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senya - Yakusoku no Chikara

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Topic Starter
Santtu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21. maaliskuuta 2017 at 19:52:43

Artist: senya
Title: Yakusoku no Chikara
Source: 艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags: smsh150 -Mo- yuuhei catharsis satellite morinaga mayumi 森永真由美 終焉の輝き 幽閉カタルシス 宇佐美宏 岡宮道生 かませ虎 南方海域強襲偵察 Autobahn C87 KanColle Kantai Collection
BPM: 150
Filesize: 5599kb
Play Time: 03:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Abyssal Catharsis (4,41 stars, 707 notes)
  2. Hard (3,25 stars, 477 notes)
  3. Mo's Normal (1,77 stars, 211 notes)
Download: senya - Yakusoku no Chikara
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal by -Mo-

Song Informations
Song Informations
  • Title: 約束のチカラ
    Album: 終焉の輝き
    Circle: 幽閉カタルシス
    Composer: 宇佐美宏 (Hiroshi Usami) & 岡宮道生 (Michio Okamiya)
    Vocal: senya
    Lyrics: かませ虎 (kamase-tora)
    Arrangement: Autobahn
    Release Day: December 29, 2014 (C87)
modders
Hendrix89
Keada
fattypikachu
-Tochi
BladesofSteel
Chocox
eeezzzeee
__Ag
Alveryn
Reya
ShogunMoon
Dailycare
Fanteer
_Yiiiii
DavidEd
Lulu-
Lasse
MrSergio
Nao Tomori
-Mo-

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Modders total: 20
Hendrix89
Hi there M4M from your queue,

Mo's Normal:
00:58:097 (1,2,3,4) - make these sliders into singles, put a single on every white tick
02:08:497 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - change up the rhythm like this:
also make it so that the note before the slider is stacked on the slider
02:14:897 (1,2,3,4) - make these sliders into singles, put a single on every white tick
03:12:497 - why the break here, the music doesn't really change from here to the end of the song so i don't see why we have the big pause

Abyssal Catharsis:
00:26:897 (4) - make this into two single, makes it more interesting
00:45:297 (1,2) - make these two into two singles each
02:10:497 (2) - ctrl G
02:10:897 (3) - ^
02:14:897 (1,2) - stack
02:15:297 (3,4) - ^
02:15:697 (5,6) - ^
02:27:097 - add a 1/2 note slider here
02:32:497 (1) - move this slider right 1/2 a note and add a note where the slider began, 02:32:497
02:34:697 (4,5,6) to 02:39:897 (7,8,9) - there are too many triples in this section, you can add in some 1/4 beat sliders that repeat once
02:51:297 (5) - replace the slider with a single
02:55:697 (1) - shorten this slider by a 1/4 beat
03:12:497 - why the break here, the music doesn't really change from here to the end of the song so i don't see why we have the big pause

Overall it's a good map, sorry I didn't find too much your map doesn't have too many errors.
Good luck with the map
-Mo-

Hendrix89 wrote:

Hi there M4M from your queue,

Mo's Normal:
00:58:097 (1,2,3,4) - make these sliders into singles, put a single on every white tick Since this is a NHI spread, I avoided using combos of circles to make the difficulty easier. The sliders map the song just fine for this difficulty.
02:08:497 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - change up the rhythm like this: Not a bad idea. I didn't go with this exactly, nor where you pointed out, but I do agree the current rhythm would get a bit repetetive and uninteresting.
also make it so that the note before the slider is stacked on the slider No on the stacking though. I personally dislike stacks on Normals.
02:14:897 (1,2,3,4) - make these sliders into singles, put a single on every white tick As before.
03:12:497 - why the break here, the music doesn't really change from here to the end of the song so i don't see why we have the big pause This was to keep consistency with the other difficulties. I'll do whatever smsh150 decides on this.
I'm not even close to finishing this in terms of placement on the field, but I guess it didn't matter too much. Thanks for the help.

I'll drop my update when I do more work on this. If you're a future modder, please avoid modding my diff for now.
Topic Starter
Santtu

Hendrix89 wrote:

Hi there M4M from your queue,

Abyssal Catharsis:
00:26:897 (4) - make this into two single, makes it more interesting yes, why not :O
00:45:297 (1,2) - make these two into two singles each maybe not, I don't feel to make those circles
02:10:497 (2) - ctrl G changed
02:10:897 (3) - ^ changed
02:14:897 (1,2) - stack I don't see reason to stack them
02:15:297 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:15:697 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:27:097 - add a 1/2 note slider here I'm not sure, there isn't anything that really calls for it...
02:32:497 (1) - move this slider right 1/2 a note and add a note where the slider began, 02:32:497 nah, it can be there as it is
02:34:697 (4,5,6) to 02:39:897 (7,8,9) - there are too many triples in this section, you can add in some 1/4 beat sliders that repeat once In insane you can have that many triples.
02:51:297 (5) - replace the slider with a single imo slider fits better
02:55:697 (1) - shorten this slider by a 1/4 beat It is meant to go like that, it's like different version of 01:13:297 (1) - .
03:12:497 - why the break here, the music doesn't really change from here to the end of the song so i don't see why we have the big pause I wanted to put break there, cause map doesn't have it anywhere else. It just felt nice to put break there.

