:05:775 (5775|2,5942|2,6109|2,6275|2) - and this
01:03:770 (63770|0) - move to 3?

01:05:270 (65270|3,65270|2,65382|1,65382|2,65493|1,65493|0,65604|3,65604|2,65715|1,65715|2,65826|1,65826|0) - change to a friendlier pattern like 24 13 12 34 13 12
01:13:937 - i think this part might be a bit hard, consider toning it down a bit

really nice map
Zan-

-BANGKE- wrote:

ozan exhaust
00:37:605 (37605|3,37605|0,37772|0,37772|2,37939|1,37939|0) - ummm, maybe ctrl + j? /// ok
01:09:270 - add 1 maybe? /// ok
01:42:853 - add 1? for cymbal off course /// considering infinite only double and they are not 'kick + cymbal' so i put them as double
01:44:186 - same reason ^ /// ^

Kreator014 wrote:

[Zan's EXHAUST]
00:01:693 (1693|1,1860|1,2027|1,2193|1,2360|1) - this anchor is too long, it feels bad to play ///
00:02:610 (2610|1,2776|1,2943|1,3110|1) - this too ///
00:05:775 (5775|2,5942|2,6109|2,6275|2) - and this /// good thought, rearranged!
01:03:770 (63770|0) - move to 3? /// ok
01:05:270 (65270|3,65270|2,65382|1,65382|2,65493|1,65493|0,65604|3,65604|2,65715|1,65715|2,65826|1,65826|0) - change to a friendlier pattern like 24 13 12 34 13 12 /// i really like you
01:13:937 - i think this part might be a bit hard, consider toning it down a bit /// well i think i'll keep this
update badak
Aruel


Hi Ichi! Mod from your request!!

|1|2|3|4|

[General]

▶BG: No problem
▶MP3: No problem
▶Spread: No problem
▶AI mod: No problem
▶Audio and Hitsound: Seems didn't set hitsounds yet
▶Timing: aaa... I don't know we need all this timing points XD
▶Etc: You can do 7.5 OD in ADVANCED difficulty

Nothing to catch unrankable!! :>

[NOVICE]
00:04:193 (4193|1,4442|3) - I just want to recommend this Ctrl + H. Because seems column 3 has been empty for a long time and 00:01:193 (1193|1,1443|3) - It's one of part which part has same notes. Just for more balance.

00:17:273 - How about add a one note in column 3 like 00:17:496 (17496|1,17496|0,17718|3,17718|2) - These guys? Actually It isn't involved on star rating even if you add one the note on this timing. also It's not hard for playing. and it seems will be good flow for playing. and 01:15:270 - It's kinda far from there but I think these sounds are same. try it!

00:20:272 (20272|1) - I just want to move to 4 this note or 00:20:605 (20605|2) - This note. but 00:20:272 (20272|1,20605|2,20939|1) - This pattern it good already too. why I suggested it... hmm... Just column 4 seems too lonely in my opinion. also 00:19:272 (19272|0,19522|2,19772|0) - It used column 1 and column 3. so if next pattern is similar (Like use only two columns.) I just want to tell it ."Use the columns which columns didn't use" for balance :3/

00:21:772 - As I said on 00:17:273 - This. How about add a one note on column 1? Actually yeah it has the difference with sounds of 00:22:105 (22105|2,22105|3,22439|0,22439|1) - These notes but it's really hard to feel when I was playing. also I could feel the difference with 25% playback. It will makes more good flow also some...feel? well. You know XD

00:23:605 - How about add one on this timing? It just my personal suggestion because I could feel some new start of sound on this timing.

00:28:272 (28272|1) - Move to 4 for balance. Maybe you made 00:28:105 (28105|2,28272|1,28439|2,28605|1) - this note when you was making this charts and after 00:28:605 (28605|0) - Added this note for pitch or not seems pretty good pattern but I just want to make more good balance on easier diff.

01:12:187 (72187|1,72437|3) - Wrong snap. This guys should be on 01:12:159 - here and 01:12:382 - here. (1/3 snaps) Actually you snapped there already in other diffs. ADVANCED,EXHAUST,INFINITE diffs are using all 1/3 snap. It must fix I think.

