1. Spiritual Amethyst (5.28 stars, 3085 notes)

Karen__ Gaia _ Rizia___

- W A R N I N G -


IF YOU HEAR SOUND "IKUYO", PREPARE TO SINGLETAPPING 220 BPM

Vicho wrote:

NOZOMI IS BEST GIRL

Jemmmmy wrote:

这个歌手唱的节奏有点不准啊 是有點不準...;w;
像00:22:718 (4) - 00:26:718 (8) - 之类的其实都可以放蓝线上，不过随意吧 這個我是跟鼓的
01:00:158 -
01:47:737 (3,4) - 距离短了一点点 fixed
02:23:506 (8,9) - 02:24:429 (2,3) - 两个间距不一样呢 fixed
03:08:678 (3) - 删？先留住
04:50:909 (1,2,5) - 有点挤 fixed
05:05:369 (1,2,3,4) - 不搞规则点的四方？不了;w;
06:20:836 (8,10) - 这没音呢 怎麼我聽到有音OAO..還是先留住吧
08:35:611 (1,2,3) - 间距不等 fixed
08:51:429 (5,1,2) - 干脆叠起来 想弄些所以沒叠了
11:43:565 (4,5) - 调整下曲度？ fixed
11:46:339 (5,6) - ^6 有点太弯了吧 fixed
12:47:394 (7,1) - 间距远了点 是downbeat所以我放遠了點
12:55:236 (3) - 弯点 好
13:54:097 (1) - 离2远些 好

结果还是水了。摸不出啥来

-Hakurei- wrote:

lel Nozomi ver. XD

call me for free NM

-Hakurei- wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

lel Nozomi ver. XD

call me for free NM

and now, someone has forgotten about this :p

ohh anyway, hitsound stuff~~~

DreaM117er wrote:

我努力看看能不能摸出什麼

[哇！超市！]

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  00:15:051 - 這裡沒有要circle嗎?? 聲音很明顯
  00:51:654 (2,1) - 為什麼這裡是轉換跟vocal了?? 強烈建議改回跟聲音
  02:21:775 (6) - 我個人強烈建議這個circle不要比較合曲
  03:38:356 (3,4,1) - 這裡你用1/1跳，03:45:467 (4,5,6) - 這裡你卻填滿了...把1/1的space填起來吧，裡面也有拍手聲
  05:26:834 - 這裡還有個聲音，要不要跟上??
  06:50:103 (3) - 重音的分布很奇怪...都換成circle?? 這個我覺得滑條還可
  06:56:816 - 嗚哇...這裡的聲音超級不明顯耶 還可以啦0.0
  09:10:884 (2) - Ctrl+G吧 我想09:10:884 (2,3) 有跳
  09:41:247 (2) - 我感覺這個稍為跳得有些遠
  09:52:884 (2,3,4) - 整個Ctrl+G?? 不了音樂很弱
  10:25:537 (2) - NC
  11:52:235 (3) - 換成circle+三連打感覺比較合曲 不了
  12:16:125 (2) - 就這樣整個排列，這個circle是多餘的，不要比較好 這兒音樂漸強呀
  12:38:506 (5) - ^
  12:44:696 (4) - NC 我覺得不必要
  14:12:784 - 加個circle??
  14:45:284 - ^, 中間有鼓聲漏掉了

1. 最後一段，旋轉的三角形，每三個一個NC，方便讀圖（跟這裡一樣）

我喜歡LoveLive! 可是我不太喜歡她的個人單曲
總之...飛吧

1. find someone who can do timing check for you, just to make sure on everything first
2. check all of the parts for the hitsound stuff carefully by using Playback Rate 25%

1. it would be good idea if you set a mixed hitsound (whistle+clap) like 02:54:900 (3) - head, 02:55:345 (1) - tail, and so on, because it will be more sense if you follow like 2 instrument beats on it

1. 00:10:163 (4) - nope, it should be clap
2. 00:10:163 (4) - remove this finish
3. 00:10:829 (1) - finish
4. 00:17:329 - clickable object here. add a note
5. 00:20:829 (1) - try to remove a whistle since there is no instrumental stuff on it, just a vocal of course
6. 00:26:663 (8) - blue tick
7. 00:30:163 (2) - don't forget to add clap
8. 00:35:496 (2) - remove finish
9. 00:36:163 (3) - finish
10. 00:37:496 (1) - finish
11. 00:40:829 (2) - clap

1. 00:52:363 (1) - remove this finish, cuz i don't think using finish should be good
2. 00:57:796 (4) - stack on 00:56:615 (7) - ?
3. 00:59:922 (7) - missing head clap
4. 01:06:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - starting from that green line timing, use clap for all of them, since i have checked them many times by using playback rate 25%
5. 01:08:899 (3) - clap
6. 01:09:843 (6) - clap
7. 01:10:788 (2,5) - clap
8. 01:17:875 (1,2) - i don't think finish is suitable for this
9. 01:19:292 (3) - drum finish

