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Three Days Grace - Unbreakable Heart

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Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 3 de setembro de 2015 at 17:15:55

Artist: Three Days Grace
Title: Unbreakable Heart
Tags: Hoen metal rock alternative cut version short ver. small lead fire hell adam gontier heaven soul apocalyptica matt walst human transit of venus pain
BPM: 140
Filesize: 1606kb
Play Time: 00:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2,77 stars, 92 notes)
  2. Hoen's Easy (1,4 stars, 43 notes)
  3. Normal (1,62 stars, 61 notes)
  4. Unbreakable (3,29 stars, 117 notes)
Download: Three Days Grace - Unbreakable Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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You're the one, you're the unbreakable...

HEART!
Last edited by Lumael , edited 55 times in total.
Synpoo
616 posts
Joined August 2013
Synpoo
hi, m4m from your queue

[Normal]
cs2.5 is a bit large imo
  1. 00:31:070 (1) - add clap to tail
  2. 00:31:927 (2) - remove clap from head, add clap to tail
  3. 00:34:498 (1,3) - this stack is actually kinda hard to read imo
  4. 00:53:355 (3) - consider shortening this to a 2/1 and placing notes on the following red and white tick to emphasize the drums
  5. 01:02:784 (2) - add finish to head
  6. 01:03:427 (3,4,5,6) - oh god this is so cluttered, there's so much room elsewhere, utilize it
  7. 01:08:784 - this definitely needs a note, such a powerful beat and it feels awkward not clicking anything
    ^ applies to all diffs
[Hard]
  1. 00:35:998 (3) - pretty minor but this can be moved more to the right to avoid an overlap with 00:36:641 (2) -
  2. 00:54:641 (5) - ctrl+J and rotate it so that it flows into the next slider better, also 5% volume on the end
[Insane]
  1. 00:28:498 (3) - add whistle on head
  2. 00:30:213 (3,4,5) - emphasis here is a little odd...too much is being put on 4 while very little is put on 5, adjust the spacing here accordingly
  3. 00:39:213 (4,5) - ctrl+G makes this flow a bit smoother into the next slider
  4. 00:41:355 (1) - maybe add finish on 20% volume? (do this on every diff if you decide to)
  5. 00:48:427 (2,3,4) - this triple is just so random and thrown out there, there's not a single other triple in the map, so why is there one here
  6. 00:54:641 (5) - this should end on the blue tick, snapping it to 1/8 will have so many people getting 100 on this slider (and mute the end)
  7. 00:57:213 (2,3,4,5) - flow here is pretty bad compared to the rest of the map, i suggest ctrl+G on 3 & 4 and placing 5 something like below:
    SPOILER
  8. 01:00:105 - if you're gonna place a triple in this map, place one here
  9. 01:00:213 - from here onwards you seem to skip out (or some finishes are actually randomly placed) on the finishes that you've been placing on every 1st and 3rd beat of the measure, I suggest keeping consistency and placing the missing hitsounds
  10. 01:05:248 - this can use a note as well
Gl with this!
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo
Hi! From your M4M queue

[Normal]
00:36:213 (3,4) - maybe blanket those?
00:44:784 (1,2) - improve blanket
01:00:213 (4) - maybe move this a little bit upwards for better flow.
01:01:713 (7,5) - maybe delete those notes since it feels a little bit overmapped. You did it right 00:55:927 (3,4) - here and 01:06:213 (3,4) - here imo.

[Hard]
00:34:498 (1) - slight detail, move the last grey node to x:181 y:142
00:38:784 (3,1) - I think you should remove this overlap because it's a little bit tricky to read, specially for beginners.
00:41:998 (2) - maybe move where the 3 is.

