1. More Relaxing Collab (1,1 stars, 46 notes)
2. Relaxing Collab (1,84 stars, 80 notes)

Geronimaa wrote:

V klidu.

Pjecoo wrote:

Geronimaa wrote:

V klidu.

Pjecoo wrote:

Geronimaa wrote:

V klidu.

Nozhomi wrote:

Where are hitsounds ???????? No hitsounding is unrankable. Add some whistles to emphasis correctly with song.

Wafu wrote:

Nozhomi wrote:

Where are hitsounds ???????? No hitsounding is unrankable. Add some whistles to emphasis correctly with song.

Blame Wafu actually, I should've already done them xD

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello!

* asdf - nazi/suggestion
* asdf - important

General

1. A silent sliderslide would work perfect for a genre of a music like this. I will give you this sliderslide but don't forget to rename it to soft-sliderslide.wav for example
2. Don't forget to capitalize 'M' from Mortem on tags. Also,I suggest to add to the tags your previous name Geronimaa

Calm Collab

1. 00:32:296 (2,1)- I think this kind of stack is not acceptable on a easy diff.00:32:296(2)- can be replaced with an 1/2 slider as you did at 00:53:066 (2,3)- because it will sound much better and you will not have problems with the stack honestly
2. 00:32:626(1)- I guess this NC is not so useful since the following combo scheme looks as 1->2->3->4->5->1 etc. so suggesting to remove the NC here
3. 00:42:846(2,3)- Same as 00:32:296 (2,1)-
4. 00:58:340(2,3)- Seems this note is supposed to have a blanket with 00:59:000(3)- so try to change 3's shape like here for example for a better blanket
5. 01:05:593(4,1)- Honestly,as I can see,01:05:593(4)-'s tail goes to right while the next slider is placed on left.I prefer a ctrl+h here and then you need to adjust the slider like here
6. 01:13:505(1)- The spinner can start from 01:12:516- and the end of the spinner on 01:14:824- but then the green line from 01:15:978- will be unneccesary so you should delete it and you can add another one on 01:14:824- with 5% volume

Relaxing diff looks great to me

Nice set but needs work at hitsounding.You can call me if you need help at hitsounding (:

Good Luck

1. Collaboration is missing from the tags. It is a common tag for collab maps, so why not to add it?

1. Consider re-arranging your combos, they appear to be irregular. In 00:46:472 (5,1,2,3,1) - this part, for example.
   Wafu
   
   1. 00:32:296 (2) - the 3/2 gap feels forced to play. In addition to this, the previous one (00:21:747) had no 3/2 beats. So, yeah, removing 00:32:296 (2) - is a good option. Alternative pattern would look like this. Feel free to pick whatever you like.
   Mortem
   
   1. 00:36:912 (4) - downbeat on the white tick has the sliderend on it, resulting in making the strong sound unclickable to player. Just remove the 1/2 slider and add a circle on the white tick, this should fit better.
   2. 00:42:846 (2) - see the suggestion for Wafu's part? Since it's the easiest diff keeping the rhythm consistent would be better.
   3. 00:45:154 (4) - consider using two circles here? This would be a great thing to tress the downbeat.
   Lethargy
   
   1. 01:11:527 (5) - break it into two circles, the beat at 01:12:186 - needs more emphasis, I believe.
   Might need a little more work on general stuff, but it's pretty cool.

• 
  Wafu
  

1. 00:27:351 (1,2) - minor - the spacing change here feels more like a mistake than a jump. Perhaps, it shouldn't be here?

1. 00:36:582 (2,3) - increase DS to x1,7 here? Players need a gradual reduction of DS, so that the privious jump doesn't feel forced.
2. 00:50:428 (2,1) - minor - is the spacing change here intended? It's really minor, so I don't see why it should be here.

1. 00:59:000 - I have a feeling that a circle here would work way better than a slidertail due to the song's nature. Give it a try?

Wafu wrote:

http://puu.sh/jcxHb/99c62518d2.rar

Fixed all in my parts.
//Lethargy, jestli chceš ty hitsoundy, ještě dneska nebo zítra je budu dělat, takže by stačilo ty změny dát až potom, co budou hitsoundy.

Bakari wrote:

Hey there, as requested

[General]

1. Collaboration is missing from the tags. It is a common tag for collab maps, so why not to add it? - added

[Calm Collab]

1. Consider re-arranging your combos, they appear to be irregular. In 00:46:472 (5,1,2,3,1) - this part, for example. - Someone else than should do combos, since I suck at them.
   
   Lethargy
   
   1. 01:11:527 (5) - break it into two circles, the beat at 01:12:186 - needs more emphasis, I believe. - done
   Might need a little more work on general stuff, but it's pretty cool.

[Relaxing Collab]
Relaxing and Calm are pretty similar in their meanings in our situation. I would suggest looking for a name that would let players CLEARLY understand that this difficulty is harder than the other one. Maybe something like Advanced or Normal? You guys all together are more creative than I am alone, so you might come up with a bright idea! - should be pretty obvious now.

Lethargy

1. 00:59:000 - I have a feeling that a circle here would work way better than a slidertail due to the song's nature. Give it a try? - works better

Relaxing indeed. Nicely done![/list]

V klidu.

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Best of luck!

Bakari wrote:

V klidu.

