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Ci Mei Gui - Wu Xuan Lan [Taiko]

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Nardoxyribonucleic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月5日 at 20:37:59

Artist: Ci Mei Gui
Title: Wu Xuan Lan
Source: MuziBox
Tags: Taiko
BPM: 167.91
Filesize: 2673kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.15 stars, 258 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.54 stars, 633 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.38 stars, 141 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.81 stars, 398 notes)
  5. Oni (3.8 stars, 524 notes)
Download: Ci Mei Gui - Wu Xuan Lan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#16 - Taiko mapset
BG - 100%
Kantan - 100%
Futsuu - 100%
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%
Inner Oni - 100%

Oni was featured in TWC 2018 Group Stage as DoubleTime Pick!
Raiden
Mod as requested (/ω\)

[ General]

  1. No tags?
Apart from that, all good

[ Kantan]

  1. Isn't HP a bit low for this length?
  2. 00:17:185 (2) - The same way you emphasized this, you could emphasize 00:20:044 (7) -
  3. Same goes for 00:22:903 (10) - , 00:31:478 (24) - and 00:34:337 (27) -
  4. 00:51:489 (54) - This sounds more like a K to me hmm
  5. 00:54:347 (59) - Could use a finisher, to maintain the finisher consistency
  6. 00:57:206 (63,68) - ^
  7. 01:16:859 (94,95) - Swap these? I feel like pitch goes lower->higher
Map is pretty much flawless to be honest without even any mods...so I'm just giving small suggestions.

On a side note: if you decide to accept any of the suggestions regarding colour swap (d->k and viceversa) or Finishers, it is recommended to do so in all difficulties to keep consistency.

[ Futsuu]

  1. Same HP suggestion
  2. 00:48:988 (100) - Hmmm, remove maybe? To follow only the flute here.
  3. 01:00:064 (131) - Hm, I think this sounds more like a k
+ All the suggestions regarding colours and finishers in Kantan

Again, pretty much perfect diff...


[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:19:061 - Would it hurt to add a d here? :3
  2. 00:24:779 - and 00:24:868 - A ddd could be made here, dropping the suggestion
  3. 00:30:496 - Same, you can make a triple here I think
  4. 00:52:472 - I think a kkk would sound neat here (the suggestion is about putting triples in which the flute does a long note)
  5. 01:04:800 - I think you can make a triplet here
  6. 01:10:517 - 01:10:606 - ^
Might sound like overmapping but well, I drop the triplet suggestions, I see you've used them in the last kiai and sounded perfectly, so I guessed they'd sound nice as well in the rest of the song.

As always, perfect diff, just dropping suggestions.


[ Oni]

  1. 00:19:687 (21,23) - Swap these 2? I think pitch goes lower->higher
  2. 01:19:717 (390,392) - ^
Meh I'm being pretty much useless, diffs are basicaly perfect


[ Inner Oni]

  1. 00:12:897 - I tried this stream like this and I found it quite fitting, let me know what you think of it

  2. 00:50:060 - 00:51:310 - here a full stream can be made I think, using the flute long note as an excuse. What do you think?
  3. 01:24:363 - I think this stream could be like this too:
  4. Last stream is PERFECT<3

Well, not that I have done much, but I honestly think there is nothing more I can do at this point. Mapset is consistent, patterns are fitting, and I've seen no major problem (would I ever anyway?)

Anyway, I hope you rank this soon gogo ╭( ・ㅂ・)و

Also, have a star, the map is perfect (>^_^)>
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Raiden wrote:

Mod as requested (/ω\)

[ General]

  1. No tags? Added "Taiko" to tags.
Apart from that, all good

[ Kantan]

  1. Isn't HP a bit low for this length? 4 would be fine for typical Kantan imo.
  2. 00:17:185 (2) - The same way you emphasized this, you could emphasize 00:20:044 (7) - 00:20:044 (7) - is less stressed, so d would be enough.
  3. Same goes for 00:22:903 (10) - , 00:31:478 (24) - and 00:34:337 (27) - same as ^
  4. 00:51:489 (54) - This sounds more like a K to me hmm Retained for pattern consistency as 00:40:054 (36) -
  5. 00:54:347 (59) - Could use a finisher, to maintain the finisher consistency same as 00:20:044 (7) -
  6. 00:57:206 (63,68) - ^ ^
  7. 01:16:859 (94,95) - Swap these? I feel like pitch goes lower->higher You're right. However, the current pattern would be easier since beginners tend to follow snares.
Map is pretty much flawless to be honest without even any mods...so I'm just giving small suggestions.

