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Ownage Pranks - Buk Lau's Love Song

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Euny
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Euny
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 11월 18일 수요일 at 오전 4:52:05

Artist: Ownage Pranks
Title: Buk Lau's Love Song
Tags: Aia Natsu
BPM: 121
Filesize: 9372kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aia's Easy (1.22 stars, 64 notes)
  2. BOOM! BOOM!! BOOM!!! (3.36 stars, 290 notes)
  3. Hard (2.84 stars, 229 notes)
  4. Natsu's Normal (1.93 stars, 124 notes)
Download: Ownage Pranks - Buk Lau's Love Song
Download: Ownage Pranks - Buk Lau's Love Song (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Set
Aia's Easy - By. Aia
Natsu's Normal - By. Natsu
Hard - By. me
BOOM! BOOM!! BOOM!!! - By. me


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Euny
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Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
wew you really did like Ownage Pranks xDDD
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Euny

Natsu wrote:

wew you really did like Ownage Pranks xDDD
tanka you~
you want to my berry berry GUD massajee youlo?
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
IRC

SPOILER
23:47 P A N: THE PRESSURE
23:47 P A N: omg this song is so great
23:48 Euny: xDDDDDDD yeah
23:49 Euny: coconut but not feels coconut
23:49 P A N: lmao
00:04 P A N: btw update your diff ahaha
00:04 P A N: change preview point
00:06 P A N: please np my map to natsu
00:06 P A N: he said he won't update except you send it to him
00:06 P A N: :(
00:06 Euny: okie
00:07 Euny: xDDDDDD
00:07 Euny: why ?
00:07 P A N: idk
00:07 P A N: lol
00:07 Euny: seems just troll
00:07 P A N: :(
00:07 P A N: he's baka
00:09 Euny: hahahah
00:09 Euny: that req
00:09 P A N: lol
00:10 Euny: just he want to song for his next map
00:10 Euny: xDDDDD
00:10 P A N: aw
00:10 P A N: LOL
00:10 Euny: natsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
00:11 P A N: find a way to beat the pressure really makes me wey
00:11 P A N: wet*
00:11 Euny: wet?
00:11 Euny: xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
00:12 Euny: hahahah
00:12 Euny: this trap
00:12 P A N: when I hear
00:12 P A N: THE PRESSURE
00:12 P A N: I feel like SCREAM
00:12 P A N: OUT LOUD
00:12 P A N: it makes me CRAZY
00:14 Euny: xDDDDDDDDDDDDD
00:14 Euny: wtf
00:14 Euny: that pressure! makes you wet?
00:14 P A N: YES
00:14 P A N: THE PRESSURE
00:14 Euny: omg
00:24 Euny: pani
00:31 P A N: yea?
00:32 Euny: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
00:32 P A N: hmm
00:32 P A N: wew
00:32 Euny: thats it
00:32 Euny: take your time
00:33 P A N: WEW
00:33 P A N: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/347433
00:33 P A N: you really mapped it omg
00:34 Euny: lol yeah
00:34 Euny: its funny :)
00:35 Euny: hahaha this song so cute
00:36 P A N: 00:26:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
00:36 P A N: symmetry star pls
00:36 P A N: 00:45:340 (6) - really hard to notice that it's 1/4
00:37 Euny: okay
00:37 Euny: wew post this on thread
00:38 P A N: lmao
00:39 P A N: 00:08:274 - [http://puu.sh/jVfhl/db509eb491.jpg this]?
00:40 P A N: 00:39:514 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - used slow slider is more fit imo
00:40 P A N: like 00:38:026 (1) - 
00:41 Euny: 00:08:894 (3) - this blue hard to play i guess i want to keep this
00:41 P A N: 00:52:158 - triple
00:41 Euny: 00:39:514 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  okay
00:45 Euny: okayyyyyyyy
00:47 P A N: finally im back
00:48 P A N: cut my beard and mustache
00:48 P A N: + watch face
00:48 P A N: wew
00:48 P A N: 00:27:613 (1) - remove NC?
00:49 P A N: you didn't add on 01:01:332 (9) - 
00:49 Euny: yeah
00:50 P A N: 01:02:571 (4) - triple
00:50 P A N: 01:08:522 (3) - triple
00:50 P A N: and remove 01:09:142 (5) - 
00:51 P A N: 01:19:679 (1,1,1) - should be 1.6>1.4>1.2 instead
00:51 P A N: because tone of vocal is lower
00:51 P A N: 01:22:034 - add note
00:52 P A N: 01:26:993 - add note?
00:52 P A N: and make something like [http://puu.sh/jVg8W/e084e34770.jpg this]
00:52 Euny: okay
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Euny

