This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, November 16, 2015 at 8:46:43 PM

Artist: BiBi
Title: Diamond Princess no Yuuutsu
Source: ラブライブ！ School idol project
Tags: Hinsvar Melancholy Lovelive! love live festival 矢澤にこ Yazawa Niko Nico 絢瀬絵里 Ayase Eri Eli 西木野真姫 Nishikino Maki 徳井青空 Tokui Sora 南條愛乃 Nanjou Yoshino 堀絵梨子 Hori Eriko Pile
BPM: 127
Filesize: 3488kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.52 stars, 99 notes)
2. Hard (2.97 stars, 251 notes)
3. Hinsvar's Expert (3.93 stars, 399 notes)
4. Hinsvar's Insane (3.56 stars, 342 notes)
5. Normal (1.94 stars, 137 notes)

Download: BiBi - Diamond Princess no Yuuutsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks School Idol Festival which let me know how great is BiBi
Thanks Setz for mp3
If you're gonna use this BG pls ask me first. i edited this bg by my own skill ;_;

aji

tfw your mod is tiny


[general]

1. widescreen support in hard/insane/extra actually matter for once turn them off or everything suckz. also something's wrong with hinsvar's bg stuff i dont even know gl
2. only epilepsy warning on easy what

[easy]

1. 00:15:506 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - changing slider velocity without adjusting sliderend positions niceeeeeeeee

[normal]

1. 00:08:655 (2,4) - placement where you don't have this overlap crap = good
2. 00:15:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - uh uh uh uh

[hard]

1. 00:10:781 (4) - i'm not really sure what the blue tick stuff you're following here is. if it's supposed to be like 00:08:537 (3) - , then it should be at 00:10:427 - right... and if you're doing it there, should be at 00:12:317 - as well cuz consistency stuff
2. 00:16:214 (2,4) - would look nicer if these had consistent visual spacing with 3 or something. soclose is eh and moving 00:15:033 (3,1,2) - all up is super easy
3. 00:43:616 (1,2,3) - uh turn on stacking in the editor and you'll realize what i want to say. manually stacking is probably easiest way to fix stuff
4. 00:55:191 (1,2,3) - distance snap is a dangerous thing isn't it u fucked up
5. 01:20:230 (2,3) - still not getting why you're doing this blue tick thing on only the first one, then ignoring it on the second and third at 01:22:120 (3) - 01:24:010 (4) - cuz like they are the exact same stuff

[insane]

1. 00:44:325 (3,4,5) - spaced 1/4 after super slow sv is more confusing than it should be. because of the slowness you can't really tell if the next thing is gonna be 1/2 or 1/4 away (unlike when things are fast and it's obvious). anything like bleh is ez
2. 01:04:285 (6,7) - 00:49:167 (6,7) - i get what you're mapping, but it's a major pain to interpret rhythm when intuitively people will always try to click on the super emphasized downbeat. for reference, while testplaying i interpreted both as just mlg 1/4 jumps becasue downbeat was where clicking seemed more appropriate

both of these are also on extra so they'd apply there, but because they're in two places there's even less chances of you actually changing them ugh im dying

[expert]>3.91 stars

1. 00:23:537 (2) - sounds a lot better when converted to circle+slider. clicking on the reverb after bam slidertail of 1 is so weird.
2. 00:28:734 (2) - pretty gross slider with tail more powerful than head. doing something where you can click on the red tick at 00:28:970 - is mucho bueno
3. 00:49:049 (7,8,9) - HOLY SHIT OK this one is even more misleading since you're not actually clicking on the first blue tick hting at 00:49:167 - so it's like you're not even mapping it then you stack 1/2 on blue ticks where there's blasting stuff on white and red i need to take a shower after looking at this much shit thanks

w.jpg is a solid color. filetype is jpg. could be saving over 10 kilobytes omg

do i even need to mod now that pishi is here.

