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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 25 April 2017 at 9:15:26 PM

Artist: DJ YOSHITAKA
Title: SHION
Source: pop'n music 19 TUNE STREET
Tags: Kuo Kyoka jubeat fulfill saucer wac NANAKO HI-SPEED FANTASY ハイスピード幻想チューン beatmania IIDX REFLEC BEAT
BPM: 179
Filesize: 3496kb
Play Time: 02:01
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SHION





KK's Easy by Kuo Kyoka
victorica's EX by victorica_db
Lyrics
聞こえるなら 手を伸ばして
凍てつく空 青く染まるまで
Ah

途切れてく景色 何度でもつむぐように
白い息の中で目を覚ます
感情が今震える

聞こえるなら 手を伸ばして
凍える夢 見えないから
壊れるまで 目をふさいで
記憶の糸 今はたどるだけ
Ah Ah ただ…

聞こえるなら 手を伸ばして
凍える夢 見えないから
壊れるまで 目をふさいで
記憶の糸 今はたどるだけ
Last edited by YaHao on , edited 42 times in total.
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basic
00:11:349 (11349|2) - 在00:11:433 -
00:20:567 - 加 和00:19:226 - 一樣
01:04:980 (64980|0) - 在01:05:064 -
01:37:159 (97159|2,97327|1) - 這兩個應該在01:37:243 - 上面


adv
00:49:561 - 建議再加一個
01:37:243 - 前後兩個音放錯位置了吧

還不錯
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3難度的話幹嘛不照Pop'n的難度,頂難度叫EX啊
  • Easy
  • Normal
  • Hyper
  • EX

還有Normal sample聽得很醉


BASIC
00:11:014 (11014|1,11349|2,11684|3,12020|1,12187|3) - 這坨到底是啥,聽起來不像抓鼓點也不像抓vocal


ADVANCED
01:17:885 (77885|1) - 這是kick,不是琴音
01:38:165 - 我覺得加個SV會爽到炸
01:50:399 - 還有從這裡開始都最後一拍都沒對在白線上,我懷疑有變拍,你要不要找個timing check看一下,感覺要紅線
做的很整潔,基本上沒啥好摸的
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[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

basic
00:11:349 (11349|2) - 在00:11:433 -
00:20:567 - 加 和00:19:226 - 一樣
01:04:980 (64980|0) - 在01:05:064 -
01:37:159 (97159|2,97327|1) - 這兩個應該在01:37:243 - 上面 这段全部改抓鼓了


adv
00:49:561 - 建議再加一個
01:37:243 - 前後兩個音放錯位置了吧 主音,不过鼓加了

還不錯

其他都ok,谢谢摸
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Spy wrote:
3難度的話幹嘛不照Pop'n的難度,頂難度叫EX啊
  • Easy
  • Normal
  • Hyper
  • EX

還有Normal sample聽得很醉


BASIC
00:11:014 (11014|1,11349|2,11684|3,12020|1,12187|3) - 這坨到底是啥,聽起來不像抓鼓點也不像抓vocal 我全部改成鼓了


ADVANCED
01:17:885 (77885|1) - 這是kick,不是琴音 这个的确有琴
01:38:165 - 我覺得加個SV會爽到炸 我试试
01:50:399 - 還有從這裡開始都最後一拍都沒對在白線上,我懷疑有變拍,你要不要找個timing check看一下,感覺要紅線 嗯,我找找小学生
做的很整潔,基本上沒啥好摸的

感谢 <3
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這曲子不是在jubeat saucer fulfill嗎,怎麼只標了jubeat saucer。。2個是0.5代的關係
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Spy wrote:
這曲子不是在jubeat saucer fulfill嗎,怎麼只標了jubeat saucer。。2個是0.5代的關係

嗯,晚上回去加Orz
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timing

TimingPoints
1629,335.195530726257,4,2,0,30,1,0
12355,-100,4,2,0,30,0,1
12522,335.195530726257,4,2,0,30,1,1
22410,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
44533,-100,4,2,0,30,0,1
65985,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
98164,-50,4,2,0,30,0,0
98331,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
98499,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0