[Insane]
00:30:641 (5) - Maybe ctrl+h + rotate in -15° for better flow?
00:34:498 (1,2) - I found this pattern a little bit weird, maybe try something like this for better flow imo.
00:38:784 (3,4) - Maybe try with a 1/1 slider here since u used them 00:37:927 (1) - here and 00:39:641 (1) - here. If not, I think you shouldn't make a jump 00:38:784 (3,4) - here, since the strong-beat is 00:39:641 - here and it doesn't make sense at all
00:54:641 (5) - maybe you should do this slider a 3/4 and not a 7/8
01:00:213 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion, but here would be cool if you use 3/4 sliders

Hope it helped :)
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael
~Applied almost everything from Synpoo's mod
denied everything from iYiyo though... sorry D:

Thank you guys for the mod!
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo

Lumael wrote:

~Applied almost everything from Synpoo's mod
denied everything from iYiyo though... sorry D:

Thank you guys for the mod!

Oh I see.. sorry :(
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael

iYiyo wrote:

Lumael wrote:

~Applied almost everything from Synpoo's mod
denied everything from iYiyo though... sorry D:

Thank you guys for the mod!

Oh I see.. sorry :(
Sorry, please don't be sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! This will make me feel bad..
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Lumael wrote:

iYiyo wrote:

~Applied almost everything from Synpoo's mod
denied everything from iYiyo though... sorry D:

Thank you guys for the mod!

Oh I see.. sorry :(

Sorry, please don't be sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! This will make me feel bad..
Mini-check on Game
2015-08-16 19:17 Lumael: lol
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: new map
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: ACTION is listening to Three Days Grace - Unbreakable Heart
2015-08-16 20:31 HappyRocket88: New? :o
2015-08-16 20:31 HappyRocket88: Wasn't it the graveryard?
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: 100% done
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: idk if I'll submit though
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: never submitted this song
2015-08-16 20:31 HappyRocket88: Have ever checked if someone has already mapped?
2015-08-16 20:32 Lumael: no, let me see
2015-08-16 20:32 Lumael: theres just 3 songs of that pending
2015-08-16 20:32 Lumael: of three dasy grace*
2015-08-16 20:33 Lumael: nobody mapped this
2015-08-16 20:33 Lumael: yeah
2015-08-16 20:33 Lumael: normal, hard insane spread done
2015-08-16 20:34 Lumael: should I submit?
2015-08-16 20:35 HappyRocket88: The normal is...
2015-08-16 20:35 HappyRocket88: under 2 stars?
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: yes
2015-08-16 20:35 HappyRocket88: BPM is timed properly?
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: 1.6 stars
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: hard 2.7
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: insadne 3.4
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: yes
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: hitsoundd done
2015-08-16 20:36 HappyRocket88: BG file meet the requirements of the ranking criteria.
2015-08-16 20:36 HappyRocket88: ?
2015-08-16 20:36 Lumael: yes '-'
2015-08-16 20:36 Lumael: lol
2015-08-16 20:36 HappyRocket88: The mapset has storyboard?
2015-08-16 20:38 Lumael: no
2015-08-16 20:38 Lumael: I can make though..
2015-08-16 20:38 Lumael: wont take too long
2015-08-16 20:38 HappyRocket88: So, if it doesn't have, uncheck widescreen support option and letterbox during breaks.
2015-08-16 20:39 Lumael: ah good point
2015-08-16 20:39 Lumael: unticked
2015-08-16 20:39 HappyRocket88: Stack leniency is good among the diffs
2015-08-16 20:39 HappyRocket88: ?
2015-08-16 20:40 Lumael: yep
2015-08-16 20:40 Lumael: but I just noticed that the combo colour is very no sense
2015-08-16 20:41 Lumael: I created this beatmap when I was very noob at mapping
2015-08-16 20:41 Lumael: I just remapped
2015-08-16 20:41 HappyRocket88: Well combo colors is important to lead players among the objects.
2015-08-16 20:41 HappyRocket88: A good point could be two dark and two bright colors.
2015-08-16 20:41 HappyRocket88: Based on the bg image
2015-08-16 20:42 Lumael: I'm looking for
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: ok found some good ones
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: this looks like a BN check
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: aosdijasiodjasiod
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: What about the tags?
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: are they palced correctly?
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: *placed
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: they're good
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: I hope so.
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: Ummm...
2015-08-16 20:44 Lumael: I added as many words I could asdioasiod
2015-08-16 20:44 HappyRocket88: W8
2015-08-16 20:44 HappyRocket88: Is there any unnecessary green line?
2015-08-16 20:44 Lumael: nop
2015-08-16 20:45 HappyRocket88: Are there two green lines at the same point?
2015-08-16 20:45 Lumael: nop
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: there's not too much
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: lines
2015-08-16 20:46 HappyRocket88: Did you use the default hitsounds?
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: custom
2015-08-16 20:46 HappyRocket88: do they sound good?
2015-08-16 20:46 HappyRocket88: I mean the bitrate
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: yeah
2015-08-16 20:47 Lumael: post this after as a mod to get kds ijasdjaisdj
2015-08-16 20:47 HappyRocket88: OFC! XDDDD
2015-08-16 20:47 HappyRocket88: Ummm... 
2015-08-16 20:47 HappyRocket88: UMMMMMM....
2015-08-16 20:47 Lumael: hehehe
2015-08-16 20:47 Lumael: let me check aimod
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: I think it's enough. I'll complain about DS on the Normal.
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: lol
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: its perfect :3
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: All the green lines are snaped?
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: yes
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: That's all
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: REady for be bubbled
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: ok ^^ I'll submit so
2015-08-16 20:49 Lumael: asjdioajsdijasiodaiosd I wish
2015-08-16 20:49 HappyRocket88: Good job with the mapset, then.
2015-08-16 20:50 Lumael: lol mapset is bugged, I hate that
2015-08-16 20:50 Lumael: it takes quite a long time to show all difs and circles
2015-08-16 20:50 Lumael: on the website
2015-08-16 20:51 HappyRocket88: yeah
2015-08-16 20:51 HappyRocket88: Let's wait then
2015-08-16 20:51 HappyRocket88: C:
2015-08-16 20:52 Lumael: the diff spread appeared but the bg stills bugged
2015-08-16 20:54 Lumael: ok
2015-08-16 20:54 Lumael: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/764518 Three Days Grace - Unbreakable Heart]
2015-08-16 20:56 HappyRocket88: Deserve my star, mr. lumael.
2015-08-16 20:57 HappyRocket88: I'll post this conversation later.
2015-08-16 20:57 Lumael: :OOOO thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Yeah! You should feel bad because you didn't reply WHY you denied everything from Iyiyo]
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael

iYiyo wrote:

Hi! From your M4M queue

[Normal]
00:36:213 (3,4) - maybe blanket those? they're blanketed
00:44:784 (1,2) - improve blanket the pattern symmetry is the focus here
01:00:213 (4) - maybe move this a little bit upwards for better flow. flow isn't bad here
01:01:713 (7,5) - maybe delete those notes since it feels a little bit overmapped. You did it right 00:55:927 (3,4) - here and 01:06:213 (3,4) - here imo. they're not overmapped, I can hear a sound there

[Hard]
00:34:498 (1) - slight detail, move the last grey node to x:181 y:142 this blanket is good
00:38:784 (3,1) - I think you should remove this overlap because it's a little bit tricky to read, specially for beginners. this overlap is fine, I've seen worst ranked
00:41:998 (2) - maybe move where the 3 is. I like it more under 1

[Insane]
00:30:641 (5) - Maybe ctrl+h + rotate in -15° for better flow? doesn't seen necessary
00:34:498 (1,2) - I found this pattern a little bit weird, maybe try something like this for better flow imo.
00:38:784 (3,4) - Maybe try with a 1/1 slider here since u used them 00:37:927 (1) - here and 00:39:641 (1) - here. If not, I think you shouldn't make a jump i really don't understand consistency
00:38:784 (3,4) - here, since the strong-beat is 00:39:641 - here and it doesn't make sense at all why ;-;
00:54:641 (5) - maybe you should do this slider a 3/4 and not a 7/8 sorry? xD
01:00:213 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion, but here would be cool if you use 3/4 sliders current is good

Hope it helped :)
I hope its enough
pife1
522 posts
Joined January 2012
pife1
Hi from you M4M

General

As say in the ranking criteria: You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it., I know that you have a intro, but you intro is very long is almost 40% of your map.