On a side note: if you decide to accept any of the suggestions regarding colour swap (d->k and viceversa) or Finishers, it is recommended to do so in all difficulties to keep consistency.

[ Futsuu]

  1. Same HP suggestion same as Kantan
  2. 00:48:988 (100) - Hmmm, remove maybe? To follow only the flute here. Remain unchanged for the sake of a better spread from Kantan to Muzukashii.
  3. 01:00:064 (131) - Hm, I think this sounds more like a k Yep, but considering the overall flow, d would work better.
+ All the suggestions regarding colours and finishers in Kantan

Again, pretty much perfect diff...


[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:19:061 - Would it hurt to add a d here? :3 I would prefer a lower note density at this part.
  2. 00:24:779 - and 00:24:868 - A ddd could be made here, dropping the suggestion same as ^
  3. 00:30:496 - Same, you can make a triple here I think ^
  4. 00:52:472 - I think a kkk would sound neat here (the suggestion is about putting triples in which the flute does a long note) It would be better to use 1/2 notes only because of the spread with Oni.
  5. 01:04:800 - I think you can make a triplet here same as 00:19:061 -
  6. 01:10:517 - 01:10:606 - ^ ^
Might sound like overmapping but well, I drop the triplet suggestions, I see you've used them in the last kiai and sounded perfectly, so I guessed they'd sound nice as well in the rest of the song.

As always, perfect diff, just dropping suggestions.


[ Oni]

  1. 00:19:687 (21,23) - Swap these 2? I think pitch goes lower->higher Retained for hitsound consistency as 00:16:828 (1,3,5) -
  2. 01:19:717 (390,392) - ^ same as ^
Meh I'm being pretty much useless, diffs are basicaly perfect


[ Inner Oni]

  1. 00:12:897 - I tried this stream like this and I found it quite fitting, let me know what you think of it It seems good. But I changed it in an alternative way.

  2. 00:50:060 - 00:51:310 - here a full stream can be made I think, using the flute long note as an excuse. What do you think? I think the current note density would sound better.
  3. 01:24:363 - I think this stream could be like this too: I would prefer keeping the current one for hitsound consistency with Oni.
  4. Last stream is PERFECT<3

Well, not that I have done much, but I honestly think there is nothing more I can do at this point. Mapset is consistent, patterns are fitting, and I've seen no major problem (would I ever anyway?)

Anyway, I hope you rank this soon gogo ╭( ・ㅂ・)و

Also, have a star, the map is perfect (>^_^)>
Thanks for your mod, star and comments~ :)
tasuke912
( ☆∀☆)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

tasuke912 wrote:

( ☆∀☆)
Thanks for the stars, tasuke~ ( ☆∀☆)/
kouzuki_karen
my part of m4m:

[General]

Nothing to be noted.

[Kantan]

Personally, I would prefer OD4, given the simplicity of the diff itself.

00:22:188 - could add a kat note here and 00:22:545 - don , I don't know if it's done on purpose but the part between 00:21:473 (9,10) - seems a bit undermapped, especially when compared to 00:18:615 (4,5,6) - . (imo the part between (9,10) has a more meaningful melody that should be mapped more, but mapper's choice)
00:33:980 - same deal as above (add a don here?)
01:02:924 (72) - change to a blue note? I think it would suit the high-pitched flute sound more.
01:07:212 (79,80) - similar deal in between here as before (I think it's more important since there are increased amounts of percussion elements, again this part feels wasted lol)
01:19:003 - add a don here, and kat at 01:19:361 ?

[Futsuu]

00:25:404 - add a note here? to break away from the same number of combos as the last three sections.
00:36:838 - same deal as above.
00:42:556 (81) - move half a beat forward to 00:42:377 ? I think it would be nice to follow those background clicks.
00:45:414 (89) - ^
00:53:990 (113) - ^ (do it for others, if you choose)
01:22:577 - similar to 00:25:404 , add a kat here?