Overall it's a good map, sorry I didn't find too much your map doesn't have too many errors. np, the mod was good.
Good luck with the map
Thank you for modding, and sorry for checking this mod so late! Q_Q
Keada
Hey there :D/ here's the mod you asked for

Abyssal Catharsis:
  1. 00:15:897 (4) - Im not that big a fan of sliderends with a strong note D: try with a few notes instead, or the slider starting here 00:15:697 (3) -
  2. 00:16:697 (1) - didnt fit that much with a jump here imo D: almost no music in bg for this note.
  3. Just saying it here, cause its my opinion in this, but where there are claps like for example here 00:17:697 (5) - There it fits with a jump cause the note is the strongest note in this song D: but yeah, ill not point out stuff, just saying it like that
  4. 00:25:297 (1) - maybe this with 1/6 and only one reverse here? would be better to play, and it sounds better too imo
  5. 00:27:297 (6) - the rotation of this slider was a bit meh to play D:
  6. 00:33:897 (4) - big white tick on sliderends are no good D: unless it really plays well (and now I see, you have alot of them in the map D: try your best to keep them as NCs and a note/slider on the big white ticks, not sliderends ;-;
  7. 00:24:297 (2) - this for example is fine, since its not sliderend but a tick in a reverse slider :D
  8. 00:38:397 (5) - sliderhead shouldnt have whistle
  9. 00:50:697 (1) - just a suggestion, make this slider one tick less and add a note at 00:51:297 - cause strong note
  10. 00:58:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - consider big jumps at white ticks, cause there is where the strong note is.
  11. 01:02:497 (5,6) - just a suggestion again, to make 1/4 sliders look like this for example? http://puu.sh/lvHzJ/6a4202259d.jpg
  12. 01:13:997 (1,2) - try to make them more visible
  13. 01:16:897 (2) - what fits better imo is to make this in 1/4 and add a note here 01:17:197 - would be cool to play :D example: http://puu.sh/lvHFR/a28056345d.jpg
  14. 01:44:097 (5) - this loses flow
  15. 02:02:897 - why isnt this mapped note mapped ;-; shouldnt be a 1/1 slider here D:
That was all for me :D couldnt find that much more
But Goodu lucku :D The other diffs looked nice as well :D
Topic Starter
Santtu

Keada wrote:

Hey there :D/ here's the mod you asked for

Abyssal Catharsis:
  1. 00:15:897 (4) - Im not that big a fan of sliderends with a strong note D: try with a few notes instead, or the slider starting here 00:15:697 (3) -
  2. 00:16:697 (1) - didnt fit that much with a jump here imo D: almost no music in bg for this note.
  3. Just saying it here, cause its my opinion in this, but where there are claps like for example here 00:17:697 (5) - There it fits with a jump cause the note is the strongest note in this song D: but yeah, ill not point out stuff, just saying it like that There are claps ;w;?
  4. 00:25:297 (1) - maybe this with 1/6 and only one reverse here? would be better to play, and it sounds better too imo yes I agree ^^
  5. 00:27:297 (6) - the rotation of this slider was a bit meh to play D:
  6. 00:33:897 (4) - big white tick on sliderends are no good D: unless it really plays well (and now I see, you have alot of them in the map D: try your best to keep them as NCs and a note/slider on the big white ticks, not sliderends ;-; I'll try to explain why I have sliderends on white tick: For example: 00:15:897 - This note has the melody there, and it end and 00:16:097 - . The reason Why I put sliderends to white tick, is that the music/melody calls for it. It's really hard to explain in English since I can't speak it so well ;w; I hope you understood
  7. 00:24:297 (2) - this for example is fine, since its not sliderend but a tick in a reverse slider :D
  8. 00:38:397 (5) - sliderhead shouldnt have whistle
  9. 00:50:697 (1) - just a suggestion, make this slider one tick less and add a note at 00:51:297 - cause strong note that could work well too, I'll consider
  10. 00:58:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - consider big jumps at white ticks, cause there is where the strong note is.
  11. 01:02:497 (5,6) - just a suggestion again, to make 1/4 sliders look like this for example? http://puu.sh/lvHzJ/6a4202259d.jpg
  12. 01:13:997 (1,2) - try to make them more visible
  13. 01:16:897 (2) - what fits better imo is to make this in 1/4 and add a note here 01:17:197 - would be cool to play :D example: http://puu.sh/lvHFR/a28056345d.jpg
  14. 01:44:097 (5) - this loses flow
  15. 02:02:897 - why isnt this mapped note mapped ;-; shouldnt be a 1/1 slider here D:
That was all for me :D couldnt find that much more
But Goodu lucku :D The other diffs looked nice as well :D
Thank you so much for modding!!
All where is no comment are changed/fixed!
fattypikachu
Hello from your M4M queue! :)

[Mo's Normal]

00:24:097 (2,3) - Blanket
00:32:097 (5,1) - Blanket

00:38:097 (5,6) - This rhythm might be confusing. Maybe try...


01:16:497 (3,4) - Same as above.


01:54:897 (5,6) - ^
02:58:897 (3,4) - ^

00:48:497 (1) - Maybe try to align this with 00:47:697 (3) - ?

02:13:297 (4) - Maybe try...


03:00:497 (2,3,4) - Try moving 03:01:097 (3) so that it forms a straight line.

There are a few more tiny blanket issues, but they should be fine.

[Hard]

00:20:097 (3,4) - Blanket
00:52:497 (3,4) - ^
00:53:297 (1,2) - ^
01:53:697 (4) - ^
02:58:097 (1) - ^

00:25:297 (2,3) - Maybe try to rearrange it so it looks better. Like...


00:38:397 (2) - Having the slider ends on blue ticks doesn't seem to fit with the song.
01:55:197 (2) - ^

00:41:897 (7) - Move it up to about (460,56) so that it forms a triangle.

