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UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni [CatchTheBeat]

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MBomb
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 August 2015 at 23:57:17

Artist: UNDEAD CORPORATION
Title: Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni
Source: 東方Project
Tags: MBomb Touhou Piano Gensoukyou kara chou Koutetsu Juutei Bakuon 幻想郷から超鋼鉄重低爆音 C78 ZUN Three Moon Fairies Sangetsusei 東方三月精 ~ Strange and Bright Nature Deity 1 Team Shanghai Alice A Land Resplendent With Nature's Beauty 上海アリス幻樂団 Gengakudan Yukimura Hirano Sunny Milk Luna Child Star Sapphire
BPM: 110
Filesize: 2413kb
Play Time: 00:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cup (0.94 stars, 43 notes)
  2. Nature's Beauty (1.29 stars, 51 notes)
Download: UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Such a beautiful song.

Timing and metadata taken from the ranked standard set.

Hitsounding mostly by JBHyperion with a few changes by me.
Razor Sharp
#first post/mod snipe :^)

Cup

00:01:758 (1) - I feel the distance here could be increased a little ;_;
00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - I like how you made the distance here reprecent the music. Very nice.
00:27:940 (1) - Could move it more to the right imo. Short distance for high note.
00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Equal distance here does not fit. would suggest to increase it a little.
00:51:940 (1) - Would suggest to end the spinner on 00:57:394 - as it would fit more.

Very nice cup! Not much wrong with it lol.

Nature's Beauty

Maybe SLIDERTICKRATE 2?

00:51:940 (1) - For the spinner, same suggestion as in cup.
00:09:940 (3) - You could try to curve this to make a nice and sweet groove flow :^)
00:27:940 (1) - Moving this more right seems good.
00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Bigger distance here! Fits much better!

Not much mod, but meh, the mapset is perfect!
Good luck!

The meme's are high on this map. Remap kds plz
Withered Lotus
Alright you lazy bum here's a mod for another truly epic Magic Bomb map :p

Cup
Alright I know you love not mapping notes in these easier diffs but I'm going to suggest them anyway:
00:01:758 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider to occupy the note at the following white tick.
00:05:576 - add a 2/1 slider here.
00:08:303 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider to occupy the note at the following white tick.
00:12:122 - change to a 2/1 slider and remove 00:13:212 (5) - .
00:14:849 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider.
00:18:667 - 2/1 slider?
00:24:667 (4) - change to a 1/1 slider returning once?
00:26:303 - add a note here?
00:27:940 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider?
00:31:758 - add a 2/1 slider?
00:35:031 - add a note here or add a 1/1 slider and remove the following hitcircle?
00:38:303 - add a 2/1 slider?
00:41:031 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider?
00:44:849 - 2/1 slider?
00:48:122 - add a note or change to a 1/1 slider and remove the following hitcircle?

inb4 "nothing changed because I missed those notes for a reason :^)"

Nature's Beauty
Well there's not much to say about this since you actually mapped all the notes you missed in the previous difficulty (which has me wondering who not just map the notes in the song in the previous difficulty but just make the spacing easier) but anyway, here goes I guess...
...
...
Oh wait I thought maybe I could mod the spacing but it all seems pretty fine to me :^)
Perhaps:
00:31:758 (4) - x=8?
00:40:485 (7) - x=416 for even spacing? (really scraping the bottom of the barrel here).
00:41:031 (1) - Ctrl+H and move to x=96? (Ctrl+G 00:42:667 (2) - if you do decide to do this).
00:44:303 (3) - x=128?
00:46:485 (5) - x=312 and 00:47:576 (1) - x=432?

That's all I can really say tbh lol, goodluck with your speedrank.... I guess :^)
Topic Starter
MBomb

Razor Sharp wrote:

#first post/mod snipe :^)

Cup

00:01:758 (1) - I feel the distance here could be increased a little ;_; - Increased slightly.
00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - I like how you made the distance here reprecent the music. Very nice. - Thanks :D
00:27:940 (1) - Could move it more to the right imo. Short distance for high note. - Done.
00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Equal distance here does not fit. would suggest to increase it a little. - I like the equal distance here because as the song gets slower the movement gets smaller, because of the increased distance between notes.
00:51:940 (1) - Would suggest to end the spinner on 00:57:394 - as it would fit more. - Done.

