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Spawn of Possession - Apparition [OsuMania]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 14 juillet 2016 at 23:45:52

Artist: Spawn of Possession
Title: Apparition
Tags: marathon progressive incurso technical death metal stream
BPM: 80
Filesize: 13126kb
Play Time: 08:19
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  1. Duty to God - 4Key (5,35 stars, 7165 notes)
Download: Spawn of Possession - Apparition
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The apparition, she came and gave them hope
The apparition, why would she dupe, poor the people thought


For snover, with love

Crazy timing points from the original standard map by Mazzerin.

_underjoy
1|2|3|4
mod
Change HP to 8,5 at least, OD to 9

01:18:569 - I don't think this is a good idea, a dense jumpstream would be better. (also I think rhythm is better on white-red than blue-blue)
01:21:069 - and possible chords on white lines in the whole segment. 01:28:819 - there... and generally in those trills
01:28:694 (88694|1,88756|0,88819|1) - this is rough, 01:28:631 (88631|2,88694|1,88756|0) - move those to 3,1,3 respectively?

01:34:069 - 01:34:319 - those should be the same IMO

01:44:319 - you missed notes here
01:50:319 (110319|2,110444|2,110569|2,110694|2,110819|2,110944|2,111069|2) - ouch, break the anchor please (more than 3-note anchors are bad)
01:52:819 (112819|1,112944|1,113069|1,113194|1) -
01:53:944 (113944|1,114069|1,114194|1,114319|1,114444|1,114569|1,114694|1,114819|1,114944|1) - have mercy pls
01:58:819 (118819|2,118944|2,119069|2,119194|2) - 01:59:694 (119694|1,119819|1,119944|1,120069|1,120194|1) - 02:01:069 (121069|1,121194|1,121319|1,121444|1,121569|1) -
02:02:944 (122944|2,123006|1,123069|2) - change into 234 probably
02:06:569 - idk those trills are cool but I still see a jumpstream here
02:22:569 - y u no map streamz :<
03:17:819 - add a note?
03:23:440 (203440|2) - why didn't you use 3-chords before but you use them from now on?
03:49:946 (229946|2) - move to 2?
04:25:446 (265446|1,265526|2,265606|1,265686|0) - move to right and 04:25:766 (265766|1) - to 1
04:26:726 (266726|1,266726|3) - this should be [14] for following the next chord
04:35:366 (275366|0,275426|1,275486|2,275546|3) - i see this rather as a 2323 trill 04:36:326 (276326|3,276386|2,276446|1,276506|0) - but idk
04:54:566 (294566|1,294566|3,294626|2,294626|0,294686|3,294686|1) - ctrl+h, imo better
05:01:046 (301046|0,301166|1,301286|3,301406|2) - 2-chords?
05:04:406 - pattern here is imo too easy
05:04:526 (304526|1) - ghost note 05:04:826 (304826|3,304886|2) -
05:07:766 (307766|2) - to 1
05:26:126 - add 3?
05:26:366 - and 2? shouldn't be too rough
05:26:966 (326966|1,326966|0,326966|3) - too strong
05:31:526 - add 2
05:51:206 - this whole stream has irregular structure, you sometimes accent this with 2-chord, sometimes not. Like here for example.
05:57:566 (357566|3,357626|0,357686|3,357686|1,357746|0,357746|2,357806|3,357806|1,357866|2,357926|1) - screw you, this is gay
06:11:681 (371681|2) - move to 4 (too long jack here)
06:14:792 (374792|2) - ^
06:17:459 (377459|3) - to 3
06:20:681 (380681|0) - to 2
06:25:379 (385379|1,385451|0,385522|1,385594|2) - ctrl+h then first note to 2
06:26:094 - y u undermap
06:34:129 (394129|0) - to 4
07:08:584 (428584|2,428647|1) - ctrl+h, to make the beginning less awkward
07:16:834 (436834|1,436959|1,437084|1,437209|1,437334|1) - anchorsss
07:17:459 (437459|2,437584|2,437709|2,437834|2) - 07:18:334 (438334|2,438459|2,438584|2,438709|2) -
07:17:209 (437209|1,437209|0,437272|2,437334|3,437334|1,437397|0,437459|3,437459|2) - ooups why is all the following on 1/4 accent, I know the music is like that but I think the rhythm is more audible on usual white red than on blue blue
07:24:584 - this too
07:25:459 (445459|2) - anchor
07:27:147 (447147|1,447209|2,447272|1,447334|2,447397|1,447459|2,447522|1,447584|2,447647|1,447709|2) - why
07:27:522 (447522|3,447647|3,447772|3,447834|1,447897|3,447959|1,448022|3,448084|1,448147|3,448209|1,448272|3) - why (the pattern is good but please fix the earlier one and improve this)
08:05:584 (485584|0,485709|0,485834|0,485959|0,486084|0) - anchor
08:09:084 (489084|2,489209|2,489334|2,489459|2) - 08:10:834 (490834|0,490959|0,491084|0,491209|0) - 08:11:334 (491334|2,491459|2,491584|2,491709|2) -

overal very nice map, wow
Topic Starter
XeoStyle
Yes
No
Yes/No but

_underjoy wrote:

1|2|3|4
mod
Change HP to 8,5 at least, OD to 9 Yup

01:18:569 - I don't think this is a good idea, a dense jumpstream would be better. (also I think rhythm is better on white-red than blue-blue) I wasn't really sure about it too, gonna change it, thanks
01:21:069 - and possible chords on white lines in the whole segment. 01:28:819 - there... and generally in those trills Good idee
01:28:694 (88694|1,88756|0,88819|1) - this is rough, 01:28:631 (88631|2,88694|1,88756|0) - move those to 3,1,3 respectively Looks more logic +1