[Muzukashii]

imo OD4 seems too simplistic, maybe increase to 5?

00:26:833 - add a note here? Without it I feel the part at 00:27:191 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - feels too forced on the player to play.
00:38:268 - same here, similar reason to above.
01:00:780 (200) - delete? I don't think it's really fitting.
01:24:006 - add note here? Similar reason as before.

[Oni]

00:22:099 (35) - I'd suggest moving this to 00:22:456 and changing it to don (I think it makes use of the instruments more).
01:12:214 (340) - remove finisher? I think from here this is already similar level of sound to the notes after it.
01:33:118 (1) - same as earlier diffs.

solid diff~ not much to point out...

[Inner Oni]

00:06:644 (30,31) - change to both kats? I think it would make better use of the flute sounds.
00:17:096 (4) - delete? the melody here is only a triplet.
00:17:185 (4) - you could also add finisher here if you followed above suggestion, to be consistent with 00:28:620 (84) -
00:22:009 (39,40) - change to double dons? I think this stream plays better as a result, it suits the melody more.
01:19:181 (447,448) - same as above.

solid diff as well~ good luck for rank!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

my part of m4m:

[General]

Nothing to be noted.

[Kantan]

Personally, I would prefer OD4, given the simplicity of the diff itself. I think 3 would be enough for typical Kantan.

00:22:188 - could add a kat note here and 00:22:545 - don , I don't know if it's done on purpose but the part between 00:21:473 (9,10) - seems a bit undermapped, especially when compared to 00:18:615 (4,5,6) - . (imo the part between (9,10) has a more meaningful melody that should be mapped more, but mapper's choice) The 4/1 break is intentional because of the previous lengthy pattern starting from 00:07:180 -
00:33:980 - same deal as above (add a don here?) same as ^
01:02:924 (72) - change to a blue note? I think it would suit the high-pitched flute sound more. Retained for pattern consistency as 01:05:782 (77,80) -
01:07:212 (79,80) - similar deal in between here as before (I think it's more important since there are increased amounts of percussion elements, again this part feels wasted lol) same as 00:22:188 - . Without this 4/1 break, the 2/1+1/1 pattern would be too long.
01:19:003 - add a don here, and kat at 01:19:361 ? It sounds good, but a break would be better due to the increased note density in the 2nd kiai.

[Futsuu]

00:25:404 - add a note here? to break away from the same number of combos as the last three sections. Remain unchanged to emphasize the music at 00:25:761 (30,31,32) -
00:36:838 - same deal as above. same as ^
00:42:556 (81) - move half a beat forward to 00:42:377 ? I think it would be nice to follow those background clicks. The pattern would become too lengthy for Futsuu without the 2/1 break.
00:45:414 (89) - ^ same as ^
00:53:990 (113) - ^ (do it for others, if you choose) ^
01:22:577 - similar to 00:25:404 , add a kat here? same as 00:42:556 (81) -

[Muzukashii]

imo OD4 seems too simplistic, maybe increase to 5? I would like to keep it for a more lenient setting compared with Oni.

00:26:833 - add a note here? Without it I feel the part at 00:27:191 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - feels too forced on the player to play. The break actually allows more time for players to prepare for the 1/2+1/4 pattern. Also, 2/1 breaks are preferred here owing to difficulty concern.
00:38:268 - same here, similar reason to above. ^
01:00:780 (200) - delete? I don't think it's really fitting. I followed the background beat there.
01:24:006 - add note here? Similar reason as before. same as 00:26:833 -

[Oni]

00:22:099 (35) - I'd suggest moving this to 00:22:456 and changing it to don (I think it makes use of the instruments more). The kkk triplet would help emphasize the pitch changes of the main instrument.
01:12:214 (340) - remove finisher? I think from here this is already similar level of sound to the notes after it. Retained for pattern consistency as the lower difficulties.
01:33:118 (1) - same as earlier diffs. ...?

solid diff~ not much to point out...

