1. dripping wet (5.75 stars, 1241 notes)

pkk wrote:

can I have some water please

fallist wrote:

This Map Made Me WEt X) Dripping WEt PP Xp Like if you Agree ~~!!

1. drum-hitfinish has a slight delay which makes it sound strange when used, so you should really cut it. If you want i've done it just for you here!
2. Same goes for soft-hitclap10 and soft-hitfinish!
3. Not sure on Slider Tick Rate 2 tbh, it seems a bit too much especially for the slow sliders. Are you sure you don't want to use STR 1?
4. 00:02:726 - I would reduce the volume a bit here (to 15% maybe?) since as of now the notes here seem to be a bit louder than the song, i think it would be cool to have them a bit lower on volume
5. 00:23:690 (1,1,2,3) - I'm pretty sure this whole pattern is actually 1/3, remember to snap it well
6. 00:36:702 (1) - I would make the end of this slider blanket the beginning for some EXTRA COOL slider art Not a big thing actually but you may like this slider if done in this way:
   
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   339,163,36702,6,0,B|368:136|376:96|376:96|408:116|452:112|452:112|456:152|448:176|436:208|396:216|380:236|376:256|368:280|384:312|404:328|444:328|472:312|488:288|492:252|484:220|440:164|392:224|388:244|388:280|312:264|276:232,1,640,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 00:53:329 (1,2) - I would silence both of the sliderends there, since there doesen't seem to be any big sound to emphatize and as of now these sound quite awkward right there, silencing them would make the transition even smoother imo
8. 00:59:654 (4) - Considering how the "bells" here become more intense I would make this slider spaced a bit further to make the doublet here follow the song a bit better... An option could be having it on x:332 y:8, as it goes on quite well with the other pattern. See if you like it!
9. 01:10:859 (1) - I don't think this New Combo is needed since there isn't any big variation in the song or in the pattern, I'd remove it
10. 01:13:570 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would personally space these out from the 1/4 slider as they can be considered as a separate sound from the one at 01:13:389 (1) - ! It would also make the flow a bit better imo since as of now it's kind of anticlimatic to have such a crowded stream after a fast slider Here's an example on how you could do this. If you do this remember that the same applies for all the similar parts in this song, both here and after the kiai!
11. 01:34:353 (2) - I'd remove the clap here, since all the kicks go until right at this point, even though I guess you can keep just the whistle instead
12. 01:42:937 (4,5) - you could turn this in a triplet just like you've done before, it works really good with the synth there and you could make a pretty cool pattern by doing something like this! The same applies for 01:54:503 (4,5) - if you decide to follow this suggestion!
13. 01:45:196 (2) - I'd remove the whistle from the beginning of this slider, while it works pretty good with 01:45:016 (1) - because of that sound that is being played there here it doesen't do much and it sounds unnecessary, so you'd better remove it imo
14. 01:57:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shouldn't this work on the other way, as in spaced stream ---> crowded stream here? This is basically the point where there is the transition between the heavy and the medium part, so I'd do it the other way, considering how the song is losing impact here! Here's an example of what you could do (even though that i've done is kind on untidied xD)
    
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    452,272,116943,6,0,B|400:264|400:264|352:276,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    285,349,117214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    196,364,117305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    124,320,117395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    116,284,117485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    120,260,117576,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    128,244,117666,6,0,L|8:259,1,120.000004577637,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

15. 02:09:955 (4) - I'd rather make this a slider like 02:10:497 (1) - , it looks better and it should also flow quite good
    
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    348,276,129955,2,0,B|344:245|344:245|356:189|356:189|352:157,1,120.000004577637,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,76,130497,6,0,B|292:80|292:80|348:68|348:68|380:72,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