00:44:097 (3) - Move it up a little bit so that it blankets better with 00:43:297 (4) -

00:54:897 (1,2,3) - Try making this into a triangle.

00:57:297 (4,5) - These two aren't even.

01:50:697 (4,1,2,3) - Rearrange it so that the sliders circle 01:50:697 (4) - , like


[Abyssal Catharsis]

00:44:097 (2) - Blanket with either 00:43:297 (5) - or 00:44:697 (3) -
01:07:697 (1,2,3) - Blanket
01:45:897 (6,1) - ^
01:45:897 (6,1) - ^
02:53:697 (2,4) - ^
03:05:097 (4,5) - ^

00:31:297 (3) - I'm pretty sure this was supposed to be perfectly vertical.

00:31:297 (3,4,5) - This isn't symmetrical. You should probably fix it.

That's it! Good luck! ^_^
-Mo-

fattypikachu wrote:

[Mo's Normal]

00:24:097 (2,3) - Blanket This isn't necessary.
00:32:097 (5,1) - Blanket Nor is this.

00:38:097 (5,6) - This rhythm might be confusing. Maybe try...

01:16:497 (3,4) - Same as above.

01:54:897 (5,6) - ^
02:58:897 (3,4) - ^ Eh maybe. I think the rhythm sounds a lot better how it is currently, but I can see where you are coming from. I'll leave it for now, but I may change it after some more feedback.

00:48:497 (1) - Maybe try to align this with 00:47:697 (3) - ? I don't see an issue with what I currently have.

02:13:297 (4) - Maybe try... This is actually quite nice.

03:00:497 (2,3,4) - Try moving 03:01:097 (3) so that it forms a straight line. The crooked pattern was intentional, but I reduced it a bit now..

There are a few more tiny blanket issues, but they should be fine.
Thanks for modding.

Yakusoku no Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: senya.mp3
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PreviewTime: 77197
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Yakusoku no Chikara
TitleUnicode:約束のチカラ
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:smsh150
Version:Mo's Normal
Source:艦隊これくしょん~艦これ~
Tags:-Mo- yuuhei catharsis satellite 終焉の輝き 幽閉カタルシス 宇佐美宏 岡宮道生 Autobahn C87 KanColle Kantai Collection japanese
BeatmapID:795269
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
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139,307,51297,1,8,3:2:0:0:
84,201,51697,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,108,52097,2,0,B|191:80|191:80|269:75,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,198,53297,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,285,53697,2,0,B|290:313|290:313|211:317,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,173,54897,5,2,0:0:0:0:
337,53,55297,2,0,B|319:31|319:31|272:56|231:49,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,23,56097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,140,56497,2,0,B|83:170|83:170|126:189|140:235,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,353,57297,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,313,57697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,193,58097,6,0,B|243:143|211:111|211:111|230:87,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,22,58897,2,0,B|361:14|361:14|395:48|405:89,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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88,78,61297,6,0,P|62:131|63:190,3,120,4|2|2|2,3:2|3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
154,269,62897,2,0,P|180:216|179:157,3,120,4|2|10|10,3:2|3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
147,41,64497,6,0,B|160:10|160:10|197:33|243:19,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,6,65297,2,0,P|398:53|405:111,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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331,199,66097,2,0,B|293:203|293:203|271:166|227:158,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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275,362,76097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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225,126,77097,1,2,3:2:0:0:
262,79,77297,6,0,B|286:53|286:53|323:80|366:72,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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433,184,78697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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319,142,85097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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348,38,86897,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,99697,12,2,102097,0:0:0:0:
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218,251,104897,2,0,B|248:231|248:231|288:223|337:251,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,326,105697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
434,207,106097,6,0,B|439:184|430:161|430:161|442:131|430:88,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,17,106897,2,0,B|289:11|289:11|270:42|222:36,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,55,107897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,109,108097,2,0,B|414:134|414:134|387:179|335:174,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,110,108897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
149,194,109297,6,0,B|137:228|137:228|166:261|157:306,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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114,169,111697,2,0,B|100:199|103:227|103:227|139:236|152:258,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,368,112497,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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152,258,114497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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403,142,115497,1,2,3:2:0:0:
374,87,115697,6,0,B|353:60|353:60|309:78|270:68,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,23,116497,2,0,P|99:11|45:34,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,73,117497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,123,117697,2,0,B|152:174|188:204|188:204|175:230,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,317,118497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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143,32,119697,2,0,B|177:26|177:26|186:65|225:93,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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84,129,120897,2,0,B|97:173|137:200|137:200|164:188,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,107,121697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,225,122097,6,0,B|287:265|319:290|319:290|307:331,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,195,123297,2,0,B|425:189|425:189|457:218|506:209,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,46,125297,6,0,P|110:73|77:120,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,164,126497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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188,164,128097,1,8,3:2:0:0:
256,263,128497,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,173,128897,2,0,B|357:138|357:138|334:102|346:61,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,263,130097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,173,130497,2,0,B|155:138|155:138|178:102|165:61,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,263,131697,5,2,0:0:0:0:
350,189,132097,2,0,B|393:179|435:196|435:196|439:229,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,345,132896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,282,133297,2,0,B|265:292|223:275|223:275|219:242,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,142,134097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,50,134497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,40,134897,6,0,B|59:54|59:54|70:100|55:140,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,254,135697,2,0,B|2:286|2:286|49:293|75:329,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,381,136497,2,0,B|216:369|216:369|208:329|236:289,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,203,137297,2,0,B|354:197|354:197|390:218|406:263,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,147,138097,6,0,P|430:87|397:38,3,120,4|2|2|2,3:2|3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
280,24,139698,2,0,P|287:83|320:132,3,120,4|2|10|10,3:2|3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
430,179,141297,5,4,0:0:0:0:
441,153,154097,6,0,B|416:130|382:125|382:125|334:159|276:133|276:133|222:162|222:162|208:93|154:67,1,360,6|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,104,155697,2,0,B|26:140|30:168|30:168|60:181|99:177|99:177|84:238|117:275|117:275|151:271|175:288|175:288|203:306|232:300,1,360,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,238,157297,6,0,B|370:239|397:259|397:259|441:226|425:173|425:173|418:139|448:104,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,300,159297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,240,159697,2,0,P|104:184|122:128,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,43,160497,6,0,B|254:73|323:55|323:55|319:126|357:166|357:166|390:164|421:173|421:173|429:195|421:228,1,360,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,318,162097,2,0,B|321:340|280:335|280:335|249:330|229:341|229:341|199:298|199:298|168:293|130:299|130:299|133:252|150:226|150:226|133:182,1,360,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,68,163697,6,0,B|206:29|268:51|268:51|319:26|319:26|376:56,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,164,165697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
111,196,166097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,280,166497,6,0,L|173:343,1,60,2|0,3:2|3:2,3:2:0:0:
138,384,166897,6,0,B|129:349|129:349|93:334|70:291,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,172,167697,2,0,P|119:154|175:170,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,209,168297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,251,168497,2,0,B|293:270|293:270|342:262|362:224,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,104,169297,2,0,B|352:75|352:75|312:91|269:80,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,45,170097,6,0,B|114:69|109:119|109:119|142:136|158:170|158:170|122:198|112:231,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,13,172097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,119,172497,2,0,B|341:168|316:212|316:212|332:228,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,325,173297,6,0,P|345:347|284:337,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,307,174097,2,0,B|151:287|151:287|147:240|180:204,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,169,174697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,122,174897,2,0,B|274:93|274:93|249:60|197:50,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,67,175697,2,0,B|77:91|91:111|91:111|70:140|77:187,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,292,176497,6,0,B|158:304|197:293|197:293|220:327|271:329|271:329|303:294|345:291,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,178,178497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,86,178897,2,0,L|19:97,1,60,2|0,3:2|3:2,3:2:0:0:
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34,261,179697,6,0,B|64:288|64:288|97:268|140:272,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,323,180497,2,0,B|277:335|277:335|309:304|308:252,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,192,181097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,140,181297,2,0,B|346:109|339:80|339:80|310:73|289:48,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Santtu