[Inner Oni]

00:06:644 (30,31) - change to both kats? I think it would make better use of the flute sounds. I think ddk would flow better.
00:17:096 (4) - delete? the melody here is only a triplet. I followed the prominent beat there.
00:17:185 (4) - you could also add finisher here if you followed above suggestion, to be consistent with 00:28:620 (84) - no change because of ^
00:22:009 (39,40) - change to double dons? I think this stream plays better as a result, it suits the melody more. same as Oni
01:19:181 (447,448) - same as above. ^

solid diff as well~ good luck for rank!
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Charlotte
Hi~ from m4m/

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]
  • Good?

    [ Kantan][list:1337]

    00:12:546 - delete.because,next is slider.so I think 1/1 break time is good.for Kantan player.

    01:14:359 - http://puu.sh/jnLX2.jpg This rhythm is very simple & fit song.You can try it.

    01:31:149 - same as above.
[ Futsuu]


  • 00:12:544 - If only this notes,move to 1/1 left?

    00:51:139 - delete? I think no need this notes.for emphasized to next 00:51:483 -

    01:31:151 - same as above.
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:25:244 - delete.It makes more clear for pure sounds.

    01:02:744 - delete? 01:02:928 - I hear new melody from here.so You can delete.
[ Oni]


  • 00:12:897 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - I think this pattern is little hard><?
    01:31:510 (451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - ^

    Good~
Oh,Cool song~ & Nice mapset. Ranked Hype! Good luck Nardo.
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Charlotte wrote:

Hi~ from m4m/

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]
  • Good?

    [ Kantan][list:1337]

    00:12:546 - delete.because,next is slider.so I think 1/1 break time is good.for Kantan player. fixed

    01:14:359 - http://puu.sh/jnLX2.jpg This rhythm is very simple & fit song.You can try it. fixed with some alterations.

    01:31:149 - same as above. fixed
[ Futsuu]


  • 00:12:544 - If only this notes,move to 1/1 left? Retained for break consistency as 00:06:465 -

    00:51:139 - delete? I think no need this notes.for emphasized to next 00:51:483 - The sound is similar to 00:39:697 - , so it would be better to keep the note.

    01:31:151 - same as above. same as 00:12:544 -
[ Muzukashii]


  • 00:25:244 - delete.It makes more clear for pure sounds. I would prefer mapping the background instrument as well.

    01:02:744 - delete? 01:02:928 - I hear new melody from here.so You can delete. Remain unchanged for pattern consistency as 01:05:603 (224,237,250) -
[ Oni]


  • 00:12:897 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - I think this pattern is little hard><? Hmm... I would prefer keeping the pattern first. This fits the intense instrument well.
    01:31:510 (451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - ^ same as ^

    Good~
Oh,Cool song~ & Nice mapset. Ranked Hype! Good luck Nardo.
Thanks for your mod and star Charlotte~ :)
Nofool
o/
huu all diffs are pretty good, i doubt that it can be usefull x_x

[Kantan]
- 00:12:183 (17) - remove ? sounds like at - 00:06:465 - and to prepare for the big slider.
- 00:16:828 (1) - remove ? there are many similar spots in this song but that's the only where you have a k.
- 00:45:772 - i would still prefer d k ddk rater than d dkd dkd here.
- 01:30:795 (116) - remove ? again to prepare for the slider i guess.

[Futsuu]
- 00:16:828 (1,2) - again maybe delete them ? then you may want to extend the spinner to this same location (forgot to suggest that in the kantan).
- 00:28:084 (6,7) -, 00:39:518 (11,12) - ^.
- 00:51:132 (104) - ^ well i would not be suprised if you reject all of this but, my opinion is that you should wait for the muzu before using these spots.
- 01:02:388 (136,137) - same here i guess. well u get it, same for the reste of the diff.

[Muzukashii]
- 00:18:972 - could be ddd 1/4, kiai has a lot of 1/4 compared to this part while kiai and others part are similar in lower difficulties (same for similar spots).
- 00:23:975 - because yeah here i would still prefer the structure used at ^.
- move - 00:52:114 (160) - to - 00:52:472 - as k and change - 00:56:670 - to ddd ? same kind of reverse you used in the first part of the kiai.

[Oni]
- 00:12:897 - 00:14:327 - might be a too big jump from muzu, try something like that ? :

- 01:24:810 (421) - remove ? ^ that pattern is the same in the Inner.
- 01:31:510 - ^ again i would suggest to try to find something a bit easier.

