1. Advanced (2,44 stars, 254 notes)
2. Hard (3,54 stars, 292 notes)
3. Normal (1,92 stars, 190 notes)

1. I would put more tags, stuff like bandai namco studios or genre of the music.
2. Also, try putting preview point here 01:16:070 (4). Because this is the addicting part. This is what will make people play the song.

1. 00:16:239 (4,1) - Maybe make these two parallel to each other? http://puu.sh/kjf0d/6fdefb9f34.jpg
2. 00:21:296 (3,4) - A bit of blanket nazi :>?
3. 00:29:385 (3,4) - Same.
4. 00:40:508 (4) - Maybe put this to x:125; y:175 as it imo flows better.
5. 00:51:969 (1) - In my opinion, the slider looks better, when the points are closer to the center http://puu.sh/kjffr/bc1faf8414.jpg
6. 00:53:992 (3,1) - This deserves a blanket.
7. 01:54:676 (2,3,4) - These three could be parallel to each other. http://puu.sh/kjfqP/9d08a2d2d5.jpg
8. 02:01:754 (4) - If I were you, I would map this "na", as it is quite important part of song.
9. 02:07:147 (4) - Same here.

1. 00:14:891 (2) - Would curve this slider a bit more, in order to emphasize the guitar sound. http://puu.sh/kjfIv/d882292f7a.jpg
2. 00:21:633 (4,5) - I hate to be "that" guy (no, I don't :>), but blankets pls.
3. 00:27:700 (1,2) - Same
4. 00:27:025 (6,7,1) - The spacing here is a bit awkward in my opinion, since the transfer from 6 to 7 is more distant than from 7 to 1.
5. 00:36:464 (2,3) - Maybe blanket it more around 2's sliderend. (Ok, I am gonna stop with them, but try to fix the rest please).
6. 00:29:385 (4) - This note could be a bit more down so it would create triangles with 5's sliderend and 1's sliderstart and also with 2 and 5's sliderend. http://puu.sh/kjgnV/d98adc4534.jpg
7. 00:51:969 (1) - This slider could be simirarly like I mentioned in Normal diff.

1. You have disabled Widescreen support in this difficulty, while other difficulties have it enabled.
2. 01:05:452 (1,2) - This is quite hard to read, I know the feeling of stacking is fulfilling and A E S T H E T I C A L L Y pleasing, but I would look for ways to make this more comfortable to read.
3. 00:51:969 (1) - Same thing like in two previous diffs.
4. 00:53:992 (6) - How about ctrl+g?
5. 00:54:329 (7) - Same, in order to create a nicely flowing... thing.
6. 01:22:306 (2,6) - Blanket these two, so that 2 will flow better and it will simply look better.
7. 01:27:373 (1,2) - Would put more spacing between these two, to alert players, that this part will be hard (if the song isn't already telling enough)¨

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Mortem wrote:

hi, as promised. c:

General:
• Put the "テイルズ オブ ゼスティリア" in the source and "Tales of Zestiria" to the tags. Since an original name is in Japanese. Just exchange it.
sure, tho I think that's a not a big deal
• Add to the tags: "越智志帆"; "蔦谷好位置" & romanized aritsts: "Shiho Ochi" & "Kōichi Tsutaya". These two are creators of this song.
sure
• I don't think that countdown is somehow necessary.
I'll think about that

Normal:
• 00:21:296 (3,4) - This blanket is little bit off.
changed
• 01:07:138 (3,4,5) - These three circles doesn't have a constant distance snap. It's just a minor issue but it's really visible, that the distance between them is a little bit bigger.
changed
• 01:10:509 (5,1) - Same here.
changed

Advanced:
• 00:20:958 (3,5) - This blanket is little bit off.
• 00:20:284 (2,5) - I kinda don't like this overlap here. What about to move the slider (5) little bit up and stack the end of the slider with the (2)'s end? Like this.
changed
• 00:21:296 (4,2) - Stack these two, you will get rid of a weird overlap.
• 01:01:070 (3,4) - Well...this pattern is really backstabbing (literally). I know it supposed to be an "Advanced" difficulty but this sudden jump is quite unexpected. What about putting these two notes (01:01:744 (4,5) - ) in front of (3) for better flow?
mhm. I'll wait for more feedback bore changing this one

Hard:
• Enable Widescreen Support.
(:
• 00:22:307 (1,3,4) - What about stacking these three notes together?
yep
• 00:37:138 (3) - Move this slider little bit for a perfect blanket. Like this.
yep
• 01:12:531 (4,5,6) - This pattern seems pretty unnatural imo. What about something more symmetrical?
changed
• 01:45:560 (6,1) - Blanket seems to be off a little.
changed

Nothing else to say.
I like the map and the song is pretty good. The game also looks awesome but I can't find any time to play JRPGs (except Valkyria Chronicles xD)
Alright, I hope this mod helps somehow and good luck. c:

Lethargy wrote:

Hello, returning a favor.