Hi! as requested through PM
[General]

1. Im A Bit Unsure about the BG, it looks NSFW to me...
2. Do you forgot to add Hori Eriko's Japanese Name on the Tag, maksudnya Tulisan kanjinya
3. Add some AudioLeadIn I Guess? around 1500-2000?
4. as Pishi's said, why epilepsy warning only in Easy diff?
5. Err,, Cut the end of the mp3 I guess? to reduce the mp3 size

[Easy]

1. Check aiMod, found some unsnapped objects
2. 00:17:395 (2) - Umm, just my Suggestion, how about turning this into 1/2 with Reverse? and then remove 00:18:813 (3) - . Well.... Changing it to 1/2 Slider with Reverse still better imo
3. 00:22:828 - Unused Greenline?
4. 00:25:899 (5,1) - inconsistent Spacing. also, this 00:26:844 (1) - doesn't look symmetry with the (5). Try making it Symmetry please?
5. 00:48:576 (4,5) - change this into 1/1 slider plz? xd this is why the difficulty is a bit harder xd
6. 01:12:435 (1,3) - a Bit Touched , wait no, i guess if you move it out of grid it'll make the object offscreen right?

[Normal]

1. Aimod, Same issue with Easy
2. 00:08:655 (2,4) - Nice overlap xd. (4) should be moved to 412|176. that'll make the rhythm way from 2-4 looks like a triangle
3. 00:42:199 (2) - move the slidertail to 364|176? looks better imo
4. 00:54:482 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing xd
5. 01:00:151 (5,1) - ^
6. 01:09:600 (3,4) - ^
7. 01:22:592 (6) - forget to change the additions to normal?

[Hard]

1. Uhh Widescreen support is On here.
2. 00:21:884 (2) - Red node is Out of Grid xd
3. 00:16:214 (2,3,4) - fix the triangle path please xd
4. 00:24:954 (1,2,3) - I Suppose there's no 1/4 sounds here. try Re-hear that part i guess?
5. 00:43:616 (1,2,3) - Oops... What happened here, 00:44:206 (2) - Is Hided here xd
6. 01:27:080 - this should be changed with spinner i guess? its not same like the other lower diff

[Insane]

1. No Issues were found Just the widescreen thingy xd

[Expert]

1. Widescreen is On here, same with Hard and Insane
2. Streams like this 00:52:592 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - can be improved its symmetry tho, i found the streams here didn't placed symmetrically.
   Other than that seems Fine in this diff.

Sorry if the mods is not Helpful at all
[]
Good Luck everyone!

pishifat wrote:

tfw your mod is tiny
LOL

[general]

1. widescreen support in hard/insane/extra actually matter for once turn them off or everything suckz. also something's wrong with hinsvar's bg stuff i dont even know gl forgot to change lol
2. only epilepsy warning on easy what forgot to add rip

[easy]

1. 00:15:506 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - changing slider velocity without adjusting sliderend positions niceeeeeeeee fuck you hitsound copier

[normal]

1. 00:08:655 (2,4) - placement where you don't have this overlap crap = good fixed
2. 00:15:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - uh uh uh uh fuck you hitsound copier

[hard]

1. 00:10:781 (4) - i'm not really sure what the blue tick stuff you're following here is. if it's supposed to be like 00:08:537 (3) - , then it should be at 00:10:427 - right... and if you're doing it there, should be at 00:12:317 - as well cuz consistency stuff rip my ear, removed that and add for 00:11:017 -
2. 00:16:214 (2,4) - would look nicer if these had consistent visual spacing with 3 or something. soclose is eh and moving 00:15:033 (3,1,2) - all up is super easy yep
3. 00:43:616 (1,2,3) - uh turn on stacking in the editor and you'll realize what i want to say. manually stacking is probably easiest way to fix stuff oh my.. give a bit space for them instead
4. 00:55:191 (1,2,3) - distance snap is a dangerous thing isn't it u fucked up holyfuck since when i made this LOL
5. 01:20:230 (2,3) - still not getting why you're doing this blue tick thing on only the first one, then ignoring it on the second and third at 01:22:120 (3) - 01:24:010 (4) - cuz like they are the exact same stuff the first i followed the music since no drums i can hear at blueticks whenever for (2) and (3) i decided to follow drums more

w.jpg is a solid color. filetype is jpg. could be saving over 10 kilobytes omg waaaa