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  Wafu

1. 00:27:351 (3) - maybe make this horizontally aligned with 00:24:714 (1) - ? Move 00:29:329 (4) - to x:482 y:161 if applied
2. 00:32:296 (2) - consider removing this. can be hard for new players to read
   Mortem
3. 00:35:263 (3) - very slight misblanket img
4. 00:37:901 (1,2) - imo, these sliders stick out from the entire diff (mainly because it isn't flowly like the other sliders). I suggest changing the shape of these sliders for example, img
5. 00:42:846 (2) - consider removing this. can be hard for new players to read
6. 00:45:154 (4) - maybe curve it the other way>?
7. 00:51:088 (1) - move the last anchor point to x:115 y:339
8. 00:53:725 (3) - maybe with the last bit of the slider, blanket it with the side of slider 00:51:088 (1) - ?
   Lethargy
9. I honestly can't find anything wrong with this. Even the blankets are pretty well done. The only concern I have for this section is that there is only one 1/2 element (01:00:978 (4) - ) while the rest of the rhythm is 1/1
10. 01:13:505 (1) - maybe start at 01:12:846 (1) - instead? I think the break between the last circle and this spinner is kinda awkward

• 
  Wafu

1. 00:26:033 (2) - move this to x:176 y:38 for slight blanketing action?
   Mortem
2. 00:32:626 (3,1) - I am slightly concerned with the spacing here, but I think what you did by NC'ing 00:33:945 (1) - should be suffice
3. 00:33:945 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe make a pattern like this? img
4. 00:36:582 (2,3) - spacing here is very iffy, compared to 00:35:263 (1,2) - which has the same rhythm
5. 00:40:538 (1) - I think this will look better blanketed
6. 00:43:175 (3) - ^
7. 00:45:154 (2) - spacing here is irregular (1.4 instead of 1.3)
8. 00:54:714 (2,3) - instead of a 1/2 slider then circle, try circle then 1/2 slider. imo, it will fit the music the best.
   Lethargy
9. 00:57:681 (3,4) - My main concern with this jump is that although it fits the music very well, there is not other point of the map before this that has a jump similar to this. I suggest either removing this jump or asking the other collabers to add jumps similar to this to their parts
10. 01:02:956 (2) - move this slightly to the right (eg. x:286 y:83)? imo it will flow better from the previous slider
11. 01:05:758 (6) - remove this circle? I don't think a triplet here is necessary

[ Rizen ] wrote:

hey o/

[Very Relaxing Collab]

• 
  Wafu

1. 00:27:351 (3) - maybe make this horizontally aligned with 00:24:714 (1) - ? Move 00:29:329 (4) - to x:482 y:161 if applied
2. 00:32:296 (2) - consider removing this. can be hard for new players to read
   Mortem
3. 00:35:263 (3) - very slight misblanket img
4. 00:37:901 (1,2) - imo, these sliders stick out from the entire diff (mainly because it isn't flowly like the other sliders). I suggest changing the shape of these sliders for example, img
5. 00:42:846 (2) - consider removing this. can be hard for new players to read
6. 00:45:154 (4) - maybe curve it the other way>?
7. 00:51:088 (1) - move the last anchor point to x:115 y:339
8. 00:53:725 (3) - maybe with the last bit of the slider, blanket it with the side of slider 00:51:088 (1) - ?
   Lethargy
9. I honestly can't find anything wrong with this. Even the blankets are pretty well done. The only concern I have for this section is that there is only one 1/2 element (01:00:978 (4) - ) while the rest of the rhythm is 1/1
10. 01:13:505 (1) - maybe start at 01:12:846 (1) - instead? I think the break between the last circle and this spinner is kinda awkward

combo point suggestion

Possible combo points?
00:14:164 (1) -
00:19:439 (1) -
00:24:714 (1) -
00:29:989 (1) -
00:35:263 (1) -
00:40:538 (1) -
00:46:472 (1) -
00:51:088 (1) -
00:56:362 (1) -
01:01:637 (1) -
01:06:912 (1) -
01:12:186 (1) -

This is following the one NC every 2 measures on the downbeat rule. THIS IS ONLY A SUGGESTION

[Relaxing Collab]

• 
  Wafu

1. 00:26:033 (2) - move this to x:176 y:38 for slight blanketing action?
   Mortem
2. 00:32:626 (3,1) - I am slightly concerned with the spacing here, but I think what you did by NC'ing 00:33:945 (1) - should be suffice
3. 00:33:945 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe make a pattern like this? img
4. 00:36:582 (2,3) - spacing here is very iffy, compared to 00:35:263 (1,2) - which has the same rhythm
5. 00:40:538 (1) - I think this will look better blanketed
6. 00:43:175 (3) - ^
7. 00:45:154 (2) - spacing here is irregular (1.4 instead of 1.3)
8. 00:54:714 (2,3) - instead of a 1/2 slider then circle, try circle then 1/2 slider. imo, it will fit the music the best.
   Lethargy
9. 00:57:681 (3,4) - My main concern with this jump is that although it fits the music very well, there is not other point of the map before this that has a jump similar to this. I suggest either removing this jump or asking the other collabers to add jumps similar to this to their parts
10. 01:02:956 (2) - move this slightly to the right (eg. x:286 y:83)? imo it will flow better from the previous slider
11. 01:05:758 (6) - remove this circle? I don't think a triplet here is necessary

Combo points suggestion

Just some suggestions on top of the already existing combos
Add to:
00:16:802 (1) -
00:19:110 (5) -
00:34:934 (4) -
00:37:901 (1) -
00:53:395 (2) -
00:59:000 (5) -
01:04:274 (4) -
01:09:549 (4) -
01:12:186 (3) -

Remove from:
00:15:483 (1) -
00:17:461 (1) -
00:19:439 (1) -
00:35:263 (1) -
00:44:494 (1) -
00:52:406 (1) -
00:53:725 (1) -
01:10:208 (1) -

nice, relaxing song. good luck with ranking!