[ADVANCED]
00:03:443 (3443|3,3443|0) - hmm... I don't know it harmonized with note patterns near by. You can try this or re-arrange this part what you want. well... It's just my personal opinion.

00:07:941 (7941|0,7941|3,7941|1,8275|2,8275|3) - well... I just want to tell something about here. just want to inform this. (Maybe you knew it already I guess) 00:08:275 - This timing point has more loud sound than 00:07:941 - here. so I want to suggest this. 00:07:941 (7941|0,7941|3,7941|1) - Remove a one note. I suggest to remove a note on column 2 for only use column 1,4 because that pattern is really fit with this sound in my opinion. and 00:08:275 - Add a one note on column 1. Actually I want to use all columns but It's ADVANCED diff and seems over mapped if we use the all columns. or... Just add a one note only 00:08:275 - This point for emphasis start. It's just my personal suggestion.

00:35:022 - 00:36:355 - hmm... Is it your intention? I just want to add the note the notes each others XD Have a sound. also it will be good for feel to playing.

01:01:604 - ~ 01:01:937 - I have a one suggestion about this part. How about make this 1/4 stream with a one note each others? That make more good harmony with your ADVANCED patterns and really not awkward to playing!! I just hope you will change it. I really highly recommend this

01:41:603 - How about add a one note on column 2 ? It has kinda powerful sound also won't be hard pattern I guess. for more high-quality pattern. :>

[Zan's EXHAUST]
00:32:439 (32439|0,32494|3,32550|2) - Wrong snap. These notes are should be on 00:32:480 - 00:32:522 - These timing points. Also INFINITE is using the 1/8 snap on this part

I have a one suggestion about this part. From 00:36:522 - Here until 00:37:272 - Here. I just want to suggest this. because... hmm 00:35:439 - This part has a similar pattern but I think. It's really really fit with song and really nice to play! but that's not fun if we have the same patterns. so I just want to make Ctrl +H a nice pattern

01:05:270 - I just want to tell this. I really like this part ><

01:22:186 - Seems you missed the note in this timing point. It has the sounds like 01:21:936 - 01:21:603 -

This difficulty has really good completeness I think. Nice job Zan :>

[INFINITE]
00:10:441 - This timing point also has the sounds which sound you're following with two notes. the main 1/4 stream sounds + Main Piano melody.

00:17:107 - ~ 00:17:273 - I just want to inform about this. This part has 1/6 sounds. Seems It doesn't your intention because you're surely using 1/6 notes in 1/6 sounds. Even if that has stream. Isn't it? :>

00:18:606 (18606|0,18689|1,18856|1,18939|0,19022|1,19106|0,19189|1) - This part is kinda focused on only Left hand. Can we re-arrange this part? also I felt this when I was test-playing it hmm... why I pointed out this. Because the Right hand doesn't use many but Left hand uses many. For more balance.

00:21:439 (21439|0,21439|2) - I don't know it really needs two notes. Seems only have the 1/4 stream sound I guess. And other two notes parts are have the two sounds on a one point.

00:53:937 (53937|2,53993|3) - I couldn't hear the any sounds on this notes. I only could hear the sounds 00:54:048 (54048|0,54104|1) - These notes. Just to remove that. If that has sound... Really hard to feel it. Even I can't feel that with 25% playback XD

01:55:769 (115769|2,115825|3,115825|0,115853|1,115936|2,116019|1,116047|0,116047|3,116103|2) - Holy shit... Look at that snap LOL

Good luck for rank Ichi and Zan!! I hope it will be help!! <3
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi Ichi! Mod from your request!!

|1|2|3|4|

[General]

▶BG: No problem
▶MP3: No problem
▶Spread: No problem
▶AI mod: No problem
▶Audio and Hitsound: Seems didn't set hitsounds yet Teehee~
▶Timing: aaa... I don't know we need all this timing points XD I'll ask someone to help me on it
▶Etc: You can do 7.5 OD in ADVANCED difficulty I think 8 is fine :o