Hoen's Easy

01:00:641 (2,3,4) - there are a rhythm that use soft-hit whistle why do you contine with him? in notes like 01:03:213, 01:04:070 you know that after this pattern will repeat and after it'll be some empty if you won't to apply them.

01:08:784 (1) - this slider is very short, I know that the song is also short but we know that will be a fail to many begginners, also the spinner need a tick white before the slider in easy.

Normal

00:27:641 (1) - it will be nice that (1) will be same to 00:28:498 (2) in curves, I mean some like two brothers,
00:30:855 - need a note for "The"
00:31:713 - need a note fo "ta"
00:36:213 (3) - Repeat because of "lie" feel some long
00:39:641 (3) - Repeat because of "try" feel some long
00:41:570 - need a note for "when"
00:42:213 (3) - you should convert him in a circle and move 00:43:070 (4) to 00:42:641 for the "crazy" this crazy is very long
00:45:641 (2) - Is as above convert (2) in a circle and use the slider long 00:46:498 (3) in 00:46:295 for "apart"
00:49:070 (2) - I suggest recort this slider and repeat it for the "remember" try this
00:58:498 (1,2) - Only a suggest and if you use a slider repeat ending in 00:58:927
01:08:784 (1) - The begginiers need a tick white before the spinners as in easy

Hard

00:29:355 (1) - this slider need be more long for the "soul" or add a repeat
00:32:141 - need a note "take"
00:32:784 (1) - why nc here "control" belongs to the same stanza
00:33:641 (2) - NC if you let to 00:32:784 (1) with the old combo
00:34:498 (1) - let the before combo
00:36:213 (1,2,3) - "lies" need a long slider
00:38:784 (3) - this slider is very confunsing, please fix it
00:41:355 (1) - Anothers difficulties have a finish in the head least this
00:42:641 (4) - this slider need be long add some different beacuse "crazy" is not showy
00:46:070 (4) - ^ but with "apart"

Unbreakeable

00:28:498 (3) - I suggest add a circle in 00:28:498 for "try" and let the slider 00:28:498 (3) 00:28:713 "to" all for the focus to them
00:29:355 (1) - I think that "soul" need a slider long although a insane
00:42:641 (4) - ^ but with crazy
00:43:927 (3,4) - this is a big jump could reduce it
00:46:070 (4) - I think that "apart" need a slider long although a insane
00:54:641 (5) - this slider does not give enough time to get 00:55:070 (1) please fix it soon
01:05:570 - Here must has a note because" you're the" some 00:58:498 (1,2)

Well guys, great song, good lyrics,

Postdata: HappyRocket says very very tsundere: baka
Kagetsu
796 posts
Joined March 2015
Kagetsu
m4m from your queue

[Hoen's Easy]
  1. 00:31:927 (2,3) - i think flow is a little weird here
  2. 00:48:213 (1,2) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:32:570 - I would add a note here
  2. 00:37:713 - ^
  3. 00:41:141 - ^
  4. 00:41:355 (1,2) -i would transform these two into a slider
  5. 00:49:713 - maybe add a note here?
  6. 00:58:713 (2) - i would delete this note
  7. 01:04:284 (5) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:141 - I would add a note here
  2. 00:33:427 - ^
  3. 00:37:713 - ^
  4. 00:38:784 (3,1) - i'm not sure if this is rankable because these two are entirely overlapped
  5. 00:42:427 - note
  6. 00:42:641 (4) - i would extend this slider up to this point 00:43:070 -
  7. 00:43:070 (1) - i would delete this and add a note here 00:43:070 (1) -
  8. 00:53:355 (1,2) - flow is a little weird here imo
I think is a great map... gl with this (:
FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL
Hi! M4M from your queue
  • [General]