01:34:069 - 01:34:319 - those should be the same IMO Yes oui ya

01:44:319 - you missed notes here A snare roll, exact lol
01:50:319 (110319|2,110444|2,110569|2,110694|2,110819|2,110944|2,111069|2) - ouch, break the anchor please (more than 3-note anchors are bad) omg lol, fixed
01:52:819 (112819|1,112944|1,113069|1,113194|1) -
01:53:944 (113944|1,114069|1,114194|1,114319|1,114444|1,114569|1,114694|1,114819|1,114944|1) - have mercy pls It's really funny when it's highlighted like this haha, fixed x)
01:58:819 (118819|2,118944|2,119069|2,119194|2) - 01:59:694 (119694|1,119819|1,119944|1,120069|1,120194|1) - 02:01:069 (121069|1,121194|1,121319|1,121444|1,121569|1) - All is fixed, thanks !
02:02:944 (122944|2,123006|1,123069|2) - change into 234 probably Looks better yup
02:06:569 - idk those trills are cool but I still see a jumpstream here Since they are less Trills like this i'm gonna stay it like this, maybe change it if this is remodded for the same reason
02:22:569 - y u no map streamz :< Gonna change the all section, I have a idee right now lol
03:17:819 - add a note? Done

I have something to do, gonna check the end of the mod later.

03:23:440 (203440|2) - why didn't you use 3-chords before but you use them from now on? Fixed
03:49:946 (229946|2) - move to 2? k
04:25:446 (265446|1,265526|2,265606|1,265686|0) - move to right and 04:25:766 (265766|1) - to 1 Nice one
04:26:726 (266726|1,266726|3) - this should be [14] for following the next chord +1
04:35:366 (275366|0,275426|1,275486|2,275546|3) - i see this rather as a 2323 trill 04:36:326 (276326|3,276386|2,276446|1,276506|0) - but idk It looks more cool you're right!
04:54:566 (294566|1,294566|3,294626|2,294626|0,294686|3,294686|1) - ctrl+h, imo better Gonna applie it to avoid the anchor, but it's almost the same thing x)
05:01:046 (301046|0,301166|1,301286|3,301406|2) - 2-chords? Fixed
05:04:406 - pattern here is imo too easy I was thinking about change it the other day but I forgot, so yup
05:04:526 (304526|1) - ghost note 05:04:826 (304826|3,304886|2) -
05:07:766 (307766|2) - to 1 Fixed this snare roll
05:26:126 - add 3? hum...
05:26:366 - and 2? shouldn't be too rough ...Why not
05:26:966 (326966|1,326966|0,326966|3) - too strong
05:31:526 - add 2
05:51:206 - this whole stream has irregular structure, you sometimes accent this with 2-chord, sometimes not. Like here for example Changed a looooot of thing in the stream
05:57:566 (357566|3,357626|0,357686|3,357686|1,357746|0,357746|2,357806|3,357806|1,357866|2,357926|1) - screw you, this is gay Fixed haha
06:11:681 (371681|2) - move to 4 (too long jack here)
06:14:792 (374792|2) - ^
06:17:459 (377459|3) - to 3
06:20:681 (380681|0) - to 2 Fixed all the jacks, looks better thanks
06:25:379 (385379|1,385451|0,385522|1,385594|2) - ctrl+h then first note to 2 done
06:26:094 - y u undermap added some basskeek yay
06:34:129 (394129|0) - to 4 k
07:08:584 (428584|2,428647|1) - ctrl+h, to make the beginning less awkward you right, it's better
07:16:834 (436834|1,436959|1,437084|1,437209|1,437334|1) - anchorsss
07:17:459 (437459|2,437584|2,437709|2,437834|2) - 07:18:334 (438334|2,438459|2,438584|2,438709|2) -
07:17:209 (437209|1,437209|0,437272|2,437334|3,437334|1,437397|0,437459|3,437459|2) - ooups why is all the following on 1/4 accent, I know the music is like that but I think the rhythm is more audible on usual white red than on blue blue Since it's just mapped on double for every snare tap, I don't see where is the problem ?..
07:24:584 - this too
07:25:459 (445459|2) - anchor
07:27:147 (447147|1,447209|2,447272|1,447334|2,447397|1,447459|2,447522|1,447584|2,447647|1,447709|2) - why
07:27:522 (447522|3,447647|3,447772|3,447834|1,447897|3,447959|1,448022|3,448084|1,448147|3,448209|1,448272|3) - why (the pattern is good but please fix the earlier one and improve this)
08:05:584 (485584|0,485709|0,485834|0,485959|0,486084|0) - anchor
08:09:084 (489084|2,489209|2,489334|2,489459|2) - 08:10:834 (490834|0,490959|0,491084|0,491209|0) - 08:11:334 (491334|2,491459|2,491584|2,491709|2) -

ALL THE ANCHORS ARE DOWN SIR

overal very nice map, wow Oh you <3
Thanks you A LOT for this mod, a lot of problems are fixed thank to you, I really appreciate it ! :)
DrawdeX
welp, double post :v
DrawdeX
hi xeo :)
sorry for the delay :v had to work on some crap load of projects lel