P A N wrote:

IRC

SPOILER
23:47 P A N: THE PRESSURE
23:47 P A N: omg this song is so great
23:48 Euny: xDDDDDDD yeah
23:49 Euny: coconut but not feels coconut
23:49 P A N: lmao
00:04 P A N: btw update your diff ahaha
00:04 P A N: change preview point
00:06 P A N: please np my map to natsu
00:06 P A N: he said he won't update except you send it to him
00:06 P A N: :(
00:06 Euny: okie
00:07 Euny: xDDDDDD
00:07 Euny: why ?
00:07 P A N: idk
00:07 P A N: lol
00:07 Euny: seems just troll
00:07 P A N: :(
00:07 P A N: he's baka
00:09 Euny: hahahah
00:09 Euny: that req
00:09 P A N: lol
00:10 Euny: just he want to song for his next map
00:10 Euny: xDDDDD
00:10 P A N: aw
00:10 P A N: LOL
00:10 Euny: natsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
00:11 P A N: find a way to beat the pressure really makes me wey
00:11 P A N: wet*
00:11 Euny: wet?
00:11 Euny: xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
00:12 Euny: hahahah
00:12 Euny: this trap
00:12 P A N: when I hear
00:12 P A N: THE PRESSURE
00:12 P A N: I feel like SCREAM
00:12 P A N: OUT LOUD
00:12 P A N: it makes me CRAZY
00:14 Euny: xDDDDDDDDDDDDD
00:14 Euny: wtf
00:14 Euny: that pressure! makes you wet?
00:14 P A N: YES
00:14 P A N: THE PRESSURE
00:14 Euny: omg
00:24 Euny: pani
00:31 P A N: yea?
00:32 Euny: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
00:32 P A N: hmm
00:32 P A N: wew
00:32 Euny: thats it
00:32 Euny: take your time
00:33 P A N: WEW
00:33 P A N: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/347433
00:33 P A N: you really mapped it omg
00:34 Euny: lol yeah
00:34 Euny: its funny :)
00:35 Euny: hahaha this song so cute
00:36 P A N: 00:26:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
00:36 P A N: symmetry star pls
00:36 P A N: 00:45:340 (6) - really hard to notice that it's 1/4
00:37 Euny: okay
00:37 Euny: wew post this on thread
00:38 P A N: lmao
00:39 P A N: 00:08:274 - [http://puu.sh/jVfhl/db509eb491.jpg this]?
00:40 P A N: 00:39:514 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - used slow slider is more fit imo
00:40 P A N: like 00:38:026 (1) - 
00:41 Euny: 00:08:894 (3) - this blue hard to play i guess i want to keep this
00:41 P A N: 00:52:158 - triple
00:41 Euny: 00:39:514 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  okay
00:45 Euny: okayyyyyyyy
00:47 P A N: finally im back
00:48 P A N: cut my beard and mustache
00:48 P A N: + watch face
00:48 P A N: wew
00:48 P A N: 00:27:613 (1) - remove NC?
00:49 P A N: you didn't add on 01:01:332 (9) - 
00:49 Euny: yeah
00:50 P A N: 01:02:571 (4) - triple
00:50 P A N: 01:08:522 (3) - triple
00:50 P A N: and remove 01:09:142 (5) - 
00:51 P A N: 01:19:679 (1,1,1) - should be 1.6>1.4>1.2 instead
00:51 P A N: because tone of vocal is lower
00:51 P A N: 01:22:034 - add note
00:52 P A N: 01:26:993 - add note?
00:52 P A N: and make something like [http://puu.sh/jVg8W/e084e34770.jpg this]
00:52 Euny: okay
tanka you pani♥ and thanks for star

also thanks for star keichan♥
Sangzin
628 posts
Joined February 2013
Sangzin
아 X바, 할말을 잃었습니다
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Euny