Haruto- wrote:

Hi! as requested through PM
[General]

1. Im A Bit Unsure about the BG, it looks NSFW to me... fuck eli you should buy an approciate cloth for her
2. Do you forgot to add Hori Eriko's Japanese Name on the Tag, maksudnya Tulisan kanjinya "堀絵梨子" lah ini apa
3. Add some AudioLeadIn I Guess? around 1500-2000? ga perlu soalnya udah di atur di SB jadi nya udah ada delay tanpa audio leadin
4. as Pishi's said, why epilepsy warning only in Easy diff? nah lupa add ke lainnya
5. Err,, Cut the end of the mp3 I guess? to reduce the mp3 size dikasih setz segini sih awkakaw. nanti gw tanya dia deh, tbh males ganti mp3 asdf

[Easy]

1. Check aiMod, found some unsnapped objects
2. 00:17:395 (2) - Umm, just my Suggestion, how about turning this into 1/2 with Reverse? and then remove 00:18:813 (3) - . Well.... Changing it to 1/2 Slider with Reverse still better imo contoh? soalnya aku ga terlalu ikutin vocal tapi lebih ke drum nya duk duk itu
3. 00:22:828 - Unused Greenline?
4. 00:25:899 (5,1) - inconsistent Spacing. also, this 00:26:844 (1) - doesn't look symmetry with the (5). Try making it Symmetry please?
5. 00:48:576 (4,5) - change this into 1/1 slider plz? xd this is why the difficulty is a bit harder xd because kiai time, actually i wanted some spots have clickable objects for sampleset normal hitsounds (2nd whitetick or 4th whitetick)
6. 01:12:435 (1,3) - a Bit Touched , wait no, i guess if you move it out of grid it'll make the object offscreen right? yepalso not touched in testplay so i think it's fine lol

[Normal]

1. Aimod, Same issue with Easy gw goblok aaaaa
2. 00:08:655 (2,4) - Nice overlap xd. (4) should be moved to 412|176. that'll make the rhythm way from 2-4 looks like a triangle
3. 00:42:199 (2) - move the slidertail to 364|176? looks better imo 148 instead
4. 00:54:482 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing xd darimana nya?
5. 01:00:151 (5,1) - ^ ^
6. 01:09:600 (3,4) - ^ ^
7. 01:22:592 (6) - forget to change the additions to normal?

[Hard]

1. Uhh Widescreen support is On here.
2. 00:21:884 (2) - Red node is Out of Grid xd kalo ga keluar ga moe flownya
3. 00:16:214 (2,3,4) - fix the triangle path please xd
4. 00:24:954 (1,2,3) - I Suppose there's no 1/4 sounds here. try Re-hear that part i guess? yep you try re-hear it too since i hear SO LOUD tick sound there
5. 00:43:616 (1,2,3) - Oops... What happened here, 00:44:206 (2) - Is Hided here xd
6. 01:27:080 - this should be changed with spinner i guess? its not same like the other lower diff yaa hinsvar aja ga ada spinnernya, gw cuma konsistensi aja

[Insane]

1. No Issues were found Just the widescreen thingy xd

[Expert]

1. Widescreen is On here, same with Hard and Insane
2. Streams like this 00:52:592 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - can be improved its symmetry tho, i found the streams here didn't placed symmetrically.
   Other than that seems Fine in this diff.

Good Luck everyone!

thank you ~
@Hinsvar : udpate dulu sebelum cek mod

[General]

1. Like someone else said, I don't know about the BG being NSFW or what, I guess since there is no pantsu visible its fine? I dont fucking know anymore, the rules just become more and more stupid with time. you should ask some QATs about this.