4K = |1|2|3|4|


Marathon mod
[Duty to Sata- I mean, God]
• 01:10:569 - Add a note? For the loud cymbal sound, since the stream ends here
• 01:10:881 (70881|0) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 01:13:819 (73819|2) - Remove? To follow the previous patterns
• 01:14:069 (74069|0) - I don't think it's too loud, remove? Also, to follow the previous patterns
• 01:14:881 (74881|3) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 01:17:819 (77819|0) - Same issue on 01:13:819 -
• 01:18:069 (78069|1) - Same issue on 01:14:069 -
• 01:26:444 (86444|2,86506|1) - Ctrl+H? For comfortable purposes, since 01:26:319 (86319|2,86444|2) - felt like they're jacks on this bpm
• 01:29:756 (89756|2,89819|1,89819|0,89881|2) - Ctrl+H? 01:29:819 - For this part to use column 4 (hand balance)
• 01:42:319 (102319|1,102381|2) - Ctrl+H? Same reason on 01:26:444 -
• 01:46:069 - 01:46:319 - Add a note? Since it's not part of the streams, for the cymbal sound
• 03:51:446 - Remove one note? I don't think it's too loud
• 03:56:446 - ^
• 04:27:926 - Add a note? for the cymbal sound
• 04:51:926 (291926|2,291986|1) - Ctrl+H? Same reason on 01:26:144 -
• 04:53:846 - 04:54:086 - 04:56:486 - 04:56:726 - 04:57:086 - 04:57:446 - 05:00:086 - 05:00:806 - 05:01:526 - 05:04:166 - 05:07:766 - Add a note? Since it's not part of the streams, for the cymbal sound
• 05:24:326 (324326|0) - I don't think this part is too loud, remove?
• 05:42:926 - 05:43:046 - Add a note, same snare drums on 05:41:846 ~ 05:42:326 -
• 07:08:093 - 07:12:022 - 07:12:272 - Add a note? Since it's not part of the streams, for the cymbal sound
Sorry, can't mod much on the streams orz
That's all ~
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
XeoStyle
Yes
No
Yes/No but

DrawdeX wrote:

hi xeo :)
sorry for the delay :v had to work on some crap load of projects lel

4K = |1|2|3|4|


Marathon mod
[Duty to Sata- I mean, God]
• 01:10:569 - Add a note? For the loud cymbal sound, since the stream ends here Yeah why not
• 01:10:881 (70881|0) - Move to 2, for hand balance yup
• 01:13:819 (73819|2) - Remove? To follow the previous patterns Rearanged
• 01:14:069 (74069|0) - I don't think it's too loud, remove? Also, to follow the previous patterns I kinda like it like this
• 01:14:881 (74881|3) - Move to 3, for hand balance Yup
• 01:17:819 (77819|0) - Same issue on 01:13:819 -
• 01:18:069 (78069|1) - Same issue on 01:14:069 - all is rearanged
• 01:26:444 (86444|2,86506|1) - Ctrl+H? For comfortable purposes, since 01:26:319 (86319|2,86444|2) - felt like they're jacks on this bpm Looks cool
• 01:29:756 (89756|2,89819|1,89819|0,89881|2) - Ctrl+H? +1 01:29:819 - For this part to use column 4 (hand balance) rearanged
• 01:42:319 (102319|1,102381|2) - Ctrl+H? Same reason on 01:26:444 - Yay
• 01:46:069 - 01:46:319 - Add a note? Since it's not part of the streams, for the cymbal sound hum dunno, let's say yes since it's not a stream part
• 03:51:446 - Remove one note? I don't think it's too loud
• 03:56:446 - ^ fixed
• 04:27:926 - Add a note? for the cymbal sound
• 04:51:926 (291926|2,291986|1) - Ctrl+H? Same reason on 01:26:144 - Yup
• 04:53:846 - 04:54:086 - 04:56:486 - 04:56:726 - 04:57:086 - 04:57:446 - 05:00:086 - 05:00:806 - 05:01:526 - 05:04:166 - 05:07:766 - Add a note? Since it's not part of the streams, for the cymbal sound Looks a lot better yay !
• 05:24:326 (324326|0) - I don't think this part is too loud, remove? It's actually a big snare hit, so nop
• 05:42:926 - 05:43:046 - Add a note, same snare drums on 05:41:846 ~ 05:42:326 - Oh right ! Fixed !
• 07:08:093 - 07:12:022 - 07:12:272 - Add a note? Since it's not part of the streams, for the cymbal sound Yes !

I have fixed a lot of cymbal, thank you bro !
Sorry, can't mod much on the streams orz
That's all ~
Good luck :)
Another great mod, thanks Draw <: !
-SoraGami-
Hi Xeo!~

m4m

Column = 1|2|3|4


[mod]- 01:13:569 (73569|2) - maybe move this note to 4, to lessen the pressure at column 3 (look at 01:13:069 (73069|2,73194|2,73444|2,73569|2) - ) and also plays more better
- 01:15:194 - try something like this in this part https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3998332 , to deliver good flow in this part 01:15:194 (75194|2,75194|3,75319|0,75319|1,75444|0,75444|2,75569|1,75569|3) - while this part 01:15:819 is just to balance them out
- 01:24:819 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3998384 try this, for more comfortable? to cut that juicy 01:24:631 (84631|3,84756|3,84881|3,85006|3,85131|3) + there's a double so it's kinda weird
- if you apply ^ - 01:25:381 (85381|0,85444|1) - swap columns
- 01:28:569 (88569|1,88631|2) - ctrl + h to balance the flow and for the fingers to get ready easily for this part 01:28:819 -
- 01:44:069 (104069|3) - move to 2, for balance, right side is kinda heavy because 01:43:944 - ends at right and 01:44:319 - starts at right also
- 02:06:319 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3998475 for a better start before this heavy part 02:06:569 - , to balance more the flow
- 03:20:631 (200631|3) - move to 2 for balance
- 04:30:206 (270206|1) - move to 3 more comfortable and also for balance
- 04:32:006 (272006|1,272126|2) - ctrl + h, because 04:31:886 (271886|0,271886|1,272006|1,272006|0) - not really same sound
- 04:34:046 (274046|2) - move to 2, same case with the other one
- 04:41:606 (281606|2) - move to 2 for good hand flow and to balance it with 04:41:366 -
- 04:47:846 (287846|2,287966|1,287966|3,288086|0) - ctrl + h, more balance with that jacks
- 04:54:566 (294566|2,294566|0,294626|1,294626|3,294686|2,294686|0) - ctrl + h too, balancing it with 04:54:326 - would be great
- 04:57:926 (297926|1,297926|3,297986|2,297986|0,298046|1,298046|3) - same
- 06:19:681 (379681|3) - move to 3 for balance
- 06:19:903 (379903|1) - move to 1 same reason
- 06:20:570 (380570|2,380681|3) - swap columns
- 06:27:165 (387165|2) - move to 2, more comfortable for the upcoming stairs
- 06:33:487 (393487|3) - move to 3
- 06:35:201 (395201|2,395308|3) - swap columns for balance also
- 06:35:844 (395844|2) - move to 4 same
- 06:57:022 (417022|2,417093|3) - swap columns, making it continuous stairs are better i think
- that's all :^)