[General]

1. I would put more tags, stuff like bandai namco studios or genre of the music.
   indeed
2. Also, try putting preview point here 01:16:070 (4). Because this is the addicting part. This is what will make people play the song.
   prefer mine

[Normal]

1. 00:16:239 (4,1) - Maybe make these two parallel to each other? http://puu.sh/kjf0d/6fdefb9f34.jpg
   changed
2. 00:21:296 (3,4) - A bit of blanket nazi :>?
3. 00:29:385 (3,4) - Same.
   changed
4. 00:40:508 (4) - Maybe put this to x:125; y:175 as it imo flows better.
   changed
5. 00:51:969 (1) - In my opinion, the slider looks better, when the points are closer to the center http://puu.sh/kjffr/bc1faf8414.jpg
6. 00:53:992 (3,1) - This deserves a blanket.
   sure
7. 01:54:676 (2,3,4) - These three could be parallel to each other. http://puu.sh/kjfqP/9d08a2d2d5.jpg
   sure
8. 02:01:754 (4) - If I were you, I would map this "na", as it is quite important part of song.
   this is pretty much fade-out so I simplified rhythm here
9. 02:07:147 (4) - Same here.

[Advanced]

1. 00:14:891 (2) - Would curve this slider a bit more, in order to emphasize the guitar sound. http://puu.sh/kjfIv/d882292f7a.jpg
2. 00:21:633 (4,5) - I hate to be "that" guy (no, I don't :>), but blankets pls.
3. 00:27:700 (1,2) - Same
   sure
4. 00:27:025 (6,7,1) - The spacing here is a bit awkward in my opinion, since the transfer from 6 to 7 is more distant than from 7 to 1.
   changed
5. 00:36:464 (2,3) - Maybe blanket it more around 2's sliderend. (Ok, I am gonna stop with them, but try to fix the rest please).
   sure
6. 00:29:385 (4) - This note could be a bit more down so it would create triangles with 5's sliderend and 1's sliderstart and also with 2 and 5's sliderend. http://puu.sh/kjgnV/d98adc4534.jpg
   sure
7. 00:51:969 (1) - This slider could be simirarly like I mentioned in Normal diff.
   prefer to keep

[Hard]

1. You have disabled Widescreen support in this difficulty, while other difficulties have it enabled.
   yep
2. 01:05:452 (1,2) - This is quite hard to read, I know the feeling of stacking is fulfilling and A E S T H E T I C A L L Y pleasing, but I would look for ways to make this more comfortable to read.
   mhm, I'll look what I can do here
3. 00:51:969 (1) - Same thing like in two previous diffs.
4. 00:53:992 (6) - How about ctrl+g?
   jump will be too big
5. 00:54:329 (7) - Same, in order to create a nicely flowing... thing.
6. 01:22:306 (2,6) - Blanket these two, so that 2 will flow better and it will simply look better.
   sure
7. 01:27:373 (1,2) - Would put more spacing between these two, to alert players, that this part will be hard (if the song isn't already telling enough)¨
   changed

Pretty cool and addicting song. I might even play the game (sorry, gotta put you on delay again Chrono trigger). Anyway GL as it is nice map.

EDIT: Just added one more thing.

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

these japanese in tags means Tales of Zestiria？ it's a ps3 game so i think this should be add to tags, and TOZ maybe, because of abbreviation
this song is this game's OP, so i think OP should be add to tags
this song's genre is metal and rock？i think these 2 can add to tags if necessary
yep

i tihnk countdown is not necessary
mhm, alright

[Hard]

no advice in compose and pattern, just some advice in details

00:11:520 (1) - red point move to（236，37）to let first half and last half the same length
sure
00:16:913 (1,2) - not a perfect blanket
changed
00:25:004 (1) - i think this place can be the same as 00:36:464 (2) - , 2 red points
not a big deal
00:37:138 (3,4,1) - i think these 3 sliders can faster and faster, louder and louder, according to music sounds stronger and stronger, this instrument
nice idea
01:11:857 (3) - this maybe more suitable, this place have some vocal so
prefer current way
01:37:822 (1) - final white point move to（312，33）to let first 1/3 and last 1/3 keep parallel and the same length
sure
hmm,,,and can you increase volume in kiai part？ for example 70% ;D
yep

[Advanced]

00:33:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - ugly pentagon...
lol, tuned a bit
00:37:138 (3,4,1) - the same as Hard diff, but i think just increase volume is enough
sure
01:16:239 (1) - this slider looks a little strange...what about this slider？a little fix

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nice
01:57:372 (2) - move to（227，268）for a better blanket
sure

[Normal]

AR5 maybe too fast for the easiest diff, and bpm only 89, so what about AR4 or AR4.5？
I think 5 works fine
00:21:295 (3,1) - a little not good-looking...maybe balnket will be better, like this
changed
00:31:070 (2) - maybe need a 3/4 slider？
prefer to keep gap
01:29:732 (1,2) - 1.07 DS should be fixed and i like this even more！i like banket！
nice
01:37:822 (1) - first 1/3 and last 1/3 not parallel and not the same length so it's not beautiful enough, i think this slider can be more beautiful like this more beautiful？