1. i think 88345 will do for this offset part
2. LL SIF BG menu ehh?
3. 01:56:045 (1) - finish here, like what you did on 01:54:199 (1) -
4. 02:11:737 (4) - 2nd part, normal sampleset
5. 02:15:429 (6) - ^ on tail
6. 02:18:660 (2,10) - ^, not 02:18:890 (4,8,12) -

1. 02:34:011 (1,3) - someone needs to neat this blanket a bit
2. 02:39:345 (1) - clap tail
3. 02:40:678 (3) - clap head
4. 02:41:122 (1) - clap tail
5. 02:42:456 (6) - clap head
6. 02:42:900 (1) - clap tail
7. 02:46:122 (9) - remove this clap. it doesn't follow any instrument there
8. 02:53:567 (1) - clap tail
9. 02:54:900 (3) - clap head
10. 02:55:345 (1) - clap tail
11. 02:56:678 (6) - clap head
12. 03:09:567 (1) - remove finish
13. 03:16:011 (4) - whistle (head + tail)

1. offset: 231013
2. 03:21:468 - 03:35:690 - KIAI
3. 03:27:690 (4) - whistle
4. 03:30:356 (1) - whistle
5. 03:34:134 (1,2) - i'd use a normal sampleset for this
6. 03:39:245 (1) - whistle, not finish
7. 03:42:134 (3) - normal sampleset
8. 03:45:467 (4) - whistle
9. 03:46:356 (1) - whistle, not finish
10. 03:47:245 (3) - normal sampleset at tail

1. 04:06:223 (4) - tail clap
2. 04:12:334 (1) - remove finish
3. 04:19:445 (1) - ^

1. Offset: 273629
2. 04:38:391 (6) - clap default like 04:41:844 (5) - , or did you even made an error at 04:41:844 (5) - timing set?
3. 04:45:729 (1,2) - neat this blanket
4. 04:53:714 (5) - normal sampleset, not clap
5. 04:58:463 (3) - finish
6. 04:59:542 (1) - ^
7. 05:06:017 (4) - it doesn't make any sense for this normal sampleset

1. 05:24:156 (4,5) - (5) should be normal sampleset, not (4)
2. 05:27:584 (1) - normal sampleset
3. 05:56:084 (4,5,6) - lower this volume since the music fades out

1. Offset: 357650
2. 06:13:600 (1,3) - would be good idea if you set a whistle on these 2 ((3) head)
3. 06:22:201 (1,2,3) - looks like finish spam here
4. 06:29:124 (5) - clap
5. 06:33:320 (2) - clap
6. 06:35:418 (3) - i get the point why you set 3/4 slider + reverse only, but here's my preference though if you want to follow the instrument parts better http://puu.sh/lcHcC/a8ceeab9ac.jpg (this should apply on the other 3/4 sliders)
7. 06:38:669 - i heard a note here. add it please

1. offset: 422525
2. 07:04:137 (1) - clap tail
3. 07:05:337 (3) - clap
4. 07:06:537 (4) - remove finish
5. 07:10:137 (5) - tail clap
6. 07:10:537 (1) - whistle
7. 07:13:737 (1) - missing whistle/finish
8. 07:16:937 (1) - finish
9. 07:23:337 (1) - whistle
10. 07:24:937 (1) - whistle
11. 07:26:537 (1) - ^
12. 07:28:137 (1) - ^
13. 07:29:737 (1) - ^
14. 07:31:337 (1) - ^
15. 07:34:237 (7,8,9) - clap
16. 07:36:137 (1) - whistle
17. 07:37:737 (1) - ^
18. 07:39:337 (1) - ^
19. 07:52:137 (1) - ^
20. 07:53:737 (1) - ^
21. 07:54:937 (5,1) - lower this volume a bit

1. what's with maki and nico doing over there? owo
2. 08:23:214 (2,4) - neat this blanket
3. 08:29:881 (7,8) - 1) lower this volume. 2) (8) tail finish