Good Luck and thanks xD
Topic Starter
XeoStyle
Yes
No
Yes/No but

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Xeo!~

m4m

Column = 1|2|3|4


[mod]- 01:13:569 (73569|2) - maybe move this note to 4, to lessen the pressure at column 3 (look at 01:13:069 (73069|2,73194|2,73444|2,73569|2) - ) and also plays more better not a big fan, but the pattern is re-arranged
- 01:15:194 - try something like this in this part https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3998332 , to deliver good flow in this part 01:15:194 ok(75194|2,75194|3,75319|0,75319|1,75444|0,75444|2,75569|1,75569|3) - while this part 01:15:819 is just to balance them out
- 01:24:819 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3998384 try this, for more comfortable? to cut that juicy Better Yes
01:24:631 (84631|3,84756|3,84881|3,85006|3,85131|3) + there's a double so it's kinda weird Don't see the problem here
- if you apply ^ - 01:25:381 (85381|0,85444|1) - swap columns
- 01:28:569 (88569|1,88631|2) - ctrl + h to balance the flow and for the fingers to get ready easily for this part 01:28:819 - Better yeah
- 01:44:069 (104069|3) - move to 2, for balance, right side is kinda heavy because 01:43:944 - ends at right and 01:44:319 - starts at right also You're right, fixed
- 02:06:319 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3998475 for a better start before this heavy part 02:06:569 - , to balance more the flow ok
- 03:20:631 (200631|3) - move to 2 for balance Nice one
- 04:30:206 (270206|1) - move to 3 more comfortable and also for balance ok
- 04:32:006 (272006|1,272126|2) - ctrl + h, because 04:31:886 (271886|0,271886|1,272006|1,272006|0) - not really same sound Wow it's better
- 04:34:046 (274046|2) - move to 2, same case with the other one ~
- 04:41:606 (281606|2) - move to 2 for good hand flow and to balance it with 04:41:366 - Yup
- 04:47:846 (287846|2,287966|1,287966|3,288086|0) - ctrl + h, more balance with that jacks what a badass ctrl+h, yay !
- 04:54:566 (294566|2,294566|0,294626|1,294626|3,294686|2,294686|0) - ctrl + h too, balancing it with 04:54:326 - would be great re-arranged
- 04:57:926 (297926|1,297926|3,297986|2,297986|0,298046|1,298046|3) - same ^
- 06:19:681 (379681|3) - move to 3 for balance
- 06:19:903 (379903|1) - move to 1 same reason
- 06:20:570 (380570|2,380681|3) - swap columns
- 06:27:165 (387165|2) - move to 2, more comfortable for the upcoming stairs
- 06:33:487 (393487|3) - move to 3
- 06:35:201 (395201|2,395308|3) - swap columns for balance also
- 06:35:844 (395844|2) - move to 4 same
- 06:57:022 (417022|2,417093|3) - swap columns, making it continuous stairs are better i think

Applied all the end, thanks again for this mod, the balance of the chords parts are way better now ! :D
- that's all :^)

Good Luck and thanks xD
Gtg, gonna applie the end of the mod tommorow !<:
Done !
lenpai
ooof your mod was quick. Haven't checked it yet. My mod will appear here will just do some stuff and I'll get on this asap

I tried testplaying it but im too scrubby to play high bpm jumps. 220 bpm is my comfort zone.
Will start modding after you finish sora's mod.

Tried playing it again but yeah it is too hard for me to play this without having to do a couple of warmups.


col 1 - 4
The Apparition is Judas' Shadow whoahwoahowohwa
Before anything, better resize the dimensions of your BG to something like 1280 x 720 to avoid future issues.

Modding this on half speed so i might not know what im doing
01:26:444 (86444|1,86506|2) - ctrl H for the descending drum sound.
02:06:569 - never seen something like this and it sure is hard to play
03:17:819 (197819|1,197819|3) - jack concerns me I personally would just treat this as a single note.
03:42:440 (222440|3,222940|3) - pick which one should you move to 2
04:37:406 (277406|2,277886|1) - to 1 and 4 respectively
04:41:606 (281606|0,281726|2) - to 3 and 2 respectively
04:44:606 - yummy
04:50:246 - since this didn't have a mirrored counterpart, you could just do js here
05:01:046 (301046|1,301046|0,301166|2,301166|1,301286|3,301286|2,301406|1,301406|2,301526|1,301526|0,301526|3) - ctrl H? and move whatever gets affected
05:57:206 - this looks so scary, maybe convert the trill to stars in between the doubles
I love me some chords yum yum
06:01:570 (361570|1) - to 1?
06:05:237 (365237|0) - to 2?
06:10:014 (370014|1,370126|2,370237|1) - ctrl h?
06:10:681 (370681|2,370792|1,371014|2) - if ^ is applied, ctrl h this
06:11:126 (371126|1,371237|0) - if ^ is applied, move to 1 and 3 respectively
06:13:348 (373348|0,373459|1) - switch columns
06:14:126 (374126|1,374348|0) - to 1, to 3 respectively
06:16:903 (376903|1,377014|2) - ctrl H
something, 06:26:522 - has 3 consecutive jacks at left hand so put those kinds of stuff here 06:28:237 - for the right hand
07:52:522 - add 3?