Nothing to catch unrankable!! :>

[NOVICE]
00:04:193 (4193|1,4442|3) - I just want to recommend this Ctrl + H. Because seems column 3 has been empty for a long time and 00:01:193 (1193|1,1443|3) - It's one of part which part has same notes. Just for more balance. Hmm, that wasn't that bad

00:17:273 - How about add a one note in column 3 like 00:17:496 (17496|1,17496|0,17718|3,17718|2) - These guys? Actually It isn't involved on star rating even if you add one the note on this timing. also It's not hard for playing. and it seems will be good flow for playing. and 01:15:270 - It's kinda far from there but I think these sounds are same. try it! But, well, okay

00:20:272 (20272|1) - I just want to move to 4 this note or 00:20:605 (20605|2) - This note. but 00:20:272 (20272|1,20605|2,20939|1) - This pattern it good already too. why I suggested it... hmm... Just column 4 seems too lonely in my opinion. also 00:19:272 (19272|0,19522|2,19772|0) - It used column 1 and column 3. so if next pattern is similar (Like use only two columns.) I just want to tell it ."Use the columns which columns didn't use" for balance :3/ Nice idea though

00:21:772 - As I said on 00:17:273 - This. How about add a one note on column 1? Actually yeah it has the difference with sounds of 00:22:105 (22105|2,22105|3,22439|0,22439|1) - These notes but it's really hard to feel when I was playing. also I could feel the difference with 25% playback. It will makes more good flow also some...feel? well. You know XD Yeah, sure, same as before

00:23:605 - How about add one on this timing? It just my personal suggestion because I could feel some new start of sound on this timing. Nope, I intended to follow the crash only

00:28:272 (28272|1) - Move to 4 for balance. Maybe you made 00:28:105 (28105|2,28272|1,28439|2,28605|1) - this note when you was making this charts and after 00:28:605 (28605|0) - Added this note for pitch or not seems pretty good pattern but I just want to make more good balance on easier diff. Yeah, it's pretty good too, just like the previous one, but moved to right

01:12:187 (72187|1,72437|3) - Wrong snap. This guys should be on 01:12:159 - here and 01:12:382 - here. (1/3 snaps) Actually you snapped there already in other diffs. ADVANCED,EXHAUST,INFINITE diffs are using all 1/3 snap. It must fix I think. How come I missed this things, lol

[ADVANCED]
00:03:443 (3443|3,3443|0) - hmm... I don't know it harmonized with note patterns near by. You can try this or re-arrange this part what you want. well... It's just my personal opinion. My bad, It wasn't like that before. Forgot to change it back

00:07:941 (7941|0,7941|3,7941|1,8275|2,8275|3) - well... I just want to tell something about here. just want to inform this. (Maybe you knew it already I guess) 00:08:275 - This timing point has more loud sound than 00:07:941 - here. so I want to suggest this. 00:07:941 (7941|0,7941|3,7941|1) - Remove a one note. I suggest to remove a note on column 2 for only use column 1,4 because that pattern is really fit with this sound in my opinion. and 00:08:275 - Add a one note on column 1. Actually I want to use all columns but It's ADVANCED diff and seems over mapped if we use the all columns. or... Just add a one note only 00:08:275 - This point for emphasis start. It's just my personal suggestion. Yeah, sure, it's good though

00:35:022 - 00:36:355 - hmm... Is it your intention? I just want to add the note the notes each others XD Have a sound. also it will be good for feel to playing. Yeah, it's my intention.

01:01:604 - ~ 01:01:937 - I have a one suggestion about this part. How about make this 1/4 stream with a one note each others? That make more good harmony with your ADVANCED patterns and really not awkward to playing!! I just hope you will change it. I really highly recommend this Sure. Seems I have to rearrange some parts there

01:41:603 - How about add a one note on column 2 ? It has kinda powerful sound also won't be hard pattern I guess. for more high-quality pattern. :> I'd rather to add the missed stream in 01:41:686 - than add that one note

[INFINITE]
00:10:441 - This timing point also has the sounds which sound you're following with two notes. the main 1/4 stream sounds + Main Piano melody. I missed that, added