  • [Hoen's Easy]
  1. 00:29:355 (3) and 00:34:498 (1) - imo, I think that these sliders are not very pretty. Try to replace them with sliderwawe or similar to 00:39:641 (3) or 00:53:355 (3)
  2. 00:34:498 (1,2) - Your patterns are followed voice, but here you miss some important bits. I suggest to replace him on such patterns
  3. 00:49:070 (2,3) - I don't really like this overlap. Try so
  4. 00:58:498 (4,1) - ^
  5. 01:08:784 (1) - too short spinner for Easy. Imo, it is better to do without him

  • [Normal]
  1. 01:03:427 (3,6) - I do not think it's a cool idea is to allow overlap

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:39:641 (1) - it is difficult to play, especially for beginners. Here's what I suggest
  2. 00:48:855 (2,4,1) - imo, is worth to remove the overlap
  3. 01:05:355 (1,1) - ^
  4. 01:01:713 (6) - overmap, should remove

  • [Unbreakable]
  1. 00:37:927 (1,3) - uneven blanket
  2. 00:54:641 (5,1) - Is not it too big a jump? I think here a lot of players lose combo
  3. 00:56:355 (4,5) - stack?

Great song, GL!
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael
Saving post for mod replies

life's busy..

pife1

pife1 wrote:

Hi from you M4M

General

As say in the ranking criteria: You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it., I know that you have a intro, but you intro is very long is almost 40% of your map. I'll fix that soon

Normal

00:27:641 (1) - it will be nice that (1) will be same to 00:28:498 (2) in curves, I mean some like two brothers, thats not a reason :p
00:30:855 - need a note for "The" I never follow vocals, this goes for all syllables
00:31:713 - need a note fo "ta"
00:36:213 (3) - Repeat because of "lie" feel some long
00:39:641 (3) - Repeat because of "try" feel some long
00:41:570 - need a note for "when"
00:42:213 (3) - you should convert him in a circle and move 00:43:070 (4) to 00:42:641 for the "crazy" this crazy is very long
00:45:641 (2) - Is as above convert (2) in a circle and use the slider long 00:46:498 (3) in 00:46:295 for "apart"
00:49:070 (2) - I suggest recort this slider and repeat it for the "remember" try this
00:58:498 (1,2) - Only a suggest and if you use a slider repeat ending in 00:58:927
01:08:784 (1) - The begginiers need a tick white before the spinners as in easy I don't know about this rule, anyway this is a Norma

No changes :3

Hard

00:29:355 (1) - this slider need be more long for the "soul" or add a repeat
00:32:141 - need a note "take"
00:32:784 (1) - why nc here "control" belongs to the same stanza
00:33:641 (2) - NC if you let to 00:32:784 (1) with the old combo
00:34:498 (1) - let the before combo
00:36:213 (1,2,3) - "lies" need a long slider
00:38:784 (3) - this slider is very confunsing, please fix it
00:41:355 (1) - Anothers difficulties have a finish in the head least this fixed
00:42:641 (4) - this slider need be long add some different beacuse "crazy" is not showy
00:46:070 (4) - ^ but with "apart"

Finish fixed just, sorry following vocals is odd

Unbreakeable

00:28:498 (3) - I suggest add a circle in 00:28:498 for "try" and let the slider 00:28:498 (3) 00:28:713 "to" all for the focus to them
00:29:355 (1) - I think that "soul" need a slider long although a insane
00:42:641 (4) - ^ but with crazy
00:43:927 (3,4) - this is a big jump could reduce it i dont think so, also the bpm is low, and the 4 is strong
00:46:070 (4) - I think that "apart" need a slider long although a insane
00:54:641 (5) - this slider does not give enough time to get 00:55:070 (1) please fix it soon
01:05:570 - Here must has a note because" you're the" some 00:58:498 (1,2)