I tried :(
Fiddled A LOT with the jack usage
Topic Starter
XeoStyle
Done and updated ! :)
Topic Starter
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Lenfried- wrote:

ooof your mod was quick. Haven't checked it yet. My mod will appear here will just do some stuff and I'll get on this asap

I tried testplaying it but im too scrubby to play high bpm jumps. 220 bpm is my comfort zone.
Will start modding after you finish sora's mod.

Tried playing it again but yeah it is too hard for me to play this without having to do a couple of warmups.


col 1 - 4
The Apparition is Judas' Shadow whoahwoahowohwa
Happy song about familly life <3
Before anything, better resize the dimensions of your BG to something like 1280 x 720 to avoid future issues. Already fixed today, but thanks :P

Modding this on half speed so i might not know what im doing
01:26:444 (86444|1,86506|2) - ctrl H for the descending drum sound. Ok
02:06:569 - never seen something like this and it sure is hard to play I'm gonna see with some advanced 4k players/mappers about this section, gonna stay it like that for the moment
03:17:819 (197819|1,197819|3) - jack concerns me I personally would just treat this as a single note. re-arranged
03:42:440 (222440|3,222940|3) - pick which one should you move to 2 done
04:37:406 (277406|2,277886|1) - to 1 and 4 respectively nice one
04:41:606 (281606|0,281726|2) - to 3 and 2 respectively ^
04:44:606 - yummy \ :D /
04:50:246 - since this didn't have a mirrored counterpart, you could just do js here Gonna rework this part later, thanks for the HL
05:01:046 (301046|1,301046|0,301166|2,301166|1,301286|3,301286|2,301406|1,301406|2,301526|1,301526|0,301526|3) - ctrl H? and move whatever gets affected re-arranged a lot of thing in this part
05:57:206 - this looks so scary, maybe convert the trill to stars in between the doubles I kinda like this trill like that
I love me some chords yum yum \ :D /
06:01:570 (361570|1) - to 1? meh
06:05:237 (365237|0) - to 2? meh²
06:10:014 (370014|1,370126|2,370237|1) - ctrl h? yup
06:10:681 (370681|2,370792|1,371014|2) - if ^ is applied, ctrl h this 4 notes jack, nooooo
06:11:126 (371126|1,371237|0) - if ^ is applied, move to 1 and 3 respectively re-arranged
06:13:348 (373348|0,373459|1) - switch columns ok
06:14:126 (374126|1,374348|0) - to 1, to 3 respectively ok
06:16:903 (376903|1,377014|2) - ctrl H ok, fixed some things before
something, 06:26:522 - has 3 consecutive jacks at left hand so put those kinds of stuff here 06:28:237 - for the right hand fixed
07:52:522 - add 3?Oh yeah right !

I tried :( Thanks a lot dude, useful mod ! :D
Fiddled A LOT with the jack usage The song is powerful and the jack usage is kinda cool for this imo
Vulkin
why BPM on tags ? O-o
lenpai
How do people even nail the bpm changes on stuff like this O_o

*Shoots star because I love chords
Topic Starter
XeoStyle

guitarlol wrote:

why BPM on tags ? O-o
Uh, probably a fail because I dunno haha, fixed

Lenfried- wrote:

How do people even nail the bpm changes on stuff like this O_o

*Shoots star because I love chords
The BPM changes at the middle are kinda crazy. It's not my work too since all the timings point are from the ranked std ver. of Mazzerin, but it's so fucking OP haha.

Oh and thanks for the star, I really appreciate it :D
Daikyi
ircmod
2015-12-07 21:38 Daeris: 03:12:944
2015-12-07 21:40 Daeris: 05:08:246 -
2015-12-07 21:40 Daeris: 05:08:006
2015-12-07 21:41 Daeris: 06:53:093 (413093|3,413093|2,413147|1,413147|0,413200|3,413200|2,413307|2,413307|0,413361|3,413361|1,413415|0,413415|2) -
2015-12-07 21:42 Daeris: http://puu.sh/lNr8Q/a1152ee452.png
2015-12-07 21:42 Daeris: http://puu.sh/lNr9k/393dd2b2dc.png
2015-12-07 21:44 XeoStyle: 04:55:766 (295766|3,295766|0) -
2015-12-07 21:46 XeoStyle: 05:04:406 (304406|2,304406|0,304406|1) -
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2015-12-07 21:49 XeoStyle: 05:05:006 (305006|1,305126|1,305246|1,305366|1,305486|1) -
2015-12-07 21:51 Daeris: 05:04:946 (304946|0) -
2015-12-07 21:52 XeoStyle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4093387
2015-12-07 21:53 Daeris: 05:04:946 (304946|0) -
2015-12-07 21:55 Daeris: http://puu.sh/lNrM6/78442cd81d.png
2015-12-07 21:57 XeoStyle: 01:27:069 (87069|1,87194|1,87319|1) -
2015-12-07 21:58 Daeris: http://puu.sh/lNrX0/9229180276.png
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2015-12-07 22:02 XeoStyle: 02:22:569 (142569|0) -
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2015-12-07 22:07 XeoStyle: 02:26:069 (146069|3,146069|0) -
2015-12-07 22:09 XeoStyle: 05:57:206 (357206|3,357206|2,357266|0,357266|1) -
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2015-12-07 22:17 Daeris: http://puu.sh/lNt0d/5b7ef18e3b.png
we did a bunch of things in a call, so lol the mod is rip
snexe
Oui.