Sangzin wrote:

아 X바, 할말을 잃었습니다
tlqkf그러게요..
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
normal diff need remap too bad is just 2 cm c:
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Euny

Natsu wrote:

normal diff need remap too bad is just 2 cm c:

LOLOLOLOLOL its enough since you are not 2cm ^^
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Aia's Easy

00:12:241 (1,3) Dont do something like this in an Easy please. Its too hard
00:17:200 (2) There were unranks because of sliders like this used in Easy, you should reconsider it
00:27:117 (3) ^
00:28:852 (2) ^
00:33:067 (2) ^ (Ill stop pointing them out, but you really should reconsider it)
00:45:960 (1,2,3) You should always keep the same DS in Easys to make it easier for new players. DS changes no matter how Easy it is, are too confusing for new players.
00:52:406 (2) Its not really offscreen but i would still move it a bit higher though. Its just a suggestion, theres nothing wrong with it
01:11:745 (1) This shape seems kinda random

-What ive noticed is that sometimes the Distance between the objects is not consistence like here 01:07:778 (1,2)
-It has a lot of 1/2 and for 121 BPM its a bit hard for an Easy. You should consider to delete some Circles to make it more like an Easy
-Some slidershapes can be unrankable in an easy

Otherwise it was a nice Easy~ Well done

Natsu's Normal

00:16:952 (7) I dont think it should start on a redtick since it ends on a pretty strong beat 00:17:200 which should be clickable. 00:16:704 (6,7) They should switch places
00:28:109 (4,5) I would do the same here
00:56:621 (2,4) Isnt this a bit too confusing in a Normal? Just my Opinion
00:58:605 (6) This one starts on a very soft vocal, which is barely noticeable. I was kinda suprised by this, maybe you should just let it start here 00:58:852 as a 1/2
01:02:324 (5,6) ^
01:05:795 (5,6) ^ Its really weird imo
01:17:695 (1,2,3) Doing this like 01:13:729 (4,5) this would be better i guess. I thought you were going for the vocals there again, so its kinda confusing when suddenly a slider starts on the soft melodic

Cool Normal :3

Hard

00:07:778 (4,2) They are touching
00:12:241 That sound should be clickable like this 00:10:257
00:13:729 (4,5) Why is the DS so low here?
00:19:183 (1,2) Something like this is kinda unpopular in Hards (i guess) since its weird to play, even in Insanes, you should reconsider it.
00:36:043 This should be clickable with a NC

Nothing much to say. Cool Hard

wE cAn SlEep ToGeDuH

00:08:894 I'd add a Cricle here, because, i dont know, somehow it fits lol
00:25:133 (1) Shouldnt this one end here because the vocals are kinda ending there? 00:25:381
00:32:076 Clickable?
00:37:530 (8,1) This blank can be clearly improved
00:58:852 (1) Same as 00:25:133 (1)
01:05:795 Clickable, cause downbeat for Nc
01:11:745 I just realized it, such a short kiai here? I dont know if thats okay

Cool Insane :3

Cool Mapset overall. Good Luck with it :3
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Natsu's Normal

00:16:952 (7) I dont think it should start on a redtick since it ends on a pretty strong beat 00:17:200 which should be clickable. 00:16:704 (6,7) They should switch places its pretty obvious that I'm following vocals here, like in the rest of the map, when mapping you can pick what u want to follow
00:28:109 (4,5) I would do the same here ^
00:56:621 (2,4) Isnt this a bit too confusing in a Normal? Just my Opinion I don't see why 3 sliders can be confused at normal, specially at this bpm
00:58:605 (6) This one starts on a very soft vocal, which is barely noticeable. I was kinda suprised by this, maybe you should just let it start here 00:58:852 as a 1/2 if you see the lyrics, I'm covering the word ¨together¨ that is very noticeable o.O 00:58:605 (6) -
01:02:324 (5,6) ^ ^
01:05:795 (5,6) ^ Its really weird imo this one also is covering a full word, so it does fit really nice my vocal mapping
01:17:695 (1,2,3) Doing this like 01:13:729 (4,5) this would be better i guess. I thought you were going for the vocals there again, so its kinda confusing when suddenly a slider starts on the soft melodic fixed on my own

