hello m4m (maybe for
this map if this mod is great enough)
i will try my best to fix those strange patterns to me without against your thoughts, so lets start
[General]
HP: 2 > 6 > 6 > 6, what
add silenced sliderslide.wav maybe
[Easy]
00:07:658 (2) -
There's an obvious change on 00:08:058 - but it is put on a reverse slider. For pattern suggestion, i think you can remake 00:06:458 (1,2,3) - into this form:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3761009 . Though 2 might probably broke the main structure for a little bit, but i think it's worth for emphasizing the music change.
00:33:658 (1,2) - I think the end of 1 and 2 can be parallel with 00:32:858 (3) - , so shift 2 a little bit upper:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3761026 . you may have to fix the distance on 00:35:258 (4) - but it's not that hard
01:08:058 (4,1) - I suggest to move 1 a little bit right because its body is almost blocked by 4's end.
01:18:458 - wait, where's the note? why not try a circle on (204,243)?
01:26:458 - a minor one - make the break ends here.
02:36:458 (2,3,4) - where's my regular triangle? ;w;
02:41:658 (1) - try this shape, it might can get better effect than the current one:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3761191[Normal]
00:07:658 (2) - same as easy
01:14:458 (5) - the music on this slider is obviously faster, maybe you can try this, it can also follow the beat on 01:14:058 - :
http://puu.sh/kwQkF/f5b85184e7.jpg01:18:458 - still, no note?
01:39:258 (3,4,5) - it seems not tidy, and also 1/2 sounds are not that clear imo. Im thinking, maybe you can change it into this form so it can fit the consistency between 01:37:658 (1,2) - and 01:40:858 (1,2) - ? :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3761250[Hard]
00:08:858 (3,4,5) - why not do some manual stack, just like you did on 00:10:458 (3,4,5) - ? They're stacked under a slider tail and not that easy to be read.
02:33:658 (1,2) - they are not parallel
02:33:658 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - maybe put them in another form? i guess you'll say "the current one is better imo", but i think those sounds here can be emphasized with some more jumps. after all, expressing my thoughts is always not a bad thing, isn't it?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3761351[Insane]
00:11:058 (6) - (maybe a little bit nazi) please put this note on (66,216) because of this:
http://puu.sh/kwRDc/b2a41c33f5.jpg00:18:258 (6,6) - if i was u i will do NCs on these stuff
00:21:658 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i know you are an illuminati mapper so maybe you'll want to make them into a part of a regular hexagon.
00:34:858 (8) - (real nazi) move it to (252,136) and you might probably see the difference. minor change.
00:47:458 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - (save your map first before reading this sht mod) please make them a regular pentagon i beg you......wait, you mean where should 00:44:658 (7,2) - and 00:47:258 (5) - be placed? you can try 7 in (424,140), and both 2 and 5 in (509, 149).
01:09:658 (4) - a note is missing on 01:09:858 - , it's pretty clear. maybe you'll want to change it because it won't break those good patterns......
02:27:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - (a bit nazi, and save map first) 02:27:658 (2) - on (220, 323), 02:27:858 (3) - on (185,245), and put 02:28:858 (1) - on (172,384) after rotating 65 degrees clockwise.
monstrata please slap me because im a bad modder and i can't help anything