No changes sorry, won't follow vocals

Well guys, great song, good lyrics, ty :33

Archangel

Archangel wrote:

m4m from your queue

[Normal]
  1. 00:32:570 - I would add a note here lets take the 1/2 for the kiai to make it stronger
  2. 00:37:713 - ^
  3. 00:41:141 - ^
  4. 00:41:355 (1,2) -i would transform these two into a slider I don't see the need of
  5. 00:49:713 - maybe add a note here?
  6. 00:58:713 (2) - i would delete this note Yes , I was waiting someone say about this adjisodjasdioio
  7. 01:04:284 (5) - ^ plays very well though
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:141 - I would add a note here
  2. 00:33:427 - ^
  3. 00:37:713 - ^
  4. 00:38:784 (3,1) - i'm not sure if this is rankable because these two are entirely overlapped
  5. 00:42:427 - note
  6. 00:42:641 (4) - i would extend this slider up to this point 00:43:070 -
  7. 00:43:070 (1) - i would delete this and add a note here 00:43:070 (1) -
  8. 00:53:355 (1,2) - flow is a little weird here imo

    No changes sorry :p
I think is a great map... gl with this (: Thank you!!

FCL

FCL wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue
  • [General]
    oops fixed/list:u:1337]


[list:1337][Normal]
  1. 01:03:427 (3,6) - I do not think it's a cool idea is to allow overlap lol ? this is invisible while playing

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:39:641 (1) - it is difficult to play, especially for beginners. Here's what I suggest Yeah thats good
  2. 00:48:855 (2,4,1) - imo, is worth to remove the overlap not yet...
  3. 01:05:355 (1,1) - ^ what lol, this is 10000000000000000% not an overlap
  4. 01:01:713 (6) - overmap, should remove There's a very Strong noise there....

Changed just the full overlap

  • [Unbreakable]
  1. 00:37:927 (1,3) - uneven blanket blanket is fine
  2. 00:54:641 (5,1) - Is not it too big a jump? I think here a lot of players lose combo this is insane, for me it should even be 1/8
  3. 00:56:355 (4,5) - stack? I have to give emphasys to this sound

No changes on this diff

Great song, GL! Thank you!!

Thank you guys! My mod will be up until saturday, probably Friday night (I'm at GMT -3)
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
Pife , Archangel, FCL


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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Three Days Grace - Unbreakable Heart.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53248
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 27641
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Unbreakable Heart
TitleUnicode:Unbreakable Heart
Artist:Three Days Grace
ArtistUnicode:Three Days Grace
Creator:Lumael
Version:Hoen's Easy
Source:
Tags:Hoen metal rock alternative cut version short ver. small lead fire hell adam gontier heaven soul apocalyptica matt walst human transit of venus pain
BeatmapID:764518
BeatmapSetID:346339

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"broken-heart-wallpaper-1920-1080-6501-1366x768.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
213,428.571428571429,4,2,1,100,1,0
27641,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
28070,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
28498,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
29784,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
29998,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
33213,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
33641,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
34927,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
38355,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
38570,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
40070,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
40284,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
43498,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
43713,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
44355,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
44570,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
46927,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
47141,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
50355,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
50570,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
52070,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
52284,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
53784,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
55070,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
68784,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
69213,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
69641,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
70070,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,64,64
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 128,0,0
Combo4 : 128,128,128

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356,248,28927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,284,29355,2,0,B|184:276|128:296|128:296|72:276|72:216|88:172|104:160|104:160|128:176|152:176|152:176,1,330,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,31070,6,0,P|260:60|320:60,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,132,31927,2,0,P|344:160|284:160,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,220,32784,2,0,B|148:260|92:244|92:244|40:212|44:144,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,34070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,112,34498,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,36,35355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,252,36213,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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120,324,37498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,236,37927,6,0,P|52:128|132:60,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,40,39213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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148,292,41355,6,0,L|48:240,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,42213,2,0,L|153:182,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,52,47784,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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64,352,51213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,244,51641,6,0,P|52:168|160:72,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,208,58498,2,0,P|352:260|364:336,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,40,68784,1,6,0:0:0:0:
Battle
2,862 posts
Joined February 2014
Battle
Just sayin, I'm real bad at modding lower diffs but w/e