[Easy]

1. 00:12:671 (2) - I really don't know about using 1/2 in easy, this has been grounds for DQ in the past, I distinctly remember one of kibbleru's maps getting smacked down for this. although you might be able to get away with it due to BPM. but I wouldnt do it just to be safe. but, if you decide to keep, you should rotate this to improve flow and aesthetics, something like this
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:29:915 (4) - ^ same deal here, well, I will offer a suggestion that doesn't use the 1/2 slider. starting at 00:28:970 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
   well I will stop mentioning this now, its really up to you if you want to try your luck.
3. 01:06:529 (4) - the curve on this makes the flow after the reverse kind of uncomfortable, maybe remove the curve and re position 5 like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:24:482 (2) - copy pasta? lololol same suggestion as before for flow

[Normal]

1. alot of rhythms could be reworked here so that the strong beats arent on slider ends. example 00:07:947 (1) - 00:09:836 (5) - 00:11:962 (1) - etc
2. 00:21:175 (2,3) - can make this overlap look nicer by moving 3 up some
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:183 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:00:151 (5,1) - ^
5. 00:54:482 (3,4) - would look nicer if 4 was blanketed with 3
6. 01:17:395 (3,4) - ^
7. 01:05:112 (2,5) - move 5's tail so that it is parallel with 2
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:08:419 (2,3) - double here, but triple here 00:11:962 (2,3,4) - ? maybe some consistency would be nice here.
2. 00:24:954 (1,2,3) - dont you think the triple fits better at 00:24:836 - where there's a strong sound on the blue tick?
3. 00:32:277 (7) - slider end on strong downbeat makes me cry.
4. 00:37:592 (3) - is this clap intended? o.O

Not much else to say about the rest, except that I strongly agree with pishi's points for both of the insane GDs

lazy mod end

Setz wrote:

[General]

1. Like someone else said, I don't know about the BG being NSFW or what, I guess since there is no pantsu visible its fine? I dont fucking know anymore, the rules just become more and more stupid with time. you should ask some QATs about this.

[Easy]

1. 00:12:671 (2) - I really don't know about using 1/2 in easy, this has been grounds for DQ in the past, I distinctly remember one of kibbleru's maps getting smacked down for this. although you might be able to get away with it due to BPM. but I wouldnt do it just to be safe. but, if you decide to keep, you should rotate this to improve flow and aesthetics, something like this
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:29:915 (4) - ^ same deal here, well, I will offer a suggestion that doesn't use the 1/2 slider. starting at 00:28:970 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
   well I will stop mentioning this now, its really up to you if you want to try your luck.
3. 01:06:529 (4) - the curve on this makes the flow after the reverse kind of uncomfortable, maybe remove the curve and re position 5 like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:24:482 (2) - copy pasta? lololol same suggestion as before for flow yep, fixed on previous too for 1/2 sliders i think they are fine as long they have 1/1 gap to next/before objects

[Normal]

1. alot of rhythms could be reworked here so that the strong beats arent on slider ends. example 00:07:947 (1) - 00:09:836 (5) - 00:11:962 (1) - etc hmm cant fix for 00:07:947 (1) - 00:09:836 (5) - but fixed for 00:11:962 (1) - actually this is normal so it doesnt really a problem
2. 00:21:175 (2,3) - can make this overlap look nicer by moving 3 up some
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:183 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:00:151 (5,1) - ^
5. 00:54:482 (3,4) - would look nicer if 4 was blanketed with 3
6. 01:17:395 (3,4) - ^
7. 01:05:112 (2,5) - move 5's tail so that it is parallel with 2
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:08:419 (2,3) - double here, but triple here 00:11:962 (2,3,4) - ? maybe some consistency would be nice here. since the trumpet pitch sounds are different ;_;
2. 00:24:954 (1,2,3) - dont you think the triple fits better at 00:24:836 - where there's a strong sound on the blue tick? yep, i was thinking about that, thanks 4 reminding
3. 00:32:277 (7) - slider end on strong downbeat makes me cry.
4. 00:37:592 (3) - is this clap intended? o.O yep since the drum at here needs a hitsound.. maybe clap is just too weird.. changed to drum sampleset

Not much else to say about the rest, except that I strongly agree with pishi's points for both of the insane GDs

lazy mod end

thank you

@hinsvar : redl. gw ganti SB ganti BG.. fuck you eli

Hi Hinsvar & Xinely!
M4M as requested. Sorry for the late!