fattypikachu wrote:

Hello from your M4M queue! :)

[Hard]

00:20:097 (3,4) - Blanket it is not a blanket, so I can't fix that
00:52:497 (3,4) - ^
00:53:297 (1,2) - ^
01:53:697 (4) - ^ it's not a blanket
02:58:097 (1) - ^

00:25:297 (2,3) - Maybe try to rearrange it so it looks better. Like... Works, changed!


00:38:397 (2) - Having the slider ends on blue ticks doesn't seem to fit with the song. Tbh it doesn't, if you listen closely, you can here the 1/2 sound at the blue ticks
01:55:197 (2) - ^ ^same reason

00:41:897 (7) - Move it up to about (460,56) so that it forms a triangle. Did bit differently but a same idea!

00:44:097 (3) - Move it up a little bit so that it blankets better with 00:43:297 (4) -

00:54:897 (1,2,3) - Try making this into a triangle.

00:57:297 (4,5) - These two aren't even. yea changed it sorry Q_Q

01:50:697 (4,1,2,3) - Rearrange it so that the sliders circle 01:50:697 (4) - , like Good, changed!


[Abyssal Catharsis]

00:44:097 (2) - Blanket with either 00:43:297 (5) - or 00:44:697 (3) -
01:07:697 (1,2,3) - Blanket It's not a blanket so I can't fix that!
01:45:897 (6,1) - ^ ^
01:45:897 (6,1) - ^seems like you pointed out same thing twice (I think this is a mistake) O_O,
02:53:697 (2,4) - ^ not a blanket
03:05:097 (4,5) - ^

00:31:297 (3) - I'm pretty sure this was supposed to be perfectly vertical. It's meant to be like that

00:31:297 (3,4,5) - This isn't symmetrical. You should probably fix it. what do you mean?

That's it! Good luck! ^_^
Thx for modding!!
Empty comment/green colour mean fixed
-Tochi



  • Abyss Cathersis

  1. 00:24:897 (3) - Ctrl + G?
  2. 00:38:397 (5) - Ctrl+G like 01:54:897 (1,2,1) -
  3. 02:45:097 (4) - Ctrl+G and move to 84|276 for better flow.
  4. 03:19:697 (3,1) - Please avoid this tiny overlap.


  • Hard

  1. 00:25:297 (2) - Ctrl+G.
  2. 03:24:497 (1) - Ctrl+J, and then move it to same place, but move this 03:25:297 (1) - to somewhere like 124|204: http://puu.sh/m78Ts/54fd8f149a.png


  • Feedback


    Nice map, good luck!
Topic Starter
Santtu

-Tochi wrote:




  • Abyss Cathersis

  1. 00:24:897 (3) - Ctrl + G? I would really like that change that, but it would make 2,4x~ jump and I think it's not necessary in that place. But I like the idea
  2. 00:38:397 (5) - Ctrl+G like 01:54:897 (1,2,1) - yep, works really well
  3. 02:45:097 (4) - Ctrl+G and move to 84|276 for better flow. fixed
  4. 03:19:697 (3,1) - Please avoid this tiny overlap. woops, fixed


  • Hard

  1. 00:25:297 (2) - Ctrl+G. fixed
  2. 03:24:497 (1) - Ctrl+J, and then move it to same place, but move this 03:25:297 (1) - to somewhere like 124|204: http://puu.sh/m78Ts/54fd8f149a.png works well, changed!