From q:

[Hard]
00:08:270 (1,2) - maybe align 2 right under 1?

wow that mod is sad

but this map is pretty good so ya
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael

[-Deemo-] wrote:

Just sayin, I'm real bad at modding lower diffs but w/e

From q:

[Hard]
00:08:270 (1,2) - maybe align 2 right under 1?

wow that mod is sad

but this map is pretty good so ya
Thank you for the mod, but I didn't understand.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[General]
  1. Fine
[Unbreakable]
  1. 00:09:984 (1) - nice slider, but make flow weird
  2. 00:28:413 (5) - nc to notice slow down
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:413 (5) - same as insane
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:699 (2) - missing clap at the tail
[Hoen's Easy]
  1. recommend add more Finish in kiai time, like other diff
  2. disable Widescreen Support
nice mappset!
call me back if you need recheck
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael

Rizia wrote:

[General]
  1. Fine
[Unbreakable]
  1. 00:09:984 (1) - nice slider, but make flow weird Fixed, RIP slider :(
  2. 00:28:413 (5) - nc to notice slow down I think I forgot here
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:413 (5) - same as insane Here too xD
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:699 (2) - missing clap at the tail oops xD
[Hoen's Easy]
He allowed me to apply the mod this time

  1. recommend add more Finish in kiai time, like other diff Added just like my diffs
  2. disable Widescreen Support Fixed
nice mappset! Thank you!!
call me back if you need recheck
Thank you for the mod Rizia!
-Makishima S-
2,434 posts
Joined August 2013
-Makishima S-
Greetings Lumael,

Here is requested M4M, wish it will help! If you have truble with image links, contact me please, thank you.

General

Everything looks fine for me, timing sections checked also.

Unbreakable

00:23:270 (5) - change into circles, fits more pattern from 00:20:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:34:841 (3,4,5,1) - i would change it into http://puu.sh/jLNvM.jpg - fits song, makes it more interesting to play (free idea)

Nothing more from my side, nice job!

Hard

00:09:127 (2,3,1,2,3) - You can make nice blanked with (2) and (3), ex. http://puu.sh/jLNZQ.jpg, then fit next (1), (2), (3) sliders into another blanket, ex. http://puu.sh/jLO53.jpg

I am not sure about one thing, you can ignore it if you want, for me it played well like this:
00:35:484 (6) - remove circle

Everything else is ok for me, good job!

Normal

00:34:627 (4,6) - consider removing / changing stacks, in my opinion a bit too much for a normal difficulty
00:37:199 (3,5) - ^

That's all from me, nice one!

Hoen's Easy

Nothing to add, nicely done.
McLaren12
66 posts
Joined February 2015
McLaren12
Hi from your m4m queue~

My mod

SPOILER
Easy

Didn't notice anything, nice work

Normal

^

Hard

00:24:985 (2) - Move to x:224 y:192
00:30:127 (4) - May be a bit tricky, but maybe you can flip horizontally, then move to x:452 y:64
00:38:270 (4) (5) - Maybe make these two circles a single slider instead?

Unbreakable

00:26:698 (4) (1) - Doesn't really flow that well, you should consider remapping
00:27:770 (2) (3) (4) - ^^

Sorry if it was small, didn't notice much else. Nice job on this beatmap ;)
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lumael

McLaren12 wrote:

Hi from your m4m queue~

My mod

SPOILER
Easy

Didn't notice anything, nice work

Normal

^

Hard

00:24:985 (2) - Move to x:224 y:192 I think this is fine how it is
00:30:127 (4) - May be a bit tricky, but maybe you can flip horizontally, then move to x:452 y:64 ^
00:38:270 (4) (5) - Maybe make these two circles a single slider instead? aw sorry

Unbreakable

00:26:698 (4) (1) - Doesn't really flow that well, you should consider remapping Flow is very good here
00:27:770 (2) (3) (4) - ^^ same :3

Sorry if it was small, didn't notice much else. Nice job on this beatmap ;)
Thank you for your mod! :)
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