1. offset: 514151
2. LMAO dat BG though
3. 08:34:884 (1,2) - (1) tail clap drum, (2) head finish drum
4. 08:39:975 (1,2) - blanket should be more neater i guess huehuehuehue
5. 08:47:975 (3) - wut? it's clap, not whistle
6. 08:50:157 (1) - 2nd part clap
7. 08:52:520 (2,1) - this blanket could be more neater huehuehue
8. 09:11:975 (1,2,3) - what's this spacing? 09:11:975 (1,2) - is 1.54x, but 09:12:157 (2,3) - is 1.5x. so, move 09:11:975 (1) - to 14|192
9. 09:11:429 (4,5) - neat this blanket please
10. 09:14:702 (1) - clap tail
11. 09:15:701 (5,7,3,7) - clap
12. 09:16:338 (5) - NC
13. 09:17:247 (9) - just confirmed myself that the head should be drum clap
14. 09:27:793 (1) - clap tail
15. 09:28:520 (3,4,5,6) - clap (soft)
16. 09:28:883 (7,8,9) - (7) and (8) should be drum clap, while (9) is drum finish
17. 09:49:793 - on this timing here, there are missing claps on some notes :/

1. offset: 594281
2. 09:57:490 (2,4) - clap/normal sampleset
3. 09:59:975 - 10:22:697 - KIAI
4. 10:09:916 (1) - finish
5. 10:10:626 (3) - ^
6. 10:14:176 (1) - tail normal sampleset
7. 10:16:306 (3) - finish
8. 10:20:301 (3) - normal sampleset
9. 10:20:744 (8) - finish drum

1. lewd Chaoslitz who selected this BG owo
2. 10:35:076 - 10:57:664 - KIAI
3. 10:33:841 (2,3,4) - i heard a drum here, so normal sampleset here please
4. 10:40:194 (4) - i know that you used a normal sampleset as a clap sound, but this one doesn't :/
5. 10:41:429 (3,1,2) - someone needs to fix this blanket a little bit
6. 10:44:958 (1,2) - normal sampleset ((1)'s 2nd part)
7. 10:45:841 (4,6) - ^
8. 10:57:664 - on this timing right here, all those white ticks should be normal sampleset due to drums on it

1. 11:16:513 (1,2,3,4) - i heard a drum here. clap please
2. 11:18:940 (5) - clap
3. 11:33:680 (3,4) - fix this blanket a bit
4. 11:41:310 (6,7) - clap
5. 11:43:565 (4) - clap
6. 11:43:912 (5) - remove clap
7. 11:46:339 (5,6) - ^
8. 11:48:420 (1,2) - (1) tail clap, not (2)
9. 11:49:114 (4,5) - wrong hitsound set. remove (5) clap, and add (4) head clap

1. offset: 719290
2. lewd Chaoslitz, dat BG of Nozomi's "stuff" >///<
3. 12:06:919 (1) - finish
4. 12:14:538 (1) - ^
5. 12:16:919 (1) - ^
6. 12:18:030 (4,1) - almost neat for me
7. 12:28:506 (1,2) - (1) all normal sampleset, (2) Auto sampleset (soft of course)
8. 12:28:982 (3) - finish
9. 12:42:950 (3,4) - neat this blanket

2. 13:01:804 (1,2) - neat this blanket
3. 13:10:375 (1) - finish
4. 13:12:824 (1) - ^
5. 13:17:110 (2,1) - almost neat blanket
6. 13:21:549 (1) - finish
7. 13:22:161 (3,4,5) - normal sampleset
8. 13:22:620 (1) - finish + normal sampleset on tail
9. 13:23:232 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - normal sampleset
10. 13:31:804 (3) - i heard a cymbal here, so finish
11. 13:37:773 - i heard a note here. add a note + normal sampleset

1. offset: 819458
2. 13:41:000 (2) - don't forget to add clap
3. 13:50:747 (2) - ^
4. 13:55:239 - i heard a drum note here, so add a note with clap
5. 13:55:315 (1) - clap tail
6. 13:57:295 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - clap
7. 13:58:208 (2,3) - neat this blanket
8. 14:02:625 (1) - finish
9. 14:06:584 (2) - finish
10. 14:07:498 (1) - ^

1. 14:19:213 (7) - normal sampleset
2. 14:30:784 (1) - finish
3. 14:32:213 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - normal sampleset
4. 14:36:356 (1) - http://puu.sh/lgmDg/834fc1dab3.jpg (better do something on this in a different way)

1. offset: 896481
2. nico's trying to get the cake from eli =w=
3. fuck those triangles stuff LOL
4. 15:15:439 (2,3) - neat this blanket
5. 15:21:575 (1) - you added finish on the previous note, but this one doesn't

Lily Bread wrote:

tiny mod.