Very nice cup! Not much wrong with it lol.

Nature's Beauty

Maybe SLIDERTICKRATE 2? - Because there are no sounds on 1/2s, I'd prefer to keep this as slidertickrate 1.

00:51:940 (1) - For the spinner, same suggestion as in cup. - Yup.
00:09:940 (3) - You could try to curve this to make a nice and sweet groove flow :^) - Done.
00:27:940 (1) - Moving this more right seems good. - Done.
00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Bigger distance here! Fits much better! - Same as in the cup.

Not much mod, but meh, the mapset is perfect!
Good luck!

The meme's are high on this map. Remap kds plz

Withered Lotus wrote:

Alright you lazy bum here's a mod for another truly epic Magic Bomb map :p

Cup
Alright I know you love not mapping notes in these easier diffs but I'm going to suggest them anyway:
00:01:758 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider to occupy the note at the following white tick. - Wanted to follow main piano, to keep a lower note density here.
00:05:576 - add a 2/1 slider here. - ^
00:08:303 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider to occupy the note at the following white tick. - ^
00:12:122 - change to a 2/1 slider and remove 00:13:212 (5) - . - ^
00:14:849 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider. - ^
00:18:667 - 2/1 slider? - ^
00:24:667 (4) - change to a 1/1 slider returning once? - ^, though note density would be the same here because of the slider tick, I want to keep to the main piano for consistency.
00:26:303 - add a note here? - Again, wanted to follow main piano.
00:27:940 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider? - ^
00:31:758 - add a 2/1 slider? - ^
00:35:031 - add a note here or add a 1/1 slider and remove the following hitcircle? - ^
00:38:303 - add a 2/1 slider? - ^
00:41:031 (1) - change to a 1/1 slider? - ^
00:44:849 - 2/1 slider? - ^
00:48:122 - add a note or change to a 1/1 slider and remove the following hitcircle? - ^

inb4 "nothing changed because I missed those notes for a reason :^)" - It's funny because that's exactly my response :^)

Nature's Beauty
Well there's not much to say about this since you actually mapped all the notes you missed in the previous difficulty (which has me wondering who not just map the notes in the song in the previous difficulty but just make the spacing easier) but anyway, here goes I guess...
...
...
Oh wait I thought maybe I could mod the spacing but it all seems pretty fine to me :^)
Perhaps:
00:31:758 (4) - x=8? - Done.
00:40:485 (7) - x=416 for even spacing? (really scraping the bottom of the barrel here). - I made this inconsistent on purpose for the pitch change of the piano.
00:41:031 (1) - Ctrl+H and move to x=96? (Ctrl+G 00:42:667 (2) - if you do decide to do this). - Just increased the distance a bit instead.
00:44:303 (3) - x=128? - Done.
00:46:485 (5) - x=312 and 00:47:576 (1) - x=432? - I like this spacing how it is now.

That's all I can really say tbh lol, goodluck with your speedrank.... I guess :^)
Thanks for the mods!
JBHyperion
Got asked to add some sexy chill hitsounds and stuff

Hitsound files: Here are the hitsounds I used - whistle, clap and finish - just add to your song folder. If you're not keen on these, poke me and I'll find some different ones

Timing Setup:
Open the .osu file for each diff and paste this code into the "TimingPoints" section:
Timing Points
[TimingPoints]
122,545.454545454546,3,2,1,20,1,0
1758,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
9394,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
11576,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
13758,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
14303,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
14849,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
23031,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
24667,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
25758,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
26849,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
27940,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
36122,-100,3,2,1,35,0,0
37758,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
39940,-100,3,2,1,35,0,0
40485,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
41031,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
49212,681.818181818182,3,2,1,25,1,0
49893,882.352941176471,3,2,1,20,1,0
50775,1165.04854368932,3,2,1,15,1,0
51940,1090.90909090909,3,2,1,30,1,0
53030,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
54121,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
55212,-100,3,2,1,15,0,0
56303,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
57394,-100,3,2,1,5,0,0
This covers both samplesets and volume, so it should work straight out of the box, but let me know if there are any problems