[Inner Oni]
- 00:42:734 (186) - d ? i little change with - 00:45:593 - which doesn't play bad imo.
- 00:54:169 (266) - ^.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

o/
huu all diffs are pretty good, i doubt that it can be usefull x_x

[Kantan]
- 00:12:183 (17) - remove ? sounds like at - 00:06:465 - and to prepare for the big slider. fixed
- 00:16:828 (1) - remove ? there are many similar spots in this song but that's the only where you have a k. This was made because of the unique 1/4 kkkkd in Onis.
- 00:45:772 - i would still prefer d k ddk rater than d dkd dkd here. Hmm... I would like to keep mine here to follow the similar flute rhythm.
- 01:30:795 (116) - remove ? again to prepare for the slider i guess. fixed

[Futsuu]
- 00:16:828 (1,2) - again maybe delete them ? then you may want to extend the spinner to this same location (forgot to suggest that in the kantan). refer to Kantan
- 00:28:084 (6,7) -, 00:39:518 (11,12) - ^. Retained for a better spread with Muzukashii.
- 00:51:132 (104) - ^ well i would not be suprised if you reject all of this but, my opinion is that you should wait for the muzu before using these spots. same as ^
- 01:02:388 (136,137) - same here i guess. well u get it, same for the reste of the diff. ^

[Muzukashii]
- 00:18:972 - could be ddd 1/4, kiai has a lot of 1/4 compared to this part while kiai and others part are similar in lower difficulties (same for similar spots). fixed
- 00:23:975 - because yeah here i would still prefer the structure used at ^. ^
- move - 00:52:114 (160) - to - 00:52:472 - as k and change - 00:56:670 - to ddd ? same kind of reverse you used in the first part of the kiai. fixed

[Oni]
- 00:12:897 - 00:14:327 - might be a too big jump from muzu, try something like that ? : fixed in an alternative way.

- 01:24:810 (421) - remove ? ^ that pattern is the same in the Inner. The 1/4 note is in fact shorter than that in Inner Oni.
- 01:31:510 - ^ again i would suggest to try to find something a bit easier. same as 00:12:897 -

[Inner Oni]
- 00:42:734 (186) - d ? i little change with - 00:45:593 - which doesn't play bad imo. Remain unchanged to keep it consistent with Oni.
- 00:54:169 (266) - ^. same as ^
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Thanks for your mod and star Nofool~ :)
BlackHairEND
Hello~ Nardo!
From M4M
late mod sorry ;w;


[Kantan]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:49:345 (52) - change d  Since the whistle sound is felt low
  2. 00:59:350 (67) - change d  Same as above
[Futsuu]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:36:481 (64) - change k  I felt high sound behind.
  2. 00:49:345 (101) - change d  I felt the whistle sound is down. In addition, individual (00:47: 558 (95,96,97,98,99,100) -) is considered consistent with and I think d is good.
[Muzukashii]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. I think No problem :3 good map >w<
[Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:02:120 (277) - Delete Delete because I felt that there is no sound here.
[Inner Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:19:271 (451) - change d Because the sound of the back has felt low.
good map! throw a star :D  good luck :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

BlackHairEND wrote:

Hello~ Nardo!
From M4M
late mod sorry ;w;


[Kantan]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:49:345 (52) - change d  Since the whistle sound is felt low The pitch is close to 00:50:060 (53) - , so k would be better.
  2. 00:59:350 (67) - change d  Same as above same as ^
[Futsuu]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:36:481 (64) - change k  I felt high sound behind. Its pitch is lower than 00:33:622 (55) - , that's why I used d to reflect the difference.
  2. 00:49:345 (101) - change d  I felt the whistle sound is down. In addition, individual (00:47: 558 (95,96,97,98,99,100) -) is considered consistent with and I think d is good. same as Kantan
[Muzukashii]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. I think No problem :3 good map >w< Thanks :3
[Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:02:120 (277) - Delete Delete because I felt that there is no sound here. Retained for a better spread with Muzukashii.
[Inner Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:19:271 (451) - change d Because the sound of the back has felt low. I think it would be better to keep it consistent with 00:33:533 (121) -
good map! throw a star :D  good luck :)
Thanks for your mod and star BlackHairEND~ :)
shionelove
from queue