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changed

ok that's all here is my mod and my star, GL xDDD

1. 00:16:239 (5) - this isn't should be NC ? the part beat did change, would be nice if NC so playes will knows that parts is beat 1/4 jump
2. 00:21:633 (5,1) - the body, you don't wanna cleap this overlaps ?
3. 00:48:598 (6) - missing NC
4. 01:37:148 (6) - ^ same

1. 00:06:126 (1) - missing add finish in begin

1. 00:18:262 (3,4,5,6) - thins thing look unsymentric for me, symentric ? like this http://puu.sh/kkDO3/cb5ce0ebcf.jpg
2. 00:21:296 (4) - don't wanna stack 00:19:273 (6) ? because mostly other parts you do stacks lol look like you miss this stack
3. 02:06:136 (3,4,5,6) - same happen in 00:18:262 (3,4,5,6)

1. 00:06:126 (1) - missing add finish in begin

1. 01:22:306 (2) - missing stack with 01:20:622 (3)

Pereira006 wrote:

[hard]

Gameplay:

1. 00:16:239 (5) - this isn't should be NC ? the part beat did change, would be nice if NC so playes will knows that parts is beat 1/4 jump
   indeed, changed for other similar case too
2. 00:21:633 (5,1) - the body, you don't wanna cleap this overlaps ?
   want to keep that one
3. 00:48:598 (6) - missing NC
   yep
4. 01:37:148 (6) - ^ same
   yep

[Advanced]

Hitsound:

1. 00:06:126 (1) - missing add finish in begin

Gameplay:

1. 00:18:262 (3,4,5,6) - thins thing look unsymentric for me, symentric ? like this http://puu.sh/kkDO3/cb5ce0ebcf.jpg
   sure
2. 00:21:296 (4) - don't wanna stack 00:19:273 (6) ? because mostly other parts you do stacks lol look like you miss this stack
   sure
3. 02:06:136 (3,4,5,6) - same happen in 00:18:262 (3,4,5,6)
   prefer to keep that one?

[Normal]

Hitsound:

1. 00:06:126 (1) - missing add finish in begin

yep
Gameplay:

1. 01:22:306 (2) - missing stack with 01:20:622 (3)

changed
Mapset is really solid, there no issues for me
Call me whaetevr when you get more mods or 12 star
Good luck

Regraz wrote:

Hi! M4M req!
I advise renaming the diffs into Normal Hard Insane. The DS in Hard diff is too large.
I don't think this is on insane level tho
[Normal]
00:30:396 (1) - Would be better in flow if change a direction: http://puu.sh/kkVge/7dae0953e8.jpg
prefer to keep that one
00:31:744 (3,4) - Reduce the volume of finish here. They are a little too loud.
changed
01:37:822 (1,2) - Make them parallel with each other
changed
[Advanced]
00:21:633 (5,1) - Keep 1.7 DS here.
changed
01:25:677 (1,1) - I still feel the recovery time is too short.
should be fine for 89bpm advanced
01:40:519 (1,2) - Use the same rhythm as 01:37:822 (1,2) -
changed
01:45:238 (5,6) - Quite hard to catch imo. Maybe combine them into one slider.
I think still easier than 1 short 4-repeat slider
[Hard]
00:10:846 (5) - Try to use a SV slow-down here with the slider, it would be quite recreational Same at 00:21:633 (5) - .
yep, but sv is pretty low already
00:16:744 (8,1) - Not recommend using stack here. There are strong beat and finish on the slider, a jump here would be much better, so you can get a nice connection with your former square jump. Same at 01:05:283 (4,1) - .
prefer to keep

nice!
Good luck!

Baraatje123 wrote:

[General]
I agree with Regraz, Advanced is too hard for advanced, so is hard
Normal - Hard - Insane feels more natural, mostly because it's quite low BPM, so a low difficulty is fine
prefer to keep naming, hard diff is really not insane level


[Normal]
01:56:698 (1) - Flow is too round. You use a lot of slider leniency, but here it's straight to the point. Move the end more up (think about DS)
changed
02:02:091 (1,3) - Why are these sliders, while in the similar parts you just use 1/1 circles?
changed

[Hard]
2.4-2.5 DS O.o
00:07:475 (3,4,5) - Plays weird, due to doublet + single, better make it a triplet or all spaced
00:12:869 (3,4,5) - ^^
00:18:262 (3,4,5) - ^^
00:23:656 (3,4,5) - ^^ Etc. Applies to the parts after the kiai as well
prefer to keep, cus of transfer to 5 is stronger and 3-4 is double whistle sound
01:10:509 (7) - Ctrl G, gives better flow, and creates a better distance
prefer to keep jump here to stress play
01:12:531 (4,5,6) - Make it more triangular
not intended to be right triangle but I moved this a bit? :p

Fix it quickly for qual-cap :3

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