Hitsound Application:
Cup
  1. 00:00:667 (1) - Whistle on the head
  2. 00:01:758 (1) - Finish
  3. 00:03:394 (2) - Whistle on the head
  4. 00:05:031 (3) - Finish
  5. 00:07:212 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  6. 00:09:940 (3,4) - Finish on head and circle
  7. 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish
  8. 00:16:485 (2) - Whistle on head
  9. 00:18:122 (3) - Finish
  10. 00:20:303 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  11. 00:22:485 (2) - Whistle
  12. 00:23:031 (3) - Finish on head
  13. 00:24:667 (4) - Whistle on head
  14. 00:26:849 (5) - ^
  15. 00:27:940 (1) - Finish
  16. 00:29:576 (2) - Whistle on head
  17. 00:31:212 (3) - Finish
  18. 00:33:394 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  19. 00:36:122 (3,4) - Finish on head and circle
  20. 00:39:394 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish
  21. 00:42:667 (2) - Whistle on head
  22. 00:44:303 (3) - Finish
  23. 00:46:485 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  24. 00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Clap, whistle, whistle

Nature's Beauty
  1. 00:00:667 (1) - Whistle on the head
  2. 00:01:758 (1) - Finish
  3. 00:03:394 (3) - Whistle on the head
  4. 00:05:031 (4) - Finish on the head
  5. 00:07:212 (6) - Whistle on the head
  6. 00:08:303 (1) - Finish on the head
  7. 00:09:394 (2) - Whistle
  8. 00:09:940 (3,4) - Finish on the head of both
  9. 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish on the head
  10. 00:16:485 (2) - Whistle on the head
  11. 00:18:122 (3) - Finish
  12. 00:20:303 (6) - Whistle on the head
  13. 00:21:394 (1) - Finish on the head
  14. 00:22:485 (2) - Whistle
  15. 00:23:031 (3) - Finish on the head
  16. 00:24:667 (4,6) - Whistle on the head of both
  17. 00:27:940 (1) - Finish on the head
  18. 00:29:576 (2) - Whistle on the head
  19. 00:31:212 (3) - Finish
  20. 00:33:394 (6) - Whistle on the head
  21. 00:34:485 (1) - Finish on the head
  22. 00:35:576 (2) - Whistle
  23. 00:36:122 (3) - Finish on the head
  24. 00:37:758 (4) - Whistle on the head
  25. 00:39:394 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish on the head
  26. 00:42:667 (2) - Whistle on the head
  27. 00:44:303 (3) - Finish on the head
  28. 00:46:485 (5) - Whistle on the head
  29. 00:47:576 (1) - Finish on the head
  30. 00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Clap, whistle, whistle

Hope this helps! If you need anything else, you know where to find me
Good luck! (:
Topic Starter
MBomb

JBHyperion wrote:

Got asked to add some sexy chill hitsounds and stuff

Hitsound files: Here are the hitsounds I used - whistle, clap and finish - just add to your song folder. If you're not keen on these, poke me and I'll find some different ones

Timing Setup:
Open the .osu file for each diff and paste this code into the "TimingPoints" section:
Timing Points
[TimingPoints]
122,545.454545454546,3,2,1,20,1,0
1758,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
9394,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
11576,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
13758,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
14303,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
14849,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
23031,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
24667,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
25758,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
26849,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
27940,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
36122,-100,3,2,1,35,0,0
37758,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
39940,-100,3,2,1,35,0,0
40485,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
41031,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
49212,681.818181818182,3,2,1,25,1,0
49893,882.352941176471,3,2,1,20,1,0
50775,1165.04854368932,3,2,1,15,1,0
51940,1090.90909090909,3,2,1,30,1,0
53030,-100,3,2,1,25,0,0
54121,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
55212,-100,3,2,1,15,0,0
56303,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
57394,-100,3,2,1,5,0,0
This covers both samplesets and volume, so it should work straight out of the box, but let me know if there are any problems