00:17:107 - ~ 00:17:273 - I just want to inform about this. This part has 1/6 sounds. Seems It doesn't your intention because you're surely using 1/6 notes in 1/6 sounds. Even if that has stream. Isn't it? :> Yeah, right :>

00:18:606 (18606|0,18689|1,18856|1,18939|0,19022|1,19106|0,19189|1) - This part is kinda focused on only Left hand. Can we re-arrange this part? also I felt this when I was test-playing it hmm... why I pointed out this. Because the Right hand doesn't use many but Left hand uses many. For more balance. Re-arrange those parts

00:21:439 (21439|0,21439|2) - I don't know it really needs two notes. Seems only have the 1/4 stream sound I guess. And other two notes parts are have the two sounds on a one point. It's work like highlight sound. It's not that bad though

00:53:937 (53937|2,53993|3) - I couldn't hear the any sounds on this notes. I only could hear the sounds 00:54:048 (54048|0,54104|1) - These notes. Just to remove that. If that has sound... Really hard to feel it. Even I can't feel that with 25% playback XD I only used speakers and I'm sure there's 1/6 sound there.

01:55:769 (115769|2,115825|3,115825|0,115853|1,115936|2,116019|1,116047|0,116047|3,116103|2) - Holy shit... Look at that snap LOL The loudest sound was in 1/3 and every 1/4 there have sounds too, that's why I used that pattern

Good luck for rank Ichi and Zan!! I hope it will be help!! <3

Thanks Chicken~
Critical_Star
Hi Ichi :3 mod as requested~
just a suggestion below~
column 1 2 3 4

NOVICE
00:12:774 - missing piano note? this have the piano sound like 00:12:608 (12608|3) -
00:23:439 (23439|1) - change LN end 00:23:939 - ? to empyhasize those 1/4 sound?
00:29:605 (29605|0,29605|3) - how about move to 2 and 3 column? i think they should be different column from 00:29:272 (29272|0,29272|3) - since they are different sound
if applied^ 00:29:939 (29939|1) - maybe move to 1?
00:34:439 (34439|2) - move to 2? if u follow pitch this pitch is different from 00:34:105 (34105|2) -

ADVANCED
00:40:605 - 00:41:605 - 00:42:938 - 00:44:272 - 00:45:605 - 00:46:604 - 00:47:937 - i think is fine to have double here too for advanced diff, it won't make really hard for it + it is nice to make it consistent double for all white line here since they all have the same sound too :^
01:03:770 - 01:04:270 - missing double note? here have the sound u are catching xD, or maybe is your intention?
01:14:854 - add for drum kick?
01:19:770 (79770|2) - move to 2?
01:33:936 (93936|1) - delete? somehow it make a better flow i think or 01:34:269 - add at 4? sound like 01:33:936 (93936|1) -
01:39:269 - somehow there is still sound here :s add?

Zan's EXHAUST
01:41:103 (101103|2,101103|0,101436|0,101436|2) - i think these both double should be different column? to differentiate the sound?
seems nice already xD

INFINITE
00:18:772 (18772|0) - here doesnt have piano sound :v remove? or maybe is your intention to follow small kick sound?
00:53:937 (53937|1,53993|3,54048|0,54104|2) - not sure about this but somehow the sound goes like http://puu.sh/le3ch/404c9a595b.png lol is so hard D:
01:41:519 (101519|3,101519|1) - i think here don't need to double


nice song la xD..Hope these could help~ good luck chi~
Zan-

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

[Zan's EXHAUST]
00:32:439 (32439|0,32494|3,32550|2) - Wrong snap. These notes are should be on 00:32:480 - 00:32:522 - These timing points. Also INFINITE is using the 1/8 snap on this part /// roger, fixed refer to infinite

I have a one suggestion about this part. From 00:36:522 - Here until 00:37:272 - Here. I just want to suggest this. because... hmm 00:35:439 - This part has a similar pattern but I think. It's really really fit with song and really nice to play! but that's not fun if we have the same patterns. so I just want to make Ctrl +H a nice pattern /// good

01:05:270 - I just want to tell this. I really like this part ><

01:22:186 - Seems you missed the note in this timing point. It has the sounds like 01:21:936 - 01:21:603 -/// oops

Critical_Star wrote:

Zan's EXHAUST
01:41:103 (101103|2,101103|0,101436|0,101436|2) - i think these both double should be different column? to differentiate the sound?
seems nice already xD/// good, rearranged
#BadakGanteng
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi Ichi :3 mod as requested~
just a suggestion below~
column 1 2 3 4

NOVICE
00:12:774 - missing piano note? this have the piano sound like 00:12:608 (12608|3) - Added there
00:23:439 (23439|1) - change LN end 00:23:939 - ? to empyhasize those 1/4 sound? Sure, I might forget about this
00:29:605 (29605|0,29605|3) - how about move to 2 and 3 column? i think they should be different column from 00:29:272 (29272|0,29272|3) - since they are different sound I'd like to keep this to 1 4 and change the previous one into 2 3
if applied^ 00:29:939 (29939|1) - maybe move to 1? ^
00:34:439 (34439|2) - move to 2? if u follow pitch this pitch is different from 00:34:105 (34105|2) - Yeah, sure

ADVANCED
00:40:605 - 00:41:605 - 00:42:938 - 00:44:272 - 00:45:605 - 00:46:604 - 00:47:937 - i think is fine to have double here too for advanced diff, it won't make really hard for it + it is nice to make it consistent double for all white line here since they all have the same sound too :^ Ah my bad, sure
01:03:770 - 01:04:270 - missing double note? here have the sound u are catching xD, or maybe is your intention? Yeah, I followed the main sound only
01:14:854 - add for drum kick? Yeah, sure
01:19:770 (79770|2) - move to 2? I didn't realize it, moved
01:33:936 (93936|1) - delete? somehow it make a better flow i think or 01:34:269 - add at 4? sound like 01:33:936 (93936|1) - Okay, deleted
01:39:269 - somehow there is still sound here :s add? Hmm, yeah, added

INFINITE
00:18:772 (18772|0) - here doesnt have piano sound :v remove? or maybe is your intention to follow small kick sound? Yeah, you got the point
00:53:937 (53937|1,53993|3,54048|0,54104|2) - not sure about this but somehow the sound goes like http://puu.sh/le3ch/404c9a595b.png lol is so hard D: I talked with Starry about this, hopefully it's fixed
01:41:519 (101519|3,101519|1) - i think here don't need to double I guess so, rearrange some parts there


nice song la xD..Hope these could help~ good luck chi~
Thanks CS~

For Zan - :
  1. 01:41:686 - You may add a note here, you missed the piano
Zan-
01:41:686 - added + rearranged

#GoBadak

preview time di sini aja ngapa, lebih srek 01:25:603 -

DeletedUser_259972
Hi, Ichigaki! Requested from my queue! :)

SDVX SONG FTW :D

Column: 1 2 3 4

INFINITE
00:16:940 (16940|0,17024|1) - How about making these double?

00:18:689 (18689|1,18772|0,18856|1) - Move some to 3, 4 since there is only left hand

00:25:939 (25939|1,25939|0,25939|2,25939|3) - I think sound isn't that big for quadruple notes...

00:26:855 (26855|2) - Make this double

00:48:187 (48187|1,48271|2,48271|3) - Ctrl+H and move to right by 1 column maybe?

00:49:937 (49937|3,49937|2) - Why double?

00:58:104 (58104|0,58187|2,58270|0,58354|2,58437|0,58520|2,58604|0,58687|3,58687|1,58687|2,58854|1,58854|0,58854|2) - Ctrl+H maybe?

01:20:603 (80603|3) - Make it double (kick drum)
01:22:186 (82186|1) - ^
01:29:186 (89186|2) - ^
01:41:603 (101603|1) - ^

01:42:853 (102853|2,102853|1) - Make it triple (crash)
01:44:186 (104186|1,104186|2) - ^

01:46:936 (106936|0,106936|3,107019|2,107019|1,107103|3,107103|0,107186|1) - Consider changing this part to 1/8.

01:47:603 - ~ 01:51:103 - Make double every main melody plays and/or kick drum

Zan's EXHAUST
00:09:108 - Add 1,4
00:11:441 - Add 2, 3

00:18:772 (18772|2) - What's this following?