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    Nice map, good luck!
Thank you for modding!
BladesofSteel
Hello, M4M moding here.

Abyssal Catharsis
00:38:397 (5) - This slider sounds off here, because it clearly has skipped an important beat in the music on 00:38:697. Consider removing the reverse, and adding a hit on the suggested time.

00:50:697 (1) - Also does not appear to be in sync with the rhythm here, and only appears to look like a filler slider. Because 00:50:697 - 00:51:697 are proportionate to 00:38:097 - 00:38:897's rhythm, the patterns from the latter would also be used here.

00:57:697 (4) - Move it to 316/160, or at least somewhere in the spacing between 00:56:497 (1,2) - . The messy overlap of 00:56:897 (2,4) - is not appealing at all.

01:29:297 - 01:29:897 Try this rhythm instead:

Currently 01:29:297 (3,4) - sonuds slightly off-beat because the long slider again is acting as a filelr and skipping the noted techno hitsonud at 01:29:497.

01:30:597 (3) - Is not needed here, as it is only hitting an empty space in the song. Please remove it.

02:07:497 (1) - Same problem as 00:50:697 (1) - .

02:21:297 (1,2) - Try swapping these objects so the slider is the one starting at 02:21:297 instead. I feel that this gives better emphasis to and follows the "ya" in yakusoku.

02:26:097 (2) - Move to 02:26:197. Having the sudden change in spacing of timing here is inconsistent since these notes are still within the same rhythm (combo range).


Hard
00:24:497 (1) - Doesn't seem to suit this spot, especially the brief pause that follows after it. While the music is still following with beats, you ought to continue mapping between 00:24:497 - 00:25:297 with an ongoin rhythm such as this;


01:55:197 (2) - Sounds awkward here, because you had skipped an important hitsound in the song at 01:55:497. Consider removing the reverse, then adding a note at 01:55:497.
[Is this deja vu?]

02:07:097 (2) - Move to 222/150 for perfect blanket.

Normal is fine. Good luck.
Topic Starter
Santtu

BladesofSteel wrote:

Hello, M4M moding here.

Abyssal Catharsis
00:38:397 (5) - This slider sounds off here, because it clearly has skipped an important beat in the music on 00:38:697. Consider removing the reverse, and adding a hit on the suggested time. Well I'm not skipping it cause I have done reverse there. But yea, when I considered this I found maybe better way to map it!

00:50:697 (1) - Also does not appear to be in sync with the rhythm here, and only appears to look like a filler slider. Because 00:50:697 - 00:51:697 are proportionate to 00:38:097 - 00:38:897's rhythm, the patterns from the latter would also be used here. To my mind it doesn't fit here. Holding does better than that

00:57:697 (4) - Move it to 316/160, or at least somewhere in the spacing between 00:56:497 (1,2) - . The messy overlap of 00:56:897 (2,4) - is not appealing at all. Changed it a bit.

01:29:297 - 01:29:897 Try this rhythm instead:

Currently 01:29:297 (3,4) - sonuds slightly off-beat because the long slider again is acting as a filelr and skipping the noted techno hitsonud at 01:29:497. Yep. I agree. It was hard to map that part >-<

01:30:597 (3) - Is not needed here, as it is only hitting an empty space in the song. Please remove it. Hmm, okay

02:07:497 (1) - Same problem as 00:50:697 (1) - . ^

02:21:297 (1,2) - Try swapping these objects so the slider is the one starting at 02:21:297 instead. I feel that this gives better emphasis to and follows the "ya" in yakusoku. That would work well, but only problem there is that if I did so, I wouldn't anymore follow the electro melody or what even it is called.

02:26:097 (2) - Move to 02:26:197. Having the sudden change in spacing of timing here is inconsistent since these notes are still within the same rhythm (combo range). Eeh... If I did so, I wouldn't anymore follow the melody.


Hard
00:24:497 (1) - Doesn't seem to suit this spot, especially the brief pause that follows after it. While the music is still following with beats, you ought to continue mapping between 00:24:497 - 00:25:297 with an ongoin rhythm such as this; changed


01:55:197 (2) - Sounds awkward here, because you had skipped an important hitsound in the song at 01:55:497. Consider removing the reverse, then adding a note at 01:55:497. I can't hear there a note o.o
[Is this deja vu?]

02:07:097 (2) - Move to 222/150 for perfect blanket. oh yea, changed

Normal is fine. Good luck.
Thank you so much for modding!!!
Xinying
Hi , as for your M4M req. Sorry for delay xd


General

  1. BPM and Offset : ✓
  2. Aimod : × , but I have no idea what is that.
  3. Metadata : ✓
  4. Tags : ✓
  5. Background Image : ✓
  6. Kiai : ✓
  7. Hitsound : ✓ , good hitsounds.
  8. Video : -

Mo's Normal

  1. Nothing that I can find.

Hard

  1. 00:18:897 (3,4,1) - I think there's no need to increase DS all of a sudden here , make the DS the same.
  2. 00:33:697 (4) - I feel that this slider should be changed to 2 circles , so the vocals will be clickable.
  3. 00:43:297 (4) - ctrl-g? Maintain DS.
  4. 01:12:497 (1,2,3) - Make same DS.
  5. 02:54:897 (1,2) - Minor error but blanket this properly. xd

Abyssal Catharsis

  1. 00:32:497 (1,2,3) - Since you were consistent with the rhythm before , try this?
  2. 00:36:497 (3) - The overlap with 00:35:697 (1) - makes it a little untidy.
  3. 01:13:297 (1) - Seems weird to play imo. Maybe just make it 1/1 and make one note to from a triple with 01:13:997 (1,2) ? Try this?
  4. 02:06:297 (6,7,8,9,1) - I'd prefer to do something like this. Basically I want to make 02:06:497 (8,9,1) - constant DS.
  5. Are you missing an SB element here?