绿线已经对齐 你自己调整下note啊
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ok, 全部update
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这个vocal听了都虚了,差评
col=1-4

Normal
00:04:310 (4310|3) - 放到1去,适合jack,除了前面第一个钢琴不适合jack,这个和后面的那个用jack都不错
00:08:332 - finish的音效啊,加个在4吧
00:17:047 - http://puu.sh/k9n5r/968e04891a.jpg
00:21:404 (21404|3) - 放在2去,和00:20:901 (20901|1) - 一样的音
00:21:907 (21907|3,22158|0) - 这两个也建议在一个轨道上,然后00:22:410 (22410|2) - 改成一个在00:22:745 - 结束的LN
00:54:253 (54253|3,54421|3,54756|2,54924|2) - 这两个jack都不合理,无论从vocal还是piano还是chord
00:56:432 (56432|2,56600|2) - 从这里到后面钢琴solo那段的jack都不太合理,你自己斟酌
01:28:611 - 没必要double
01:34:142 - 之前说过,也是加个
01:52:410 (112410|2,112745|3) - 各向左移动一个

Hyper
00:04:142 (4142|2,4310|3) - 这个时候jack,参考nm我说的
00:06:824 - 漏了个,你可以考虑各减少00:06:489 - 和00:06:656 - 一个
00:12:020 - 原本我想帮你魔改成这样,http://puu.sh/k9nwG/fdeb172fbf.jpg ,然后仔细听发现你又漏抓了00:11:852 - 的钢琴,最后我还是觉得你这两个钢琴都不抓更好,前面的stream不就是没抓,这里还是 http://puu.sh/k9nBj/ab5cf7ea15.jpg 这样吧
00:17:214 (17214|3,17382|2,17549|3) - bass,可以魔改成 http://puu.sh/k9nGm/65f5158d20.jpg ,右边是bass的3个,左边的2个是鼓点
00:33:471 - 删了hithat,抓的莫名其妙,如果是背景音也一样不合理,还不如去抓00:32:801 -
00:54:421 (54421|0,54589|1) - ctrl+g见证奇迹,121表示主音
00:54:924 (54924|3) - 放到2去,主音变化体现一下
01:02:298 (62298|1,62466|3,62466|1,62633|3) - 违和感,,,这个jack,,怎么说,不对又不错
01:16:209 - http://puu.sh/k9nZM/ee8dec308b.jpg
01:16:795 - 加一个,finish
01:29:952 (89952|3) - 放到2,手感会更好,我觉得这里就是和开头一个尿性
02:00:343 - http://puu.sh/k9oa7/3a0666b50c.jpg

没了,射个星
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Marirose wrote:
这个vocal听了都虚了,差评 - 打爆
col=1-4

Normal
00:04:310 (4310|3) - 放到1去,适合jack,除了前面第一个钢琴不适合jack,这个和后面的那个用jack都不错
00:08:332 - finish的音效啊,加个在4吧
00:17:047 - http://puu.sh/k9n5r/968e04891a.jpg - 这个保留
00:21:404 (21404|3) - 放在2去,和00:20:901 (20901|1) - 一样的音
00:21:907 (21907|3,22158|0) - 这两个也建议在一个轨道上,然后00:22:410 (22410|2) - 改成一个在00:22:745 - 结束的LN - - pitch差太多所以没放在一起,LN可以
00:54:253 (54253|3,54421|3,54756|2,54924|2) - 这两个jack都不合理,无论从vocal还是piano还是chord
00:56:432 (56432|2,56600|2) - 从这里到后面钢琴solo那段的jack都不太合理,你自己斟酌
01:28:611 - 没必要double
01:34:142 - 之前说过,也是加个
01:52:410 (112410|2,112745|3) - 各向左移动一个