00:24:189 (24189|0,24189|3,24189|2) - Ctrl+H
00:25:189 (25189|1,25189|3,25189|0) - ^
00:28:272 (28272|0,28272|3,28272|1) - ^

00:28:522 - Add
00:32:272 - Add 4

00:50:937 (50937|1,50937|3,50937|0) - Ctrl+H

01:05:715 (65715|0) - Move to 2 (avoid two jack in 1)

01:35:936 (95936|2,95936|0,95936|3) - Ctrl+H

That's all!
Have a kudosu star :3
Sky_Demon

NOVICE

00:03:526 - add note Clear voice should not miss it
00:05:109 - ^
00:05:442 - ^
00:19:522 (19522|2,19772|0) - ctrl +gBecause it is the same sound, so the same column 00:19:272 - 00:19:522 -
00:20:605 (20605|2) - move to 00:20:439 - I think we should follow the sound
00:20:772 - 00:21:105 - ^
00:23:189 (23189|3) - move to 00:23:105 - Simple diffe, just choose clear sound
00:23:272 - add note ^
00:28:105 (28105|2,28272|3,28439|2) - why not jack? I think this adds to the fun nature can
00:32:272 (32272|2,32439|1) - remove,and add LN 00:32:272 - ~00:32:605 -
00:41:772 - add note The same sound →00:41:605 (41605|1) -
00:46:771 - ^
01:07:104 (67104|3) - move to 2
01:07:770 (67770|1,67770|3,68604|0,68604|1) - You have to separate these two sounds ,Because they are not the same01:13:937 (73937|0,73937|1) - why not LN? 01:13:937 - ~01:14:604 -
01:41:769 (101769|1,102103|3) - ^01:41:769 - ~01:42:269 -
ADVANCED

00:16:107 - 00:16:190 - add note
00:21:105 (21105|0,21105|2,21272|1,21272|0,21272|3) - ADV....lol
00:26:855 - add note
01:15:270 (75270|2) - move to 2
01:37:853 (97853|0) - i think not it so remove
01:47:269 (107269|1,107269|0,107436|2) - why not LN? 01:47:269 - ~01:47:603 -
nice
Zan's EXHAUST

00:06:942 - add note?
00:16:273 - ~00:16:774 - Why not use the same sound →00:15:524 (15524|3,15524|0,15607|2,15607|1,15774|0,15774|3,15857|2,15857|1) -
00:39:605 - add note And before the sound of different
01:24:714 (84714|2,84714|0,84714|3) - add note? ^
01:56:603 (116603|0,116936|2) - end 01:57:603 -

Mod end

Good luck :) :)
Zan-

jakads wrote:

Zan's EXHAUST
00:09:108 - Add 1,4
00:11:441 - Add 2, 3

00:18:772 (18772|2) - What's this following? /// casual 1/2 rhythm

00:24:189 (24189|0,24189|3,24189|2) - Ctrl+H
00:25:189 (25189|1,25189|3,25189|0) - ^
00:28:272 (28272|0,28272|3,28272|1) - ^ /// intended same column

00:28:522 - Add
00:32:272 - Add 4 /// good

00:50:937 (50937|1,50937|3,50937|0) - Ctrl+H /// rearranged instead

01:05:715 (65715|0) - Move to 2 (avoid two jack in 1) /// nice one

01:35:936 (95936|2,95936|0,95936|3) - Ctrl+H /// intended

Sky_Demon wrote:

SPOILER
Zan's EXHAUST

00:06:942 - add note? /// nope, too dense for triple there
00:16:273 - ~00:16:774 - Why not use the same sound →00:15:524 (15524|3,15524|0,15607|2,15607|1,15774|0,15774|3,15857|2,15857|1) - /// because in 00:16:774 - i follow kicks, so from 00:16:107 - i start following kicks, so not a sudden thing that i follow kicks in 00:16:774 -
00:39:605 - add note And before the sound of different/// but the piano is same
01:24:714 (84714|2,84714|0,84714|3) - add note? ^ /// i don't really like 4-noted
01:56:603 (116603|0,116936|2) - end 01:57:603 -///ok la
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