Hitsound Application:
Cup
  1. 00:00:667 (1) - Whistle on the head
  2. 00:01:758 (1) - Finish
  3. 00:03:394 (2) - Whistle on the head
  4. 00:05:031 (3) - Finish
  5. 00:07:212 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  6. 00:09:940 (3,4) - Finish on head and circle
  7. 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish
  8. 00:16:485 (2) - Whistle on head
  9. 00:18:122 (3) - Finish
  10. 00:20:303 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  11. 00:22:485 (2) - Whistle
  12. 00:23:031 (3) - Finish on head
  13. 00:24:667 (4) - Whistle on head
  14. 00:26:849 (5) - ^
  15. 00:27:940 (1) - Finish
  16. 00:29:576 (2) - Whistle on head
  17. 00:31:212 (3) - Finish
  18. 00:33:394 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  19. 00:36:122 (3,4) - Finish on head and circle
  20. 00:39:394 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish
  21. 00:42:667 (2) - Whistle on head
  22. 00:44:303 (3) - Finish
  23. 00:46:485 (4,1) - Whistle on head and circle
  24. 00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Clap, whistle, whistle

Nature's Beauty
  1. 00:00:667 (1) - Whistle on the head
  2. 00:01:758 (1) - Finish
  3. 00:03:394 (3) - Whistle on the head
  4. 00:05:031 (4) - Finish on the head
  5. 00:07:212 (6) - Whistle on the head
  6. 00:08:303 (1) - Finish on the head
  7. 00:09:394 (2) - Whistle
  8. 00:09:940 (3,4) - Finish on the head of both
  9. 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish on the head
  10. 00:16:485 (2) - Whistle on the head
  11. 00:18:122 (3) - Finish
  12. 00:20:303 (6) - Whistle on the head
  13. 00:21:394 (1) - Finish on the head
  14. 00:22:485 (2) - Whistle
  15. 00:23:031 (3) - Finish on the head
  16. 00:24:667 (4,6) - Whistle on the head of both
  17. 00:27:940 (1) - Finish on the head
  18. 00:29:576 (2) - Whistle on the head
  19. 00:31:212 (3) - Finish
  20. 00:33:394 (6) - Whistle on the head
  21. 00:34:485 (1) - Finish on the head
  22. 00:35:576 (2) - Whistle
  23. 00:36:122 (3) - Finish on the head
  24. 00:37:758 (4) - Whistle on the head
  25. 00:39:394 (5,6,7,1) - Clap, whistle, whistle, finish on the head
  26. 00:42:667 (2) - Whistle on the head
  27. 00:44:303 (3) - Finish on the head
  28. 00:46:485 (5) - Whistle on the head
  29. 00:47:576 (1) - Finish on the head
  30. 00:49:212 (3,4,5) - Clap, whistle, whistle

Hope this helps! If you need anything else, you know where to find me
Good luck! (:
Thanks! Took all your suggestions, except a few that I explained the reason for in pm.
Sorceress
Get ready for the biggest, baddest mod you've ever seen. Really though there's like bugger all wrong.

Cup
Alright so I know you're not gonna bother but I'm gonna suggest this anyway. I feel you could add some more notes without impacting the map much.
00:02:303 - A note here at x:256 following the previous
00:05:576 - ^ Same here
00:08:849 - x:280
00:12:122 - x:224 following on again
And so on, but I know this isn't what you're going for so bring on the red text.

Nature's Beauty
00:23:031 - Reduce the distance on this a bit
Topic Starter
MBomb

TomTheWizard wrote:

Get ready for the biggest, baddest mod you've ever seen. Really though there's like bugger all wrong.

Cup
Alright so I know you're not gonna bother but I'm gonna suggest this anyway. I feel you could add some more notes without impacting the map much.
00:02:303 - A note here at x:256 following the previous
00:05:576 - ^ Same here
00:08:849 - x:280
00:12:122 - x:224 following on again
And so on, but I know this isn't what you're going for so bring on the red text. - Yeah, no changes.

Nature's Beauty
00:23:031 - Reduce the distance on this a bit - Done, moved to x:368
Zoe
And another beautiful map from the beautiful - Magic Bomb - himself.

Nature's Beauty

  1. 00:48:667 (2,3,4,5) - Try changing the distance between these notes, either smaller -> bigger distance, or bigger -> smaller distance.