[General]

Is it a flashlight storymode? Lul
I may not recommand to use Black color combo during your flashlight SB, that may be to confuse to notice the objects.

[Easy]

00:12:671 : The flow can be improved by moving the tail to 464;24
00:28:970 : You swtich to 1/2 here which is legit since there's no beat on the big white tick. However i feel it bad since you don't use the beat at 00:29:206. Maybe consider changing this slider to 1/2 reverse?
00:42:199 : ^
00:43:143 : Again the flow can be improved by moving the tail to 80;200, the movement with the mouse will not be strict anymore and the path to follow next is more logic.
00:49:994 : I don't know if you try to create blanket but meeehh. :<
00:55:191 : Maybe you should rotate this slider and create a blanket (inb4 gtfo)

Pretty clean diff. Just some point that can be improved. The rythm is good. Insta HR / DT / HD / FL fight

[Normal]

00:02:986 : I find the flow weird but... there's nothing to improve it. Oo. Maybe move the tail of 00:03:222 more the right, because we can make a kind of circle move here and right now that looks more like a zigzag. :<
00:05:112 : You should move the tail to 484;68, again better flow blehbleh.
00:38:891 : Again for a better flow, you can ctrl-h it. But it's less elegant, so it's up to you.
00:43:143 : I don't understand why you don't use a 1/2 reverse slider lie the 2 others.
00:53:301 : Wow, combo color problem
01:01:805 : Spacing problem, as you may see, the distance between (2) & (3) is different from (2) & (4), that's not really beautiful.
01:27:080 : You made a NC here. So you missed that one i guess.

Clean diff. I like it, but the section i pointed for the DS made me some questions if the Distances are perfect everywhere. Maybe you shouldn't use Grid snap. It's quite easy to get a DQ because of the failed distance.

[Not Hinsvar's Hard]

00:01:332 : You can improve a bit this blanket x)
00:13:616 : Even if i also use 3/4 + 1/2 sliders (i love them), it sounds weird here. Even if it's a legit one. a 1/2 slider + 1/4 circle + 1/2 slider is way better imo. Maybe it's the hitsound used that makes it weird.
00:17:395 : You may have forget this NC.
00:24:836 : Stacking these circle doublets may confuse. I would not recommend it.
00:32:513 : You should go for a slider here imo. This part has too much circles and that's not what your doing on the whole mapset (excepted the section before the kiai but it's legit, here you're in the middle of the music with no difference)
01:08:773 : Dem, this kind of spacing. Oo
01:10:781 : Love this section. gj
01:22:474 : Same about stacking, you should stay at 0.7 DS.

Nice mapping, also sometimes questionnable about the spacing (not jumps but basic DS), i didn't checked tho. Sorry. :<

[Hinsvar's Insane]

00:03:388+ : The slider sound is so meehh, you should go on the same way as XInely here. :<
00:05:821 : These kind of notes are quite shy. Maybe a volume up?
01:04:285 : Why are you going for sliders here when you can stream?

Ewww i'm so bad at modding insane and more. I don't really play standard nowadays :'(
Tfw can't say anything on higher diffs.



Hope i could help you and gl hf for rank.