Cool Normal :3
thanks

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osu file format v14

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Artist:Ownage Pranks
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Creator:Euny
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Tags:
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Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna


Hi~

Aia's Easy

  1. Consider AR: 3
  2. 00:07:034 (2) - This slider "Square" does not suit 00: 06: 291 (1.4) - Try it , it's more "Circular"
  3. 00:13:729 (3) - This circle is strange here. Try x: 172 y: 152
  4. 00:25:381 (2) - Try to replace this with just a circle on white tick.
  5. 00:53:646 - http://puu.sh/k6Sbp/9868274092.jpg :3

Natsu's Normal

  1. 00:15:960 (5) - NC
  2. 00:19:927 (5) - ^
  3. 00:57:861 (4) - NC?
  4. 01:01:828 (4) - ~

Hard

  1. 00:37:034 (1) - Nc '3'
  2. Its perfect~ ♥

wE cAn SlEep ToGeDuH (hUe)

  1. 00:11:993 (9,1,2) - Try this ~
  2. Ok, It's perfect too ~
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Euny

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Hard

00:07:778 (4,2) They are touching- ✔fixed
00:12:241 That sound should be clickable like this 00:10:257 - ✔fixed
00:13:729 (4,5) Why is the DS so low here?- ✔fixed
00:19:183 (1,2) Something like this is kinda unpopular in Hards (i guess) since its weird to play, even in Insanes, you should reconsider it. - okay, i'll think of it more.
00:36:043 This should be clickable with a NC - want to keep this cause its not insane. i can ignore some bit i guess..

Nothing much to say. Cool Hard

wE cAn SlEep ToGeDuH

00:08:894 I'd add a Cricle here, because, i dont know, somehow it fits lol - i did it too xD but there i decide fitting piano sounds are better.
00:25:133 (1) Shouldnt this one end here because the vocals are kinda ending there? 00:25:381 - hmm,,, i'll think of more. since there is sound too i can hear on 25%~50%
00:32:076 Clickable?- ✔fixed
00:37:530 (8,1) This blank can be clearly improved - this is insane diff. i guess no need to ignore tempo
00:58:852 (1) Same as 00:25:133 (1) - same too
01:05:795 Clickable, cause downbeat for Nc- ✔fixed
01:11:745 I just realized it, such a short kiai here? I dont know if thats okay - ✔fixed will change xDDDD

Cool Insane :3

Cool Mapset overall. Good Luck with it :3

thankyuuuuuuu lucas xDDDD you always help me!!!!

Hoen wrote:



Hi~

Hard

  1. 00:37:034 (1) - Nc '3'
  2. Its perfect~ ♥

wE cAn SlEep ToGeDuH (hUe)

  1. 00:11:993 (9,1,2) - Try this ~
  2. Ok, It's perfect too ~
- ✔applied all tanka you!!!!!!!!!!
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
@Hoen combos are following a 2 stanzas pattern, that's why :oops:
Side
1,127 posts
Joined October 2013
Side
Hi from Natsu M4M queue :v Likeasumboodee :v

SPOILER
Add a few tags even stuff like likeasumboodee or something lol. At least genre and GDers.
Also not a fan of the preview point. Practically the whole song lol.

We can sleep togetha lol


00:32:076 (1) - Add whistle and also at 00:33:563 (9) - that way it has that nice generic rnb hip/hop beat everyone loves :v

00:35:547 (7) - Also whistle here

00:52:902 (7,8) - Hmm......I don't like how this feels personally. It's probably a big suggestion but This feels much better as a slider starting on 7 and ending on the sliderhead of 8 and a note on the white tick at 00:53:398 -
This will likely mean remapping but on the bright side not much has to change. You can probably do something like this terrible example lol plz don't do that but maybe something similar ;_;

01:24:886 (4,5) - Would be better if you select both then ctrl left 1 time to the left. More evenly spaced around the slider. Similarly you could probably position 01:25:381 (6) - a bit better Like over the slider end of 01:23:646 (1) - Which adds slightly more spacing, makes the 4,5, 6 triangle look a bit cleaner and has good symmetry with the previous notes in the editor (small touches like this look so nice :3 )

01:26:621 (5,6) - I know you're trying to follow the piano here but I feel the vocals are far more dominant here. I don't even think you have to move any notes around the map. Just shift 6 over to the blue tick to the left in the timeline and then likely add a note on 01:27:365 - . It still plays really well and feels so much better ;_;


Hard


00:52:654 (3,4) - Eh. Similar to the insane. I mean it's spaced well enough and it will probably be something that players won't read well the first try but certainly readable after that. I suppose it's fine but idk I'd rather tap on the clap at 00:53:398 -

No real issues.