I really can't find anything wrong with this.
Topic Starter
MBomb

Niflheim wrote:

And another beautiful map from the beautiful - Magic Bomb - himself.

Nature's Beauty

  1. 00:48:667 (2,3,4,5) - Try changing the distance between these notes, either smaller -> bigger distance, or bigger -> smaller distance. - Decreased distance to 5 a tiny bit.

I really can't find anything wrong with this.
Thanks for the mod!
Kagari
you personally asked me to mod this so yeah :P
*inb4 my first mod hue ;w;

this is just only a noob suggestion coming from a noob like me that only maps noob rain difficulties ;w; you can just ignore my suggestions if they are not acceptable by your standard .-.

Cup
I like how the notes actually fits the melodic part of the piano :)
  1. 00:14:303 (7,1) - increase the distance a bit between these two notes. the piano melody on that part suits the distance between them
  2. 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - try to make something similar to 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1), and same as above, try to increase the distance a bit between 00:40:485 (7) and 00:41:031 (1)
  3. 00:50:775 (5) - moving this further to the left would be great (my suggestion would be x: 40)
Nature's Beauty
since it's not a Cup difficulty :^) why not try adding some few easy dashes (not H-Dashes tyvm) to emphasize some of the melodic part? you can decide yourself which part can be emphasize with a dash :D
but too much dashes can kill the difficulty so keep that in yer mind :P
  1. 00:51:940 - I suggest adding a note here and place it further to the right followed by the spinner at 00:52:485

there's nothing left to say except the fact that MB is the King Mapper of All Short Songs :^)

gogorank :) :)
Topic Starter
MBomb

Kagari wrote:

you personally asked me to mod this so yeah :P
*inb4 my first mod hue ;w;

this is just only a noob suggestion coming from a noob like me that only maps noob rain difficulties ;w; you can just ignore my suggestions if they are not acceptable by your standard .-.

Cup
I like how the notes actually fits the melodic part of the piano :)
  1. 00:14:303 (7,1) - increase the distance a bit between these two notes. the piano melody on that part suits the distance between them - I think this distance is high enough.
  2. 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - try to make something similar to 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1), and same as above, try to increase the distance a bit between 00:40:485 (7) and 00:41:031 (1) - Messed up your timings but I got what you meant ;) Done.
  3. 00:50:775 (5) - moving this further to the left would be great (my suggestion would be x: 40) - I think because these notes get gradually weaker, the equal distance as bpm lowers plays nicely.
Nature's Beauty
since it's not a Cup difficulty :^) why not try adding some few easy dashes (not H-Dashes tyvm) to emphasize some of the melodic part? you can decide yourself which part can be emphasize with a dash :D
but too much dashes can kill the difficulty so keep that in yer mind :P - Added, 1 more dash, was trying to keep dashes on strong main piano notes, as to avoid having too many, as you said.
  1. 00:51:940 - I suggest adding a note here and place it further to the right followed by the spinner at 00:52:485 - Moved the spinner to 00:52:212 - instead, I feel this fits nicely.

there's nothing left to say except the fact that MB is the King Mapper of All Short Songs :^)

gogorank :) :)
Thanks for the mod!
Pew_old_1
Have stars
Topic Starter
MBomb

Pew wrote:

Have stars
o thanks i guess
Absolute Zero
Request from CtB modding group i guess?
I really like the map, just a few really small suggestions. :)

Cup
00:01:758 (1) - No NC?
00:13:212 (5) - NC?
00:34:485 (1) - Move to x=480 instead?
00:39:394 (5) - NC?
00:39:940 (6) - Move to x=192 instead to even out movement? (Me being myself again)
00:49:893 (4,5) - Maybe slightly spread these movements even more because the tempo slows?
00:56:303 - End the spinner here instead?

Salad
00:13:212 (5) - NC?
00:23:031 (3) - Unsure if people of this skill level will expect the dash?
00:39:394 (5) - NC?
00:49:893 (4,5,6) - Same comment as in the cup, but back and forth instead.