Here comes the bad mod, however, your request~
Note : Edited

[General]

1. No widescreen support? I guess you need to
2. Maybe add AudioLeadIn 1000?
3. Looks clean~

[Easy]

1. 00:08:419 - Could you give me some reason why you made this beat being a non-clickable entirely at this sequence? For me, would be nice to having some kind of these beat become clickable entirely
2. 00:17:395 (2,3,1,2) - Don't you think by transform them into the same with 00:15:506 (1) - would make the diff more easier to read? I don't think that pause being prominent in this rhythms actually, so better to hold every each of 1/1 for 2/1
3. 00:34:876 (2) - I don't really think holding this slider at this rhythm would fits nicely, I'd rather to transform them into separated 1/1 instead
4. 01:27:080 (1) - Not trying to use a spinner to emphasis this beat within this circle? It's also applied to Normal and Hard too

[Normal]

1. 00:08:419 - Same as Easy, there are few of this kind of beat that being a non-clickable beat here, except 00:12:199 - . Don't you think by making them into clickable like 00:12:199 - would push a whole nice rhythm relation across the song
2. My personal thought, I don't feel right about the spacing, since it's really far away from Easy . Honestly, I don't recommend you to have this diff plays with this spacing, but I can't do anything if it's fine

[Hard]

1. 00:00:860 (2) - 00:04:639 (2) - Don't you feel the rhythm is constant with 00:02:750 (2,3) - ? If it's a variety, I don't think it suits well, at least for me . Making them consistent with 00:02:750 (2,3) - is whole nice than this

[Hinsvar's Insane]

1. 00:40:781 (2,3) - How about try to cover all of 1/4 that appeared here? It started on 00:40:781 - and ended on 00:41:254 -
2. 01:13:380 (1,2,3,1) - (1), (2), and (3) carry out the strongest beat I've heard in this sequence, so why jump to 01:14:088 (1) - has more bigger than 1>2>3 before? I'm not really sure that there's something that support the jump, so I think a little rearrange especially for spacing here should be fine . Also, such a pity with this 01:14:561 (1) - since it doesn't have such spacing like before, even though this beat is the loudest from all in my opinion
3. 01:24:010 (3,4) - Since you haven't use this kind of sudden spacing (After spaced stream, suddenly turns into a stack), it would be a bit hard to be read . Making them played like this 00:10:073 (2,3,4,5) - or 00:11:962 (2,3,4,5) - (the similar part at the intro section) should be more playable than before

[Hinsvar's Expert]

1. 01:22:120 (4,5) - 01:24:010 (4,5) - Same reason with your Insane, better to make it same with what shown at the intro section

[]
Nice! But I feel doubt about the spacing spread from Easy to Normal . I can't say anything for this
Good Luck!

Hello! I'm here as you requested!~ why ipas is everywhere I mod isdjsijdsdjiosjdij lol


Hmm That's it from me, the diffs are nice. However, I didn't like too much the rhythm on Hinsvar's diffs, but this is just my opinion as I said b4, and everyone has your own mapping style XD, please don't be mad with me ;w;.

wa

美丽觉得ready了就叫我<3

pishifat wrote:

[insane]

1. 00:44:325 (3,4,5) - spaced 1/4 after super slow sv is more confusing than it should be. because of the slowness you can't really tell if the next thing is gonna be 1/2 or 1/4 away (unlike when things are fast and it's obvious). anything like bleh is ez Made the circles not spaced.
2. 01:04:285 (6,7) - 00:49:167 (6,7) - i get what you're mapping, but it's a major pain to interpret rhythm when intuitively people will always try to click on the super emphasized downbeat. for reference, while testplaying i interpreted both as just mlg 1/4 jumps becasue downbeat was where clicking seemed more appropriate

both of these are also on extra so they'd apply there, but because they're in two places there's even less chances of you actually changing them ugh im dying Since the drum on the downbeat at 00:49:521 is less noticeable than the instruments at the blue tick, I believe this should be rather easily readable. It might be a weird decision coming from me, but I believe this is the right one.

[expert]>3.91 stars I'm considering on making this harder.