General Stuffs
- "Background image is larger than 1366x768." (Idk if this could be a thing since they could disqualify maps because of the BG, better resize it or change it.)
- Disable widescreen support on miscellaneous toggles.
- "Filesize of the mapset exceeds 10 MB without video." Well yeah, you have a 192 kbps track but I don't know if this could affect the ranking, don't change the bitrate yet, ask some BN.


oui
00:00:569 - 00:54:569 - Why not map this part? NOOOOOODLEEEEEEEEEEEES.
01:32:569 - 01:33:569 - What's with the sudden trill section?
01:40:569 - 01:41:317 - ^
03:23:440 - 04:18:086 - Make this part more denser since I feel like this part can still be pushed without hurting star rating too much.
05:09:206 - 05:11:126 - You can add the guitar part "du-du-dun du-du-dun du-du-dun".

Classement Bonne chance cette carte, vous mappeur de merde. :^)
Topic Starter
XeoStyle
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No
Yes/No but

E x e wrote:

Oui.

General Stuffs
- "Background image is larger than 1366x768." (Idk if this could be a thing since they could disqualify maps because of the BG, better resize it or change it.) ARE U BLIND M8
- Disable widescreen support on miscellaneous toggles. done
- "Filesize of the mapset exceeds 10 MB without video." Well yeah, you have a 192 kbps track but I don't know if this could affect the ranking, don't change the bitrate yet, ask some BN. It's the MP3 from the std mapset.


oui
00:00:569 - 00:54:569 - Why not map this part? NOOOOOODLEEEEEEEEEEEES.Since most map is a strong 240-270 stream/jumpstream map, I don't want to map the intro with something boring and very easy to play, so like the standard ranked, I skipped it
01:32:569 - 01:33:569 - What's with the sudden trill section? It looks kinda cool with the guitar sound, I don't see the problem.
01:40:569 - 01:41:317 - ^ ^
03:23:440 - 04:18:086 - Make this part more denser since I feel like this part can still be pushed without hurting star rating too much. I'm gonna ask peoples about maybe, but I think this section is fine (even if it's really ez to play)
05:09:206 - 05:11:126 - You can add the guitar part "du-du-dun du-du-dun du-du-dun". Maybe gonna change if someone else want this too, but I kinda like this "break" after the jump part.

Classement Bonne chance cette carte, vous mappeur de merde. :^) Fucking best french on teh planet
Thanks for the mod dude, I applied the Snover LNs shit too :P
FrenzyLi
Sorry for the delay! Here is the M4M response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!
Duty to God (4K)
Comment: I'm starting to learn jumpstreams and i'm stuck at 4.1* on them. I can't do any jumpstream harder than 4.2* effectively. WIth HT, your map is still very challenging for me and I'll possibly give a follow up mod in the future in case this map still accept modding and i'm better at jumpstreams.
My2cents: A couple of short sliders could be lengthened. I also moved a few notes to make more patterns appear though. These are aesthetic (possibly not) mods so feel free to reject them.
  1. 01:45:819 - Add note on 0.
    01:46:569 - Add note on 2.
  2. 01:50:506 (110506|3,110569|2) - Move: 2,3
  3. 03:47:315 (227315|1,227446|3) - Move to 3,1 to complete the four notes on column 3 with 03:46:565 (226565|3,226815|3,227065|3)
  4. 08:13:522 (493522|3) - This slider could end at 08:14:022 . You have to adjust the upcoming 4 triplets to match with this.
    08:15:397 (495397|0) - Could also end at 08:15:647 . There are parts of the community that aren't fond of short sliders.

Note: Hmm... Why jumpstream is so hard :^(
Topic Starter
XeoStyle
Yes
No
Yes/No but

FrenzyLi wrote:

Sorry for the delay! Here is the M4M response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!
Duty to God (4K)
Comment: I'm starting to learn jumpstreams and i'm stuck at 4.1* on them. I can't do any jumpstream harder than 4.2* effectively. WIth HT, your map is still very challenging for me and I'll possibly give a follow up mod in the future in case this map still accept modding and i'm better at jumpstreams.
My2cents: A couple of short sliders could be lengthened. I also moved a few notes to make more patterns appear though. These are aesthetic (possibly not) mods so feel free to reject them.
  1. 01:45:819 - Add note on 0. Ok
    01:46:569 - Add note on 2.Ok
  2. 01:50:506 (110506|3,110569|2) - Move: 2,3 Ok
  3. 03:47:315 (227315|1,227446|3) - Move to 3,1 to complete the four notes on column 3 with 03:46:565 (226565|3,226815|3,227065|3) Good idee
  4. 08:13:522 (493522|3) - This slider could end at 08:14:022 . You have to adjust the upcoming 4 triplets to match with this.
    08:15:397 (495397|0) - Could also end at 08:15:647 . There are parts of the community that aren't fond of short sliders.I kinda like how theses little LNs look with the sound, gonna stay it like this for the moment.

Note: Hmm... Why jumpstream is so hard :^(
Topic Starter
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Mod from Evening's Review Queue

Le mod

Evening wrote:

Spawn Of Possession - Apparition (Review)

01:00:069 (60069|2,60069|1,60131|0,60131|3,60194|1,60194|2,60256|3,60256|0,60319|1,60319|2,60381|3,60381|0,60444|1,60444|2,60506|3,60506|0,60569|2,60569|1) - pls don’t… just… don’t
01:08:069 (68069|1,68069|2,68131|0,68131|3,68194|1,68194|2,68256|3,68256|0,68319|1,68319|2,68381|3,68381|0,68444|1,68444|2,68506|3,68506|0,68569|1,68569|2) - no

01:22:756 (82756|1,82881|1,83006|1,83131|1,83131|2,83256|2,83381|2,83506|2) - cut the anchors plx
01:54:006 (114006|1,114069|0,114131|1,114194|0) - Consider ctrl+G’s note pattern, the pattern really stresses too much on the 2nd column as of now (take note that ctrl+g-ing might fuck up your hitsounds)

02:18:069 (138069|0,138131|1,138194|2,138256|3,138319|2,138381|1,138444|0,138506|1) - a normal stair that reflects off the sides is kinda generic (as in you can probably try some other patterns that fit the instruments better), try 1324 1232 or something