16. 02:48:991 (1,2) - Again, I'd suggest you to silence the slider-ends here!
17. 02:59:654 (6) - This would flow quite good if you unstacked it and placed it at x:436 y:80 instead, it goes on quite well with the following slider 02:59:835 (1) - and also makes more sense pattern-wise imo. Try it out
18. 03:31:765 (3) - I'm not sure about having this stacked, especially now that the whole rhythm continues going on... Not a big thing actually, but it would probably be better if you unstacked it and put it elsewhere (try using 03:31:075 (3,4) - 's slider starts/ends as a place and see if it works)
    03:39:524 (3) - This idea could be a bit "copied" from my mapset, but replacing 03:40:213 (1,2,3,4) - with a slider like this one with half of the SV (0,63x) would be awesome (even though it may be just me here haha)
19. 03:50:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would have expected the stream here to actually go higher in spacing seeing how the song is becoming more and more intense, I'd at least make this an higher ds than the previous stream to do this!
20. 03:53:834 (3) - Same as 03:31:765 (3) -, I would place this at x:324 y:288 (03:52:886 (2) - 's start) to make it smoother to play overall. See if you like it!
21. 04:24:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not too sure about the playability of this one, I'm not sure this can work really well here I'd personally make this a simple stream decreasing gradually in spacing again to reflect the song, though it's mainly your choice here.
22. 04:46:765 (1,1) - pls such copypaste xd

-kevincela- wrote:

[dripping wet]

1. drum-hitfinish has a slight delay which makes it sound strange when used, so you should really cut it. If you want i've done it just for you here! aaa THANK YOU SO MUCH. I know it has that shitty delay and i was going to ask someone to edit it out but because of this, thank you <3
2. Same goes for soft-hitclap10 and soft-hitfinish! oh my, thank you, i didn't even know about this one.
3. Not sure on Slider Tick Rate 2 tbh, it seems a bit too much especially for the slow sliders. Are you sure you don't want to use STR 1? alright changed.
4. 00:02:726 - I would reduce the volume a bit here (to 15% maybe?) since as of now the notes here seem to be a bit louder than the song, i think it would be cool to have them a bit lower on volume done, volume in the beginning's been reworked.
5. 00:23:690 (1,1,2,3) - I'm pretty sure this whole pattern is actually 1/3, remember to snap it well o nice!
6. 00:36:702 (1) - I would make the end of this slider blanket the beginning for some EXTRA COOL slider art Not a big thing actually but you may like this slider if done in this way: much better o: thank you
   
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   339,163,36702,6,0,B|368:136|376:96|376:96|408:116|452:112|452:112|456:152|448:176|436:208|396:216|380:236|376:256|368:280|384:312|404:328|444:328|472:312|488:288|492:252|484:220|440:164|392:224|388:244|388:280|312:264|276:232,1,640,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 00:53:329 (1,2) - I would silence both of the sliderends there, since there doesen't seem to be any big sound to emphatize and as of now these sound quite awkward right there, silencing them would make the transition even smoother imo ok, i'll do the same thing for the ones before the second part
8. 00:59:654 (4) - Considering how the "bells" here become more intense I would make this slider spaced a bit further to make the doublet here follow the song a bit better... An option could be having it on x:332 y:8, as it goes on quite well with the other pattern. See if you like it! o nice, changed, i put it a tad bit further than that tho. just a bit.
9. 01:10:859 (1) - I don't think this New Combo is needed since there isn't any big variation in the song or in the pattern, I'd remove it changed.
10. 01:13:570 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would personally space these out from the 1/4 slider as they can be considered as a separate sound from the one at 01:13:389 (1) - ! It would also make the flow a bit better imo since as of now it's kind of anticlimatic to have such a crowded stream after a fast slider Here's an example on how you could do this. If you do this remember that the same applies for all the similar parts in this song, both here and after the kiai!holy shit that looks sick.
11. 01:34:353 (2) - I'd remove the clap here, since all the kicks go until right at this point, even though I guess you can keep just the whistle instead o.. didn't even notice.
12. 01:42:937 (4,5) - you could turn this in a triplet just like you've done before, it works really good with the synth there and you could make a pretty cool pattern by doing something like this! The same applies for 01:54:503 (4,5) - if you decide to follow this suggestion! hmmm I really like the current pattern tbh. this could definitely work, but notice that i did the doubles in 01:54:503 (4,5) - as well so, i guess that stream jump is a one time thing. for each kiai in this part since i kinda broken it down to 2= 01:35:799 - and 01:46:823 -
13. 01:45:196 (2) - I'd remove the whistle from the beginning of this slider, while it works pretty good with 01:45:016 (1) - because of that sound that is being played there here it doesen't do much and it sounds unnecessary, so you'd better remove it imo good catch!
14. 01:57:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shouldn't this work on the other way, as in spaced stream ---> crowded stream here? This is basically the point where there is the transition between the heavy and the medium part, so I'd do it the other way, considering how the song is losing impact here! Here's an example of what you could do (even though that i've done is kind on untidied xD)
    