Natsu's Normal


Didn't really see anything wrong with it. Minor blanket stuff but I'm not THAT picky :v

Aia's Easy


Spacing varies in a few parts. Just saying but changing from .7 to 1.4 is pretty noticeable.

00:19:183 (2) - I would really like to hear the same 3/4 repeat from 00:15:216 (2) - for this part :( Similarly 00:20:175 (1) - Would also sound better as two 1/1 sliders. Please consider ;_;

00:47:943 (3) - Move this with ctrl right and ctrl down one time each so the spacing between is more even from the two notes.
Honestly 00:45:960 (1,2,3) - Should probably just be spaced evenly with x1.4 It's not to easy to change this since it's at the start of a big break.

01:09:762 (3,4) - Looks bland. Try using a different shape for both maybe.

Well that's all I found. Very minor cleanliness issues so I didn't point them out since they aren't even noticeable in game. Good luck!
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Natsu wrote:

@Hoen combos are following a 2 stanzas pattern, that's why :oops:
The combos are too big for a normal
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Hoen wrote:

Natsu wrote:

@Hoen combos are following a 2 stanzas pattern, that's why :oops:
The combos are too big for a normal
There isn't a rule about comboing, also a 8 or 7 combos isn't big at all, otherwise adding combos at every stanza will be too spammy and a HP boost fest, that's why adding them consistently at every two stanzas is better.
Aia
181 posts
Joined October 2013
Aia

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Aia's Easy

00:12:241 (1,3) Dont do something like this in an Easy please. Its too hard Changed
00:17:200 (2) There were unranks because of sliders like this used in Easy, you should reconsider it Made it a bit wider
00:27:117 (3) ^ ^
00:28:852 (2) ^ ^
00:33:067 (2) ^ (Ill stop pointing them out, but you really should reconsider it)^
00:45:960 (1,2,3) You should always keep the same DS in Easys to make it easier for new players. DS changes no matter how Easy it is, are too confusing for new players. Fixed
00:52:406 (2) Its not really offscreen but i would still move it a bit higher though. Its just a suggestion, theres nothing wrong with it Done
01:11:745 (1) This shape seems kinda random Changed

-What ive noticed is that sometimes the Distance between the objects is not consistence like here 01:07:778 (1,2)
-It has a lot of 1/2 and for 121 BPM its a bit hard for an Easy. You should consider to delete some Circles to make it more like an Easy
-Some slidershapes can be unrankable in an easy

Otherwise it was a nice Easy~ Well done

Hoen wrote:



Aia's Easy

  1. Consider AR: 3 Done
  2. 00:07:034 (2) - This slider "Square" does not suit 00: 06: 291 (1.4) - Try it , it's more "Circular" Done
  3. 00:13:729 (3) - This circle is strange here. Try x: 172 y: 152 Already did something in a previous mod or something, no circle there anymore
  4. 00:25:381 (2) - Try to replace this with just a circle on white tick. Done
  5. 00:53:646 - http://puu.sh/k6Sbp/9868274092.jpg :3 ?

Side wrote:

Aia's Easy


Spacing varies in a few parts. Just saying but changing from .7 to 1.4 is pretty noticeable.

00:19:183 (2) - I would really like to hear the same 3/4 repeat from 00:15:216 (2) - for this part :( Similarly 00:20:175 (1) - Would also sound better as two 1/1 sliders. Please consider ;_; Done made it look uglier but oh well

00:47:943 (3) - Move this with ctrl right and ctrl down one time each so the spacing between is more even from the two notes.
Honestly 00:45:960 (1,2,3) - Should probably just be spaced evenly with x1.4 It's not to easy to change this since it's at the start of a big break. Changed in previous mods

01:09:762 (3,4) - Looks bland. Try using a different shape for both maybe. Have to keep them basic as possible :s
Phew, there we go, it's easier and uglier now :^)

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Peachtrees
815 posts
Joined May 2013
Peachtrees
hihihi from Natsu's Q

Aia's Easy

I'm just going to assume the hitsounds r WIP??