04:05:112 (5) - 和之后的滑条圆弧方向不一致 往右调整一下 好
04:28:112 (4) - 可以考虑删掉 這個我覺得還可以
06:41:082 (1) - 反向？不了距難太大
僕らは今のなかで 的offset好像有点问题。改了

Kencho wrote:

[Storyboard]

1. 第5和第6首歌沒了BG，BG文件夾裡面也沒見有BG5和BG6 我有呀
   
   第10首歌沒了歌曲名稱，看了下是代碼弄錯了，應該是"sb\t10.png" 我是故意不用0的,不知道為啥每次用"10"都有問題
   
   SPOILER

   

[Spiritual Amethyst]

1. 00:34:718 (7) - 這個我覺得去掉比較好，因為實際上沒有音，打起來有點難觸摸 原本是想跟vocal,原來那是1/4,改了
   
   00:41:496 (4,5) - 間距可以大一點，2.5x左右吧 好
   
   01:12:206 (1,2) - 01:12:914 (3,4) - 這裡間距小點比較好，始終是1/4，特別前面12容易誤認1/2 ok
   
   02:51:345 (6,1) - Blanket好 好
   
   03:29:245 (2) - 03:31:023 (2) - 這兩個滑條換成1圓圈+1滑條比較合適 個人還是覺得1/1比較好
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   03:59:445 (6) - 這個位置滑條用1.25x如何，可以突顯vocal也沒這麼單調，另外如果改的話記得加NC 不用了也太多>_>
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   04:27:889 (3,4) - 這裡換成滑條？向上面說的那樣用1.25x
   
   03:53:223 (4,5) - 03:54:112 (2,3) - 這兩個地方也一樣可以改，看你個人意願吧
   
   06:12:551 (4,1) - 我覺得4疊到1上面會好點 jump會變得有點怪
   
   06:25:348 (3) - 建議NC ok
   
   09:09:611 (2) - 換成1滑條+1圓圈？因為09:09:975 - 這個位置我覺得clickable會比較好 不了
   
   09:12:520 (4,5) - 跟vocal的話像這樣會好點 不是vocal w
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   10:24:295 (2) - NC？ok
   
   12:14:538 (1,2) - 2放遠一點，因為隔了1拍而不是1/2拍 好
   
   12:48:823 (1,2,3,4) - 間距可以再大一點 好
   
   13:37:328 (1,2) - 這個2必須放遠點，玩的時候讀錯了，或者我覺得可以刪掉也行 ok
   
   13:45:569 (1,2) - 這裡太空了，要不把12都換成滑條 我覺得沒問題
   
   13:48:005 (1,2,3) - 這裡也是，123都可以換成滑條
   
   14:12:784 (2) - 強烈建議NC 好
   
   14:13:213 (3) - 這個應該放在和4比較近的地方，而不是和2近的地方，或者我覺得直接疊在4上面就好了 ok
   
   14:56:894 (3) - 強烈建議NC ok
   
   14:57:166 (2) - 應該放遠點，因為和前面隔了1拍，可以試試這樣放 好啊
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   15:20:894 (3,4) - 這個位置和上面說的一樣，3要NC，4放遠點 ok
   
   15:00:848 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不知道有多少人會死在這串三角orz，還有後面那些，如果是我的話肯定不會放這種尾殺了 因為高pp啦,而且我覺得這個挺好的, pp得來不易

choikapo wrote:

Hitsound

15:27:030 (1) - ----> http://puu.sh/lbEP0/a143b3db7c.wav
15:27:030 (1) - ----> http://puu.sh/lbDkA/ff951dee02.wav
10:35:076 - 10:57:311 ---> http://puu.sh/lbFy4/b2d95f71d3.wav added
Maybe I Don't really know ;w;

Lily Bread wrote:

widescreed support跟letterbox应该关掉，没有SB也没有break time

[Basic]
01:25:248 (2,3,4) - 很不合曲..既然Easy没法押到这么多音，那就用一根滑条带过去吧，感觉比用3个什么音都没押到的滑条好上不少。

[Medium]
AR4？感觉5好一点
00:16:005 (2,3) - stack
01:28:654 (2,3) - ^
00:28:167 - 这里没有音乐，考虑不折返？
01:40:492 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:28:330 (3) - 这里乍看像是1/4，做为hard来说稍稍有坑人嫌疑
01:12:276 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这种bpm下出现这种串就已经不能算hard了吧...至少也是hyper了

建议把现有hard再做难点然后改个难度名，再新增一个简单的hard
4.5星以上摸不动，抱歉

可以求m4m吗？

-Tochi wrote:

M4M

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  General

1. This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards. probably fine, it isn't flashy at all
2. No tags? later, later ww

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  Spiritual Amethyst

1. 05:25:227 (2) - Maybe move to 328|212 for better jump? Maybe move 05:25:441 (3) - too if the jump here 05:25:441 (3,4) - is too big.
2. 06:32:690 (1,2) - Improve this blanket from: http://puu.sh/lcShP/a0fcde2cbe.png to: http://puu.sh/lcSjY/a6cf7be71b.png
3. 15:33:439 - Add a circle maybe? nah this seems fine to me

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  Feedback

  
  Sorry, couldn't find much D:
  Nice map, good luck on it!
  I'll give it a kd!