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    452,272,116943,6,0,B|400:264|400:264|352:276,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    285,349,117214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    196,364,117305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    124,320,117395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    116,284,117485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    120,260,117576,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    128,244,117666,6,0,L|8:259,1,120.000004577637,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

15. 02:09:955 (4) - I'd rather make this a slider like 02:10:497 (1) - , it looks better and it should also flow quite good changed
    
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    348,276,129955,2,0,B|344:245|344:245|356:189|356:189|352:157,1,120.000004577637,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,76,130497,6,0,B|292:80|292:80|348:68|348:68|380:72,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

16. 02:48:991 (1,2) - Again, I'd suggest you to silence the slider-ends here! yep!
17. 02:59:654 (6) - This would flow quite good if you unstacked it and placed it at x:436 y:80 instead, it goes on quite well with the following slider 02:59:835 (1) - and also makes more sense pattern-wise imo. Try it out changed, but at x420y96 xd to prevent any stacks because stack leniency is at 0.1
18. 03:31:765 (3) - I'm not sure about having this stacked, especially now that the whole rhythm continues going on... Not a big thing actually, but it would probably be better if you unstacked it and put it elsewhere (try using 03:31:075 (3,4) - 's slider starts/ends as a place and see if it works) nah i'd rather stack it because 1 and 2 is stacked
    03:39:524 (3) - This idea could be a bit "copied" from my mapset, but replacing 03:40:213 (1,2,3,4) - with a slider like this one with half of the SV (0,63x) would be awesome (even though it may be just me here haha) I don't understand xd
19. 03:50:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would have expected the stream here to actually go higher in spacing seeing how the song is becoming more and more intense, I'd at least make this an higher ds than the previous stream to do this! ok xd more buffs yay, but i think i'll just make the second one stream jumps.. i think it fits.. o.o probably wrong but i'll do it anyways until a better idea pops in my head because upwards stream with high DS plays so weird.
20. 03:53:834 (3) - Same as 03:31:765 (3) -, I would place this at x:324 y:288 (03:52:886 (2) - 's start) to make it smoother to play overall. See if you like it!
21. 04:24:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not too sure about the playability of this one, I'm not sure this can work really well here I'd personally make this a simple stream decreasing gradually in spacing again to reflect the song, though it's mainly your choice here. i'll keep this one.
22. 04:46:765 (1,1) - pls such copypaste xd

copy paste rotate best editor feature xddddDDdDDDD

And that's it! Nice map overall, I like it best mod i've ever gotten.

1. looks fine

1. 00:41:943 (6) - I can feel like ctrl+g this would make flow here 00:41:220 (4,5,6,1) - nice
2. 01:14:654 (2) - I think move this a bit to the right will make the transition here 01:14:293 (1,2) - a bit bette like it make (2) a bit easier to catch imo , try move (2) to around x304 y344?
3. 01:15:558 (1) - move this to around x284 y108 would make the slider leniency thing here 01:15:016 (1,2,1) - play a bit better imo
4. 01:16:461 (1) - ctrl+g this will make the flow here 01:16:100 (1,1) - somewhat pretty much fit with the music where it got loud beat here 01:16:461 - and also would make flow here 01:16:461 (1,1,1) - fit the music where it like consistant beat sound
5. 01:23:449 (1,1,1) - the nc spam here somewhat make these a bit confuseing to play since the player might not know what note they need to play here they might go directly at 01:23:690 (1) - after finish 01:23:449 (1) - which make them miss a note very easy , also would be good to use consistent spacing here 01:22:967 (1,1,1,1) - the 1/4 circle jupms kinda a bit really tricky thing to play here even for pro player
6. 01:38:510 (1,1,1) - similiar to above , player might go directly to 01:38:750 (1) - after finish 01:38:510 (1) -
7. 01:44:293 (1,1,1) - ^
8. 01:50:076 (1,1,1) - this would be ok to nc spam tho since it a linear flow which most player would know how to flow here , also don't know why you use nc spam tho lol ?
9. 02:15:829 (5) - this note sound overmapped :s
10. 03:07:064 (1) - curve this to the right a bit would make stream shape here 03:06:160 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1) - looks better imo
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11. 03:08:509 (1,2,3) - would be better to use 1/4 reverse slider like what you did here 03:07:064 (1) - , using circle make thing play a bit awkward here imo
12. 03:11:375 (1,2,3) - same^
13. 03:38:317 (1,2) - I think if you swap place of these two notes it will make 03:38:317 (1) - a bit easier to catch
14. 04:23:489 (2) - is this beat suppose to be snapped to 1/4 ?
15. 04:25:127 (5,6,7,1) - would be good to make the spacing a bit consistent the use of 1/4 jumps can be a bit really tricky an hard to play even for pro player imo
16. 04:35:041 (5) - nc for spacing change ? this will make thing a bit easier to read
    
    nothing much to say on wub wub part ( can't pass it tho asfkfjgkrj )

CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m as requested

[general]

1. looks fine

[dripping wet]

1. 00:41:943 (6) - I can feel like ctrl+g this would make flow here 00:41:220 (4,5,6,1) - nice transitioning to 1 would be a HUGE jump then. I like the way it currently plays.
2. 01:14:654 (2) - I think move this a bit to the right will make the transition here 01:14:293 (1,2) - a bit bette like it make (2) a bit easier to catch imo , try move (2) to around x304 y344? it would feel like there's a stop if i put it in front of the slider. the goal of this is to get a high speed movement with the cursor to prepare the player for the spaced stream.
3. 01:15:558 (1) - move this to around x284 y108 would make the slider leniency thing here 01:15:016 (1,2,1) - play a bit better imo This would ruin the pattern :C also, i feel like 01:15:558 (1) - should require very little movement of the cursor because in 01:15:016 (1,2,3) - the tone keeps getting lower
4. 01:16:461 (1) - ctrl+g this will make the flow here 01:16:100 (1,1) - somewhat pretty much fit with the music where it got loud beat here 01:16:461 - and also would make flow here 01:16:461 (1,1,1) - fit the music where it like consistant beat sound good catch! changed
5. 01:23:449 (1,1,1) - the nc spam here somewhat make these a bit confuseing to play since the player might not know what note they need to play here they might go directly at 01:23:690 (1) - after finish 01:23:449 (1) - which make them miss a note very easy , also would be good to use consistent spacing here 01:22:967 (1,1,1,1) - the 1/4 circle jupms kinda a bit really tricky thing to play here even for pro player the key is the combo colors B) i've specifically set the whole mapset to have 2 combo pairs for wubz and for normal parts. and the NC is used to express 1/3 rhythms. Players who are capable of passing through the parts before this should be able to read it as they're skilled enough to see the spaced triples and SV changes.
6. 01:38:510 (1,1,1) - similiar to above , player might go directly to 01:38:750 (1) - after finish 01:38:510 (1) -
7. 01:44:293 (1,1,1) - ^
8. 01:50:076 (1,1,1) - this would be ok to nc spam tho since it a linear flow which most player would know how to flow here , also don't know why you use nc spam tho lol ?
9. 02:15:829 (5) - this note sound overmapped :s if you listen very carefully at 25% speed to, there's a hi-hat sound there
10. 03:07:064 (1) - curve this to the right a bit would make stream shape here 03:06:160 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1) - looks better imo
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    yes, but throughout the map, there hasn't been any curved 1/4 slider, except for one that was used for a blanket but i'll probably change it after this update. so it kind of doesn't belong to the whole map aesthetics xddd. also it would ruin the setup i made for 03:07:877 (5,6) -
11. 03:08:509 (1,2,3) - would be better to use 1/4 reverse slider like what you did here 03:07:064 (1) - , using circle make thing play a bit awkward here imo
12. 03:11:375 (1,2,3) - same^
13. 03:38:317 (1,2) - I think if you swap place of these two notes it will make 03:38:317 (1) - a bit easier to catch agreed. changed.
14. 04:23:489 (2) - is this beat suppose to be snapped to 1/4 ? i'm pretty sure yea xd
15. 04:25:127 (5,6,7,1) - would be good to make the spacing a bit consistent the use of 1/4 jumps can be a bit really tricky an hard to play even for pro player imo intended because the sound of 04:25:041 (4,5) - compared to 6,7,1 is different. so there's another jump there. this stream sounds so powerful it's hard not to make a stream jump imo.
16. 04:35:041 (5) - nc for spacing change ? this will make thing a bit easier to read applied.
    
    nothing much to say on wub wub part ( can't pass it tho asfkfjgkrj )

good luck

Rohit6 wrote:

Hiya

01:38:510 (1,1,1) - Hard to hit accurately because antijump triple , I tried ctrl+g'ing the last 2 circles and changing the slider's position and it played well that would honestly be more awkward to play, and too linear xd
01:51:612 (4) - Youre missing a key beat on the red tick i can't hear anything on it, only the wubz which is why that slider is there.
01:57:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks cool but doesnt seem necessary imo i reduced the overall distance snapping by 0.2, i agree, most of the testplays miss there anyways. so i could agree with this. something's gotta be done.
03:01:823 (3,4,5,6) - Personally I would avoid doing this because its a normal 5 circle stream for the whole section and the double after the 1/4 slider doesnt really suit as well in this slow part the kick slider is for hitsounds but the reason why they're doubles is because i want that part to play according to the uh.. idk what it's called but the double rhythms. I'm sure you understand.
03:50:213 (1) - ????? :^) ;)
04:35:730 - All sliderart is counter-clockwise , not a big deal but flip one or two of those intentional, if it's flipped, it'd be too linear imo. linear doesn't play too well unless they're streams. would kind of be awkward, when slowing the cursor down after moving to the slider's head.

Couldn't find any ore problems in this map , really well made and hitsounding is on point as well.
Hope this gets ranked soon

1. 00:18:811 (6,1) - Antijump plays quite awkwardly here
2. 00:41:943 (6,1) - Incorrect stack (minor)
3. 01:38:510 (1,1,1) - I don't think people can properly play this (the first time they play this map) There is no clue this is in 1/3, better make them sliders
4. 01:44:293 (1,1,1) - ^^ Applies to later similar things as well
5. 01:46:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Might be me, but this is incredibly hard, due to the offbeat ness, why not add some 1/4 sliders for the 1/2 circles?
6. 01:57:576 (5) - The sudden low distance feels awkward, consider highing the DS so it's (close to) the same as the previous notes
7. 02:49:714 (1) - BEAUTIFUL!
8. 03:51:248 (5,6,7,8) - Why are these in a group of 4? Usually, the amount of objects in a group gets lower, but here it goes from 8 to 2 (2x) to 4, better make it 8 4 2 2
9. 04:35:730 (1,1,1,1) - Lower the volume, to 10-20% at max. The sldierticks make this feel really loud and bad. Or pick a silent slidertick.wav (make sure sliderslide is NOT silent then!)
10. 05:18:575 - Add spinner until 05:24:006 with gradually lowering Volume%

Baraatje123 wrote:

A bit late, sorry for the delay

[dripping wet]
Gimme a towel please

1. 00:18:811 (6,1) - Antijump plays quite awkwardly here changed.
2. 00:41:943 (6,1) - Incorrect stack (minor) fixed
3. 01:38:510 (1,1,1) - I don't think people can properly play this (the first time they play this map) There is no clue this is in 1/3, better make them sliders Hmm, from all of the testplays I've received, which includes Alumetorz, Fallist, Mazzerin, Guy, xsrsbsns, they all didn't fail to read this as 1/3. the NC should be a clear enough indication of the 1/3 rhythm I think.
4. 01:44:293 (1,1,1) - ^^ Applies to later similar things as well same
5. 01:46:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Might be me, but this is incredibly hard, due to the offbeat ness, why not add some 1/4 sliders for the 1/2 circles? I think it's fine the way it is, if anything's incredibly difficult, it is definitely not that part lol
6. 01:57:576 (5) - The sudden low distance feels awkward, consider highing the DS so it's (close to) the same as the previous notes the music suggests a pattern as such tho imo because of the fading sound.
7. 02:49:714 (1) - BEAUTIFUL! :) I agree xd thank you
8. 03:51:248 (5,6,7,8) - Why are these in a group of 4? Usually, the amount of objects in a group gets lower, but here it goes from 8 to 2 (2x) to 4, better make it 8 4 2 2 because there is no drum sound at 03:51:420 (7) -
9. 04:35:730 (1,1,1,1) - Lower the volume, to 10-20% at max. The sldierticks make this feel really loud and bad. Or pick a silent slidertick.wav (make sure sliderslide is NOT silent then!) I think they're fine, this volume is consistent with the ones at 00:25:317 -
10. 05:18:575 - Add spinner until 05:24:006 with gradually lowering Volume% Hmmm, I like the way it is tho, the fade out doesn't need anything imo.

Great map, I love it!
You can call me back after 12 SP and 2 more mods! Will do!