Pls remap kds pls ;)
Topic Starter
MBomb

Absolute Zero wrote:

Request from CtB modding group i guess?
I really like the map, just a few really small suggestions. :)

Cup
00:01:758 (1) - No NC? - I have an NC pattern that I'm fitting to here, and this involves having an NC on every four downbeats, this is the NC to start that pattern.
00:13:212 (5) - NC? - ^
00:34:485 (1) - Move to x=480 instead? - Changed the jump through other means.
00:39:394 (5) - NC? - Same as before.
00:39:940 (6) - Move to x=192 instead to even out movement? (Me being myself again) - This was done on purpose to fit the decreasing pitch of these notes.
00:49:893 (4,5) - Maybe slightly spread these movements even more because the tempo slows? - This would the opposite of the effect I want. I want the map to feel like it slows down with the music.
00:56:303 - End the spinner here instead? - Nope, I can hear the held note past this point.

Salad
00:13:212 (5) - NC? - Same as in cup, I'm doing a specific NC pattern here.
00:23:031 (3) - Unsure if people of this skill level will expect the dash? - Increased distance slightly to make the dash more obvious.
00:39:394 (5) - NC? - Same as earlier.
00:49:893 (4,5,6) - Same comment as in the cup, but back and forth instead. - Same as in the cup.

Pls remap kds pls ;)
Thanks for the mod!
SYAHME
Hello, - Magic Bomb -

General


■ No problem.

Cup


■ 00:03:394 (2) - Ctrl + G ?
■ 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - Ctrl + H ?
■ 00:33:394 (4,1) - maybe to the left a bit ?
■ 00:39:394 (5,6,7,1) - right a little bit ?
■ 00:46:485 (4) - right a little bit ?
■ 00:49:212 (3,4,5) - to the center, maybe ?

Nature's Beauty


■ 00:16:485 (2) - maybe Ctrl + G ?
■ 00:18:122 (3,4) - maybe like *this*
■ 00:37:758 (4) - Ctrl + G ? will be connect to next hit circles.
Its just no mistake in this map. Its only just suggestions. Thats all from me. Good luck, ;)
Topic Starter
MBomb

SYAHME wrote:

Hello, - Magic Bomb -

General


■ No problem.

Cup


■ 00:03:394 (2) - Ctrl + G ? - This basically eliminates the little movement there is, so I don't like this.
■ 00:13:212 (5,6,7,1) - Ctrl + H ? - I think this flows better how it is now.
■ 00:33:394 (4,1) - Maybe to the left a bit ? The movement from 3 to 4 is already extremely small in my opinion, I don't think it should be decreased anymore.
■ 00:39:394 (5,6,7,1) - Right a little bit ? - I like this how it is now, the relatively high distance for the very strong high pitched note.
■ 00:46:485 (4) - Right a little bit ? - Again, this distance is already really small, I don't think it makes sense to reduce it any more.
■ 00:49:212 (3,4,5) - To the center, maybe ? - Done, because the increased distance fits the high pitched note here that I complimented using the hitsound.


Nature's Beauty


■ 00:16:485 (2) - Maybe Ctrl + G ? - I feel this distance is small enough that the antiflow is fine.
■ 00:18:122 (3,4) - Maybe like *this* - Because I didn't accept your previous change, accepting this wouldn't make much sense.
■ 00:37:758 (4) - Ctrl + G ? will be connect to next hit circles. - Changed this pattern around, but not in the way you said.

Its just no mistake in this map. Its only just suggestions. Thats all from me. Good luck, ;)
Thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
MBomb
After a conversation with Kurokami, I've moved the spinner 1/4 tick further away from the last note, and have got confirmation that this is fine.
JBHyperion
Discussed a few things in PM and made some spacings more consistent:

PM Log
23:10 JBHyperion: yeah so let me check first
23:10 - Magic Bomb -: IRC or are you just gonna post on forum
23:10 JBHyperion: I'll just IRC since I already got kudosu
23:11 - Magic Bomb -: kk
23:11 JBHyperion: I probs won't even find anything xD
23:11 - Magic Bomb -: welp rip xD
23:12 JBHyperion: those tags though xD
23:14 - Magic Bomb -: It's just MBomb and then every tag is stole from ranked mapset :^)
23:14 JBHyperion: ikr xDS
23:14 JBHyperion: -S*
23:15 - Magic Bomb -: Hmm, do you know the names of the 3 fairies
23:15 - Magic Bomb -: I should add their names to the tags
23:15 - Magic Bomb -: because of the bg
23:15 JBHyperion: one sec
23:15 - Magic Bomb -: just realised that
23:16 JBHyperion: ofc
23:16 JBHyperion: Sunny Milk, Luna Child, and Star Sapphire
23:16 - Magic Bomb -: alright kk added
23:17 JBHyperion: rip wondered why hitsounds were so quiet
23:18 JBHyperion: had sample volume set to 25% xD
23:18 JBHyperion: derp
23:18 - Magic Bomb -: welp xD
23:21 JBHyperion: 00:08:303 (1) - the DS on this is quite a bit less than similar sounds such as 00:01:758 (1,3) - could you move to x-392?
23:21 - Magic Bomb -: kk, done
23:23 JBHyperion: 00:21:394 (1) - Same here, x-328?
23:23 - Magic Bomb -: Yeah, makes sense, done.
23:24 JBHyperion: 00:44:303 (3) - ^ x-256
23:24 JBHyperion: yeah this looks like the shittiest mod ever
23:24 JBHyperion: so bm
23:24 JBHyperion: but there's like
23:24 JBHyperion: nothing else to talk about xD
23:25 - Magic Bomb -: ok can i guess the last change
23:25 - Magic Bomb -: 00:47:576 (1) - to x:328
23:25 - Magic Bomb -: right
23:25 JBHyperion: wow you're good at this
23:25 JBHyperion: ;)
23:25 - Magic Bomb -: yea done
23:26 JBHyperion: only other thing is I'd move 00:49:212 (3) - to the left a little, like x-224
23:26 JBHyperion: it's not hard to catch per se, but noticeably tighter than any other movement in the diff
23:27 - Magic Bomb -: moved 5 to x:224 as well
23:27 JBHyperion: sure
23:28 *JBHyperion is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/765733 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni [Nature's Beauty]]
23:28 JBHyperion: probably gonna be more of the same tbh, just consistency of spacing
23:29 - Magic Bomb -: lol
23:30 JBHyperion: 00:08:303 (1) - Much smaller DS than similar sounds, I'd make this slider into a curve and move to x-96
23:31 - Magic Bomb -: curve in what way?
23:32 JBHyperion: idk something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564046 this]?
23:33 - Magic Bomb -: kk done
23:34 JBHyperion: 00:34:485 (1) - Same kind of idea here, or move 00:32:849 (5,6) - to the right a bit
23:35 JBHyperion: x-408 feels like a nice balance if you want to do it this way
23:35 JBHyperion: since you have the 2/1 spacing before hand
23:35 - Magic Bomb -: x:432 i decided to go with
23:36 JBHyperion: fair dos
23:38 JBHyperion: are 00:49:212 (3,4) - supposed to require dash or not?
23:38 JBHyperion: the spacing is kinda close atm
23:39 - Magic Bomb -: Nope
23:39 JBHyperion: I'd think about reducing that spacing a tiny bit then
23:39 JBHyperion: 00:49:893 (4,5,6) - to x-400 maybe
23:40 - Magic Bomb -: kk done
23:40 - Magic Bomb -: wait
23:40 - Magic Bomb -: yuii thinks one of the offsets is slightly off
23:40 - Magic Bomb -: at the end
23:41 - Magic Bomb -: can't remember which one
23:41 JBHyperion: ranked Std version please
23:41 JBHyperion: ask Deif xD
23:41 - Magic Bomb -: yeah ik
23:42 - Magic Bomb -: also it's only 4ms and as far as I know it's only unrankable if it's above 10ms off
23:42 - Magic Bomb -: but he said 00:49:893 - this sounded 4ms early
23:42 JBHyperion: ooer
23:43 - Magic Bomb -: Sounds completely fine how it is now to me
23:44 JBHyperion: alright then
23:45 - Magic Bomb -: kk yeah Yuii- said "Then leave it"
23:45 JBHyperion: alright
23:46 - Magic Bomb -: kk should I update now then
23:46 JBHyperion: if you're ready, go for it
23:47 - Magic Bomb -: kk updated

Everything looks okay to me so let's do this

Bubbled~
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