Overall

  1. Pretty fun map overall , especially the symmetrical patterns right before the kiai. Interesting storyboard that follow the rhythm of the song at the start too. Good luck!! :D
Topic Starter
Santtu

Chocox wrote:

Hi , as for your M4M req. Sorry for delay xd


General

  1. BPM and Offset : ✓
  2. Aimod : × , but I have no idea what is that. Oh, I just forgot to add "SB\". fixed
  3. Metadata : ✓
  4. Tags : ✓
  5. Background Image : ✓
  6. Kiai : ✓
  7. Hitsound : ✓ , good hitsounds.
  8. Video : -

Mo's Normal

  1. Nothing that I can find.

Hard

  1. 00:18:897 (3,4,1) - I think there's no need to increase DS all of a sudden here , make the DS the same. alright
  2. 00:33:697 (4) - I feel that this slider should be changed to 2 circles , so the vocals will be clickable. I agree
  3. 00:43:297 (4) - ctrl-g? Maintain DS.y
  4. 01:12:497 (1,2,3) - Make same DS. Changed a bit
  5. 02:54:897 (1,2) - Minor error but blanket this properly. xd yep

Abyssal Catharsis

  1. 00:32:497 (1,2,3) - Since you were consistent with the rhythm before , try this? Really nice pattern! Added
  2. 00:36:497 (3) - The overlap with 00:35:697 (1) - makes it a little untidy. Changed somehow
  3. 01:13:297 (1) - Seems weird to play imo. Maybe just make it 1/1 and make one note to from a triple with 01:13:997 (1,2) ? Try this? Works! ^^
  4. 02:06:297 (6,7,8,9,1) - I'd prefer to do something like this. Basically I want to make 02:06:497 (8,9,1) - constant DS. Yes!
  5. Are you missing an SB element here? Yea I fixed that already

Overall

  1. Pretty fun map overall , especially the symmetrical patterns right before the kiai. Interesting storyboard that follow the rhythm of the song at the start too. Good luck!! :D Thank you!!!
Thank you for really good mod!
eeezzzeee
hi m4m from your queue

omg its wo! <3

[Abyssal Catharsis]
its fun but i noticed a lot of inconsistencies.