[Kantan]
00:53:633 (58) - delete?
[Futsuu]
n0thing
[Muzu]
n0thing
[Oni]
00:16:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - i prefer ddddk
00:39:697 (141,142,143) - ddk or dkk
[Inner]
00:16:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - same(ddddk)
01:13:643 (406,407,408,409,410,411) - kkkddd(1/6)k i think

gl
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

shionelove wrote:

from queue

[Kantan]
00:53:633 (58) - delete? I think it is important to keep the note to cohere with 00:42:198 (40) -
[Futsuu]
n0thing
[Muzu]
n0thing
[Oni]
00:16:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - i prefer ddddk kkkkd would fit the percussion in a way better. Also, it would be more consistent with the hitsounding in other diffs.
00:39:697 (141,142,143) - ddk or dkk similar to ^ , the pattern k d D is drum-oriented as well.
[Inner]
00:16:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - same(ddddk) refer to Oni
01:13:643 (406,407,408,409,410,411) - kkkddd(1/6)k i think 1/6 kkkd + 1/4 dk would result in a smoother flow imo.

gl
Thanks for your mod~ :)
tasuke912
Hi, Nardo. M4M
[ Kantan]
  1. HP5.0 is better.
  2. 00:21:831 -, 00:22:188 -, add k here to make 1 color 1/1 triplet pattern, since this diff has no it. also already has enough 4/1 breaks, so you can make it here.
  3. 00:33:265 -, 01:07:569 -, ^
[ Futsuu]
  1. HP5.0 is better.
  2. 00:22:009 (19) - consider to change to k to make 1 color 1/2 triplet pattern. and (19) is higher pitch melody than (18)
  3. 00:33:443 (54) - ^
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:16:917 (2) - delete this to emphasize stringed instrument sound?
[ Oni]
  1. 00:13:969 (54,55,56,57,58) - kkddd is more smooth for playing imo.
  2. 01:32:314 (458) - could be moved to 01:32:135 and changed to d for better consistency with 00:13:523 (51) -
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:13:880 (78,79) - ctrl+G. (78) is lower pitch than (77) and (79).
  2. 01:24:363 (485,486,487,488,489) - dkdkd would more fit imo.
  3. 01:32:225 (540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548) - change to kdkdkkddd for better consistency with intro stream?
mapset seems fine. call me back when you're done. :D
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Nardoxyribonucleic

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi, Nardo. M4M
[ Kantan]
  1. HP5.0 is better. hmm... ok
  2. 00:21:831 -, 00:22:188 -, add k here to make 1 color 1/1 triplet pattern, since this diff has no it. also already has enough 4/1 breaks, so you can make it here. fixed
  3. 00:33:265 -, 01:07:569 -, ^ fixed the latter. I used d k at 00:33:265 (29,30) - to make it consistent with 01:19:003 -
[ Futsuu]
  1. HP5.0 is better. hmm... ok
  2. 00:22:009 (19) - consider to change to k to make 1 color 1/2 triplet pattern. and (19) is higher pitch melody than (18) fixed
  3. 00:33:443 (54) - ^ ^
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:16:917 (2) - delete this to emphasize stringed instrument sound? I think keeping it would result in a better spread from Futsuu to Oni.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:13:969 (54,55,56,57,58) - kkddd is more smooth for playing imo. I would prefer following the pitch of flute there. Also, dkddk would show a nice contrast with 01:32:582 (460,461,462,463,464) -
  2. 01:32:314 (458) - could be moved to 01:32:135 and changed to d for better consistency with 00:13:523 (51) - Similar to ^ , I would prefer d kkd rather than ddk d as the rhythm is a bit different from each other.
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:13:880 (78,79) - ctrl+G. (78) is lower pitch than (77) and (79). same as Oni. The flute sounds afterwards are quite prominent to be mapped imo.
  2. 01:24:363 (485,486,487,488,489) - dkdkd would more fit imo. I think ddkdk would accompany the background drums in a way better.
  3. 01:32:225 (540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548) - change to kdkdkkddd for better consistency with intro stream? same as Oni. Owing to the difference in rhythm, I used two different stream patterns there.
mapset seems fine. call me back when you're done. :D
Thanks for your mod tasuke~ :)
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