1. 00:23:537 (2) - sounds a lot better when converted to circle+slider. clicking on the reverb after bam slidertail of 1 is so weird.
2. 00:28:734 (2) - pretty gross slider with tail more powerful than head. doing something where you can click on the red tick at 00:28:970 - is mucho bueno
3. 00:49:049 (7,8,9) - HOLY SHIT OK this one is even more misleading since you're not actually clicking on the first blue tick hting at 00:49:167 - so it's like you're not even mapping it then you stack 1/2 on blue ticks where there's blasting stuff on white and red i need to take a shower after looking at this much shit thanks damn son
   
   I believe this is really okay, though, for the reason I explained in Insane.

Haruto- wrote:

[Expert]

1. Widescreen is On here, same with Hard and Insane
2. Streams like this 00:52:592 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - can be improved its symmetry tho, i found the streams here didn't placed symmetrically.
   Other than that seems Fine in this diff.

Aldwych wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]

00:03:388+ : The slider sound is so meehh, you should go on the same way as XInely here. :< Uhm, not really sure about that... I think it's fine as is, really. I just can't see any reason to do that.
00:05:821 : These kind of notes are quite shy. Maybe a volume up? ^
01:04:285 : Why are you going for sliders here when you can stream? Emphasizing the instruments on the blue ticks.

Karen wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane

1. 00:07:828 (4,1) - whoa, can you at least overlapping them, this is a light insane after all.
2. 00:41:490 (4,1) - you should make a jump here imo, 00:41:726 (1) - move it a bit left. Moved lower instead.
3. 00:44:325 (3) - NC for 0.5xSV
4. 01:24:010 (3,4) - you didnt do this kind of stack in other places, so i suggest to do overlap with DS Intentional to further emphasize the instrument at the beginning of (4).
5. 01:25:781 (2,4) - i think using sliders to express the music here would be much better.

Hinsvar's Expert

1. 01:25:781 (2,4) - same with insane
2. cant say more, cant understand your style and im lazy like a pig.

Fixed the ones not replied; thanks!

http://puu.sh/koyzb/8f70b96be6.rar

Hello
My mod from your m4m queue

[General]

1. From 01:30:151 - there is totally no sound. I think you should cut the mp3 at this point (although the AIMod doesn't say anything )

[Storyboard]

1. I think most of the players, especially experienced ones will turn off SB when playing. So you should make you SB more fit to Easy diff (such as start the move of lyrics/kura at (433,209) instead of (181,332) to avoid being covered by 00:21:175 (3) )
2. From the start to 00:07:947 is a bit boring. Only black!. I think it is ok if you add somethings like "Beatmap: Hinsvar", "Storyboard: Xinely", etc... or some visual effects, Idk
3. 01:20:230 - From this point, I don't understand.. Sometimes, the background turn black totally, sometimes not, with the same map, but it's not shown in the editor. Please fix
4. 01:20:230 - again, from this I think you should make some visual effects, such as fade out or tint the background (Ha ha, it makes me think of this http://lovelace-media.imgix.net/uploads ... 90b447.png)

[Easy]
SS at the first try

1. I'm a bit confused. In the kiai time, you put the strong sounds (such as cymbal), at circle, slider head, tail, repeat arrows. That makes me feel lost, don't know what to follow.
2. 00:02:277 (4) - I prefer it to curve down-up in stead of up-down like this. If you agree, do it with 00:00:388 (1) too
3. 00:06:529 (4) - Make a red slider point at this?
4. 00:36:293 (3) - Curve down-up
5. 00:46:687 (2,3) - Blanket better: http://puu.sh/kr14i.png
6. 00:49:521 (1,2) - Don't know if you want to make a blanket or not, but I don't think it looks well
7. 00:53:301 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3739335
8. 00:55:191 (4) - Rotate clockwise a bit
9. 00:58:498 - A red slider point?
10. 01:11:726 - ^
11. 01:27:080 (1) - I think a slider like Insane or Expert is better. A circle at red tick is hard to hit accurately.