i feel like the triples are too random lol. sometimes we have triple and sometimes its just 1/2 for the same stuff in the music. Maybe you can try an alternating style like this http://puu.sh/nQFAA/4840d4e3ff.jpg or something but right now its too random... i won't mention too much about this in the mod because its just everywhere :?
  1. 00:13:597 (2) - you can try to add circles at 00:16:797 - 00:19:997 - 00:23:197 - for consistency cuz its kinda weird this is the only triple OR maybe just delete this one lol
  2. 00:23:697 (1) - remove nc
  3. 00:25:497 (2) - i think it would play a lot better with 00:25:697 - as clickable because thats where the triple starts, but right now since that is a slider tail the emphasis is on the blue tick 00:25:797 - which is the weakest of the three. try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/nQAYr/7c29f373a6.jpg
  4. 00:38:097 (4,5) - its only 1/4 time between these and also more importantly the slider is 1/8 so its still quite easy to get 100, I highly recommend closer spacing like 01:42:097 (1,2) - is perfect
  5. 00:38:797 (6) - mistake? move it to the red tick, check 01:42:097 (1,2,3) - for the correct one
  6. 00:46:697 (1) - ;_; i dont like the shape but i guess thats just my opinion
  7. 00:51:697 - hmm an interesting suggestion came to mind when i was playing this. maybe you can try making them go opposite directions every 4 because the song is structured like 1,2,1,2 here... so for example 00:51:697 (1,2,3,4) - pointing upwards, 00:53:297 (1,2,3,4) - point down, 00:54:897 (1,2,3,4) - point left, 00:56:497 (1,2,3,4) - point right
  8. 01:00:497 (5,6,7,8,1) - flow is kinda awkward because of the direction the jump goes against the direction of the stream. an easy fix would be ctrl+g on 5,6 and 7,8 individually each
  9. 01:01:297 - the hs are very loud here and so many, try lowering the volume a bit
  10. 01:13:297 (1) - no need for nc
  11. 01:14:797 (5) - spamming so many triples here uh... yes those triples exist in the music but the problem is they were in all the other parts of the kiai too but they were ignored instead of all mapped like this. so it feels like a large increase in intensity but the song actually has not changed much... i suggest deleting this one as it is the most useless lol
  12. 01:16:497 (1,2) - closer spacing for 1/4
  13. 01:30:097 (1,2) - i recommend using a slider here instead for a transition between 01:29:897 (5,1) - it would play better
  14. 01:38:097 (1) - awkward extended slider since thats the only one in this section.. maybe it should just be 1/2?
  15. 01:37:897 (7,1,2) - ^ if you don't want to change it i would recommend at least use a more similar spacing of these because they are all 1/4
  16. 01:55:197 (2) - no reverse, just add a note at 01:55:497 - because it should be the same thing as 01:42:097 (1,2,3) -
  17. 02:14:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please try to use smaller spacing for this or larger spacing for 00:58:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - before because this one is significantly harder but the music is the same so consistency
  18. 02:18:097 - compare hitsounds to 01:01:297 -
  19. 02:23:097 (2) - well its kinda plain just a straight slider... compared to 02:21:497 (2) -
  20. 02:24:497 (3,1) - swap the nc
  21. 02:31:097 (2,1,2,3) - hmm compare the rhythm to 02:24:497 (3,1,2,1,2,3) - its quite different but the music is basically the same :( pick one of the patterns and use the same for both of them!
  22. 02:38:497 (11) - why 1/4 slider you can just make 1/2 slider if you want to map that instrument
  23. 02:44:497 (1,2,3,4) - spacing could be more organized http://puu.sh/nQD4P/e169327eb6.jpg
  24. 02:58:897 (1,2) - closer spacing for 1/4
  25. 03:12:497 - lol i thought this was the end of the map or something. really awkward to have a break now, lets just map it xd OR you can delete the stuff afterward tbh this not a bad place to end the map
[Hard]
Same thing about triples inconsistency
  1. 00:14:897 (1,2) - compare it to some similar parts like 00:18:097 (1,2,3,4) - 00:21:297 (1,2,3,4) - etc. the density is so low for no reason..
  2. 00:38:397 (2) - ehh it just doesnt sound right... 01:42:097 (1,2) - this rhythm is better imo
  3. 00:50:097 (6,1) - swap nc
  4. 00:51:697 - you should really try to keep a similar pattern between these since they are so similar in the music (so what i mean is 00:52:497 (3,4) - vs
  5. 00:54:097 (3,4) - should be the same)
  6. 01:13:297 (5) - try shortening it into 1/1 and adding a circle at 01:13:897 -
  7. 01:16:497 (1) - no nc necessary since theres no sv change or anything
  8. 01:30:297 - delaying the break to there doesn't really change anything lol it was going to start around the red tick anyway so might as well let it go naturally http://puu.sh/nQEtA/e8d8dd8d81.jpg
  9. 01:55:197 (2) - same as 00:38:397 (2) -
  10. 01:56:297 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - kinda cramped, you could increase the spacing a little to make it easier to read
  11. 02:08:497 - same as 00:51:697 -
  12. 02:21:497 - same as 01:30:297 - but maybe for this one you can move it to 02:22:097 -
  13. 02:42:897 (2,3,1) - hard to read if you stack them because of the reverse and all..
  14. 02:46:497 (2,1) - more spacing to emphasize the strong beat at 1?
  15. 02:58:897 (1) - remove nc
  16. 03:12:497 - well this break isnt so bad since there was one similar to it before, i just think the break on catharsis is too random
Ok that's all from me! Good luck!
Star because I really like the song and sb and wo! but please consider what I said about inconsistency of the triples, I think a more structured rhythm would improve the gameplay a lot
Topic Starter
Santtu

eeezzzeee wrote:

hi m4m from your queue

omg its wo! <3

[Abyssal Catharsis]
its fun but i noticed a lot of inconsistencies.