01:21:167 (2) - unused green line c:

00:07:034 (2) - imo skipping vocals with this feels very odd and pretty hard to anticipate especially for an Easy Diff, so I'd probably rather map this so that the white tick here is clickable
00:17:200 (2) - would keep an eye on sharp turns like this, I've seen maps getting DQ'd over stuff like this
00:20:175 (1) - would probably removed the NC, doesn't really emphasize anything new and yeah with how frequent your NCs are already having this combo at 3 should really not be a big bother
00:33:067 (2) - 2/3 slider might look neat and all that but it just doesn't make a whole lot of sense when both of the surrounding white ticks are stronger. Oh and the spacing between 00:33:067 (2,3) - is kinda messed up too
00:47:943 (1) - isn't this missing a NC?

NCing is pretty inconsistent at times like 01:11:745 (1,2,1) - right here you do it for every 1 downbeat and then right after that you don't 01:15:712 (1,2,3,4) - should probably try and get this to be a little more consistent

Natsu's Normal

00:24:142 (4,5,6) - I feel like this would play a little smoother if 00:25:133 (6) - was rotated in a way that it'd go along with the patterns curve a little better, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3666769 would be a tad smoother I think
00:33:563 (6) - shouldn't the whistle be on this instead of the previous tail? happens across all Diffs, so not sure if done intentionally or not, would sound better if swapped though
00:42:737 (2) - felt weird not to have this mapped, especially since 00:44:720 (5) - has a circle :/ imo vocals do feel strong enough to warrant a circle here
00:49:183 (5) - turning this into 2 circles would be neat I think, vocals here do feel like they would be mapped best by being clickable so having the white tick on a tail feels a bit meh, two circles though should be just right I think
01:01:828 (4,5,6) - uuh could see this confuse a new player a little, they could be trying to move from 4 to the tail of 6 first since the distance between them might not be big enough to clearly indicate the 1/1 gap
01:26:621 (4) - whistle on the repeat would be cool I think, goes along well with the vocals mm kind alike you did on the previous 1/2

Hard

01:21:167 (4) - unused green line /w\

00:10:257 (1) - cut by one repeat to add a circle on the 'gO'? nicer than just making this one long repeat I think c:
00:32:076 (1,2,3,4) - something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3666881 for the rythm would be cool I thinkand really intuitive to follow since you map out vocals with anyways so this basically just continues this 00:32:076 (1) -
00:39:514 (1) - eeh kinda weird not to have this peak in vocals clickable. Would just start a slider on 00:39:762 (1) - and ignore the downbeat, it has no significance here
00:52:654 (3) - try 00:52:654 (3,4,5) - for a possible rythm? having 00:52:902 (4) - clickable definitely feels nicer than just having this as a gap imo
01:21:663 (1,2,3) - 00:32:076 (1,2,3,4) - (probably applies to a few more patterns that I just did not point out wwwww)

vERy cReaTIve DiFF nAMe

00:08:770 (2,1,1) - is avoiding this little overlap right here possible?:c https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3666988
00:35:423 (6,7,8,9,1) - huh aren't these a little close? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3667041
00:37:530 (8,1) - iun want to go all yadda yadda on the blankets but this would look so much neater if blankted I think :c
00:42:985 (6,7) - could try ctrl+g on both of these, plays prettiiii cool I think, your call though!
00:43:976 (1) - touches the score thingy at the top left of the screen https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3667007 (actually idk if this counts as touching or it is 1 pixel off) I think I was told that touching UI elements is unrankable so perhaps move down a little juuuust to be sure?
00:52:902 (7,8) - similar suggestion to Hard for this one
01:10:505 (4,5,6,7) - going from pretty big jumps to almost overlapping seems (a tad) weird
01:13:729 (1,4,5,1,1) - overlapping here looks kinda messy imo :c http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3667054

not sure if I absolutely love or hate this song

good luck!
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