[Normal]
SS at the 2nd try (1 x 100 at the last circle )

1. 01:01:332 - Not like 00:45:978 (voice at 00:45:506 is ignored), the sound 01:00:624 is noticed, so ignoring 01:01:096 make me lost
2. 01:27:080 (5) - Same as easy

[Hard]
SS at the first try

1. 00:02:041 - This sound can be mapped, anyway it just a suggestion
2. 00:06:057 (1) - I prefer a repeat 1/4
3. 00:08:419 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/kr6tA.png
4. 00:09:836 - ^
5. 00:15:151 - This sound is quite strong. Well, it's hard to map this without changing many things you mapped :3
6. 00:45:269 (4,5) - I think this is a bit too hard. A mini slider is fine. Or a triplet can keep the start of the lyrics.
7. 00:50:230 - I think the vocal is more noticeable than the cymbal, so making a fold might make sense
8. 00:51:411 (1) - Maybe a bit overmap, but I think end it at 00:51:765 could make sense
9. 01:15:978 (1) - I like it not to be straight.
10. 01:17:395 (4) - Reverse it (Just because I like it, feel free to ignore )
11. 01:25:309 - A note here?
12. 01:26:372 (3,4,5) - Too hard, especially with player who hear the song the first time. I suggest http://puu.sh/kr7g6.png

[Insane]
I started modding at about 6 hours ago, but I something happened and I had to turn off my pc until now
10 retries ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3739241

1. 00:07:828 (4,1) - Is it too hard to accurate? I think this space is ok in extra diffs, but in Insane, it's quite strange and hard
2. 00:41:962 (2,3) - Quite weak sounds. I think this is ok: http://puu.sh/krbPo.png
3. 00:46:923 (5,7,9) - Strong sounds. I think it would makes sense if you do something like this: http://puu.sh/krc4c.png
4. 00:49:167 (6,7) - Everytime I play this diff, I get lost. Don't know what the two sliders follow, and you miss 00:49:521 ?
5. 01:04:285 (6,7) - ^

[Expert]
Nah, can't FC within 10 tries

1. 00:29:443 (4) - I think reversing it gives better flow
2. 00:45:388 (2,3) - Stack them like Insane feel good
3. 01:27:080 (1) - This is Love Live!, so I want to make some fan service ) (Don't think too much, I have never watched LL and I'm not a fan of this series. "μ's" is what I found on the Internet...) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3740263

Nice map. Good luck both of you

Hinsvar wrote:

Fixed the ones not replied; thanks!

http://puu.sh/koyzb/8f70b96be6.rar

OMG, I modded wrong version .
Hopes my mod is still helps

Hihi~ from in-game pm

[Hinsvar's Expert]
00:29:325 - adding a circle here?
00:40:545 (5,6,7,8,9) - increasing ds (x1.4 maybe?) here fits the high-pitch sound better imo.
00:49:049 (7,8,9) - would be better if you add some 1/4 notes here. you could try something like this: 01:04:167 (6,7,8) - ^
01:14:206 (5) - I think it's better to not ignore the sound here 01:14:325 -. how about making this a reverse slider?
01:25:781 (2,3) - would be better stacking those two notes. it can emphasize the beat here 01:25:899 - more imo
01:28:734 - the hitsound on the sliderend is a bit too loud. maybe decrease the volume (to 50%?)

[Hinsvar's Insane]
other than some issues mentioned in Expert diff, I have nothing to say about this diff

[Hard]
01:27:199 - add a spinner at the end?

[Normal]
00:07:238 (6) - would be better if you change it into a 1/2 slider.
00:19:285 (1) - since there is no obvious music change, I would use the same rhythm you use here 00:15:506 (1,2,3) -

[Easy]
00:46:687 (2,3) - blanket (If you intended to make one)

Sorry for the late/bad mod ;_;
and star~ for the awesome map!

Hope it helps!!

thank you for mods all

sorry im so late, recently busy with university, i will go to check mods in weekend

hi





good luck!