02:28:069 (148069|2,148069|1,148131|0,148131|3,148194|2,148194|1,148256|0,148256|3,148319|2,148319|1,148381|3,148381|0,148444|2,148444|1,148506|0,148506|3,148569|1,148569|2) - :C
02:36:069 (156069|2,156069|1,156131|0,156131|3,156194|2,156194|1,156256|3,156256|0,156319|2,156319|1,156381|3,156381|0,156444|1,156444|2,156506|0,156506|3,156569|1,156569|2) - Sad Face

02:38:569 (158569|0,159084|3,159583|2,160082|1,160582|0,161081|3) - A suggestion to have these as LNs, as for the LN length, you can try to have the first note being the longest and the last note being the shortest, this way you can mimic the instrument here fading

02:52:578 (172578|1) - Consider going for these 2 bass guitar notes
02:53:078 (173078|3,173078|0) - Similarly
02:53:562 (173562|1) - Might want to end this ¼ earlier so that you “connect” with column 1’s LN
02:57:061 (177061|2) - ^

02:59:069 - Consider quadding this with 2 LN shields

03:12:944 (192944|3,193069|2,193194|1,193319|0) - Try to jack 1/3s so that they don’t play too flowy to be mistaken as a ¼

03:41:190 (221190|1) - Might want to delete this so that the sound later has a higher note count that this
03:43:440 (223440|3) - ^
03:45:440 (225440|0) - ^
03:42:440 (222440|0,222440|1) - no idea what is this jump for
03:51:946 (231946|3,232008|0,232071|3,232133|0,232196|2,232258|1,232321|2,232383|1,232446|2) - Consider making this different from 03:56:946 (236946|1,237008|2,237071|1,237133|2,237196|0,237258|3,237321|0,237383|3) - in terms of note density/patterning since the 2nd part doesn’t have the ¼ hi hats
04:00:886 (240886|1,240966|2,241046|0,241126|3,241206|2) - suggesting to use alternating hand patterns like 132314[12]
04:06:926 (246926|2,246926|3,247046|0,247046|1) - This part is probably the easiest section out of the whole map, consider doing minijacks here and there as [34][12] gives players that are at this skill level negligible “impact” whereas minijacks kind of give more of a difficulty spike here
04:10:766 (250766|3,250766|2,250886|0,250886|1) - same idea
04:11:846 (251846|0,251846|1,251966|3,251966|2,252086|1,252086|0,252206|3,252326|2,252446|1,252566|0,252686|3) - I personally hear this drum pattern as a 2 note jack loop here, as in I would suggest to have patterns like[14][14]22331[123], up to you i guess
04:26:726 (266726|0,266726|3,266966|0,266966|3) - the patterning you used here doesn’t really bring out the cymbals in the music, it feels way too “smooth”, consider hands if you’d like
04:44:366 (284366|1,284426|0,284486|1,284606|1,284606|0,284726|1,284726|0,284846|0,284846|1) - Very much prefer you to not transition from a trill to a long jack here, it’s kind of an awkward transition and you can probably jack on the right hand here as an alternative anyways
04:39:446 (279446|2,279446|0,279446|3,279566|0,279566|1,279686|3,279686|1,279686|2) -
consider having this a whole separate pattern, like [134][34][123], i felt that this pattern kinds of drives along with this constant jack @ 04:39:206 (279206|1,279326|1,279326|0,279446|0) - in which I felt that it could be better if you follow the vocals by cutting off the constant jack here
05:03:686 (303686|0,303686|3,303746|2,303746|1,303806|0,303806|3,303866|2,303866|1,303926|3,303926|0) - this isn’t gay so uhh you probably don’t need to ammend this
05:11:846 (311846|3,311966|3,312086|2,312326|3,312566|2,312686|2) - consider turning these into 2 note chords on [34] due to the snare drums here
05:13:286 (313286|2,313406|3,313766|2,313886|3) - consider having these on 44 so as to represent the guitar here
05:15:206 (315206|1,315326|0,315686|1,315806|0) - Similarly, and all similar patterns
05:18:326 (318326|0,318566|3) - you can probably LN these
05:20:246 (320246|1,320246|0,320366|3,320366|2,320486|1,320606|3) - probably gives impact if you hammer
05:57:386 (357386|0,357446|3,357506|0,357566|3,357626|0,357926|2,357986|1,358046|2,358106|1) -
consider making these stairs or rolls, the transition to a very intense pattern here is very rigid and sudden, kinda threw me off on the first play
06:22:237 - you can try for more anchor patterns for these since it’s ⅓ , it kinda helps in balancing the difficulty of the chart here as this is miles easier with just rolls
06:40:204 (400204|0,400280|1,400357|3,400434|2,400511|0,400588|1) - you can probably go for something more complex than that of rolls, like 132432[34]
06:41:093 - ehhh same thing, the difficulty of the section here is horribly boring lol, try to add some jacks in a fashion that would make sense like :
06:41:093 (401093|0,401200|1) - add a minijack since there’s a cymbal here
06:41:843 (401843|0,401950|3,401950|2) - add a minijack to lead up to the snare here to create a larger impact
06:44:093 (404093|3,404093|2,404093|0) - you can probably change this to a miniLN chord just to make it special, or you can use miniLNs on some other instrument that you prefer
06:47:629 (407629|0,407736|0) - Kind of weird that you minijack towards a chime here, i think it would make more sense if you minijack these 06:47:522 (407522|2,407522|3,407629|0,407629|1) -
06:53:522 (413522|1,413629|2,413736|3,413843|0,413950|2,414057|1,414165|0,414272|3,414379|1,414486|0,414593|2,414700|3) - do 2 note jack loops here like 22 33 11 44 or something
07:25:459 (445459|1,445584|1,445709|1,445834|1,445959|1,446084|1) - yeeeaaa no..
07:27:397 (447397|3,447459|2,447522|3,447584|2,447647|3,447709|2) - uhh yea try to not trill this much
08:09:959 (489959|0,490084|0,490209|0,490334|0,490459|0,490584|0) - jfc
08:06:459 (486459|2,486584|2,486709|2,486834|2,486959|2) - aaa