i feel like the triples are too random lol. sometimes we have triple and sometimes its just 1/2 for the same stuff in the music. Maybe you can try an alternating style like this http://puu.sh/nQFAA/4840d4e3ff.jpg or something but right now its too random... i won't mention too much about this in the mod because its just everywhere :?
  1. 00:13:597 (2) - you can try to add circles at 00:16:797 - 00:19:997 - 00:23:197 - for consistency cuz its kinda weird this is the only triple OR maybe just delete this one lol
  2. 00:23:697 (1) - remove nc
  3. 00:25:497 (2) - i think it would play a lot better with 00:25:697 - as clickable because thats where the triple starts, but right now since that is a slider tail the emphasis is on the blue tick 00:25:797 - which is the weakest of the three. try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/nQAYr/7c29f373a6.jpg I changed it, but with own way.
  4. 00:38:097 (4,5) - its only 1/4 time between these and also more importantly the slider is 1/8 so its still quite easy to get 100, I highly recommend closer spacing like 01:42:097 (1,2) - is perfect
  5. 00:38:797 (6) - mistake? move it to the red tick, check 01:42:097 (1,2,3) - for the correct one I hear that those are two different rhythms. But I think I need more opinion so I can be sure to change that.
  6. 00:46:697 (1) - ;_; i dont like the shape but i guess thats just my opinion made it better now D:
  7. 00:51:697 - hmm an interesting suggestion came to mind when i was playing this. maybe you can try making them go opposite directions every 4 because the song is structured like 1,2,1,2 here... so for example 00:51:697 (1,2,3,4) - pointing upwards, 00:53:297 (1,2,3,4) - point down, 00:54:897 (1,2,3,4) - point left, 00:56:497 (1,2,3,4) - point right not bad, Will try it out.
  8. 01:00:497 (5,6,7,8,1) - flow is kinda awkward because of the direction the jump goes against the direction of the stream. an easy fix would be ctrl+g on 5,6 and 7,8 individually each
  9. 01:01:297 - the hs are very loud here and so many, try lowering the volume a bit
  10. 01:13:297 (1) - no need for nc
  11. 01:14:797 (5) - spamming so many triples here uh... yes those triples exist in the music but the problem is they were in all the other parts of the kiai too but they were ignored instead of all mapped like this. so it feels like a large increase in intensity but the song actually has not changed much... i suggest deleting this one as it is the most useless lol
  12. 01:16:497 (1,2) - closer spacing for 1/4
  13. 01:30:097 (1,2) - i recommend using a slider here instead for a transition between 01:29:897 (5,1) - it would play better
  14. 01:38:097 (1) - awkward extended slider since thats the only one in this section.. maybe it should just be 1/2?
  15. 01:37:897 (7,1,2) - ^ if you don't want to change it i would recommend at least use a more similar spacing of these because they are all 1/4
  16. 01:55:197 (2) - no reverse, just add a note at 01:55:497 - because it should be the same thing as 01:42:097 (1,2,3) -
  17. 02:14:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please try to use smaller spacing for this or larger spacing for 00:58:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - before because this one is significantly harder but the music is the same so consistency
  18. 02:18:097 - compare hitsounds to 01:01:297 -
  19. 02:23:097 (2) - well its kinda plain just a straight slider... compared to 02:21:497 (2) - Well life is sometimes plain and so is this slider.
  20. 02:24:497 (3,1) - swap the nc It feels better to have it so as it is now. 02:24:697 (1) - This note has higher beat than 02:24:497 (3) - and I wouldn't change these NC places.
  21. 02:31:097 (2,1,2,3) - hmm compare the rhythm to 02:24:497 (3,1,2,1,2,3) - its quite different but the music is basically the same :( pick one of the patterns and use the same for both of them! sorry, haven't noticed that mistake untill now.
  22. 02:38:497 (11) - why 1/4 slider you can just make 1/2 slider if you want to map that instrument
  23. 02:44:497 (1,2,3,4) - spacing could be more organized http://puu.sh/nQD4P/e169327eb6.jpg
  24. 02:58:897 (1,2) - closer spacing for 1/4
  25. 03:12:497 - lol i thought this was the end of the map or something. really awkward to have a break now, lets just map it xd OR you can delete the stuff afterward tbh this not a bad place to end the map nothing wrong in that break O-o
[Hard]
Same thing about triples inconsistency
  1. 00:14:897 (1,2) - compare it to some similar parts like 00:18:097 (1,2,3,4) - 00:21:297 (1,2,3,4) - etc. the density is so low for no reason..
  2. 00:38:397 (2) - ehh it just doesnt sound right... 01:42:097 (1,2) - this rhythm is better imo will overthink it...
  3. 00:50:097 (6,1) - swap nc
  4. 00:51:697 - you should really try to keep a similar pattern between these since they are so similar in the music (so what i mean is 00:52:497 (3,4) - vs
  5. 00:54:097 (3,4) - should be the same)
  6. 01:13:297 (5) - try shortening it into 1/1 and adding a circle at 01:13:897 -
  7. 01:16:497 (1) - no nc necessary since theres no sv change or anything
  8. 01:30:297 - delaying the break to there doesn't really change anything lol it was going to start around the red tick anyway so might as well let it go naturally http://puu.sh/nQEtA/e8d8dd8d81.jpg It doesn't have delaying break :o?
  9. 01:55:197 (2) - same as 00:38:397 (2) -
  10. 01:56:297 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - kinda cramped, you could increase the spacing a little to make it easier to read
  11. 02:08:497 - same as 00:51:697 - No, I think rhythm is right!
  12. 02:21:497 - same as 01:30:297 - but maybe for this one you can move it to 02:22:097 - took it off, since it doesn't belong there
  13. 02:42:897 (2,3,1) - hard to read if you stack them because of the reverse and all..
  14. 02:46:497 (2,1) - more spacing to emphasize the strong beat at 1?
  15. 02:58:897 (1) - remove nc
  16. 03:12:497 - well this break isnt so bad since there was one similar to it before, i just think the break on catharsis is too random hmm
Ok that's all from me! Good luck!
Star because I really like the song and sb and wo! but please consider what I said about inconsistency of the triples, I think a more structured rhythm would improve the gameplay a lot
Thank you for modding and stars!!!
no edit = fixed/changed
__Ag
M4M

Abyssal Catharsis
00:13:597 (2) - if you wanna keep this,well I suggest00:13:997 - and00:14:397 - add notes

00:17:897 (7) - make this as00:16:697 (1,2,3) -

00:32:897 (2) - Move up a little.like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4873990

00:38:697 - I suggest add a note,because this drum beat is obvious

01:28:497 (2) - note good rhythm,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4874019

02:15:697 (5,6) - ctrl+G

02:51:297 (5) - ctrl+G or move it like this ,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4874043

03:05:097 (6) - I think do this is more flow,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4874049

Hard
01:12:897 (3,4,5) - use same DS

02:42:897 (2,3,1) - maybe difficult to read

I cant find more,great song and map,GL
Topic Starter
Santtu

__Ag wrote:

M4M

Abyssal Catharsis
00:13:597 (2) - if you wanna keep this,well I suggest00:13:997 - and00:14:397 - add notes maybe not, since it would ruin my current rhythm that I follow

00:17:897 (7) - make this as00:16:697 (1,2,3) - ^

00:32:897 (2) - Move up a little.like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4873990 works fine!

00:38:697 - I suggest add a note,because this drum beat is obvious I don't think that place should have a note

01:28:497 (2) - note good rhythm,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4874019 I think current one is better.

02:15:697 (5,6) - ctrl+G Not really necessary, 'cause I try to have symmetrical pattern there

02:51:297 (5) - ctrl+G or move it like this ,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4874043 I think current one is better

03:05:097 (6) - I think do this is more flow,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4874049 ^


Hard
01:12:897 (3,4,5) - use same DS alright

02:42:897 (2,3,1) - maybe difficult to read I will rethink this

I cant find more,great song and map. thx :) GL
Thank you for modding!
-Mo-
Where are my mods o.o
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