Hyper
00:04:142 (4142|2,4310|3) - 这个时候jack,参考nm我说的
00:06:824 - 漏了个,你可以考虑各减少00:06:489 - 和00:06:656 - 一个
00:12:020 - 原本我想帮你魔改成这样,http://puu.sh/k9nwG/fdeb172fbf.jpg ,然后仔细听发现你又漏抓了00:11:852 - 的钢琴,最后我还是觉得你这两个钢琴都不抓更好,前面的stream不就是没抓,这里还是 http://puu.sh/k9nBj/ab5cf7ea15.jpg 这样吧
00:17:214 (17214|3,17382|2,17549|3) - bass,可以魔改成 http://puu.sh/k9nGm/65f5158d20.jpg ,右边是bass的3个,左边的2个是鼓点 - 听出来了,bass的三连,可是这排列是在不和我胃口 ;W;
00:33:471 - 删了hithat,抓的莫名其妙,如果是背景音也一样不合理,还不如去抓00:32:801 -
00:54:421 (54421|0,54589|1) - ctrl+g见证奇迹,121表示主音
00:54:924 (54924|3) - 放到2去,主音变化体现一下
01:02:298 (62298|1,62466|3,62466|1,62633|3) - 违和感,,,这个jack,,怎么说,不对又不错 - 保留了
01:16:209 - http://puu.sh/k9nZM/ee8dec308b.jpg
01:16:795 - 加一个,finish
01:29:952 (89952|3) - 放到2,手感会更好,我觉得这里就是和开头一个尿性
02:00:343 - http://puu.sh/k9oa7/3a0666b50c.jpg

没了,射个星

其他全部OK
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所以我說EX呢
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pop'n music TUNE tag重複了
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Hi SanadaYukimura-


Normal
01:04:812 - Add 3
01:33:136 - 01:35:147 - Maybe map like right before this instead of LNs for drums but it's okay this way too. Unlike 00:07:327 there is the melody here as well which is why I think it could be different.


Hyper
Removing some of these might make the other pattern stand out more and these are small drum sounds
00:47:382 (47382|1,47382|0) - Remove
00:52:745 (52745|3,52745|2) - Remove
00:53:918 (53918|0) - Remove
00:58:108 (58108|3,58108|0) - Remove
00:59:449 (59449|3,59449|1) - Remove
01:11:516 (71516|2) - Remove

Maybe change this stream a little? Not really important and I think it plays worse like this lol
01:17:885 (77885|2) - Remove?
01:22:326 (82326|1) - Remove?
01:25:091 (85091|2) - Remove?
01:26:684 - Add?
01:27:354 (87354|3) - Move to 01:27:270 ?
You could add sounds for the drums in the stream too if you want


KK's EX
There are no notes !! :x
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[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
pop'n music TUNE tag重複了

ok订正

Hestia- wrote:
Hi SanadaYukimura-


Normal
01:04:812 - Add 3
01:33:136 - 01:35:147 - Maybe map like right before this instead of LNs for drums but it's okay this way too. Unlike 00:07:327 there is the melody here as well which is why I think it could be different.
all ok


Hyper
Removing some of these might make the other pattern stand out more and these are small drum sounds
00:47:382 (47382|1,47382|0) - Remove
00:52:745 (52745|3,52745|2) - Remove
00:53:918 (53918|0) - Remove
00:58:108 (58108|3,58108|0) - Remove
00:59:449 (59449|3,59449|1) - Remove
01:11:516 (71516|2) - Remove
well... there is no reason to remove such drum

Maybe change this stream a little? Not really important and I think it plays worse like this lol
01:17:885 (77885|2) - Remove?
01:22:326 (82326|1) - Remove?
01:25:091 (85091|2) - Remove?
01:26:684 - Add?
01:27:354 (87354|3) - Move to 01:27:270 ?
You could add sounds for the drums in the stream too if you want
those part only follow the piano, and i pretty sure i didnt overnote the part you mention about


KK's EX
There are no notes !! :x
still waiting for KK lol
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