I think i missed quite a few anchors that are really homo on the right hand so if you can find them pls fix (consider to not go above 4 anchors in a row)

that’s all

EDIT :

I'm not gonna triple post, another mod from Shoegazer :

le mod²
about 6 hours ago
This chart is surprisingly good. Short mod because I'm not feeling too well (I actually haven't been feeling too well for a while haha, but it doesn't matter too much)

[Duty to God]
shenanigans
Add "incurso" to the tags. Album title. Not too fond of the difficulty title, I think Duty of God is slightly more appropriate and rolls off the tongue slightly nicer. Your choice though. Ok for incurso, gonna ask peoples about the title but I kinda prefere "to"

Chart
00:56:319 - Not sure if I particularly agree with this layering scheme, while I know that the jumptrill is going to the louder bass drum, the guitar is far more prominent and you should do something to capture the difference. I was thinking of something like [12]3[12]4[12] but the problem is that the four chords before it are doubles. The jumptrill as a whole feels a bit unnecessary to me though, I think it's better to just accentuate the guitar and less so the louder bass drum. This goes for other sounds like this. Ok i've change it to something like you said, it flows better now
01:11:194 - The doubles in this section can create jacks if you want. I think it's a bit silly to not create any jacks in this section except for the hidden 1/2 jacks in the broken dense jumpstreams. Especially since you created jacks in 01:13:069 - .Done
01:32:569 - Guitar vibrato is a little too faint to be a trill. You can use a split roll instead for this. Reworked the pattern
01:33:444 - Trill should change here, but I can see why you wouldn't want to change it. Guessing that's intentional. ^
03:23:440 - This section seems layered too little for its own good, I feel. You should probably layer it a bit more (there's a very faint bass guitar which you could follow and add 1/2s). I think I understand your intention of doing this (creating tension) but since early misses can't happen here unless you royally fuck up one of the LNs, which shouldn't happen. In any case, I think layering this section a bit more should be fine. It just feels too empty as it is. So applied and I have to approve this, the bass flow really well with some bass kick hitsound
03:51:946 - I think [34]2[34]2[34]2 is more appropriate, I don't think a jumptrill is appropriate because there are sounds that are far more intense and are captured as jumptrills instead.It's because of the 2 differents trills of this section who don't sounds the same : one is 1/2 hi hat but this one is 1/4 so I mapped it like this. But it's true this look overmapped as truck, I nerfed it.
04:28:286 - Noticeably denser than the section before it, but I think it lacks a certain structure. I think it's better to accentuate certain parts of the chart - what I mean is that you could keep the same layering, but you change patterns around so that the player will have to deliberately focus on the patterning. You can particularly accentuate parts like 04:28:646 (268646|1,268766|2,268766|3,268886|0,269006|3,269006|1,269126|0,269246|1,269246|2,269366|3,269486|2,269486|0) - . You can do something like this to accentuate the chords for example. Alternatively you can layer it more, but I don't particularly agree with layering it more because the section right after is more intense and layered only slightly more. This applies up to 04:34:886 - . Ok applied thanks for the tips, I put some jacks on the sections you pointed out, I looks great and fun to play
04:31:046 - Try this maybe? The guitar is definitely very loud here and it'd be odd to not capture this.
04:34:886 - More appropriate as a triple, for the reason above.
04:35:126 - ^
05:06:086 - A double would be appropriate here.
05:06:326 - A triple would be more appropriate than a double, it feels odd to not capture that very prominent sound (not sure what it is but it's not the cymbal crash)
05:06:746 - Double.ALL THE DOUBLE/TRIPLE ARE APPLIED ^ + this one
05:09:206 - I don't think the growl has that much prominence to ignore the other instruments in this section. It'd be better to layer it the same way you layered 05:13:046 - .It's not the first time someone point this LN out... Guess i'm gonna change it so. That being said, 05:13:046 - should be a triple. Yup
06:00:014 - Really sudden use of LNs here, especially since the density is halved. Not too fond of that part... you can keep the triples but I think something like this would be far more appropriate. This goes on for the rest of the section. Remapped with 1/2 now, yup it's harder :D
06:12:014 - The parts with LNs feel a bit too light, placing 1/2s with the LNs would be fine. This applies up to 06:22:237 - .Uh, dunno if it's really cool to play but i'm gonna add them.
06:18:237 - You can be kinda mean and put 1/4s here, but I'm not sure if that's a good idea. Probably not, since you'd have to delayer some sections. Just a minor suggestion though. I don't really want to overload this part, theses LNs are here for a quick "pause" between each chord sections. It's fine like this.
06:35:951 (395951|0,395951|3,395951|2,396058|1,396165|2,396272|3,396379|0,396487|1,396594|2,396701|3) - Ctrl-H for pitch relevancy purposes. You have to shift some notes before and after it, but it's minor.Ok
07:56:772 - The piano is still prominent in this section, so I think you should layer that. You don't have to create doubles with this, just have some 1/2s. It's actually something like 3 notes if you don't create double lol, added anyway
08:18:147 - Think the LN should be shorter, feels way too long considering that this section feels like a panic attack anyway. okay

That's pretty much it. Might've missed some things here and there but this covers most of it. Good song, good chart, some minor things that could be changed. You should give sections with LNs less room sometimes. :D

Good luck with getting this ranked, would like to see this ranked.

Thanks for the mod Shoe, I really really appreciate it, really helpful mod (I applied the most as you can see). Anyway the map is now ready for bubble imo, so let's try to rank it :D
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